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书面表达
(广州深圳沈阳通用)
【题型解读】
七年级书面表达多为提纲作文,要求考生根据所给出的提示性内容,首先确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达主旨。它的特点既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段的大致内容,为考生提供了写作思路。其本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等,考生一般不会出现审题障碍。但其局限性也相对较大,如果考生不理解提纲所提示的内容,下笔就比较困难。常见的作文提纲有中文提纲、英文提纲、思维导图式提纲等。在回复书信或邮件类题目中,提纲往往出现在所给的信或邮件中。
话题预测:重点考查Units1~4各单元话题,如:写身边的人,旅游经历、旅游计划、城市景点介绍、
保护动物/ 植物、校园活动、节日介绍等。
【书面表达答题“五步曲”】
第一步:认真审题,确定文章体裁、主题、时态和人称。
第二步:在草稿纸上根据题目要求列出规定的要点,然后列出每个要点所需短语或句型,并适当拓展。注意选取合适的时态。
第三步:将所列语言材料组合写成通顺连贯的文章。注意使用合适的连词和承上启下的句子。注意开头点题,结尾要有合适的结束语。
第四步:检查与完善。仔细读一遍草稿,挑出错误,对拿不准的句子或词语进行修改或删减(宁缺勿滥)。注意词数要求。
第五步:将修改无误的短文工整地誊抄在卷面上。
【期中预测·专题过关】
1.假定你是李辉,即将参加英语报举办的题为“A person I love”的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括:
1. 说明主题及原因;
2. 介绍人物 (外貌,性格,职业,爱好等);
3. 阐述对你的影响或帮助。
要求:
1.词数80字左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hui. The topic of my speech is “A person I love.”
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thanks for your attention.
【答案】范文:
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hui. The topic of my speech is “A person I love.”
I love my mother because she plays an important role in my life. She is short and a little fat. She has short hair and a round face. She is very kind and patient. She is a Chinese teacher in a junior school. In the past, I used to have some difficulty with my study. When I met some problems, she always tried her best to help me and encourage me. With her help, I have made great progress in my study. This is my mother.
That’s all! Thanks for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作提示已给出,可适当增加细节,不要遗漏,注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达主题,对母亲的爱;
第二步,介绍母亲;
第三步,详细描写母亲对自己的帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事
②in the past过去
③make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
When I met some problems, she always tried her best to help me and encourage me.(when引导时间状语从句)
2.古人云:“读万卷书,行万里路。”假如你是李华,本周你需要在英语角活动上向大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要求:
1. 参考要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于 80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My trip to__________
Last Saturday, I took a trip to
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My trip to a village
Last Saturday, I took a trip to a village near my home with my parents. The weather there was sunny and warm that day. It took us about an hour to drive there.
When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first. My mother took some beautiful pictures. After that, we picked some fresh fruit on the farm together. Then we had lunch in a small but clean restaurant. The food there was very delicious. In the afternoon, we went fishing for an hour. We didn’t go home until it was dark.
It was great fun to stay in the village and I was happy about this trip. I’m looking forward to travelling there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,补全标题;
第二步,讲述去农村的旅行经历;
第三步,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①at first起初
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It took us about an hour to drive there.(动词不定式作主语)
②When we got there, my father and I flew kites at first.(时间状语从句)
3.假设你是一名广州的七年级学生李华,你的学校将举行环保周活动,请根据以下要点提示,完成一篇保护树木的演讲稿,号召大家一起行动起来,保护树木。
树木对人类的重要性 1. 树木能帮助清洁空气,是重要的环保卫士。 2. 树木为人们提供水果、木材等,让人类生活更方便。
如何保护树木? 1. 停止砍伐树木。 2. 不使用一次性筷子、节约用纸等。 3. (自己补充至少一点)
号召大家保护树木 ……
要求:
1. 必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:disposable chopsticks一次性筷子
Dear students,
I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is protecting trees. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear students,
I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is protecting trees.
We know trees are very helpful to us. They can help to clean the air, so they are important in keeping the environment in good condition. They also provide us with fruits and wood, which makes it convenient for us to live. Since the trees are so important to us, it is time to think of some ways to protect them. Firstly, we should stop cutting down trees. Second, not using disposable chopsticks and saving paper are also what we should do, for making them needs a lot of trees. Last but not least, we are supposed to plant more trees.
