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【期末考点突破】专题12 书面表达20篇（仁爱科普版2024）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．购物是我们日常生活中一项重要的活动，人们几乎每天都要买东西，但怎么合理购物，理性消费，做一个聪明的购物者呢？假如你们的校刊英语专栏正在以“How to Do Shopping Wisely ”为题开展征文活动，请你根据写作要求，结合自身实际谈谈你是如何聪明地购物的。
How to Do Shopping Wisely
Before shopping Make a shopping list Make shopping plans
During shopping Be careful Think again
Others …
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：first第一；second第二；last but not least最后同样重要的是
How to Do Shopping Wisely
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how to shop wisely and be a smart shopper Here are my ways.
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2．如今，很多人喜欢在互联网上点餐。老师要求你们在下周一的英语课上就互联网点餐这一现象，谈谈它的利与弊。请你根据写作要求，谈谈你的看法。
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad
Advantages (优点) 方便 (convenient) 快捷，品种多样，节省时间……
Disadvantages (缺点) 塑料包装袋 (plastic bags) 对环境 (environment) 不利，经常吃外卖食品 (takeaway) 对健康不好……
Your idea ……
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3)词数70个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad
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3．假如你是康康，你和家人上周去了山上露营，请你根据写作要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的旅行经历。
When did you go there Last weekend
Where did you go camping In the mountain
Who did you go with My family
How did you go there By car
What was the weather like It was sunny and windy
What did you do Set up the tent, got water, cooked lunch and went fishing
How was your trip Wonderful
写作要求：
(1)短文需要包含表格中所提示的全部要点，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3) 词数70个左右。
A Trip to the Mountain
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4．假如你是小明，请你根据以下内容提示写一篇题为“A Trip to the West Hill Park”的英语短文。
内容提示：
(1)时间：上周末；
(2)参加者：你和你的同班同学；
(3) 地点: 西山公园 (the West Hill Park);
(4)活动：骑自行车 (我途中摔倒了……)、爬山、做游戏；
(5) 感受。
写作要求：
(1)文中需要包含以上提示信息，可适当发挥，书写规范；
(2)文中不得出现本人姓名或校名；
(3) 词数70个左右。
参考词汇: get hurt 受伤; tired 疲劳的
A Trip to the West Hill Park
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5．近日，I Show Speed关于重庆的旅游直播吸引了国内外网友对于重庆这座“赛博朋克”城市非常感兴趣，而李华，他的美国笔友Peter想要了解李华在重庆的学习生活。假如你就是李华，请根据以下提示，给Peter写一封回信。
提示内容：
上学交通 他通常乘坐公共汽车上学，大约花半个小时。
学校规则 上学不能迟到，上课要认真听讲
课外活动 可以做自己喜欢的事情，比如打篮球踢足球
学习感受 喜欢学校生活，在学校有很多朋友
要求：
1．书写规范，包含全部要点，适当发挥;
2．文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;
3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：carefully(仔细地，认真地)
Dear Peter,
I am glad to get a letter from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．每年4月22日是世界地球日。你校英语社拟开展以“Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”为主题的英语演讲活动，向全校师生发出共同保护地球的倡议。请你根据下列要点提示，写一篇70词左右的英语演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
As we all know, the earth is our home.
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Thank you for your listening.
7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 对中国人的购物方式很感兴趣，请你写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下你和家人的购物习惯，包括经常购物的地点、购物前的准备、购物时的注意事项等。
要求：
包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
词数：60 - 80 词；
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I'm glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．地球是我们的家园，然而现在地球环境正面临严重的问题。请你以“How to Protect the Earth”为题，写一篇短文，介绍地球面临的问题，并给出相应的解决办法。
提示：
1.地球面临的问题：水污染、空气污染、垃圾等；
2.解决办法：节约用水、绿色出行、减少使用塑料制品、多种树等；
3.呼吁大家共同努力保护地球。
要求：
1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 80—100词左右；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
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9．近来，为了进一步加强学生在校的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。
作业 按时完成 手机 禁止进校
睡眠 约9小时 阅读 一周一本好书
锻炼 一天1小时 安全 1. 不打架 2.…… (至少补充一点)
你的看法 ……
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.
