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专题07 书面表达15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（上海专用）
1．（2025·上海徐汇·二模）After four years of junior high school study, you must have grown up a lot. Let’s get to know you again from new perspectives, for example, your strengths, your pursuits, your attitudes and viewpoints towards things, the ways you handle matters, and so on. Please write a self-introduction in no less than 60 words.
经过了四年的初中学习生活，你一定成长了不少吧。让我们从新的视角重新认识一下你， 比如你的优势、你的追求、你对事物的态度和观点或是你处理事情的方式等等。请完成一份自我介绍，不少于60个词。(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格)
Hi, I am ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2025·上海虹口·二模）Write an email of at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的邮件，标点符号不占格)。
学校校报收到了一封来自学生Paul的邮件，他建议校报增设“文化角” (Culture corner) 和 “旅游角”(Travel corner) 两个板块。假如你是校报主编 Joyce，请给Paul回复一封邮件， 说明你的决定并阐述理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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3．（2025·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 words on the given topic.(根据以下提示写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)
作为未成年人，我们往往和父母、祖父母住在一起。生活中，你与长辈是如何相处的
请以 “How to get along with elders” 为题，分享你与长辈的相处之道，并用一个事例来说明 。
(注意：
1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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4．（2025·上海普陀·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.
【根据以下情境写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。】
假设你是李华，将于今年7月4日—7月10日去英国伦敦旅行。你在浏览Trusted Housesitters 网站时，发现以下两个家庭在寻找此时间段能帮助他们照看房子和宠物的人(house sitter)。请任选一个家庭，撰写一封申请邮件，说明你的情况、申请目的和理由，并简要谈谈你的照看计划。
Cat sitting for a cute cat, in a lovely house, Mr. and Mrs. Colins Experienced sitter needed for our dog, Mr. and Mrs. Walsh
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职责： ●照顾猫咪Mimi ●保持房子整洁 职责： ●照顾小狗Bell ●照顾花园里的植物
友情提示： ●Mimi很粘人，需要陪伴和玩耍 友情提示： ●Bell精力旺盛，但害怕淘气的小孩子
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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5．（2025·上海杨浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假设你是Tammy Luo，在新西兰交流学习期间，你需要向同学们做一次关于上海文化(如建筑、食物、节日活动、生活方式等)的演讲，请写一篇演讲稿，其中要体现你使用照片或明信片来辅助演讲。
(注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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6．（2025·上海宝山·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Good communication plays an important role in our life”.
良好的沟通在我们的生活中起着非常重要的作用，学校正在开展以“沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇不少于60词的短文，分享你的一段经历，并谈谈你的想法和感受。The following questions are for reference:
1. What problem/trouble did you meet
2. How did you solve the problem through communication
3. What have you learn from the experience
The following words are just for reference:（以下单词仅供参考）
misunderstand, communicate, realize, relationship, helpful
（注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
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7．（2024·上海·模拟预测）Write a passage in at least 60 words on the topic of “The progress I’ve made” 以“我所取得的进步”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
请结合自己的经历，选取一两个方面来聊一聊你取得过哪些进步？如何取得进步 的？(注意文章中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。)
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8．（2025·上海·模拟预测）同学们因疫情（the epidemic）被迫居家学习已一个月了，中考又迫在眉睫，你的好朋友Luke对此感到很焦虑，另外无法外出缺少社交活动也让Luke感到非常的郁闷无聊。请给她写一封信，结合自己的做法和体会，从学习、生活和心理调适等方面给她一些建议和鼓励。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following is for reference only （以下表达仅供参考）
manage anxiety
social activities
a sense of connection
keep a regular schedule
a chance to
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city.
