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2024-2025学年八年级英语下册期末复习专项沪教牛津版
（期末考点培优）专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Jane对泉州蟳埔的“头顶花园”簪花(Zanhua) 很感兴趣，写信询问你有关簪花的事情。请你根据以下提示，给她回信，并邀请她有空来体验簪花传统。词数80左右。
History: came into being in Tang dynasty Occasions: formal or casual
Design: fresh, plastic (塑料的) or silk flowers Meaning: express the wish for happiness
Be popular with: all ages ...
注意事项：
1.必须包含图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥，开头结尾；已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Dear Jane,
I am glad to hear that you’re interested in Zanhua.
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．在人际交往中，我们有时会遇到困难，但积极的态度，正向的表达和巧妙的技巧能帮助我们有效沟通，解决问题。《蟋蟀》杂志Cricket 正在开展以“用心交流，有效沟通”为主题的英文写作比赛。假设你是李华，请根据下列要求，写一篇短文投稿，分享你生活中一次有效沟通的经历以及你的收获，词数80左右。
Cricket Writing CompetitionEffective CommunicationEnjoyable Life ◆Share your experience ◆ Talk about your feelings Email address:cricket@
注意事项：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2.开头已给出，不计入总词数：
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Effective communication plays an important role in solving problems and building relationships. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3． 全国第七届大学生艺术节展演活动于6月在襄阳举行，此次活动共有来自全国7400余名高校大学生代表参加。你将作为襄阳市学生代表，向参会代表介绍你的家乡——襄阳。
内容提示：
NoticeDear students, We need an article to introduce our beautiful hometown—Xiangyang. What is the location of your hometown How do you feel about your hometown Can you tell something about the weather, food, history and places of interest in your hometown School English Club
写作要求：
1. 你的介绍要包含黑体部分的内容，可适当发挥。
2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to be here and share something about my hometown with you.
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That’s all. Thanks for your attention.
4．假设你是李辉，世界自然基金会(WWF) 邀请你下个月参加由该基金会举办的演讲活动，请你准备一篇英文演讲来介绍中国的大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)。
内容包括：
1.体貌，栖息地；
2.饮食习惯；
3.你的感受。
注意：
1.词数80-100。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.短文须包括所给内容信息。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Li Hui
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5．假如你叫李华，为弘扬中华传统文化，上周你校组织部分学生参加了“体验中国(Experience China)”活动。你的美国笔友Peter渴望对中国有更多的了解。请你依据以下图示提示，用英文给Peter写一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国并且分享此次活动的过程与感受。
要求：1. 内容必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数 80左右 (电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：参加take part in 名胜古迹places of interest
Time: Last weekend Place: Beijing Facts: ●the biggest country in Asia ●a history of over 5,000 years Activities: ●read Chinese stories ●visit places of interest (the Palace Museum) ●enjoy traditional Chinese food (Beijing duck) …Feelings: … (至少谈及两点)
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．一系列的“新”已成为大家关注的热词，学校教育也将翻开新的篇章。未来的教室会是什么样呢？请你以“My Dream Classroom”为题，根据思维导图提示写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80字左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人真实信息，否则不予评分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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7．家是温馨的港湾，家是幸福的源泉，家是永远的依恋，每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动，请结合自身的成长经历，破解家庭幸福的“密码”，写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括：
1. 你对家庭幸福的理解；
2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事；
3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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8．如今，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，如熊猫、鲸鱼、大象等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“Protect Endangered Animals”为题，根据以下内容要点，选择一种濒危动物，写一篇英语演讲稿，在开学初的“英语节”活动中和大家分享。
内容包括：1. 介绍该濒危动物的外形等基本情况及其生存现状；
2. 列举其濒危的原因，至少两点；
3. 提出具体保护措施，至少两点。
写作要求：1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
2. 词数在80词左右，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；
3. 书写规范，卷面整洁；
4. 文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech.
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9．假如你是李华，你校将于下周五开展“福州文化节”(Fuzhou Culture Festival) 的活动，你打算邀请你的外国好友Jim参加。请根据以下提示用英文给他写一封邀请信，介绍活动的情况，词数80左右。
要求：
1. 必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，E-mail 的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。
Dear Jim,
Here is good news for you.
