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Writing Lesson 12 观点建议类
对于中学生在学校是否可以使用手机，不同的学生有不同的看法。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文。开头已经给出：
如今，越来越多的青少年使用手机。中学生可以在学校使用手机吗？不同的学生对此有不同的看法。
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school Different students have different opinions about it.
审题目（人称、时态、要点）
对于中学生在学校是否可以使用手机，不同的学生有不同的看法（第一人称、第三人称）。请根据下面表格中的提示写一篇短文。开头已经给出：
如今，越来越多的青少年使用手机（一般现在时）。中学生可以在学校使用手机吗？不同的学生对此有不同的看法。要点：（表格内信息）
审人称：第三人称、第一人称
审时态：一般现在时
审要点：①易于和父母及朋友保持联系。
②空余时间可以听音乐。
③ 浪费时间
④ 对眼睛有害
列提纲——观点建议类
第一段：赞成观点
第二段：反对观点
第三段：你的观点
遣词造句
第一段：赞成观点--阐明观点：一些学生认为可以在学校使用手机。
遣词：认为 consider
造句: Some students consider they can use mobile phones at school.
理由--首先，在任何情况下，他们都很容易与父母和朋友保持联系。其次，他们可以在空闲时间愉快地听音乐放松自己。除此之外，他们可以在手机上搜索信息，这可以增加他们的知识、拓宽他们的视野。
遣词：与某人保持联系 keep in touch with sb.
在任何情况下 in any case
在某人空闲时间 in one's free/spare time
搜索信息 search for information
增长知识 increase one's knowledge
拓展视野 open / broaden one's mind
造句: First, it is easy for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends in any case. Second, they can listen to music joyfully in their spare time to relax themselves.Besides, they can search for information on their mobile phones, which can increase their knowledge and open /broaden their mind.
第二段：反对观点--承上启下：然而，一些学生不同意。他们认为在学校使用手机是浪费时间。许多学生花费太多的时间在游戏和QQ上。这对他们的眼睛有害，对学习也有不良影响。
遣词：浪费时间 a waste of time
花费……在某事上 spend … on sth.
对……有害 be bad for
对……有不良影响 have a bad effect on
造句:However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. It’s bad for their eyes and it also has a bad effect on study.
第三段：你的观点--在我看来，我们最好不要在学校使用手机因为它对我们的健康和学习都有害。我们应该花费更多的时间在学习上而不是使用手机上。
遣词：最好不要做某事 had better not do sth.
代替；而不是 instead of
造句:In my opinion, we’d better not use mobile phones at school because it’s bad for our health and study. We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.
句型总结
keep in touch with sb. 与某人保持联系
spend…on sth. 花费……在某事上
have a bad effect on sth. 对……有不良影响
had better not do sth. 最好不要做某事
大显身手
Nowadays, ___________________ (越来越多) teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students ___________（认为）they can use mobile phones at school. First, ___________________________________________ （在任何情况下，他们都很容易与父母和朋友保持联系）. Second, they can listen to music ____________（开心地）_____________ （在他们空闲的时间）to _______________（放松他们自己）. Besides, they can ___________________（搜索信息）on their mobile phones, which can ____________________________（增长知识，拓宽视野).
However, some students ___________（不同意）. They think using mobile phones at school is ___________________（一种浪费时间）. Many students ______________ （花费）too much time ___________（在……上）games and QQ. It ______________（对……有害）their eyes and it also _____________________________（对……有不良影响）study.
In my opinion, we’d better not use mobile phones at school because it’s bad for our health and study. We should spend more time on our study ________________________________ （而不是使用手机）.
参考范文
Nowadays, more and more teenagers use mobile phones. Can middle school students use mobile phones at school Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students consider they can use mobile phones at school. First, it is easy for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends in any case. Second, they can listen to music joyfully in their spare time to relax themselves. Besides, they can search for information on their mobile phones, which can increase their knowledge and open /broaden their mind.
However, some students disagree. They think using mobile phones at school is a waste of time. Many students spend too much time on games and QQ. It’s bad for their eyes and it also has a bad effect on study.
In my opinion, we’d better not use mobile phones at school because it’s bad for our health and study. We should spend more time on our study instead of using mobile phones.

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