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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项人教新目标
（Go for it）版（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．暑期将至，学校英语俱乐部针对学生社会实践推出很多活动。请在下表中选择2～3项你喜欢的活动（也可自拟活动项目），用英语写一篇短文表明你的选择意向及理由，发表在学校微信公众平台的英语栏目中。
Practical Activities
□learn to do housework □help in the city museum
□clean up the city park □have a book sale
□visit sick kids in hospital □…
要求：（1）短文中必须包括所选择的活动项目，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
（3）词数：80～100词。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
During this coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities.
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2．假如你是李华，想参加CCTV-国家地理频道举办的以“寻找热爱世界的你”为主题的小记者招募活动。请写一封介绍个人情况的申请邮件。
内容包括：①个人信息与兴趣爱好；
②介绍自己已经取得的成绩/曾经读过的书/曾经去过的地方。（任选一到两个方面）
③为了成为小记者近期打算怎样做？
写作要求：①词数90词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。②文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua. I’m glad to introduce myself.
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I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
3．本学期即将结束，请根据以下提示，对你在本学期所做过的有意义或者有趣的事情做一个总结。
提示：
（1）Have you read some interesting books
（2）Have you been to somewhere interesting
（3）Have you ever been a volunteer
要求：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（2）必须包含三个要点，可适当发挥。
（3）词数 80 词左右。
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4．上周一，学校组织学生去白浪山茶场（the Bailangshan Tea Field）开展研学旅行，深受学生的喜爱。请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍本次研学活动。
活动内容：
（1）学习采茶、制茶和茶艺；
（2）观察动、植物，亲近自然；
（3）唱歌跳舞，朗诵诗歌；
（4）观看了电影，了解一些中国的茶文化。
注意：
（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息。
词语提示：手工by hand，知识knowledge，诗poem，参加take part in
Last Monday, our school organized students to the Bailangshan Tea Field to carry out a study trip. ___________________________________
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5．暑假将至，你们学校发起“Sunshine Teenagers”主题征文活动。请你写一篇关于自己的征文，内容要点如下：
（1）已经读了大量名著，获取了知识；
（2）参观过各种博物馆，丰富了阅历；
（3）坚持体育锻炼，培养健康生活习惯；
（4）暑假计划分担家务，提高生活技能。
要求：
（1）短文应包含以上提示信息，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数 90～100。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：enrich experience 丰富阅历
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve done in the past and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
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6．假设你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友Mike写一封信，向他介绍我们的祖国。
提示：
（1）中国是亚洲最大的国家，和美国差不多大；
（2）中国有世界上最多的人口，人们友好勤劳；
（3）长江是世界第三长的河流，中国有著名的万里长城；
（4）中国有超过5000年的悠久历史，比美国历史长多了；
（5）中国有世界最高山峰……
提示词汇：
as…as…population, friendly, hard-working, The Yangtze River, the third longest, famous, the Great Wall, more than, long history, Qomolangma
要求：
（1）词数：80 词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不加入总词数）；
（2）恰当运用比较级和最高级；
（3）书信需包括上面所有提示点，可适当发挥。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．“世上无难事，只怕有心人”。我们在学习或生活中都会遇到一些困难或挫折，但是只要怀有积极的心态去面对它们，就一定能够守得云开见月明。某英语报正在开展以“Never be afraid of difficulties”为题的征文活动。请你写一篇文章投稿参加这次活动。
写作要点：
（1）简要说说你对学习生活中遇到挫折困难的看法；
（2）详述一次你难忘的克服困难的经历；
（3）简述你这次经历的感受及你的打算。
注意事项：
（1）90词左右；
（2）行文应连贯流畅；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。
Never be afraid of difficulties
In our life, everybody may sometimes need to face different kinds of problems.
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8．每位同学都希望成为学校中受欢迎的人。你校近期将以“Being a Popular Student”为题，举办一次演讲比赛，请以李华的名义，写一篇英文演讲稿。
兴趣爱好 旅游、阅读（给出喜欢的理由）
行为习惯 1.注重礼仪（举例说明）；2.自拟一点
绿色生活 1.节约用水（举例说明）；2.自拟一点
公益活动 ……（至少两点）
注意：
（1）词数：100 词左右，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
（2）短文必须包括表格中所有的信息，并作适当的发挥；
（3）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Being a Popular Student
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I want to be a popular student with my classmates and teachers. I’m glad to make a speech here.
