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【期末考点突破】专题13 书面表达20篇-外研版 2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．学校举办英语演讲比赛，主题是介绍自己最好的朋友。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇演讲稿介绍你的好朋友Jeff。
内容要点：
1.个子比你高，比你更外向。他总是给你讲有意思的故事。
2.喜欢运动，每周锻炼四次。放学后，你们还一起打篮球。
3.喜欢听音乐，看动作片，还喜欢看新闻，因为……
4.上周末，你们去Town Cinema看了电影，你觉得这家影院是最好的一家影院，因为它有最舒适的座位和最好的音效。
要求：
1.内容必须包含以上信息，并可根据需要适当添加；
2.书写规范，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
3.词数80词左右，所给开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
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That’s all. Thank you.
2．《哪吒2》2025年春节期间上映，迄今全球总票房 (含预售) 突破155亿。该片打破了迪士尼、环球对动画榜的垄断。
要点如下：
(1) 寒假期间，你和爸爸妈妈一起去电影院看了《哪吒2》；
(2) 哪吒有明亮的红色的头发，穿着红色的衣服，他很勇敢，但有时很淘气；
(3) 他和好朋友敖丙相互帮助，一起抗争，他们教会我们坚强与善良；
(4) 这部电影受到各个年龄段人们的喜爱。迄今为止，3亿多人已经看过它；
(5) 你认为，中国电影的未来……
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：《哪吒2》 Ne Zha 2
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3．“五一”劳动节即将到来，你打算和家人一起外出旅游。请根据图示要点，写一篇短文介绍此次旅行计划。
要求：
1.补全标题；
2.短文必须包括图示中的全部要点；
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。
My Trip to ______
Place Time Vehicle Activity Tip
My Trip to ________
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4．假如你是李华，新的学期已经过去一半。请你写一封电子邮件给你的美国笔友John，告诉他你近阶段的学习和生活情况，以及接下来的计划。提示如下：
过去 1. 寒假在家乡待了一个星期； 2. 家乡变化很大，……（自由发挥1~2点）；
现在 1. 学会了用电脑做文字处理； 2. 喜欢旅游，因为……（自由发挥1点）； 3. 热爱阅读，……（自由发挥1点）；
计划 1. 外出旅游； 2. 多读书； 3. ……（自由发挥1点）
要求：1. 90词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入单词数。
2. 书写认真，卷面整洁、美观。
3. 内容完整并适当发挥；全文连贯、通顺。
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
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So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
5．世界上最美的相遇，是遇见一个更优秀的自己。读书和旅行都能让我们开拓视野，增长见识，变得更加优秀。你更喜欢哪种方式呢？请以“ _______ helps me meet a better self”为题，根据下面的提示并结合自身的经历，用英语写一篇短文，分享自己的进步、经历和未来计划。
1. What helps you meet a better self
2. What is your most unforgettable book or trip
3. What do you learn from the book or the trip
4. What will you do in the future
注意事项：
1.补全题目，如“reading”或“travelling”；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.词数：100词左右；
4.文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
____________ helps me meet a better self
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6．假如你是李华，你校英文网站正在开展以“The Internet and Me”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
(1) How long do you surf the Internet every day
(2) What do you often do on the Internet
(3) What do you think of the Internet
注意：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
（3）70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life.