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I’m looking forward to see you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
10．凤凰涅槃，历史文化名城，美丽的唐山吸引着世界越来越多人的目光。为此，唐山文旅局向中学生开展“了解家乡事，厚植家乡情，爱我大唐山”的英语征文比赛。请你根据以下提示，以“Beautiful Tangshan”为题，描述唐山印象。
Beautiful Tangshan
Location east of Hebei province
History over 17,000 years
Population about 7.8 million
Places to visit South Park: live-action (实景) performance, wonderful Tangshan Museum: a museum of research, education and culture, large, meaningful ...
Things to eat chess-shaped shaobing ...
People …
要求：
(1)需包含要点提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70个左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Beautiful Tangshan
Tangshan is in the east of Hebei province
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11．厦门是一座蕴含着丰富文化的城市，这里的风景、建筑、美食、非遗传承等，都有文化的印记。假如你是李华，你校英语社团正在开展线上国际交流活动，其公众号计划做关于厦门文化的系列推送，现就“Cultural Symbols of Xiamen (厦门文化标志)”这一话题在校内收集素材。请你用英语给公众号写一篇文章，推荐一个你眼中的厦门文化标志，对其作简要介绍，并说明推荐理由，词数在80—100词左右。
要求：
1. 短文需包含上述要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 语句通顺，语法正确，行文连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes
I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes.
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12．近期全国各地的文旅局长开始“花式内卷”, 用各种形式为家乡代言，为文旅产业助力。假设你所在的学校也在积极行动，号召同学们用英文向中外友人介绍、宣传自己的家乡。请你根据以下思维导图，以 “Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur” 为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的家乡。
注意:
（1）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
（2）词数80词左右；
（3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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13．熊猫是中国的象征，是国宝（our country’s treasure）。但是随着熊猫数量的逐渐减少，全社会呼吁人们行动起来，保护我们的大熊猫！请根据下面的内容提示，以“Let’s Protect Pandas.”为题，用英语写一篇关于熊猫的短文，并号召大家保护熊猫，词数不少于70，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：
1. 熊猫的外形（black and white，round eyes，round body）；
2. 性格特点（cute，friendly，lovely）；
3. 最喜欢的食物：竹子；
4. 现状：濒临灭绝（die out/endangered）；
5. 原因：
（1）人们砍伐森林，熊猫失去家园；
（2）有些人猎杀（hunt or kill）熊猫；
6. 建议：
（1）为熊猫建立自然保护区；
（2）禁止猎杀熊猫；
（3）请补充至少一条建议。
提示词：
a symbol of……的象征；the number of……的数量；build nature reserve建立自然保护区；law法律
Let’s Protect Pandas
Pandas are our country’s treasure.
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14．假如你是陈倩，你的英国朋友Mike将要来北京交换学习，要住在当地的接待家庭。在出发前，他给你写信希望了解中国的就餐礼仪。请根据下列提示给他写一封回信，介绍一下中国的就餐礼仪。
要求：
①文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
②词数100左右。（开头，结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：a pair of serving chopsticks 一双公筷
Dear Mike,
How are you Glad to hear that you will study and live in China.
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Yours,
Chen Qian
15．假如你是张华，你的英国笔友 Mike是流行音乐的狂热爱好者，他给你发来邮件，询问你最喜爱的音乐类型和歌手。请你根据表格中的问题提示及要求，给Mike回一封邮件，告诉他相关情况。
与作要点 参考句型
1. What kind of music do you like best 2. Why do you like it so much 3. Who is your favorite singer When I listen to …, I always feel… I can know more about their real life by… I hope to see him/her sing live one day.
要求：
1. 邮件要包括表格内所有提示要点，可适当拓展；
2. 邮件中不得出现与你自己相关的真实信息；
3. 词数不少于80，邮件的开头和结尾都已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How is everything going
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I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
16．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友 Chris对中国文化很感兴趣。他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。
提示词语:manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks
提示问题：
·What do we do when we meet people for the first time
·How do we behave properly at table
要求：
(1)根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于80词的英文写作；
(2)文中已给出内容不计入总词数；
(3)所给提示词语仅供选用；
(4)请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners.
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17．何其有幸，生于华夏。我们每一个中国人都为伟大祖国骄傲自豪。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你刚认识的美国笔友Dave写封信，向他介绍你的祖国。
提示：
1. What do you know about China
2. What are the Chinese people like
3. …
参考词汇：population，long history，places of interest， hard-working and friendly.
要求：
1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Dear Dave,
I’m happy to be your friend. I’d like to tell you something about China.
