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Writing Lesson 11 乐于助人类
“传递爱心，服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会（the Lions）就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的 English World 栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算。
审题目（人称、时态、要点）
“传递爱心，服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会（the Lions）就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人（一般现在时）。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的 English World 栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算（第三人称+第一人称）。
要点：（表格内信息）
审人称：第三人称+第一人称
审时态：一般现在时
审要点：①剪头发、洗衣服、做打扫。
②在雨天她还免费提供给别人雨伞或雨衣。
③ ……
列提纲——乐于助人类
第一段：介绍人物和事迹
第二段：自己的观点和打算
第三段：提出倡议
遣词造句
第一段：介绍人物--我们时不时地就会被周边的人或事感动，杨敏就是我最崇拜的人之一。
遣词：不时地；偶尔 from time to time 钦佩 admire
被感动 be moved by
造句: From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most.
具体事迹--作为 Lions 的一员，她已经帮助了其他人很多年（引起下文）。她一个月去两次养老院为他们剪头发、洗衣服、做打扫。除此之外, 在雨天她还免费提供给别人雨伞或雨衣。
遣词：一个月两次 twice a month 洗衣服 wash clothes
剪头 cut hair 做打扫 do some cleaning
提供某人某物 offer sb. sth. = provide sb. with sth.
提供某物给某人 offer sth. to sb. = provide sth. for sb.
造句: As a member of the Lions, she has helped others for many years. She goes to the old people’s home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them.
Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.
第二段：自己的观点：我深深地被她的故事感动了。我打算在日常生活中尽我最大的努力去做一些身边的小事（引起下文）。
遣词：深深地感动 deeply moved
日常生活 daily life
尽我最大的努力去做某事 try my best to do sth.
我身边的小事 small things around me
造句:I’m deeply moved by her story. I’m going to try my best to do some small things around me in daily life.
具体打算——我计划捐赠衣物和书籍给贫困山区的孩子。更进一步说，我将要让我的父母和更多的朋友加入我，提高他们乐于助人的意识。
遣词：贫困山区的孩子 children in poor villages
提高……意识 improve the sense of...
造句: I plan to give books and clothes to the children in poor villages.What’s more, I’ll ask my parents and more friends to join me and improve the sense of helping others.
第三段：提出倡议--小举动也能有大影响，让我们帮助这些需要帮助的人，使世界变得更美好。
遣词：有大影响 make a big difference
使......更好 make ... better
造句:Small actions can make big differences. Let’s help those who need help and make the world a better place.
句型总结
offer sb. sth. = provide sb. with sth. 提供某人某物
offer sth. to sb. = provide sth. for sb.提供某物给某人
make a big difference 有大影响
大显身手
__________________ (不时地，偶尔), we ___________ (被感动) by the people and things around us. Yang Min ___________________________ (是我最崇拜的人之一). As a member of the Lions, she has helped others for many years. She goes to the old people's home ________________ (一个月两次) to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days ________________________________________(她还免费提供给别人雨伞或雨衣).
I'm ____________ (深深地) moved by her story. I'm going to ___________________________ (尽我最大的努力去做) some small things around me ________________ (在日常生活中). I plan to give books and clothes to the children in poor villages. What's more, I'll ask my parents and more friends to join me and _______________________________________ (提高他们乐于助人的意识).
_______________________________________ (小举动也能有大影响). Let's help those who need help and make the world a better place.
参考范文
Ready to help others
From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Min is one of the persons I admire most. As a member of the Lions, she has helped others for many years. She goes to the old people’s home twice a month to cut hair, wash clothes and do some cleaning for them. Besides, on rainy days she offers people umbrellas or raincoats for free.
I’m deeply moved by her story. I’m going to try my best to do some small things around me in daily life. I plan to give books and clothes to the children in poor villages. What’s more, I’ll ask my parents and more friends to join me and improve the sense of helping others.
Small actions can make big differences. Let’s help those who need help and make the world a better place.

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