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7．2023年起宁夏中考体育将提高分数，这意味着学生的体质健康更加得到了重视。那么作为中学生，我们应该如何保持健康的生活方式呢？请你根据以下提示要点，以“How to keep healthy ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，和同学们分享一下你的建议。
要求：
(1)语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
(2)包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
注意：
(1)词数80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
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8．武夷山是位于福建省的风景旅游区。假如你是李华。你的英国笔友Steve想知道你今年暑假的安排。请你根据以下图示，给他写一封回信，说说你暑假时打算前往武夷山的四天旅行计划。词数80左右。
Hope: … Plans: Day 1: arrive, 14:20, July, 22nd; Day 2: Jiuqu River, boat on; Day 3: climb; the hills Day 4: leave, 9:45, July, 25th Mount Wuyi Location (位置): northwest, Fujian Transportation (交通): by train Cost: 2,000 yuan Preparations: book a room…
注意事项:1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．爱好对我们意义重大。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary给你写了一封邮件想要了解你的爱好。请你根据以下提示信息，用英文给她回复一封邮件，向她介绍你的爱好。
提示：
1. 你的一个爱好；
2. 你的爱好从形成到发展的过程；
3. 你的爱好给你带来的收获。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇：success（n. 成功） pleasure（n. 快乐，愉悦） knowledge（n. 知识）
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last letter, and I’d like to tell you something about my hobby.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．你上学期经常因为生病请假，寒假通过改变生活方式提升了身体素质，请根据以下要点，以My Healthy Winter Vacation为题，向同学们介绍你的寒假日常生活。
1. 决定多吃水果蔬菜，每天喝牛奶，少吃快餐；
2. 每天上午慢跑半小时，下午和朋友一起打篮球；
3. 早睡早起，不熬夜玩手机，保证足够的睡眠；
4. 现在感觉精力充沛，你认为……
要求：1) 词数：80-100个； (2) 开头已给出，不计入总词数； (3) 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：慢跑 jog; 精力充沛的 energetic
My Healthy Winter Vacation
Last term, I often missed school because I was sick, which made me feel worried and tired. When the winter holiday began,
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11．每一年的4月7日是世界健康日。今年的世界健康日主题是“我的健康，我的权利”。为了增强中学生的健康意识，校英文杂志社正在开展以“How to live a healthy life”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文，谈谈怎样过好健康生活。写作要点：
1. 健康生活的重要性；
2. 饮食、运动、睡眠方面的建议；
3. 号召同学们保持健康；
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
2. 语篇完整，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文中不能出现透露个人信息的语句，否则不予评分；
4. 词数为 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：important (adj. 重要的), habit (n.习惯), exercise (v./n. 锻炼), fast food (快餐食品)
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more people want to live a healthy life.
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12．阳光儿童医院计划在暑假招募一批志愿者，服务内容为：帮助医院打扫卫生、照顾生病的小朋友。假如你是第一中学的王凯，请按照要求给该项目的负责人周先生写一封申请信。
内容提示：
1.申请担任志愿者;
2.说明自己乐于助人，善于帮助小朋友。要求：
1.申请信需要涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发
挥;
2.词数：80左右，开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No.1 Middle School.
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Yours,
Wang Kai
13．假如你是Amy，你的学校将开展“灵魂在路上，让心智成长”为主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面的流程图所给的提示，写一篇关于旅行的演讲稿，分享你对旅行的感受、你印象深刻的一次旅行以及体会。
注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100左右，演讲稿的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you.
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14．阅读对于个人的成长起着举足轻重的作用。Teens Talk杂志正开展主题为“Reading makes a full man.”征文大赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 包含所有所给提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 不少于80词。
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15．Jack 是你的好朋友，在某些方面你们有相似之处，在另一方面，你们也有很多不同之处。
写作要求：
1.根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍你和你的朋友。
2.要求适当分段：语句通顺，逻辑连贯：可适当发挥。
3.字数： 90词左右 （开头已给， 不计入总词数）。
相同点 不同点
外貌和性格 外向而友好 Jack 比你高比你瘦
饮食和习惯 每个月吃1-2次垃圾食品 Jack 早睡早起；你常常熬夜，难得运动。
兴趣和爱好 喜欢相互帮助和一起阅读最喜欢 Blue Moon电影院及一条喜欢去的理由（使用比较或最高级）。 Jack 最喜欢动作电影，因为…… 你最喜欢……（电视节目类型），因为……
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
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16．一百、一千、一万……即使有再多的零，没有了一，一切都归零。在我们的生活中，如果没有了健康，财富、地位等一切也都失去了意义。请以“Ways to Keep Healthy”为题，参照下图的信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的文章。
注意：1. 书写清晰、字迹工整、行文流畅，语句通顺。
2. 包含所给内容，并适当拓展补充。
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17．学校今年将开展暑期志愿者活动。假如你是Simon，你想和同学John利用暑假在儿童福利院做一些志愿者工作。请根据以下表格信息，以“Volunteering”为题，写一篇英语作文，谈谈你们的爱好、梦想，以及你们将要做的志愿者工作。
要点：
Names Simon John
students from No. 2 Middle School
Free time this summer holiday
Place a children’s home
Activities 1. 读故事； 2. 打扫卫生； 3. 一起唱歌、跳舞、做游戏； 4. ……
Feelings …
要求：
1. 词数80词以上；
2. 字迹工整，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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18．你校新来的外教Tony想通过问卷了解学生的生活习惯。问卷中有关于你喜欢的食品、你的睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面的问题。请你根据以下问卷问题用英文向 Tony作详细介绍。
Something about your lifestyle.
