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【期末考点突破】专题11 书面表达 20篇-外研版（2024） 2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．假如你是李辉，你的学校将要举办一场以保护树木为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿参赛。
要点：
1.简述树木的重要性；
2.如何保护树木；
3.号召更多人参与保护树木。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
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Thank you for your listening!
2．同学们一定听过《如愿》这首歌，其中的一句歌词“山河无恙，烟火寻常”描绘了中国的盛世景象。城市的发展如同一部生动的历史长卷，每一条街道、每一座建筑都是一页篇章，记载着人们的辛勤耕耘和智慧创新。用脚步丈量大地宽广，用心感受中国的温暖怀抱。假定你是李辉，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1.推荐一座值得游玩的城市及原因。
2.介绍该城市2-3处著名景点，描述这些景点的独特之处和游客的游玩活动。 介绍当地的特色美食……
3.表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．假设你叫李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的线上交流活动，请分享你的饮食和运动习惯。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不能照抄课文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Healthy Life
Hello, dear friends!
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4．假设你是校园环保社的社长，请你写一篇以“Join Me to Protect Our Planet! ”为题目的倡议书，号召同学们保护树木和水资源。内容包括：
1. 树木和水对人类和地球的重要性；
2. 当前面临的环境问题（如乱砍滥伐、水污染、……）；
3. 提出4个具体的保护建议（如节约用纸、循环用水、……）；
4. 号召：……。
要求：80-100词，语言简洁有力，具有号召性。
Join Me to Protect Our Planet!
Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I'm calling everyone to protect our trees and water! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。
注意事项：
（1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯；
（2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名；
（4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from
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6．每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英语社拟开展以“Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”为主题的英语演讲活动，向全校师生发出共同保护地球的倡议。请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇70词左右的英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
As we all know, the earth is our home.
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Thank you for your listening.
7．假设在 Mr. Li 的英语课堂上，你班同学就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因进行了组内分享。请根据以下表格要点提示，完成一份关于小组成员分享内容的报告。
Lucy Sam I
最喜欢的城市 成都 巴黎
简介 中国西南部； 因大熊猫而闻名。 法国的首都； 有很多名胜古迹， 如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫。 （至少写两点）
喜欢的原因 看大熊猫， 品尝当地小吃。 （至少写一点） （至少写一点）
注意：
1. 词数：80 词左右；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
埃菲尔铁塔 the Eiffel Tower
卢浮宫 the Louvre Museum
Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group.
Lucy’s favourite city is
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In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future.
8．在完成 Trees单元学习后，你所在班级开展了以 “My Favorite Tree” 为主题的课前演讲活动。请依据表格提示写一篇英文演讲稿。请从两类树中任选一类，简单介绍树的基本特点和重要性并补充 1 - 2 点你对保护树木的看法。
注意：
1. 词数：80 词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3. 需包含所有提示要点。
The trees Tea trees（茶树） Pine trees (松树)
Facts about trees ●dark green leaves ●up to 15 - 20 meters tall ●produce tea ●everywhere ●stay green ●strong plants
Importance of trees ●take in ●use...to... ●make our lives more convenient ●take in ●use... to... ●make our lives more convenient
Your opinion (看法) 请补充（1 - 2 点） 请补充（1 - 2 点）
Good morning, dear classmate! Today I want to introduce my favourite tree.
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Thank you for listening!
9．体育锻炼的重要性是不言而喻的。为了鼓励同学们积极参加体育锻炼，你校英文杂志的“Sports World”专栏将开展以“My Favorite Sports”为题的征文活动。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文投稿。词数不少于 80。
内容包括：
1. Which sport do you like best
2. Why do you like it
3. How do you do it
4. What can you get from it
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10．五一国际劳动节即将到来。请以“My May Day Vacation Plan”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，谈谈你在五一假期关于读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等方面的计划。
写作要求：
1．写作内容要包含上方的要点提示，可以适当发挥；
2．文中不要出现真实姓名和校名；
My May Day Vacation Plan
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11．某英文网站正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你有哪些健康的饮食习惯和运动习惯，并谈谈这些习惯能给你带来哪些好处。提示词语： basketball, vegetables, strong, mind
提示问题： ·What eating habits do you have
·What sports habits do you have
·What benefits can you get from these habits
Health is wealth. It’s important for us to keep healthy.