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What about your school rules Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．俗话说“无规矩不成方圆”，请用英语写出你学校的4条校规，并谈一谈你的看法。
要求：
1.语句通顺，语意连贯；
2.不少于60词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Different schools have different rules.
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11．假如你是李华，你上周星期天下午和志愿者们一起参加了去儿童医院慰问孩子们的社会实践活动。请你根据以下提示，给你的父亲写一封电子邮件，向他汇报此次活动的情况。
要求: 1. 意思连贯、符合逻辑、90词左右, 电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
2. 文中不能出现真实的学校名和姓名。
Dear dad,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．五一劳动节“May Day”即将来临，一位名叫Jack的交换生将在假期来到成都，并住在你家。假设你是李华，请根据图片信息写一封信，简单介绍一下你自己和你的生活方式，及家庭规则。以便Jack能了解你，从而更快适应这里的生活。
要求：1. 内容须包括提示的所有信息，适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等个人信息；
3. 词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
Dear Jack,
May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
13．假如你叫李华，你即将在成都大熊猫繁殖研究基地接待一群国际交流生，为他们介绍大熊猫的相关信息以及入园后游客的注意事项。请根据图中提示，用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
1.陈述规则时，适当阐述其中一条规则的遵守理由；
2.语句连贯，词数 80 左右(作文开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：bamboo 竹子
I’m your tour guide—Li Hua today! Welcome to the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding! It’s nice to meet you all here. First, let me introduce you something about pandas.
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Let’s start our visit now!
14．Write an article with around 80 words about an unforgettable outdoor activity you experienced. Your writing should include the following points:
1. what the outdoor activity was;
2. what you did or experienced during the activity;
3. why it was unforgettable or what you learned.
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15．你已进入中学一个多学期了，想必你的中学生活一定充实又精彩，假设你是Li Hua，你报名参加了学校的英语征文比赛，征文主题为“My School Life”，请根据以下提示，写一篇征文。
My school life
School Activities School Rules Healthy Life
Go hiking around Nanhu Lake Colorful after-school activities Wear school uniforms ... Eat healthy food ...
注意：
（1）短文用一般现在时，必须包括图中所有要点，需适当发挥；
（2）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数）：
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank:
Go hiking around Nanhu Lake环南湖远足 after-school activities课外活动
My School Life
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I have been a middle school student for half a year._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
16．3月21日是 “国际森林日”，你校举办了以“保护树木”为主题的一系列校园活动。假如你是李华，请你作为学生代表，用英文写一篇演讲稿，向全校师生分享此次活动，并号召同学们保护树木。
要点提示：
1.活动时间、目的；
2.活动内容：听讲座； …… (至少补充1个活动);
3.你的感受。
参考词汇：讲座 lecture
要求：
1 . 80词左右；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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Thank you!
17．李华参加学校“Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou”的英语征文活动，介绍美丽广州以及树木的重要性，并倡导保护树木。请根据以下表格提示，帮助李华完成这份稿件。
注意：
1.作文内容必须包含表格中提示的所有信息，按要求适当补充拓展。
2.请用不少于70词的英文单词完成你所需要写的部分，已经给出的内容不算入总词数。
3.请在答卷规定范围内写作，超出范围的内容无效。
4.作文中不可透露自己的真实姓名和学校。
Introduction of Guangzhou ① the capital city of Guangdong ② colorful flowers ③ full of trees
Importance (重要性) of Trees ④ make... beautiful ⑤ be home to ⑥ take in… ⑦produce...
