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期末复习大闯关第7讲书面表达专练七年级英语下册沪教版
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．写作话题：“The Person I Admire Most” (我最敬佩的人)
写作要求：
1. 请根据本单元所学知识，介绍你最敬佩的人的基本信息、性格特点、做过的令你敬佩的事情等。
2. 字数要求：80—120词。
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
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2．同学们一定听过《如愿》这首歌，其中的一句歌词“山河无恙，烟火寻常”描绘了中国的盛世景象。城市的发展如同一部生动的历史长卷，每一条街道、每一座建筑都是一页篇章，记载着人们的辛勤耕耘和智慧创新。用脚步丈量大地宽广，用心感受中国的温暖怀抱。假定你是李辉，你的美国笔友David想来中国旅游，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1.推荐一座值得游玩的城市及原因。
2.介绍该城市2-3处著名景点，描述这些景点的独特之处和游客的游玩活动。 介绍当地的特色美食……
3.表达期待。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3．树是我们的朋友，请以“Trees are important”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，说明树木对于人类的重要性。
树木的用途 1.树木可以美化环境，保持空气的凉爽和干净，对健康有好处。 2.树木可以从空气中吸收有害气体，产生氧气。 3.树木帮助与污染作斗争。 4.树木可以用来制作很多东西。如：很多家具都是由木头制成的。 5.树木给人类提供食物，如各种水果等。
应采取的措施 1.我们应该保护树木，严禁乱砍滥伐。 2. 其他？（至少补充一点）
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4．每个人都有自己喜欢的动物，但是现如今，很多动物正濒临灭绝，请你以“Save the Animals”为题，写一篇英语短文告诉大家为什么以及如何保护动物。
写作要点：
1. 介绍你最喜欢的动物；
2. 为什么要保护动物；
3. 我们应该怎么做；
参考词：friends, in danger, cut down, protect (保护)
写作要求：
1. 必须包含要点内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名，校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50词。
Save the Animals
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5．俗话说，水是生命的象征。水对生物非常重要。没有水，地球上就没有生命。但是，现在我们人类却在用不同的方式去污染水资源、浪费水等。请根据下面的内容提示，写一篇70词左右的短文，呼吁大家从身边的小事做起，共同保护水资源。
提示：
1. 众所周知，植物和动物需要水，我们人类也需要水。
2. 俗话说，水是生命的象征。没有水， 地球上将没有生命。
3. 为了净化江河湖泊，我们必须尽力去阻止各种污染。
4. 在日常生活中，记着不要浪费水或污染水。
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6．假设你是李明，你们家很注意节约用电，并且很关注用电安全常识。经过和家人讨论，你们制定了一套有关用电安全方面的家规。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍一下该家规。
提示：
必须 禁止
不用电器的时候关掉它们 在炉具旁放纸张
保持电线干燥 随处扔电池
取完东西后记得关上冰箱门 用湿手去碰电器
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7．榜样具有良好的感染力！某英文报举办以“身边的榜样”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你身边的一位榜样以及你欣赏他或她的理由。
参考词汇：role model, hard-working, helpful, solve problems
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2.词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Role models make a difference to us.
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8．本单元谈论我或别人的兴趣，从Reading，listening，talking都为我们写作提供目标语言，能正确使用一般过去时，时间状语从句和used to结构来描述爱好的开始。写作时我们要学会将这些目标语言进行合适运用——同时要求我们通过本课学习掌握这类文章的写作的基本特点和架构。写作前学会列提纲。
一、在写作过程中要明确以下几点：
1.开门见山。介绍我的爱好。
2.描述我如何发展我的爱好的。
3.爱好给我带来的益处。
4.对未来职业的展望。
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9．假如你是李辉，你的学校将要举办一场以保护树木为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下要点写一篇演讲稿参赛。
要点：
1.简述树木的重要性；
2.如何保护树木；
3.号召更多人参与保护树木。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）演讲稿中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
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Thank you for your listening!
10．假设你叫李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“健康生活”为主题的线上交流活动，请分享你的饮食和运动习惯。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 不能照抄课文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和真实姓名；
3. 语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Healthy Life
Hello, dear friends!
