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2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期末复习专项人教版（2024）
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．根据下面的提示，写一篇60词左右的短文，向大家介绍你最好的朋友，要写出他/她的外貌特征及爱好等情况。
提示词：straight, brown, hair, medium, height, glasses
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2．根据下面的提示，写一篇作文。要求文章连贯、简洁、通顺，不少于70词。
提示：①中国是一个很大的国家，各地的气候不同；
②分别说明南方和北方的气候特征及人们的相应活动；
③你个人认为天气最好的地方是哪里？为什么？
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3．假设你叫王丹，请根据下面中文提示给你的笔友 Andy写一封60词左右的英文信，介绍下你的假期。
（1）.去年夏天，我和我的爸妈乘火车去北京度假，在那待了一周；
（2）.天气晴朗，但是有点热；
（3）.参观了许多名胜古迹( places of interest)，如长城、故宫、颐和园等；
（4）.吃了各种不同的北京食物，很好吃；
（5）.乘飞机回家，玩得很愉快，明年还想去。
Dear Andy，
I’d like to tell you something about my last summer vacation.
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4．请根据下面中文提示，用英语写一篇有关你家的家规。60词左右。
早上必须7点钟起床，早餐和中餐必须在家吃，放学后不能与朋友一起玩，要回家做家庭作业，学习日的晚上不能看电视，晚上不能外出，周末必须去学钢琴。
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5．根据表格提示，以My Morning为题，写出自己上午的活动安排，60-80词。
get up 6:30
brush teeth and take a shower half an hour
have breakfast 7:00
go to school 7:30
take a bus half an hour
get to school 8:00
class starts 8:05
have lunch 12:00
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6．航天员杨利伟是我们心中的英雄，也是我们心中的明星。请你根据下面中文提示，写一篇60词左右的英文短文介绍杨利伟。
杨利伟52岁，中等身材，短而直的头发，头发非常黑，脸上常带着笑容(smile)，对别人非常友好，经常帮助别人；喜欢体育运动，深受别人喜欢。
My favorite star is Yang Liwei.
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7．Sam是一个美国人。他现在在中国学习，他的理想是成为一名医生，他喜欢中国的节日和美食。他正在收看龙舟比赛。他在中国交了很多朋友，但他也想家人。
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8．假设你是动物园的导游，请你根据下面的中文提示向来动物园的学生作介绍。60词左右。
1.欢迎来动物园，动物园里有许多有趣的动物；
2.熊！这些是树袋熊，它们来自澳大利亚，非常可爱，吃树叶( leaves)，喜欢白天睡觉；
3.这些大象来自非洲，又大又强壮，它们吃草，而且和家人生活在一起，非常友好；
4.这些熊猫来自中国四川，它们有点害羞、因此请保持安静。
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9．请根据以下中文信息，写一篇60词左右的英语短文。
江涛是一名15岁的中学生。家庭富裕，有车。但江涛每天早晨乘公汽上学。路上要花半个小时，但最近(recently)路上经常堵车(traffic jams)。江涛想坐爸爸的小汽车上学。但他爸爸不同意。请谈谈你的看法。
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10．假如你叫Sally，请阅读下面的海报，根据下面中文提示给Zhou Bing写一封60词左右的e-mail介绍自己，并要求参加学校音乐节。
Musicians Wanted for School Music Festival
We want three students for our school music festival.
Can you sing Can you dance
Can you play the piano, the drums, or the guitar
Please call Zhou Bing at 82725114.
1.我名叫莎丽，我是一名八年级学生，我非常喜欢音乐，我想参加学校音乐节；
2.我会打鼓，而且打得非常好，我也喜欢唱歌，我的同学喜欢我的歌;
3.我希望参加学校音乐节；
4.我的电话号码是82725114；邮箱地址是Sally@。
Dear Zhou Bing,
My name is Sally._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Sally
11．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Jim来信询问中国家规的情况，请你根据所给提示，给他写封信，谈谈你家都有哪些家规，你对这些家规有什么看法，并讲一讲原因。
提示：1. 饭后要洗碗；
2. 九点之前必须上床睡觉；
3. 不能看电视或玩电脑游戏。
要求：1. 内容要包括所有提示，并可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jim,
How is it going I have some rules at home.
