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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期中复习专项仁爱科普版
（期中培优）专题12 书面表达20篇
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．如今，人们越来越关注青少年的心理健康。请你以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”为题写一篇英语短文，就如何保持好心情发表自己的观点。词数100左右。
How to Stay in a Good Mood
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2．提示：假如你是David，你的好朋友Lucy最近一次考试没考好，情绪比较低落，心里很难过。请给她写一封信，告诉她应该怎样调整自己的情绪，尽快恢复愉快的心情。信的开头和结尾已给出
要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in your exams and you are in a bad mood now. I can share some ideas about how to get out of a bad mood.
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I’m sure you will become happy and enjoy your study and life as soon as possible.
Yours,
David
3．每个人在生活中不可能事事顺心，因此保持良好的心态显得非常重要。请你根据表格提示，以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”为题，写一篇短文，词数80左右。
Why do we need to stay in a good mood Health
What can affect our moods Environment, weather
What should we do to stay in a good mood Sports, music
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
How to stay in a good mood
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4．请从下面描述心情的词中选择一个，以“I Feel ______ these Days”为题，写一篇英语小短文。
要求：
1. 可选词汇为：lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened, worried
2. 条理清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 注意写出为什么、怎么样以及后来怎么样等。
4. 词数100左右。
I Feel ______ these Days
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5．帮助他人是一件快乐的事，我们提倡互相帮助，关心社会和谐发展，请结合你经历过的帮助别人的乐事或者参加志愿活动的趣事，写一篇英语短文。
提示：1. your opinion about volunteer work;
2. an experience you had/ heard/ law;
3. What you have learned from it
要求：1. 短文必须包含所有要点提示；
2. 文中不得以任何形式出现真实人名、校名；
3. 词数80左右。
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6．家是温馨的港湾，家是幸福的源泉，家是永远的依恋，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动，请结合自身的成长经历，破解家庭幸福的“密码”，写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你对家庭幸福的理解；
2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事；
3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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7．小时候，你一定有很多玩具吧。有没有一件玩具是你保存至今的？请你以“My favourite toy”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的玩具。
提示：
1. What’s your favorite toy
2. How long have you had it
3. Who gave it to you
4. Why do you love it
写作要求：
（1）语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范；
（2）词数70左右;
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
My favorite toy
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8．我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？你拥有它多长时间了？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意义？请以“The Story Behind My Favorite Gift”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示词：favorite gift; have had
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词。
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
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9．每一份礼物都承载着一段美好的回忆。明天你们班将开展主题为“The most special gift I’ve ever got”的英语口语交流活动，请你准备一篇发言稿，与大家分享你收到过的最特殊的礼物。
提示：1. What is the most special gift you’ve ever got
2. Why is it special
3. What’s the story about it
要求：1.文章需包含所给提示内容，可适当发挥，使行文流畅、内容完整；
2.语法正确，书写工整；
3.100词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The most special gift I’ve ever got
Everyone has ever got some gifts, and so have I. The most special gift I’ve got is
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10．生活中我们总会收到一些礼物，例如一张CD，一本书，一辆单车，一个布娃娃等，学校月刊英语专栏正在以“My Favorite Gift”为题向同学们征稿，请你按要求用英语写一篇短文参与投稿。谈一谈你是如何得到这份礼物的，以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：a. 词数不少于80 词；
b. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
c. 文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
My Favorite Gift
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11．俗话说：“读万卷书，行万里路。”你的英国笔友John对这句话深有感触。假如你是李华，请根据来信内容用英语给他写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, Recently I have read a book about China. In the book, there is an old Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles.” It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. Do you like reading Chinese students are often busy with homework. What are your reading habits Do you have any reading plans this year Do you enjoy travelling Could you tell me something about your favorite trip I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, John
要求：
（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）卷面整洁，书写美观；
（4）120词左右。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I share the same feeling with you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
12．假如你叫李明，今年五一假期你要跟父母去青岛旅行，你打算告诉你加拿大的笔友Paul关于你的旅行计划。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给Paul写一封不少于80词的信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
How are you
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Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
13．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国文化很感兴趣。这次他想在五一假期来中国温州游玩，请你给他写一封信，分享你的经历并介绍一两个游玩点（可介绍其特点，游玩交通方式等等）。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 100词左右。
3. 开头已经给出，不计入词汇。
参考词汇：visit places of interest, try local food....
