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2025中考英语书面表达之申请信专项复习讲义
写作思路
题型 考查频次 命题预测
书面表达之申请信 10年10考 申请信种类较多，如求职申请、加人某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以个人情况介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。
由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除了应注意格式上的要求，还应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱，可以遵循“三段法”来写作。
第一段，简要说明信息来源，并陈述自己能胜任；
第二段，突出自己的特点，具体说明能胜任的原因，
第三段，请求尽快答复并给予机会。
思维导图
方法探究
探究一 必背句式
第一部分：说明写信的目的
套语：
(1) 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in …
(2) 见……上刊登的贵公司广告，我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.
(3) 看到贵公司在报上招聘……的广告，我马上感到这正是我这段时间所要寻找的工作，并且我能胜任。
Immediately I saw your advertisement in the paper for …I felt it was just the kind of post for which I have the qualifications and for which I have been looking for some time.
(4) 我想申请入贵校学习。
I would like to apply for admission to your college.
(5) 我想在贵校……系继续深造。
I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.
第二部分：介绍详情
套语：
(1) 我的专业是……，我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
(2) ……年，我出生于……，毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作，因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。
Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
(3) 毕业后，我先担任……，随后担任……，现任职于……
Upon graduation, I first worked as … The following job was …and currently I am working for/in …
(4) 我现在就读于北京第二外国语学院英语专业，即将毕业。
I am now studying at Beijing Second Foreign Language Institute and will soon be graduated as an English major.
第三部分：说明申请该职位或学校的原因
套语：
(1) 贵公司目前做的这种工作特别使我感兴趣。
The kind of work in which your company is engaged particularly interests me.
(2) 我认为我具备了报上刊登的贵公司……一职所要求的必要条件和经验。
I feel I have the necessary qualifications and experience needed for the position of …advertised in the newspaper.
(3) 受我所学课程的影响，我对饭店、酒店管理产生了浓厚的兴趣。
Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I have developed a special interest in Restaurant and Hotel Management.
第四部分：恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
套语：
(1) 如能尽快回复，我将不胜感激。
Your early response will be much appreciated.
(2) 希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
(3) 如能收到所需的申请表和有关入学的指南我将十分感激。
I would greatly appreciate receiving copies of the required application forms and any instructions you may be so kind as to give me regarding my possible admission.
(4) 希望同意面试，届时我可以更详细地说明我的技能。
I hope I may be granted an interview, when I can explain my qualifications more fully.
(5) 我将乐意在您方便时接受面试，届时我将进一步介绍自己。
I should be pleased to attend for an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.
探究二 模版示例
模板①
Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in________________________(报纸/网站名称) of________________________(广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the right personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因). On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因).
Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me，please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________(电话号码).
Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因). Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
I ___________(陈述本人的性格优势). For one thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长一). For another thing, I can ___________(陈述本人特长二).
Please contact me at ___________(你的联系方式一：电话号码). Or e-mail me at ___________(你的联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).
I am looking forward to your early reply .
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
探究三 突破策略
1. 申请信写作方法
① 首段：
a. 自我介绍；
b. 申请原因；
c. 说明写信目的。
② 主体：
a. 详述有关背景资料：资历、教育经历、工作经历、兴趣爱好；
b. 询问有关学校、课程等具体内容。
③ 尾段：
a. 强调上述材料的重要性；
b. 希望尽快得到答复；
c. 要求手册及申请表；
d. 表示感谢。
2. 写作流程图
说明写信目的
介绍自我(包括：学历、工作简历、在学校或工作单位的表现)
说明申请该职位或学校的原因
恳请招聘单位或所申请的学校考虑自己的申请，并表示谢意，期望回复
典型练习
1．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）南雅中学即将再次和新加坡思源中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一批优秀学生赴新加坡参加交流访问。假如你是LiHua，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr.Zhang写一封自荐信。
要求：
1.信件必须包含表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to join you to pay a visit to Si Yuan Middle School in Singapore.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·吉林长春·二模）假设你是李华。某英语报“寻美家乡”专栏面向中学生招募小记者（journalist），需要用英语介绍自己的家乡。请你根据下面要点，用英语给报社写一封不少于40 词的自荐信。
要点：
1. 熟悉家乡；
2. 乐于交流；
3. 擅长英语。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假定你是李雷，哈尔滨将在2025 年举办亚洲冬季运动会（Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games），为此《新晚报》面向全省招募亚冬会志愿者。你希望成为志愿者，请你给报社写一封自荐信。