In a word, everyone can play a part in protecting the trees. Let’s take action right now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文。为演讲稿;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”;
③提示:仔细审题,不要遗漏要点,并进一步做出补充,并且在列举建议时注意衔接词语的使用,使前后过渡自然,行文流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步:自我介绍,提出自己的演讲主题。
第二步:列举保护树木的原因,即树木对我们非常重要,进而列举保护树木的建议。
第三步:进行总结,鼓励大家一起行动起来。
[亮点词汇]
①be helpful to对……有帮助
②provide sb with向某人提供……
③cut down砍倒
④be supposed to do应该做某事
[亮点句型]
①They also provide us with fruits and wood,which makes it convenient for us to live. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
②Since the trees are so important to us, it is time to think of some ways to protect them.(since引导的原因状语从句)
4.假如你是李华,你的笔友汤姆(Tom)想了解你的数学老师张老师。根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文,可以适当添加一些信息。词数不少于70。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. You want to know about my maths teacher. Now I’ll tell you something about him.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. You want to know about my maths teacher. Now I’ll tell you something about him.
Mr Zhang is my maths teacher. He is about forty years old. He is tall and thin. He has short, black hair. He always wears glasses. He is hard working. He is really patient with students. He often helps us with our maths. He is friendly to everyone. He is not only our maths teacher but also our friend. His classes are very interesting. All of us like his classes. But he is strict about our studies. He is also strict with himself. I want to be a teacher like him in the future. What do you think of him
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示:写作句式已给出,考生应注意可适当增加一些介绍人物的细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用“现在我告诉你一些关于他的事情”引出下文。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“姓名、年龄、外貌、性格、其他”几个方面介绍Mr Zhang。
第三步,书写结语。用“最好的祝福”,表示礼貌问候。
[亮点词汇]
①patient 耐心的
②friendly友好的
③strict严格的
[高分句型]
①He is not only our maths teacher but also our friend. (not only…but also…不但……而且……)
5.假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Peter打算暑假来深圳旅游,请你写一封邮件向他介绍深圳。
要点:
1. 简要描述深圳的地理位置和气候特点;
2. 推荐深圳可游玩的著名景点(至少2个);
3. 来深圳旅游时的注意事项。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯;
4. 书写规范,卷面整洁。
参考词汇:Shenzhen Safari Park(深圳野生动物园),OCT East(东部华侨城),Shenzhen Bay Park(深圳湾公园),Lianhua Hill Park(莲花山公园),Dameisha(大梅沙),Red Cube(红立方)
Dear Peter,
I am glad to know that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I am glad to know that you are planning a trip to Shenzhen! Let me make a brief introduction to you.
Shenzhen is a modern coast city. It lies in the south of China. It’s very cool here. There are so many places of interest to visit, such as Shenzhen Safari Park, and OCT East. You can go there. Shenzhen is also famous for its wonderful beaches, so you can go swimming in Dameisha. In Shenzhen, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food. You can eat a snack and seafood. If you like shopping, Shenzhen is a good place to go. There are many shopping malls here. When you come here, you should pay attention to the traffic rules. At the same time, you’d better bring some commonly used medicine.
All in all, Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Why not visit Shenzhen this summer holiday
I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节。考生应注意不要遗漏来深圳旅游的注意事项。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达得知消息的喜悦;
第二步,根据写作要点对深圳进行介绍;
第三步,简述来深圳旅游的注意事项;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do做某事很开心
②pay attention to关注
③all in all总之
[高分句型]
When you come here, you should pay attention to the traffic rules.(When引导的时间状语从句)
6.假如你是七年级学生李雷,想邀请英国交换生Max来北京旅行,根据下面所提供的信息,用英语写一封邀请信。
1. 北京是一个历史悠久的城市;
2. 作为中国的首都,它拥有很多名胜;
3. 故宫是最受游客欢迎的景点之一;
4. 长城也是非常美丽值得一看的地方;
5. 天安门广场是个好去处,可以散步。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 不要逐词翻译,适当添加细节,使行文连贯,符合逻辑。
Dear Max,
I would like to invite you to come to Beijing.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】
范文:
Dear Max,
I would like to invite you to come to Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them.
