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2025届高考英语写作特辑
第二期
一、基本原则
1. 长短句原则
一个短小精悍的句子，通常可以起到画龙点睛的作用。尤其是当我们把短句放在段首时，它不仅可以承上启下，还可以揭示主题，长短句结合，可以给人抑扬顿挫之感。因此，许多专家建议：在文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，这样主体部分定会让人赏心悦目，文章结尾只需用一长一短。如：
As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
2. 主题句原则
一篇文章的开头（有时也可在结尾）有一个主题句，也就有了中心，然后围绕主题展开相关内容，这样的文章思路清晰，让人一目了然。开头一句赫然醒目，直接点题。否则，若把主题隐藏在文章的中间，很可能使读者感到云里雾里，不知所云。如：
To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam.（主题句）Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.
3. 条理性原则
一般来说，如果一篇文章以第一、第二、第三或首先、其次、再次等罗列要点会让人感觉层次分明、条理清晰、逻辑性强。强烈推荐下列关联词和短语：
（1）to begin with，then，furthermore，finally
（2）to start with，next，in addition，finally
（3）first，besides，last but not least
（4）most important of all，moreover，finally
（5）for one thing，for another
（6）on the one hand，on the other hand
4. 短语优先原则
写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果正确使用短语，有两个好处：一是用短语会给文章增光添彩，自然会增加得分点；二是学生在考场上有时因为过于紧张而造成思维短路，但还得凑够词数，那么用短语替代单词不失为一种好办法。这样词数明显增加，表达也非常准确。如：
I cannot bear (put up with) it.
Through participating in this picking activity, I have become aware of (known) the importance of the significance of work.
I am determined (decide) to study hard, to be a useful person to the country and to contribute to (help) the improvement of people's lives.
From this activity, we have realized that building up our body is of great importance (important) ...
5. 多实少虚原则
写文章还是应该写一些实际的东西，不能空话连篇。这就要求一定要多用实词，少用虚词。这里所说的虚词就是指那些比较大的词。比如我们想表达人或事物很好的时候，不应该总用nice这样空洞的词，而是要使用一些诸如generous，humorous，interesting，smart，gentle，warm-hearted，hospitable之类的形容词。如：
There are many respectable (good) people around us.
The vocabulary and grammar of the plot need to be adjusted, and we also need your guidance
(advice) on our performance.
She has a flexible (good) teaching method.
Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing (nice) , with many well-known sightseeing spots.
6. 多变句式原则
（1）并列（串联）
我们有时希望自己能写出结构复杂的长句，但又怕写错。要解决这一问题，最保险的写长句的方法是在句子之间加and，但它们之间最好是先后关系或者并列关系。表示并列关系的词还有besides，furthermore，likewise，moreover，not only…but also…等。
（2）转折
用了表示转折的词，可以使文章要点明确，重点突出。表转折关系的词有but，yet，still，however，nevertheless，in spite of，despite等。
（3）因果
文章中使用了表示因果关系的词后，可以让你的句式变得丰富多彩，语言富于变化，更具说服力。表示因果关系的词有so，then，therefore，consequently，as a result，for this reason，so that等。
（4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）
有时突然出现一个不合乎常理的句子，必然会吸引别人的注意力，显得与众不同。其实就是使用了主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句。
（5）附加
定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语的恰当运用，也会让人感觉你既有深厚的语法功底，又具有极强的语言表达能力。
（6）排比
文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果要让你的文章更加精彩的话，可以使用多个对偶、多个不定式、多个动词、多个短语等，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势。
7. 挑战极限原则
挑战极限听起来很难，但并非高不可攀。在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格之类的句子，因为学生要么想不到，要么怕写错。其实这一语法项目并不难，它只是分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求前后主语一致，而独立主格则有自己的逻辑主语。这种句子出现在文章中一定会令人刮目相看，很自然地成了一个得分点。
二、知识积累
在写作中，要想有效避免句子的单调和呆板，写出丰富、简短、生动的句子，善于句型转化非常重要。常用的句型转化形式有：
1. 用介词或介词短语对祈使句、并列句、状语从句进行转化，可使句子变得简洁。常用的介词（介词短语）有but for，thanks to，in spite of，despite，in the face of，on/upon one's arrival，because of，as well as，such as，by doing 等。
Because he helped me, I accomplished the task on time.
→Thanks to his help, I accomplished the task on time.
2. 使用现在分词对祈使句、并列句、名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句进行转化
Go straight and you will see a flower shop.
→Going straight, you will see a flower shop.
As I was lying on the grass, I thought of my brother who was studying abroad.