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12．成都近年来在美食、文化、科技等方面吸引了国内外的目光。作为一名中学生，你觉得我们还可以做些什么让成都越来越好呢？请以“Smart & Healthy Chengdu”为题，根据以下思维导图内容，阐述你的建议，并向广大初中生提出“共建美好成都”的倡议。
要求：
1．文章须包含思维导图中的所有内容，并适当阐述具体做法或原因；
2．不能出现真实班级和姓名；
3．词数80左右。
4．参考单词: attract: v. 吸引 technology: n. 科技
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13．假如你是Dr. Know，请给Sad and Thirteen写一封回信，帮他逐条分析不良习惯的害处并给出合理的建议。
Dear Dr Know, Please help me! I’m too fat. I don’t know what to do. I have too many bad eating habits. I love fast food. I can’t stop once I eat it. And I usually drink soft drinks when I get thirsty. Also, I often eat snacks like cookies and sweets a lot. What’s worse (更糟), I don’t like exercising. I’m not good at any sports. What can I do Yours, Sad and thirteen
注意：
1. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
2. 词数：80词左右。
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14．某学校初一年级正在进行传统文化和启润课程学习，本周主题是“How I Keep Healthy ”。请你以Peter的名义并根据以下图示写一篇短文，向课程负责人Grace投稿。
注意：
1. 短文须包含图示所有信息；
2. 词数 60 左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear Grace,
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Yours,
Peter
15．假如你是李明，你校英文公众号正在举办以“Keep fit”为主题的征文活动，请你从以下几个方面写一篇短文介绍自己保持健康的方式并投稿。
1. 饮食习惯方面。
2. 运动习惯方面。要求：
1.语言表达准确，语句通顺；
2. 词数不少于80字。开头已给出不计入总词数。
Hi, I’m Li Ming. Now I’m glad to tell you how I keep fit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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《【期末考点突破】专题11 书面表达 20篇-外研版（2024） 2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．One possible version
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
Trees are very important to us. They give us oxygen, clean the air, and provide homes for animals. They also stop soil from washing away and make our world beautiful. To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely. We can recycle paper, use both sides of it, and plant more trees. Never waste paper, like throwing away notebooks with blank pages. Let’s work together to protect trees! Small actions can make a big difference. Tell your friends and family that they should join us. Remember, saving trees means saving our future!
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头礼貌性问候；
第二步，具体阐述树木的重要性、如何保护树木并号召大家参与保护树木；
第三步，感谢聆听，礼貌结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②recycle paper回收纸
③work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely.（不定式作目的状语）
②Tell your friends and family that they should join us.（祈使句+宾语从句）
2．例文：
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history. There are three famous places you must visit. The Great Wall is very long and beautiful. You will feel excited when you walk on it. The Forbidden City has many old palaces. Summer Palace is perfect to take a walk by the lake. Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here! I can’t wait to see you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：应用文(电子邮件)
②时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时表期待
③提示：需包含城市推荐、3个景点介绍和美食推荐
[写作步骤]
第一步，推荐北京及历史原因；
第二步，介绍3个景点：长城、故宫、颐和园；
第三步，推荐烤鸭；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①best choice 最佳选择
②famous places 著名景点
③delicious food 美味食物
④take a walk 散步
[高分句型]
①I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
②You will feel excited when you walk on it.（when引导时间状语从句）
③Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here!（祈使句的否定形式）
3．One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello, dear friends! I’m Li Hua. I have healthy eating habits. For breakfast, I have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I have tomato and beef noodles. After lunch, I have an apple. For dinner, I have rice, vegetables and chicken. I love carrots and fish. I think they are healthy because they are good for my eyes.
