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【期末考点突破】专题08 书面表达15篇（冀教版2024）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
1．假如你是Li Hua，最近收到了外国好友Lisa的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复她的邮件，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua. How is everything going I’m very interested in your school life in China. Please tell me about it. What’s your favourite subject Who is your best friend What do you usually do after school I hope that I can visit China and study in your school some day. I’m looking forward to your reply (回复). Write to me soon. Yours, Lisa
注意：（1）回复邮件中须回答所有问题，可适当发挥。
（2）回复邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Lisa,
Everything goes well. Let me tell you something about my school life.
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Best wishes! Hope to see you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．健康是生命之基，是人们幸福的源泉。假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Rose发来电子邮件，诉说自己容易感冒、不爱运动及体型肥胖的烦恼。请你根据邮件内容给她回一封邮件，谈一谈你对这些问题的看法。
Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days because of my poor health. I often catch a cold. I hate exercising and I’m too heavy. Next month, we will move to a new city and I’ll go to a new school. I’m afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me. Can you help me Your, Rose
注意：
（1）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（2）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：diet n.日常饮食 stay away from远离
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．5月3日是公众健康日。假如你所在的学校正在举办“我的健康我做主”的系列活动；旨在引导同学们规律运动，均衡饮食，优化睡眠，健康心理，预防疾病等。请联系自己的生活，根据下面的提示问题，写一篇演讲稿。
提示：1. What sports do you do to keep healthy
2. What’s your good eating habits
3. What’s your other ways to keep healthy
要求：1. 词数60左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
Hello, everyone,
Keeping healthy is really important for everyone, especially for us students.
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Thanks for listening.
4．健康是生命之基，是人们幸福的源泉。假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Rose发来电子邮件，诉说自己容易感冒、不爱运动及体型肥胖的烦恼。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回一封邮件，谈一谈你对这些问题的看法。
参考词汇： diet n. 节食；stay away from 远离；believe in 相信
注意：
(1)条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确。
(2)80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Li Hua, I’m not happy these days because of my poor health. I often catch a cold. I hate exercising and I’m too heavy. Next month, we will move to a new city and I’ll go to a new school. I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me. Can you help me Yours, Rose
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你是李华，最近被评为班级健康之星。你打算向大家分享一下自己是怎样保持健康的。请你根据所给的思维导图，完成这篇发言稿。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名；
3. 词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to be the Health Star of this month.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
6．臻创团队鼓励大家做文明且健康的中学生。假如你是李华，被年级评为“文明健康之星(Polite & Healthy Star)”。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，向同学们介绍你的文明行为和健康习惯，号召大家践行文明规范，共创健康校园。
要点：
1. What polite behaviors (行为) do you have
2. Why is it important to be polite to others
3. What healthy habits do you have
要求：
1. 短文应包含所有要点，行文要连贯，可以适当发挥；
2. 词数80—100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的班级和姓名。
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m very honored to be chosen as Polite & Healthy Star.
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Thank you!
7．假如今天是星期天，天气晴朗而温暖。你的家庭成员正在进行不同的活动。请你根据下面的信息和提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整，可适当发挥。
文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）。
词数：至少70个词。
人物 正在做的事
爷爷、奶奶 外出散步
爸爸 看一本历史书
妈妈 在客厅里看电视
弟弟、妹妹 在卧室里下象棋
我 ……
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8．假如你是李华，你所在的班级即将举行题为“My favourite sport”的英语演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示及要求写一篇英文发言稿。
提示:
（1） What sport do you like best
（2） Why do you like it
（3） What is your plan (计划) in the future
注意：
（1）短文应包含以上所有提示要点，可适当发挥。
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数70个左右（标题和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
My favourite sport
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That’s all. Thank you!
9．校报新增英语版本。本月主题为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”。请你写一篇70词左右的英文稿件投稿。
内容包括：
(1) Talk about at least two family rules.
(2) Talk about your opinions on your family rules.
(3) Talk about what you will do.
要求：70词左右，短文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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10．亲爱的同学们，我们班即将进行班委改选，这是一个展示自己，为班级贡献力量的好机会。请你写一篇竞选演讲稿，说明你为什么适合担任此项职务，并分享你对班级未来发展的设想。
请使用以下提示信息：
1. I believe I am a good monitor because...
2. I will do ... for our class.
3. My goal (目标) is to make our class more…
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11．现在是星期日早上八点，布莱克一家都很忙。请根据下面表格中的提示，写一篇短文介绍布莱克一家人正在做什么。
注意：
（1）包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥想象。
（2）词数：80词左右（首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Member Doing
Mr. Black read a newspaper
Mrs. Black write a letter
Helen listen to music
The dog sleep
Today is Sunday.