→Lying on the grass, I thought of my brother studying abroad.
3. 使用过去分词可对并列句、定语从句或状语从句进行转化
He was told many times, but he didn't memorize the rule.
→Told many times, he didn't memorize the rule.
4. 使用不定式可对介词短语、并列句、状语从句、定语从句、名词性从句进行转化
The policemen entered the forest in search of the missing boy.
→The policemen entered the forest to search for the missing boy.
5. with的复合结构可对并列句、状语从句进行转化，而独立主格结构也可对并列句或状语从句进行转化
I have a lot of work to do and can't go to Beijing with you tomorrow.
→With a lot of work to do, I can't go to Beijing with you tomorrow.
If weather permits, we will hold the meeting outside.
→Weather permitting, we will hold the meeting outside.
6. 为了增强表意效果，有时可以用倒装句、省略句等特殊句式对常见句式进行转化
I didn't know the result until he told me.
→Not until he told me did I know the result.
→Only when he told me did I know the result.
If I am invited, I will attend the party.
→If invited, I will attend the party.
7. 有时，根据写作的需要，名词性从句和定语从句、并列句和定语从句、名词性从句之间也可以相互转化
He has two sons and both of them are doctors.
→He has two sons, both of whom are doctors.
We all know that he is a warm-hearted man.
→As we all know, he is a warm-hearted man.
→What is known to us all is that he is a warm-hearted man.
That different people have different hobbies is natural.
→It's natural that different people have different hobbies.
三、题型分类
（一）申请信
1. 常用句型
（1）表明目的
I'm writing to apply for your recently advertised position of _________.
我写信是想申请贵公司最近刊登的……职位。
Having learnt from the newspaper that you are in need of _________, I'm writing to express my interest in it.
从报纸上得知你们需要……，我写信是想表达我对此非常感兴趣。
Informed/Learnt that you want a companion as a tour guide to travel around China, I strongly recommend myself as a qualified candidate.
得知你想要一名同伴作为导游在中国各地旅行，我强烈推荐自己为合格人选。
Perfectly fit/ suitable/ qualified for _________, I'm writing in reply to your notice for _________.
完全符合……，我写信回复你……的启事。
I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain the opportunity to _________.
我写信是希望能得到……的机会。
（2）阐述优势
① 总述
I am competent to meet the requirements you've listed.
我有能力满足你列出的要求。
② 资格
I am confident that I'm suitable for _________/ qualified to do _________/ equal to doing _________.
我确信我适合做……/有资格做……/能胜任……。
I once worked as _________, which makes me experienced in _________.
我曾经做过……，这是我在……有经验。
③ 性格
Meanwhile, it is my independence that makes it easy for me to adapt to a new environment.
同时，正是我的独立使我很容易适应新环境。
For my being outgoing and enthusiastic, it's relatively easy to get along with me.
由于我外向热情，和我相处相对容易。
Sociable and responsible, I do believe I'm perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.
善于交际，有责任心，我的确相信我完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
④ 优势
As a graduate majoring in English, I have no difficulty in communicating with others in English.
作为英语专业的毕业生，我用英语同他人交流毫不费力。
To be honest, I have a gift for communicating with others.
说实话，我有与他人沟通的天赋。
What is more important is that my good communication sills enable me to keep a good relationship with others.
更重要的是，我良好的交际能力使我能与他人维持良好关系。
⑤ 经验
Furthermore, I have participated in community activities for years on end, which makes me cope with various emergencies promptly and efficiently/ more qualified for the position.
此外，我已经连续多年参加社区活动，这使我能够迅速有效地应对各种紧急情况/更加胜任这个职位。
（3）表达感谢期望
Should you favor me for the position, I'm convinced that I would live up to your expectations.
如果您选择我担任此职，我一定不会辜负您的期望。
I would appreciate it if I'm offered this chance, I will spare to offer my best service.
如果您能给我这次机会我将不胜感激，不留余力地做到最好。
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
No sooner had I caught sight of the advertisement you posted on the Internet than I wanted to apply to _________（申请职位）. Here is my brief self-introduction.
In the first place, I once worked as _________, which makes me experienced in _________（经历）. As a graduate majoring in English, I _________（优势一）. What is more important is that _________（优势二）. Sociable and responsible, I do believe I'm perfectly qualified for this job.
Should you favor me for the position, I'm convinced that _________（表示感谢）.
Yours,
_________
（二）求助信
1. 常用句型
（1）表明目的
I'm writing to ask you for some help/ to do me a favor/ to give me a hand.
我写信是想向你求助。
I am writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on _________.