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Thank you for listening!
9．假如你是李华，你的美国朋友David对你的学校生活很感兴趣。请你根据下表信息，写一封邮件，介绍你参加的学校“心理健康周”主题活动并分享看法。
Activities Benefits（益处）
write letters to teachers communicate with others better
volunteer at a hospital get a feeling of satisfaction
share happy moments ...
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数：70—90；
（4）邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I’m glad you are interested in my school life. I hope our school’s Mental Health Week can interest you.
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Are there any interesting activities in your school Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．每个人都拥有自己最喜爱的东西。它或许是一个玩具，或许是一本书，抑或是一件生活用品……而这个东西从你孩童时就已经拥有，至今仍然还在。请根据下面表格中所给的内容提示，写一篇题为My Favorite Thing的英语短文。
What is it My favorite thing Why is it special for you
How long have you had it Whom would you like to share with
How did you get it Write a story or memories about it.
要求：
（1）内容必须包含所有提供的信息，可适当发挥；
（2）句子通顺，语言丰富，书写美观；
（3）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Favorite Thing
My favorite thing from childhood is
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11．快乐是与家人相伴，与朋友相知，与成功相遇，快乐就在身边。请以“Happiness in My Life”为主题，写一篇英语短文。
主要内容：
1.描述一次令你感到快乐的经历；
2.提出保持快乐的建议（至少两点）；
3.鼓励大家积极寻找生活中的快乐。
要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Happiness in My Life
Happiness is everywhere in our life.
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12．从小到大，你一定收到了很多玩具吧？你最喜欢的玩具是哪一件呢？请描述一件你最喜欢的玩具，根据以下提示用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1. What is your favourite toy
2. How long have you had it
3. Why do you like it
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
One of my favorite toys is
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13．健康是生活的基石，尤其是青少年的健康，更加受到家庭、学校乃至全社会的关注。假如你是你们学校的健康达人，应校英语俱乐部的邀请，你将给全校同学作一个主题为“The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”的报告。请参考下面的提示完成报告。
要求：
1. 100词左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 所给提示仅供参考，可适当发挥。
提示：a balanced diet；enough exercise；be happy
Dear friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”.
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Thanks for listening!
14．请根据表格中的提示，写一篇关于火灾的报道。词数80左右，可以适当发挥。
A report about a fire
时间 昨天下午三点钟
地点 李先生家
经过 房子着火时，李先生的父亲独自一人在家，在客厅看电视；他很害怕，拨打了119电话；最终消防员们将他救出；他的右手臂受了伤。
逃生提示 给出火灾逃生提示（至少两点）。
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15．假设你是Daniel，你的美国朋友Peter想要在中国结交更多的朋友。你通过电子邮件，把你最好的朋友Simon介绍给他。Simon情况见下表：
姓名 Simon
外貌 圆脸，戴着一副眼镜，脸上总带笑容。
个性 乐于助人，外向大方，…… (自由发挥一句)
喜欢的季节及理由 1.冬季 2.理由 (1)喜欢被雪覆盖的大地； (2)可以打雪仗、堆雪人，…… (自由发挥一句)
经历 一天夜里睡觉的时候，感到一阵轻微的震动，然后听到雷一般的巨响，人们都跑向四面八方躲避。大楼都倒塌了，自己被困五个小时，他很紧张但是他告诉自己要冷静。幸运的是，他最后被救了。他真是一个勇敢的男孩。
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯；
2.必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3.词数：90词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Peter,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend Simon to you.
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I hope you can become a friend of his. Maybe he can show you around our city at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes!
Yours
Daniel
16．假设你是Andy，你在社交媒体上看到一位网友发布的求助贴，请你结合实际情况给她一些有针对性的建议。
Dear all, I am expecting a one-week vacation in Liyang this January. But I know little about the weather in Liyang. And I don’t know what places to go in Liyang. Would anyone be kind enough to offer me some advice(建议) Millions of thanks. Flying Fish from New York
要求：
1.内容真实；
2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语法正确，书写工整；
3.词数：80词左右，不包括所给的开头和结尾。
Dear Flying Fish,
Welcome to Liyang.
