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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项译林版（2024）
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．请根据以下提示，写一篇短文介绍你的家。包含所有要点，80词左右。
·Where do you live ·Who do you live with ·What’s your home like ·What’s your favourite place in your home Why
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2．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以“My Home”为题写一篇小短文。
要求：
1. 词数不少于80；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。
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3．根据课文内容，发挥自己的想象，以“My Dream Home”为题写一篇短文，介绍你梦想中的家。
要点：
1.词数：80左右；
2.内容充实，条理清晰，语句通顺。
My Dream Home
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4．假设你是王涛，你的网友David给你发了封电子邮件，想详细了解你的情况。请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，并根据邮件内容用英语回信。
To: Wang Tao@
From: David2023@
Subject: Your home & neighbourhood
Dear Wang Tao, How are you I’m thinking about visiting you next month. I have some questions here. Would you please tell me 1. What is your home like (包括位置、面积等) 2. Which is your favourite place at home and why 3. What are people in your neighbourhood like Why do you think so (至少举两个例子) Please write back soon. Best wishes, David
注意：
1. 回信须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 90词左右，短文的开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to visit me. Let me introduce myself to you.
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I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you soon!
All the best,
Wang Tao
5．每个人都有自己喜欢的房子。你喜欢哪一种房子？校刊英语专栏正在以“My Dream House”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际，从以下两种房子类型中任选其一，用英语写一篇短文，陈述你喜欢它的理由，以此向专栏投稿。
The first house The second house
big and comfortable; a big living room with a TV, a kitchen, three bedrooms and a bathroom; a big garden; a small lake with fish very large and near the sea; a big kitchen on the ground floor; a big balcony on the second floor; a big garden in front of the house
写作要求：
1.文中须包含所选房子类型的信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数60左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My Dream Home
　　I hope I can live in my dream house some day.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假如你是Simon，你的英国朋友Tom来信向你询问你的社区情况。请根据以下提示，写一封电子邮件回复他。
社区情况 1．社区很大，位于市中心， 2．社区里有很多志愿者，他们友善且乐于助人；能帮助我解决各种各样的问题……（至少举一个例子）
周围环境 1．社区周围设施齐全，有超市、餐馆、学校、医院等； 2．离社区1公里处有一个公园，……（至少举一个例子）
居住条件 1．社区里有20多栋建筑，每栋有9层。住在6楼；有一个客厅，一个厨房，一间浴室和3间卧室 2．最喜欢的房间是……因为我可以……
感受 住在这样的一个社区……
要求：1．表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2．必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3．词数：不少于100词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
4．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Tom,
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood.
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Yours
Simon
7．邻里之间可以一起分享温暖，也可以共同抵御风雨。你是否也感同身受呢？请阅读下列提示，用英语谈一谈你的邻里。包含图中要点，80词左右。
I live in a flat in City Garden on Ninth Street.
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8．请根据表格信息，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍“阳光社区”的活动情况。
Sunshine Community Centre
Problems Where to ask for help
Not knowing how to work out maths problems Work Out Club: Some college students can help you.
Not knowing what is legal (合法的) or not Police Helping Centre: Policemen will tell you what you can do and what you mustn’t do.
Not knowing how to use your computer Computer Group: Some computer engineers will teach you.
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9．假设你是Tom，五一假期期间你想邀请你的朋友David和你一起参加你们社区的志愿者活动。根据以下提示，用英语写一封邀请信。
提示：
1. 社区介绍：环境优美，邻居友善……；
2. 志愿活动：辅导学生作业等 (至少3项活动)；
3.……
注意事项：
1. 必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、行文连贯，可作适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be some volunteer activities at our community centre during the holiday.
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Yours,
Tom
10．李明是来自中国北方一个小镇的中学生, 他新认识的英国网友汤姆给他发来了邮件。请你根据邮件内容, 以李明的名义写一封80词左右的邮件回复汤姆。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Li Ming, How are you I’m glad to make friends with you online. I’m always interested in China, a great country with a long history. So would you please tell me something about your hometown, your neighbourhood and your life I hope one day I can have the chance to visit your hometown. Looking forward to hearing from you! Yours, Tom
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I’m happy to tell you about my hometown, my neighborhood and my life.
