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【期末考点突破】专题09 书面表达20篇（冀教版2024）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，也有美好的西方童话。比如，愚公移山的故事就让我们深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语作文来讲述愚公移山的故事，并发表自己的观点。
提示：
1. Tell the story simply;
2. Do you agree with Yu Gong’s action Why or why not
要求：
(1)短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，可适当发挥；
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范，词数80个左右，；
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的人名、校名和地名；
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves the Mountains. Once upon a time,
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2．童年时获得的东西中总有一件是你最爱的，并能给你带来美好的回忆，比如一个礼物，一个玩具……。请介绍你童年中最喜爱的一样东西，晒晒你“童年”的美好回忆。
提示：
要求：
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you.
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3．学校举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请你参考以下提示以“The changes in my hometown”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
过去：生活贫困，房屋又小又旧。污染严重垃圾遍地。去别的地方很困难，游客很少。
现在：住房宽敞明亮，许多人有了自己的汽车。环境越来越好了。每年有成千上万的游客来参观这里。
将来：请你展望家乡的未来。
注意：1.短文须包括提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
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4．假设你是张华，收到了好友赵敏的电子邮件。在邮件中，赵敏认为青少年应该专注于学业，不需要承担家务。请结合邮件内容，回复一封电子邮件，阐述你的观点并说明理由。
Dear Zhang Hua,
How’s everything I saw a survey today saying many teenagers do housework. But I think it’s unnecessary. We’re already busy with exams and homework. Don’t you agree What’s your opinion
Zhao Min
要求：1.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
3.词数：70个左右。开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Zhao Min,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Looking forward to your reply.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
5．2024“华夏之旅●国际中学生夏令营”将到访河北，活动主办方决定面向全省招募少年志愿者来用英语“讲好中国故事，让世界了解河北”。假如你是李华，请根据下面的招聘通知，并结合自身实际，用英文写一封自荐信。
Volunteers Wanted
Tour China Summer Camp 2024 is coming soon! We want volunteers for the summer camp.
What do you like to do How is your English Do you know something about Chinese history or culture Please introduce one of the places of interest in Hebei to us. We are looking forward to your letters and hope you can join us!
写作要求：
（1）你的自荐信至少包括通知中提到的要点；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80左右，信件开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱，为此，请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校开展的研学活动并发表看法。
内容要点如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (观察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
(2) 词数80左右；
(3) 内容连贯，不要逐条翻译，补充一两点个人看法；
(4) 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：experience v. 体验 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意义的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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7．假如你是李华，你校英文网站正在开展以“The Internet and Me”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
提示：
(1) How long do you surf the Internet every day
(2) What do you often do on the Internet
(3) What do you think of the Internet
注意：
（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
（3）70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life.
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8．互联网在我们的生活中正变得越来越受欢迎，我们可以使用互联网做许多事情，如何正确使用互联网是一个值得关注的问题。请以“How to Use the Internet Properly (正确地)”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。
提示：
1. What can we do on the Internet
2. What do you usually do on the Internet
3. How can we use the Internet properly
写作要求：
1．文中须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥;
2．文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3．词数80左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet.
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9．你的朋友Mike即将面临理化微机中考，他深感压力巨大，有时和父母争吵，这些影响了他的学习。请你写一封信，给他提一些有益的建议并阐述理由。
(1)锻炼身体，学会放松自己；
(2)和老师朋友谈谈感受，寻求解决问题的方法；
(3)至少补充一条建议。
注意:
(1)短文应包括所给内容要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数 80~100。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I know that you are busy preparing for your important exams every day and you feel tired and stressed. As your friend,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．“记录精彩时刻，分享快乐生活”，石家庄二中教育集团润德学校公众号面向初二学生征集推文。在润德，我们开展了丰富的校内活动，英文歌巡展、讲故事大赛、歌王争霸赛等等，根据以下提示请你分享自己最喜欢的一首美妙动听的英文歌、或一个动人心弦的故事亦或一本引人入胜的好书。
提示：
1. What is the best story/song/book that you have known
2. What is the story/song/book about
3. Why do you like it
注意：
1. 提示内容应全部涉及，可适当发挥。
2. 文章中不得出现试卷中出现过的故事以及书籍如Journey to the West，以及真实的人名和班级，否则按问题卷处理。
3. 90—110词左右。
参考词汇：make me feel... full of... learn a lot from...
