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2025年中考英语三轮复习备考
1．目前，AI正悄然改变着我们生活的方方面面。我校英语报正以“AI in Our Life”为题向大家征稿，请你结合生活实际，谈谈AI带来的便利与挑战，并提出如何与AI共处的应对策略。
要求：
1. 80—120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
AI in Our Life
In today’s world, AI is like a new friend that has come into our lives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．2025年中国春晚节目《秧BOT》展现了中华传统艺术与现代科技的完美结合，吸引了全世界的目光，人工智能AI (Artificial Intelligence) 已经极大地改变了我们的生活。请你以“What AI Brings to Us”为题，简介AI，让世界看到中国科技的发展与进步。
参考词汇：personalized learning 个性化的学习；smart home devices 家用智能设备
要求：
1. 根据导图所示，适当增减、发挥；
2. 文中不得提及真实的校名和姓名；
3. 词数80＋，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。
What AI Brings to Us
With the development of science and technology, AI is everywhere and has become______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假如你是李华，昨天你和朋友去了市展览馆(the city exhibition hall)参观了中华传统艺术展(a Chinese traditional art exhibition)。请根据下表，写一篇短文，记录你的所见所感。
What you see How you feel
paper cutting works（剪纸作品） 每一幅作品都在讲述着一个有趣的故事
shadow puppet works（皮影作品） 它们能够演艺精彩的戏曲
Chinese calligraphy works（书法作品） 汉字有这么漂亮的写法
Chinese painting（中国画） ……
要求：1.选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday. There was a ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
From what I saw there, I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
4．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你校英语社团决定举办一场环保活动，以激发师生关注并参与资源回收再利用，目前正针对活动安排征集师生建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个有关资源回收再利用的活动设计方案并说明理由。
提示词语：organize, recycle, artworks, creative, awareness（意识）
内容提示：
● What do you suggest for the activity
● Why do you suggest doing that
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
5．2025年蛇年春节是申遗成功后的第一个春节，意义非凡，引发了广泛关注。作为青少年，我们肩负着传承和发扬中华民族传统文化的光荣使命。在众多的传统佳节里，如春节、元宵节、中秋节、端午节等，请你以“My favorite traditional festival”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点：
(1)你最喜爱的传统佳节是什么；
(2)人们如何庆祝这个节日；
(3)我们如何做去传承这个节日。
2.要求：
(1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
(2)词数100左右。
My favorite traditional festival
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．随着科技的快速发展和AI (Artificial Intelligence) 工具(如ChatGPT和DeepSeek)的问世，给人们的学习和生活带来了巨大的变化。假如你受邀参加某英语报“Teenager Says”栏目，请说说你对人工智能的思考。
写作要点：
1. 对AI快速发展的看法；
2. 列举人工智能发展带来的优点 (至少2点)；
3. 分享一些“AI助力英语学习”的经验；
4. 谈谈你对未来人工智能发展的期待。
要求：
1. 内容应包括以上所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，并适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
3. 词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I’m very glad to be invited to join “Teenager Says”. With the rapid development of science and technology Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular and the invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic in our daily life.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．假设你是李华，你校将举办国潮文化节（China-Chic Cultural Festival）。请结合以下思维导图，用英语写一封邮件，邀请你的外国好友Jason来参加。
注意：
1. 包含提示内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
3. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
8．假设你叫李华，你们学校将举行“How to Eat in a Healthy Way”为题的演讲比赛，请你准备写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
1.说明此次演讲的主题(how to eat in a healthy way)。
2.我们应该少吃、不吃以及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因。
3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明。
4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。
5.词数：80—100。
How to Eat in a Healthy Way_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假设你是张明，你的好朋友李磊上周给你写了一封信，信中和你分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能AI（artificial intelligence）的一些观点，并表述了他对于人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请以此为背景，根据提示写一封回信。
写作提示：
1. 建议李磊不要过分忧虑
2. 在信中阐述人工智能的优点
人工智能的优点 1) 可以代替人类做一些危险的工作，从而保障人类安全
2)可以代替人类进行单调枯燥的工作，有时间去做自己喜欢的事情
3)在我国科技扮演着重要的角色
……
3. 在结尾总结你对人工智能的看法。
Dear Li Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
10．假如你是李斌，请阅读你的加拿大笔友Jack写给你的邮件，并给他回复。
Dear Li Bin, I am very excited to be visiting China during the Dragon Boat Festival! I would like to learn more about this festival before I arrive. I want to know when the Dragon Boat Festival usually takes place and how people in China celebrate it. I’m also interested in what the festival means to Chinese people. I’m looking forward to experiencing the amazing culture of China during my visit! Yours, Jack
参考词汇：on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month, make/ eat zongzi, watch dragon boat races, in memory of Qu Yuan, play an important part, ...