我写信是希望你能给我一些关于……的建议。
I wonder if you can offer me some tips on _________.
我想知道你能不能给我一些关于……的建议。
I'm sorry to bother you, but I meet with some difficulties with _________. I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
很抱歉打扰你，但是我在……方面遇到一些困难，我别无选择，只能向你求助。
Would you please give me a hand with the following problems
你能帮我解决下列问题吗？
I wonder if you could take the trouble to help me with _________.
我想知道你是否能不怕麻烦帮我……
（2）描述问题
I've finished _________, but I still feel it far from satisfaction, which bothers/ troubles/ upsets me a lot.
我已经完成了……。但我仍然觉得它远不能令人满意，这让我很苦恼。
I find it challenging to _________. I also have trouble expressing my ideas accurately due to my limited vocabulary.
我发现……很有挑战性。另外，因为我的词汇量有限，所以我很难准确表达我的想法。
I often feel left out in this school, but I don't know how it has come about.
在这所学校我经常感觉受冷落，却不知道这是怎么回事。
Some problems trouble me a lot. First, _________. What's worse, _________. What bothers me most is _________.
有些问题让我很烦恼。首先，……更糟糕的是……最让我烦恼的是……。
（3）表示感谢，期待回复
Faced with/ facing so many difficulties I'm anxious or eager to get your timely help.
面对如此多的难题，我非常希望得到你的及时帮助。
I will be very grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand./ I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some useful/ practical suggestions.
如果你能抽出时间帮助我，我将很感激。/如果你能给我提供一些有用的/实用的建议，我不胜感激。
Thanks for considering my request. Your early reply is well appreciated./ Thanks for your attention. I'm looking forward to your reply.
多谢考虑我的要求，十分感谢您的早日答复。/感谢您的关注，期待您的答复。
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
How are you doing I'm sorry to bother you, but I meet with some difficulties with _________（遇到的困难）. I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
I've finished _________, but I still feel it far from satisfaction, which bothers/ troubles/ upsets me a lot. First, _________. What's worse, _________. What bothers me most is _________（描述问题）.
Faced with/ Facing so many difficulties, I'm anxious or eager to get your timely help. I would appreciate it if you could be so kind as to give me some practical suggestions. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
_________
（三）演讲稿
1. 常用句型
（1）点明主题
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm honored to have the opportunity to make a speech on _________.
大家上午好！我是李华，很荣幸有机会做关于……的演讲。
It's my great honor to be here/ to have the opportunity to say something about _________.
我很荣幸能在这里/ 有机会谈论一下……。
I'm very glad and feel it my honor to run for/ be a candidate for _________.
我很高兴也是我的荣幸，能参加……的竞选/成为……的候选人。
I really appreciate your making time in your tight schedule to attend the meeting, we are here to talk about _________.
非常感谢你们在百忙之中抽出时间来参加会议，我们在这要谈论……。
（2）陈述内容
What I want to stress is that _________. For one thing, _________. For another, _________. Besides, _________. In a word, _________.
我想强调的是……。一方面，……。另一方面，……。此外，……。总之，……。
The first thing we can do is _________. As we all know, _________. What we can do next is _________. For example, _________. What's more, _________.
首先我们能……。众所周知，……。我们能下一步能做的是……。例如，……。而且，……。
Many people believe/ hold the view/ or think that _________.
许多人认为……。
Recently, the issue of _________ has been brought into public focus.
近来，……的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。
Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, and great changes have taken place in people's attitude towards some traditional practice.
现在我们进入了一个充满机遇和创新的崭新时代，很多人对某些传统的看法也发生了很大改变。
（3）总结感谢
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.
我从心底感谢你们，今天给了我这个机会与你们交谈。
I'd like to wish _________ a success and I hope _________ can perform at your best.
我祝愿……获得成功，希望……能表现出自己最好的状态。
I sincerely hope what's mentioned above might be helpful to you. Thanks for your listening /attention.
我真诚的希望以上所说的对你有帮助，感谢您的倾听/关注。
I hope all of you can find your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship. Thank you!
我希望你们都觉得自己此次逗留是一次愉快的经历，你们的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。谢谢！
2. 参考模板
Dear _________,
Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'm honored to have the opportunity to make a speech on _________（演讲主题）.
Recently, the issue of _________ has been brought into public focus. Many people believe/ hold the view/ or think that _________. What I want to stress is that _________. For one thing, _________. For another, _________. Besides, _________. In a word, _________.（陈述内容）
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today. I sincerely hope what's mentioned above might be helpful to you.
