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【期末考点突破】专题13 书面表达20篇 （仁爱科普版）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．安全对于我们每个人都很重要。为进一步增强学生的安全意识，提高学生的自我保护能力，你校正在开展以“How to Keep Safe in Our Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示内容，写一份英文演讲稿。内容要点：
1. 校园安全；
2. 交通安全；
3. 食品安全；
4. 其他…… (至少补充一点)
注意：
1. 词数80-100，已经给出的部分不计入总词数；
2. 演讲稿必须包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
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That’s all. Thank you.
2．假设你是李华，上周你和你的父母去山西大同进行了为期两天的旅行。你的英国好友Nate对大同很感兴趣，发邮件询问你的旅行经历，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件回复他。
大同之旅
第一天 第二天
◆参观云冈石窟 (Yungang Grottoes) ◆参观大同煤炭博物馆(Datong Coal Museum) ◆参观五岳之一——北岳恒山(Mount Hengshan) ◆拍了许多照片 ◆品尝美食：山西刀削面 (Shanxi Sliced Noodles)、过油肉 (Fried Boiled Pork with Black Fungus)
写作要求：1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3. 80词左右。
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3．假定你是李明，你校英文网站正在开展以“A(n) ________ trip”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：1)请补全标题，如unforgettable, meaningful等；
2)你旅行中的经历；
3)你的感悟。
写作要求：1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100左右。
A(n) ________ trip
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4．中国是自行车大国，无论休闲、娱乐、上学、工作，自行车都是人们最喜爱的交通方式之一。与小汽车相比，自行车有很多优点，如方便、便宜、易停放、节约能源、没有污染等。骑自行车上学也是中学生最喜爱的方式之一，但骑自行车也有一定的危险。据统计，我国每年的自行车事故不少，有些人在事故中受伤、死亡。请根据以上提示，写一篇短文，谈谈骑自行车有哪些优点以及骑车时怎样保证交通安全。
要求：80 个词左右，不可逐句翻译。
提示词：popular, afford(买得起), cause, protect
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5．无论在生活中，还是在学习中，保持好心情很重要。请根据以下要点和要求，以“Stay in a Good Mood”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
要点：1. 为什么保持好心情对我们来说很重要：
2. 什么事情有利于我们保持好心情：
3. 当你心情不好时，你常通过什么方式使自己心情好起来。
要求：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；词数90左右。
Stay in a Good Mood
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6．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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7．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules Around Us”. (以“我们身边的防火规则”为题写一篇至少含60个词的短文，要求意思明确，内容连贯。)
1. What should you do before you go into some public places
2. What will you do when you meet a fire
3. What do you think is the most important thing to do during a fire
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8．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
学校每年组织远足活动 (如：春游和秋游等)，下周学校将举行“Our school trip”为主题的英语沙龙活动，请根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文和同学们分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
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9．现在马路上的车辆越来越多，交通事故也频繁发生。假如你们学校校刊英语专栏以“How to avoid (避免) traffic accidents”为题面向学生进行征文。请你根据下面的写作要点，用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿。
要点：
1.Why accidents happen.
2.Advice on avoiding accidents.
3.Wishes for students.
要求：
1.文中须包含以上提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
How to avoid traffic accidents
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10．好的心情对我们的生活和学习都十分重要，假如你们学校的英语俱乐部组织了一次征文大赛，主题就是如何保持好心情，请你根据以下提示，以How to keep a good mood (心情)为题用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
How to keep a good mood 1.smile
2. talk about your problems
3. wear bright-colored clothes
4. do something good
要求：
1.词数80左右(作文开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
How to keep a good mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better.