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Yours,
Li Ming
11．假设你是Sandy，请你根据以下提示，用英文写一封邮件给你的笔友Tommy，向他介绍你的家乡泗洪。
概述 现代化城市，空气清新……
位置 江苏省西北部（in the northwest of Jiangsu Province）
景点 洪泽湖湿地（Hongze Lake Wetland） 观赏野生动物（wildlife）……
社区邻居 善良、友好。乐于帮助别人……（至少两点）
个人感受 我的家乡适宜居住……
写作要求：1. 包含所给提示，内容充实；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 90词左右（邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tommy,
I’m glad to introduce my hometown Sihong to you.
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Welcome to Sihong!
Yours,
Sandy
12．同学们一定听过《如愿》这首歌，其中的一句歌词“山河无恙，烟火寻常”描绘了中国的盛世景象。城市的发展如同一部生动的历史长卷，每一条街道、每一座建筑都是一页篇章，记载着人们的辛勤耕耘和智慧创新。用脚步丈量大地宽广，用心感受中国的温暖怀抱。假定你是李辉，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1.推荐一座值得游玩的城市及原因。
2.介绍该城市2-3处著名景点，描述这些景点的独特之处和游客的游玩活动。 介绍当地的特色美食……
3.表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
13．假如你是张浩, 你的英国朋友安东尼计划来南通玩, 他给你发了一封电子邮件, 想详细了解你的家乡南通。请认真阅读他的邮件, 并根据邮件内容回信。包含所有要点, 词数80左右。
To: Zhanghao@
From: Anthony2025@
Subject: Your hometown
Dear Zhang Hao, How are you Glad to hear from you. I am thinking about travelling to China during the summer holiday. I plan to travel to your hometown—Nantong. I want to know something about the location, hot spots, people and transport（交通）in your hometown. Please tell me something else about your hometown. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Anthony
Dear Anthony,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Nantong. It’s a good place to visit. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nantong!
Yours,
Zhang Hao
14．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是Li Ming，你的英国笔友Tom想来中国旅游，他向你咨询了一些问题。请给他回一封电子邮件包括来中国旅游的最佳时间及缘由、来这能做什么和你的一些建议等。回信开头已给出。提示词供选用。
提示词：spring, summer, autumn, winter, sunny, warm, cool, visit, take phones
提示问题：
1. When is the best time to visit Beijing And why
2. What can I do there
3. Can you give me some advice
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Ming
15．假如你是李华，你的家乡是苏州，许多外国友人要到苏州游玩，请你根据以下要点写一篇介绍该城市的短文。
要点：1. 古老的城市，非常干净；
2. 有很多园林，很美丽；
3. 有许多大商场和餐馆，可以购物和享受美食；
4. 离上海近，乘火车约一个小时。
要求：1. 短文中必须包含所有要点，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右。
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16．假如你是李辉，你的笔友Mary来信，想了解关于中国的一些情况。请根据以下要点和要求，给她回一封电子邮件，介绍中国。
要点：
1. 中国幅员辽阔，历史悠久；
2. 中国有许多旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化等（至少列举两个方面）；
3. 表达期待，欢迎她来中国游玩。
要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
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Yours,
Li Hui
17．近年来，京剧、国画(Chinese painting)、书法(calligraphy)、剪纸等传统艺术受到了越来越多人的喜爱，继承和发扬中华传统文化与艺术已经成为一股风潮，请以“My favourite traditional Chinese art”为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍你最喜欢的一种中华传统艺术。
写作内容:
1. What is it about
2. How did you get to like it
3. What do you expect (期望) about it
写作要求：
1.词数80左右；
2.短文中必须包括所有要点，可增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。
My favourite traditional Chinese art
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18．假设你是李华，即将参加一项交换生活动并住在John家里，为表示友好和宣传中国文化，你提前寄送了三份具有中国传统特色的手工艺品作为礼物。请根据提示内容写一封E-mail，给John及其家人介绍一下这些礼物及其特色。
人称：第三人称
时态：一般现在时
语篇类型：说明文
注意：
1. 词数：80以上（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 要对所写内容进行适当的拓展。
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear John and your family,
As an exchange student, I am very excited about staying with you. To show you my thanks and share Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
19．在中国悠久的历史长河中，诞生了许多光彩夺目、博大精深的文化艺术形式，如书法、国画、剪纸、陶艺等。请选择一种你最喜欢的中国传统文化艺术形式，根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文来介绍它。
para 1 What is it What do you know about it
para 2 What’s special about it
para 3 How do you feel when doing it / What’s the cultural value of it
My favourite Chinese art form
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20．假如你是李华，你的笔友澳大利亚学生Selina对中国的传统节日春节很感兴趣，请根据下面的提示内容选择一个节日并写一封电子邮件回信。
内容包括：
1. 节日的信息、名称、日期……；
2. 你通常如何庆祝这个节日（穿新衣、吃团圆饭、给小孩压岁钱……）；
3. 在节日期间你有什么感受。
注意：
1. 词数为70左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：the Spring Festival（春节）；celebrate（庆祝）；traditional（传统的）；January（一月）；February（二月）
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it.