要求：1.先补全邮件格式中缺少的部分，再写邮件内容；
2.回函必须包括来函询问的要点信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整、规范；
4.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
5.词数：不少于70。（部分内容已给出，但不计入总词数。）
________,
I’m so happy to know that you plan to visit China during the Dragon Boat Festival. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________,
________
11．今天是6月5日世界环境日，我校学生唐唐和西西参加了由学校组织的环境保护活动。假如你是唐唐或者西西，请向学校公众号投稿，分享所见所思。
须包括以下要点：
1．发现过去的问题：校内：放学后不关闭电源及…… (补充一条)；校外：学生乘坐私家车上下学，造成交通拥堵及环境污染。
2．自己的感受
3．环境保护的措施 (至少3条)
写作要求：1．内容必须包括所有要点，合理发挥省略部分，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear school,
It is the World Environment Day today. We did a survey and found out some problems. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》上映以后，一举打破多项影史记录，在国外也非常火爆。假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Cindy想了解中国动漫，请你根据以下信息给她写一封邮件，介绍哪吒、木兰或其他一个卡通形象及理由。
Name: Ne Zha Appearance: big eyes, round face, magical wheels (风火轮) Reasons: naughty (淘气的), fight against bad people, protect... Name: Mulan Appearance: tall, long face, dress up... Reasons: smart, fight in the army, protect...
注意：（1）邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数100词左右，邮件中已给的句子不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．范文：
AI in Our Life
In today’s world, AI is like a new friend that has come into our lives. And it’s changing our world really fast.
On the one hand, AI brings many advantages. It can make our life more convenient. For example, it helps check homework and look up information effectively. Besides, it can also make our homes smarter and avoid traffic jams on the way to school or work. What’s more, it even helps doctors analyze X-rays and find new medicines. On the other hand, there are also some challenges. Some people worry that relying on AI may make us lose our ability to choose. Also, false information may be given.
In my opinion, we should see AI as a helper. We should keep learning and be careful with our personal information. We need to make good use of AI while avoiding its disadvantages. Only in this way can AI do more good for us and serve us well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，注意上下文的逻辑关系。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，人工智能正迅速地改变着世界；
第二步，具体阐述人工智能带来的优点和不利方面；
第三步，介绍自己的观点，提出关于AI应对策略。
[亮点词汇]
①on the one hand...一方面……
②in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
On the other hand, there are also some challenges. (there be句型)
2．例文
What AI Brings to Us
With the development of science and technology, AI is everywhere and has become an important part of our daily lives. It brings us both convenience and new opportunities.
In learning, AI tools like Doubao and Deepseek help students study more conveniently. For example, AI can check grammar mistakes in English writing, provide personalized learning plans, and even explain difficult math problems step by step. Some apps even use games to make memorizing words fun! At home, AI makes our life easier and smarter. Smart home devices can control lights, TVs, and home robots through simple voice commands. Robot cleaners keep floors clean. Moreover, AI can even help parents plan healthy meals. However, protecting private information is important when using AI devices.