What do you think of your lifestyle
How should you improve your lifestyle
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数90词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you.
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19．健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：健康饮食，多吃水果蔬菜；早睡早起，不熬夜，保证充足睡眠；参加运动，强身健体。
参考词汇：熬夜stay up; 增进，加强build up
要求：
（1）条理清晰，把握要点，适当发挥；
（2）书写工整，卷面整洁；
（3）80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
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20．“情绪，我们心灵的晴雨表。”在当今这个快节奏、高压力的社会里，情绪管理已经成为了我们生活中不可或缺的一部分。越来越多的人开始意识到，情绪不仅仅是我们内心的感受，它更是影响我们行为的关键因素。因此，如何保持一个良好的心态，成了我们共同追求的目标。学校校报正在举行以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”为题的英语征文活动，请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文进行投稿，谈谈你的想法。
写作要求：
1. 包含思维导图中所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实的姓名及校名。
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《【期末考点突破】专题13 书面表达20篇-外研版 2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．例文：
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
Jeff is a 15-year-old boy from Shandong. He is kind and friendly. He is taller and much more outgoing than me. He always tells me funny stories and makes me laugh. I like him because he likes to do the same things as me. We are both interested in doing sports, which is good for our health. We often exercise four times every week and play basketball together after school. We both enjoy listening to music and watching action movies, because they can make us relaxed. Sometimes Jeff likes watching news. He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.
Last weekend, we watched an action movie in Town Cinema. It was so wonderful. I think Town Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the most comfortable seats and the best sound. I hope to go there next time!
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：这是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，“喜欢看新闻”的原因需要补充；“上周去看电影”部分要用一般过去时，但是介绍电影院的情况用一般现在时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍演讲的主题是我的好朋友Jeff（已给出）；
第二步，具体介绍Jeff的性格和爱好；
第三步，介绍上周去看电影以及Town Cinema的情况。
[亮点词汇]
① be interested in 对……感兴趣
② much more outgoing 外向得多
③ the most comfortable seats 最舒适的座位
④ make us relaxed 使我们放松
[高分句型]
He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.（宾语从句、时间状语从句）
2．例文
During the winter vacation, I watched Ne Zha 2 with my parents, and it left a deep impression on me.
Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind.
The film has won the hearts of people of all ages. So far, more than 300 million people have watched it, making it a huge success.
