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【期末考点突破】专题04 读写综合8 书面表达8（沪教牛津版）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）
一、读写综合
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题。
Twenty years ago, Linda was a young mother with two little children depending on her. She worked for eight hours a day as a house cleaner. Washing clothes and doing the cleaning caused her fingers to split (裂开) in the cold and dry air. Before going to work, she needed to bandage her fingers. The heavy burden (负担) made her stressed out and tired.
Linda still remembered that unforgettable day. When she was working for her host, she broke an expensive glass by accident. To her surprise, the host didn’t blame (责备) her. Instead, seeing her tired face and the fingers with bandages, the host let her go home to have a rest. Though the weather was cold, Linda could feel the warmth from her host’s kindness.
Linda went back home tiredly but thankfully. When she opened the door, her son John ran up to her and shouted, “Mom! “He put his little arms around her neck. Linda lifted him up and her heart was filled with love. When she was checking her painful fingers, her daughter Mary came to her and passed her the medicine. Linda could see care in her daughter’s eyes.
Linda realized her life is full of love and care. Love and care from the people around her is the thing that keeps her going. And she believes things will get better.
1．How many children did Linda have
2．When did Linda need to bandage her fingers
3．What did Linda break when she was working for her host
4．Who passed Linda the medicine, John or Mary
5．What keeps Linda going
6．书面表达
为了传承和弘扬中华民族的优良家风，学校英文社团开展主题为“孝敬父母”的英语征文比赛。假定你是李华，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示写一篇征文参加比赛。
内容包括：
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Show respect for parents
Showing respect for parents is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.
请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。
Gretel comes from Austria. She’s eighteen years old. She’s going to stay with the Clark family for a year. Gretel has come to England because she wants to improve her English. She helps Mrs Clark in the house and goes to English classes in her spare time.
Gretel hasn’t been in England long, so she thinks that everything is strange to her. She often compares the life in London with that in Vienna. Some things are nicer in London; other things aren’t so nice. For example, shops are bigger in London than those in Vienna and there are many different kinds of shops. But it’s more expensive to enjoy yourself in London. It’s expensive to have a meal at a restaurant or to go to a movie.
Gretel likes English people because they are kind and often willing to help others. But English people don’t speak English the way she heard in Vienna. Sometimes she can’t understand them at all. Gretel has got used to many things already, but she can’t get used to breakfast in England. She often says, “Fruit juice, porridge, eggs, tea, toast and butter! How can you face all that food so early in the day ”
7．How long is Gretel going to stay in England
8．Why did Gretel come to England
9．What does Gretel think of England
10．What are the people in England like
11．Has Gretel got used to the life in England
12．书面表达
假如你是李华，为了弘扬中华文化，推广汉语，你校将开展一场夏令营活动，为海外学生提供了解中华文化，学习汉语的机会。请你写一封邮件给你美国的笔友Betty，邀请她和她的同学来参加这个夏令营活动。
1. 邀请Betty来参加你校的夏令营活动；
2. 介绍你学校的师资，特色课程如汉语课，手工课（教做粽子，月饼，写对联……），住宿方式（住学校或者去学生家做客），课外活动；
3.期待Betty来参加夏令营活动。
（生词：手工课handicraft class；对联couplet）
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80左右。
Dear Betty,
Yours,
Li Hua
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答下面问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题。
I’m Alex. I had dreamed of being an exchange student for years. And it finally came true this summer. I got a chance to study in Shanghai, a large city in China.
I arrived in Shanghai in August and began my studies at Shanghai University. Soon, I found living in China was very different from living in my home country.
One day, I was having dinner at a restaurant. I felt thirsty (渴的), so I asked the waitress for a cup of water. To my surprise, she gave me a cup of hot water. It was the first time that I had experienced culture shock. Now, I know that Chinese people think drinking hot water is good for their health. If someone falls sick, he/she should drink plenty of hot water.
Also, the use of the mobile phone is really worth (值得) mentioning. It has surprised me greatly. In China, mobile phones are widely used for almost everything-ordering food in restaurants, communication and travelling. It seems that there is no need to carry cash (现金) in China.
There are many differences between China and my country. Luckily, my host family helped me deal with (应付) culture shock. They told me a lot about different lifestyles of Chinese people. They also showed me how to behave properly (举止得体) without making others uncomfortable. Thanks to them, I can live a relaxing life in China now.
13．When did Alex arrive in Shanghai
14．What did the waitress give Alex when he asked for a cup of water
15．What is really worth mentioning according to Alex
16．Who helped Alex deal with culture shock
17．How does Alex feel about his life in China now
18．书面表达
请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex在邮件中说，这周末他将去他的中文老师家参加聚会，但让他烦恼的是他对中国的做客礼节一无所知。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英语给Alex回一封邮件。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文，意思连贯，语句通顺，语法正确。
(3) 80词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well. I understand you’re feeling a bit unsure about the etiquette of visiting a Chinese family. Don’t worry. I’m here to help.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
A．阅读回答问题
My friend Diana is a dentist (牙医). She works hard and makes a lot of money. She likes traveling very much.
Diana spends about 15 days in traveling a year. She visits a different country every year, and last year she decided to go to Kenya, Africa. She wanted to go on safari (游猎) there.
On her first day there, she and the other travelers left the hotel early in the morning on a special safari bus. They went with a guide, and he answered all their questions. Everyone was ready to take photos of the animals.
Suddenly there was a problem. The bus was stuck in the mud (陷进泥里). It couldn’t move. And then three large elephants appeared (出现). The travelers were very happy and took lots of photos. But when the elephants came near the bus, people on the bus were all quiet (安静的).