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Yours,
Andy
17．中学生外研社杯征文比赛面向全国中学生征稿，征稿主题“My Hometown — the ________ Place in My Heart”。假设你是李华，请写一篇英语征文
内容提示：
(1)家乡的美味、特产、发展情况等；
(2)讲述家乡发展的一个小故事以及你从家乡故事中收获的感受或领悟的道理等。
写作要求：
(1)请先将横线上的词补充完整；
(2)书写规范，表达流畅；
(3)词数约100词左右。
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18．假如你是李华，你校英文校报征集以“My home town”为主题的文章。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 你家乡的位置、气候； 2. 你家乡的文化。
注意：
1. 词数：80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
My home town
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19．假定你是李华，你的英国网友Mike给你发来电子邮件，询问合肥的最佳旅游季节。请根据以下内容给Mike回复一封电子邮件。
要点如下：
1.介绍合肥四季气候特点；
2.你的建议：最佳旅游季节及至少两点推荐理由。
注意事项：
1.词数80～100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
You asked me about the best time to travel in Hefei.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
20．2022年6月10日，李华的家乡四川雅安市芦山县发生了一场地震，地震造成了巨大的损毁，但幸运的是，李华一家安然无恙。假如你是李华，请你描述一下地震发生时家里人的活动情景及感受：
1. 李华在浴室里洗澡；
2. 爸爸在电脑旁工作；
3. 妈妈在厨房里做晚餐；
4. 爷爷奶奶在客厅看电视。
要求：
1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；
3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Li Hua. There was an earthquake at about 5:00 p.m. on June 1st.
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
21世纪教育网(www.21cnjy.com)
参考答案及试题解析
1．例文1
During this coming summer vacation, I am going to take part in these activities.
I’d like to learn to do housework first. Now we teenagers spend too much time on our homework so that we don’t have time to do housework. Also, we need to do something to help our parents and learn how to look after ourselves. Second, I will volunteer to clean up the city park. I’ll pick up rubbish around the park and ask people not to litter anywhere. In addition, I will tell them the importance of keeping our city clean and tidy.
I’m sure I will get a lot of social experience through the summer practical program.（98 words）
例文2
I will be busy during the coming summer vacation because I plan to take part in some practical activities.
Firstly, I would like to visit the kids in hospital. As sick kids are unhappy and lonely, I will help to look after them and cheer them up. Besides, I will volunteer to help in the city museum. In this way, I can not only learn more knowledge, but also make new friends. Lastly, I will have a book sale to raise money for the people in need.
All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer vacation.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，作文开头已给出，应领悟首句内容衔接好下文；
第二步，根据提示材料，分别从想要学习做家务，志愿帮助公园做清洁活动等方面介绍；
第三步，总结上文，确信通过这次暑假实践活动会增长很多社会经验。
[亮点词汇]
①spend too much time on sth. 在某事上花费过多时间
②volunteer to do sth. 志愿做某事
③In addition 另外
④the importance of doing sth. 做某事的重要性
[高分句型]
①Now we teenagers spend too much time on our homework so that we don’t have time to do housework. （so that引导结果状语从句）
②I’m sure I will get a lot of social experience through the summer practical program.（宾语从句）
2．例文
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua. I’m glad to introduce myself. I am a school student who has a passion for exploring the world. I love reading books about nature and geography, and I am always keen on learning new things about different cultures. Recently, I won a prize in a national geography competition, which encouraged me to pursue my interests further. I have also visited several historical sites in China, which broadened my understanding of world history. To prepare for becoming a little reporter, I plan to read more insightful articles and improve my writing skills.
I do hope to join in the activity and look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍个人信息与兴趣爱好；
第二步，介绍自己已经取得的成绩/曾经去过的地方；
第三步，介绍近期打算怎样做。
[亮点词汇]
①keen on喜欢
②encouraged sb. to do鼓励某人做某事
③broadened增长
[高分句型]
①I have also visited several historical sites in China, which broadened my understanding of world history.（定语从句）
②To prepare for becoming a little reporter, I plan to read more insightful articles and improve my writing skills. （不定式表目的）
3．例文
How time flies! This is the end of the term.