Dear Mike,
May Day is coming.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．生活中不只有眼前的试卷和作业，还有诗和远方。暑假快到了，你们校刊的英文栏目正在征集“The place I want to go most”稿件，请你投稿吧！
写作内容：
1.你最想去的地方是哪里；
2.你为什么想去这个地方；
3.你打算在那里做些什么。
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名字；
2.词数要求90左右。
The place I want to go most
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15．假如你是某英文报社的特约小记者，昨天（5月23日）你目睹了一场交通事故，你很难过，想提醒大家注意安全，因此你写了一篇事故报道发表在了该报纸上。请你根据提示信息，从事故发生的时间（6:30 p. m.）、原因、经过以及你的看法等内容出发完成这个报道。词数在80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：救护车ambulance; 低头 lower one’s head
提示信息：
1.一个女孩正放学回家，她低着头边玩手机边走路；
2. 一辆汽车开得很快；
3. 女孩和汽车相撞；
4.救护车来了，女孩被送往医院。
A Traffic Accident Report
Yesterday was May 23rd.
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16．成长的过程中，你一定去过很多地方吧！旅行既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于90词。
提示：
(1) What’s your idea about traveling
(2) Tell us one of your traveling experiences.
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17．“读万卷书，行万里路”。假如你是李明，你校英语报正在举行征文比赛、主题是A Wonderful Trip。请你根据下面的思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文比赛，总数不少于80。
Who— my parents;
When, where and how—fly to Beijing, three hours; last summer.
What activities—1. the Great Wall enjoy the natural beauty, ...;
2. the Palace Museum: see so many beautiful works. ...;
3. the Summer Palace: beautiful. go boating on Kunming Lake, relax after. ...;
Your ideas: ...
A Wonderful Trip
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18．“身和心总有一个要在路上。”你们学校正在组织一次主题为“Body and Soul (心灵) on the Way”的英语演讲。请你写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己曾经去过的地方，读过的好书以及你的收获。
Body on the Way Talk about an interesting place you have visited;
Soul on the Way Talk about a good book you have read;
What have you learnt from the trip and the book
注意：
1．短文应包括所有的信息，注意适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3．短文不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Body and Soul on the Way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
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19．旅游能让人忘却烦恼和忧愁，使人心情愉快，能让你的性格变得开朗活泼，还能开阔视野，锻炼身体，广交朋友。假如你和父母在上个星期天，一起去南天湖(Nantian Lake)游玩，请根据提示写一篇游记，提示词需全部用上。
1. 早起坐车去南天湖，1个小时后到达； 2. 环湖散步、观赏自然风光、拍照；
3. 中午在当地一家饭馆享受美食； 4. 下午去划船；
5. 晚上搭帐篷并享受夜景； 6. 感想
提示词：fine weather, go on a visit to…, watch, delicious food, restaurant, tent, enjoy, wonderful
要求：
1. 紧扣主题，语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
2. 80-120词，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
A Trip to Nantian Lake
Last Sunday, I had a wonderful trip to Nantian Lake.