Everyone was worried because the elephants were very big, and the bus was very small. But then something incredible (不可思议的) happened. The elephants pushed the bus out of the mud and onto the road. The travelers were very happy, and Diana took lots of wonderful photos of the kind animals.
19．What does Diana like
20．How many days does Diana spend in traveling a year
21．Where did Diana travel last year
22．What happened to the safari bus
23．How did the travelers feel after the elephants helped them
B．书面表达
24．假如你在上周末参加了一次郊游 (outing)。请根据提示信息，以“A pleasant outing”为题，写一篇短文。可适当发挥。
内容包括: The People’s Park, ride bikes, have a picnic, your feelings
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。
A pleasant outing
A．回答问题(本题共5小题，每小题2分，共10分)
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题，并将答案写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
World Music Day is celebrated on June 21st every year. It originated (起源) in France. In 1981, the French Minister of Culture Jack Lang came up with this idea. In 1982, The first World Music Day took place in Paris and since then, it has become an annual (一年一次的) celebration for the whole world’s music. On the first World Music Day, people of all ages and backgrounds got together and enjoyed music.
We love World Music Day for many reasons. It provides us with a great chance to learn about different music styles and express our creative ideas freely. We can write about our favorite songs or make art inspired by the music we’ve been listening to. On World Music Day, we should celebrate all the great things in life. We can talk about world peace, love and so on.
World Music Day is celebrated in many different ways. There are often free concerts and events held on this day. People like listening to different types of music because it can open their mind to new things. Maybe there is an event nearby where people are singing or playing music from their country. You can talk about what you heard and learn something new!
25．When is World Music Day celebrated
26．Who came up with the idea of World Music Day
27．How did people celebrate the first World Music Day in 1982
28．What does World Music Day provide for us
29．Why do people like listening to different types of music
B．书面表达(本题15分)
请根据要求完成短文写作，并将写作内容写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
30．你已经是一名九年级学生了，相比七年级刚到学校的时候，你的生活一定与以前大不一样。请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇作文，不能少于80字，开头已给出，不计入总字数。
内容包括：
1) 谈谈自己现在和以前的变化(可包括性格外貌、兴趣爱好、学习、生活方面等等，不能少于三点)；
2) 对自己未来的展望。
How I Have Changed
How time flies! I have changed a lot since I became a ninth grader this term.
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阅读下面短文，根据短文内容回答问题。
Zhao Hua is a student from a university. He has led a group of university student volunteers since last year. They help children at a primary school with their studies and daily lives. “When I was a small child,” Zhao said, “I knew March 5th was ‘Learn from Lei Feng Day’ (学雷锋日), but I didn’t know the real meaning of the spirit of Lei Feng. Now when I see the smiling faces of the kids I have helped, I deeply understand Lei Feng. I really like to help others because it makes me happy.”
Lei Feng was born in 1940 in Changsha, Hunan Province. He is one of the best-known soldiers in Chinese history. He lost his parents when he was very young. His neighbors brought him up. Then he did many good deeds (好事) in his life. For example, he gave his own money to other soldiers’ parents, and bought a ticket for a woman he didn’t know without telling her his name. Unluckily, he died in an accident at the age of 22.
On March 5th, 1963, Chairman (主席) Mao called on people to learn from Lei Feng and made the day “Learn from Lei Feng Day”. Almost 50 years has passed since Lei Feng’s death. Some people say that the spirit of Lei Feng is out of date. There have been many reports about the coldness of people towards strangers. These have made many Chinese people think deeply about themselves.
Many people think we need to promote (提倡) that spirit again. The important thing is that people must be ready to help others and make it a habit.
31．When is “Learn from Lei Feng Day”
32．Why does Zhao Hua like to help others
33．Where was Lei Feng born
34．Did Chairman Mao call on people to learn from Lei Feng
35．What do you think of Lei Feng spirit
36．长沙市望城区于 2022年3月启动了学雷锋“青锋计划”，参与活动的志愿者们捐赠了学习用品、帮助辅导功课，有些还与农村孩子一起干了农活。假设你是此次活动志愿者之一李华，请通过邮件向你的笔友Jack介绍此次活动，并谈谈你的感受。
提示： launch启动；Qingfeng Plan青锋计划；donate school supplies捐赠学习用品； help with homework辅导功课；work on farms干农活；meaningful 有意义的。
Outline Beginning: 活动背景介绍
Body: 介绍此次活动内容
Ending: 表达个人感受
要求：
1.语句通顺连贯，包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.词数80词左右；
3.文中不得出现个人真实信息。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Hua
回答问题
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。
Xi Zhinong was born in a town in Yunnan. When he was young, he moved to Kunming with his mother. But he disliked the busy and crowded city life and looked forward to nature.
In 1983, after helping make a documentary (纪录片) about birds, he began to learn photography (摄影) and take photos of flying birds. In the 1980s, the Internet was not popular in China and cameras were expensive. He borrowed a camera and kept studying how to use it. During that time, he often went to the library to read some magazines about nature. It opened a door for him to get close to nature.
In 1992, he joined in a study program to protect a kind of unusual monkeys in China. Usually the home of these monkeys has half-a-year- long winters. It brought great challenges for Zhinong’s work, but he never gave up. He went into the snow mountains six times just to take the monkeys’ photos.
Three years later, his works won international prizes. In order to call on more people to protect wildlife with cameras, he started “China Wildlife Photography Training Camp”. What a meaningful thing he does!
