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学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
Unit4 Weather and our lives
单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．写一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题的短文，介绍你家乡的天气。
注意：1.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯。2.字数80字左右。
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2．请根据我格中的提示，以The Four Seasons为题，写一篇作文，可适当拓展。字数80字左右。
Spring 天气温暖潮湿，可以植树种花。
Summer 天气炎热，可以去游泳和吃冰淇淋。
Autumn 天气宜人，是旅游的好季节。
Winter 天气寒冷，可以玩雪和滑冰。
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3．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
4．假设你和你的三个朋友John、Kate、Paul在四个不同城市，请你根据表格所提供的信息完成短文。词数：60左右。
要求：必须包括表格内的所有信息。
Name Place Weather Clothes Activities
John London foggy a shirt and pants eat in the restaurant
Kate Sydney sunny，hot a T shirt and shorts play beach volleyball
Paul Moscow snowy a coat and a scarf make a snowman
I Shanghai windy，cold … …
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5．假设你是张丽，你的英国笔友Tom想与你交流以下问题，请你给他写回信。
提示：
1. What's the weather like in different seasons in China
2. Which season do you like best
3. Why do you like this season
4. What do you often do in this season
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
2.短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；
3.词数60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Li
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．假如你是李敏，你的美国笔友Danny告诉你，他很喜欢中国，想了解中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。请根据以下提示，给Danny写一封信，介绍有关情况。
提示：
1.季节和月份；
2.不同季节的天气状况；
3.人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数：不少于60词。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows”.
Suggested questions:
1.What happens to flowers and leaves when the wind blows
2.What happens to clouds when the wind blows
3.What do you see when the wind blows
When the Wind Blows
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8．假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的天气，请为大家播报。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天气
建议 多云，天气凉爽， 适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋… 天气晴朗， 适合和家人去参观农场……
参考词汇：do housework
要求：1．70词以上（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
9．在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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10．根据下面的提示，写一篇作文。要求文章连贯、简洁、通顺，不少于70词。
提示：①中国是一个很大的国家，各地的气候不同；
②分别说明南方和北方的气候特征及人们的相应活动；
③你个人认为天气最好的地方是哪里？为什么？
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能力综合实践5篇
11．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom 给你发邮件告诉你他想到你所在的城市游玩，但是不知道什么季节最适合，请你根据题目要点，写一篇回信，介绍深圳四季的气候特点，并建议他什么季节来深圳游玩及理由。
季节 天气活动
春天 温暖多雨，植物开始生长
夏天 炎热，人们喜欢去海边游泳
秋天 晴朗凉爽，人们常去野餐
冬天 有一点冷，但从不下雪
建议及理由 ……
要求:
1.60 词以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.必须包含所有提示内容点，可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分；
4、标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．亲爱的同学们，一年四季，气候多变，写一篇英语短文介绍你最喜欢的季节。
提示： 1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the weather like in the season
3. What can you do in the season
要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数50个左右。
参考词汇：take off脱下
My Favourite Season
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13．假如你是李华，请以“My favourite season”为题写一份演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。内容包括：
l. 你最喜欢的季节（spring summer autumn/fall winter四季任选其一）；
2. 天气的状况、景色的变化、人们常见的活动；
3. 你的行为和活动。
要求：
1. 字数50—60，作文的题目、开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语言规范准确；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关学校的真实姓名和校名。
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
14．假如你是李明，Tim是你新交的澳大利亚网友，请写信向他介绍一下中国的冬季及相关的节日。
提示：
1.中国冬季的天气；
2.中国冬季有哪些节日；
3.你都喜欢干些什么在冬季及节日里。
要求：
1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名。
3.70词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词汇)。
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,
Li Ming
15．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows” (以“当风吹起时”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于50个)
Suggested questions:
1. What happens when the wind blows
2. What can you see when the wind blows
3. What do you think of the windy weather
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Unit4 Weather and our lives
单元主题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）
说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。
基础入门训练5篇
1．写一篇以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题的短文，介绍你家乡的天气。
注意：1.书写工整，语句通顺，连贯。2.字数80字左右。
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【答案】例文
The Weather in My Hometown
Hello, everyone! I’m from Nanchang. Do you know what the weather is like here Let me tell you!