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12．假如你是来自美国的Andy，现在在广州一所国际学校(an international school)读书，你在博客上写了一篇文章，内容包括你的年龄，兴趣爱好以及你们学校的相关介绍，想通过这篇文章与你兴趣爱好相同的朋友交友。请你用60-70个单词做自我介绍。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Andy’s blog
Hello, welcome to Andy’s blog. I’m from the USA．I’m thirteen years old. Now I’m studying in an international school in Guangzhou.
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Please write to me at 33982324@.
13．假设你是李凯，请根据下面的汉语提示以“My lifestyle生活方式”为题目写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的小短文。内容提示
1. 我叫李凯，今年14岁
2. 我每天打篮球，我想成为一名篮球明星；
3. 我通常早饭吃一个鸡蛋，午饭和晚饭吃肉和蔬菜；
4. 我喜欢喝牛奶；
5. 我不喜欢吃冰激凌，因为它对我的健康没有好处。
My lifestyle
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14．假如你是李华，上个星期天你们一家四口（爸爸、妈妈和弟弟）去了公园。请你根据表格中的提示内容，向你的英国朋友Mary发一封电子邮件，介绍一下你是如何度过上个星期天的。
天气 晴，有点风
活动 放风筝划船下国际象棋在树下野餐拍照等。
感受 ……
要求：1. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不少于60词可适当发挥。
参考词汇 picnic 野餐
Dear Mary,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
15．很多人都喜欢旅行，旅行能让我们开阔视野、放松身心。请以 “An interesting trip”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你经历过的一次有趣的旅行。
要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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16．假设你是Betty，你叔叔的新餐厅House of Dumplings这周日即将开业。请你根据下面表格中的信息帮他在网上发布一则广告，以吸引更多顾客。
Kinds Price (12 dumplings)
Specials Cabbage dumplings $6
Mutton dumplings $10
Beef and carrot dumplings $10
*12 kinds of dumplings and 5 kinds of soups
*Buy 24 dumplings and then get a free bowl of tomato soup
要求
1. 包含表格所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
House of Dumplings
House of Dumplings will open this Sunday.
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17．假如你是李华，上周日你度过了一个忙碌而又快乐的一天。请根据下面的表格内容和要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你星期日的活动及你的感受。
Time Activities(活动)
Morning take a walk with the dog; clean the house
Afternoon do homework; play with friends
Evening read books; watch TV
要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名、地名等）；
4.词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数，需抄到答题卡上）。
I am Li Hua. I had a happy and busy day last Sunday.
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18．假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Sam打算作为交换生来到你校进行学习，发邮件想了解你的学习与生活作息，并且他对你们学校的校规表示感兴趣。请你根据以下提示信息，用英语给他回一封邮件，介绍一下相关情况。
提示：
1.你的日常生活作息（至少两点）；
2.你们学校的校规。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于40词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Sam,
Thanks for your e-mail.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19．英语课上，同学们讨论上周末的活动情况。假如你是李明，请根据下面的表格提示，以 “My Weekend”为题，在班上用英语介绍你上周末的活动。
周六 上午 做作业，看书
下午 练钢琴，……（至少1点）
晚上 在电脑上看部新电影
周日 上午 和朋友踢足球
下午 购物，……（至少1点）
感受 ……（至少1点）
要求：
1. 用上所给的要点， 并适当发挥。
2. 书写认真，行文流畅，语句通顺。
3. 词数70左右。
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20．假如你是李明，去年暑假爸爸妈妈带你去了西安旅游。请你根据下列表格提示写篇英语短文，介绍一下你的旅游经历。
行程 爸爸开车去西安；
参观了钟楼、大雁塔等；
吃了美味的食物，并给爷爷奶奶买了礼物。
感受 ……
提示词:
by car；the Bell Tower；the Big Wild Goose Pagoda；buy gifts...
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数∶不少于50词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Xi’an with my parents
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文：
I want to introduce my best friend Li Lei to you. He’s the captain of the school basketball team. He has short straight brown hair.