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11．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Tom发来邮件，说非常想了解下你家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动，请根据表格中的相关信息回复Tom.
The weather temperature, warm and rainy...
Spring activities (任选两个即可) play Tai Chi special clothes, health, get on well with nature...
fly kites colourful, different shapes, good luck...
drink spring tea green tea, good for eyes and teeth, move out heat (热量) from the body...
注意：
（1）回复邮件中须包括表格中的信息，活动任选两个即可，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数70个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
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Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
12．随着社会的不断发展，环境也发生着不断的改变，越来越多的动物濒临灭绝，请以“Protecting the Animals”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示词：pollution；cut down；kill；stop…from；plant trees；do something…
提示：
(1)Why should we protect the animals
(2)How can we protect the animals
要求：
(1)文中必须包含所有提示要点，并适当发挥；
(2)条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80个；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和地名等相关信息。
Protecting the Animals
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13．为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德,这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动 (a series of labor activities)，请根据提示的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇短文向学校英语报投稿。
提示：
1. What did you do
(planted trees, grew vegetables, repaired things, swept the floor...)
2. How did you feel
要求：
1.必须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥。
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
3.词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I took part in a series of labor activities in our school this term.
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14．假如你是初二的一名学生同时担任着学校英文网站的主编，准备在网站设立Dialogue with Teachers专栏 (column) 。
请根据下面的提示写一篇短文，谈一谈设立此专栏的目的。
提示：
1. Develop a good relationship (respect and understand, become friends);
2. Give some advice (on homework, after-school activities, …).
注意：
1. 短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：respect尊重；dialogue对话；purpose目的
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website.
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15．春天来到了。春是一个永恒的话题。请你根据下列提示写一篇有关于你家乡春天的短文。
写作提示：
1. 描述春天的特点，例如天气特点，气温等。(不少于两点)
2. 描写你在春天经常进行的活动。(不少于两种)
3. “一年之计在于春”，写出你在新的一年中的计划或决心。
4. 字数要求80字左右。(开头已给出，不计字数)
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season…
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16．任何人的生活都不会是一帆风顺的，在日常生活中经常会出现一些让我们觉得烦恼的事情。假如你是李华，下面是你的好朋友李琳的一些烦心事儿，请选择一件烦心事儿，给李琳写一封回信提建议。
★Feel nervous when taking an exam.
★Have trouble talking with her parents.
★Have a fear of speaking English in public.
写作要求：
1.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
2.词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Lin,
I am very glad to read your letter.
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Yours,
Li Hua
17．假设你是刘东，想加入学校刚成立的篮球俱乐部。请根据表格信息，给学校负责人Mr. Li写一封自荐信。
个人信息 加入理由
（1）性格外向，喜欢运动； （2）每周打球至少两次，班级中篮球打得最好； （3）课余时间常观看体育节目。 （1）可以结交更多朋友； （2）提高自己的篮球水平； （3）……（再补充一条）
注意：
（1）内容必须包括所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；（2）词数：80左右；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very glad to hear that our school will have a basketball club. I’d like to join it.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Dong
18．在平时的学习生活中，我们会遇到各种困难或压力，但是同学们都能够成功的应对。请你根据自身经历 (experience)，讲述一下如何克服学习和生活中的困难。
要点：What was the experience
How did you solve the problem successfully
What can you learn from the experience
What will you do in the future to be better
要求：80词左右；可适当发挥；书写工整；语句连贯；要点齐全。
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19．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因近视减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
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I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
20．今年3月28日是第27个中国中小学生安全教育日，教育部会同公安部治安管理局印发《关于开展全国中小学生安全教育日活动的通知》，请你就安全问题写一封倡议书。从交通、饮食、运动、防溺水等方面向全校同学发出安全倡议。提示词：traffic rules，healthy food，hurt，swim alone
要求：
（1）词数80个左右；
（2）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
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《【期末考点突破】专题09 书面表达20篇（冀教版2024）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．例文
We all know the famous Chinese story called Yu Gong Moves a Mountain. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. His house was blocked by a big mountain, so he decided to move it with his family. They worked very hard every day, but the mountain was still there. Some people laughed at him, but he never gave up.