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18．为了呼吁人们保护濒危动物，某中学英文杂志开设了“保护濒危动物”专栏，现面向广大中学生征稿。假如你对这个话题很感兴趣，请你写一篇英语短文，然后向该杂志投稿。
内容包含：
1.动物濒临灭绝的原因（至少写两条）；
2.作为中学生，我们能为保护濒危动物做些什么（至少写两条）？
要求：
1.内容要全面；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.词数不少于100，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：forests, grasslands, endangered, cut down, pollute, kill, meat or fur, call on, advise
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends.
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19．旅行可以使人放松，开阔眼界。假如你是八（1）班的李海，很喜欢旅行，请用英语写一篇短文，与同学们分享一下你的旅行体验。
内容需包括以下要点：
1. 旅行的好处（至少两点）；
2. 介绍你的一次旅行经历（时间、地点、人物、出行方式、经过、心得、感受）；
3. 你对同学们有关旅行的倡议。
要求：
1. 词数在80-100左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括以上所有要点，并可适当发挥，文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle.
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20．科技让生活变得更美好。学校英文报以“Life in the future”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，介绍你的未来生活。
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不能透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Life in the future
With the rapid development of science and technology, life in the future will be better and better.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Jane,
I am glad to hear that you’re interested in Zanhua. Zanhua has a long-standing history, dating back to the Tang dynasty. These charming hair decorations can be crafted from fresh flowers, plastic, or silk. Whether it’s a grand formal event like a festival or a simple casual gathering among friends, people of every age group are fond of adorning themselves with Zanhua. Wearing it is a way to express our sincere wish for happiness and good luck. It’s truly a wonderful and unique tradition. If you have some free time, do come and experience it in person! I’m positive you’ll be deeply attracted by its charm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封书信；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时” ；
③ 提示：根据加拿大朋友Jane对泉州蟳埔簪花的兴趣，依据所给簪花历史、设计、适用场合、寓意等提示信息完成回信，介绍簪花并邀请朋友体验，不能遗漏要点。
写作步骤]
第一步，开头表明很高兴得知Jane对簪花感兴趣；
第二步，依次介绍簪花历史、制作材料、适用场合、寓意等内容；
第三步，结尾邀请Jane前来体验簪花传统。
[亮点词汇]
①date back to追溯到
②be fond of喜欢
③in person亲自
[高分句型]
①Zanhua has a long-standing history, dating back to the Tang dynasty.（现在分词短语作状语）
②If you have some free time, do come and experience it in person!（if引导条件状语从句）
2．例文：
Effective communication plays an important role in solving problems and building relationships. I think the most useful skill to communicate better is to respect others. I would like to share my experience with you.
Last year I went travelling with my good friend. When I made the plan, he disagreed. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought about it and realized that his advice was actually pretty good. We should respect each other. I said sorry to him and then we had a good trip.
In my opinion, the effective communication is very helpful. I should learn how to get on well with others. I should learn to be a good listener and understand others. I should also respect others politely.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，点明主题；
第二步，具体介绍自身的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①go travelling去旅行
②say sorry to sb.向某人道歉
③get on well with sb.与某人相处得很好
[高分句型]
①When I made the plan, he disagreed. (when引导时间状语从句)
②We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文：
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to be here and share something about my hometown with you.
Located in the northwest of Hubei, Xiangyang is a city where history and modernity blend. The weather here is pleasant, which makes it comfortable to live in. You can taste delicious Xiangyang beef noodles, a specialty that locals love. Xiangyang has a long history and rich cultural heritage. There are many places of interest, such as the Ancient Longzhong, the Xiangyang Ancient City Wall, and the Xiangyang Museum.
I love my hometown very much because it is not only beautiful but also full of history and culture.
That’s all. Thanks for your attention.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍襄阳的地理位置；
第二步，分享襄阳的气候、食物、历史和名胜古迹；
第三步，表达对家乡的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①be located in 位于
②live in 居住
③such as 例如
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Located in the northwest of Hubei, Xiangyang is a city where history and modernity blend.（where引导的定语从句）
②The weather here is pleasant, which makes it comfortable to live in.（which引导的定语从句）
③You can taste delicious Xiangyang beef noodles, a specialty that locals love.（that引导的定语从句）
4．例文：
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Li Hui. It is an honor to stand before you today to talk about one of China’s most beloved treasures—the Giant Panda.
They have black and white fur, and live in the mountains of Sichuan, Shaanxi, and Gansu provinces in China. They feed on bamboo. Sometimes, they may eat small animals or eggs, but bamboo remains their favorite food.