I believe that the future of Chinese films is bright because they combine traditional culture with modern technology, just like Ne Zha 2 does so that people around the world will know more good Chinese stories.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：根据写作要点完成写作，注意不要遗漏，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己看了《哪吒2》以引出下文；
第二步，描述哪吒的外貌、性格、与敖丙的友谊和带来的启示；
第三步，总结这部电影的成就；
第四步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①leave a deep impression on sb 给某人留下深刻印象
②fight side by side 并肩战斗
③teach sb to do 教会某人做某事
④win the hearts of sb 赢得某人的心
[高分句型]
①Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. (who引导非限制性定语从句)
②What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. (what引导主语从句)
③Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind. (although引导让步状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句)
3．例文
My Trip to Shanghai
I’m very excited because May Day is coming. I’m going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my family. We will go there by plane. We are going to visit the Disneyland. I’d like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. We also plan to visit the museum and the Oriental Pearl Tower. When the night falls, we can take a ship to travel around Huangpu River. After that, we decide to do some shopping. There are many kinds of food in Shanghai. We can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can’t wait to go there.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先补全题目，接着介绍五一出游计划；
第二步，介绍将要游玩的景点；
第三步，表达对五一出游的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①by plane乘飞机
②would like to想要
③take some photos拍照
④plan to打算做某事
③many kinds of很多种
④can’t wait to do迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m very excited because May Day is coming. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think we will have fun in Shanghai. (宾语从句)
4．例文
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
I stayed in my hometown for two weeks during the winter holiday. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. People used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the Internet. Mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers to do word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. I am also fond of reading books, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
Then I plan to have more time to relax myself. I plan to go travelling in China during the summer holiday. I also want to spend more time reading different kinds of books because books can open up a whole new world to me. Moreover, I will keep working hard on my study and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时等；
③提示：根据提示从过去、现在和未来三方面介绍，并注意用不同时态叙述；要点已经给出，不要遗漏，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示介绍过去的生活情况；
第二步，介绍现在的情况；
第三步，介绍接下来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②use to do过去常常……
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature.（原因状语从句）
②Then I plan to have more time to relax myself.（动词不定式作后置定语）
5．例文一：
Traveling helps me meet a better self
Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to Yunnan with my family last summer.
During the trip, we hiked in the mountains near Lijiang. At first, the path made me nervous, and I almost gave up halfway. But my parents encouraged me to keep going. Step by step, I finally reached the top. The view of the green valleys and snow-capped mountains was amazing! I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. I also met local children there. They shared stories about their lives. Their kindness and happiness touched my heart deeply.
From this trip, I learned to be more confident and open-minded. In the future, I want to travel to more places, especially those with different cultures. I’ll try to learn and respect local customs wherever I go. Traveling isn’t just about seeing new sights—it’s about becoming a better self.
例文二：
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading is a journey that allows me to explore both the world and my inner self. The most unforgettable book I’ve read is “Treasure Island” by Robert Louis Stevenson. It tells the exciting story of a brave boy who sailed the sea to find hidden treasure.
The book taught me valuable lessons. Jim faced pirates, storms, and betrayal, but he never lost hope. His courage and wisdom inspired me to believe that even young people can overcome challenges. One scene I remember was when Jim stood up to Long John Silver, the cunning pirate. It showed me that bravery is not about being fearless, but about doing what is right despite fear. I also learned the importance of teamwork from the crew’s struggles.
From “Treasure Island”, I realized that books can shape our character. In the future, I will read more adventurous stories to strengthen my courage and creativity. I’ll try to act bravely in difficult situations, just like Jim. Reading isn’t just about words on a page—it’s about discovering a stronger, wiser self.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：材料所要求内容不得遗漏，写作过程注意时态切换运用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明文章主旨；
第二步，详细介绍难忘的旅行的经历；
第三步，分享自己旅行的收获和未来的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. (定语从句)
②I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. (宾语从句)
6．例文
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend about one hour online every day.
On the Internet, I often do many useful things. First, I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge. Sometimes, I chat with my friends on social media to share our daily life. Besides, I enjoy listening to music and watching funny short videos to relax myself after study.
I think the Internet is really helpful. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. However, we should use it properly and not spend too much time on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，需围绕每天上网时长、上网做的事情、对互联网的看法展开，可适当补充细节，突出三个核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明互联网在生活中的重要性，自然引入下文。
第二步，依次回答三个提示问题，先说明每天上网时长，再列举上网做的学习、社交、娱乐等活动。
第三步，最后阐述对互联网利弊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①search for 搜索
②share 分享
③relax myself 放松自己
④more convenient and colorful 更方便和丰富多彩
[高分句型]
①I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I think the Internet is really helpful.（宾语从句）
7．例文：
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
Firstly, we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should get enough sleep and eat a balanced diet. Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables.
Secondly, take an active part in PE classes. Exercise regularly in class and improve our physical fitness.
Finally, do some interesting outdoor activities at weekends. We can go hiking, cycling or play ball games. These activities can make us stronger and more energetic.