1. 假如你是李华，你对某大学关于人工智能的暑期课程——大语言模型(Large Language Models)十分感兴趣，请按要求写一封申请信，内容包含以下方面：
1. 表明申请意愿；
2. 阐述感兴趣的理由；
3. 介绍个人优势。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Admissions Committee,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 假定你是即将毕业的高三学生李华，最近你和父母在大学专业的选择上有些争论。请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封求助信。内容包括：
1. 求助原因；
2. 你的选择和理由。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Black,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 假定你是李华，请你写一篇以"Keep Psychologically Healthy"为主题的英文演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 保持心理健康的益处；
2. 自己或他人的一次相关经历；
3. 呼吁大家关注心理健康。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening!
4. 假定你是李华，为了帮助你校交换生更好地了解中国文化，你校将邀请他们一起参与校园话剧节。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，以协助活动有序进行。内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 个人的优势。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 假定你是李华，你班正在为英语戏剧大赛排练英语短剧，需要外教James的帮助。请给他写一封邮件。内容包括：
1. 写信意图；
2. 求助内容；
3. 约定时间。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear James,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
6. 假定你是李华，你校在本月开展了志愿者主题活动。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容包括：
1. 你参加志愿者活动的经历；
2. 对你的影响。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Good morning, everyone!
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your attention!
答案以及解析
1. 答案：
Dear Admissions Committee,
I am Li Hua, a high school student who is eager to apply for the summer course on Large Language Models at your University. The following provides the details of my application.
I have been long captivated by the way AI interacts with language, as seen in trendy tools like ChatGPT. My interest in this course is also driven by the desire to explore how AI processes and generates text, a field where technology and language are blended in excitingly innovative ways.
In terms of personal strengths, I have a solid background in computer science and a passion for linguistics. I am also a quick learner and enjoy tackling complex problems. These attributes, I believe, position me well for success in this course.
Thank you for considering my application. I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2. 答案：
Dear Mr. Black,
I'm writing to seek your advice as I'm facing a dilemma with my parents regarding my university major choice. They insist that I should pursue law, believing it's prestigious and secures a stable future. However, my passion lies in environmental science, which I find both fascinating and crucial for our planet's future.
I hope you could offer some guidance on how to communicate my interests and the importance of environmental issues with my parents. I aspire to make a difference in environmental conservation, and I believe this field offers me the opportunity to do so.
Looking forward to your instructive feedback.
Yours,
Li Hua
3. 答案：
Dear teachers and fellow students,
Today, I'd like to talk about the importance of keeping psychologically healthy. Keeping psychologically health can make us happy, relieve stress and reduce the risk of the disease.
I remember a time when I was feeling overwhelmed by stress. I was struggling to find a way to cope with it. However, I soon realized that I needed to change my perspective. I started to focus on my strengths and the positive aspects of my life. This helped me to feel more positive and resilient.
In conclusion, I urge everyone to prioritize their mental health.
Thank you for your listening!
4. 答案：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the upcoming campus drama festival, with the aim of helping our exchange students understand Chinese culture better.
I believe I have the necessary skills and qualities to contribute to the success of this event. Firstly, I am a fluent English speaker and have excellent communication skills, which will assist our exchange students in overcoming any language barriers they may encounter. Additionally, having a deep understanding of Chinese culture, I can explain the background and significance of the performances to the exchange students, helping them to connect with the local culture. Better still, I have extensive experience in voluntary work.
Should I be given the chance, I would strive to ensure the smooth running of the festival. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 答案：
Dear James,
I hope this email finds you well. Our class is preparing a short English play for the upcoming School English Drama Competition. We need your assistance.
Since we have never participated in such an event before, we would greatly benefit from your expertise. Could you please help us by reviewing our lines and giving suggestions for improvement Additionally, we would greatly appreciate it if you could attend our practice sessions and provide feed back on our pronunciation and acting styles.
Could we schedule a meeting at your earliest convenience to discuss this further Your guidance would be invaluable.
Yours,
Li Hua
6. 答案：
Good morning, everyone!
I'm Li Hua, and I feel greatly honored to share my experience as a volunteer with you today.
Volunteering has been an incredibly rewarding experience for me. I remember the first time I volunteered at a local soup kitchen. As I served meals to the hungry, I realized how fortunate I was to have food on my table every day. This experience taught me gratitude and empathy towards those who are less fortunate than I am.
In conclusion, volunteering has been a transformative experience for me. It has taught me the value of empathy and gratitude. I encourage everyone to consider volunteering as a way to contribute to society and enrich your own life.
Thank you for your attention!

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