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11．假设你是李华，打算在今年暑假当中去北京旅游，请根据下图提示，给你的英国笔友Lucy写一封80词左右的电子邮件，分享你的旅行计划。
要求:
1. 文章中不得出现真实的校名和人名，要有条理，语句通顺，可适当拓展;
2. 邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
How are you ___________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．为了增强学生的交通安全意识，帮助学生养成良好的交通行为习惯，学校英语报正在举办“交通安全”主题征文活动。假设上周在你校门口发生了一起交通事故，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。
要点：
1. 描述这起交通事故(时间：周一上午7点50分；地点：校门口；事故：一名学生骑车太快，拐弯时与一辆汽车相撞，头部和腿部受伤)。
2. 结合此事向同学们提出安全骑行建议。
要求：
1. 要点全面，表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
2. 词数100词左右。
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的学校、班级和姓名。
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13．假设你是李华，正月你参观了平和南山古城举办的“梦回明朝，迎春游园”穿越体验文娱活动。请你给你的笔友Tom写一封信，介绍南山古城的特色亮点以及你参观古城时的所见所闻，要求根据提示信息，并适当增加观点。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，词数80左右，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
提示词：Nanshan Ancient City南山古城；the Iron Firework show打铁花表演；throwing the embroidered ball抛绣球；
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I am writing to share an exciting experience with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．我们生命中的许多物件，大都蕴藏了一些珍贵的情感和记忆。学校即将开展“一器一物，遇见旧时光”英语故事分享会。请你介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品，讲讲你和它之间的故事。
要点：
1. What is the thing
2. Tell the story of you and the thing.
3. Why do you think it is meaningful
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上三个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
3. 词数：80—100；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Each of us has many unforgettable objects that have special meanings.
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15．假如你叫李明，今年五一假期你要跟父母去青岛旅行，你打算告诉你加拿大的笔友Paul关于你的旅行计划。请你根据以下思维导图的提示用英语给Paul写一封不少于80词的信。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paul,
How are you
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Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
16．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike对中国文化很感兴趣。这次他想在五一假期来中国温州游玩，请你给他写一封信，分享你的经历并介绍一两个游玩点（可介绍其特点，游玩交通方式等等）。
要求：
1. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
2. 100词左右。
3. 开头已经给出，不计入词汇。
参考词汇：visit places of interest, try local food....
Dear Mike,
May Day is coming.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．假如你是某英文报社的特约小记者，昨天（5月23日）你目睹了一场交通事故，你很难过，想提醒大家注意安全，因此你写了一篇事故报道发表在了该报纸上。请你根据提示信息，从事故发生的时间（6:30 p. m.）、原因、经过以及你的看法等内容出发完成这个报道。词数在80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：救护车ambulance; 低头 lower one’s head
提示信息：
1.一个女孩正放学回家，她低着头边玩手机边走路；
2. 一辆汽车开得很快；
3. 女孩和汽车相撞；
4.救护车来了，女孩被送往医院。
A Traffic Accident Report
Yesterday was May 23rd.
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18．如今，人们越来越关注青少年的心理健康。请你以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”为题写一篇英语短文，就如何保持好心情发表自己的观点。词数100左右。
How to Stay in a Good Mood
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19．成长的过程中，你一定去过很多地方吧！旅行既放松了心情，又开阔了视野，学到了知识。你对旅行怎么看？你有最难忘的旅行经历吗？请你根据英文提示写一篇短文，要求不少于90词。
提示：
(1) What’s your idea about traveling
(2) Tell us one of your traveling experiences.
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20．“读万卷书，行万里路”。假如你是李明，你校英语报正在举行征文比赛、主题是A Wonderful Trip。请你根据下面的思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文比赛，总数不少于80。
Who— my parents;
When, where and how—fly to Beijing, three hours; last summer.
What activities—1. the Great Wall enjoy the natural beauty, ...;
2. the Palace Museum: see so many beautiful works. ...;
3. the Summer Palace: beautiful. go boating on Kunming Lake, relax after. ...;
Your ideas: ...
A Wonderful Trip
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《【期末考点突破】专题13 书面表达20篇 （仁爱科普版）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．One Possible Version:
Dear teachers and students,
Today, I’m glad to give a speech about how to keep safe in our life.
As far as we know, safety is the most important thing in our life. First, when we are at school, we can’t run in the hallways and mustn’t fight with others. We should walk slowly on the right side instead of rushing when we go up and down the stairs. Second, on our way home, we should follow the traffic rules. Don’t cross the street when the traffic light is red. When we ride a bike, we mustn’t listen to music or just use one hand. Next, we should eat healthy food and keep away from junk food. Besides, don’t swim in the river. It’s very dangerous.