The Palace Museum is one of the most popular places for visitors. It is very big and you can learn a lot about the history of China from it. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian’ anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk.
I hopeyou will enjoy your stay in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邀请信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含所有内容提示,不要逐词翻译,不要遗漏题目所给的要点,可适当添加细节,注意突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍北京有很多风景名胜;
第二步,具体介绍故宫、长城和天安门这些景点;
第三步,书写结语,表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of China中国首都
②places of interest风景名胜
③one of the most popular places最受欢迎的地方之一
[高分句型]
①I hopeyou will enjoy your stay in Beijing.(宾语从句)
②Beijing, the capital of China, is a city with a long history.(with结构)
7.请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题目,根据以下表格,写一篇短文分享你最喜欢的动物。
My Favourite Animal
Appearance (外表) Food Abilities Reasons why I like it/them
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:70词左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Animal
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Favourite Animal
I have a pet dog. Her name is Lisa.
She is my favourite. She is only two years old. She has two big eyes, two round ears and curly brown hair. She is really cute and friendly, but sometimes kind of lazy. Her favourite food is meat. She always has meat for dinner. She can dance and play games with me.
She likes to follow me around the house and watch TV with me together. She is like a close friend to me, so I love her very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍自己喜欢的动物;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“外表、饮食、能力”等方面进行介绍;
第三步,介绍自己喜欢它的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①kind of有点
②like to do sth.喜欢做某事
③watch TV看电视
[高分句型]
She is like a close friend to me, so I love her very much. (so引导的结果状语从句)
8.大象是人类的朋友。请你根据以下信息提示,对大象进行介绍并适当发挥。
内容包括:(1)介绍大象的居住地、外形特征、生活习性等;
(2)呼吁大家关爱大象,帮助它们过上安全的生活。
注意:(1)词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Elephants are our friends. They are kind animals.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Elephants are our friends. They are kind animals.
They live in Asia and Africa. There are many kinds of elephants. In Yunnan of our country, there are also many elephants. Elephants like living with the family.
They are huge and we look so short near them. They have big ears, long trunks and strong legs. They eat plants and some fruit. They usually eat and drink with their trunks. They like water and are good at swimming. They are friendly. They can help people carry heavy things.
We should care for them and help them live a safe life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①体材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,首先根据所给信息进行写作,其次适当补充发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:在第二段和第三段根据所给信息介绍大象的居住地、外形特征以及生活习性;
第二步:在第四段呼吁大家关爱大象,以帮助它们过上安全的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth喜欢做某事
②be good at doing sth擅长做某事
③help (sb) (to) do sth帮助 (某人) 做某事
④care for关心,照顾,喜欢
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of elephants. (there be句型)
②They are huge and we look so short near them. (并列句)
9.暑假,你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs),即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容,向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情,展示广州的文化特色。
参考词汇:长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park,省Province
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province and has a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food. There are many famous scenic spots here. For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are lush and the air is fresh. There is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind. If you come here, you will definitely like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,根据提示介绍自己的家乡——广州;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①capital省会
②be famous for…因……而出名
③scenic spots风景区
④lush茂盛的
⑤fresh清新的
⑥definitely肯定
[高分句型]
For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are lush and the air is fresh.(where引导非限制性定语从句)
10.假设你是英文校报记者,你们学校举办了最受欢迎教师“The most popular teachers in our school.”评选活动,同学们选出了三位老师,情况如下。请你根据表格内容写一篇小短文,向同学们介绍这三位教师。
Name Characteristics(性格) Things he/she often does
Mr. Zheng 外向;开朗 旅游,和学生分享旅游照片和故事。
Miss Huang 和蔼;有耐心 经常照顾小动物,每年参与植树活动。
Miss Jiang 严格;乐于助人 (请补充一到两个事例)
参考词汇:outgoing(外向的),vote(投票)
注意:
1.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
2.注意要点齐全,语言通顺连贯。
3.词数80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文:
Recently, our school holds an activity to vote for the most popular teachers. Here are the results.
Mr. Zheng is an outgoing teacher. He likes traveling and often shares photos and stories of his travels with his students. Miss Huang is a kind and patient teacher. She often takes care of small animals. She takes part in planting trees every year because she wants to protect the environment. Miss Jiang is a strict and helpful teacher. She often helps people in need. When we have difficulties, she often encourages us not to give up.