At the beginning of the year, I made a lot of plans. Some were completed but some were not completed. I have also read a lot of books so far, which made me learn a lot. As a volunteer, I went to the community or street to help people in need. Because of the epidemic, I had planned to visit some interesting places, but I didn’t go. Although I didn’t go, I was very happy. Because I think staying at home now is also to make a contribution to epidemic prevention.
I look forward to continuing to work on the unfinished plan in the second half of the year.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：按照题目提示要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要求，使用正确的时态和连接词，使文章通顺，语句连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读过的有趣的书；
第二步，介绍参观过的有趣的地方；
第三步，介绍做志愿者的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①in need 在困境中
②epidemic 流行病
③make a contribution to 对……做出贡献
④continue to do sth. 继续去做某事
[高分句型]
①I have also read a lot of books so far, which made me learn a lot. (which引导定语从句)
②Although I didn’t go, I was very happy.（although引导让步状语从句)
4．例文
Last Monday, our school organized students to the Bailang Mountain tea field to carry out a study trip. There the scenery is beautiful. First of all, we learned to pick tea and make tea, and also learned the tea art. Then we watched animals and plants,and got close to nature. We watched a movie to learn about Chinese tea culture. Finally,the students sang and danced and read many poems. We had a great time.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态主要是“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据题目的活动内容提示完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏内容要点，使用正确的时间，适当使用连接词，使文章通顺，句子流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据活动内容提示描述研学旅行；
第二步，陈述个人感悟和对感觉旅行的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①carry out 执行，实话
②get close to 亲近，离……近
③Chinese tea culture 中国茶文化
④have chances to do sth. 有机会做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us and we will be able to have more chances to take part in these kinds of activities. (句型it is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.)
5．例文
To be a sunshine teenager, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Let me tell you what I’ve done in the past and what I will do in the coming summer vacation.
Firstly, I have read many famous works, which have broadened my horizons. At the same time, I visited various museums, enriching my experience. Secondly, I will help my parents with household chores and improve my life skills during the summer vacation. Thirdly, I persist in exercising and develop healthy lifestyle habits. I enjoy listening to my friends’ suggestions. This can make me a better person.
In short, I will strive to become an excellent person.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“现在完成时”、“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”
③提示：根据内容要点的提示，运用正确的时态完成本篇书面表达，可以适当发挥，注意行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍已经读大量名著和参观过各种博物馆；
第二步，介绍坚持体育锻炼，培养健康生活习惯；
第三步，写明暑假做家务的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①broaden my horizons 开阔眼界
②enrich my experience 丰富我的经验
③improve my life skill 提高我的生活技能
④persist in doing sth. 坚持做某事
⑤strive to do sth. 尽力做某事
[高分句型]
①Firstly, I have read many famous works,which have broadened my horizons. (which引导的定语从句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to be your pen pal. I’d like to tell you something about China.
China is the biggest country in Asia. It is almost as big as the US. China has the biggest population in the world. The people here are friendly and hard-working. The Yangtze River is the third longest river in the world. China is also famous for the Great Wall. China is more than 5000 years old. It has a much longer history than the US. China has the highest mountain in the world and its name is Qomolangma.
I love China very much. Welcome to China and play with me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己将介绍中国；
第二步，从面积、人口、历史、河流、山峰等方面具体介绍中国；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be famous for以……而闻名
③as big as和……一样大
[高分句型]
①Welcome to China and play with me.(祈使句；and连接并列成分)
7．例文
Never be afraid of difficulties
In our life, everybody may sometimes need to face different kinds of problems. I think that everyone may face difficulties in learning. However, we shouldn’t give up easily.
Once I could hardly follow my teachers in class and I made many mistakes in my homework and tests. I really felt sad. Now whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll try hard to overcome them instead of giving up. Sometimes I look up in reference books or search the Internet, sometimes I turn to my teachers or classmates. With hard work, I have done much better in my studies.