In a word, safety must come first. Please remember these safety tips.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出安全很重要的话题；
第二步，根据提示具体阐述在生活中如何保证自己的安全；
第三步，最后书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of 而不是
②keep away from 远离
③in a word 总之
[高分句型]
①First, when we are at school, we can’t run in the hallways and mustn’t fight with others. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Don’t cross the street when the traffic light is red. (祈使句的否定形式)
2．例文：
Dear Nate,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Datong. Datong is a wonderful place that provides tourists with unique experiences. Last week, my parents and I made a trip to Datong.
On the first day, we visited the Yungang Grottoes. I was surprised at it! I wondered how people built it in ancient times. After that, we went to the Datong Coal Museum. Datong is known as the “Coal Capital of China”, and visiting the museum allowed us to learn a lot about coal. On the second day, we climbed Mount Hengshan, one of the “Five Great Mountains”, and took many photos. After going down the mountain, we went to a famous local restaurant to taste local food. Shanxi Sliced Noodles and Fried Boiled Pork with Black Fungus are my favourites.
Datong gave me lots of surprises during my two-day stay. I hope that one day we can travel there together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封邮件，属于应用文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据英国好友询问大同旅行经历的需求，结合给定的旅行行程提示进行写作，需涵盖所有行程信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明很高兴好友对大同感兴趣，并引出自己上周去大同旅行的事；
第二步，按时间顺序，分别阐述第一天参观云冈石窟和大同煤炭博物馆，第二天攀登恒山、拍照以及品尝美食的经历；
第三步，表达大同之旅带来很多惊喜，并希望有一天能和好友一起去旅行。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to 很高兴……
② be surprised at 对……感到惊讶
③ be known as 作为……而闻名
④ make a trip to 去……旅行
[高分句型]
① Datong is a wonderful place that provides tourists with unique experiences.（that引导的定语从句）
② I wondered how people built it in ancient times.（how引导的宾语从句）
3．例文
A meaningful trip
It was bright and sunny last Friday. I went on a school trip to a farm with my classmates.
When we got there, the farmer showed us around the farm. We knew more about farmers’ life. What’s more, we experienced what farmers do in their daily life. We watered plants, fed animals and picked vegetables. Then we learned about how food is grown and how much hard work goes into growing it.
It was a meaningful day because I not only experienced the natural world firsthand but also realized how working hard benefits us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③ 提示：根据提示内容描述一次学校农场旅行的经历及感悟，通过具体活动展现收获，细节较为丰富。
[写作步骤分析]
第一步。开篇点题，以天气和时间开头，直接点明“农场旅行”的主题，简洁自然；
第二步。具体描述经历：按时间顺序介绍农场活动，层次清晰；
第三步，总结感悟。
[亮点词汇分析]
①showed us around带领参观
②experienced体验
③goes into投入
[高分句型]
①we experienced what farmers do in their daily life.（what引导的宾语从句）
②It was a meaningful day because I not only experienced the natural world firsthand but also realized how working hard benefits us.（because引导原因状语从句；not only...but also...并列连词结构）
4．例文
China is a big country for bicycles. Bicycles are popular because they are convenient and cheap. People are able to afford them. They are easy to park and save energy without causing pollution. Many middle school students ride to school. However, there are dangers. To stay safe, always follow traffic rules. Wear a helmet. Check your bike regularly. By doing these, we can enjoy the benefits of cycling and protect ourselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需阐述自行车优点及骑车保障交通安全的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国是自行车大国，说明自行车受欢迎，引出自行车优点相关内容；
第二步，列举自行车方便、便宜、易停放、节能无污染等优点；
第三步，指出骑车有危险，并说明遵守交规、戴头盔、定期检查自行车等保障安全的措施。
[亮点词汇]
① be able to do 能够做
② save energy 节约能源
③ follow traffic rules 遵守交通规则
[高分句型]
① Bicycles are popular because they are convenient and cheap.（because引导原因状语从句）
② By doing these, we can enjoy the benefits of cycling and protect ourselves.（by引导方式状语）
5．例文
Stay in a Good Mood
It’s very important for us to stay in a good mood, because it can make us healthy, help us do well in our study and bring us a happy life.