37．Why did Zhinong dislike the city life
38．When did he start to take photos of flying birds
39．What does the underline word “It” refer to (指代)
40．How many times did he go into the snow mountain s to take the monkeys’ photos
41．Why did he start “China Wildlife Photography Training Camp”
42．书面表达
水滴石穿，绳锯木断。奚志农用相机记录野生动物，长期坚持做好一件有意义的事情，成就更好的自己。请你以 “One Meaningful Thing I Keep Doing”为主题，根据以下思维导图，用英语写一篇演讲稿，参加学校英语俱乐部的心得分享活动，用自身的积极改变，鼓励身边的小伙伴。
注意：
(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数），文中不得透露个人信息。
One Meaningful Thing I Keep Doing
Good morning, everyone!
I am very happy to be here to give a speech today. Today I want to share one meaningful thing I keep doing. It is
That’s all. Thank you!
A． 回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。
My hometown is different from what it looked like before. Great changes have already taken place here in the past ten years.
Ten years ago, it used to be a poor village. People could only walk through the mountain roads to get there. Only one or two families had bikes or radios. People lived in low straw thatched cottages (茅草屋).
Now my hometown has changed a lot because the government helped a lot. We have built a new highway. So it’s convenient (方便的) to go in and out of the village. Also, the villagers helped build some schools in order to let children get a good education. People have made more money by working in the cities. Most families have had a car or a truck. All the villagers are living in new houses.
The environment in my hometown has also become better. There are many trees and flowers, and there is a beautiful park in our town. It has been in the town for three years. Every day, after dinner people would like to go to the park to enjoy themselves. We are living a happy life now.
I believe that one day my hometown will become a better place.
43．How could people get to the village ten years ago
44．Why has the writer’s hometown changed a lot
45．Who helped build some schools to let children get a good education
46．Where do the villagers live now
47．When would people like to go to the park
B． 书面表达
48．请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友露西暑假想要来你的家乡游玩。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文给她写一封邮件，介绍一下你的家乡。
作文要求：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
3. 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数,
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to know that you want to come to my hometown this summer holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
二、书面表达
49．为弘扬中华传统文化，你校将组织 “传统文化进校园” 的活动。假如你是学生会主席李华，为了号召更多同学参加到活动中，请你根据以下表格内容，用英文向同学们介绍此次活动。
Time Friday, May 16, 2025
Place Hongxing Square
Activities ● put on shadow puppet plays ● make toys from dough ● ... (请补充一个活动)
Opinions ● keep...alive ● ... (请补充一个你的观点)
注意：
1. 介绍应包括表格里的所有要点，可适当拓展；
2. 词数 80 词左右 (介绍的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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50．
注意：1．短文必须包括思维导图所有的信息；
2．重点谈谈此次旅行让你觉得特别的是什么；
3．词数不少于80词；
4．短文中不得出现真实的个人信息。
参考词汇：place(s) of interest 名胜古迹
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51．假设你是李华，刚结束一次难忘的三天返乡之旅。请你给好友Tom写一封英文信，分享这次假期经历。内容需包含以下要点，并适当发挥细节。
A 3-day holiday
第一天 回乡团聚，感受家乡变化……（举例说明）
家人聚餐，注意餐桌礼仪……（举例说明）
第二天 旅游踏青，参观风景名胜……（举例说明）
第三天 徜徉书海，阅读经典名著……（适当发挥）
三天之行的感受……
注意：
1.短文应包括所有的信息，注意适当发挥。
2.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Tom,
How’s everything going I’m excited to share my three-day hometown trip with you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
52．为支持深圳市的非物质文化遗产推广工作，我校将于2025年6月15日举办“非遗文化节”，特此招募学生志愿者，以便在活动期间向全校师生展示非遗产品的独特魅力和制作工艺，请你以学校文化社团负责人李华的身份，撰写一封招募信，邀请同学们踊跃报名参与。志愿者工作要求：
1. 需要提前学习非物质文化遗产相关的线上课程
2. 能用中、英双语介绍非遗产品（如剪纸、传统灯笼等）
3. ……
注意：1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
考词汇：推广promotion 非遗intangible cultural heritage （ICH）
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53．神话故事作为中国传统文化的一部分，对于学生了解民族文化及历史具有一定意义。请你以“A story I know”为题，根据以下要求，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一则神话故事及自己读后的感受。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：legend n.传说 national adj.民族的
A story I know
As an important part of traditional Chinese culture, legends are of great importance for students to know about national culture and history.
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54．第六届“中外人文交流小使者”展示活动将于下月举行。现招募中华传统文化的推介小使者。请根据以下内容，用英语写一封自荐信，向活动负责人展示你的优势与推广计划。
内容：
1. 表达你对中国传统文化的热爱和了解；
2. 分享一次你传播中国传统文化的经历；
3. 简述你自己关于传统文化的推广计划；
4. ……
要求：
1. 80~120词；
2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考信息：
organize/arrange an activity (组织活动), make videos, hold a story-telling competition, organize a cultural experience activity (组织文化体验活动), hold a knowledge competition (举办知识竞赛), conduct a workshop (开展工作坊) …
Dear teachers,
My name is Li Ming, a student from Class 3, Grade 8. I am writing to recommend myself as a young ambassador for promoting traditional Chinese culture.