He is of medium height. He is good at playing basketball. He often wears a pair of glasses. But his glasses are different from others’, because his glasses are funny. I think he is handsome. Do you think so
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：方向已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己的朋友；
第二步，其次，对自己的朋友进行详细的描述；最后，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①introduce sth to sb向某人介绍……
②be of medium height中等身高
③be good at擅长
④be different from与……不同
[高分句型]
①But his glasses are different from others’, because his glasses are funny.（状语从句：由because引导原因状语从句）
2．例文：
China is a large country, so the weather is different in different places. In the north, it is very cold in winter. People often like to skate. But in the south it is warm. It is very hot in summer both in the north and in the south. People often like to go swimming. I think the weather in Kunming is the best. It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，进入话题；
第二步，将天气及人物活动结合起来；
第三步，加以总结。
[亮点词汇]
①go swimming游泳
②take a vacation度假
[高分句型]
①I think the weather in Kunming is the best.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
②It is not too hot or too cold, so it is a good place to take a vacation.（状语从句：由so引导结果状语从句；不定式结构作后置定语）
3．例文
Dear Andy,
I’d like to tell you something about my last summer vacation. I spend the vacation in Beijing with my father. We went there by train and we stayed there for one week.
It was sunny but a little hot there. We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also tasted different foods in Beijing. They were delicious. We came back by plane. We had fun. And we plan to go there next year.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表明写作意图，要向他介绍自己去年的假期；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，可从参观的地方，吃的各种美食等方面来阐述；
第三步，书写结束语，表达自己的假期感受。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜古迹
② such as 例如
③ and so on 等等
④ plan to do sth. 计划做……
[高分句型]
We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on.（such as举例）
4．例文：
There are too many rules in my family. I have to get up at 7:00 in the morning. I have to eat breakfast and lunch at home. I can’t go out to play with my friends after school. I have to do my homework first. I can’t watch TV on school nights. I can’t go out at night and I have to learn to play the piano on weekends. I feel very tired.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，通过介绍“我家有很多规则”引出话题；
第二步，详细描述家里的规则；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①play with与某人玩耍
②learn to do sth学会做某事
[高分句型]
I can’t go out to play with my friends after school.（不定式表目的）
5．例文：
My Morning
I usually get up at 6: 30. And then I brush teeth and take a shower for half an hour. I have a quick breakfast at 7: 00. I go to school at 7: 30. It takes me half an hour to take a bus to school. I usually get to school at 8: 00. Our class starts at 8: 05. After four classes, I have lunch at 12: 00.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
根据所给提示，详细描述自己一上午的活动安排。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②take a shower洗澡
[高分句型]
①It takes me half an hour to take a bus to school.（句型：it takes sb+时间+to do sth）
6．例文：
My favorite star is Yang Liwei. He is 52 years old. He is of medium build. He has short and straight hair. The hair is black. He always smiles and he is friendly to others. He is helpful and ready to help others. He likes sports and do exercise regularly. He is very popular and I have been dreaming of being an astronaut like him. I hope my dream will come true.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，详细描述杨利伟的外貌特征和性格；
第二步，最后加以总结。
[亮点词汇]
①...of medium build中等身材
②is friendly to对某人友好
③dream of梦想
[高分句型]
①I hope my dream will come true.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
7．例文：
Sam is from America. He is studying in China. He hopes to be a doctor in the future. He is watching dragon boat races on TV. He thinks the Chinese festival is interesting. He also thinks Chinese food is very delicious. He makes many friends in China. But he still misses his families.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为小作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：内容已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
根据所给提示，详细介绍山姆的个人信息、爱好、理想等。
[亮点词汇]
①hope to do希望做某事
②dragon boat races赛龙舟
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①He thinks the Chinese festival is interesting.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
②He also thinks Chinese food is very delicious.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
8．例文：
Welcome to the zoo. I’m the guide of your trip.
There are many kinds of animals in the zoo. Look! These are koalas. They are from Australia. They are cute, aren’t they They eat leaves. They sleep in the day. The elephants are from Africa. They are big and strong. They eat grass and live with their families. They are very friendly. The pandas are from Sichuan, China. They are a little shy. So please keep quiet.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示欢迎，引出动物；
第二步，详细描述树袋熊、大象和熊猫。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of许多种
②in the day在白天
③keep quiet保持安静
[高分句型]
①There are many kinds of animals in the zoo.（句型：there be句型）
②They are cute, aren’t they （反意疑问句：前肯后否，谓语动词为be动词）
9．例文：
Jiang Tao is 15 years old. He is a middle school student. His family is rich and they have a nice car. But Jiang Tao takes a bus to school every morning. It takes him half an hour. He thinks it’s OK. But recently there are always traffic jams. Jiang Tao wants his father to drive him to school. His father doesn’t agree. Jiang Tao is sad. I think his father is right. More cars can make traffic worse.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述江涛的个人信息；
第二步，根据江涛和他爸爸之间的问题，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①take a bus乘坐公交车
②drive sb to sp开车送某人去某地
[高分句型]
①It takes him half an hour.（句型：it takes sb+时间）
②I think his father is right.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句，其中that已省略）
10．例文：
Dear Zhou Bing，
My name is Sally. I am a student in Grade 8. I like music very much. I heard that there would be a school music festival and I want to join it. I can play the drums very well. I also like singing. Many of my classmates enjoy my songs. I hope to be in the school music festival. Please call me at 82725114. My e-mail address is Sally@.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Sally
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，详细描述自己的个人信息，以及想参加音乐节的原因；
第二步，给出联系方式和祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①hope to do希望做某事
[高分句型]
①I heard that there would be a school music festival and I want to join it.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句）
11．
例文
Dear Jim,
How is it going I have some rules at home. For example, I should do the dishes after dinner. I must go to bed before 9 o’clock. I can’t watch TV or play computer games. I think some rules are useful, but some are too strict. I agree that I should do the dishes after dinner and it’s good for me to go to bed before 9 o’clock.