I also like doing sports. I run three times a week, and I play basketball with my friends on Saturdays. Doing sports can make me happy and healthy.
It is important to have a healthy lifestyle. We should eat more healthy food and do more exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己健康的饮食习惯；
第二步，介绍自己好的运动习惯；
第三步，呼吁人们拥有健康的生活习惯很重要。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habit 良好的饮食习惯
②be good for 有益于
③do exercise 做运动
[高分句型]
①I think they are healthy because they are good for my eyes.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is important to have a healthy lifestyle.（It is+adj.+to do sth.：做某事是……的）
4．例文
Let’s Protect Our Trees and Water! Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I’m calling everyone to protect our trees and water! Trees clean the air and give us oxygen, while water is the source of life. However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.
Here’s how we can help: First, save paper to protect forests. Then, turn off taps and reuse water wisely. Besides, join tree-planting activities. Finally, never litter near rivers or lakes.
Remember, small actions matter! If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner. Start today!
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，旨在号召同学们保护树木和水资源；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时，描述客观事实和提出建议；
③提示：写作需涵盖树木和水的重要性、面临的环境问题、具体保护建议以及号召内容，注意语言简洁且具有号召力。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点明身份，发出保护树木和水资源的号召，阐述树木和水对人类及地球的重要性；
第二步，指出当前存在的如乱砍滥伐、水污染等环境问题，提出具体的保护建议，如节约用纸、循环用水、参加植树活动、不向河湖乱扔垃圾等；
第三步，结尾再次强调个人行动的重要性，号召大家从现在开始行动起来。
【亮点词汇】
①the source of life生命之源
②save paper节约用纸
③reuse water循环用水
【高分句型】
①However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.（使用被动语态）
②If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner.（条件状语从句）
5．范文
Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province with a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food.
There are plenty of famous places of interest here. Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. Secondly, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. Thirdly, there is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind.
Guangzhou has something for everyone. If you come to Guangzhou, you will be sure to like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图并总体介绍广州；
第二步，介绍广州的旅游景点；
第三步，介绍自己对广州的评价及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①capital省会
②be famous for…因……而出名
③places of interest名胜古迹
④fresh清新的
[高分句型]
①For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
②Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. (if引导条件状语从句)
6．例文：
As we all know, the earth is our home. We should protect it. At home, we can save water and turn off the lights when leaving rooms. At school, making a poster to call on more people to protect the earth is a good idea. Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes. In the community, we should sort the rubbish to make our environment clean. Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，围绕 “Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”主题，给出在家、在学校、在社区的环保建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明地球是我们的家园，引出保护地球的话题；
第二步，分别从在家（如节约用水、随手关灯等）、在学校（制作海报、纸张重复利用等）、在社区（垃圾分类等）三个方面阐述具体的环保行动；
第三步，结尾总结呼吁大家一起行动保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
① call on 号召
② take action 采取行动
③ in order to 为了
[高分句型]
① Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes.（because引导原因状语从句）
② Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.（in order to作目的状语）
7．
例文：
Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group.
Lucy’s favourite city is Chengdu. It lies in the southwest of China. It’s famous for pandas. Lucy loves to see lovely pandas and taste the local snacks. The food there is really delicious.
Sam likes Paris best. It is the capital of France. It is a city with many places of interest, such as the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. He thinks Paris is one of the most romantic cities. he can enjoy the beautiful scenery and rich culture there.
As for me, my favourite city is Beijing. It’s the capital of China. There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all over the world here.
In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上、下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给提示续写Lucy最喜欢的城市及原因；
第二步，介绍萨姆最喜欢的城市及原因。
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的城市及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因……而出名
②places of interest 名胜古迹
③one of the most romantic cities 最浪漫的城市之一
④such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. (There be句型)
②The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all the world here. (that引导的表语从句)
8．例文
Good morning, dear classmates! Today I want to introduce my favourite tree. I like pine trees best.