I agree with Yu Gong’s action. Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals. Yu Gong’s story teaches us to be brave and persistent, no matter how difficult the task is.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍对愚公移山的看法，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简要介绍愚公移山的故事；
第二步，介绍自己对愚公移山的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②laugh at嘲笑
③agree with同意
[高分句型]
①Although it seemed impossible to move the mountain, his spirit of never giving up is very important. （让步状语从句）
②Sometimes, if we keep trying, we can achieve our goals.（条件状语从句）
2．例文
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文。
②时态：一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时和现在完成时。
③提示：根据提示内容，介绍自己童年中最喜欢的一样东西，注意要点齐全，语言连贯，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直奔主题，介绍童年最喜欢的一件物品，什么时候得到的及拥有时间。
第二步，介绍喜欢这件物品的原因。
第三步，介绍这件物品的特别之处。
[亮点词汇]
①since自从
②special特别的
③remind sb. of使某人想起
④good memory美好记忆
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引导原因状语从句)
②It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. (it固定句型)
③I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. (when引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)
3．例文
The Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the years. In the past, people lived a poor life. The houses were small and old, and pollution was serious—rubbish was everywhere. It was also difficult to travel to other places, so few tourists came here.
Now, everything has changed. People live in large and bright houses, and many even own cars. The environment is getting better: streets are cleaner, and trees and flowers can be seen everywhere. Thousands of tourists visit my hometown every year to enjoy its beauty.
I hope my hometown will develop faster in the future. More high-tech factories can be built to create jobs, while keeping the environment green. I believe it will become a modern and charming city, attracting more visitors and bringing more happiness to the people here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时，一般现在时及一般将来时的混合使用；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求先写我家乡过去的情况。
第二步，按题目要求再叙述我家乡现在的情况。
第三步，按题目要求再展望我家乡未来的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①take place 发生
②thousands of 数以千计的
③in the future 将来
[高分句型]
①It was also difficult to travel to other places, so few tourists came here.（it作形式主语）
②Thousands of tourists visit my hometown every year to enjoy its beauty.（动词不定式作目的状语）
4．例文
Dear Zhao Min,
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I have a different opinion. In my view, teenagers should do housework.
First, doing chores helps develop responsibility. For instance, cleaning your room teaches you to organize things. Moreover, it improves life skills like cooking. Second, it teaches how to appreciate others’ work. When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts.
Therefore, balancing study and chores is key to growth. Let’s try to help at home!
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【总体介绍】①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】第一步，表明自己的立场：支持青少年做家务；
第二步，阐述做家务的理由；
第三步，总结观点，鼓励行动。
【亮点词汇】①for instance例如
②the key to……的关键
【高分句型】①First, doing chores helps develop responsibility. （动名词作主语）
②When you clean dishes, you realize your parents’ daily efforts. （when引导的时间状语从句）
5．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Hebei Province. I’m writing to ask for the chance to work as a volunteer at the summer camp.
I love talking to people and sharing stories. My English is good enough to communicate with international students. I know a lot about Chinese history and culture. For example, Chengde Mountain Resort in Hebei is a great place to visit. It has a long history and beautiful scenery. I can tell the stories behind it to the campers.
I really want to join you and help make the summer camp a success. I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自荐信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据所给的问题同时进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图（已给出）；
第二步，介绍自己的相关信息，并介绍河北的一个景点；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with和……交流
②for example例如
③be part of成为……的一部分
[高分句型]
①My English is good enough to communicate with international students.（动词不定式作结果状语）
②I hope I can be part of this wonderful event.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出这次活动；
第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；
第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in person 亲自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（宾语从句）
7．例文
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend about one hour online every day.
On the Internet, I often do many useful things. First, I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge. Sometimes, I chat with my friends on social media to share our daily life. Besides, I enjoy listening to music and watching funny short videos to relax myself after study.