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20．四月芳菲醉，人间仲春时。运河三千里，醉美是淮安。近年来，聚集到我们家乡淮安旅游的游客越来越多，淮安市文旅局已面向全市招募一批旅游志愿者。假如你是一名合格的文明旅游志愿者，请按照下面提示，写一篇如何为美丽淮安作出贡献的短文。
美化环境 不乱扔垃圾，保持公共场所干净整洁； 植树种花，保护环境……
文明礼貌 有礼貌，主动向游客问好……
乐于助人 向游客介绍淮安的历史文化，带领他们赏美景，品美味淮扬菜(Huaiyang food) ……
要求：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，要点齐全；
3. 字数在80词左右，开头已给，不计入总词数。
To be good travel volunteers
Recently, many tourists have got together to visit our hometown—Huai’an. To be good travel volunteers, what should we do
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
As we all know, everyone can’t be happy all the time. If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. How can we stay in a good mood Here are my suggestions.
First, we should have healthy eating habits and do exercise every day. They can help us keep in good health. When we are healthy, we’ll probably have a good mood. Second, having a hobby is important as well because hobbies can make us cheerful and keep our minds active. What’s more, it’s good to be ready to help others when they are in need. Helping others can make us feel proud of ourselves. It can also help us become more confident.
In a word, it’s necessary for us to stay in a good mood.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。就如何保持好心情发表自己的观点。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habits饮食习惯
②as well也
③feel proud of 对……感到自豪
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①When we are healthy, we’ll probably have a good mood. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②Second, having a hobby is important as well because hobbies can make us cheerful and keep our minds active. (because引导的原因状语从句)
2．例文
Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you failed in your exams and you are in a bad mood now. I can share some ideas about how to get out of a bad mood.
First, accept that everyone makes mistakes. Exams are just a part of learning, not the whole story. Don’t be too hard on yourself. Second, try to find out why you didn’t do well. Review your mistakes and make a study plan. This will help you improve next time. Third, talk to someone you trust, like a teacher or friend. Sharing your feelings can make you feel lighter. Also, do something fun to relax, such as listening to music or taking a walk. Finally, stay positive. Believe in your ability to bounce back.
I’m sure you will become happy and enjoy your study and life as soon as possible.
Yours,
David
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点内容，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达同情并引出主题。
第二步，介绍具体的建议调整自己的情绪。
第三步，表达期待和祝福，希望对方尽快恢复愉快的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①makes mistakes犯错
②be too hard on yourself对自己太苛刻
③stay positive保持积极
[高分句型]
①Sharing your feelings can make you feel lighter. (动名词作主语)
②I’m sure you will become happy and enjoy your study and life as soon as possible. (省略that的宾语从句)
3．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
As we know, everyone can’t be happy all the time. If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. But many things round us can affect our feelings, such as the environment, colors or weather. What should we do to stay in a good mood Here are my opinions.
First, listening to music can make us relaxed. Second, don’t keep silent. If we have some problems, we can tell our friends, parents or teachers. They will help us deal with them. Third, doing sports will let us forget something unhappy.
In a word, it’s necessary for us to stay in a good mood.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，“一般将来时”为辅；
③提示：写作要点已通过表格给出，考生写作时需涵盖需要保持好心情的原因、影响心情的因素、保持好心情的做法等要点，根据实际情况可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点题，说明保持好心情对健康的重要性，引出影响心情的因素；
第二步，针对如何保持好心情，从听音乐、倾诉、做运动等方面给出具体建议；
第三步，书写结语，总结强调保持好心情的必要性。
[亮点词汇]
①all the time 一直
②be/stay in a good mood 保持好心情
③keep silent 保持沉默
④deal with 处理
⑤in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. (if引导的条件状语从句 )
②So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. (含有It特殊句式：It’s+形容词+for sb.+to do sth. )
4．例文
I Feel Worried these Days
I feel worried these days because the mid-term exam is coming. There are so many subjects to review, and I’m afraid I can’t do well.
Every day, I study until late at night, but I still feel unprepared. The pressure makes it hard to focus. My best friend noticed my anxiety and advised me to talk to my teacher.