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12．健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保障，但是网络抢走了我们的锻炼时间，垃圾食品威胁着我们的健康。请根据下面的提示，以“How to keep fit”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：
（1）坚持锻炼；
（2）均衡饮食；
（3）合理上网；
（4）充足睡眠；
（5）……
注意：
（1）短文必须包括提示中的所有内容，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：a balanced diet 均衡的饮食 surf the Internet 上网
How to keep fit
It’s important for us to keep fit. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice.
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13．步入初中生活已经一个学期了，你的朋友 Maria非常关心你的学校生活。请你根据下面的思维导图，向你的朋友介绍一下你的学校生活吧。
注意：
1. 作文中至少包含思维导图中的5个问题；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 70词左右。开头结尾不计入总词数。
Dear Maria,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14．亲爱的同学们，一个学期即将结束，相信你已经适应了初中生活。假设你是Oscar，你在澳大利亚的笔友Tomy想了解你的校园生活。请根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一封邮件给Tomy。
要点提示：
校园内部 学校又大又漂亮，有教学楼、图书馆、操场……
校园生活 8:30上课, 下午5:30放学 有很多有趣的学科，最喜欢……因为…… 学校有不同的俱乐部，我参加了…… 学校有美味且健康的午餐，有…… 老师和同学都很友好……
注意事项：
(1)内容必须包含表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥：
(2)词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
(3)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等相关信息。
Dear Tomy,
I love my school very much. I would like to tell you something about my school and school life.
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Lots of love,
Oscar
15．校园，是未来的摇篮，是知识的殿堂，是友谊的天地，是进步的阶梯。假设你是张华，你校正在开展以“My School Life”为主题的写作比赛，请你根据所给思维导图，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的校园生活。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
2. 词数60个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My School Life
School is a building which has four walls with tomorrow inside. My school life is
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《【期末考点突破】专题08 书面表达15篇（冀教版2024）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．例文
Dear Lisa,
Everything goes well. Let me tell you something about my school life.
We have six classes a day and our first class begins at 8:00 a.m. Our last class is over at 5:00 p.m. After that, we can go to the playground to play sports. My favorite subject is history, because our history teacher often teaches us a lot of interesting stories about Chinese history. And I think they are meaningful. Li Ming is my best friend. He is friendly to me, and he always helps me when I have problems. After school, we usually play basketball together. It makes us healthy and relaxed. I really enjoy my school life.
Best wishes! Hope to see you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要根据邮件内容进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先问候对方，点明写作目的；
第二步，具体介绍自己的学校生活，包括最喜欢的科目、最好的朋友、放学后的活动等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达祝愿以及期待对方来中国参观。
[亮点词汇]
①play sports 进行体育运动
②meaningful 有意义的
③be friendly to sb. 对某人友好
④healthy and relaxed 健康且放松
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is history, because our history teacher often teaches us a lot of interesting stories about Chinese history. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②He is friendly to me, and he always helps me when I have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
2．例文
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, you’d better do more exercise. Doing exercise often can help you keep fit and make you feel happy. You can choose a sport you like. Second, a balanced diet is very important. So you can eat more healthy food, such as fruit and vegetables. They can give you enough energy and make you strong. Stay away from fast food because it has lots of salt, fat and sugar. What’s more, you should believe in yourself and try to be nice to others. Then you will make more friends in the new school.
I hope my advice will help you. If you have any other questions, please let me know.
Best wishes!
Yous,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，表示愿意提供建议；
第二步，根据邮件中的问题，谈一谈对这些问题的看法并给出建议；
第三步，表示希望自己的建议有用，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①Stay away from fast food because it has lots of salt, fat and sugar. （原因状语从句）
②If you have any other questions, please let me know.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文
Hello, everyone,
Keeping healthy is really important for everyone, especially for us students.
Firstly, I play basketball three times a week. It helps me stay energetic. Secondly, I always eat vegetables and fruits every meal, and I drink enough water instead of sugary drinks. What’s more, I go to bed before 10 p.m. to get 8-hour sleep and share my feelings with friends when feeling stressed. Let’s all take action to be healthier!
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、开篇点题，引出话题；
第二步、介绍自己保持健康的方式，包括： 规律运动，均衡饮食，优化睡眠，健康心理等；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①three times a week一星期三次
②instead of而不是
③take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①Let’s all take action to be healthier!(祈使句)
4．例文
Dear Rose,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re not happy these days. Here is some advice for you.
First, you should do more exercise. Doing exercise can help you keep fit and make you feel happy. You can choose a sport you like. Second, you should eat more healthy foods, like vegetables and fruits. They can give you enough energy and make you strong. Lastly, you should be confident. Believe in yourself and try to make more friends in the new school.