I think the Internet is really helpful. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. However, we should use it properly and not spend too much time on it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，需围绕每天上网时长、上网做的事情、对互联网的看法展开，可适当补充细节，突出三个核心要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头点明互联网在生活中的重要性，自然引入下文。
第二步，依次回答三个提示问题，先说明每天上网时长，再列举上网做的学习、社交、娱乐等活动。
第三步，最后阐述对互联网利弊的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①search for 搜索
②share 分享
③relax myself 放松自己
④more convenient and colorful 更方便和丰富多彩
[高分句型]
①I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I think the Internet is really helpful.（宾语从句）
8．例文
How to Use the Internet Properly
The Internet is becoming more and more popular in our lives. We can do many things on the Internet. We can send emails, chat with friends, search for information, watch movies, play computer games and so on. I often use the Internet to learn English. Sometimes I listen to songs on the Internet to relax. But some students can’t use the Internet properly. As a result, they don’t have much energy to study well. So it’s important for us to use the Internet properly. First, we can use the Internet to find information and learn new words. Second, we shouldn’t use the Internet to play computer games. Because of playing games at night, some students feel tired in class. At last, we shouldn’t spend too much time on the Internet, it is bad for our eyes. So we must use the Internet properly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍我们可以用互联网做很多事情；
第二步，具体阐述作者用互联网做哪些事情；
第三步，阐述如何正确使用互联网。
[亮点词汇]
①and so on等等
②as a result结果
③be bad for对……有害
[高分句型]
①So it’s important for us to use the internet correctly. (it作形式主语，不定式作真正主语)
9．例文
Dear Mike,
I know that you are busy preparing for your important exams every day and you feel tired and stressed. As your friend, I’ll give you some opinions.
First, doing exercises can help you to reduce your stress. I think it’s important to learn how to relax yourself. Moreover, you should talk to your teachers and friends about your feelings. You can find the ways about solving problems with them. Lastly, you can join a music club after school. Maybe you’ll find your favourite things.
In a word, getting a good grade is important for us, but making your body healthily is more important than it. I wish you’ll be better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容给朋友一些建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示内容详细介绍自己的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to sb和某人交谈
②after school放学后
③in a word总之
[高分句型]
①First, doing exercises can help you to reduce your stress.（动名词短语作主语）
②I think it’s important to learn how to relax yourself.（宾语从句）
10．例文
My favorite song is Never Say Never sung by Justin Bieber. This song is about never giving up. When I first listened to this song, I was a little girl who was in a dilemma. This song encouraged me to face the difficulties and move on.
When I listen to this song, I am full of energy. It makes me feel confident. It tells me not to give up. And I’ve learned a lot from it. So I like it best. I think you should listen to this song especially when facing difficulties.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍自己最喜欢的歌曲以及它是关于什么的；
第二步，介绍喜欢这首歌的原因及这首歌对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①give up 放弃
②listen to 听
③dilemma 困境
④encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事
⑤move on 继续前进
[高分句型]
①When I first listened to this song, I was a little girl who was in a dilemma. (when引导的时间状语从句和who引导的定语从句)
②I think you should listen to this song especially when facing difficulties. (省略that的宾语从句)
11．例文
Hi Tom,
I’m happy to know that you are interested in the spring in my hometown. Let me tell you something about it.
In spring, the temperature is around 15-20°C. It’s warm but often rainy. People here enjoy two special activities. First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks. It helps keep healthy and connects us with nature. Second, flying kites is popular. We make colorful ones in shapes like dragons or butterflies, believing they bring good luck. Sometimes families drink green tea together too. It’s said to protect eyes and remove body heat.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
第二步，根据题干表格的要点，介绍家乡春天的天气情况以及具有中国特色的春天的活动；
第三步，期待对方回复并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②good luck好运气
[高分句型]
First, many people who wear traditional silk clothes practice Tai Chi in parks.（定语从句）
12．例文
Protecting the Animals
With the development of society, the environment is changing greatly. More and more animals are in danger. We should protect them because animals are our friends. They play a key role in keeping the balance of nature. Also, they make our life more interesting.
However, now pollution is getting worse. People cut down too many trees, so animals lose their homes. Some even kill animals for money. It’s time to take action. First, we should stop cutting down trees and plant more trees. New trees can provide animals with homes. Then, we must stop people from killing animals. We can make posters or give speeches to tell others the importance of protecting animals. Additionally, we can support animal protection organizations.