They are the most popular teachers in our school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。从评选活动引出本文主要内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“老师姓名、性格和事迹”等几个方面依次介绍三位老师;
第三步,书写结语。再次强调他们是最受欢迎的老师。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
② take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①She takes part in planting trees every year because she wants to protect the environment.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②When we have difficulties she often encourages us not to give up.(when引导的时间状语从句;encourage sb not to do)
11.假设你是一名七年级学生李华,你的学校将举行保护动物环保周活动。请根据以下要点提示,完成一篇保护动物的演讲稿,号召大家一起行动起来,保护动物。
动物对人类的重要性如何做? 1.动物能帮助人类。 2.动物让人们感觉不再孤单。
如何做? 1.保护动物。 2.不猎杀动物。 3(自己补充至少一点)
号召大家保护动物 ……
要求:
1.必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is_________________________
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【答案】例文
Dear students,
Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is how to protect animals. Animals are important for us. They can help us in many ways. For example, dogs can help us watch our homes. In addition, animals help people, especially the old feel no longer lonely. So we must protect them. We should stop people from killing animals, selling or buying wild animal products. We should build more natural reserve for them, so they will have enough room to live in. What’s more, the government should enact laws to protect animals.
If we try our best, we will live in harmony with them in the future. Let’s take action from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍动物对人类的重要性;
第二步,介绍如何保护动物;
第三步,号召大家从现在做起。
[亮点词汇]
①be important for对……重要
②in many ways在许多方面
③in addition另外
[高分句型]
①If we try our best, we will live in harmony with them in the future.(if引导条件状语从句)
②Let’s take action from now on.(祈使句)
12.假定你是学校英语报编辑李华,你将在母亲节即将到来时发表一个庆祝母亲节的讲话。讲话稿将发布在校报公众号上。请根据下面的提示和要求完成讲话稿。
要点:1. 简单介绍母亲对子女的付出;
2. 母亲节简介:①时间:每年五月的第二个周日;
②庆祝方式:买花;做母亲节贺卡;
3. 你对母亲节的理解;
4. 表达对母亲的感谢和祝福。
要求:1. 必须包含以上所有要点;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 语句通顺、条理清楚、标点正确、书写规范;
4. 80词左右,简讯的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:1. 庆祝 celebrate;2. 特别的 special。
Dear fellows,
Mother’s Day is coming. I am so glad to talk here about our great mums. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
【答案】例文:
Dear fellows,
Mother’s Day is coming. I am so glad to talk here about our great mums. Mums may be strict about our studies, but they not only encourage us, but also give us support. It’s time for everyone to say “Thank you” to our mums.
Every year, Mother’s Day falls on the second Sunday in May. On this day, it’s excellent for us to use many ways to celebrate for our mums, like buying flowers, making special Mother’s Day cards.
In my opinion, Mother’s Day is more than just a present. We can help them do housework. A simple hug is also a perfect gift. Showing our love and thanks to mums is meaningful. So, why don’t you prepare a different Mother’s Day for her
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲话稿;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据所给提示内容介绍母亲节。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单介绍母亲对子女的付出;
第二步,介绍母亲节;
第三步,表达自己对母亲节的理解及对母亲的感谢和祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict about对某事要求严格
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③give us support给我们支持
[高分句型]
①On this day, it’s excellent for us to use many ways to celebrate for our mums. (it作形式主语)
②Showing our love and thanks to mums is meaningful. (动名词作主语)
13.假定你是李辉。你是学校环保社团的负责人,五一节期间,你组织社团同学参加了丁香湖公园植树活动。活动后,你向学校英语校报投稿,介绍本次活动。要点包括:
1.植树的原因;
2.植树的过程;
3.你的感受和想法。
要求:
1.词数80左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Tree Planting on May Day
As we know, the Earth is our home but it is facing many problems now.
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【答案】 Tree Planting on May Day
As we know, the Earth is our home but it is facing many problems now. In order to do something to protect the environment, I organized a tree planting activity in Dingxianghu Park with my club members on May Day.