In my opinion, the Giant Panda is a symbol of peace. We should protect them. Protecting these lovely animals can keep the balance of our ecosystem.
Thank you.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中大熊猫的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你准备一篇英文演讲来介绍中国的大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“体貌、饮食习惯、你的感受等”几个方面重点介绍大熊猫的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食；
②in one’s opinion依某人来看；
③a symbol of……的象征；
④keep the balance of保持……的平衡。
[高分句型]
①It is an honor to stand before you today to talk about one of China’s most beloved treasures—the Giant Panda. (“It is an honor to do sth”句型)
②Protecting these lovely animals can keep the balance of our ecosystem. (动名词作主语)
5．例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you something about China. China is the biggest country in Asia and has a history of over 5,000 years. It has rich and diverse culture.
Last weekend, our school organized some students to take part in the “Experience China” activity in Beijing. We read Chinese stories, enjoyed traditional Chinese food like Beijing duck. Besides, we visited many places of interest, such as the Palace Museum. Through these activities, I deeply felt the charm of Chinese culture. I also realized the importance of inheriting and protecting our traditional culture. What a wonderful and meaning experience!
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，并补充“感受”部分；要求内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国；
第二步，介绍上周活动的过程和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②feel the charm of 感受……的魅力
③realize the importance of 意识到……的重要性
[高分句型]
What a wonderful and meaning experience! (感叹句)
6．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【解析】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你理想中教室的外观；
第二步，介绍教室中使其“新”的先进技术；
第三步，说明学生将如何利用这些技术进行学习；
第四步，表达你对理想教室的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①large and bright 宽敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互动白板
④virtual reality headsets 虚拟现实头戴设备
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式学习体验
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的宾语从句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (现在分词作状语)
7．例文
Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless.
To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一和第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解；
第二步，具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事；
第三步，最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the source of……的来源
②prepare for准备
③show appreciation for对……表示感谢
[高分句型]
①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother.（表语从句）
②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions.（动词不定式作目的状语）
8．例文
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. I want to talk something about endangered animals—pandas.
Pandas live in Sichuan, China. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍濒危动物的基本情况、生存现状以及濒危的原因，比如繁殖困难、食物短缺等；
第三步，给出保护它们的具体的建议，比如建设自然公园等。
[亮点词汇]
①feed on以……为食
②be in danger处于危险之中
③set up建立
④so that以便于
⑤raise money筹钱
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
②It is also a good idea to raise money for them. (it作形式主语句型)
③I hope there will be more pandas in the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
9．例文
Dear Jim,
Here is good news for you. Fuzhou Culture Festival will be held in our school next Friday. I’m happy to invite you to join us. Now let me tell you something more about it.
Fuzhou Culture Festival will begin at 14:00 and end at 17:00 next Friday. It will be held on the school playground.
On that day, you can experience a Min opera show, in which my classmates and teachers will act. Li Mei, a student from Class 1, Grade 9, will give a speech about the history of Fuzhou. I am sure you will be interested in the speech. It can help you to learn more about Fuzhou and Chinese culture. Meanwhile, there will be some activities about traditional clothing of Fuzhou, which can make you learn about the culture changes of Fuzhou. Besides, you can taste a lot of delicious traditional local food.
It’s a good chance both to increase our understanding of Fuzhou culture and make new friends.
I’m looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤］
第一步，告诉外国朋友举办“福州文化节”的好消息，并邀请朋友Jim加入；
第二步，介绍“福州文化节”举办的时间和地点；
第三步，详细介绍文化节的活动内容；
第四步，表达这次活动的意义；
[亮点词汇］
①give a speech发表演讲
②be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型］
①On that day, you can experience a Min opera show, in which my classmates and teachers will act. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
②It will be held on the school playground. (一般将来时的被动语态)
10．例文
Beautiful Tangshan
Tangshan is in the east of Hebei province. It has a history of over 17,000 years and a population of about 7.8 million. There are many places to visit in Tangshan. South Park offers wonderful live-action performances, and Tangshan Museum is a large and meaningful place for research, education, and culture. The local food, such as chess-shaped shaobing, is also very delicious. The people in Tangshan are friendly and welcoming.