Nothing is too difficult if we put our hearts into it. Whatever difficulty we meet, there’s always a way for us to deal with it.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态主要是“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据写作要点完成本篇书面表达，注意不要遗漏要点，正确使用时态和连接词，使行文连贯流畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈对学习生活中遇到挫折困难的看法；
第二步，讲述一次难忘的克服困难的经历；
第三步，简述对经历的感受，谈谈个人的打算。
[亮点词汇]
①face difficulties 面对困难
②give up 放弃
③make mistake 犯错
④instead of 代替
⑤reference books 参考书籍
⑥overcome 克服
[高分句型]
①I think that everyone may face difficulties in learning. (宾语从句)
②Now whenever I meet difficulties, I’ll try hard to overcome them instead of giving up. (whenever引导的时间状语从句)
8．例文
Being a Popular Student
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I want to be a popular student with my classmates and teachers. I’m glad to make a speech here.
In my free time, I like travelling and reading. I think they can lead me into a whole new world. I have good manners. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. I never speak loudly in public places. I always live a green life. I can save water by taking a shorter shower, save energy by turning off the lights when necessary, and reduce pollution by recycling waste.
What’s more, I am willing to help others. I can save my pocket money to help those who are in need. I take an active part in voluntary activities. I work as a volunteer in my community.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述自己成为受欢迎学生的具体行为；
第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。
［亮点词汇］
①in my free time在我的空闲时间
②turn off关闭
③be willing to do sth.乐意做某事
④take an active part in积极参加
［高分句型］
① I think they can lead me into a whole new world（宾语从句）
②I can save my pocket money to help those who are in need. （动词不定式作目的状语）
9．例文
Dear David,
I’m glad you are interested in my school life. I hope our school’s Mental Health Week can interest you.
Our school’s Mental Health Week lasted for seven days. We held many activities. Firstly, we wrote letters to our teachers and told them what we truly believe. It could help us communicate better with others. Then, we took part in a volunteer activity. We volunteered at a hospital to make sick children cheer up. It made us get a feeling of satisfaction. Finally, we shared our happy moments. We shared our happiest moments with our teachers and classmates in our lives. Learning to share is an important part of our lives. Through the Mental Health Week, both my classmates and I have benefited greatly.
Are there any interesting activities in your school Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文的主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据表格内容提示完成本篇书面表达，注意要涵盖表格中所有内容并正确使用时态，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍参加过的学校“心理健康周”主题活动；
第二步，跟David分享你的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①hold activities 举行活动
②truly 真实地
③communicate better with sb. 与……更好地交流
④get a feeling of satisfaction 得到一种满足感
⑤benefit 获益，受益
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we wrote letters to our teachers and told them what we truly believe. (宾语从句)
②Learning to share is an important part of our lives. (动名词短语作主语)
10．例文
My Favorite Thing
My favorite thing from childhood is a book called Five Thousand Years of China.
I have kept it for six years. I got it from my mother as a birthday gift when I was seven years old. It is special for me because it is full of my mother’s love. There are many stories about Chinese history in the book. I liked to share them with my mother. At that time, my mother read it for me during the bed time every day. It was so interesting that I fell in love with it soon. I also felt my mother’s love for me.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据表格内的内容提示，应用正确的时态完成本篇书面表达，注意内容必须包含所有提供的信息，可适当发挥，注意要书写美观，句子通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍最喜爱的东西；
第二步，介绍如何得到它、为什么它对你那么特殊、你愿意和谁分享它；
第三步，介绍和它相关的一段记忆或故事。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of 充满
②share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物
③fall in love with 爱上
[高分句型]
①I got it from my mother as a birthday gift when I was seven years old. (when引导时间状语从句)
②It is special for me because it is full of my mother’s love. (because引导原因状语从句)
③It was so interesting that I fell in love with it soon. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
11．例文：
Happiness in My Life
Happiness is everywhere in our life. For me, spending time with my family brings me happiness. My parents took me to travel in Guangzhou when I was in primary school. We went there by high speed train. How fast it ran! My father took us to pay a visit in Zhongshan University. And then, we tried some traditional Guangdong food on Shipai Street. It was so tasty that I wish to try it again.
It’s easy to be happy. First, stay close with your family and friends. They will cheer you up anytime and anywhere. Second, it’s a good idea to develop a hobby. Learning to play an instrument or reading books are both good choices. They can show you the beauty of art and great minds.