Luckily, my teacher taught me some study skills and helped me make a plan. Now, I organize my time better and feel more confident. Though I’m still a little nervous, I believe I can handle it!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示信息写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意写作时应首先补充完整题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表明这些天的心情是怎么样的以及原因；
第二步，具体介绍自己的心情状况；
第三步，介绍解决的办法及结果。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to与……交谈
②make a plan制定计划
③handle处理
[高分句型]
①I feel worried these days because the mid-term exam is coming. (because引导原因状语从句)
②Though I’m still a little nervous, I believe I can handle it! (though引导让步状语从句)
5．
I think helping others is a happy thing. Volunteer work is very meaningful to our society. Firstly, helping others means helping ourselves, because each of us may need help. What’s more, by helping others get out of trouble, we can also experience the joy of success.
Once, my deskmate failed in English. I volunteered to help him learn English. In the end, his English grades have always been very good. He is very grateful for my help and we have become good friends. Through this thing, I experienced the joy of helping others and I also realized the importance of helping others.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍你对参加志愿活动的看法、你经历过的帮助别人的乐事或者参加志愿活动的趣事和从中学到的东西等方面的具体详情。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more而且
②get out of trouble从困境中解脱
③volunteer to do sth志愿做某事
④be grateful for感激……
[高分句型]
①Firstly, helping others means helping ourselves, because each of us may need help. (because引导原因状语从句)
②He is very grateful for my help and we have become good friends. (并列句)
6．例文
Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless.
To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解；
第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事；
第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the source of……的来源
②prepare for准备
③show appreciation for对……表示感谢
[高分句型]
①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother.（表语从句）
②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文
My Favorite Toy　　
I have a lot of toys and I like the toy bear best of all. I’ve had the toy bear since my fifth birthday. My father gave it to me as my birthday gift. My toy bear is white and it’s about half a meter tall. I never want to part with it because I like it very much, especially when my parents are away. I stay with it almost every day. In the day I often take it out to play with my good friends. At night, I even sleep with it. It’s meaningful to me because it brings me a lot of happiness.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的玩具是什么；
第二步，讲述谁给的这个玩具，拥有这个玩具多久等等；
第三步，介绍喜欢这个玩具的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①give sth to sb把某物给某人
②at night在晚上
③a lot of许多
[高分句型]
I never want to part with it because I like it very much, especially when my parents are away.（原因状语从句）
8．例文
The Story Behind My Favorite Gift
My favorite gift is a book named The Old Man and the Sea. I have had this book for half a year.
When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised. I was happy, too. I didn’t pass the exam a few days ago. I felt very upset those days. My mother wanted to encourage me to be strong and not to give up so she bought me that book. I finished reading it the next day. I learned a lot from the book and understood the love my mother gave me.
Since then, I never give up. I think it is the best gift I have ever received.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：围绕“礼物背后的故事”进行写作，注意条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的礼物是什么以及拥有它多久了；
第二步，讲述这个礼物背后的故事；
第三步，讲述这个礼物的特殊意义。
[亮点词汇]
①encourage sb. (not) to do sth.鼓励某人（不要）做某事
②give up放弃
③finish doing sth.完成做某事
[高分句型]
①When I received the book on my eleventh birthday, I was a little surprised.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I think it is the best gift I have ever received.（省略that的宾语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句）
9．One possible version:
The most special gift I’ve ever got
Everyone has ever got some gifts, and so have I. The most special gift I’ve got is a camera.
Whenever I see the camera, it makes me think of my grandfather. He gave it to me as a gift five years ago. It not only helps me record my life, but also tells me never to give up.
I didn’t pass an exam and was unhappy that day. When my grandfather knew what happened, he took some photos with his camera and showed them to me. In the pictures, some people were happy while others weren’t. Grandpa said, “Life is full of ups and downs, but it’s colorful.” I understood what he said.