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Yours,
Li Ming
55．假设你是李华，上周你和你的父母去山西大同进行了为期两天的旅行。你的英国好友Nate对大同很感兴趣，发邮件询问你的旅行经历，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件回复他。
大同之旅
第一天 第二天
◆参观云冈石窟 (Yungang Grottoes) ◆参观大同煤炭博物馆(Datong Coal Museum) ◆参观五岳之一——北岳恒山(Mount Hengshan) ◆拍了许多照片 ◆品尝美食：山西刀削面 (Shanxi Sliced Noodles)、过油肉 (Fried Boiled Pork with Black Fungus)
写作要求：1.须包含提示中的所有内容，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2.条理清楚，语言流畅，语句通顺，标点正确；
3. 80词左右。
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56．假定你是李明，你校英文网站正在开展以“A(n) ________ trip”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：1)请补全标题，如unforgettable, meaningful等；
2)你旅行中的经历；
3)你的感悟。
写作要求：1)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100左右。
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《【期末考点突破】专题04 读写综合8 书面表达8（沪教牛津版）-2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期专项训练（含答案解析）》参考答案
1．Two. 2．Before going to work. 3．An expensive glass. 4．Mary. 5．Love and care from the people around her. 6．例文
Show respect for parents
Showing respect for parents is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years. Our parents always care about us. They work hard to provide us with a better life and support us in every way possible. They are always there for us when we need them.
To show respect for our parents, we can start by helping them with household chores. For example, we can do the dishes, sweep the floor, or wash the clothes. Another important way to show respect is to study hard and make them proud. We should strive to achieve our best in school and pursue our dreams. By doing so, we can repay their love and trust.
Let’s start showing respect for our parents from now on.
【导语】本文介绍了Linda作为一名年轻母亲的生活经历，她在工作中遇到了困难，但通过周围人的关爱和支持，她感受到了生活的温暖和力量。
1．根据“Linda was a young mother with two little children depending on her.”可知，Linda有两个孩子，故填Two。
2．根据“Before going to work, she needed to bandage her fingers.”可知，Linda在上班前需要包扎手指，故填Before going to work.
3．根据“When she was working for her host, she broke an expensive glass by accident.”可知，Linda在为雇主工作时不小心打碎了一个昂贵的玻璃杯，故填An expensive glass.
4．根据“When she was checking her painful fingers, her daughter Mary came to her and passed her the medicine.”可知，是Mary给Linda递了药，故填Mary.
5．根据“ Love and care from the people around her is the thing that keeps her going.”可知，是周围人的爱和关心让Linda继续前行，故填Love and care from the people around her.
6．［总体分析］
①题材：本文是篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文所给的是一个思维导图，注意适当拓展信息。
［写作步骤］
第一步，总述孝敬父母是中国人的传统；
第二步，介绍具体孝敬父母的做法；
第三步，结束语，呼吁一起孝敬父母。
［亮点词汇］
①care about关心
②from now on从现在开始
［高分句型］
① Showing respect for parents is one of the family traditions that Chinese people have kept for thousands of years.（定语从句）
② They are always there for us when we need them.（时间状语从句）
7．She’s going to stay in England for a year. 8．Because she wants to improve her English. 9．Everything is strange to her. 10．They are kind and often willing to help others. 11．No, she hasn’t. 12．例文
Dear Betty,
There will be a Chinese summer camp in my school this summer. I hope you can come and join us. You’ll learn about Chinese culture and improve your Chinese at the same time in our camp.
Our courses are really wonderful. Our teachers are well trained and have a lot of experience. They will help you improve your Chinese. We also offer interesting handicraft classes, you can learn to make zongzi and moon cakes or write couplets here. It is a good way to learn about Chinese culture. You can stay as a guest with some of the students’ family and take part in their daily life, if you prefer, you can stay in our school. There are many exciting things to do in your free time. You can choose to take trips to Tianma Moutain and visit Xinyi Museum. Before you go home, you can also buy some Chinese art products for your friends.
I’m looking forward to your coming to China, and I am sure you will have a wonderful time here.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文介绍了格雷特尔在英国的生活情况。邀请美国笔友Betty来中国一起参加夏令营活动，弘扬中华文化，推广汉语。
7．根据“She’s going to stay with the Clark family for a year.”可知，格雷特尔将在应该待一年，故填She’s going to stay in England for a year.
8．根据“Gretel has come to England because she wants to improve her English.”可知，格雷特尔来英国，是因为她想要提高她的英语。故填Because she wants to improve her English.
9．根据“Gretel hasn’t been in England long, so she thinks that everything is strange to her.”可知，格雷特尔认为英国的一切对她来说都是陌生的。故填Everything is strange to her.
10．根据“Gretel likes English people because they are kind and often willing to help others.”可知，英国人很善良，经常愿意帮助别人。故填They are kind and often willing to help others.
11．根据“Gretel has got used to many things already, but she can’t get used to breakfast in England.”可知，格雷特尔还没有适应英国的生活，此处用否定回答，故填No, she hasn’t.
12．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中夏令营活动的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请你写一封邮件给你美国的笔友Betty，邀请她和她的同学来参加这个夏令营活动。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“发出邀请、夏令营活动情况、表达期待等”几个方面重点介绍夏令营活动的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我期待着你来中国，我相信你会在这里度过一段美好的时光”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时；
②take part in参加；
③choose to do sth选择做某事；
④look forward to期望。
[高分句型]
①There are many exciting things to do in your free time. (“There be”句型)
②You can choose to take trips to Tianma Moutain and visit Xinyi Museum. (动词不定式作目的宾语)
13．He arrived in Shanghai in August. 14．The waitress gave Alex a cup of hot water. 15．The use of the mobile phone is really worth mentioning. 16．Alex’s host family helped him deal with culture shock. 17．He feels relaxed. 18．One possible version:
Dear Alex,
I hope this email finds you well. I understand you’re feeling a bit unsure about the etiquette of visiting a Chinese family. Don’t worry. I’m here to help. Here are a few things to keep in mind.