To stay in a good mood, we can often do things such as listening to music, doing sports, studying with friends, developing our hobbies and so on. They can all work well in making us feel good.
When I’m in a bad mood, I often go to play basketball with my friends or have a talk with my parents. Doing so can often make me happy again.
Let’s forget anything unhappy, stay in a good mood every day and live a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点题，阐述保持好心情的重要性；
第二步：具体阐述保持好心情的方法；
第三步：阐述情绪不好时你是怎么做的；
第四步：发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②work well in doing sth.在做某事方面做得很好
③have a talk with sb.与某人谈话
[高分句型]
①It’s very important for us to stay in a good mood, because it can make us healthy, help us do well in our study and bring us a happy life.（It固定句型；because引导的原因状语从句）
②When I’m in a bad mood, I often go to play basketball with my friends or have a talk with my parents.（when引导的时间状语从句）
6．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
7．例文
Fire Rules Around Us Fire rules are crucial for our safety. Before entering public places, we should locate the safety exits. When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. Cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel and walk bent-over to avoid smoke. During a fire, the most important thing is to ensure our safety; do not waste time taking personal items. By following these fire rules, we can protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述火灾的危险性，如火灾会烧毁森林、破坏建筑等，进而引出遵守消防守则的重要性；
第二步，详细说明在火灾发生时的具体做法，如如何报警、逃生等。
[亮点词汇]
①run away逃走
②first of all首先
③put out扑灭
[高分句型]
When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. (when引导的时间状语从句)
8．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记述学校旅行经历的文章；
②时态：主要为一般过去时；
③提示：文章包含学校旅行的相关要点，介绍旅行去徐汇校区，描述旅行当天的行程，还给出让学校旅行更有意义的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍上周进行了一次去徐汇校区的学校旅行；
第二步，按时间顺序详细描述学校旅行当天的经历，包括出发时间、路上用时，到达后被校园景观吸引，参观学校历史博物馆，被荣桥人精神打动，以及品尝食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何让学校旅行更有意义提出自己的建议，旅行前对目的地做研究、旅行中做笔记，并强调这样做能带来的收获，最后总结此次旅行有趣且有意义。
[亮点词汇]
①attracted吸引
②moved感动
③gain获得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的状语)
9．例文：
How to avoid traffic accidents
Traffic accidents happen for many reasons. Some people drive too fast, some don’t follow traffic lights, and some cross the road without looking around. These are dangerous things that can cause accidents.
To avoid accidents, we should always follow the traffic rules. Drivers should not speed up at the traffic lights. Cyclists should always wear their helmets. As for walkers, we should always use crosswalks and look both ways before crossing the street. In a word, everyone should be careful on the road.
I hope all students can be safe on the road and help others stay safe too.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：按三个方面进行写作，每个方面需具体展开，完整表述内容；注意条理清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍交通事故发生的原因；
第二步，介绍避免交通事故的建议；
第三步，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①speed up加速
②before crossing the street在过马路前
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①These are dangerous things that can cause accidents. (定语从句)
②I hope all students can be safe on the road and help others stay safe too. (宾语从句)
10．例文
How to keep a good mood
A good mood makes our life and study easier and better. But what can we do to keep a good mood
First, we should smile often. Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day. Second, we should talk about our problems with our parents or friends. They can help us in some ways. Third, wearing bright-colored clothes can make people happier. Finally, we should do something good for others.