In conclusion, a healthy lifestyle is essential for our well-being. Let’s take action and keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述保持健康的建议；
第三步，书写结语，呼吁养成保持健康的好习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①a balanced diet均衡的饮食
②take an active part in积极参加
③be essential for对……是必不可少的
④in conclusion总之
[高分句型]
①Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables. (祈使句)
②These activities can make us stronger and more energetic. (运用形容词比较级)
8．例文：
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation.
I plan to have a four-day visit to Mount Wuyi. Mount Wuyi is in the northwest of Fujian. So, I decide to go there by train. The whole trip may cost me about 2,000 yuan. Before I go there, I should book a room first. And I’ll take a hat and a camera of course. I plan to arrive there at 14:20 on July, 22nd. On the second day, I’m going to go boating on Jiuqu River. It must be interesting. The next day, I’ll go to climb the hills. And I plan to leave there at 9:45 on July, 25th.
I hope I can have an exciting trip. And what’s your plan for your summer vacation
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文的时态“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意要点已给出，注意要点衔接自然，顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，向好友介绍自己的计划目的点是武夷山；
第二步，详细介绍自己的旅行计划；
第三步，表达期待并询问好友如何度假。
［亮点词汇］
① a four-day visit 一次四天的参观
② decide to do sth决定做某事
③ looking forward to期待
［高分句型］
①Before I go there, I should book a room first.（时间状语从句）
② I hope I can have an exciting trip.（宾语从句）
9．例文
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last letter and I’d like to tell you something about my hobby. My favorite hobby is reading. I remember when I was a little girl, I enjoyed being with my mom when she read to me. Then when I grew older, I began to read books by myself. I was always lost in the stories and I learned a lot from the characters.
Now reading has become my hobby. I enjoy myself in the world of books every time I read. I think reading helps open my mind. And I have gotten much knowledge. What about you What’s your hobby
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的一个爱好；
第二步，介绍爱好从形成到发展的过程；
第三步，介绍爱好所带来的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb. about sth.告诉某人关于某事
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③begin to do sth.开始做某事
④in the world of books在书籍世界中
[高分句型]
①I remember when I was a little girl, I enjoyed being with my mom when she read to me. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I was always lost in the stories and I learned a lot from the characters. (and的并列句)
③I think reading helps open my mind. (宾语从句)
10．范文
My Healthy Winter Vacation Last term, I often missed school because I was sick, which made me feel worried and tired. When the winter holiday began, I decided to change my lifestyle to improve my physical condition.
I ate a lot of fruits and vegetables and drank milk every day. I also avoided fast food as much as possible. For exercise, I jogged for half an hour every morning. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends, which not only helped me stay fit but also allowed me to enjoy time with them. What’s more, I stopped staying up late on my phone. Instead, I went to bed and got up early to get enough sleep.
Now, I’m full of energy. I’m sure that a healthy lifestyle is the secret to good health, and I’ll keep these habits forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出寒假决定改变生活方式以提升身体素质的写作意图；
第二步，从饮食、运动、作息三个方面详细描述寒假期间的生活方式改变；
第三步，表明现在精力充沛的状态，阐述对健康生活方式重要性的感悟，强调会保持这些习惯 。
[亮点词汇]
①fast food快餐
②as much as possible尽可能多地
③full of energy精力充沛
[高分句型]
①I played basketball with my friends, which not only helped me stay fit but also allowed me to enjoy time with them. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②I’m sure that a healthy lifestyle is the secret to good health, and I’ll keep these habits forever. (that引导宾语从句)
11．例文：
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more people want to live a healthy life. A healthy life is very important. A strong body can help us study and work better.
Here are some suggestions on how to live a healthy life. First, we should have a healthy diet. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much fast food. Second, to keep fit, it’s a good way to exercise by taking a walk, running or playing ball games every week. They can keep you in excellent condition. Last but not least, enough sleep is necessary. Early to bed and early to rise keeps us active and lively.