First, you should arrive on time so as not to keep others waiting. If you are late, be sure to call and let them know. When you arrive at your teacher’s house, remember to greet everyone warmly. Secondly, during the meal, it’s important to follow Chinese table manners.
For example, let the host and the old eat first and don’t make noise at the table. Lastly, don’t forget to express your thanks to your teacher for the wonderful party before leaving.
Follow these simple tips and I’m sure you’ll enjoy your party!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本文主要介绍了Alex作为交换学生在上海的学习和生活经历，特别是他在文化差异方面的体验。
13．根据“I arrived in Shanghai in August and began my studies at Shanghai University.”可知Alex在八月份到达上海。故填：He arrived in Shanghai in August.
14．根据“I felt thirsty (渴的), so I asked the waitress for a cup of water. To my surprise, she gave me a cup of hot water.”可知Alex向服务员要水时，服务员给了他一杯热水。故填：The waitress gave Alex a cup of hot water.
15．根据“Also, the use of the mobile phone is really worth (值得) mentioning.”可知，Alex认为手机的使用非常值得提及。故填：The use of the mobile phone is really worth mentioning.
16．根据“Luckily, my host family helped me deal with (应付) culture shock.”可知，Alex的寄宿家庭帮助他应对文化冲击。故填：Alex’s host family helped him deal with culture shock.
17．根据“Thanks to them, I can live a relaxing life in China now.”可知，Alex现在在中国的生活很轻松。故填：He feels relaxed.
18．[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件写作，旨在为Alex提供关于中国做客礼节的建议；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，注意围绕中国做客礼节展开，需结合思维导图内容进行适当拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对Alex的理解，并说明写信目的；
第二步，具体介绍中国做客礼节，包括到达时间、礼物选择、餐桌礼仪等；
第三步，表达希望Alex享受聚会的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① a few一些
② on time准时
③ make noise发出声音
[高分句型]
① If you are late, be sure to call and let them know.（条件状语从句）
② When you arrive at your teacher’s house, remember to greet everyone warmly.（时间状语从句）
③ Follow these simple tips and I’m sure you’ll enjoy your party!（并列句+宾语从句）
19．She likes traveling. 20．About 15 days. 21．She went to Kenya, Africa. 22．It was stuck in the mud. 23．They felt very happy. 24．例文：
A Pleasant Outing
Last weekend, we had a great time for an outgoing and I went to the People’s Park with my classmates, Xiaogang and Li Lei. At 7:30 am, we met at our school gate. We went to the People’s Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we all sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to take a walk at once. We had a picnic under a big tree. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, we danced under the trees and played games happily. We took so many photos in the park. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm. We were tired but very happy.
What a wonderful experience we had!
【导语】本文主要介绍了作者的朋友的一次旅行经历。
19．根据“She likes traveling very much.”可知，Diana非常喜欢旅行，故填She likes traveling.
20．根据“Diana spends about 15 days in traveling a year.”可知，Diana一年大约花 15 天时间旅行，故填About 15 days.
21．根据“and last year she decided to go to Kenya, Africa.”可知，去年Diana去了非洲的肯尼亚旅行，故填She went to Kenya, Africa.
22．根据“Suddenly there was a problem. The bus was stuck in the mud (陷进泥里). It couldn’t move.”可知，旅行车遇到的问题是陷进泥里不能动了，故填It was stuck in the mud.
23．根据“The elephants pushed the bus out of the mud and onto the road. The travelers were very happy, and Diana took lots of wonderful photos of the kind animals.”可知，大象把车从泥里推到路上后，旅行者们非常高兴，故填They felt very happy.
24．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时” ；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍郊游的时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述其中的活动；
第三步，最后表达对于这个周末的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way在路上
②have a picnic野餐
③go back回来
[高分句型]
①On the way, we were so excited that we all sang loudly. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②What a wonderful experience we had! (感叹句的使用)
25．It is celebrated on June 21st. 26．The French Minister of Culture Jack Lang came up with the idea. 27．They celebrated it by getting together and enjoying music. 28．It provides us with a great chance to learn about different music styles and express our creative ideas freely. 29．Because it can open their mind to new things. 30．例文：
How I Have Changed
How time flies! I have changed a lot since I became a ninth grader this term. Looking back, I’ve changed a lot.
First of all, I was really shy when I first came to school in seventh grade. I used to be afraid to speak in public. But now, I’m more outgoing. I can give speeches in front of the whole class and make friends easily. Second, my hobbies have changed. I used to love playing computer games. I spent a lot of my free time on it. But now, I’m more interested in reading a number of books. Third, my study habits are totally different. In seventh grade, I was careless and didn’t preview or review lessons. Now, I’m serious about study. I preview before classes, take notes carefully during classes, and review after classes.
As for the future, I’ll work harder to get into a good high school. I also hope to join some clubs to develop different skills.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了世界音乐节的相关信息，包括其历史、人们喜欢它的原因及庆祝方式。
25．根据第一段“World Music Day is celebrated on June 21st every year.”可知，每年的6月21日是世界音乐节。故填It is celebrated on June 21st.
26．根据第一段“the French Minister of Culture Jack Lang came up with this idea”可知，法国文化部长杰克·朗想出了这个主意。故填The French Minister of Culture Jack Lang came up with the idea.