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9．（2025·上海徐汇·模拟预测）你的学校最近开展了一次学生午餐情况调研，从午餐种类(variety)、品质(quality)、用餐体验(dining experience) 等方面进行了满意度调研 (satisfaction survey)，相关调查结果见以下饼状图(pie chart)。
请你根据本次调查结果，写一份调查报告。
内容包括：
1、调查情况介绍
2、相关数据分析
3、改进建议
You may begin like this:
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches…
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10．（2025·上海黄浦·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
李华正带领团队参与学校举办的“用英语讲好上海故事（Telling Shanghai Stories in English）”活动。团队需要在外滩（The Bund）、豫园（Yu Garden）和人民广场（People’s Square）中选择一个作为讲述的主题，但队友们对选择哪个主题有不同意见，大家争论不休。
请以李华的身份给队友们写一封邮件，并提出一个解决争论的办法。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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11．（2025·上海闵行·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
假设你是李枫，你们学校计划寒假开展主题为“感受春节”(Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival)的项目，现向学生征求一个小队活动设想。请给负责人Miss Zhang写一封邮件。邮件需包含以下内容：
(1)你对此项目的看法；
(2)小队活动内容简介及设计意图。
以下活动内容供参考：
包饺子(making jiaozi) 贴窗花(sticking paper-cut)
写春联(writing Spring Festival couplets) 扫尘 (sweeping the dust)
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12．（2025·上海金山·一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Activities on spreading the culture of Spring Festival”(以“传播春节文化的活动”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格)
最近联合国教科文组织 (the UNESCO) 宣布将中国的春节列入世界非物质文化遗产名录 (the list of Intangible Cultural Heritage)。为了庆祝这一重要时刻， 你所在的社区向居民们征集在社区内传播春节文化的活动方案，诸如，举办春节美食分享会、春节故事演讲比赛、制作传统手工艺品 (handicrafts）如窗花剪纸和红灯笼、写福字 (write the Chinese character Fu)、贴春联 (paste the Spring Festival couplets)、表演舞龙 (dragon dances) 或舞狮等等。你作为一名社区志愿者，请设计至少二种活动，并结合自己的擅长和活动的意义说明理由。
说明：文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。
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13．（2025·上海青浦·一模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation. (根据以下情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
假如你是吴磊，收到一封来自外国朋友 Mathew的电子邮件，他提到寒假会来上海参加一个为期一周的交流访学活动，活动方提供了三种住宿方案，分别是住当地同学家 (stay with one of the local classmates) 、住学校宿舍 (live in the school dormitory) 或住宾馆 (stay at a hotel) 。
Mathew希望你能给他出出主意，请你根据这一情况给他回一封邮件。
内容要点如下：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐其中一种住宿方案，并说明理由。
注意：
●文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
●照抄试卷中内容不得分。
●邮件格式不计入总词数。
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14．（2025·上海杨浦·一模）你是学校图书馆的志愿者李枫，负责每周一下午的图书馆整理工作。这周你因为某个原因而忘记了图书馆的任务。你需要写一封道歉信给你的图书馆负责人Mr. Wang，表达你的歉意。
道歉信内容须包括：
·表达歉意；
·解释缺席的原因；
·提出补救措施。
注意：
1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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15．（2025·上海长宁·一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (请根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Alex发邮件告诉你，最近他已经成功报名参加交换生项目 (exchange program)，下学期来你学校交流学习两个月，想了解你校的特色课程 (feature course)，请你给Alex回信，表示欢迎并介绍你认为最有特色的学校课程，如：运动、艺术、编程 (programming)、茶艺 (tea art) 等等并说明理由。
Dear Alex,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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《专题07 书面表达15篇【2025高频考点】-冲刺2025年中考英语演练（上海专用）》参考答案
1．例文：
Hi, I am Li Hua. After four years of junior high school life, I have grown up a lot. One of my biggest strengths is being kind and helpful. I always offer to help my classmates with their schoolwork.
I love reading books and playing basketball. My dream is to be a teacher in the future. I think education can change people’s lives. When I encounter difficulties or face challenging problems, I turn to my parents or teachers for guidance and support. I also try to solve problems on my own instead of giving up quickly. This makes me stronger and more confident.