Keeping a good mood is important to us. We should keep a good mood and enjoy every day in our life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的提示内容，写短文谈谈如何保持好心情。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出文章主题；
第二步，具体谈谈如何保持好心情；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb. adj. 使某人……
②talk about 谈论
③keep a good mood保持好心情
[高分句型]
Smiling is like sunshine because it can make people happy and have a good day.（because引导原因状语从句）
11．例文：
Dear Lucy,
How are you This summer vacation, I’m going to Beijing with my parents. We’ll go there by high-speed train as it’s fast and comfortable. We plan to stay for a week. We’ll visit the Forbidden City. I’m eager to see the magnificent palaces and learn about Chinese history. Also, we’ll climb the Great Wall. It’s a wonder of the world, and I believe the view from the top will be amazing. I’m really looking forward to this trip.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，考生结合自身经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向 Lucy 问候，引出下文；
第二步，旅行基本信息：时间、同行人员、出行方式和停留时长；旅行活动及原因；
第三步，最后表达对旅行的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be eager to渴望
②learn about了解
③look forward to…期待……
[高分句型]
①We’ll go there by high-speed train as it’s fast and comfortable. (as引导的原因状语从句)
②It’s a wonder of the world, and I believe the view from the top will be amazing. (省略that的宾语从句)
12．例文：
Last Monday, a traffic accident happened at our school gate at ten to eight in the morning. A student was riding a bike too fast. When he was turning the corner, he suddenly crashed into a car. As a result, he got hurt on the head and legs.
This accident gives us a lesson. We should follow these suggestions when cycling to keep ourselves safe. First, always keep a proper speed. Riding too quickly raises the risk of accidents. Second, be careful especially at turns and crossings. Look out for cars and buses from all directions. Moreover, obey traffic rules all the time.
Let’s all raise our traffic safety awareness and develop good traffic habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点展开，适当补充，注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这起交通事故；
第二步， 提出安全骑行建议；
第三步， 呼吁提高安全意识。
[亮点词汇]
① as a result 结果
② raises the risk of 增加……的风险
③ look out for 当心
④ raise our traffic safety awareness 提高交通安全意识
[高分句型]
When he was turning the corner, he suddenly crashed into a car. (when引导时间状语从句)
13．例文
Dear Tom,
How is everything going I’m writing to share an exciting experience with you.
In January, I visited Nanshan Ancient City which lies in Gaonan Village, Pinghe. It has a history of over 600 years. During the “Back to the Ming Dynasty” Spring Festival event, I was amazed by activities there. The Iron Firework show was so interesting and Chaoshan Opera was full of traditional culture. I also enjoyed throwing the embroidered ball, a fun game. Besides, I even tried on the Ming-style clothes. What’s more, there were many delicious foods and street artists. The ancient buildings and lively environment made me feel I had traveled back to Ming dynasty.
It was a meaningful experience to learn about Chinese history and traditions. I hope you can visit it some day.
Best wishes.
Yours
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，具体为书信。
②时态：主要时态为一般过去时，因为是讲述正月参观古城的经历，描述过去发生的事情。
③提示：写作要点明确给出，包括介绍南山古城特色景点及参观时所见所闻，考生要涵盖所有提示信息，可适当增加细节使内容丰富，突出古城特色及活动体验。
[写作步骤]
①第一步、表明写作意图：开头已给出问候语及引出分享经历的句子，可直接表明写信目的是分享参观南山古城的经历。
②第二步、具体阐述写作内容：从地理位置和历史介绍古城位置和平和县高南村及超600年历史；从活动体验分别描述打铁花表演、潮剧以及抛绣球活动带来的感受；根据其他见闻补充提到试穿明代服饰、美食和街头艺人等见闻。
③第三步、书写结语：表达参观意义并向朋友发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①lie in位于
②be amazed by对……感到惊奇
③What’s more而且；此外
[高分句型]
①In January, I visited Nanshan Ancient City which lies in Gaonan Village, Pinghe. (which引导的定语从句)
②The ancient buildings and lively environment made me feel I had traveled back to Ming dynasty. (省略that的宾语从句)
14．例文
Each of us has many unforgettable objects that have special meanings. I have also got such a meaningful present—a set of wonderful bookmarks.
When my parents visited Nanjing, they bought me a set of bookmarks. And they were like my friends when I was in primary school. They “enjoyed” lots of good books together with me.
You may wonder why this set of bookmarks means so much to me. I wasn’t a good reader before. To help me develop good reading habits, my parents bought the bookmarks to remind me to read on and finish the books. With the bookmarks and my parents’ help. I came to enjoy reading.