I’ll keep the camera and take good care of it forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你收到过的最特别的礼物是什么；
第二步，说明为什么它很特别；
第三步，分享有关它的故事。
[亮点词汇]
①think of想起
②Whenever每当
③give up放弃
④be full of充满
[高分句型]
①Whenever I see the camera, it makes me think of my grandfather.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
②When my grandfather knew what happened, he took some photos with his camera and showed them to me.（when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句）
10．例文：
My Favorite Gift
Everyone has his or her most cherished gift. My favorite gift from childhood is a basketball
I have had it since I was eight years old. My father gave it to me as a New Year’s gift. I like the basketball so much because I really enjoy playing basketball. It is not only good exercise, but also it helps me relax. My father and I often play basketball together in the evening. Now I’m good at playing basketball. And I’m a member of my school basketball team.
The basketball gives me many sweet memories. Thanks to my father’s basketball. I will value it forever.
【解析】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Favorite Gift”这一话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从得到这份礼物的，以及你喜欢它的原因等方面来介绍这件特别的礼物的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达这件特别的礼物珍视。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
②be good at擅长
③thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
①I like the basketball so much because I really enjoy playing basketball.（because引导原因状语从句）
②It is not only good exercise, but also it helps me relax.（not only ... but also ... 结构）
11．例文
Dear John,
Thanks for your letter. I share the same feeling with you. I’m very glad to tell you something about the Chinese saying “Read 10,000 books and travel 10,000 miles”. It means that it is important to read ten thousand books and walk ten thousand miles. It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. I usually read after I finish my homework or before I go to bed. I also like travelling. The visit to Beijing last year was my favorite trip. I visited the places of interest in Beijing and learned about its traditional culture. I really understand the meaning of “He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.”
Do you like travelling Have you ever been to China I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括来信中所提要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍回信的目的，从而引出话题；
第二步，解释“读万卷书，行万里路。”的含义，并回答笔友来信中的问题；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest 名胜古迹
②learned about了解
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I like reading because I can learn a lot from books. (because引导原因状语从句)
②It tells us that reading and travelling can make us learn more knowledge. (宾语从句)
12．例文
Dear Paul,
How are you
I have great news to tell you. This May Day, I’m going to Qingdao with my parents for holidays. We are going there by plane. We plan to stay there for about three days. When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. We will enjoy the sunshine on the beach. We also plan to go shopping and eat some delicious seafood. I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. I am really exited about the trip and I hope we can have a good time there.
Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明假期要跟父母去青岛旅行；
第二步，重点介绍旅行的交通方式，时间，活动和感受；
第三步，期待朋友的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do sth. 计划做某事
② be exited about 对……感到兴奋
③ look forward to 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. (that引导宾语从句)
13．Dear Mike,
May Day is coming. I’m so glad you’ll visit Wenzhou! It’s really interesting here. Let me tell you about two cool places.
First, there’s Jiangxin Island. It’s in the middle of the river. You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice. To get there, you can take a ferry. The ferry ride is fun.
Second, there’s Wuma Street. It’s a busy street. You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu. You can walk around and have a great time. You can take a bus or a taxi to get to Wuma Street.
I hope you’ll love Wenzhou. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一封写给笔友的书信，目的是介绍温州的游玩地点。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述景点的一般特征、交通方式等客观情况。
③提示：根据要求，需要介绍一两个温州的游玩点，包括其特点和到达的交通方式。写作过程中需遵循书信格式，避免透露真实个人信息，控制词数在 100 词左右。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇对 Mike 要来温州游玩表示高兴。
第二步，详细介绍江心屿，阐述其位于江心的位置特点，以及岛上有古老寺庙、环境静谧等，说明可乘坐渡轮前往。
第三步，介绍五马街，突出它是热闹的街道，有很多当地美食，说明可乘坐公交或出租车到达。
第四步，结尾表达对 Mike 游玩体验的期待。
【亮点词汇】①yummy 美味的
②ferry 渡轮
③busy 热闹的
【高分句型】①You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu.（like 在此处用于举例）
14．例文：
The place I want to go most
There are so many wonderful places to have a holiday. This time, the place I want to go most is Sanya.