All in all, there is no lack of happiness in life as long as you get your eyes and heart ready.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，并给出开头，写作时注意连贯；不要遗漏任何要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。由“生活中快乐无处不在”引出一次快乐的经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。如何保持快乐，给出建议。
第三步，书写结语。鼓励大家积极寻找快乐，用眼睛发现用心去感受。
[亮点词汇]
①pay a visit参观
②as long as只要
[高分句型]
①My parents took me to travel in Guangzhou when I was in primary school.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It was so tasty that I wish to try it again.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
12．例文
One of my favorite toys is a brown-white bear. I have had it for two years.
Two years ago, my father got a new job in another city so I had to go to a new school. I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates. One of my best friends named Mona gave the toy bear to me. She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
Whenever I miss my friends, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示介绍自己最喜欢的玩具，写作时注意整体内容紧凑，语句连贯，符合逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出自己最喜欢的玩具；
第二步，具体进行介绍并说明喜欢它的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①part with与……分开
②instead of代替
③stay with留在
[高分句型]
①I felt sad because I didn’t want to part with my classmates.（because引导原因状语从句）
②She said although we couldn’t be together, the toy bear could stay with me instead of her.（although引导让步状语从句）
13．例文
Dear friends,
It’s a great honor to speak here. My topic is “The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”.
I’m so glad you care about health like me. Keeping healthy is really important.
As for the secret of keeping healthy, I think different people have different answers. In my opinion, having a healthy lifestyle is the most important. First, it’s helpful to have enough sleep and a balanced diet. Second, enough exercise is necessary for a healthy body. Also, everyone should develop a sense of humor and always be a happy person.
I hope you can pay attention to your health from now on and live a happy and healthy life forever! Thanks for listening!
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示，以“The Importance and Secret of Keeping Healthy”为题，写一篇作文。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍保持健康的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述如何保持健康；
第三步，最后表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①the secret of……的秘诀
②in my opinion在我看来
③a sense of humor幽默感
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①I think different people have different answers.（省略that的宾语从句）
②having a healthy lifestyle is the most important.（动名词作主语）
14．例文
A report about a fire
There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. When the house caught fire, his father was alone at home, and he was watching TV in the living room. He was very frightened and he called 119. Finally the firemen helped him out. His right arm was hurt.
Fire is very dangerous. We should be careful with it. When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as possible. We should use a wet towel to cover our mouth and nose and stay low to the ground to protect ourselves from thick smoke.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于火灾的报道的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇关于火灾的报道”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、经过等”几个方面重点介绍火灾的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，介绍“我们应该用湿毛巾盖住我们的嘴和鼻子，保持贴近地面，以保护自己免受浓烟的伤害”的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①catch fire着火；
②help sb out帮助某人摆脱困境；
③as…as possible尽可能……；
④protect…from…保护……不受……的伤害。
[高分句型]
①There was a fire at Mr Li’s home at three o’clock yesterday afternoon. (“there be”句型)
②When our building is on fire, try to get out as soon as possible. (when引导的时间状语从句)
15．例文
Dear Peter,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend Simon to you.
He is a 15-year-old boy. He has a round face and wears glasses. He likes smiling very much. He is always ready to help others and often helps people in need. He is so outgoing that you can make friends with him easily. He is also humorous and funny.
He likes winter best because he likes the land covered with snow. In winter, he can have snowball fights and make snowmen. And there is an ice and snow festival. He can see the beautiful ice lanterns. In addition, his favorite festival—Spring Festival is in winter.
He once had a special experience. One night an earthquake happened while he was sleeping. There was a slight shaking, then a loud noise like thunder. Many buildings fell down. People were running in all directions. He was finally saved after being trapped for five hours.
I hope you can become a friend of his. Maybe he can show you around our city at the Spring Festival.
Best wishes!
Yours
Daniel
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括Simon的外貌和个性，喜欢的季节和理由，个人的经历。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍Simon的外貌和个性；
第二步，介绍他喜欢的季节和理由；
第三步，最后是叙述他的个人经历。
[亮点词汇]
① 15-year-old 15岁的
② be ready to do准备好做
③ In addition此外
[高分句型]
① He is so outgoing that you can make friends with him easily.（so…that引导结果状语从句）
② One night an earthquake happened while he was sleeping.（while引导时间状语从句）
16．例文：
Dear Flying Fish,
Welcome to Liyang.