写作要点：
1.很希望成为志愿者。
2.介绍自己的优势：
（1）性格外向，善于与人交流
（2）英语口语好。
（3）热爱运动。
3.说明在亚冬会期间你打算如何成为一名优秀的志愿者。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear editor,
I know some volunteers are needed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lei
4．（2024·河南三门峡·一模）介绍家乡美景，宣传家乡文化。近期，我市将面向全体中学生举办“师生 共话三门峡”的英语实践活动。假如你是Li Lei，想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封自荐信。
写作提示：
1. 你的简要信息；
2. 你的个人优势，例如：了解家乡名胜景点、历史文化、当地美食、擅长英语表达等；
3. 你对此次活动的感想或期待。
写作要求：
1. 100 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Lei
5．（2024·陕西安康·二模）随着夏天的到来，来西安游玩的外国游客正在增多。大雁塔景区特招募学生志愿者(student volunteer)。假如你是李华，是西安的一名九年级学生，请用英文写一封自荐信，介绍你的个人情况：
1.你的英语特长和性格；
2.你申请成为志愿者的理由：了解西安的历史(know the history of Xi’an), 传播中华文化(introduce Chinese culture to foreigners)；……
要求：
1.内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数不少于70(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear sir,
I am Li Hua from a middle school in Xi’an. I want to be a student volunteer for Dayanta Scenic Spot.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to be chosen to work for Dayanta Scenic Spot luckily. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）“双减”后，学校创立了许多新的社团。假如你是李华，在学校的公众号上看到社团招募新成员的信息，请用英语写一封申请信，写明你想加入的某一个或者某两个社团名称、自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
注意事项：
1. 信件需包含至少两个理由，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名, 校名等相关信息；
3. 词数在100个左右，信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2024·湖北襄阳·二模）2024“华夏之旅●国际中学生夏令营”将于下月到访湖北，活动主办方决定面向全省招募少年志愿者来用英语“讲好中国故事，让世界了解湖北”。假如你是一位名叫李华的14岁初中生，请根据下面的招聘通知，并结合自身实际，用英文写一封自荐信。
Volunteers WantedTour China Summer Camp 2024 is coming soon! We want volunteers for the summer camp. What is your personality(性格) and your hobby How is your English ability Do you know something about Chinese history or culture Please introduce one of traditional Chinese festivals or customs to us. We are looking forward to your letters and hope you can join us!
写作要求：
（1）你的自荐信至少包括通知中提到的三项（英文黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，信件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hubei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
8．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办用“英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动。请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Miss Li写一封自荐信。
1.个人信息 姓名、班级、性格等；
2.个人优势 (1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，非常了解中国的历史和文化； (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们，例如……；
3.活动意义 (1)培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；(2)自拟一点；
4.总结 自己发挥1~2点。
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Miss Li,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
LiHua
参考答案
1．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）南雅中学即将再次和新加坡思源中学开启交流之旅，现需要选拔一批优秀学生赴新加坡参加交流访问。假如你是LiHua，打算参加选拔，请给负责人Mr.Zhang写一封自荐信。
要求：
1.信件必须包含表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear Mr. Zhang,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to join you to pay a visit to Si Yuan Middle School in Singapore.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
My name is Li Hua. I’d like to join you to pay a visit to Si Yuan Middle School in Singapore. I will introduce myself.
I am very active. I often take part in different kinds of activities. I am friendly and warm-hearted. When I see people in need, I always try my best to help them. I am good at English, which enables me to communicate with other foreign students without any difficulty. What’s more, I am talented in making speeches. Once I took part in a speech competition and I won the first place.
Hope you can give me a chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容写一封自荐信，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍自己的个性、特长和荣誉；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②try my best to do sth.尽我自己最大的努力做某事
③communicate with和……交流
[高分句型]
①When I see people in need, I always try my best to help them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I am good at English, which enables me to communicate with other foreign students without any difficulty. (which引导的定语从句)
2．（2024·吉林长春·二模）假设你是李华。某英语报“寻美家乡”专栏面向中学生招募小记者（journalist），需要用英语介绍自己的家乡。请你根据下面要点，用英语给报社写一封不少于40 词的自荐信。
要点：
1. 熟悉家乡；
2. 乐于交流；
3. 擅长英语。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
Dear Sir/Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from First High School, and I saw the recruitment documents for a middle school journalist.