27．根据第一段“On the first World Music Day, people of all ages and backgrounds got together and enjoyed music.”可知，在第一个世界音乐日，不同年龄和背景的人们聚在一起欣赏音乐。故填They celebrated it by getting together and enjoying music.
28．根据第二段“It provides us with a great chance to learn about different music styles and express our creative ideas freely.”可知，它为我们提供了一个学习不同音乐风格和自由表达创意的绝佳机会。故填It provides us with a great chance to learn about different music styles and express our creative ideas freely.
29．根据第三段“People like listening to different types of music because it can open their mind to new things.”可知，人们喜欢听不同类型的音乐，因为它可以让他们对新事物敞开心扉。故填Because it can open their mind to new things.
30．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“现在完成时”，“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出写作主题；
第二步，具体介绍自己性格外貌、兴趣爱好、学习等方面的变化；
第三步，介绍对未来的展望。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常做某事
②a number of books大量的书籍
③totally different完全不同
④be serious about认真对待
[高分句型]
First of all, I was really shy when I first came to school in seventh grade. (when引导时间状语从句)
31．On March 5th. 32．Because it makes him happy. 33．In Changsha, Hunan. 34．Yes./ Yes, he did. 35．I think Lei Feng spirit is very valuable, and we should carry it forward. 36．例文：
Dear Jack,
I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to you to tell you something about an activity I took part in.
In March 2022, Wangcheng District in Changsha launched the Qingfeng Plan to learn from Lei Feng. As a volunteer, I participated in various activities like donating school supplies, helping students with their homework, and even working on farms with rural children.
It was a truly meaningful experience, and I felt a deep sense of fulfillment helping others. I hope more people can join such activities to make the world a better place.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文通过赵华的志愿活动来讲述雷锋精神以及其在现代社会中的意义。
31．根据“I knew March 5th was ‘Learn from Lei Feng Day’”可知，学雷锋日在三月五日。故填On March 5th.
32．根据“I really like to help others because it makes me happy.”可知，赵华喜欢帮助别人的原因是因为这能让他感到开心。故填Because it makes him happy.
33．根据“Lei Feng was born in 1940 in Changsha, Hunan Province.”可知，雷锋出生于湖南省长沙市。故填In Changsha, Hunan.
34．根据“On March 5th, 1963, Chairman Mao called on people to learn from Lei Feng”可知，毛主席号召人们向雷锋学习，所以本题作肯定回答。故填Yes./ Yes, he did.
35．开放性问题，言之有理即可。参考答案为I think Lei Feng spirit is very valuable, and we should carry it forward.
36．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：材料要求内容需完整表达，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题表明写作意图；
第二步，详细介绍志愿活动的背景和内容；
第三步，表达自己的感受，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②learn from学习
③help sb. with sth.在某方面帮助某人
[高分句型]
①I’m writing to you to tell you something about an activity I took part in.（定语从句）
②I hope more people can join such activities to make the world a better place.（宾语从句）
37．Because he didn’t like the busy and crowded city life and looked forward to nature. 38．He started to take photos of flying birds in 1983, after helping make a documentary about birds. 39． “It” refers to reading some magazines about nature at the library. 40．He went into the snow mountains six times to take the monkeys’ photos. 41．He started “China Wildlife Photography Training Camp” in order to call on more people to protect wildlife with cameras. 42．
One Meaningful Thing I Keep Doing Good morning, everyone! I am very happy to be here to give a speech today. Today I want to share one meaningful thing I keep doing. It is reading books. Xi Zhinong documenting wildlife with his camera, I’ve used books to explore the world of knowledge and ideas.
I started reading books when I was in primary school. Every day I spent at least an hour in reading differetn kinds of books, such as science, history, and psychology. This habit not only expands my knowledge but also sharpens my mind and enhances my thinking skills.
In a word, just as dropping water can shape a stone, the habit of reading has shaped me. I hope you can also have one meaningful thing that you keep doing. It’s helpful to do one meaningful thing persistently.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本文介绍了奚志农用相机记录野生动物的故事，并告诉我们长期坚持做好一件有意义的事情，成就更好的自己。
37．根据“But he disliked the busy and crowded city life and looked forward to nature.”可知，奚志农不喜欢城市生活的原因但是他不喜欢繁忙拥挤，渴望亲近自然。故填Because he didn’t like the busy and crowded city life and looked forward to nature。
38．根据“In 1983, after helping make a documentary (纪录片) about birds, he began to learn photography (摄影) and take photos of flying birds.”可知，他开始学习摄影并拍摄飞鸟的照片是在1983年，在协助拍摄了一部关于鸟类的纪录片后。故填He started to take photos of flying birds in 1983, after helping make a documentary about birds。
39．根据“he often went to the library to read some magazines about nature. It opened a door for him to get close to nature.”可知，他经常去图书馆阅读一些关于自然的杂志。它为他打开了一扇亲近自然的大门，此处“It”指代的是阅读一些关于自然的杂志。故填“It” refers to reading some magazines about nature at the library。
40．根据“He went into the snow mountains six times just to take the monkeys’ photos.”可知，他六次走进雪山，只是为了拍摄猴子的照片。故填He went into the snow mountains six times to take the monkeys’ photos。
41．根据“In order to call on more people to protect wildlife with cameras, he started “China Wildlife Photography Training Camp”.”可知，为了呼吁更多人用相机保护野生动物，他发起了“中国野生动物摄影训练营”。故填He started “China Wildlife Photography Training Camp” in order to call on more people to protect wildlife with cameras。
42．［总体分析］
① 题材：本题是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：本文用一般现在时和一般过去时；
③ 提示：描述自己长期坚持做的一件有意义的事，需要遵照所给要求写作，适当补充细节，理由充分合理，三观正确。
［写作步骤］
第一步，说明自己长期坚持做的一件有意义的事，引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己开始这件事情的时间，感受，要注意理由充分合理，价值观正确，具有真情实感；
第三步，总结，呼吁鼓励同学们做一件有意义的事。
［亮点词汇］
① explore 探索
② expand 增长
③ thinking skills 思考能力
［高分句型］
① I started reading books when I was in primary school.（时间状语从句）
② I hope you can also have one meaningful thing that you keep doing.（宾语从句和定语从句）
43．By going through the mountain roads. 44．Because the government helped a lot. 45．The villagers. 46．In new houses. 47．After dinner (every day). 48．例文：
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to know that you want to come to my hometown this summer holiday. There have been many new changes in my hometown these years. The environment is getting better and better. And there are many free parks. They are open all year round.