We can find pine trees everywhere. They stay green all year round. They are strong plants and we can grow them in many different environments. Pine trees take in carbon dioxide and use it to produce oxygen. They make our lives more convenient in many ways. For example, we can use pine wood to make furniture.
As for me, we should protect pine trees. First, we should stop cutting them down. Second, we can plant more pine trees to make our environment more beautiful and comfortable. Let’s work together to protect these wonderful trees.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍其中的一种树基本特点。
第二步，再写一下保护树木的重要性和你对保护树木的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①all year round全年
②take in吸收
③in many ways在许多方面
[高分句型]
①Pine trees take in carbon dioxide and use it to produce oxygen.（and连接并列成分）
②Let’s work together to protect these wonderful trees.（祈使句）
9．例文
My name is Li Hua. My favourite sport is basketball. It’s fun to play basketball with some of my good friends after school. Basketball can also build team spirit. I play basketball three times a week. Playing basketball is good for me because it can keep me healthy. It’s also a good way to relax after a long day’s study. It’s good exercise for my body. I think everyone should try it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合提示问题，介绍自己最喜欢的运动，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。介绍自己最喜欢的运动是篮球；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢这项运动的原因及运动的好处；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家多运动。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball 打篮球
②after school 放学后
③be good for 对……有好处
[高分句型]
①It’s fun to play basketball with some of my good friends after school. (It is +adj.+ to do sth.句型)
②Playing basketball is good for me because it can keep me healthy. (because引导原因状语从句)
10．例文：
My May Day Vacation Plan
The May Day holiday is coming soon, and I have made a colorful plan to make the most of it. First, I’ll spend two hours reading books every day. I love stories about adventures, so I’ll borrow some from the library. Second, I’ll exercise regularly. I plan to jog in the park in the morning and play basketball with friends in the afternoon. Staying healthy is important!
I also want to travel with my family. We’ll visit a nearby mountain and enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. It will be a great chance to relax. Besides, I’ll help my parents with housework. I’ll clean the rooms, wash dishes, and maybe even learn to cook a simple meal.
I’m sure this vacation will be both fun and meaningful. I can’t wait to start!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述个人五一假期的计划安排；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”，因为涉及的是未来的计划；
③提示：写作要点围绕读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等几个方面，考生应注意涵盖这些要点，并可以适当发挥，添加细节使计划更加丰富。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。简要提及五一国际劳动节即将到来，引出下文关于假期计划的描述；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。详细描述读书、锻炼身体、旅游、帮父母做家务等方面的具体计划；
第三步，书写结语。可以表达对假期的期待或总结整个计划的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①make the most of充分利用
②plan to do sth.计划做某事
③regularly定期地，有规律地
④enjoy the fresh air享受新鲜空气
⑤can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①I love stories about adventures, so I’ll borrow some from the library.（so引导的表示结果的句子）
②Staying healthy is important!（动名词短语作主语）
11．例文：
Health is wealth. It’s important for us to keep healthy. To stay healthy, I follow good eating and sports habits.
For eating habits, I eat plenty of vegetables and fruits every day. I avoid junk food and drink enough water. This keeps my body strong and gives me energy. For sports habits, I play basketball three times a week. It helps me stay fit and improves teamwork skills. These habits benefit me in many ways. A balanced diet keeps my mind sharp, and exercise makes me energetic. Staying healthy helps me study better and enjoy life more.
Let’s all live a healthy life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，说明保持健康的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍自己是如何在生活中保持健康的，可从饮食以及锻炼方面展开；
第三步，阐述自己从健康的生活方式中受益到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①junk food垃圾食品
②stay fit保持健康
[高分句型]
Staying healthy helps me study better and enjoy life more. (动名词短语作主语)
12．例文
Smart & Healthy Chengdu
Chengdu has attracted global attention for its food, culture, and technology. As middle school students, we can contribute to making Chengdu even better by focusing on smart and healthy initiatives.