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All the best,
Li Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
I live in a flat in a tall building in town centre. I live with my parents and grandparents. I have a younger brother, too.
My home is quite modern and comfortable. It has new furniture and big windows. The rooms are big and clean. I like living here because it is comfortable.
My favourite place at home is my bedroom. It is big and beautiful. I can do anything I like there. I often enjoy wonderful moments with my younger brother.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括4个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的居住位置和家庭成员；
第二步，具体描述家的特点；
第三步，阐述自己最喜欢的地方及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①live in 居住在
②at home 在家里
[高分句型]
①I like living here because it is comfortable. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I can do anything I like there. (定语从句)
2．例文
My Home
I have a clean and beautiful home. Although it is not very big, it is warm.
In my home, there are two bedrooms, a living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. My family spends most of our time together in the living room. My father often watches TV there. My mother often stays in the kitchen. She cooks delicious meals for us. I love the smell of her cooking. And I often study in the study. There are many books in my study. I like reading them very much. My bedroom is my favourite place. Because I can have some peace and quiet of my own.
This is my home, a safe and comfortable home. I love my home very much.
【解析】总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：围绕主题展开，需包含家庭环境、成员活动和情感表达，避免真实姓名，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入自己的家；
第二步，详细描述家里的房间以及家人喜欢做的事情；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① spend time together 花时间一起
② like doing sth喜欢做某事
③ comfortable舒服的
[高分句型]
Although it is not very big, it is warm.（让步状语从句）
3．例文
My Dream Home
Welcome to my dream home! It’s very large. It’s near the sea. My parents and I can often have fun swimming in the sea. On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen because I like cooking meals. In front of the house, there’s a garden. I can enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun there. On the first floor, I also have my own bedroom and study. I can read or chat with my friends in the study. Do you like my dream home
I hope I can live in such a house some day.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给话题，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，介绍梦想中的家的位置；
第二步、介绍梦想中的家的布局，以及家人和自己喜欢做的事情；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun doing sth.享受做某事的乐趣
②in front of…在……前面
③chat with sb.和某人聊天
[高分句型]
①I hope I can live in such a house some day.(宾语从句)
4．例文：
Dear David,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to visit me. Let me introduce myself to you.
I live in a cozy apartment in the city center. It’s about 80 square meters with two bedrooms, a living room, and a kitchen. My favorite place at home is the balcony because I love reading there in the sunshine.The people in my neighbourhood are very friendly. For example, my neighbor Mrs. Li often shares homemade cookies with me, and Mr. Zhang helps me carry heavy groceries upstairs.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you soon!
All the best,
Wang Tao
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：电子邮件，属于应用文；
②时态：一般现在时
③提示：需回答David的三个问题（家庭情况、最喜欢的家中区域、邻居特点）。
[写作步骤]
第一步：家庭描述：位置、面积、结构。
第二步：介绍最喜欢的地方，并说明原因。
第三步：举两个具体例子说明邻居的特点。
[亮点词汇]
①cozy舒适的
②homemade cookies自制饼干
③carry heavy groceries搬运重物
[高分句型]
①My favorite place at home is the balcony because I love reading there in the sunshine.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
②The people in my neighbourhood are very friendly. For example, my neighbor Mrs. Li often shares homemade cookies with me.（运用了For example举例）
5．例文
My Dream Home　　I hope I can live in my dream house some day. My dream home is very large and near the sea. There’s a big balcony on the second floor. I can look out at the sea and the beach there. On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen. I enjoy making meals there. In front of the house, there’s a big garden. I can enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun there.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己喜欢的房子类型；
第二步，具体介绍该类型的房子。
[亮点词汇]
①look out at向外看
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③in front of在……前面
[高分句型]
①I hope I can live in my dream house some day.（省略that的宾语从句）
②There’s a big balcony on the second floor.（there be句型）
6．例文
I’d like to tell you something about my neighbourhood.
My neighbourhood is large and it is in the city center. There are many volunteers in it. They are friendly to each other, and they often help us solve all kinds of problems. Last week, There was something wrong with my computer. I asked for help. And they were willing to help me check and repair my computer.