I’m proud of who I’ve become!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题，要从新视角自我介绍；
第二步，具体介绍自己的优势、追求、处事态度等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①grow up长大
②offer to do sth主动提出做某事
③on one’s own独自
④be proud of为……感到骄傲
[高分句型]
①I think education can change people’s lives. (宾语从句)
②When I encounter difficulties or face challenging problems, I turn to my parents or teachers for guidance and support. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2．例文
Dear Paul,
Thank you for your suggestions about adding “Culture Corner” and “Travel Corner” to our school newspaper. After careful discussion, we’ve decided to adopt both ideas. The Culture Corner will help students learn about different countries’ traditions, which promotes cross-cultural understanding. The Travel Corner can share interesting travel stories and tips to inspire exploration. Your creative thinking is exactly what we need! We’ll start preparing the first edition next month. Please let us know if you have more ideas.
Best regards,
Joyce
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。感谢对方提出的建议。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容，阐述自己的决定、分述理由。
第三步：书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about学习有关
②decide to do sth.决定做某事
③help sb. do sth.帮助做某事
[高分句型]
①Please let us know if you have more ideas. (If引导的条件状语从句）
②The Culture Corner will help students learn about different countries’ traditions, which promotes cross-cultural understanding. (定语从句)
3．例文
How to get along with elders
In life, we often live with our parents and grandparents. Living with elders teaches me patience and respect. I always listen carefully to their stories and share my school life with them. For example, my grandmother loves traditional crafts, so I learned paper-cutting from her last weekend. Though my first attempt was messy, she praised my effort warmly. This experience made us closer.
I believe showing genuine interest in their wisdom and spending quality time together are keys to harmonious relationships.
【详解】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明主题；
第二步：用具体事例体现与长辈的相处之道；
第三步：总结升华，强调“真诚关注”和“陪伴”的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①harmonious 和谐的
②genuine interest 真正的兴趣
[高分句型]
①For example, my grandmother loves traditional crafts, so I learned paper-cutting from her last weekend.(so引导结果状语从句)
②Though my first attempt was messy, she praised my effort warmly.（though引导让步状语从句）
4．例文
Dear Mr. and Mrs. Colins,
I am writing to apply for the house sitting position from July 4th to July 10th. I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi.
I have experience with cats and understand their needs. I will ensure Mimi is fed, played with, and given plenty of attention. Additionally, I will keep your house clean and tidy.
I look forward to the opportunity to help you and spend time with Mimi.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示：注意邮件格式。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明自己想申请照看房屋的工作，介绍自己的情况；
第二步：介绍自己类似的经验及工作计划；
第三步：希望能得到这次和猫咪一起度过时光的机会。
[亮点词汇]
①apply for申请
②take care of照顾
③keep your house clean and tidy保持你的房子干净整洁
[高分句型]
①I will be visiting London during this period and would love to take care of your cat, Mimi. (将来进行时)
5．例文：
Hello everyone:
My name is Tammy Luo. Now let me introduce Shanghai to you. If you go to visit Shanghai, you can’t miss the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. Look at this picture. It has a height of 468 meters and it is the highest TV tower in Asia. If you have a chance, try the maglev train. It’s very fast and exciting to take.You can also enjoy food in Yu Garden. You can find a lot of local snacks there. Besides, I think Shanghai Disneyland is a good place to have fun. It’s the first disneyland in mainland China. It’s very interesting. I hope you will enjoy your trip in Shanghai.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，可适当增加细节，不要遗漏，注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍并引出主题；
第二步，介绍上海的特色；
第三步，书写结尾表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth. to sb.向某人介绍某物
②have a chance有机会
③have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
If you have a chance, try the maglev train.(if引导条件状语从句)
6．例文
Good communication plays an important role in our life.
Last month, I had a misunderstanding with my best friend over a small issue. We stopped talking to each other, and our relationship became tense. Feeling upset, I decided to communicate openly with her. I explained my feelings and listened to her side of the story. Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication. After clearing the misunderstanding, our friendship became even stronger.
This experience taught me that communication is essential to solving problems and maintaining healthy relationships. It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts. I now believe that good communication is the key to building trust and harmony in life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的一段经历；
第二步，分享你的想法和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①each other彼此
②communicate…with与……交流
③a lack of缺乏
[高分句型]
①Through this conversation, we both realized that the problem was caused by a lack of communication.（宾语从句）
②It helps us understand each other better and avoid unnecessary conflicts.（并列结构）
7．One possible version:
The progress I’ve made
I used to depend on my parents to do everything for me. But now, I become more independent and learn to do something by myself.