I am very interested and I think I can become a journalist. Because I am very familiar with my home town, I know a lot about it. I am good at communicating with others, no matter who they are. In addition, my English is very good because I practice speaking English every day.
If you accept me, I would greatly appreciate it. I know I will do well in this job.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我熟悉家乡，善于交流，擅长英语”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我是第一中学的李华，我看到了一个中学记者的招聘文件。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我的情况（熟悉家乡，善于交流，擅长英语）”方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我知道我会做好这份工作的。”
[亮点词汇]
① be good at擅长
② in addition此外
[高分句型]
① I am very interested and I think I can become a journalist.（省略that的宾语从句）
② In addition, my English is very good because I practice speaking English every day.（because引导的原因状语从句）
3．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·三模）假定你是李雷，哈尔滨将在2025 年举办亚洲冬季运动会（Harbin 2025 Asian Winter Games），为此《新晚报》面向全省招募亚冬会志愿者。你希望成为志愿者，请你给报社写一封自荐信。
写作要点：
1.很希望成为志愿者。
2.介绍自己的优势：
（1）性格外向，善于与人交流
（2）英语口语好。
（3）热爱运动。
3.说明在亚冬会期间你打算如何成为一名优秀的志愿者。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实姓名、地名、学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear editor,
I know some volunteers are needed.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear editor,
I know some volunteers are needed. I hope I can have a chance to do something for it.
I am a 15-year-old boy student in a middle school. In my spare time, I like watching English movies, so I can speak English fluently. Besides, I like sports and also like to read books about sports. Meanwhile, I am outgoing. I am good at communicating with people and I am always ready to help others. I have had some experience about being a volunteer. I will try my best to do something to help this Asian Winter Games to be a great success. I hope I can be chosen to be one.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作，注意语句通顺，表述清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己想成为志愿者的迫切心情；
第二步，介绍自己的优势以及打算如何成为一名优秀的志愿者；
第三步，结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s spare time在某人空闲时间
②be ready to do sth准备好做某事
③try one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I hope I can have a chance to do something for it. (宾语从句)
4．（2024·河南三门峡·一模）介绍家乡美景，宣传家乡文化。近期，我市将面向全体中学生举办“师生 共话三门峡”的英语实践活动。假如你是Li Lei，想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封自荐信。
写作提示：
1. 你的简要信息；
2. 你的个人优势，例如：了解家乡名胜景点、历史文化、当地美食、擅长英语表达等；
3. 你对此次活动的感想或期待。
写作要求：
1. 100 词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Mr. Yang,
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Sincerely,
Li Lei
【答案】例文：
Dear Mr Yang,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold an activity with the aim of promoting hometown culture. I really want to take part in it. It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Lei and I’m 14 years old.
I’m an outgoing boy. I have a good understanding of knowing many places of interest, the history of my hometown and local food. Besides, I have a good command of English. In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only improve our spoken English through the activity, but also have a deeper insight into our hometown. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture!
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍自己的优势；
第三步，发表个人感想。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②have an insight into了解
③have a good command of精通
[高分句型]
①We can not only improve our spoken English through the activity, but also have a deeper insight into our hometown.（not only...but also...句型）
②I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I am looking forward to your reply.（宾语从句）
5．（2024·陕西安康·二模）随着夏天的到来，来西安游玩的外国游客正在增多。大雁塔景区特招募学生志愿者(student volunteer)。假如你是李华，是西安的一名九年级学生，请用英文写一封自荐信，介绍你的个人情况：
1.你的英语特长和性格；
2.你申请成为志愿者的理由：了解西安的历史(know the history of Xi’an), 传播中华文化(introduce Chinese culture to foreigners)；……
要求：
1.内容须包含所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数不少于70(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)。
Dear sir,
I am Li Hua from a middle school in Xi’an. I want to be a student volunteer for Dayanta Scenic Spot.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope to be chosen to work for Dayanta Scenic Spot luckily. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I am Li Hua from a middle school in Xi’an. I want to be a student volunteer for Dayanta Scenic Spot.
I have been learning English for almost six years since I was eight years old. As a result, my spoken English is quite good. Once I worked as a guide for my penfriend from England when she visited Xi’an last year. Besides, I am an outgoing boy and like making friends with others. It is possible that I can help visitors much more easily. What’s more, I know the history of Xi’an well. So it will be easy for me to introduce Chinese culture to foreigners. I think more and more foreigners will love China more after their visit to Xi’an.