Ways to protect trees ⑧ tell others the importance of trees ⑨请补充至少一点
Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou
Guangzhou, known as the Flower City in the south of China, is becoming greener and more beautiful. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
18．深圳是一座著名的旅游城市。但旅游业的发展也带来了一些环境问题。假如你是李华，你所在的学校英语校报进行征文比赛。请你以“Green tourism in Shenzhen”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇文章介绍深圳的旅游以及在旅行中如何保护环境，最后呼吁大家共同保护深圳的环境。
要点：
1. 地理位置：位于中国的南部；
2. 特色景点及活动：①去锦绣中华感受传统文化；
②……
③……
3. 游客如何在旅游时保护环境：①不要乱扔垃圾；
②……
4. 呼吁大家共同保护深圳环境。
参考词汇：Splendid China锦绣中华
要求：
1. 标点正确，书面整洁；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚，行文连贯；
4. 80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Green tourism in Shenzhen
Shenzhen is famous for its tourism in China.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
19．本期班会主题是“如何节约用水”，作为组长的你将代表小组发言，请根据下列提示，以 “How to Save Water” 为题，写一篇英语发言稿。
keep water running take a . . shower collect. . . reuse water
要求：
1. 短文必须包括提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、姓名、班级等信息；
3. 词数80词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总次数）。
How to Save Water
Water is around us. It’s important in our life.
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20．假设你是李华，3月22日是世界水日，你们学校将开展节水主题活动，你将作为代表发言，带领同学们认识水的重要性，呼吁同学们保护每一滴水，请以此作一篇发言稿。
写作要求：
1.文中须包含图表所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. As we all know, water is important to us.
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Every drop of water counts! What are you waiting for Let’s take actions from now on.
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《【期末考点突破】专题12 书面表达20篇（仁爱科普版2024）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．例文：
How to Do Shopping Wisely
Shopping is an important activity in our life. But how to shop wisely and be a smart shopper Here are my ways.
First, I always make a shopping list before going shopping. I write down what I need and only buy things on the list. It can help me save time and money. I always make a plan, too. I know how much money to pay. Second, I am careful. I check different shops to look for the best price. And I think again before I make payments. Last but not least, if we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it.
Let’s be a smart shopper and do shopping wisely!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题（已给出）；
第二步，根据提示信息详细介绍如何明智购物；
第三步，呼吁明智购物。
[亮点词汇]
①save time and money省时省钱
②look for寻找
③share sth with sb和某人分享某物
④a smart shopper聪明的购物者
[高分句型]
Last but not least, if we can share something with our brothers or sisters, there is no need to buy it. (if引导条件状语从句)
2．例文：
Ordering Food Online, Good or Bad
Nowadays, many people like ordering food online. Is it good or bad
Some people think it’s good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. It can help save time. Also, the food is cheap and delicious. Besides, we have many kinds of food to choose from.
However, other people have different ideas. They say eating takeaway too often is bad for health, because takeaway may not be fresh food. And the plastic bags of the food are bad for the environment.
I think we can order food online sometimes, but not too often.
【详解】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：对网上点餐的利与弊进行介绍，并阐述自己的看法；适当增加细节，注意条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，分别介绍网上点餐的优点；
第二步，分别介绍网上点餐的缺点；
第三步，表达自己的意见。
[亮点词汇]
①many kinds of food许多种食物
②be bad for对……不好
③help save time帮助节省时间
[高分句型]
Some people think it’s good to order food online because it is convenient and fast. (it的固定句型、because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
A Trip to the Mountain
Last weekend, I camped in the mountain with my family by car. The weather was sunny and windy.
First, when we got there, I helped my father set up the tent. Then, we found a big river. The water was clean, so we got some water. Next, we helped my mother cook and had lunch together. The food was delicious. Later, I went fishing with my father and got a lot of fish. Finally, we returned to our home.