In spring, the weather changes a lot. Sometimes it’s warm, and sometimes it’s cold. In summer, it’s hot. But I like hot weather because I like swimming. Autumn is very nice. It is not too hot or too cold. I usually go climbing in such weather. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes it is snowy. I often make snowmen with my friends when it snows.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The Weather in My Hometown”为题，介绍自己家乡的天气。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可以从四季不同的天气来描述，介绍四季的不同以及自己的偏爱并说明原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．请根据我格中的提示，以The Four Seasons为题，写一篇作文，可适当拓展。字数80字左右。
Spring 天气温暖潮湿，可以植树种花。
Summer 天气炎热，可以去游泳和吃冰淇淋。
Autumn 天气宜人，是旅游的好季节。
Winter 天气寒冷，可以玩雪和滑冰。
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【答案】例文：
The Four Seasons
It is usually warm and wet in spring. Spring is the best time to plant trees and flowers.
It is very hot in summer. The most popular sport in summer is swimming. And it feels good to eat ice cream in hot weather.
Autumn is my favourite season. The weather is pleasant. I like flying kites and travel around in autumn.
Winter is cold and snowy. It is very exciting to play with snow and make snowmen. Skating is very popular in winter.
【详解】1.题干解读：根据表格提示写一年四季的天气特点和每个季节可以做的事情；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写一年四季的天气，用一般现在时态，注意主谓一致性，在某个季节用介词in，季节前不用冠词the。
3．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】例文
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the kitchen. What am I doing Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will you do on a rainy day
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
4．假设你和你的三个朋友John、Kate、Paul在四个不同城市，请你根据表格所提供的信息完成短文。词数：60左右。
要求：必须包括表格内的所有信息。
Name Place Weather Clothes Activities
John London foggy a shirt and pants eat in the restaurant
Kate Sydney sunny，hot a T shirt and shorts play beach volleyball
Paul Moscow snowy a coat and a scarf make a snowman
I Shanghai windy，cold … …
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【答案】 I have three friends—they're John, Kate and Paul. John is in London. It's foggy today. John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. Kate is in Sydney and it's sunny and hot there. She is wearing a T- shirt and a pair of shorts. And she is playing beach volleyball with her friends now. Paul is in Moscow and it's snowing and cold there. Paul is wearing a coat and a scarf and he is making a snowman with his brother.
I'm in Shanghai and it's winter now. So it's really cold but it's not snowy. It's windy. I am wearing a coat and a pair of gloves. And I'm playing in the park with my family.
【详解】题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格信息完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。
例文点评：例文采用两段式；时态综合运用一般现在时和现在进行时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中。
高分亮点：
短语：play with；a pair of等。
句型：So it's really cold but it's not snowy. 使用了so引导的结果状语从句以及but连接的并列句。
John is wearing a shirt and pants and he is eating in the restaurant now. 使用了and连接的并列句。
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
5．假设你是张丽，你的英国笔友Tom想与你交流以下问题，请你给他写回信。
提示：
1. What's the weather like in different seasons in China
2. Which season do you like best
3. Why do you like this season
4. What do you often do in this season
要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
2.短文条理清楚，行文连贯，内容可适当发挥；
3.词数60词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Li
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
My name is Zhang Li. There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. The weather is warm in spring and hot in summer. Autumn is cool and winter is cold and white. And I like summer best. In summer, the weather is sunny and hot. I can eat my favorite food — ice cream. I’m very happy. I can wear my beautiful skirts. I like swimming in the pool with my friends. In summer, the flowers are beautiful and the grass is green. I can have a picnic with my parents. And we can have lots of fun.
I like summer best. What about you
Yours,
Zhang Li
【详解】1.题干解读：文章属于书信作文，主要是给朋友介绍不同的季节的天气情况以及自己喜欢的季节，内容按照题目中给出的问题提示描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍不同季节的不同天气以及自己喜欢的季节，包括喜欢这个季节的原因，在这个季节能做的事情等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达。
进阶拓展训练5篇
6．假如你是李敏，你的美国笔友Danny告诉你，他很喜欢中国，想了解中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。请根据以下提示，给Danny写一封信，介绍有关情况。
提示：
1.季节和月份；
2.不同季节的天气状况；
3.人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.词数：不少于60词。
Dear Danny,
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Yours,
Li Min
【答案】例文
Dear Danny,
There are four seasons in a year in China. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. March, April and May are spring months. It’s warm and windy. We can fly kites in spring. June, July and August are summer months. The weather is very hot. We like to swim in the river. September, October and November are autumn months. The weather is cool and cloudy. We like to pick apples on the farm. December, January and February are winter months. It’s cold and snowy. We like to play in the snow.