The weather in Liyang changes quickly in January. When the cold air comes, the temperature can be as low as five below zero. It sometimes snows, but seldom snows heavily. Usually, when it is sunny, the weather can be very warm, with the highest temperature reaching 10 degrees. So please prepare enough clothes when you come.
Liyang is an old city with many places of interest. I advise you to climb the Nanshan Bamboo Forest when it snows. You can enjoy beautiful views there. And when it is fine, you can take a boat trip on Tianmu Lake. I am sure you will enjoy yourself in Liyang.
Yours,
Andy
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括溧阳的天气，以及可以去玩的地方。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍溧阳的天气情况；
第二步，介绍溧阳的名胜古迹；
第三步，最后是表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest名胜古迹
② advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
③ enjoy oneself过得愉快
[高分句型]
① Usually, when it is sunny, the weather can be very warm, with the highest temperature reaching 10 degrees.（when引导时间状语从句）
② I am sure you will enjoy yourself in Liyang.（省略了that的宾语从句）
17．例文
My Hometown—the Beautiful Place in my Heart
Welcome to my hometown Yantai for a visit. It is in the north of Shandong. My hometown is famous for apples. Yantai apples are famous all over the country. There are also many famous food in Yantai. If you come to travel, you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food.
My grandma told me that they were very poor in the past. She didn’t have enough food to eat. With the help of the government, Yantai gradually became richer. Now my grandma is more than 80 years old. She lives a happy life with us. I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a happy life.
This is the beautiful place in my heart.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写作时首先补全标题，围绕要点提示展开描写，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的美味、特产和发展情况；
第二步，讲述家乡发展的小故事，及自己的感受；
第三步，书写结语，再次点题。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for因……而著名
② with the help of在……的帮助下
③ more than多于
[高分句型]
① If you come to travel, you will enjoy the beauty and delicious food.（条件状语从句）
② I realize that only when the country is strong can we have a happy life.（宾语从句+倒装句）
18．例文
My home town
My home town is Hefei. It’s in Anhui Province. It is in the east of China. It’s cool in autumn. There are many things about Anhui’s traditional culture to learn. Huangmei Opera is the traditional music of Anhui. It’s very interesting, so it’s popular among the old. Anhui is also famous for its tea. If you come to Anhui, I’ll take you to the teahouse. We can drink tea and watch the Huangmei Opera there. It will be great. Welcome to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息介绍自己的家乡，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡的位置和气候；
第二步，详细介绍家乡的各种文化；
第三步，书写结语，欢迎参观自己的家乡。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因为……而闻名
②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①There are many things about Anhui’s traditional culture to learn. (动词不定式作定语)
②It’s very interesting, so it’s popular among the old. (so连接的并列句)
19．例文：
Dear Mike,
You asked me about the best time to travel in Hefei.
In my home town, it is warm and windy in spring. It is very hot and sometimes it rains in summer. It’s a bit cold in winter. In autumn, it is cool and comfortable. So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn. The weather gets cool and the leaves in the mountains start to get gold and then red. It’s very beautiful. It’s a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here. In autumn, people often climb moutains. It’s a good way to make you relaxed. At last, you can eat lots of fresh fruit.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍合肥四季气候特点；
第三步，建议旅游的季节以及原因。
[亮点词汇]
①the best time to do sth. 做某事的最佳时间
②make you relaxed 让你放松
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①So the best time to visit my home town is in autumn.（动词不定式作定语）
②It’s a good idea to bring your camera so you can take photos of the autumn trees here.（含有so的并列复合句）
20．例文
My name is Li Hua. There was an earthquake at about 5:00 p.m. on June 1st. At that time, all my family were at home. I was taking a shower in the bathroom. My father was working on the computer. My mother was cooking in the kitchen. My grandparents were watching TV in the living room. We were all scared.
The earthquake made our neighborhood in a mess. There were some fallen trees, broken windows and rubbish. But luckily, it wasn’t too heavy and it didn’t last for too long. We were all safe.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“过去进行时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“家里人的感受”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，接着按照要点叙述当时家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人们的感受；
第三步，介绍地震给周边生活环境带来的破坏，抒发作者的感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be scared感到害怕
②in a mess乱七八糟
[高分句型]
There were some fallen trees, broken windows and rubbish.（and连接三个并列的名词，there be句型，就近原则，过去分词作定语）
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