The trip was wonderful and we were happy that day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述露营经历；
②时态：全文采用一般过去时；
③提示：严格按表格要点展开，包含时间、地点、人物、交通方式、天气、活动及感受，语句简洁连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题（时间/地点/人物/交通方式）；
第二步：按活动顺序描写（搭帐篷→取水→做饭→钓鱼）；
第三步：总结感受（wonderful/happy）
[亮点词汇]
①set up the tent搭帐篷
②got water取水
③went fishing钓鱼
[高分句型]
①The water was clean, so we got some water.（so连接结果状语从句）
②Later, I went fishing with my father and got a lot of fish.（and连接并列动作）
4．例文
A Trip to the West Hill Park
Last weekend, I went to the West Hill Park with my classmates. The weather was windy and cool.
When we got to the park, we got some bikes. Then we rode bikes around the park. We sang songs and told stories along the way. Suddenly, I fell down from my bike. But I didn’t get hurt. Then, we climbed the mountain and played games. Finally, we returned home.
I was very tired but happy. I hope to go there again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了一次去西山公园的旅行经历；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，因为是描述上周末发生的事情；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括时间、参加者、地点、活动和感受，考生需确保这些要点都被涵盖，并适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图和背景。简要介绍上周末和同班同学去了西山公园；
第二步，具体阐述旅行内容。按照时间顺序，描述骑自行车（包括途中摔倒的情况）、爬山和做游戏等活动；
第三步，书写结语。表达对这次旅行的感受，如虽然累但很开心等。
[亮点词汇]
①fell down from 从……摔倒
②get hurt 受伤
③return home 回家
[高分句型]
①When we got to the park, we got some bikes.（时间状语从句）
②Then, we climbed the mountain and played games.（and连接并列成分）
5．例文
Dear Peter,
I am glad to get a letter from you. I’m happy that you’re interested in my life in Chongqing. Let me tell you about it.
I usually go to school by bus. It takes about half an hour. We have some school rules. For example, we can’t be late for school and we must listen carefully in class. After class, I can do what I like. I often play basketball or football with my friends. I like my school life. I have many friends here. We have a good time together.
What about your life Can you tell me something about it
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己在重庆的生活，适当增加细节，使文章通顺连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容介绍自己的学习生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②be late for迟到
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
For example, we can’t be late for school and we must listen carefully in class. (and连接的并列句)
6．例文：
As we all know, the earth is our home. We should protect it. At home, we can save water and turn off the lights when leaving rooms. At school, making a poster to call on more people to protect the earth is a good idea. Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes. In the community, we should sort the rubbish to make our environment clean. Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，围绕 “Let’s Protect Our Earth Together”主题，给出在家、在学校、在社区的环保建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明地球是我们的家园，引出保护地球的话题；
第二步，分别从在家（如节约用水、随手关灯等）、在学校（制作海报、纸张重复利用等）、在社区（垃圾分类等）三个方面阐述具体的环保行动；
第三步，结尾总结呼吁大家一起行动保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
① call on 号召
② take action 采取行动
③ in order to 为了
[高分句型]
① Also, we can reuse paper because it is an effective way to lower energy consumption during paper-making processes.（because引导原因状语从句）
② Let’s take action to protect our earth from now on in order to create a sustainable and beautiful living environment for future generations.（in order to作目的状语）
7．例文
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I’m glad to hear from you. You ask me about the shopping habits of Chinese people. Now, let me tell you something about how my family and I usually shop.
My family often go shopping at the supermarket near our home. Before shopping, we always make a list of the things we need. This helps us save time and money. When we are shopping, we check the prices and the quality of the products carefully. We also pay attention to the expiration dates. Sometimes, we look for things on sale to get better deals.
I also like shopping online. It is very convenient. I can buy things at any time and they will be delivered to my home.