In conclusion, I believe if we use AI properly and creatively, it can bring us a brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图所提供的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述AI的普及以及其对日常生活的重要性，点明AI带来便利和新机遇的双重影响；
第二步，分述AI在学习和家庭生活中的具体应用，强调其便利性与功能性，同时提及隐私保护的重要性；
第三步，总结全文，强调合理、创新使用AI对未来的积极意义。
[亮点词汇]
①step by step 逐步地
②check grammar mistakes 检查语法错误
[高分句型]
①However, protecting private information is important when using AI devices. (动名词作主语)
②In conclusion, I believe if we use AI properly and creatively, it can bring us a brighter future. (if引导条件状语从句)
3．参考范文：
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday. There was a Chinese traditional art exhibition. We saw many amazing works. The paper cutting works were full of creativity—each piece told an interesting story, like folk tales or historical events. The shadow puppet works impressed us most. They could act out wonderful operas, and the way they moved made the stories come alive. The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written, with different styles from ancient masters. As for Chinese paintings, they used simple ink and brush to create peaceful mountains and rivers, making me feel the beauty of nature and traditional aesthetics.
From what I saw there, I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给表格中的要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍和朋友去参加了中华传统文化展，引出下文；
第二步，具体介绍本次展览的内容；
第三步，表达自己通过参观，对中国传统艺术产生的强烈自豪感，点明主旨。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②come alive活跃起来
③the beauty of nature自然之美
[高分句型]
①They could act out wonderful operas, and the way they moved made the stories come alive.(并列句)
②The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written, with different styles from ancient masters.(宾语从句+被动语态+伴随状语)
4．例文
I’m Li Hua, a Grade 9 student. I’m excited to share my idea for the activity.
I suggest organizing a “Recycling Art Competition” with three steps. First, a teacher can give a short talk on recycling and show practical examples, such as making flower pots from plastic bottles. Then, participants will have one week to create their own artworks using waste materials. After the creation period, art teachers will judge the artworks to select the best ones. The top 10 works will receive prizes, like eco-friendly notebooks or recycled-material pens.
This activity not only encourages creative thinking, but also helps participants better understand recycling principles, making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.
I hope my idea can be considered. Thanks.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，推荐一个活动；
第二步、提供活动内容设计并说明理由；
第三步、书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①give a short talk on recycling关于回收的简短演讲
②receive prizes领取奖品
③think critically批判性思考
not only ... but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The top 10 works will receive prizes, like eco-friendly notebooks or recycled-material pens.（or连接并列成分）
This activity not only encourages creative thinking, but also helps participants better understand recycling principles, making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.（not only ... but also...连接并列成分）
5．例文
My favorite traditional festival
Out of all the important festivals, the Dragon Boat Festival stands out as my favorite. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month in memory of the poet—Qu Yuan.
As a traditional festival rich in cultural significance, it has a history of about 2,000 years. People celebrate it in various ways such as participating in or watching dragon boat races and eating the traditional food—zongzi.
From my point of view, we teenagers should make an effort to promote this festival. To begin with, we plan to make a poster about the festival’ s development, and put it up in our library. Furthermore, we will make a video with both Chinese and English introductions. I believe we should take pride in traditional Chinese culture and try to pass on its values to the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍最喜欢的节日端午节；
第二步，介绍端午节的来历和庆祝方式；
第三步，阐述传承这个节日的具体方法。
[亮点词汇]
①stand out 突出
②in memory of 为了纪念……
③significance 重要性
④in various ways 用不同的方式
⑤participate in 参加
⑥make an effort to do 努力做某事
⑦take pride in 为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①I believe we should take pride in traditional Chinese culture and try to pass on its values to the world. (省略that的宾语从句)
6．例文
I’m very glad to be invited to join “Teenager Says”. With the rapid development of science and technology, Artificial Intelligence becomes more and more popular and the invention of ChatGPT and DeepSeek has made AI a hot topic in our daily life.
I think AI’s rapid development is a remarkable progress. It not only brings convenience but also drives innovation across various fields. For example, AI can help doctors analyze medical images more accurately, saving time and improving diagnosis efficiency. In education, it provides personalized learning plans for students, making learning more effective.