In the past, I never did any housework at home. However, during the period of Covid-19, my mom was seriously sick and was too weak to take care of me. Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry. Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me.
Now I can not only make full use of the time to study, but also help my family to do some housework, such as washing clothes and cleaning the floor. I really learn a lot from the progress I have made.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：题目要求结合自己的经历，选取一两个方面谈谈自己取得的进步，以及如何取得进步的。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，总体介绍自己的进步；
第二步，通过描述疫情期间自己不得不学习厨技照顾母亲，谈自己取得的进步；
第三步，最后谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①too...to...太……而不能……
②take care of照顾
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①Since we could not go out, I had to learn how to cook in order not to get hungry.（疑问词+动词不定式作宾语）
②Although the food I cooked was not as delicious as I thought, my mother was very pleased with me.（although引导的让步状语从句）
8．例文
Dear Luke,
I know that you are upset these days because of the lockdown of the whole city. But remember, you’re not alone. I’m here to share some ideas that have helped me stay calm and motivated.
First, I kept a regular schedule by waking up early, attending classes and setting study goals. It helped me feel in control. Next, I stayed connected. I joined online book clubs and virtual study groups with friends, which gave me a sense of connection even when we were apart. Finally, when stress hit, I kept a journal or tried baking. These habits helped me manage anxiety. I thought of that time at home as a chance to explore new interests.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中给出的提示信息，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，表达自己对于Luke所遇到问题的理解心情；
第二步，从学习、生活和心理调适等方面具体阐述写作内容；
第三步，希望所提出的建议和方法能够有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①in control处于掌控之中
②virtual study groups虚拟学习小组
③keep a journal写日记
[高分句型]
①I joined online book clubs and virtual study groups with friends, which gave me a sense of connection even when we were apart. (定语从句)
②Finally, when stress hit, I kept a journal or tried baking. (when引导的时间状语从句)
9．范文
Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches. The survey focused on three main areas: variety, quality, and dining experience.
The results of the survey showed that the majority of students were satisfied with the variety of lunch options available. However, there was still a significant portion of students who felt that there was not enough choice. In terms of quality, the survey revealed that many students believed the food was tasty and fresh, but some complained about the portion sizes being too small.
Regarding the dining experience, the survey found that most students were happy with the cleanliness and organization of the lunchroom. However, some students expressed concerns about the noise levels and the lack of seating during peak times.
Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences. Additionally, the school should consider increasing portion sizes to ensure that all students are satisfied with their meals. Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.
【详解】[总体介绍]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍具体的调查结果；
第二步，具体分析相关数据；
第三步，提出合适的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the majority of大多数
②in terms of就……而言
③the lack of缺少
[高分句型]
①Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences.（宾语从句）
②Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.（宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear teammates.
I understand that we have different opinions on choosing the theme between The Bund, Yu Garden and People’s Square for the “Telling Shanghai Stories in English” activity. Everyone has their own reasons for preferring a certain place, and that’s great because it shows our enthusiasm for this project.
However, the continuous argument won’t lead us to a conclusion. I think we can do this: First, we each write down the unique features and stories we can tell about our preferred place. Then, we share these with each other. After that, we can vote on which place has the most interesting and representative stories to tell. In this way, we cannot only make a fair decision but also learn more about these wonderful places in Shanghai.
Let’s work together to make our presentation a great success!
Best regards.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；对比决策时，要写得具体；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和意图。说明求同存异；
第二步，说明要从哪几个方面权衡进行决策；
第三步，提出倡议，表明大家齐心协力达成任务。
[亮点词汇]
①write down写下
②share...with...和某人分享某事
③make a decision下决定
[高分句型]
①I understand that we have different opinions on choosing the theme between The Bund, Yu Garden and People’s Square for the “Telling Shanghai Stories in English” activity.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Everyone has their own reasons for preferring a certain place, and that’s great because it shows our enthusiasm for this project.（because引导的原因状语从句）
11．例文
Dear Miss Zhang,
I am Li Feng. I am writing to express my ideas about the project of “Feeling the atmosphere of the Spring Festival”. I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.