What about your shopping habits I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：这是一封电子邮件，属于书信体裁，话题围绕日常生活中的购物习惯展开；
②时态：主要使用一般现在时，用于描述经常性、习惯性的动作和行为，符合介绍日常购物习惯这一语境；
③提示：需涵盖经常购物地点、购物前准备、购物时注意事项等要点，可适当发挥。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开头回应笔友来信，引出要介绍购物习惯的话题；
第二步，先说明家人常去家附近超市购物，阐述购物前列清单的准备工作；接着讲述购物时仔细检查价格、质量和保质期，以及关注促销活动等注意事项；最后补充自己喜欢网购及网购的便利性；
第三步；结尾询问笔友的购物习惯，表达期待回信。
【亮点词汇】
①hear from收到……的来信
②pay attention to注意
③on sale打折出售
④get better deals获得更优惠的价格
【高分句型】
①Before shopping, we aways make a list of the things we need.（定语从句）
②I can buy things at any time and they will be delivered to my home.（使用被动语态）
8．例文
How to Protect the Earth
The earth is our home, but it is facing serious problems now. Water pollution is a big problem. Factories pour waste water into rivers and lakes. Also, the air is polluted by factories and cars. And there is a lot of rubbish everywhere.
To solve these problems, we can do many things. First, we should save water. For example, turn off the tap when we brush our teeth. Second, we should choose green transportation, like riding bikes or taking buses. Third, we should use fewer plastic products. Finally, we can plant more trees to make the air clean.
Let’s work together to protect our earth. Only in this way can we have a better living environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇以“如何保护地球”为主题的说明文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括地球面临的问题、解决办法以及呼吁行动，考生应围绕这些要点展开，并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：简要介绍地球的现状。
第二步：详细阐述地球面临的问题，如水污染、空气污染和垃圾问题，并提出相应的解决办法。
第三步：结尾部分，呼吁大家共同努力保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
①face serious problems面临严重的问题
②use fewer plastic products减少使用塑料制品
③work together共同努力
[高分句型]
①To solve these problems, we can do many things. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Only in this way can we have a better living environment. (only引导的倒装句)
9．例文
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.
We must finish our homework on time. We can’t bring mobile phones to school. We should get about 9 hours’ sleep a day. We must read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. I think these school rules are good for us. We must follow them.
What about your school rules Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中学校新规则的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单问候朋友，说明写信意图，引出重点内容“学校新校规”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。简述学校新校规并谈论一下你对新校规的个人看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到对方来信的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do很高兴做某事
②share sth with sb和某人分享某事
③on time准时
④fight with sb和某人打架
⑤go swimming alone独自去游泳
⑥be good for对……有好处
⑦what about… 做某事怎么样
[高分句型]
①Doing exercise is also important. (动名词作主语)
②Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. (祈使句)
③I think these school rules are good for us. (宾语从句)
10．例文
Different schools have different rules. There are many rules in our school. I think some rules are important and we must follow them. For example, we can’t be late. And we must keep quiet in the classroom and library. But I think some rules are too strict. For example, we can’t listen to music in class. We can’t eat outside. But I think all the rules are useful because they are good for us.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：主要使用“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据题目要求，需列举4条校规并表达个人看法，注意语句通顺、逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用给定句子开头，说明学校有不同规则；
第二步，写出4条校规，分点说明哪些规则重要或严格；
第三步，总结规则的意义。
[亮点词汇]
① for example 比如
② keep quiet 保持安静
③ be good for 对……有益
[高分句型]
But I think all the rules are useful because they are good for us.（宾语从句，原因状语从句）
11．范文:
Dear dad,
It was sunny last Sunday afternoon. I went to the Children’s Hospital with some volunteers. We went there on foot.
On the way to the hospital, we bought them some beautiful toys and fresh fruit. After we got there, we did many things to help the sick children. Some of us played games with them. Some of us told them stories. And some of us sang and danced for them. All the children were very happy!
After we got home, we were all tired but happy. We think it’s meaningful to do this activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山介绍基本信息；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍活动内容；
第三步，书写结语，抒发感情。
[亮点词汇]
①on foot步行
②fresh新鲜的
③meaningful有意义的
[高分句型]
①After we got there, we did many things to help the sick children.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②We think it’s meaningful to do this activity.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．[范文]
Dear Jack,
May Day is coming! I am very happy to hear that you’ll come to Chengdu. Let me tell you something about myself and my family.