Toady I still keep the set of bookmarks and I’ll continue taking good care of them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一件对你而言有意义的物品；
第二步，讲讲你和它之间的故事；
第三步，说明你认为它有意义的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①a set of一套
②means so much to sb.对某人来说意义重大
③remind sb. to do sth.提醒某人去做某事
④continue doing sth.继续做某事
⑤take good care of好好照顾
[高分句型]
①When my parents visited Nanjing, they bought me a set of bookmarks.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②You may wonder why this set of bookmarks means so much to me.（why引导的宾语从句）
15．例文
Dear Paul,
How are you
I have great news to tell you. This May Day, I’m going to Qingdao with my parents for holidays. We are going there by plane. We plan to stay there for about three days. When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. We will enjoy the sunshine on the beach. We also plan to go shopping and eat some delicious seafood. I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. I am really exited about the trip and I hope we can have a good time there.
Do you have a May Day holiday in your country What’s your plan I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图进行写作，注意不要遗漏要点。可适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明假期要跟父母去青岛旅行；
第二步，重点介绍旅行的交通方式，时间，活动和感受；
第三步，期待朋友的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do sth. 计划做某事
② be exited about 对……感到兴奋
③ look forward to 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are there, we will go sightseeing and go swimming in the sea. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I believe that we will take a lot of beautiful photos there. (that引导宾语从句)
16．Dear Mike,
May Day is coming. I’m so glad you’ll visit Wenzhou! It’s really interesting here. Let me tell you about two cool places.
First, there’s Jiangxin Island. It’s in the middle of the river. You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice. To get there, you can take a ferry. The ferry ride is fun.
Second, there’s Wuma Street. It’s a busy street. You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu. You can walk around and have a great time. You can take a bus or a taxi to get to Wuma Street.
I hope you’ll love Wenzhou. Have a good trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一封写给笔友的书信，目的是介绍温州的游玩地点。
②时态：以一般现在时为主，用于描述景点的一般特征、交通方式等客观情况。
③提示：根据要求，需要介绍一两个温州的游玩点，包括其特点和到达的交通方式。写作过程中需遵循书信格式，避免透露真实个人信息，控制词数在 100 词左右。
【写作步骤】第一步，开篇对 Mike 要来温州游玩表示高兴。
第二步，详细介绍江心屿，阐述其位于江心的位置特点，以及岛上有古老寺庙、环境静谧等，说明可乘坐渡轮前往。
第三步，介绍五马街，突出它是热闹的街道，有很多当地美食，说明可乘坐公交或出租车到达。
第四步，结尾表达对 Mike 游玩体验的期待。
【亮点词汇】①yummy 美味的
②ferry 渡轮
③busy 热闹的
【高分句型】①You can see an old temple there, which is very quiet and nice.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②You can find lots of yummy local food, like stinky tofu.（like 在此处用于举例）
17．例文
A Traffic Accident Report
Yesterday was May 23rd. I witnessed a traffic accident at 6:30 p.m. A girl was walking home from school. She was looking at her phone and walking with her head down. At the same time, a car was coming very fast. Suddenly, the girl and the car collided. The girl was badly hurt. Soon an ambulance came and took her to the hospital. I think it’s very dangerous to use mobile phones while walking. We should pay attention to safety and avoid such accidents.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇新闻报道，叙述了一场交通事故。
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”，因为描述的是昨天发生的事情。
③提示：描述昨天亲眼目睹的一场交通事故的经过，并阐述自己对走路玩手机这一行为的看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明时间，引出目睹交通事故这件事。
第二步，中间详细描述事故发生的过程，包括女孩的行为，汽车的状态以及最终的碰撞结果，还有后续救护车赶来将女孩送往医院。
第三步，结尾表明自己对走路玩手机这一行为的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①witness目击；见证
②collide碰撞
③ambulance救护车
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①I witnessed a traffic accident at 6:30 p.m.（运用一般过去时，简洁明了地表明自己目睹事故的时间。）
②I think it’s very dangerous to use mobile phones while walking.（运用“it’s+形容词+to do sth.”的句式，清晰表达自己对走路玩手机这一行为的观点。）
18．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
As we all know, everyone can’t be happy all the time. If we are always in a bad mood, we may become sick. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. How can we stay in a good mood Here are my suggestions.