Health is wealth. Let’s develop healthy habits and live a healthy life together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，第一段总述健康的重要性；
第二步，具体从“饮食、运动、睡眠”三个方面给出保持健康的方法；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①diet饮食
②fast food快餐食品
③take a walk去散步
④in excellent condition健康状况良好
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions on how to live a healthy life. (疑问词+不定式)
②Second, to keep fit, it’s a good way to exercise by taking a walk, running or playing ball games every week. (不定式作主语)
12．Dear Mr Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. I Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the children’s hospital. I’m always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I’m good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I’m with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang kai
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，围绕申请成为阳光儿童医院志愿者展开内容撰写。
②时态：全文主要运用 一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示：写作时需涵盖所有要点，适当发挥细节，以满足字数要求，并保证语言表达自然流畅。
【写作步骤】
第一步，直接表明写信目的，即申请成为儿童医院的志愿者，简洁明了，让收信人迅速了解信件核心意图。
第二步，阐述个人优势，包括乐于助人、帮助小朋友等要点，同时表达自己的期望与信心。
第三步，以礼貌、得体的语句收尾，表达对收信人回复的期待，符合申请信的规范格式和礼仪要求。
【亮点词汇】
①be ready to准备好做某事；乐意做某事
②care for照顾；照料
③be good with善于和……相处
④cheer...up使……振作起来
【高分句型】
①When I’m with them, I can always cheer them up.（When引导的时间状语从句）
③And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.（if引导的条件状语从句和believe后面的宾语从句）
13．Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you.
I think travelling is really great. It’s fun to go to different places. We can see new things and learn about different ways of life.
Last year, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day. When we got there, the blue sea and the golden sand made me excited. I played beach volleyball with my parents and built sandcastles. We also swam in the sea. It was so cool!
From this trip, I learned that spending time with family is important. And I found that there are so many beautiful and interesting things in the world. We should go out and see more. It can make our lives better.
Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你对于旅行的看法；
第二步，描述你的旅行经历，包括在什么时间，地点等；
第三步，分享旅游的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②in the sea在海里
③make our lives better让我们的生活更好
[高分句型]
①When we got there, the blue sea and the golden sand made me excited.（When引导的时间状语从句）
②From this trip, I learned that spending time with family is important.（宾语从句）
14．例文
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. It can open our minds and make us wiser.
My favorite book is The Little Prince. I love it because it tells warm and meaningful stories. Through the adventures of the little prince, I’ve learned about love and friendship. I have a good reading habit. I read for half an hour every night. It’s a great way to relax after a busy day. For the summer vacation, I plan to read some history books. I think they can help me know more about the past. I’ll also write down my feelings after reading.
Reading is really wonderful, and I’ll keep doing it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合所给话题，介绍阅读的重要性，可适当增加细节，注意行文逻辑和连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍阅读的重要性及作用；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从最喜欢的书籍、习惯和暑假计划三方面展开阐述阅读的重要性；
第三步，总结全文，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to计划
②write down写下
[高分句型]
I think they can help me know more about the past. (宾语从句)
15． 例文
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
We have several similarities. Both of us are outgoing and friendly, so we can easily make friends. In terms of diet, we eat junk food only once or twice a month as we know it’s unhealthy. Also, we love reading together and helping each other. Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.
However, we are different in many ways. Jack is taller and thinner than me. He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early. Conversely, I often stay up late and rarely exercise. When it comes to hobbies, Jack loves action movies best for the exciting fight scenes. I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.
In conclusion, though we have differences, our friendship remains strong.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：属于人物对比介绍类文章，旨在通过描述自己与朋友 Jack 的异同，展现两人的特点及友谊。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于陈述当前两人稳定的外貌、性格、习惯、兴趣爱好等方面的情况。
③提示：给定了明确的相同点和不同点的要点，涵盖外貌性格、饮食和习惯、兴趣爱好等方面。写作时需严格按照要点，适当分段展开，做到语句通顺、逻辑连贯，并可合理发挥，使内容更丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一，开头引入，直接点明写作目的是介绍自己和朋友 Jack，简洁明了，引出下文。
第二部，分别阐述相同点和不同点，包括外貌、性格、饮食习惯、兴趣爱好，给人最直观的形象。
第三部，总结全文，强调尽管两人存在差异，但友谊依然坚固，升华文章主题，使结构完整。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of就……而言，在……方面
②conversely相反地
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.（原因状语从句）
②He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
③I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.（since引导原因状语从句）
16．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important in our lives. Without it, everything else becomes meaningless. There are many ways to keep healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep. A good rest helps our body recover and stay energetic. Second, eating healthy food is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. Third, doing exercise regularly can make us stronger and improve our mood.