Early on the morning of May 1st, all students gathered at the school gate and went to the park by bus together. The park workers welcomed us warmly when we arrived there. And then we began to work. Some were digging, some were planting and others were watering. All of us were busy and happy. At noon, we had a picnic in the warm sunshine. After we had lunch, we had a short rest. Then we went on working. When it was about 4: 00 p. m., we finished planting the trees.
Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. It’s our duty to protect our environment.
【详解】[整体介绍]
①体裁:本文是一篇记叙文,属于材料作文;
②时态:采用“一般过去时”
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,条理清晰,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍植树的原因;
第二步:介绍植树的过程;
第三步:表达你的感受和想法。
[亮点词汇]
①as we know众所周知
②in order to为了
③a sense of achievement成就感
[高分句型]
①In order to do something to protect the environment, I organized a tree planting activity in Dingxianghu Park with my club members on May Day. (不定式作目的状语)
②The park workers welcomed us warmly when we arrived there. (时间状语从句)
14.假定你是李华,暑假即将到来,你和你的家人计划去法国旅行,请你给你的英国朋友Justin写一封邮件,介绍你们的旅行计划,内容包括:
1. 出行时间和方式;
2. 计划旅行的景点和活动;
3. 表达感受和期待。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Justin,
We are going to have a trip to France this summer holiday.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Justin,
We are going to have a trip to France this summer holiday.
We plan to leave next Friday because my parents have the weekend off. We are going to take a plane. It will be my first time to fly, so I am very excited. There are many beautiful sights in France. I’m looking forward to visiting the Eiffel Tower. I’m going to take a lot of pictures at the Eiffel Tower. Then, we plan to visit the Floating Palace Museum. After that, we plan to taste French beef. I can’t wait to go to France.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是篇电子邮件;
②时态:本文的时态为一般将来时;
③提示:本文要点已给出,注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍即将去法国旅行;
第二步,详细介绍出行时间和方式,旅游的景点及活动;
第三步,表达感受和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do计划做某事
②look forward to期待
③can’t wait to迫不及待
[高分句型]
We plan to leave next Friday because my parents have the weekend off. (原因状语从句)
15.请以“Dogs can be helpful”为题写一篇短文,词数80左右。
应包括以下信息点:
1. 狗一直以来都是人类的好朋友。现在,它们不仅是宠物,更是家庭的一员;
2. 狗在很多方面帮助人们:
(1)有了狗的陪伴,现在有很多独居老人不再感到孤独;
(2)狗是孩子们的朋友,能使孩子们快乐;
(3)警犬可以帮助警察找到东西并抓获坏人;
(4)导盲犬能帮助盲人生活与出行;
3. 我们应该善待并照顾好它们。
点拨:
谋篇布局
1. 人称:第一、三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
好词
1. be helpful to对……有帮助
2. feel lonely感到孤单
3. catch the bad guys抓坏人
4. with the help of在……的帮助下
5. be kind to善待
好句
1. They are not only our pets, but also our family members.它们不仅是我们的宠物,而且是我们的家庭成员。
2. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways.狗在很多方面对我们有帮助。
牛刀小试
Dogs can be helpful
Dogs are always good friends of human beings. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dogs can be helpful
Dogs are always good friends of human beings. Now, they are not only our pets, but also our family members. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways. With dogs’ help, many old people living by themselves will not feel lonely. Dogs are kids’ friends and make them happy. The police dogs can help the police find things and catch the bad guys. The guide dogs take care of the blind people in their daily life and lead them to the places they want to go. We should be kind to dogs and take good care of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:采用“一般现在时”
③提示:要求包含所有要点提示,内容完整,句子衔接自然,注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述狗是人类的好朋友;
第二步,具体阐述狗在很多方面有帮助;