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11．仁和中学正在举行以“How to Live a Healthy Life ”为主题的征文比赛。请你从饮食习惯、坚持运动、规律作息等方面介绍如何保持健康的生活方式。
提示问题：What do you think of living a healthy life
How to live a healthy life
提示词: healthy food, junk food, water, exercise, enough sleep, stay up late
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12．假设你是校园环保社的社长，请你写一篇以“Join Me to Protect Our Planet! ”为题目的倡议书，号召同学们保护树木和水资源。内容包括：
1. 树木和水对人类和地球的重要性；
2. 当前面临的环境问题（如乱砍滥伐、水污染、……）；
3. 提出4个具体的保护建议（如节约用纸、循环用水、……）；
4. 号召：……。
要求：80-100词，语言简洁有力，具有号召性。
Join Me to Protect Our Planet!
Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I'm calling everyone to protect our trees and water! _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．假如你是李华，你的学校上周五在礼堂举办了一场英语演讲比赛，你在这场比赛中获得了冠军，你想给你的英国朋友Bill写邮件分享这次经历，请结合以下要点写一封英文邮件。
要点提示：
1. 比赛情况（时间、地点、现场氛围、结果）；
2. 你的表现（如口语、肢体语言等）；
3. 你参赛的感受与收获。
写作要求：
1. 包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
2. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总字数。
参考词汇：school hall礼堂 championship冠军称号
Dear Bill,
I am writing to share an exciting experience with you.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
14．每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英语社拟开展以“Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”为主题的英语演讲活动，向全校师生发出共同保护地球的倡议。请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇70词左右的英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
As we all know, the earth is our home.
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Thank you for your listening.
15．假设在 Mr. Li 的英语课堂上，你班同学就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因进行了组内分享。请根据以下表格要点提示，完成一份关于小组成员分享内容的报告。
Lucy Sam I
最喜欢的城市 成都 巴黎
简介 中国西南部； 因大熊猫而闻名。 法国的首都； 有很多名胜古迹， 如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫。 （至少写两点）
喜欢的原因 看大熊猫， 品尝当地小吃。 （至少写一点） （至少写一点）
注意：
1. 词数：80 词左右；
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：
埃菲尔铁塔 the Eiffel Tower
卢浮宫 the Louvre Museum
Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group.
Lucy’s favourite city is
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In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future.
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参考答案
1．例文
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is my English teacher, Miss Liu. She is young and beautiful with long hair.
Miss Liu is very patient. When we make mistakes in grammar or pronunciation, she always corrects us gently and explains the knowledge again and again until we understand. She also encourages us to speak English bravely.
She often helps us in many ways. Once, I failed an English test and was very sad. She talked to me after class, telling me not to give up and gave me some useful study tips. With her help, I made great progress in the next test.
I admire Miss Liu not only for her teaching skills but also for her kind heart. I hope I can be a teacher like her in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：根据提示要点介绍最敬佩的人，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍最敬佩的人是谁及基本信息；
第二步，介绍其性格特点及做过的令自己敬佩的事情；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①make mistakes犯错误
②again and again一遍又一遍地
③give up放弃
④with one’s help在某人的帮助下
[高分句型]
①When we make mistakes in grammar or pronunciation, she always corrects us gently and explains the knowledge again and again until we understand. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I hope I can be a teacher like her in the future. (宾语从句)
2．例文：
Dear David,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m excited to hear that you’re planning to visit China! I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history. There are three famous places you must visit. The Great Wall is very long and beautiful. You will feel excited when you walk on it. The Forbidden City has many old palaces. Summer Palace is perfect to take a walk by the lake. Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here! I can’t wait to see you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：应用文(电子邮件)
②时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时表期待
③提示：需包含城市推荐、3个景点介绍和美食推荐
[写作步骤]
第一步，推荐北京及历史原因；
第二步，介绍3个景点：长城、故宫、颐和园；
第三步，推荐烤鸭；
第四步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①best choice 最佳选择
②famous places 著名景点
③delicious food 美味食物
④take a walk 散步
[高分句型]
①I suggest Beijing because it’s the best choice to see Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
②You will feel excited when you walk on it.（when引导时间状语从句）
③Don’t miss Beijing duck — the most delicious food here!（祈使句的否定形式）
3．例文
Trees are important
Trees are the biggest and oldest living things on Earth. They are very important for human beings and animals.