How is the weather in America What do you like to do Can you write to me soon
Yours,
Li Min
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求向笔友Danny介绍中国的四季情况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍中国的四季和相应的月份，介绍不同季节的天气状况以及人们在不同季节喜欢从事的活动。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
7．Write at least 60 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows”.
Suggested questions:
1.What happens to flowers and leaves when the wind blows
2.What happens to clouds when the wind blows
3.What do you see when the wind blows
When the Wind Blows
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【答案】例文
When the wind blows
When the wind blows, leaves fly from the trees. You can also see them flying across the sky. When the wind blows, the kites rise and dive high in the sky. Flags flap near and far. Sailing boats lean and speed over the sea. When the wind blows, water smiles and shows dimples on her big, round face. How wonderful the windy weather is!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据问题提示，写一篇题目为“When the Wind Blows”的作文，结合你的所见情景谈谈当风吹起的时候，花、叶子、云会发生什么事。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第三人称。写作时，要做到主谓一致，内容全面，语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词拼写错误。
8．假如你是李明，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气信息，下面表格列出了三天的天气，请为大家播报。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天气
建议 多云，天气凉爽， 适合课后进行室外活动（如打篮球） 雨天， 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务，和爷爷下象棋… 天气晴朗， 适合和家人去参观农场……
参考词汇：do housework
要求：1．70词以上（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2．必须包括表格内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! I’m Li Ming. Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. And you can help your parents to do housework. Then you can play chess with your grandfather. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the farm with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为天气信息播报；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏表格中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。表格中列出了三天的天气，为同学们播报天气信息。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点出本次播报的主题是周五、周六和周日的天气；其次具体介绍这三天的天气情况及活动建议。
第三步：书写结语。表示感谢收听。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home呆在家里
②play chess下象棋
③go to the farm去农场
④do housework做家务
[高分句型]
①You can stay at home to do your homework.（情态动词后跟动词原形）
②It’s a good time to play basketball after class. （it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）
9．在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介绍。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②take photos拍照
[高分句型]
I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
10．根据下面的提示，写一篇作文。要求文章连贯、简洁、通顺，不少于70词。
提示：①中国是一个很大的国家，各地的气候不同；
②分别说明南方和北方的气候特征及人们的相应活动；
③你个人认为天气最好的地方是哪里？为什么？
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【答案】例文：
China is a large country, so the weather is different in different places. In the north, it is very cold in winter. People often like to skate. But in the south it is warm. It is very hot in summer both in the north and in the south. People often like to go swimming. I think the weather in Kunming is the best. It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，进入话题；
第二步，将天气及人物活动结合起来；
第三步，加以总结。
[亮点词汇]
①go swimming游泳
②take a vacation度假
[高分句型]
①I think the weather in Kunming is the best.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
②It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.（状语从句：由so引导结果状语从句；不定式结构作后置定语）
能力综合实践5篇
11．假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom 给你发邮件告诉你他想到你所在的城市游玩，但是不知道什么季节最适合，请你根据题目要点，写一篇回信，介绍深圳四季的气候特点，并建议他什么季节来深圳游玩及理由。
季节 天气活动
春天 温暖多雨，植物开始生长
夏天 炎热，人们喜欢去海边游泳
秋天 晴朗凉爽，人们常去野餐
冬天 有一点冷，但从不下雪
建议及理由 ……
要求:
1.60 词以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.必须包含所有提示内容点，可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名，否则不予评分；
4、标点正确，书面整洁。
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to hear that you would like to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a wonderful city to visit southeast of China.
It’s usually warm and rainy in spring. Plants begin to grow in spring. The summer is long and the winter is short. The weather in Shenzhen is very hot in summer. Sometimes there are storms and strong winds. Many people like going swimming in this season. In fall, the weather is cool and sunny. It is a good season to go for a picnic. It’s not very cold in winter. You can’t make snowmen here because there is usually no snow. I suggest you can come here in winter because the weather is nice and you can celebrate the Spring Festival with us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第三人称，介绍深圳的天气，并给出建议什么时候来深圳是最好的，表格内容描述完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对笔友的到来感到高兴，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍深圳一年四季的天气及建议什么时候来深圳的理由；
第三步，期待笔友的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① begin to do开始做
② go for a picnic野餐
③ like doing喜欢做某事
④ go swimming去游泳
⑤ make snowman堆雪人
[高分句型]
①The summer is long and the winter is short.（并列句）
②You can’t make snowmen here because there is usually no snow.（原因状语从句+there be句型）
③I suggest you can come here in winter because the weather is nice and you can celebrate the Spring Festival with us.（宾语从句+原因状语从句+并列句）
④It is a good season to go for a picnic.（it固定句型）
12．亲爱的同学们，一年四季，气候多变，写一篇英语短文介绍你最喜欢的季节。
提示： 1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the weather like in the season
3. What can you do in the season
要求：1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数50个左右。
参考词汇：take off脱下
My Favourite Season
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【答案】One possible version:
My Favourite Season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. My favourite season is spring.