As we all know, Sanya is a good place to relax ourselves. It has beautiful sea and clean beaches. The weather there makes people comfortable. Another reason I want to go there is Sanya’s hotels. Most of the hotels have wonderful condition and service. I really want to have a try.
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. I’ll also taste seafood and try something new. I think a day is not enough for me, and Sanya is really the place where I want to go most.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当发挥，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最想去的地方是三亚；
第二步，介绍为什么想去三亚；
第三步，介绍打算在三亚做些什么；
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②have a try试一试
③try something new尝试一些新的东西
[高分句型]
If I go there, I’ll lie in the sunshine and swim in the sea. (if引导条件状语从句)
15．例文
A Traffic Accident Report
Yesterday was May 23rd. I witnessed a traffic accident at 6:30 p.m. A girl was walking home from school. She was looking at her phone and walking with her head down. At the same time, a car was coming very fast. Suddenly, the girl and the car collided. The girl was badly hurt. Soon an ambulance came and took her to the hospital. I think it’s very dangerous to use mobile phones while walking. We should pay attention to safety and avoid such accidents.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，叙述了一场交通事故。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，因为描述的是昨天发生的事情。
③提示：描述昨天亲眼目睹的一场交通事故的经过，并阐述自己对走路玩手机这一行为的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间，引出目睹交通事故这件事。
第二步，中间详细描述事故发生的过程，包括女孩的行为，汽车的状态以及最终的碰撞结果，还有后续救护车赶来将女孩送往医院。
第三步，结尾表明自己对走路玩手机这一行为的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①witness目击；见证
②collide碰撞
③ambulance救护车
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①I witnessed a traffic accident at 6:30 p.m.（运用一般过去时，简洁明了地表明自己目睹事故的时间。）
②I think it’s very dangerous to use mobile phones while walking.（运用“it’s+形容词+to do sth.”的句式，清晰表达自己对走路玩手机这一行为的观点。）
16．例文：
Traveling is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I think it helps us discover new places and understand different cultures. My most unforgettable trip was visiting the Great Wall last summer.
Early that morning, my family and I took a bus to the famous wall. When I saw its long body winding through mountains, I felt amazed. Climbing the steep steps was tiring, but the view from the top was worth it. We took many photos and listened to stories about ancient Chinese history from our guide. I realized how smart and strong the builders were hundreds of years ago.
This trip taught me that traveling is not just about fun and it also helps us connect with history. I will never forget that special day.
【解析】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生已围绕提示中的两个问题展开写作，分别阐述了对旅行的看法和一次难忘的旅行经历，内容完整，要点突出。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接点明主题，表明文章要讲述对旅行的看法以及一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先概括了旅行的好处——放松和学习，并具体阐述了旅行帮助我们发现新地方和理解不同文化。然后详细描述了一次难忘的旅行经历——参观长城，包括出发时间、交通方式、对长城的感受、爬长城的体验、在长城上的活动以及从旅行中学到的道理等；
第三步，书写结语。结尾点明这次旅行的特殊意义，并表达永不忘记这次旅行的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①wonderful极好的
②unforgettable难忘的
③discover发现
④amazed惊讶的
⑤worth it值得的
⑥realize意识到
⑦special 特殊的
【高分句型】
①When I saw its long body winding through mountains, I felt amazed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Climbing the steep steps was tiring, but the view from the top was worth it. (动名词Climbing作主语；but连接表转折的并列句)
17．例文
A Wonderful Trip
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. We flew to Beijing. It took us three hours to get there. There are many famous places in Beijing.
First, we visited the Great Wall. It is long and great. There were many people on it at that time. We enjoyed the natural beauty. Then we went to the Palace Museum, we saw so many beautiful works that we have never seen before. They were wonderful. At last, we went on a visit to the Summer Palace. There are many beautiful flowers and trees and green lawns. We played happily on the lawn. We went boating on Kunming Lake. By traveling, we felt happy and relaxed. It was a great trip.