第三步,倡议人们善待狗。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also....不但……而且……
②in many ways在很多方面
③take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①The guide dogs take care of the blind people in their daily life and lead them to the places they want to go. (and并列结构)书面表达
(广州深圳沈阳通用)
【题型解读】
七年级书面表达多为提纲作文,要求考生根据所给出的提示性内容,首先确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开论述,表达主旨。它的特点既体现了文章的层次,又规定了各段的大致内容,为考生提供了写作思路。其本身就决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等,考生一般不会出现审题障碍。但其局限性也相对较大,如果考生不理解提纲所提示的内容,下笔就比较困难。常见的作文提纲有中文提纲、英文提纲、思维导图式提纲等。在回复书信或邮件类题目中,提纲往往出现在所给的信或邮件中。
话题预测:重点考查Units1~4各单元话题,如:写身边的人,旅游经历、旅游计划、城市景点介绍、
保护动物/ 植物、校园活动、节日介绍等。
【书面表达答题“五步曲”】
第一步:认真审题,确定文章体裁、主题、时态和人称。
第二步:在草稿纸上根据题目要求列出规定的要点,然后列出每个要点所需短语或句型,并适当拓展。注意选取合适的时态。
第三步:将所列语言材料组合写成通顺连贯的文章。注意使用合适的连词和承上启下的句子。注意开头点题,结尾要有合适的结束语。
第四步:检查与完善。仔细读一遍草稿,挑出错误,对拿不准的句子或词语进行修改或删减(宁缺勿滥)。注意词数要求。
第五步:将修改无误的短文工整地誊抄在卷面上。
【期中预测·专题过关】
1.假定你是李辉,即将参加英语报举办的题为“A person I love”的英语演讲比赛,请写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括:
1. 说明主题及原因;
2. 介绍人物 (外貌,性格,职业,爱好等);
3. 阐述对你的影响或帮助。
要求:
1.词数80字左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hui. The topic of my speech is “A person I love.”
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That’s all! Thanks for your attention.
2.古人云:“读万卷书,行万里路。”假如你是李华,本周你需要在英语角活动上向大家分享你的一次旅行经历。请根据以下要点及要求写一篇英文短文。
要求:
1. 参考要点内容,并适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于 80 词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My trip to__________
Last Saturday, I took a trip to
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3.假设你是一名广州的七年级学生李华,你的学校将举行环保周活动,请根据以下要点提示,完成一篇保护树木的演讲稿,号召大家一起行动起来,保护树木。
树木对人类的重要性 1. 树木能帮助清洁空气,是重要的环保卫士。 2. 树木为人们提供水果、木材等,让人类生活更方便。
如何保护树木? 1. 停止砍伐树木。 2. 不使用一次性筷子、节约用纸等。 3. (自己补充至少一点)
号召大家保护树木 ……
要求:
1. 必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁;
3. 不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:disposable chopsticks一次性筷子
Dear students,
I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is protecting trees. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.假如你是李华,你的笔友汤姆(Tom)想了解你的数学老师张老师。根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文,可以适当添加一些信息。词数不少于70。
Dear Tom,
Thanks for your last letter. You want to know about my maths teacher. Now I’ll tell you something about him.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.假设你是李华,你的外国笔友Peter打算暑假来深圳旅游,请你写一封邮件向他介绍深圳。
要点:
1. 简要描述深圳的地理位置和气候特点;
2. 推荐深圳可游玩的著名景点(至少2个);
3. 来深圳旅游时的注意事项。
要求:
1. 80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯;
4. 书写规范,卷面整洁。
参考词汇:Shenzhen Safari Park(深圳野生动物园),OCT East(东部华侨城),Shenzhen Bay Park(深圳湾公园),Lianhua Hill Park(莲花山公园),Dameisha(大梅沙),Red Cube(红立方)
Dear Peter,
I am glad to know that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
6.假如你是七年级学生李雷,想邀请英国交换生Max来北京旅行,根据下面所提供的信息,用英语写一封邀请信。
1. 北京是一个历史悠久的城市;
2. 作为中国的首都,它拥有很多名胜;
3. 故宫是最受游客欢迎的景点之一;
4. 长城也是非常美丽值得一看的地方;
5. 天安门广场是个好去处,可以散步。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 不要逐词翻译,适当添加细节,使行文连贯,符合逻辑。
Dear Max,
I would like to invite you to come to Beijing.
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Yours,
Li Lei
7.请你以“My Favourite Animal”为题目,根据以下表格,写一篇短文分享你最喜欢的动物。
My Favourite Animal
Appearance (外表) Food Abilities Reasons why I like it/them
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 词数:70词左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
My Favourite Animal
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8.大象是人类的朋友。请你根据以下信息提示,对大象进行介绍并适当发挥。
内容包括:(1)介绍大象的居住地、外形特征、生活习性等;
(2)呼吁大家关爱大象,帮助它们过上安全的生活。
注意:(1)词数70左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Elephants are our friends. They are kind animals.