Around the neighbourhood there are supermarkets, restaurants, schools, hospitals and so on. There is even a park near it. We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park. We all like it. There are more than 20 buildings in the neighbourhood, each has nine floors and I live on the sixth floor. There is a living room, a kitchen, a bathroom and three bedrooms in my home. I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.
I feel so happy to live in such a beautiful neighbourhood. Hope you can come here one day.
Yours
Simon
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍一下社区情况，周围环境和居住环境。
第二步，再写一下在这里的感受。
第三步，最后诚恳邀请对方过来玩。
[亮点词汇]
①asked for help寻求帮助
②makes delicious food做美味的食物
③go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①We can go for a walk and run slowly in the park.（and连接并列成分）
②I like the kitchen best because my mum often makes delicious food there.（原因状语从句）
7．例文：
I live in a flat in City Garden on Ninth Street. We have supermarkets, restaurants, a school and a hospital nearby. It’s very comfortable to live in a neighbourhood like that.
My neighbourhood is like a big family. My neighbours are kind and helpful. There are some engineers among them. They can help us fix things like broken computers. Some of my neighbours are college students. They can help children with their homework. I am always ready to help my neighbours too. Sometimes they are too busy to look after their children. I often play with their kids until they come back home.
I’m so lucky to live in such a neighbourhood. I hope it will become better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我住在第九街城市花园的公寓里。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——邻居的职业和相处方式如何、社区周边的环境及经常做的事情及感受等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
②be ready to do sth.准备做某事
③look after照顾
[高分句型]
①There are some engineers among them. (there be句型）
②I hope it will become better in the future. (宾语从句)
8．例文
Sunshine Community Centre
Sunshine Community Centre provides great help for its members.
If you don’t know how to work out maths problems, the Work Out Club can help you. Some college students there will offer you useful ways. For those who are unsure about what is legal, the Police Helping Centre is the place to go. Policemen will patiently explain the laws to you. When it comes to computer problems, the Computer Group is always ready. Some computer engineers will teach you how to use your computer.
All in all, the community centre is really helpful.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格所列提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山：介绍阳光社区中心为其成员提供大力帮助，引出下文对具体帮助内容的阐述；
第二步，详细列举社区中心针对不同问题所提供的具体帮助途径；
第三步，总结全文，再次强调社区中心确实非常有帮助，与第一段形成呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①all in all 总而言之
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①If you don’t know how to work out maths problems, the Work Out Club can help you. (if引导的条件状语从句)
②When it comes to computer problems, the Computer Group is always ready. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9．范文
Dear David,
May Day is coming. There will be some volunteer activities at our community centre during the holiday.
Our community is extremely beautiful. You can hear the birds singing and smell the flowers. People here are friendly and helpful.
There are a wide range of things we can do to assist community residents. We are going to help students with their homework. We can help the elderly clean their houses and do some shopping for them. Since some parents are busy working, we can help them take care of their babies.
I sincerely hope you will join in this helping-hands activity.
Yours,
Tom
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，告知大卫在假期期间社区中心会举办一些志愿活动，为下文进一步介绍活动内容做铺垫；
第二步，描述自己所在社区的情况；
第三步，具体阐述在社区志愿活动中可以开展的一系列帮助他人的事情；
第四步，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of照顾
②do some shopping购物
[高分句型]
①Since some parents are busy working, we can help them take care of their babies. (since引导的原因状语从句)
②There are a wide range of things we can do to assist community residents. (定语从句)
10．
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your email. I’m happy to tell you about my hometown, my neighborhood and my life.
My hometown is a small town in northern China. It has four distinct seasons. Winters are cold with snow, and summers are very hot. There are beautiful mountains and fields around us. My neighborhood is friendly. We have a park and a school nearby. On weekends, people sell fresh food at the market. Everyone helps each other. I study at a middle school. After class, I play basketball or read books. On weekends, I help my parents with housework.
I hope you can visit my town one day!
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏邮件提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，详细介绍自己的家乡、社区和日常生活；
第三步，书写结语，表达邀请意愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to do sth很高兴做某事
②on weekends在周末
③each other彼此
[高分句型]
①There are beautiful mountains and farms around us. (There be句型)
②I hope you can visit my town one day! (宾语从句)
11．例文：
Dear Tommy,
I’m glad to introduce my hometown Sihong to you. Sihong is a modern city in the northwest of Jiangsu Province. The air here is fresh. There is Hongze Lake Wetland where we can watch wildlife. The neighbors in my community are kind and friendly. They are always ready to help others, like helping the elderly carry things and looking after the left behind children. I think my hometown is a wonderful place to live in.