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute. I usually play basketball with my friends. I play it three times a week. It is relaxing.
As for eating habits, I eat fruits and vegetables every day. Because they are good for my health. I hardly have junk food. I also go to bed and get up early.
In my family, we must treat others with respect. Everyone needs to do housework, like cleaning the room.
I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. I’m looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借由五一旅行的话题来引出自我介绍和家庭规则介绍。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——个人信息和家庭规则等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“祝我们在成都玩的愉快”的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益
②look forward to doing期待着做
[高分句型]
①I hope you can have fun with us in Chengdu. (宾语从句)
13．例文
I’m your tour guide—Li Hua today! Welcome to the Chengdu Research Base of Giant Panda Breeding! It’s nice to meet you all here. First, let me introduce you something about the panda.
Pandas live in the bamboo forests of China. They love to eat bamboo. Most pandas are black and white with round faces. They are shy and quiet. They can climb trees very well.
Pandas are very important because there are only a small number of them. We need to save them. We can make safe places for them and study how they grow.
When you visit our base, please follow these rules. First, don’t feed them because it can make them sick. Second, please do not litter everywhere. Also, stay behind the lines for your safety.
Let’s start our visit now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。。
[写作步骤]
第一步，自我介绍，表明身份并引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍大熊猫的基本信息、重要性及保护方法；
第三步，具体介绍基地的参观规则。
[亮点词汇]
①love to do sth喜欢做某事
②need to do sth需要做某事
[高分句型]
①Pandas are very important because there are only a small number of them. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When you visit our base, please follow these rules. (when引导的时间状语从句)
14．例文
An Unforgettable Outdoor Activity
Last summer, I went on a hiking trip in the mountains with my classmates. We climbed up the steep paths, enjoying the beautiful scenery along the way. When we reached the top, the view was amazing.
During the hike, we helped each other when someone was tired or in trouble. We also took breaks to have snacks and share stories.
This activity was unforgettable because it taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance. It made me realize that with the support of friends, we can overcome difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，描述了一次难忘的户外活动。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”，因为描述的是去年夏天发生的事情。
③提示：讲述一次难忘的户外活动，包括活动内容和从中获得的感悟。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明时间和活动，即去年夏天和同学们去山里徒步旅行。
第二步，中间具体描述徒步过程，如攀爬陡峭小路、欣赏风景、相互帮助、休息分享等。
第三步，结尾说明活动难忘的原因，强调团队合作和毅力的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①unforgettable难忘的
②steep陡峭的
③scenery风景
④perseverance毅力
[高分句型]
①We climbed up the steep paths, enjoying the beautiful scenery along the way.（现在分词短语作伴随状语）
②This activity was unforgettable because it taught me the importance of teamwork and perseverance.（because引导的原因状语从句）
15．例文
My School Life
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I have been a middle school student for half a year. My school life is busy but colorful. Every month, we go hiking around Nanhu Lake. It helps us relax and enjoy nature. After school, there are many activities like basketball clubs and art classes.
We must follow school rules, such as wearing school uniforms. Teachers encourage us to eat healthy food like fruits and vegetables. I think a healthy body makes study easier.
I love my school life because it teaches me to balance work and fun.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍自己的个人信息；
第二步，具体从课外活动、学校规则和健康生活方面介绍学校生活；
第三步，总结自己对中学生活的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②such as比如
③encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I think a healthy body makes study easier. (宾语从句)
②I love my school life because it teaches me to balance work and fun.（because引导原因状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear teachers and fellow students,
March 21st is International Forest Day. To raise our awareness of tree-protection, our school held a series of activities.
First, we attended a lecture given by a forestry expert. He shared amazing facts about the importance of trees, like how they produce oxygen and provide habitats for wildlife. Then, we participated in a poster-making competition. We designed vivid posters with slogans to call on everyone to protect trees.