Trees are very useful. First, trees can keep the air cool and clean. They can make our environment more beautiful and keep us stay healthy. Second, trees can take in harmful gases and keep the air fresh. Third, trees help fight against the pollution. Fourth, the trunk and branches provide us with wood so we can use wood to make many things. For example, much furniture is made of wood. Finally, trees can provide us with some food, such as fruit.
In short, trees are really helpful to us in many different ways. So it’s important for us to protect trees. First, we should stop cutting down so many trees and do our best to plant more trees. Second, we had better use the both sides of the paper so that we can save wood.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，需围绕树木对人类的重要性展开说明，并结合表格中的内容进行补充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明树木的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述树木的用途，如美化环境、净化空气、提供资源等；
第三步，说明保护树木的措施，并补充至少一点建议；
[亮点词汇]
① take in吸收
② fight against对抗
③ be made of由……制成
④ in short总之
⑤ cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
① First, we should stop cutting down so many trees and do our best to plant more trees.（并列句）
② Second, we had better use the both sides of the paper so that we can save wood.（目的状语从句）
4．例文
Save the Animals
My favorite animal is the panda, which is not only cute but also a symbol of peace. However, pandas, like many other animals, are in danger because their habitats are being destroyed by human activities.
We need to protect animals because they are our friends and play an important role in the ecosystem. Without them, the balance of nature will be broken, and it will affect our lives as well.
To save the animals, we should take action. First, we can stop cutting down trees and plant more to provide habitats for them. Second, we should reduce pollution to keep their environment clean. Finally, we can spread the message to let more people know the importance of protecting animals.
Let’s work together to save the animals and make the world a better place for all living creatures!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的动物；
第二步，阐述为什么要保护动物；
第三步，提出我们应该如何保护动物。
[亮点词汇]
① in danger 处于危险中
② cut down 砍伐
③ ecosystem 生态系统
[高分句型]
① My favorite animal is the panda, which is not only cute but also a symbol of peace.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
② Many animals are in danger because their habitats are being destroyed by human activities.（because引导的原因状语从句）
5．例文
As we all know, water is essential for every living thing. Plants need it to grow, animals rely on it to survive, and we humans can’t live without it either. There is an old saying that water is the symbol of life. Without water, our beautiful Earth would be a lifeless desert.
Sadly, many people are still polluting and wasting water. Factories pour dirty water into rivers, and people often leave taps running. To change this, we must take action. We should stop all kinds of pollution to clean our rivers and lakes. In daily life, always remember to turn off taps and not litter in water sources. Let’s start with these small steps to protect our precious water resources together!
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文属于议论文与呼吁类说明文结合的文体；
②时态：全文采用一般现在时；
③提示：严格围绕题目提示展开，内容完整，逻辑清晰，语言表达流畅，字数符合要求。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点明主题，从多个角度强化水的重要性，为下文论述做铺垫；
第二步，分析水资源现状，引出当前水资源面临的问题，直观展现水资源被破坏的情况，引发读者对问题的关注；
第三步，提出保护措施与呼吁，发出有力呼吁，增强文章的感染力和号召力，使文章结构完整。
【亮点词汇】
①essential必不可少的，极其重要的
②rely on依赖，依靠
③precious珍贵的
【高分句型】
①There is an old saying that water is the symbol of life.（同位语从句）
②Let's start with these small steps to protect our precious water resources together!（祈使句）
6．例文
Electricity is very important in our daily lives. In my family, we together make some rules about how to use electricity safely in our home. Here are six of them. First, switch off the electrical appliances when we don’t use them. Second, we mustn’t put paper beside a cooker. Third, we must keep the wire dry. Fourth, we mustn’t throw batteries anywhere. Fifth, remember to close the door of the fridge after we take things out of it. And the last, don’t touch electrical appliances with our wet hands. If we follow these rules, we will be safe and we can save a lot of electricity.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明电在日常生活中的重要性，引出制定用电安全家规；
第二步，按表格要点分别阐述必须遵守和禁止做的事；
第三步，说明遵守这些规则的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s daily lives在某人日常生活中
②make rules制定规则
③switch off关掉
④remember to do sth.记得做某事
[高分句型]
①If we follow these rules, we will be safe and we can save a lot of electricity.（条件状语从句）
7．例文
Role models make a difference to us. My mother is my role model. She is hard- working. Every day she gets up very early and goes to bed late. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, she is very helpful to others. When people around her have some difficulties, she’s always ready to help them to solve problems. All the people like her.