In conclusion, we can not only relax ourselves and make new friends but also at the same time we can learn much from travel. For modern life, we are busy with our work with high pressure. So we can often travel in our free time. It’s good for us.
【解析】总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中和谁在何时怎样去哪里旅行，参观了什么景点以及自己的观点等的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍和谁在何时怎样去哪里旅行。
第二步，具体阐述参观了什么景点。
第三步，发表自己的观点。表达“旅游有益身心健康，所以倡导大家有计划地去安排旅行”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① went on a trip to Beijing 去北京旅行
② went boating去划船
③ in conclusion总而言之
④ in our free time在我们空闲的时候
[高分句型]
① It took us three hours to get there.（It takes sb. some time to do sth.句型表示“某人花费多长时间做某事”）
② we saw so many beautiful works that we have never seen before.（that引导定语从句）
③ In conclusion, we can not only relax ourselves and make new friends but also at the same time we can learn much from travel.（not only…but also…句型）
18．One possible version
Body and Soul on the Way
We students should always improve ourselves. Travelling and reading are good for us. Our body and soul must be on the way.
Last summer, I visited the breathtaking Huangshan Mountain. As I watched the sunrise above the clouds, I realized that nature can inspire the power of courage. Every step to the top of the mountain taught me not to give up, and every view reminded me to meet the challenge. Reading is a lot of fun. The Little Prince has deeply touched my heart. The prince’s journey through planets symbolizes self-discovery. His words, “What is essential is invisible to the eye,” taught me to value inner beauty over superficial appearances.
Both experiences taught me that nature strengthens our will and books awaken our soul. Let’s keep searching and become a smarter version of ourselves.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：围绕 “自己的一次旅行、读过的一本好书以及旅行和书籍给自己带来的收获” 展开论述，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，指出旅行和阅读对自己有好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的旅行经历和自己读过的一本好书；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益处
②power of courage勇气的力量
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①As I watched the sunrise above the clouds, I realized that nature can inspire the power of courage.（as引导的时间状语从句）
②Both experiences taught me that nature strengthens our will and books awaken our soul.（that宾语从句）
19．例文
A Trip to Nantian Lake Last Sunday, I had a wonderful trip to Nantian Lake. My parents and I got up early and went there by bus. It took us one hour to get there. What fine weather it was! We went on a visit to the lake. We took a walk around the lake, watched the natural scenery and took a lot of photos. We enjoyed delicious food at a local restaurant at noon. We went boating in the afternoon. In the evening we put up a tent and enjoyed the night view.
Although we were very tired, we still felt very happy. Our trip was so wonderful that we wanted to visit Nantian Lake again.
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作时要注意包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对这次旅行的介绍；
第二步，具体介绍这次旅行进行的活动；
第三步，抒发感受。
［亮点词汇］
①get up 起床
②take photos 拍照
［高分句型］
①It took us one hour to get there. （It takes / took sb. some time to do sth.句型）
②What fine weather it was! （what感叹句）
20．例文
To be good travel volunteers
Recently, many tourists have got together to visit our hometown—Huai’an. To be good travel volunteers, what should we do
First, we mustn’t drop litter everywhere to keep public places clean and tidy. We should plant flowers and trees and drive less in order to protect the environment as well. Second, we must be polite. We can offer to say hello to tourists and try to help some of them in trouble. What’s more, we are supposed to introduce the history and culture of Huai’an to them and show them the beauty and delicious food of Huaiyang food. Besides, we can be volunteers to work more for the visitors.
Let’s work together so that we will have a better city.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出如何为美丽淮安作出贡献的问题；
第二步，从美化环境、文明礼貌及乐于助人等方面具体阐述；
第三步，书写结语，提出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②offer to do sth.主动提出做某事
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①Let’s work together so that we will have a better city.(状语从句)
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