Firstly, we can promote the use of technology in daily life, such as using apps to reduce waste and improve recycling. Secondly, we should encourage a healthy lifestyle by organizing community sports events and advocating for balanced diets. Lastly, we can participate in environmental protection activities, like tree planting and clean-up drives, to make Chengdu greener.
Let’s work together to build a smarter and healthier Chengdu, making it a better place for everyone!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍成都的现状；
第二步，结合思维导图内容，提出具体的建议，如推广智能科技、倡导健康生活方式等；
第二步，向初中生发出倡议，呼吁大家共同努力，共建美好成都。
[亮点词汇]
①contribute to doing sth致力于
②focus on关注
③balanced diets健康饮食
④participate in参与
[高分句型]
Let’s work together to build a smarter and healthier Chengdu, making it a better place for everyone! (祈使句)
13．例文
Dear Sad and Thirteen,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling sad about your weight. Let’s analyze your problems and find solutions.
Fast food is high in fat and salt, which makes you gain weight easily and harms your health. Soft drinks have too much sugar, causing tooth problems and weight gain. Snacks like cookies and sweets also make you fat and give you little nutrition. Lack of exercise means you burn fewer calories, worsening the problem.
Here’s my advice. Firstly, replace fast food with fruits, vegetables and lean meat, because they are good for your health. Besides, you should drink water instead of soft drinks. In addition, you also should cut down on snacks and choose healthy ones like nuts. What’s more, you need to start with simple exercises like walking or jogging, then gradually do more sports.
You’ll surely see changes.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dr Know
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生注意需逐条分析不良习惯的害处并提出合理建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，回应问题，表达同理心；
第二步，逐条分析害处；
第三步，提出建议；
第四步，总结建议，给予信心。
[亮点词汇]
①too much太多
②lack of缺乏
③be good for对……有好处
④instead of代替
⑤in addition除此之外还
⑥what’s more除此之外还
[高分句型]
①I’m sorry to hear that you’re feeling sad about your weight.（that引导的宾语从句）
②Let’s analyze your problems and find solutions.（祈使句）
③Fast food is high in fat and salt, which makes you gain weight easily and harms your health.（which引导定语从句）
④Firstly, replace fast food with fruits, vegetables and lean meat, because they are good for your health.（because引导原因状语从句）
14．Dear Grace,
I’m Peter. I’d like to share how I keep healthy. I love playing basketball. I exercise from Tuesday to Saturday. It makes me strong and energetic.
In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables. They provide me with essential vitamins. I stay away from junk food like hamburgers and fries. Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated. Also, I try to have three regular meals a day. By doing exercise and eating healthily, I’m in good shape.
Yours,
Peter
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写自己如何通过做运动来保持健康的；
第二步，再写自己在饮食方面如何保持健康的。
[亮点词汇]
①in terms of在……方面
②stay away from远离……
③try to do尝试做某事
[高分句型]
①In terms of diet, I eat plenty of fruits and vegetables.（and连接并列成分）
②Additionally, I drink enough water throughout the day to keep my body hydrated.（动词不定式作目的状语）
15．范文：
Hi, I’m Li Ming. Now I’m glad to tell you how I keep fit.
First, I pay attention to my diet. I eat plenty of vegetables and fruits every day, and I drink at least 8 glasses of water. I avoid junk food like chips and soda because they are unhealthy. Instead, I choose fish or chicken.
Second, I exercise regularly. I play basketball with friends twice a week and ride my bike to school every morning. On weekends, I often go hiking with my family. Exercise makes me feel energetic and happy.
By eating well and staying active, I keep my body strong and healthy. Remember: small daily habits make a big difference!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用给定开头句引入主题；
第二步，分两段说明饮食和运动习惯；
第三步，总结健康生活方式的重要性
[亮点词汇]
① pay attention to注意
② plenty of大量的
③ at least至少
[高分句型]
I avoid junk food like chips and soda because they are unhealthy.（原因状语从句）
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