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Writing Lesson 9 计划安排类
难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以“My Plan for the Coming School Year”为题，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一年内的打算。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
审题目（人称、时态、要点）
难忘的初中生活即将结束，请以“My Plan for the Coming School Year”（第一人称）为题，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈你初中结束后一年内（一般将来时）的打算（要点）。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
审人称：第一人称
审时态：一般将来时
审要点：①交流时大胆自信 ②多读书 ③多锻炼
列提纲——建议类
第一段：点明主题
第二段：阐述新年决心
第三段：表达美好愿望
遣词造句
第一段：点名主题--交代背景：我难忘的初中生活马上就要结束了。
遣词：难忘的初中生活 unforgettable middle school life
结束 come to an end
造句: My unforgettable middle school life is coming to an end.
点名主题--分享决心：我想跟你分享我新一年的决心。
遣词：分享 share
新一年的决心 new resolutions for the new year
造句: I would like to share my new resolutions for the new year with you.
第二段：阐述新年决心1——首先，在新的一年里，当和别人交流的时候，我要学会大胆自信。
遣词：与某人交流 communicate with sb.
对某人有信心 be confident in sb.
造句: First of all, I will learn to be confident in myself when I communicate with others in the coming year.
阐述新年决心2：其次，我想读更多的书。因为读书不仅可以增长知识还能拓展视野（原因）。
遣词：增长知识 increase one’s knowledge
拓展视野 open / broaden one's mind
造句: What's more, I want to read more books, because reading books can not only increase my knowledge but also broaden my mind.
阐述新年决心3：最后，对于我来说新的一年做一些锻炼是很必要的。它能帮助我保持活力、身体强壮（原因）。
遣词： 对于某人来说做某事怎么样 It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth.
造句:Last but not least, it is necessary for me to do some exercise. It can help me to keep active and strong.
第三段：表明愿望--我希望我所有的计划都能在新的一年实现。
遣词：实现 come true
造句:I hope that all my resolutions can come true in the new year.
句型总结
communicate with sb.与某人交流
be confident in sb. 对某人有信心
It is + adj. + for sb. to do sth. 对于某人来说做某事怎么样
大显身手
My _____________ (难忘的) middle school life is __________________ (结束). I ____________________ (我想要分享) my new ___________ (计划、决心) for the new year with you.
First of all, I will learn to _________________ (对……有信心) myself when I __________________ (和……交流) others in the coming year. What's more, I want to read more books, because reading books can ______________________________________ (不仅可以增长知识还能拓展视野). Last but not least, ___________________________ (对我来说锻炼身体很必要). It can help me to keep _________ (活跃的) and strong.
I hope that all my resolutions can _____________ (实现) in the new year.
参考范文
My unforgettable middle school life is coming to an end. I would like to share my new resolutions for the new year with you.
First of all, I will learn to be confident in myself when I communicate with others in the coming year. What's more, I want to read more books, because reading books can not only increase my knowledge but also broaden my mind. Last but not least, it is necessary for me to do some exercise. It can help me to keep active and strong.
I hope that all my resolutions can come true in the new year.

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