For our team’s activity, we plan to make jiaozi, stick paper-cuts on the windows and write Spring Festival couplets. These activities will let us experience the joy of preparing for the Spring Festival and understand its meaning. We hope to spread the festival atmosphere and traditional customs to our classmates.
Thank you for considering our ideas.
Yours,
Li Feng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍对此项目的看法；
第二步，介绍活动内容并说明设计意图；
第三步，对老师表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①know more about更好了解
②prepare for为……做准备
③festival atmosphere节日氛围
[高分句型]
I believe this project is a wonderful opportunity for us to know more about Chinese traditional customs.（宾语从句）
12．例文
As a community volunteer, I am excited to propose two activities to celebrate the inclusion of Chinese New Year in the UNESCO list of Intangible Cultural Heritage. These activities will help spread the rich traditions of Chinese New Year within our community.
One of the best ways to experience a culture is through its food. I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. Another activity is a workshop for making traditional Chinese handicrafts, such as paper-cutting. This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children.
In the end, by participating in these events, residents can gain a deeper understanding of the traditions and values associated with this important festival. Let’s come together to celebrate our rich cultural heritage!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意至少设计两种活动，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍两个传播春节文化的活动方案；
第三步，说明该活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① one of the best ways 最好的方法之一
② propose doing 提议做某事
③ associated with 与……相关
[高分句型]
① I propose organizing a Chinese New Year Food Sharing Event where community members can bring their favorite traditional dishes, such as dumplings, rice cakes, and spring rolls. (where引导的定语从句)
② This workshop can include both elderly residents, who can share their knowledge and skills, and children. (who引导的定语从句)
13．例文：
Dear Mathew,
I am very pleased to learn that you will come to Shanghai for exchange and study activities during the winter vacation, and I warmly welcome you! Shanghai is a city full of vitality and charm. I believe you will spend an unforgettable time here.
For accommodation options, I recommend that you choose to stay at a local classmate’s house. This not only allows for a deeper experience of Shanghai’s local culture, but also deepens our understanding and friendship with China through communication with classmates. Of course, the accommodation choice ultimately depends on your personal preferences, but I believe it would be a very good choice.
Looking forward to meeting you in Shanghai and sharing the beauty of this city with you.
Yours,
Wu Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对外国朋友表示欢迎。
第二步，推荐其中一种住宿方案，并说明理由。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be pleased to do高兴做某事
②full of充满
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I believe you will spend an unforgettable time here. (宾语从句)
14．例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. I am extremely sorry for missing my shift for the library organization work this week.
The reason for my absence was a sudden and severe stomachache that prevented me from attending. I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. I deeply regret the inconvenience this may have caused.
To make amends for my mistake, I would like to volunteer to work extra hours this Saturday. Furthermore, I will be more mindful of my schedule to ensure that this won’t happen again. I sincerely hope you can forgive me for my oversight.
Thank you for your understanding and patience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Feng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所有提示信息，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己，表达写信意图；
第二步，陈述自己缺席的原因；
第三步，提出补救措施；
第四步，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①make amends for my mistake 补过
②prevent sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I am Li Feng, the volunteer who assists at the library every Monday afternoon. (who引导限制性定语从句)
②I was in so much pain that I couldn’t make it to the library. (so … that引导结果状语从句)
15．例文
Dear Alex,
I’m glad to hear about your upcoming exchange program at our school! Welcome! At our school, one of the most distinctive courses is Tea Art. It’s not just about learning how to brew tea, but also understanding Chinese culture and history. It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures. I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达欢迎的态度；
第二步，选择茶艺课作为特色课程进行介绍，以其结合文化和历史的特点为理由，说明其独特性和吸引力；
第三步，期待对方的回复，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①hear about听到关于
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It’s a calming and enriching experience that offers insights into traditional cultures.（定语从句）
②I believe you’ll enjoy it greatly.（宾语从句）
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