However, I don’t agree that I can’t watch TV or play computer games, because I really want to have a more relaxing life. I hope I will be allowed to watch TV or listen to music for a while on weekends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇信件；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述在家里有哪些家规；
第二步：陈述自己对于这些家规的看法；
第三步：讲述自己同意或不同意具体某项家规的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be good for...对……有好处
③be allowed to do sth.被允许做某事
[高分句型]
①I think some rules are useful, but some are too strict.（but引导的并列句）
②I agree that I should do the dishes after dinner and it’s good for me to go to bed before 9 o’clock.（that引导的宾语从句及and引导的并列句）
12．例文
Andy’s blog
Hello, welcome to Andy’s blog. I’m from the USA. I’m thirteen years old. Now I’m studying in an international school in Guangzhou. The school is very big and beautiful. There are many flowers and trees on both sides of the playground. The teachers there are very friendly and helpful. There are many clubs in our school. I join the Music Club because I like music very much. I also like playing football. After school, I usually play it with my friends on the playground. How colorful my school life is! Do you want to make friends with me
Please write to me at 33982324@.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，介绍学校信息以及自己的爱好。
[亮点词汇]
①be from 来自
②after school 放学后
③make friends 交朋友
[高分句型]
①There are many flowers and trees on the both sides of the playground（there be句型）
②I join the Music Club because I like music very much（because引导原因状语从句）
13．例文
My lifestyle
My name is Li Kai. I’m 14 years old. I’m a healthy boy because I have healthy habits. I play basketball every day. I want to be a basketball star. I usually have an egg for breakfast, and have meat and vegetables for lunch and dinner. I like drinking milk. I don’t like ice cream because it’s not good for my health.
All in all, if you have good habits like me, you’ll be very healthy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点，以“My lifestyle生活方式”为题目写一篇有关饮食和生活习惯的小短文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的个人信息；
第二步，具体描述你的生活方式；
第三步，书写结语，表达健康生活方式的益处。
[亮点词汇]
①play basketball打篮球
②want to do想要做
③be good for对……有益
[高分句型]
①I don’t like ice cream because it’s not good for my health.（because引导原因状语从句。）
②All in all, if you have good habits like me, you’ll be very healthy. （if引导条件状语从句。）
14．One possible version
Dear Mary,
I spent a happy day last Sunday. The weather was sunny but a little windy. I went to the park with my family and we did lots of interesting things there. I flew kites with my brother, and my parents went boating on the lake. My father also played chess with me. Then we had a picnic under the tree and we ate some delicious food. My father took some photos for us.
All in all, we enjoyed the trip to the park. It was relaxing for us.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重要。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍是如何度过上个星期天的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“天气、活动、感受等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达感受和美好的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①a little有点
②lots of许多
③play chess with和……下国际象棋
④have a picnic去野餐
[高分句型]
I went to the park with my family and we did lots of interesting things there.（and连接并列句）
15．例文：
An interesting trip
Last month, I went to Xi’an with my classmates.
On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings. They were wonderful. In the evening we had some special food. It was delicious. The next day, we went to some famous places in Xi’an, such as the bell tower and the drum tower. Of course, we took a lot of photos.