Animals are important. Let’s do something to protect them!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，提出应当保护动物并说明其原因；
第二步，详细介绍如何保护动物；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①play a key role扮演关键角色
②cut down砍倒
③the importance of……的重要性
[高分句型]
①We should protect them because animals are our friends. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Let’s do something to protect them! (祈使句)
13．例文：
I took part in a series of labor activities in our school this term. I did lots of things, such as planting trees, growing vegetables, repairing things, and sweeping the floor.
When I was planting trees, I learned how to dig holes and put the saplings in the right place. It was hard work, but I felt proud when I saw the little trees standing straight. Growing vegetables was also interesting. I learned about the different stages of plant growth and how to take care of them.
Repairing things made me feel useful. I learned some basic skills like fixing a chair or a desk. Sweeping the floor was a simple task, but it made the classroom clean and tidy.
Through these activities, I not only learned practical skills but also realized the importance of labor. I understand that hard work can bring satisfaction and a sense of achievement. I will continue to participate in such activities and develop a good habit of working hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，向学校英语报投稿分享劳动实践经历。
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”，描述过去参与的劳动活动。
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖参与的劳动活动（种树、种菜、修理东西、扫地等 ）以及自身感受，不能遗漏要点，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。借助开头已给句子“I took part in a series of labor activities in our school this term.”引入，表明参与了学校劳动实践活动。
第二步，具体阐述。分别描述各项劳动活动内容及自己在其中的感受，如种树时的操作及自豪心情、种菜时的有趣发现、修理东西学到的技能、扫地带来的教室变化等。
第三步，总结感悟。表达通过这些活动学到技能、意识到劳动重要性，以及未来继续参与的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②how to do sth如何做某事
③make sth+adj.使某物怎么样
④a sense of achievement成就感
[高分句型]
①When I was planting trees, I learned how to dig holes and put the saplings in the right place. (when引导的时间状语从句，及“疑问词+不定式”结构)
②Through these activities, I not only learned practical skills but also realized the importance of labor. (not only…but also… 连接并列谓语，表递进关系)
14．例文
We plan to have a new column—Dialogue with Teachers on the school English website. The main purposes of this column are twofold.
First, we hope to develop a good relationship between teachers and students. Through dialogue, we can respect and understand each other better, and even become friends. Second, teachers can offer us valuable advice. Whether it’s about daily homework or colorful after-school activities, their advice can help us a lot.
We hope this column will make communication easier and school life happier!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括所列两个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，为下文阐述设立该专栏的目的做铺垫；
第二步，具体阐述设立专栏的两个主要目的；
第三步，总结设立专栏的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①develop a good relationship 建立良好的关系
②respect and understand each other 相互尊重，相互理解
[高分句型]
①Whether it’s about daily homework or colorful after-school activities, their advice can help us a lot. (whether引导让步状语从句)
②We hope this column will make communication easier and school life happier! (宾语从句)
15．例文
Spring has arrived in my hometown. I love this lively season.
The weather in spring here is really nice. The days get longer and it’s much warmer. The sun shines brightly, but it’s not too hot. Sometimes, there are light rains. They make everything look fresh and green.
I have a lot of fun in spring. I often go for a picnic with my family in the park. We bring delicious food and enjoy the time together. Also, I like to ride my bike around the neighborhood. The gentle wind on my face makes me feel so free.
“A year’s plan starts with spring.” This year, I plan to learn a new skill-painting. I will practice it regularly. And I’ll work harder at school to get better grades. I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍春天的天气特点。
第二步，介绍自己在春天经常进行的活动。
第三步，介绍自己在新的一年中的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①go for a picnic去野餐
②in the park在公园
③make great progress取得很大的进步
[高分句型]
I believe I can make great progress in this wonderful season. (省略tnat的宾语从句)
16．例文：
Dear Li Lin,
I am very glad to read your letter. From your letter, I know you have many worries. For example, you said you had a fear of speaking English in public. Don’t worry. Here are some good suggestions for you.
First, you should try your best to speak English as much as possible. Practice makes perfect. You can improve your spoken English by practicing a lot. Second, you can join an English club. Then you can speak English with your friends. You can even have conversations with foreign teachers. I believe you can improve your spoken English.