Besides these, we should also keep a happy mind and stay away from bad habits like smoking. Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点提示已给出，考试应注意要求中的内容，充实细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明健康的重要性，引出下文关于保持健康的方法；
第二步，列举具体的保持健康的方法；
第三步，总结全文，强调通过这些方式可以过上健康快乐的生活。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningless无意义的
②energetic精力充沛的
③regularly有规律地
④stay away from远离
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life. (运用部分倒装结构)
17．例文：
Volunteering
I’m Simon, my classmate John and I are students from No. 2 Middle School, where we have always been encouraged to participate in various social activities. This summer holiday, we plan to do some volunteering work in a children’s home.
I love reading, and my dream is to be a writer. So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. John is good at singing and dancing. He wants to be an artist in the future. He will teach the children to sing and dance. Also, we’ll play games with them to bring more fun. Besides, we’ll help clean the rooms to make the children’s home a more comfortable place. I believe we’ll have a great time.
Volunteering not only allows us to do something we love but also gives us a chance to bring joy to those lovely children. It will surely be a meaningful experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己和同学John的身份，引出暑期去儿童福利院做志愿工作的计划；
第二步，分别阐述自己和John的爱好及梦想，以及对应在福利院要做的事；
第三步，最后表达对志愿活动的期待，强调志愿活动既能做喜欢的事，又能给孩子带来快乐，是有意义的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①be thirsty for渴望……
②be good at擅长……
③have a great time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. (who引导的定语从句)
②I believe we’ll have a great time. (省略that的宾语从句)
18．例文
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you. First, I eat lots of vegetables and fruit, but sometimes enjoy fast food. I sleep 8 hours every night though I occasionally stay up late. I exercise three times a week by running or playing basketball. Besides, I always brush my teeth twice a day and take showers regularly. In my free time, I read books or listen to music. I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement. I should eat less junk food and go to bed earlier. Also, I plan to exercise more often.
If possible, I want to try new sports like swimming next term. Let’s discuss healthy recipes sometime!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍自己喜欢的食品，睡眠状况、空余时间的安排、个人清洁和运动等方面；
第三步，分享自己的计划并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of很多
②stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement.（宾语从句）
19．例文
I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of foods. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先要多吃水果蔬菜；
第二步，其次早睡早起，不熬夜，保证充足睡眠；
第三步，参加运动，强身健体。
[亮点词汇]
①be very important for us对我们很重要
②during the night在夜间
③be bad for our health对我们的健康有害
④twice a day 一天两次
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for our health.（动名词作主语）
②If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.（if引导的条件状语从句）
20．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
Our moods are like a weather forecast for our hearts. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. Staying in a good mood helps us do things quickly and face challenges positively. When we are happy, we can think more clearly and solve problems more important ones. When we are under too much pressure or have problems with others, it can make us feel sad.
So, how can we stay in a good mood Exercise is very helpful. It can make us feel tired but happy. Also, getting enough sleep is important. When we are well-rested, we are more likely to be in a good mood. Taking care of our emotions is important for our daily life.
Let’s try to stay happy and healthy! By following these simple ways, we can all enjoy a good mood.
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇点题，点出情绪的重要性以及影响情绪的因素；
第二步，给出保持好情绪的具体方法；
第三步，书写结语，再次强调好心情耳朵重要性，希望能听从建议，保持好心态。
【亮点词汇】①stay in good mood保持好情绪
②face challenges positively积极面对挑战
③be likely to do sth有可能做某事
④take care of照顾
【高分句型】①When we are under too much pressure or have problems with others, it can make us feel sad. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Also, getting enough sleep is important. （动名词作主语）
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