Tangshan is a city full of charm and history, attracting more and more people from around the world.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，包括地理位置、历史、人口、旅游景点和特色食物。考生需要围绕这些要点进行写作，同时可以适度拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍唐山的地理位置和历史背景；
第二步，详细描述唐山的人口、旅游景点和特色食物；
第三步，可以对唐山的魅力进行总结，表达对家乡的热爱和赞美。
[亮点词汇]
①in the east of在……东边
②such as比如
③full of 充满
[高分句型]
South Park offers wonderful live-action performances, and Tangshan Museum is a large and meaningful place for research, education, and culture.（and并列句）
11．例文
The Cultural Symbol of Xiamen in My Eyes
I’m glad to know that we’re planning to introduce Xiamen through WeChat official accounts. I’d like to tell you the cultural symbol of Xiamen in my eyes.
In my opinion, Gulangyu Island is a cultural symbol of Xiamen. Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery. The island is also known as the “Piano Island” because of its rich musical heritage. Walking through its streets, you can feel the blend of Chinese and Western cultures. This unique charm makes Gulangyu a must-visit place in Xiamen.
I hope my idea can be taken. Thanks!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图(开头已给出)；
第二步，具体介绍什么是厦门的文化标志，并叙述原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① In my opinion 在我看来
② be known as 作为……而出名
③ the blend of... ……的融合
[高分句型]
①Gulangyu is famous for its well-preserved colonial architecture and beautiful natural scenery.（并列结构）
②I hope my idea can be taken.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．例文
Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur
Nestled in the west of Inner Mongolia, Bayan Nur boasts a beautiful location with different weather. It’s cold in winter and warm in spring. There are many popular food here. You can taste delicious hot pot. Yogurt is also a staple in every meal. And of course, mutton dishes prepared with generations-old recipes satisfy even the most discerning palates. As for the sights, you can go to the freshwater lake in China. It’s Ulansuhai Nur. Walk along its shores and take in the wonderful views. The people of Bayan Nur are friendly and kind. They eager to share their stories, customs, and traditions.
In conclusion, Bayan Nur is a treasure of natural beauty and cultural experiences. Welcome to my hometown-Bayan Nur!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我的家乡巴彦淖尔；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容,从“地理位置、气候、美食等”几个方面重点介绍家乡巴彦淖尔；
第三步，书写结语表达“欢迎来到我的家乡”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②eager to do渴望做某事
③In conclusion总而言之
[高分句型]
①There are many popular food here. (there be句型)
②And of course, mutton dishes prepared with generations-old recipes satisfy even the most discerning palates. (动词过去分词作后置定语)
13．例文
Let’s Protect Pandas
Pandas are a symbol of China. Pandas are white and black. They are very cute and friendly to people. They like eating bamboo. Now the number of pandas is becoming smaller and smaller. Why First, people cut down many trees and they can’t find enough food and lose their homes. Second, some people kill them to get money.
In my opinion, it is important for us to protect pandas. First, we should build more nature reserves for them. In addition, we must stop people from killing them. What’s more, we should make a law so that they can get enough protection.
Let’s try our best to protect pandas!
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍熊猫的外形和性格特点；
第二步，阐述熊猫面临的现状和原因；
第三步，提出保护熊猫的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①a symbol of……的象征
②the number of……的数量
③stop sb from doing sth阻止某人做某事
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, it is important for us to protect pandas.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②What’s more, we should make a law so that they can get enough protection.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
14．参考例文：
Dear Mike,
How are you Glad to hear that you will study and live in China.
Firstly, eating with serving chopsticks is necessary in China. Secondly, when dining with your host family, remember to let the older seat and start eating first. Secondly, in China, when we have dinner, we can talk to each other happily. But it’s impolite to talk loudly. Thirdly, it’s also considerate to finish eating neatly, without leaving too much food on your plate. Lastly, appreciating the food and thanking your hosts is crucial. Show your gratitude and expressing how much you enjoy it. A simple “thank you” goes a long way in Chinese culture.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Chen Qian
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写出几条具体的中国餐桌礼仪，让Mike学习。
第二步，结束语写出期待与Mike见面的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to each other 互相交谈
②Chinese culture 中国文化
③go a long way 会有很大帮助
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when dining with your host family, remember to let the older seat and start eating first.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Appreciating the food and thanking your hosts is crucial.（and连接并列成分）
15．例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going I’m very glad to get your letter. Now let me tell you about my favorite music and singer.