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9.暑假,你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs),即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容,向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情,展示广州的文化特色。
参考词汇:长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park,省Province
Guangzhou, my hometown
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.假设你是英文校报记者,你们学校举办了最受欢迎教师“The most popular teachers in our school.”评选活动,同学们选出了三位老师,情况如下。请你根据表格内容写一篇小短文,向同学们介绍这三位教师。
Name Characteristics(性格) Things he/she often does
Mr. Zheng 外向;开朗 旅游,和学生分享旅游照片和故事。
Miss Huang 和蔼;有耐心 经常照顾小动物,每年参与植树活动。
Miss Jiang 严格;乐于助人 (请补充一到两个事例)
参考词汇:outgoing(外向的),vote(投票)
注意:
1.不得透露学校、姓名等个人信息。
2.注意要点齐全,语言通顺连贯。
3.词数80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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11.假设你是一名七年级学生李华,你的学校将举行保护动物环保周活动。请根据以下要点提示,完成一篇保护动物的演讲稿,号召大家一起行动起来,保护动物。
动物对人类的重要性如何做? 1.动物能帮助人类。 2.动物让人们感觉不再孤单。
如何做? 1.保护动物。 2.不猎杀动物。 3(自己补充至少一点)
号召大家保护动物 ……
要求:
1.必须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
Hello, I am Li Hua. It’s my honor to speak here today. My topic is_________________________
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12.假定你是学校英语报编辑李华,你将在母亲节即将到来时发表一个庆祝母亲节的讲话。讲话稿将发布在校报公众号上。请根据下面的提示和要求完成讲话稿。
要点:1. 简单介绍母亲对子女的付出;
2. 母亲节简介:①时间:每年五月的第二个周日;
②庆祝方式:买花;做母亲节贺卡;
3. 你对母亲节的理解;
4. 表达对母亲的感谢和祝福。
要求:1. 必须包含以上所有要点;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 语句通顺、条理清楚、标点正确、书写规范;
4. 80词左右,简讯的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:1. 庆祝 celebrate;2. 特别的 special。
Dear fellows,
Mother’s Day is coming. I am so glad to talk here about our great mums. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
13.假定你是李辉。你是学校环保社团的负责人,五一节期间,你组织社团同学参加了丁香湖公园植树活动。活动后,你向学校英语校报投稿,介绍本次活动。要点包括:
1.植树的原因;
2.植树的过程;
3.你的感受和想法。
要求:
1.词数80左右,开头已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Tree Planting on May Day
As we know, the Earth is our home but it is facing many problems now.
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14.假定你是李华,暑假即将到来,你和你的家人计划去法国旅行,请你给你的英国朋友Justin写一封邮件,介绍你们的旅行计划,内容包括:
1. 出行时间和方式;
2. 计划旅行的景点和活动;
3. 表达感受和期待。
要求:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加情节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Justin,
We are going to have a trip to France this summer holiday.
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Li Hua
15.请以“Dogs can be helpful”为题写一篇短文,词数80左右。
应包括以下信息点:
1. 狗一直以来都是人类的好朋友。现在,它们不仅是宠物,更是家庭的一员;
2. 狗在很多方面帮助人们:
(1)有了狗的陪伴,现在有很多独居老人不再感到孤独;
(2)狗是孩子们的朋友,能使孩子们快乐;
(3)警犬可以帮助警察找到东西并抓获坏人;
(4)导盲犬能帮助盲人生活与出行;
3. 我们应该善待并照顾好它们。
点拨:
谋篇布局
1. 人称:第一、三人称
2. 时态:一般现在时
好词
1. be helpful to对……有帮助
2. feel lonely感到孤单
3. catch the bad guys抓坏人
4. with the help of在……的帮助下
5. be kind to善待
好句
1. They are not only our pets, but also our family members.它们不仅是我们的宠物,而且是我们的家庭成员。
2. Dogs are helpful to us in many ways.狗在很多方面对我们有帮助。
牛刀小试
Dogs can be helpful
Dogs are always good friends of human beings. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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