Come on!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”及“一般过去时”；
③提示：需涵盖所有写作要点即回应对方焦虑、提出具体建议、给予鼓励，可适当添加衔接词增强逻辑性；
[写作步骤]
第一步：表达收到信时的理解与关心。
第二步：分条陈述具体建议。
第三步：用激励性语言收尾。
[亮点词汇]
① as much as possible 尽可能多
② foreign teachers 外教
③ have conversations with 与……对话
[高分句型]
① Practice makes perfect.（运用英语谚语增强说服力）
② You can improve your spoken English by practicing a lot.（by+动名词结构）
③ I believe you can improve your spoken English.（宾语从句）
17．例文
Dear Mr. Li,
I’m very glad to hear that our school will have a basketball club. I’d like to join it. My name is Liu Dong, an outgoing boy. I’m interested in sports, especially basketball. So I always play basketball at least twice a week. That’s why I play basketball better than any other student in my class. In my free time, I often watch sports shows because they’re fun to me. I fairly want to join the club. One of the main reasons is that I expect to make more friends. In addition, I also want to improve myself and make me better at basketball. Of course, I could learn teamwork from it, too.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Dong
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏表格中的要点，适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述来信目的——想加入篮球俱乐部；
第二步，详细介绍你的个人信息；
第三步，谈谈想加入篮球俱乐部的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②want to do sth想做某事
③expect to do sth期望做某事
④In addition此外
[高分句型]
①In my free time, I often watch sports shows because they’re fun to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
Overcoming Difficulties
Last term, I faced a big challenge in math. My test scores were low, and I felt nervous and unsure. I knew I needed to change but didn’t know how to start.
To solve this, I made a plan. Every day, I reviewed my notes and practiced extra problems. When I didn’t understand something, I asked my teacher for help after class. Slowly, my confidence grew. By the next exam, my hard work paid off—I got a much higher score!
From this experience, I learned that challenges can be overcome with effort and courage. Failure taught me to keep trying and ask for help when needed. In the future, I will stay positive, work step by step, and never give up. Difficulties are not the end but chances to grow stronger!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体说明遇到了什么困难；
第二步，描述解决过程；
第三步，最后写出从中所学及对未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①need to do sth需要做某事
②ask sb for help寻求某人的帮助
③pay off得到回报
[高分句型]
①When I didn’t understand something, I asked my teacher for help after class. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②To solve this, I made a plan. (不定式表示目的)
19．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I understand how worrying this can be, so I’d like to share some tips that have helped me protect my eyes.
First, I always make sure to take regular breaks when using electronic devices. For example, after every 30 minutes of screen time, I rest my eyes for at least 5 minutes by looking at distant objects. Second, I maintain good reading habits, such as keeping books at least 30 centimeters away from my eyes and avoiding reading in dim light. Third, I eat foods rich in vitamins, like carrots and fish, which are good for eye health.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：电子邮件；
时态：一般现在时；
提示：根据题目要求，向Mike分享保护视力的做法，并提供建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达关心：对Mike视力下降表示关心和理解。
第二部，分享保护视力的做法：从用眼习惯、阅读习惯和饮食三个方面提出建议。
第三步，表达祝愿：希望建议对Mike有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① take regular breaks 定期休息
② maintain good reading habits 保持良好的阅读习惯
③ foods rich in vitamins 富含维生素的食物
[高分句型]
① I always make sure to take regular breaks when using electronic devices.（运用了make sure to do sth. 表示确保做某事）
② After every 30 minutes of screen time, I rest my eyes for at least 5 minutes by looking at distant objects.（运用了after引导的时间状语从句）
③ I eat foods rich in vitamins, like carrots and fish, which are good for eye health.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．例文：
How to Keep Ourselves Safe
Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Besides, we should be careful when we make fiends online. Don’t tell our personal information to strangers. If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming alone without permission.
In short, safety must come first! It’s important to remember these for us all.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍保持安全的必要性；
第二步，从交通安全、食品安全、网络交友、防溺水等方面展开阐述如何保持安全；
第三步，阐述你的感想，呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
②personal information 个人信息
③in danger 有危险
④without permission 未经允许
[高分句型]
①Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. (祈使句；when引导时间状语从句)
②If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句)
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