In spring, everything is new. The leaves turn green and the grass comes out. The weather is warm. We can take off our heavy clothes. Sometimes it is windy. We can fly kites with our friends in the park. We can go climbing, too. So I like spring best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己最喜欢的季节，提示的问题回答完整，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，一年有四季，引出最喜欢的季节；
第二步，具体介绍春天的天气和可以做的活动；
第三步，再次表达对春天的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① turn green变绿
② come out出来
③ take off脱下
④ fly kites放风筝
⑤ go climbing爬山
⑥ like…best最喜欢
[高分句型]
① There are four seasons in a year.（there be句型）
②The leaves turn green and the grass comes out.（并列句）
13．假如你是李华，请以“My favourite season”为题写一份演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。内容包括：
l. 你最喜欢的季节（spring summer autumn/fall winter四季任选其一）；
2. 天气的状况、景色的变化、人们常见的活动；
3. 你的行为和活动。
要求：
1. 字数50—60，作文的题目、开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，语言规范准确；
3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关学校的真实姓名和校名。
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
My favourite season
Dear friends,
I am Li Hua. I am happy to speak here today. My favourite season is spring, and let me tell you the reasons.
I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold. People start to do sports outside after a long winter, and some children fly kites. I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting and fun. In spring, I also go to the park to go for a walk. There are many cute and lively animals in the park in spring time.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我最喜欢的季节，这个季节的情况介绍，我在这个季节所做的事情”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我是李华。我很高兴今天在这里发言。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我最喜欢春天，喜欢的原因，春天的气候，景色以及在春天人们和我所做的事情”重点介绍春季的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“仅此而已。谢谢你的聆听。”
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold.（there be句型）
14．假如你是李明，Tim是你新交的澳大利亚网友，请写信向他介绍一下中国的冬季及相关的节日。
提示：
1.中国冬季的天气；
2.中国冬季有哪些节日；
3.你都喜欢干些什么在冬季及节日里。
要求：
1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.短文不要涉及真实的人名和校名。
3.70词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词汇)。
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Tim,
I’m so happy to get your e-mail. I know it’s summer in your country now. It’s winter in my country now.
In China, winter is very cold and the weather is very dry. Generally speaking, it snows every winter. When it snows, everything is white. I like to have snowball fights and make snowmen with my friends. In addition, there are three main festivals in winter, namely New Year’s Day, Spring Festival and Lantern Festival. I like the Spring Festival best, because it is not only the most important festival in China, but also my family will have dinner together. During Spring Festival, I like to go to my relatives’ home with my parents.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明中国冬季的天气；
第二步，介绍中国冬季有哪些节日；
第三步，最后表达你都喜欢在冬季及节日里干些什么。
[亮点词汇]
①Generally speaking一般来说
②have snowball fights打雪仗
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①When it snows, everything is white.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I like the Spring Festival best, because it is not only the most important festival in China, but also my family will have dinner together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
15．Write a passage of at least 50 words on the topic “When the Wind Blows” (以“当风吹起时”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于50个)
Suggested questions:
1. What happens when the wind blows
2. What can you see when the wind blows
3. What do you think of the windy weather
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【答案】例文：
When the Wind Blows
When the wind blows, leaves fall from the trees. You can also see them flying across the sky. When the wind blows, people in the street hold their clothes tightly. Children fly kites happily in the park. When the wind blows, kites rise and dive high in the sky, flags flap near and far. Sailing boats lean and speed over the sea. Water smiles and shows dimples on her big, round face. How wonderful the windy weather is!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，使得内容更丰富、逻辑更连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍当风吹起时，人和物会发生什么事情；
第二步，介绍当风吹起时，你看到了什么；
第三步，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① fall from 从……掉下
② fly kites 放风筝
[高分句型]
① You can also see them flying across the sky.（see sb./sth. doing sth. 看见某人/某物正在做某事）
② How wonderful the windy weather is!（how引导的感叹句）

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