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Writing Lesson 10 人际关系类
最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力，但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ”为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
1. 与父母和谐相处很重要;
2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议:
(1) 理解与尊重父母 (如倾听和有礼貌地表达想法);
(2) 多与父母交流 (如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼)。
3. 与父母和谐相处的感受。
审题目（人称、时态、要点）
最近从媒体报道的一些家庭事件来看，孩子与父母的关系不和谐，隔阂越来越大，孩子普遍存在逆反心理。针对这个问题，某中学生英文报社开展了主题为“与父母和谐相处”的征文大赛。作为一名初中毕业生，你一定有自己的思想与辨别是非的基本能力（第一人称），但你是否曾想过应该怎样和自己的父母相处呢？请以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ”（一般现在时）为题写一篇短文参加此次征文大赛。
要点：1. 与父母和谐相处很重要;
2. 与父母和谐相处的做法或建议:
(1) 理解与尊重父母 (如倾听和有礼貌地表达想法);
(2) 多与父母交流 (如分享快乐与倾诉烦恼)。
3. 与父母和谐相处的感受。
审人称：第一人称
审时态：一般现在时
审要点：①我们应该理解和尊重父母。
②经常跟父母交流。
③分享快乐并且倾诉烦恼。
列提纲——人际交往类
第一段：点明主题
第二段：分享建议
第三段：与父母和谐相处的感受
第四段：提出建议
遣词造句
第一段：点名主题--强调与父母和谐相处的重要性：我认为与父母和谐相处对我们来说是非常重要的。
遣词：与……相处得好 get on well with…
造句: I think it is very important for us to get on well with our parents.
点名主题--引起下文：接下来，我想要和你分享一些建议。
遣词：一些建议 some pieces of advice
造句: Next, I would like to share some pieces of advice with you.
第二段：活动内容+个人感受：1.首先，我们应该理解和尊重父母。当父母唠叨我们时，我们应该耐心地听取他们的建议。2.其次，我建议我们应该经常跟父母交流以便他们能理解我们。例如，我们可以与他们分享快乐并且倾诉烦恼。
建议1——首先，我们应该理解和尊重父母。当父母唠叨我们时，我们应该耐心地听取他们的建议。
遣词：应该 be supposed to
尊重 respect
唠叨 talk much
听取建议 listen to suggestions
耐心地 patiently
造句: First of all, we are supposed to understand and respect our parents.When parents talk much, we should listen to their suggestions patiently.
建议2：其次，我建议我们应该经常跟父母交流以便他们能理解我们。例如，我们可以与他们分享快乐并且倾诉烦恼。
遣词： 其次 what's more 应该 ought to
以便于……；为了…… so that
和某人分享某事 share sth. with sb.
高兴 （n.） happiness
造句:What’s more, I suggest that we ought to often communicate with parents so that they can understand us.For example, we can share happiness with them and talk about our trouble with them.
第三段：感受--我和我的父母相处得很好，我喜欢和父母分享一切。我父母就像我最好的朋友。当我做得好的时候他们很骄傲，当我遇到困难的时候他们尽力帮助我，我们彼此相爱。
遣词：喜欢做某事 enjoy doing sth. 像 like
骄傲的 proud 彼此 each other
尽某人最大努力去做某事try one's best to do sth.
造句:I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends.They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.
第四段：提出倡议--正因为他们是我们的父母，所以让我们和他们和谐相处。
遣词：和谐相处 get on well with
造句:Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
句型总结
get on well with sb. 相处得好
so that 以便于……；为了……
try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力去做某事
大显身手
______________________________ (我认为与父母和谐相处对我们来说是非常重要的), but how can we _______________________ (和……相处的好) our parents Next, I would like to share ______________________________ (一些建议) with you.
First of all, We are supposed to _______________________ (理解和尊重) our parents. When parents talk much, we _________________________________ (应该耐心地听取他们的建议). What's more, I suggest that we ought to often ______________________ (和……交流) parents ____________________________ (以便他们能理解我们). For example, we can share ____________ (幸福) with them and talk about our ____________ (烦恼) with them.
I get on well with my parents. I _____________ (喜欢分享) everything with my parents. _______________________________ (我的父母就像我最好的朋友). __________________________________________________ (当我做得好的时候他们很骄傲，当我遇到困难的时候他们尽力帮助我). We love each other.
Let's get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
参考范文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
It’s very important for us to get on well with our parents, but how can we get along well with our parents Next, I would like to share some pieces of advice with you.
First of all, we are supposed to understand and respect our parents. When parents talk much, we should listen to their suggestions patiently. What’s more, I suggest that we ought to often communicate with parents so that they can understand us. For example, we can share happiness with them and talk about our trouble with them.
I get on well with my parents. I enjoy sharing everything with my parents. My parents are like my best friends. They are proud when I do something well and they try their best to help me when I have trouble. We love each other.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.

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