Summer is the best time to visit my hometown. It’s very beautiful everywhere. The best place to go is the park. People can go for a picnic with their family to relax themselves and enjoy the beautiful sights. You can go there by bus or by bike.
I love my hometown and I hope it will be better. Welcome to my hometown! I am sure you will have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文作者主要介绍了自己家乡的变化。
43．根据“Ten years ago, it used to be a poor village. People could only walk through the mountain roads to get there.”可知，人们只能走山路才能到达那里。故填By going through the mountain roads.
44．根据“Now my hometown has changed a lot because the government helped a lot.”可知，因为政府帮助了很多。故填Because the government helped a lot.
45．根据“Also, the villagers helped build some schools in order to let children get a good education.”可知，村民们帮助建立了一些学校，以便让孩子们得到良好的教育。故填The villagers.
46．根据“All the villagers are living in new houses.”可知，所有的村民都住在新房子里。故填In new houses.
47．根据“Every day, after dinner people would like to go to the park to enjoy themselves.”可知，每天晚饭后，人们都喜欢去公园玩。故填After dinner (every day).
48．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图是介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，介绍家乡的变化以及旅游攻略；
第三步，表达自己的感想和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①all year round全年
②go for a picnic去野餐
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①And there are many free parks. (There be句型)
②I am sure you will have a good time. (宾语从句)
49．
Dear students,
In order to spread traditional Chinese culture, an activity called “Traditional Culture Enters Campus” will be held in our school on Friday, May 16, 2025, at Hongxing Square.
There will be a number of interesting activities. We’ll put on shadow puppet plays, which are full of Chinese-style stories. Students can also make toys from dough, experiencing the beauty of traditional culture. What’s more, there will be a calligraphy show, where students can appreciate and even try writing some Chinese characters.
I believe these activities can not only keep our traditional culture alive, but also help us understand our great culture e and join us!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏字数要求，可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题。
第二步，根据所给表格介绍皮影戏和捏面团活动；并补充一项传统文化活动及活动介绍。
第三步，表达对传统文化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②a number of许多
③be full of充满
[高分句型]
①First, I watched a shadow puppet play, which told an old and exciting story. (which引导的定语从句)
②I also joined a calligraphy activity where I wrote some Chinese characters. (not only...but also...并列连词组的使用)
50．例文：
An Unforgettable Trip to Beijing
Last summer holiday, I visited Beijing with my family. We went there by plane. What made this trip special was not only seeing famous places of interest like the Great Wall and the Forbidden City, but also experiencing local culture.
The most impressive part was climbing the Great Wall at dawn. As the sun rose, the ancient stones glowed golden, making me feel connected to history. Another highlight was trying Peking duck in a century-old restaurant—the crispy skin and tender meat were unforgettable!
What truly touched me was the kindness of locals. An elderly man patiently taught me how to make traditional sugar paintings. This trip wasn’t just about sightseeing. It was a journey through China’s living heritage.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入背景：简要交代时间/地点/人物/旅行方式等；
第二步，核心段落：描述2—3个具体活动；
第三步，升华主题——总结旅行的独特意义。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
②make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事
③teach sb. how to do sth. 教某人如何做某事
[高分句型]
①As the sun rose, the ancient stones glowed golden…（as引导的时间状语从句）
②What truly touched me was the kindness of locals.（what引导的主语从句）
51．例文
Dear Tom,
How’s everything going I’m excited to share my three-day hometown trip with you.
On the first day, I went back to my hometown with my parents. I noticed many changes there—new roads were built and the environment became cleaner. In the evening, we had a big dinner with our relatives. At dinner, my mum told me not to start eating until everyone was ready. Besides, we should wait for everyone to finish before leaving the table.
The next day, my family visited a famous mountain nearby. We climbed to the top and enjoyed the places of natural beauty. There was also an ancient temple where we learned about the local history. Finally, I spent a whole day reading Journey to the West. The Monkey King’s adventures fascinated me. I realized teamwork is important when facing difficulties.
Ths holiday gave me both family warmth and knowledge growth.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的；
第一步，介绍三天之旅的具体活动和细节；
第二步，表达自己的旅行感受。
[亮点词汇]
①wait for等待
②a whole day一整天
③family warmth家庭温暖
[高分句型]
①There was also an ancient temple where we learned about the local history.（定语从句）
②We climbed to the top and enjoyed the places of natural beauty.（and连接并列成分）
52．例文：
Dear fellow students,
To support the promotion of Shenzhen’s Intangible Cultural Heritage (ICH), our school will hold the “ICH Culture Festival” on June 15, 2025. We are now recruiting volunteers to showcase ICH products (like paper-cutting and traditional lanterns) and their craftsmanship.