Welcome to Sihong!
Yours,
Sandy
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应以第三人称为主来介绍，注意主谓一致问题；写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图，简单介绍家乡泗洪；
第二步：具体阐述泗洪的位置、景点、社区邻居；
第三步：书写结语。写出自己对家乡泗洪的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a modern city现代化城市
②fresh新鲜的
③The neighbors in my community社区邻居
④be ready to do sth乐于做某事
⑤the elderly老年人
⑥look after照顾
[高分句型]
①There is Hongze Lake Wetland where we can watch wildlife.（定语从句）
②I think my hometown is a wonderful place to live in.（宾语从句）
12．例文：
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history. There are three famous places you must visit. The Great Wall is very long and beautiful. You will feel excited when you walk on it. The Forbidden City has many old palaces. Summer Palace is perfect to take a walk by the lake. Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here! I can’t wait to see you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：应用文(电子邮件)
②时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时表期待
③提示：需包含城市推荐、3个景点介绍和美食推荐
[写作步骤]
第一步，推荐北京及历史原因；
第二步，介绍3个景点：长城、故宫、颐和园；
第三步，推荐烤鸭；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①best choice 最佳选择
②famous places 著名景点
③delicious food 美味食物
④take a walk 散步
[高分句型]
①I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
②You will feel excited when you walk on it.（when引导时间状语从句）
③Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here!（祈使句的否定形式）
13．One possible version:
Dear Anthony,
I’m glad to hear you’re coming to my hometown—Nantong. It is a good place to visit. It lies in the south-east of Jiangsu Province. It takes about one and a half hours by high-speed railway to travel from Shanghai to Nantong.
The air is fresh in Nantong, and you can smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. People here are kind and helpful. In my community, people often help each other with problems and they are ready to help visitors from all over the world. When you come to Nantong, remember to go to different parks along Hao River. If you go up the Wolf Hill, you can enjoy amazing views of the city and the Yangtze River. Don’t forget to try traditional Chinese food. It is delicious.
There are buses to different places every day. You can also take the underground or ride around the city.
I hope my answer is helpful to you. See you in Nantong!
Yours,
Zhang Hao
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎对方来南通；
第二步，具体介绍南通的相关情况；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①each other 互相；彼此
②all over the world世界各地
[高分句型]
①It takes about one and a half hours by high-speed railway to travel from Shanghai to Nantong.（it takes some times to do sth“做某事花费多长时间”）
②I hope my answer is helpful to you.（省略that的宾语从句）
14．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m very happy to know that you are coming to Beijing. In spring, it’s warm and windy. In summer, it’s hot. Winter is cold and dry, but the city is very beautiful after snow. The best time to visit Beijing is in autumn. Because the weather is usually cool and sunny.
There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as Tian’anmen Square, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum, and so on. If you come to Beijing, I suggest you must climb the Great Wall, because there is an old saying that “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man”. It’s a good idea to bring a camera because you’ll probably want to take a lot of pictures. Also, remember to buy a map, because you might get lost in the city. Of course, I can be your guide if you like. I hope this information is useful.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据题干中给出的问题提示，向Tom介绍来北京旅游的相关情况，并给出一些建议，可适当发挥，注意突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单问候，并介绍北京的气候以及最佳旅游的时间和原因；
第二步，介绍在北京可以做什么，并给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to do sth很高兴做某事
②places of interest名胜古迹
③take a lot of pictures拍很多照
④get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①I’m very happy to know that you are coming to Beijing. (that引导的宾语从句)
②If you come to Beijing, I suggest you must climb the Great Wall, because there is an old saying that “He who doesn’t reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”. (if引导的条件状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句)
15．例文：
My hometown is in Suzhou. It is an old city with a long history. It is very clean. There are a lot of beautiful gardens in Suzhou. And there are many big shopping malls. You can do some shopping there. And there are also lots of restaurants. The food is very delicious. You can have a try! People here are friendly and kind. It’s a good place to visit. Many visitors come here every year. Suzhou is next to Shanghai. It is about one hour from here to Shanghai by train.