I’m lucky to have such a good mother. I love her and I will learn from her. She makes me know the importance of working hard. I will work hard and try my best to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”的榜样；
第二步，具体阐述母亲作为“我”的榜样的原因；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①make a difference产生影响
②get up起床
③not only…but also不仅……而且
④take care of照顾
[高分句型]
When people around her have some difficulties, she’s always ready to help them to solve problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文
My Wonderful Adventure with Reading
My favorite hobby is reading. It’s like a key to open many funny doors.
I began to love reading at six. My dad first read me stories about animals. Soon, I could read by myself. At first, I read simple picture books. Now I read all kinds of books: funny storybooks, science books about stars, and books about kids in other countries. I read for 20 minutes every night before bed.
Reading never makes me bored. When I read, I feel like I’m in the story. I can be a pirate finding treasure or a scientist discovering new plants. Books also teach me many new things, like how to be kind to others and why the sky is blue.
I hope to write my own book one day. Every book I read is a step to my dream. Whether I’m old or young, reading will always be my best friend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主，穿插“一般过去时”描述爱好的开始；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖爱好的介绍、发展过程、益处及未来展望，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山。直接点明爱好是阅读，并比喻为“打开有趣之门的钥匙”；
第二步，描述发展过程。从6岁开始，由父亲引导到自主阅读，书籍类型由简单到多样，并说明阅读习惯 (每晚20分钟)；
第三步，阐述益处。阅读带来乐趣 (身临其境)、知识 (如待人友善、自然现象) 和想象力；
第四步，展望未来。表达写书的梦想，并强调阅读是终身伙伴。
[亮点词汇]
①a key to... ……的钥匙
②by myself 独自
③all kinds of 各种各样的
④feel like 感觉像
⑤a step to... 通向……的一步
[高分句型]
①When I read, I feel like I’m in the story. (when引导时间状语从句；feel like + 从句)
②Every book I read is a step to my dream. (定语从句)
9．One possible version
Good afternoon, everyone,
I am glad to be here to give a speech.
Trees are very important to us. They give us oxygen, clean the air, and provide homes for animals. They also stop soil from washing away and make our world beautiful. To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely. We can recycle paper, use both sides of it, and plant more trees. Never waste paper, like throwing away notebooks with blank pages. Let’s work together to protect trees! Small actions can make a big difference. Tell your friends and family that they should join us. Remember, saving trees means saving our future!
Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头礼貌性问候；
第二步，具体阐述树木的重要性、如何保护树木并号召大家参与保护树木；
第三步，感谢聆听，礼貌结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……重要
②recycle paper回收纸
③work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①To protect trees, we should stop cutting them down freely.（不定式作目的状语）
②Tell your friends and family that they should join us.（祈使句+宾语从句）
10．One possible version:
My Healthy Life
Hello, dear friends! I’m Li Hua. I have healthy eating habits. For breakfast, I have an egg, some bread and a glass of milk. For lunch, I have tomato and beef noodles. After lunch, I have an apple. For dinner, I have rice, vegetables and chicken. I love carrots and fish. I think they are healthy because they are good for my eyes.
I also like doing sports. I run three times a week, and I play basketball with my friends on Saturdays. Doing sports can make me happy and healthy.
It is important to have a healthy lifestyle. We should eat more healthy food and do more exercise.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己健康的饮食习惯；
第二步，介绍自己好的运动习惯；
第三步，呼吁人们拥有健康的生活习惯很重要。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habit 良好的饮食习惯
②be good for 有益于
③do exercise 做运动
[高分句型]
①I think they are healthy because they are good for my eyes.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is important to have a healthy lifestyle.（It is+adj.+to do sth.：做某事是……的）
11．例文
Living a healthy life is very important. First, we should eat healthy food like fruits and vegetables and avoid junk food. Drinking enough water is also necessary. Second, regular exercise helps us stay strong. Finally, getting enough sleep and not staying up late are good for our health. Let’s follow these habits to live a healthy life!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文用一般现在时；
③提示：从饮食习惯、坚持运动、规律作息等方面介绍如何保持健康的生活方式，需要遵照所给要求，信息覆盖全面，适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明保持健康生活方式的重要性；
第二步，从饮食习惯、坚持运动、规律作息等方面介绍如何保持健康的生活方式，注意细节充分，三观正确；
第三步，号召大家一起养成健康生活的好习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①junk food 垃圾食物
②stay up late 熬夜
③be good for… 对……有好处
[高分句型]
①Drinking enough water is also necessary.（动名词作主语）
②Let’s follow these habits to live a healthy life!（不定式做目的状语）
12．例文
Let’s Protect Our Trees and Water! Dear classmates,
As the leader of the Eco-Club, I’m calling everyone to protect our trees and water! Trees clean the air and give us oxygen, while water is the source of life. However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.