I hope my advice will help you. If you have any other questions, please let me know.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示信息写作，注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，安慰对方；
第二步，提出具体建议；
第三步，希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①keep fit保持健康
②try to do sth努力做某事
③make more friends交更多朋友
[高分句型]
①Doing exercise can help you keep fit and make you feel happy.（动名词作主语）
②If you have any other questions, please let me know.（条件状语从句）
5．范文
Hello, everyone! I’m happy to be the Health Star of this month. Now let me tell you about my ways to keep healthy.
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. Besides, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day. Moreover, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：主要为一般现在时 ；
③提示：需围绕保持健康的方法展开，包含思维导图中的饮食、运动、生活习惯要点，文章满足要求，适当进行了内容填充。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇表明身份，本月健康之星，并引出分享保持健康的方法这一主题；
第二步，分别从饮食，多吃蔬果、少吃垃圾食品、运动，常运动，列举运动项目（每天散步或跑步）、生活习惯，早睡早起不熬夜，等方面介绍保持健康的做法；
第三步，结尾简洁收尾，结束发言。
[亮点词汇]
①seldom很少
②such as例如
③hardly ever几乎从不
[高分句型]
①And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. (and并列结构)
6．例文
基础版：
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m very honored to be chosen as Polite & Healthy Star.
As a polite student, I always say “hello” to teachers and “thank you” when others help me. I never say dirty words or litter. Being polite makes our school a better place.
For health, I run every morning and play basketball twice a week. I also eat vegetables and drink milk every day. These habits keep me strong.
Let’s all be polite and healthy together!
Thank you!提升版：
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I’m very honored to be chosen as Polite & Healthy Star.
Being polite isn’t just about rules—it’s about respect. For example, I make sure to greet my teachers, and I patiently hold doors for others. When my classmate forgets something, I will lend mine to her or share mine with her. These small acts create a warm environment for everyone.
Similarly, staying healthy requires daily effort. While some find exercise boring, I turn it into fun by dancing to music during morning runs. Additionally, I have nuts and fruits instead of sugary snacks. Most importantly, I balance study and rest. So I don’t feel nervous or worried.
Remember, politeness and health are like seeds: the more we look after them, the happier our school life grows. Let’s start today!
Thank you!
【详解】以第二篇为例
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍有自己哪些文明行为及文明行为的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己的健康生活习惯；
第三步，书写结语，号召大家践行文明规范，共创健康校园。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如
②share sth with sb和某人分享某物
③instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①When my classmate forgets something, I will lend mine to her or share mine with her. (when引导时间状语从句)
②Remember, politeness and health are like seeds: the more we look after them, the happier our school life grows. (the+比较级，the+比较级的结构)
7．例文
Today is Sunday. The weather is warm and sunny. It’s a nice day for my family to do fun things at home.
My grandparents are walking outside. They are breathing fresh air and talking happily. My dad is in his armchair. He is reading a history book. My mom is in the living room. She is watching TV and laughing sometimes. My little brother and sister are in the bedroom. They are playing chess. They are trying to win the game.
What am I doing I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework. The music helps me do my homework better. It’s a great Sunday afternoon. We all have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需包含所有内容，可适当增添细节以保证内容连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍天气情况，引出主题。
第二步，具体介绍人物及其对应活动。
[亮点词汇]
①breath fresh air呼吸新鲜空气
②watch TV看电视
③play chess下象棋
④have a good time 过得愉快
[高分句型]
①They are breathing fresh air and talking happily.（and连接并列成分）
②I am in the study, listening to music while doing my homework.（while引导时间状语从句）
8．例文
My favourite sport
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua, and I’m glad to share my favourite sport with you. My favourite sport is basketball. It is interesting and relaxing. Playing basketball makes me feel relaxed and happy. Also, it helps me stay healthy and strong. I often play basketball with my classmates after school, and we often have a great time together.
In the future, I plan to join the school basketball team. I’ll train hard to become a better basketball player. I hope I can take part in more basketball games and make more friends who love basketball like me.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写自己喜欢的运动是什么和喜欢的原因。
第二步，再写未来关于这个运动的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①stay healthy and strong 保持健康和强壮
②have a great time玩的开心
③take part in加入
[高分句型]
①Playing basketball makes me feel relaxed and happy.（and连接并列成分）
②I hope I can take part in more basketball games and make more friends who love basketball like me.（宾语从句和定语从句）
9．例文
Most families have some rules for children to follow. Good family rules are good for our growth. Now I will talk about my family rules.
First, I should help my parents do the housework such as cleaning the house, washing the clothes and watering the flowers. Second, opening a book is always good. As a student, don’t spend much time watching TV or playing computer games instead of reading. A good book is a good friend. What’s more, we should be honest.
In my opinion, my family rules make me a better person. I will follow the rules strictly.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，关于家庭规则；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明家庭规则对成长的重要性，并引出自己的家庭规则；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍两条家庭规则，并表达对规则的看法；
第三步，书写结语。表明自己将严格遵守家庭规则的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①be good for对……有益
②such as例如
③what’s more并且，还
④in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①As a student, don’t spend much time watching TV or playing computer games instead of reading. (祈使句)
10．例文
Dear classmates,
I want to be our class monitor.