Welcome to Suzhou. You will have a good time here.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引入话题；
第二步，从历史和环境，园林特色，现代设施和地理位置等方面分层展开要点；
第三步，总结邀请，用感叹句表示欢迎。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of=lots of许多
②shopping malls商场
③do some shopping购物
④have a try试一试
⑤next to紧邻
⑥by train乘火车
⑦have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of beautiful gardens in Suzhou.（there be句型）
②Welcome to Suzhou.（祈使句）
16．例文
Dear Mary,
Glad to receive your letter. You said you wanted to know about China in your letter. Now let me talk about it.
China is a vast country with a long history of over 5,000 years. It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings. Chinese food is also delicious—you must try Peking Duck, with its crispy skin, and Sichuan hotpot, known for its hot taste! In addition, traditional festivals like the Spring Festival, with colorful dragon dances and fireworks, show our rich culture.
I hope you can visit China soon. You’ll love it!
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单介绍中国；
第二步，具体介绍中国的旅游资源，特色美食以及传统文化；
第三步，书写结尾，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①tourist attractions旅游景点
②such as例如
[高分句型]
①It has many famous tourist attractions, such as the Great Wall, where you can enjoy ancient buildings.（定语从句）
②I hope you can visit China soon.（宾语从句）
17．例文
My favourite traditional Chinese art
Of all the traditional Chinese folk art, my favourite is paper-cutting. It’s a kind of folk art in China.
People cut different pictures of people, animals or plants with knives or scissors on red paper. It is folded before it is cut with scissors. It’s such a wonderful art form that I love it the first time I know it. Firstly, it’s a good way to learn about the traditional art. Secondly, paper-cutting works are great presents for my family and friends.
Paper-cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people like. And I want to share it with others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍自己最喜欢的中华传统艺术。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是什么；
第二步，详细介绍该艺术以及你是如何喜欢上它的；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①share...with...和……分享
②paper-cutting works剪纸作品
[高分句型]
①Firstly, it’s a good way to learn about the traditional art.(不定式作定语)
②Paper-cutting is part of Chinese culture that all Chinese people like.(定语从句)
18．例文
Dear John and your family,
As an exchange student, I am very excited about staying with you. To show you my thanks and share Chinese culture with you, I have sent you three traditional Chinese handicrafts as gifts.
The first gift is a kite. It is made of paper and some pieces of bamboo. Kites have different kinds of shapes. Some are animals, and some others are cartoon characters. The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes. It means good luck, happiness and best wishes. There are also some paper-cuts. Chinese paper-cutting has a long history of over 1,500 years. The paper-cuts have different shapes, like animals, flowers and so on. People in China usually put them on doors and windows during the Spring Festival.
I hope you will like these beautiful handicrafts. I am looking forward to meeting you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接给出的开头，另起一段；
第二步，详细介绍送给约翰的三个手工艺品，包括手工艺品的材料和寓意等；
第三步，希望约翰喜欢这三个手工艺品，并期待相见。
[亮点词汇]
①be made of由……制成
②different kinds of不同种类的……
③a long history of……的悠久历史
④looking forward to期待……
[高分句型]
①The second gift is a beautiful Chinese knot which is made of red ropes. (which引导的限制性定语从句)
②I hope you will like these beautiful handicrafts. (省略that的宾语从句)
19．例文
My favourite Chinese art form
I love calligraphy, the art of writing beautifully. With brushes and ink, people create words that look like paintings. It’s not just writing; it’s an art form.
There are many styles of calligraphy. Some are slow and neat, and others are fast and flowing. I like to try them all. It’s fun to see how the ink moves on the paper.
Practising calligraphy makes me feel calm and peaceful. It’s like thinking with my hands. I enjoy learning this old Chinese art and want to keep doing it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，选择一种自己最喜欢的中国传统文化艺术形式以及介绍自己对其的了解；
第二步，介绍它的独特性；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①like to do sth.喜欢做某事
②feel calm感到平静
③enjoy doing sth.享受做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s fun to see how the ink moves on the paper.(宾语从句)
20．例文
Dear Selina,
Glad to receive your email. I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China. Let me tell you something about it.
The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival. It usually comes in January or February. During the festival, we wear new clothes and have a big family dinner. Children get lucky money in red envelopes. We also watch fireworks and the Spring Festival Gala.
I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families. I really enjoy the lively atmosphere!
All the best,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，引出下文对春节的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“节日基本信息、庆祝方式以及节日期间自己的感受”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②lucky money压岁钱
③the Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
[高分句型]
①I’m happy that you are interested in the Spring Festival in China.（that引导的宾语从句）
②I always feel excited because the festival brings warmth and happiness to families.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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