Here’s how we can help: First, save paper to protect forests. Then, turn off taps and reuse water wisely. Besides, join tree-planting activities. Finally, never litter near rivers or lakes.
Remember, small actions matter! If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner. Start today!
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，旨在号召同学们保护树木和水资源；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时，描述客观事实和提出建议；
③提示：写作需涵盖树木和水的重要性、面临的环境问题、具体保护建议以及号召内容，注意语言简洁且具有号召力。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开篇点明身份，发出保护树木和水资源的号召，阐述树木和水对人类及地球的重要性；
第二步，指出当前存在的如乱砍滥伐、水污染等环境问题，提出具体的保护建议，如节约用纸、循环用水、参加植树活动、不向河湖乱扔垃圾等；
第三步，结尾再次强调个人行动的重要性，号召大家从现在开始行动起来。
【亮点词汇】
①the source of life生命之源
②save paper节约用纸
③reuse water循环用水
【高分句型】
①However, many trees are being cut down, and rivers are polluted by waste.（使用被动语态）
②If we all do our part, we can make Earth greener and cleaner.（条件状语从句）
13．例文
Dear Bill,
I am writing to share an exciting experience with you.
Last Friday, our school held an English speech competition in the school hall. The atmosphere was lively, with many students and teachers cheering for the contestants. I spoke about “The Importance of Reading” and tried my best to use clear pronunciation and confident body language. Surprisingly, I won the championship!
This experience taught me that practice makes perfect. I felt nervous at first, but I overcame my fear and improved my speaking skills. I’m so proud of myself!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：作文需要完整覆盖题干三个要点（比赛情况、个人表现、感受收获），并添加了适当细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题干顺序交代时间/地点/氛围/结果；
第二步，介绍你的表现情况；
第三步，描述你参赛的感受与收获。
[亮点词汇]
① atmosphere 气氛
② cheer for 为……加油
③ practice makes perfect 熟能生巧
[高分句型]
This experience taught me that practice makes perfect. （宾语从句）
14．例文：
As we all know, the earth is our home. We should protect it. At home, we can save water and turn off the lights when leaving rooms. At school, making a poster to call on more people to protect the earth is a good idea. Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes. In the community, we should sort the rubbish to make our environment clean. Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，围绕 “Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”主题，给出在家、在学校、在社区的环保建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明地球是我们的家园，引出保护地球的话题；
第二步，分别从在家（如节约用水、随手关灯等）、在学校（制作海报、纸张重复利用等）、在社区（垃圾分类等）三个方面阐述具体的环保行动；
第三步，结尾总结呼吁大家一起行动保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
① call on 号召
② take action 采取行动
③ in order to 为了
[高分句型]
① Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes.（because引导原因状语从句）
② Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.（in order to作目的状语）
15．
例文：
Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group.
Lucy’s favourite city is Chengdu. It lies in the southwest of China. It’s famous for pandas. Lucy loves to see lovely pandas and taste the local snacks. The food there is really delicious.
Sam likes Paris best. It is the capital of France. It is a city with many places of interest, such as the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. He thinks Paris is one of the most romantic cities. he can enjoy the beautiful scenery and rich culture there.
As for me, my favourite city is Beijing. It’s the capital of China. There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all over the world here.
In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上、下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给提示续写Lucy最喜欢的城市及原因；
第二步，介绍萨姆最喜欢的城市及原因。
第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的城市及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因……而出名
②places of interest 名胜古迹
③one of the most romantic cities 最浪漫的城市之一
④such as 例如
[高分句型]
①There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. (There be句型)
②The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all the world here. (that引导的表语从句)
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