I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：以 “An interesting trip”为题，讲述自己这次旅行的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己去旅行的时间地点；
第二步，具体讲述旅行中的所见所闻等；
第三步，收尾，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②Chinese traditional paintings中国传统绘画
[高分句型]
①On the first day, we visited some museums and we saw a lot of Chinese traditional paintings.（and连接并列句）
②I think it was an interesting trip because I learned a lot about Chinese history.（because引导原因状语从句）
16．例文：
House of Dumplings
House of Dumplings will open this Sunday. Do you like dumplings Come to our restaurant, please! Here are 12 different kinds of dumplings and 5 kinds of soup. We have three great specials.
Would you like mutton dumplings or beef and carrot dumplings We sell 12 dumplings for only $10. You can also order cabbage dumplings. 12 of them are only $6. If you buy 24 dumplings, you can get a bowl of tomato soup for free.
Come here and you can enjoy delicious dumplings. I’m sure you’ll love all the food here.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于广告；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时要介绍清楚新餐厅的特色、价格及其他优惠等，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍House of Dumplings开业的时间、供应的食品级特色食品；
第二步，具体介绍特色食品的几个及相关优惠；
第三步，再次欢迎大家来品尝美味的饺子。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②enjoy 享用
[高分句型]
①Here are 12 different kinds of dumplings and 5 kinds of soup.（Here be句型）
②If you buy 24 dumplings, you can get a bowl of tomato soup for free.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③Come here and you can enjoy delicious dumplings.（祈使句+and+陈述句）
17．例文：
I am Li Hua. I had a happy and busy day last Sunday. In the morning, after I had breakfast, I took a walk with the dog. Then I cleaned the house with my parents. We had lunch at home at 12:00. After lunch, I had a rest. In the afternoon, I did my homework and played with friends. In the evening, I read books. Then I watched TV for an hour. I felt tired but happy.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的“介绍上周日的生活”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。主要介绍上周日的活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。以时间顺序，结合活动提示重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达这一天的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take a walk with the dog遛狗
②have a rest休息一下
③do homework做作业
[高分句型]
In the afternoon, I do homework and played with friends.（and连接并列句）
18．例文：
Dear Sam,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am very happy to tell you something about my life.
I always get up early every day and go to school on foot. We have 7 classes on weekdays. After school, I first finish my homework in the classroom and then play table tennis with my classmates.
There are some rules at school. For example, we should wear school uniform and we can’t eat in the classroom. The rules will help us develop good habits. I hope it will help you get to know our school better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中的“生活作息”和“校规”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，写信是为了介绍自己的生活；
第二步，具体阐述自己的日常生活作息；
第三步，举例介绍学校的校规，并总结收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①get up early早起
②on foot步行
③after school放学后
④for example例如
⑤develop good habits养成好习惯
[高分句型]
① After school, I first finish my homework in the classroom and then play table tennis with my classmates.（and then连接时间上表先后的动作）
②I hope it will help you get to know our school better.（省略that的宾语从句）
19．例文
My Weekend
Hi, everyone. I’m Li Ming. I had a great weekend.
On Saturday morning, I did my homework and read books. In the afternoon, I practiced playing the piano. And then I cleaned my room. In the evening, I watched a new movie on computer. It was interesting. On Sunday morning, I played soccer with my friends. We were happy. On Sunday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother. We bought milk, vegetables and fruit. After that I helped my mother cook dinner. The food was delicious!
What a happy weekend I had!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
② 时态：时态为一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时注意包含所有要点，写事件并表达感受，围绕主题展开可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题；
第二步，具体描写所做的事情及感受；
第三步，书写结语，总结周末。
[亮点词汇]
① practice doing练习做某事
[高分句型]
① What a happy weekend I had!（感叹句）
20．例文：
Last summer vacation, I had a trip to Xi’an with my parents. My father drove us and we enjoyed the beautiful scenery along the way. After arriving in Xi’an, we first visited the Bell Tower, then the Big Wild Goose Pagoda and other places of interest. How beautiful they were! At noon, we ate a lot of delicious food in Xi’an Food Street. In the afternoon, we went to the shopping street to buy gifts for my grandparents.
What a happy day! Although we were tired, we had a good time.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意重点介绍“行程”内容，不要遗漏“感受”部分。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，点明去年暑假和父母去西安旅游；
第二步，介绍在西安的行程，包括参观名胜古迹、吃美食、买礼物等；
第三步，阐述个人感受。
[亮点词汇]
①places of interest名胜古迹
②buy sth. for sb.为某人买某物
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①How beautiful they were!（How引导的感叹句）
②Although we were tired, we had a good time.（Although引导的让步状语从句）
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