Volunteers are required to complete online ICH courses in advance. Introduce products in both Chinese and English. Be enthusiastic about cultural communication. This is a valuable chance to learn traditional culture and improve your skills. Please sign up at the Cultural Club office by June 1.
Let’s spread the beauty of ICH together!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应确保这些要点都得到涵盖，并可以适当添加细节，使描述更加生动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明文章的主题；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，详细描述志愿者工作要求；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①be required to do被要求
②be enthusiastic about对……热情
③sign up参加
[高分句型]
①We are now recruiting volunteers to showcase ICH products (like paper-cutting and traditional lanterns) and their craftsmanship.（动词不定式作目的状语）
53．例文
A story I know
As an important part of traditional Chinese culture, legends are of great importance for students to know about national culture and history.
One legend I like is Hou Yi Shooting the Suns. Long ago, there were ten suns in the sky. The heat made people suffer. Hou Yi, a brave archer, shot down nine suns. The world became livable again. This story shows courage and wisdom. After reading it, I feel proud of our ancient heroes. It helps me understand why we should protect our cultural traditions.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍一则神话故事；
第二步，介绍自己读后的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①suffer受难
②livable适于居住的
③proud of以……自豪
[高分句型]
It helps me understand why we should protect our cultural traditions.（宾语从句）
54．例文
Dear teachers,
My name is Li Ming, a student from Class 3, Grade 8. I am writing to recommend myself as a young ambassador for promoting traditional Chinese culture.
I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read a lot of classics on Chinese history, so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture.
I have several qualities that make me suitable for this role. Firstly, I have a profound understanding of both Chinese and foreign cultures, so that I can confidently explain Chinese stories in English. Moreover, as a good organizer, I have successfully planned and organized several school events in the past. I ever joined in several activities like making posters about the Beijing Opera.
For the activities, my plans are as follows. Firstly, we can hold an English speech contest with the theme of sharing Chinese stories. Secondly, it’s a good idea to hold an exhibition about traditional Chinese artifacts with English descriptions. It will help students learn more about traditional culture as well as improve English reading skills. By taking part in this event, we can not only improve our language abilities, but also play a part in making the world better understand China.
I expect that you can give me the chance and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达对中国传统文化的热爱和了解；
第二步，介绍个人优势及分享传播中国传统文化的经历；
第三步，介绍自己关于传统文化的推广计划；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be familiar with对……熟悉
②as well as也，又，和
③not only … but also不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①I have several qualities that make me suitable for this role.（定语从句）
②I expect that you can give me the chance and I’m looking forward to your reply.（宾语从句）
55．例文：
Dear Nate,
I’m glad to know that you are interested in Datong. Datong is a wonderful place that provides tourists with unique experiences. Last week, my parents and I made a trip to Datong.
On the first day, we visited the Yungang Grottoes. I was surprised at it! I wondered how people built it in ancient times. After that, we went to the Datong Coal Museum. Datong is known as the “Coal Capital of China”, and visiting the museum allowed us to learn a lot about coal. On the second day, we climbed Mount Hengshan, one of the “Five Great Mountains”, and took many photos. After going down the mountain, we went to a famous local restaurant to taste local food. Shanxi Sliced Noodles and Fried Boiled Pork with Black Fungus are my favourites.
Datong gave me lots of surprises during my two-day stay. I hope that one day we can travel there together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封邮件，属于应用文；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据英国好友询问大同旅行经历的需求，结合给定的旅行行程提示进行写作，需涵盖所有行程信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明很高兴好友对大同感兴趣，并引出自己上周去大同旅行的事；
第二步，按时间顺序，分别阐述第一天参观云冈石窟和大同煤炭博物馆，第二天攀登恒山、拍照以及品尝美食的经历；
第三步，表达大同之旅带来很多惊喜，并希望有一天能和好友一起去旅行。
[亮点词汇]
① be glad to 很高兴……
② be surprised at 对……感到惊讶
③ be known as 作为……而闻名
④ make a trip to 去……旅行
[高分句型]
① Datong is a wonderful place that provides tourists with unique experiences.（that引导的定语从句）
② I wondered how people built it in ancient times.（how引导的宾语从句）
56．例文
A meaningful trip
It was bright and sunny last Friday. I went on a school trip to a farm with my classmates.
When we got there, the farmer showed us around the farm. We knew more about farmers’ life. What’s more, we experienced what farmers do in their daily life. We watered plants, fed animals and picked vegetables. Then we learned about how food is grown and how much hard work goes into growing it.
It was a meaningful day because I not only experienced the natural world firsthand but also realized how working hard benefits us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态主要为一般过去时；
③ 提示：根据提示内容描述一次学校农场旅行的经历及感悟，通过具体活动展现收获，细节较为丰富。
[写作步骤分析]
第一步。开篇点题，以天气和时间开头，直接点明“农场旅行”的主题，简洁自然；
第二步。具体描述经历：按时间顺序介绍农场活动，层次清晰；
第三步，总结感悟。
[亮点词汇分析]
①showed us around带领参观
②experienced体验
③goes into投入
[高分句型]
①we experienced what farmers do in their daily life.（what引导的宾语从句）
②It was a meaningful day because I not only experienced the natural world firsthand but also realized how working hard benefits us.（because引导原因状语从句；not only...but also...并列连词结构）
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