I believe I am a good monitor because I am responsible and helpful. I always finish my tasks on time and listen to others’ ideas. I will do three things for our class: First, I will organize study groups to help everyone improve. Second, I will plan fun activities like sports games. Third, I will talk to you often to solve problems together. My goal is to make our class more united and active. Let’s work as a team and make our class the best!
Thank you for your support!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的优势、会怎么做以及目标；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on time 准时
②talk to 跟……谈论
③solve problems 解决问题
④work as a team 团队合作
[高分句型]
①I believe I am a good monitor because I am responsible and helpful.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
②Let’s work as a team and make our class the best!（祈使句和并列结构）
11．例文
Today is Sunday. It’s eight in the morning. The Blacks are at home. Mr. Black is sitting in a chair. He is reading a newspaper. Mrs. Black is sitting at the desk. She is writing a letter to a friend, sharing stories of their recent adventures. Helen, her daughter, is standing near the window. She is listening to music. Lisa is only six. She is playing with a toy. She is sitting on the bed. Oh. What’s it under the bed It’s a white dog. It’s sleeping now. What a happy family it is!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和现在进行时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体描述每个家庭成员在做什么；
第二步，书写结语，表达自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to music听音乐
②play with和……玩
[高分句型]
①She is writing a letter to a friend, sharing stories of their recent adventures.(现在分词作伴随状语)
②What a happy family it is!(感叹句)
12．例文
How to keep fit
It’s important for us to keep fit. As middle school students, we should have a healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice.
First, we should do exercise for at least one hour every day, such as running and walking. Second, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Try not to eat junk food. Third, we’d better not spend too much time surfing the Internet. It is bad for our study and eyes. Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up late because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, be happy. Learn to smile at ourselves at any time.
If we can follow the advice, I believe we can keep healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先表达保持健康的重要性，引出如何保持健康的主题；
第二步，具体介绍保持健康的一些建议，例如坚持锻炼、均衡饮食、合理上网、充足睡眠等；
第三步，书写结束语，号召大家要保持健康。
[亮点词汇]
①do exercise 锻炼
②have a balanced diet 均衡饮食
③spend time doing sth. 花费时间做某事
④stay up late 熬夜
⑤be good for 对……有益
⑥learn to do sth. 学会做某事
⑦keep healthy 保持健康
[高分句型]
①Fourth, go to bed early and don’t stay up late because enough sleep is good for our health.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②If we can follow the advice, I believe we can keep healthy.（if引导的条件状语从句）
13．例文
Dear Maria,
I hope this letter finds you well. I want to share my school life with you. My school is not big, but it is very beautiful. My favorite subject is English, because I think it’s very useful. I joined the English club. I can practice my spoken English and make many new friends there. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon every day. To make my school life meaningful, I’ve been involved in community service projects organized by the school. I hope this gives you a glimpse into my school life. I’m looking forward to hearing about your experiences as well.
Warm regards!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，希望分享学校生活；
第二步，具体阐述学校生活；
第三步，期待对方的分享。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②look forward to期待
③as well也
[高分句型]
①My favorite subject is English, because I think it’s very useful. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②To make my school life meaningful, I’ve been involved in community service projects organized by the school. (不定式作目的状语)
14．例文
Dear Tomy,
I love my school very much. I would like to tell you something about my school and school life.
Our school is big and beautiful. It has a beautiful garden and a modern library. We can read different kinds of books in the library. There are two classroom buildings. We have different classes in them. We also have a big playground. We do sports there every day. Every Monday, we raise the flag there.
Our class begins at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 5:30 p.m. I study many interesting subjects. I like English best because I think it is very useful. There are many different clubs. I am in the reading club. We have lunch at school. There are vegetables, rice, fruit, meat and so on. All my teachers and classmates are friendly and helpful.
I love my school.
Lots of love,
Oscar
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据要点提示进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达要介绍自己的学校和学校生活；
第二步，介绍学校设施；
第三步，介绍自己的学校生活；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of不同种类的
②raise the flag升旗
③and so on等等
[高分句型]
I like English best because I think it is very useful. (because引导原因状语从句)
15．例文
My School Life
School is a building which has four walls with tomorrow inside. My school life is wonderful. First, my teachers are kind to me and they work very hard. They always help me with my study. Second, my classmates are friendly and nice. We often talk about study and play together after class. Third, I have enough time to take part in all kinds of outdoor activities. That makes me healthy and happy. I love my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的学校生活，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍自己的学校生活；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be kind to对某人友好
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③talk about谈论
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①First, my teachers are kind to me and they work very hard. (并列句)
②I have enough time to take part in all kinds of outdoor activities. (动词不定式作定语)
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