When it comes to English learning, AI has been a great helper. I often use AI-powered apps to practice pronunciation. The apps can identify my mistakes and offer real-time corrections. Besides, AI tutors on ChatGPT help me with writing by providing grammar suggestions and expanding vocabulary. They even simulate conversations to improve my speaking skills.
Looking ahead, I hope AI will become more human-friendly. It could create more interactive language learning environments, like virtual language partners that understand cultural nuances. Meanwhile, ethical use of AI should be emphasized to ensure it serves humanity positively. With proper development, AI will surely make our lives smarter and more connected.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为“Teenager Says”栏目投稿文章；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主，涉及未来期待时使用“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生需涵盖对AI快速发展的看法、AI发展的优点、AI助力英语学习的经验以及对未来AI发展的期待，不可遗漏要点，且需适当发挥，使内容条理清晰、行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。以受邀参加“Teenager Says”栏目，引出对AI快速发展的看法；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从AI发展带来的优点、AI助力英语学习的经验两方面进行阐述；
第三步，书写结语。表达对未来人工智能发展的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②a hot topic热点话题
③not only...but also...不仅……而且……
④personalized learning plans个性化学习计划
⑤real-time corrections实时纠正[高分句型]
①I think AI’s rapid development is a remarkable progress.（宾语从句）
②It not only brings convenience but also drives innovation across various fields.（not only...but also...句型）
③I often use AI-powered apps to practice pronunciation.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文
Dear Jason,
I know you are interested in Chinese culture. Here is good news for you.
Our school will hold the China-Chic Cultural Festival at 2:00 p.m. on May 30th in the school playground. During the event, we will watch folk activities such as lantern making and paper cutting. At the same time, we will enjoy Beijing Opera and martial arts performances. We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together. I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. You should bring a camera to take photos and pay attention to safety.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍国潮文化节举行的时间和地点；
第二步，介绍具体的活动安排；
第三步，给出注意事项。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②at the same time同时
③look back on回顾
④pay attention to注意
[高分句型]
①We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②At the same time, we will enjoy Beijing Opera and martial arts performances.（and连接并列成分）
8．例文
How to Eat in a Healthy Way
Good morning, everyone! Today my topic is “How to Eat in a Healthy Way”.
Firstly, we should avoid fried food and sweets like hamburgers and ice cream, because they are high in sugar and fat. Secondly, eating more vegetables, fruits and whole grains is important, as they provide vitamins and fiber.
Personally, I always have breakfast with milk and eggs. For snacks, I choose apples instead of chips. Also, I drink water instead of sugary drinks. These habits help me stay energetic.
Remember, good eating habits protect our health. Let’s make wise food choices together! Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，具体给出建议和描述自己的健康饮食习惯；
第三步，呼吁大家都有个好的饮食习惯。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of 而不是
②protect our health 保护我们的健康
③make wise food choices 做出明智的饮食选择
[高分句型]
①Firstly, we should avoid fried food and sweets like hamburgers and ice cream, because they are high in sugar and fat.（原因状语从句）
②Secondly, eating more vegetables, fruits and whole grains is important, as they provide vitamins and fiber.（原因状语从句）
9．例文
Dear Li Lei,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages. The following is my point of view regarding AI.
First of all, AI can be used to do dangerous jobs and keep workers safe. If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well. As a result, people can free themselves from over-work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI can also help a lot in scientific development. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China. That’s why the government is paying more attention to it.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree I’m looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、承接已给的开头，建议李磊不要过分忧虑；
第二步、阐述人工智能的优点；
第三步、总结自己对人工智能的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①take the place of代替
②first of all首先
③pay more attention to重视
④instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①If people don’t want to repeat the same boring and tiring work day after day, they can use AI to help them as well.(if引导条件状语从句)
10．Dear Jack,
I’m so happy to know that you plan to visit China during the Dragon Boat Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival usually takes place on the fifth day of the fifth Chinese lunar month. It's a very important traditional festival in China. On this day, people have various ways to celebrate. Many people make and eat zongzi, which is a kind of special food made of sticky rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. And in many places, there are exciting dragon boat races. People gather along the riverside to watch dragon boat races. The festival is in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet in ancient China. He was loyal to his country but faced unfair treatment. In the end, he chose to jump into the river. Chinese people respect and miss him deeply, so this festival plays an important part in our culture, reminding us of patriotism and noble virtues. I'm sure you'll have a great time experiencing the festival when you come.
Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Li Bin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件回复类的应用文；
②时态：本文应以“一般现在时”为主，用于介绍端午节的常规时间、传统习俗等客观事实；
③提示：需按照邮件格式，针对笔友疑问，全面介绍端午节时间、庆祝方式及意义，并适当补充，运用参考词汇，保证语句通顺、逻辑连贯，且不出现真实信息，满足词数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全邮件格式，添加称呼和落款；
第二步，回答笔友问题：介绍端午节时间、庆祝方式、节日意义等；
第三步，表达期待并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②various各种各样的
③remind sb. of...使某人想起……
[高分句型]
①Many people will make and eat zongzi, which is a kind of special food made of sticky rice wrapped in bamboo leaves. （非限制性定语从句）
②Chinese people respect and miss him deeply, so this festival plays an important part in our culture, reminding us of patriotism and noble virtues. （现在分词作伴随状语）
③I'm sure you'll have a great time experiencing the festival when you come.（宾语从句、时间状语从句）
11．例文
Dear school,
It is the World Environment Day today. We did a survey and found out some problems. We did a survey and found out some problems.
In our school, many students forget to turn off the lights and computers when they leave the classroom. What’s more, they seldom turn off the taps. In the school canteen, more and more students throw away the food just because they don’t like it. In our daily life, many students go to school in their parents’ cars. This not only causes traffic jams, but also brings pollution to our environment.
I think we should take action to protect the environment. We should save water and electricity. When we go out, we should try to take a bus or ride a bike instead of driving a car. Besides, we should take the initiative to learn some knowledge about protecting the environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，引出下文；
第二步，公布调查结果，表明自身感受；
第三步，陈述自己保护环境的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①forget to do 忘记做某事
②throw away 乱扔
③traffic jam 交通堵塞
④take action to do 采取行动去做某事
⑤instead of 代替
[高分句型]
①In our school, many students forget to turn off the lights and computers when they leave the classroom. (when引导时间状语从句)
②I think we should take action to protect the environment. (that省略的宾语从句)
12．范文：
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Ne Zha.
Ne Zha is a cute boy with a round face and two big eyes. The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.
Ne Zha is sometimes naughty and makes his parents angry. I still like him because I think he is just like us. Another reason I like him is that he is really brave. He is always ready to fight against bad people and tries his best to protect his family and friends. I am often deeply moved by his spirits.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (105 words)
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Mulan.
Mulan is a beautiful girl who is tall and has a long face. Mulan takes her father’s place to fight in the army. The coolest thing is that she dresses up as a boy in the army for over ten years and nobody knows that Mulan is actually a girl.
The main reason I like Mulan is that she is really smart and brave. She is never afraid when she fights against the bad people. She just tries her best to protect her country and her people. Mulan is really a hero in my heart.
What about your favorite cartoon characters Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (104 words)
【详解】例文1为例作解析：
《关于哪吒的信件范文解析》
[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件。
② 时态：全文采用 “一般现在时”。
③ 提示：文章紧扣交流需求，先回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱，接着按顺序介绍哪吒外貌、性格特点和优秀品质，逻辑连贯，语言自然流畅，无语法错误，且通过提问引导朋友回信，增强互动性。
[写作步骤落实]
第一步：引入主题。 以回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱为切入点，自然引出要介绍的卡通人物哪吒，明确写作主题。
第二步：介绍人物。
第三步：总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双
②be always ready to时刻准备着
③try one’s best to尽某人最大的努力去
[高分句型]
①The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.” （表语从句）
②I still like him because I think he is just like us.（because引导的原因状语从句）
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