First, we should have healthy eating habits and do exercise every day. They can help us keep in good health. When we are healthy, we’ll probably have a good mood. Second, having a hobby is important as well because hobbies can make us cheerful and keep our minds active. What’s more, it’s good to be ready to help others when they are in need. Helping others can make us feel proud of ourselves. It can also help us become more confident.
In a word, it’s necessary for us to stay in a good mood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。就如何保持好心情发表自己的观点。
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habits饮食习惯
②as well也
③feel proud of 对……感到自豪
④in a word总之
[高分句型]
①When we are healthy, we’ll probably have a good mood. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②Second, having a hobby is important as well because hobbies can make us cheerful and keep our minds active. (because引导的原因状语从句)
19．例文：
Traveling is a wonderful way to relax and learn. I think it helps us discover new places and understand different cultures. My most unforgettable trip was visiting the Great Wall last summer.
Early that morning, my family and I took a bus to the famous wall. When I saw its long body winding through mountains, I felt amazed. Climbing the steep steps was tiring, but the view from the top was worth it. We took many photos and listened to stories about ancient Chinese history from our guide. I realized how smart and strong the builders were hundreds of years ago.
This trip taught me that traveling is not just about fun and it also helps us connect with history. I will never forget that special day.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生已围绕提示中的两个问题展开写作，分别阐述了对旅行的看法和一次难忘的旅行经历，内容完整，要点突出。
【写作步骤】
第一步，表明写作意图。文章开头直接点明主题，表明文章要讲述对旅行的看法以及一次难忘的旅行经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先概括了旅行的好处——放松和学习，并具体阐述了旅行帮助我们发现新地方和理解不同文化。然后详细描述了一次难忘的旅行经历——参观长城，包括出发时间、交通方式、对长城的感受、爬长城的体验、在长城上的活动以及从旅行中学到的道理等；
第三步，书写结语。结尾点明这次旅行的特殊意义，并表达永不忘记这次旅行的感受。
【亮点词汇】
①wonderful极好的
②unforgettable难忘的
③discover发现
④amazed惊讶的
⑤worth it值得的
⑥realize意识到
⑦special 特殊的
【高分句型】
①When I saw its long body winding through mountains, I felt amazed. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Climbing the steep steps was tiring, but the view from the top was worth it. (动名词Climbing作主语；but连接表转折的并列句)
20．例文
A Wonderful Trip
My parents and I went on a trip to Beijing last summer. We flew to Beijing. It took us three hours to get there. There are many famous places in Beijing.
First, we visited the Great Wall. It is long and great. There were many people on it at that time. We enjoyed the natural beauty. Then we went to the Palace Museum, we saw so many beautiful works that we have never seen before. They were wonderful. At last, we went on a visit to the Summer Palace. There are many beautiful flowers and trees and green lawns. We played happily on the lawn. We went boating on Kunming Lake. By traveling, we felt happy and relaxed. It was a great trip.
In conclusion, we can not only relax ourselves and make new friends but also at the same time we can learn much from travel. For modern life, we are busy with our work with high pressure. So we can often travel in our free time. It’s good for us.
【详解】总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中和谁在何时怎样去哪里旅行，参观了什么景点以及自己的观点等的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍和谁在何时怎样去哪里旅行。
第二步，具体阐述参观了什么景点。
第三步，发表自己的观点。表达“旅游有益身心健康，所以倡导大家有计划地去安排旅行”的想法。
[亮点词汇]
① went on a trip to Beijing 去北京旅行
② went boating去划船
③ in conclusion总而言之
④ in our free time在我们空闲的时候
[高分句型]
① It took us three hours to get there.（It takes sb. some time to do sth.句型表示“某人花费多长时间做某事”）
② we saw so many beautiful works that we have never seen before.（that引导定语从句）
③ In conclusion, we can not only relax ourselves and make new friends but also at the same time we can learn much from travel.（not only…but also…句型）
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