I know you’re a fan of pop music. I like pop music best, too. When I listen to pop songs, I always feel very relaxed. The song writers write down their experiences and feelings in the songs, so I can know more about their real life by listening to pop songs. Of all the singers, my favourite one is Li Jian. He has a beautiful voice. I’ve already listened to most of his songs and I hope to see him sing live one day.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Thanks!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，问候对方；开门见山，引出话题：介绍自己最喜欢的音乐及歌手；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢的音乐类型、歌手及原因；
第三步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① hear from sb. 收到某人的来信
② write down 写下
［高分句型］
① When I listen to pop songs, I always feel very relaxed. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I know you’re a fan of pop music. (宾语从句)
16．Dear Chris,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them. Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. I hope the above is helpful.
Please feel free to ask for more information.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国人与别人第一次见面应注意的事；
第二步，介绍被邀请去别人家做客应注意的事情；
第三步，介绍吃饭时应注意的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①shake hands握手
②be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks.（时间状语从句）
②China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here.（并列句）
17．例文
Dear Dave,
I’m happy to be your friend. I’d like to tell you something about China. China is the biggest country in Asia. China has a population of more than 1. 4 billion. The Yangtze River is one of the longest rivers in the world. China has a long history of over 5,000 years.
There are also many places of interest and delicious food in China. For example, there are the Great Wall and the Palace Museum in Beijing. The Chinese people are hard-working and friendly. You will feel very comfortable if you visit China. People will help you when you have problems.
I love China very much. Welcome to China and enjoy our culture!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍中国的人口、历史地理；
第二步，介绍中国的名胜古迹和人等。
[亮点词汇]
①more than超过
②delicious food美食
[高分句型]
①You will feel very comfortable if you visit China.（条件状语从句）
②People will help you when you have problems.（时间状语从句）
18．例文
As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now.
The most of animals like to live in the forests, grasslands and where there are no population. But now, to make money, humans cut down trees and pollute the rivers, animals don’t have enough places to live in or enough food to eat. What’s more, humans kill them because they want them for meat or fur.
It’s everyone’s duty to protect endangered animals. As middle school students, what can we do First, I think we should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals. And then, we should advise the government to protect the homes of endangered animals.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“保护濒临动物”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“动物濒临灭绝的原因、如何保护濒危动物”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①however然而
②what’s more更重要的是
③cut down砍倒
[高分句型]
①What’s more, humans kill them because they want them for meat or fur.（because引导的原因状语从句）
19．例文
Hello, everybody! I am Li Hai in Class One Grade Eight. I’d like to say something about travelling. Travelling is a good lifestyle. As one of the lifestyle for the modern humans, travelling is loved by more and more people. Traveling can not only broaden our horizon, but also relax us physically and mentally.
Last summer holiday, I took a trip to Yunnan with my family. Yunnan is in the southwestern part of our country. It’s a good place with beautiful mountains, clean rivers and kind people. Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere. The fruits there were very fresh. We stayed there for about one week. We went to Kunming, Dali and the Old Town of Lijiang. We enjoyed the local food. We also went to climb the mountains and took many photos. We all had a good time. Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.
When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather. We also need to bring some common medicines.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据所给提示要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍旅行的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己的一次旅行经历；
第三步，提出关于旅行的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also…不仅……而且……
②took photos照相
③had a good time玩得高兴
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①Trees and flowers could be seen everywhere.（情态动词的被动语态）
②Although it was a bit tiring, I still think it was the most unforgettable experience.（让步状语从句；宾语从句）
③When we travel somewhere, we should pay attention to the local weather.（时间状语从句）
20．参考例文:
Life in the future
With the rapid development of science and technology, life in the future will be better and better. I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today.
With the help of technology, building houses on the sea will be possible. As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future. People will build houses on the sea at that time. In their houses, they will take the elevator to the underwater world. They will travel between the land and sea by plane or boat. About the education, all students won’t have to go to school and they will take online classes at home. And they can read the e-books instead of the books made of paper. What’s more, we may travel by flying car.
I hope all of these can come true and our life will become better and better in the future.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：本文应该主要用第三人称来写，部分需用第一人称；表明观点时，要合理畅想；要从居住和教育等方面展开写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头要表明写作内容和指向。总体表明未来生活会有所不同；
第二步，从居住和教育等方面具体来写；
第三步，总结和抒情。提及对未来美好生活的憧憬。
[亮点词汇]
①With the rapid development of在……的快速发展下
②better and better越来越好
③instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①I think that life in the future won’t be the same as it is today.（that引导的宾语从句）
②As the population is growing quickly, people may move onto the sea to live in the future.（as引导的时间状语从句）
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