These activities were really eye-opening. Trees are crucial to our earth. Let’s take action and contribute to protecting our green friends. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写一下本次活动的时间和目的。
第二步，再写一下活动的具体内容。
第三步，最后呼吁大家保护树木。
[亮点词汇]
①a series of 一系列
②call on 呼吁
③take action 采取行动
[高分句型]
①To raise our awareness of tree-protection, our school held a series of activities.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Let’s take action and contribute to protecting our green friends.（祈使句）
17．例文
Protecting trees for a greener Guangzhou
Guangzhou, known as the Flower City in the south of China, is becoming greener and more beautiful. As the capital of Guangdong, it is famous for colorful flowers and green trees all year round. Trees make our city look like a huge garden. They are home to birds and other animals, creating a lively environment. More importantly, trees take in harmful gases and produce fresh air for us. To protect these green friends, we should tell people how important trees are. Planting new trees every spring is also a good idea.
Let’s start from small things: never carve on tree trunks and reuse paper to save trees. If everyone takes action, our city will be even greener!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍美丽的广州；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍树木的重要性；
第三步，给出保护树木的建议并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for以……而闻名
②all year round全年
[高分句型]
①To protect these green friends, we should tell people how important trees are.（不定式作目的状语）
②If everyone takes action, our city will be even greener!（if引导的条件状语从句）
18．例文
Green tourism in Shenzhen
Shenzhen is famous for its tourism in China. Located in the south of China, it attracts millions of visitors every year. There are many wonderful places to explore. For example, you can visit Splendid China to experience traditional culture. You can also enjoy the beautiful beaches in Dameisha or take a walk in the Mangrove Nature Reserve. However, tourism causes some environmental problems. To protect Shenzhen, tourists should follow these rules: First, do not litter. Second, use public transport instead of private cars. Third, avoid damaging plants in parks.
Let’s work together to keep Shenzhen green and clean!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，介绍深圳的地理位置；
第二步，根据题干的要点，介绍深圳的特色景点及活动，给出环保建议；
第三步，呼吁大家共同保护深圳环境并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of在……的南边
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①There are many wonderful places to explore.（there be型）
②Let’s work together to keep Shenzhen green and clean!（祈使句）
19．例文
How to Save Water
Water is around us. It’s important in our life. However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.
First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands. It’s a waste of water. Second, take a quick shower instead of a long one. Shorter showers can save a lot of water. Third, don’t throw away water bottles with water in them. We can collect the water for later use. Last but not least, we can reuse rainwater to water flowers. It’s a good way to save water.
Let’s save water from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，围绕“如何节约用水”展开；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”，用于阐述日常节约用水的做法；
③提示：需根据图片信息提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，要围绕节约用水的方法展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明水在日常生活中的重要性，引出节约用水的必要性；
第二步，依次阐述具体的节约用水方法，对应图片信息；
第三步，结尾呼吁大家从现在开始节约用水。
[亮点词汇]
①water shortage 水资源短缺
②throw away 扔掉
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①However, water shortage is becoming a serious problem, so we must save water.（so连接因果并列句）
②First, don’t leave the water running when we wash our hands.（when引导的时间状语从句）
20．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. As we all know, water is important to us. In our life, we use water for drinking, cooking, washing, cleaning and watering flowers. But there’s little water on the earth, so we should save water.
To help save water, we can do many things at home. For example, wash as many clothes as possible at a time. Reuse water from washing to clean rooms. Don’t take long showers. Don’t keep water running while brushing teeth. As students, we can save water at school as well. Make a poster about saving water. Turn off the tap after using water. Collect rainwater to clean classrooms.
Every drop of water counts! What are you waiting for Let’s take actions from now on.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍日常生活中水的使用；
第二步，介绍如何节约用水；
[亮点词汇]
①as...as possible尽可能……
②while brushing teeth刷牙时
③as well也
[高分句型]
①To help save water, we can do many things at home. (不定式表目的)
②But there’s little water on the earth, so we should save water. (so引导结果状语从句)
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