I hope to be chosen to work for Dayanta Scenic Spot luckily. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的是为了申请做大雁塔景区学生志愿者；
第二步，描述你的英语特长和性格以及申请成为志愿者的理由；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result结果
②make friends with和……交朋友
③what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①I have been learning English for almost six years since I was eight years old. (since引导的时间状语从句)
②Once I worked as a guide for my penfriend from England when she visited Xi’an last year. (when引导的时间状语从句)
6．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）“双减”后，学校创立了许多新的社团。假如你是李华，在学校的公众号上看到社团招募新成员的信息，请用英语写一封申请信，写明你想加入的某一个或者某两个社团名称、自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
注意事项：
1. 信件需包含至少两个理由，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名, 校名等相关信息；
3. 词数在100个左右，信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account. I am so interested in basketball that I would like to join the Basketball Club.
I am a tall and strong boy. I like basketball very much because it is interesting. I often play basketball after school with my classmates and we have a lot of fun together.
There are two reasons why I want to join the Basketball Club. First, I want to lean basketball skills. Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.
I really hope I can become a member of this club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及提示要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏信息，并适当添加信息，使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接说明来信意图来引出下文的自我介绍，直接说明自己想要参加的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②so...that...如此……以至于……
[高分句型]
①I like basketball very much because it is interesting.（原因状语从句）
②Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.（时间状语从句）
7．（2024·湖北襄阳·二模）2024“华夏之旅●国际中学生夏令营”将于下月到访湖北，活动主办方决定面向全省招募少年志愿者来用英语“讲好中国故事，让世界了解湖北”。假如你是一位名叫李华的14岁初中生，请根据下面的招聘通知，并结合自身实际，用英文写一封自荐信。
Volunteers WantedTour China Summer Camp 2024 is coming soon! We want volunteers for the summer camp. What is your personality(性格) and your hobby How is your English ability Do you know something about Chinese history or culture Please introduce one of traditional Chinese festivals or customs to us. We are looking forward to your letters and hope you can join us!
写作要求：
（1）你的自荐信至少包括通知中提到的三项（英文黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，信件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hubei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hubei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
As a 14-year-old outgoing boy, I’m good with different people. I have two healthy hobbies: reading books and doing sports. I’m good at English, and I can talk freely with foreigners.
Today, I’ll share something about Spring Festival. It is regarded as one of the most important festivals in China. People wear new clothes, visit friends and relatives, have big meals together. People do many activities to celebrate it. We children are always happy to get lucky money from people who love us with their best wishes.
Hope I’ll be the lucky one! Thanks!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据所给的问题同时进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的性格、爱好，以及英语水平；
第三步，选择一方面介绍中国文化或历史；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be good with与……相处得好
②be good at擅长
③talk freely with与某人随意交谈
④be regarded as被视为
[高分句型]
①We children are always happy to get lucky money from people who love us with their best wishes.（who引导的定语从句）
②Hope I’ll be the lucky one!（省略that的宾语从句）
8．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办用“英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动。请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Miss Li写一封自荐信。
1.个人信息 姓名、班级、性格等；
2.个人优势 (1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，非常了解中国的历史和文化； (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们，例如……；
3.活动意义 (1)培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；(2)自拟一点；
4.总结 自己发挥1~2点。
要求：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Miss Li,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.
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Yours,
LiHua
【答案】例文
Dear Miss Li,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. My name is Li Hua. I am 15 years old. I’m in Class 9, Grade 1. I am outgoing and helpful. I have read a lot of books about Chinese history and know Chinese history and culture very well. I also know many historical stories and am good at telling them in English, such as Hou Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. My spoken English is very good and I can communicate with foreigners fluently. Through this activity, I can cultivate my interest in learning English and improve my oral expression ability. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture! I am so proud of it. Only in this way can I make it!
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇自荐信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，引出写自荐信的背景和目的；
第二步，依次从个人信息、个人优势和个人对该活动的感想这三方面进行自荐，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达希望能够获得参加此次活动的机会并期待对方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at doing sth擅长做某事
②communicate with和……交流
③cultivate one’s interest in learning English培养某人学习英语的兴趣
[高分句型]
①As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about Chinese history and culture!（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②Only in this way can I make it!（倒装句）
③I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.（that引导的宾语从句）

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