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专题六
应用文写作
一、题型要求
应用文属于实用文体，有严格的语境限制，比如确定的时间、
地点，确定的对象、范围，确定的行文目的等。因此，应用文写
作应力求主旨鲜明，格式正确，语言简练，语气因人因事而异。
年份 写作文体 主题范围
2021 投稿 人与社会：庆祝创刊十周年
2022 邀请信 人与社会：邀请老师做访谈
2023 邮件 人与社会：给外教提建议
二、命题分析
2021—2023 年新课标Ⅰ卷应用文写作写作文体和主题范围
综合分析新课标应用文写作有以下命题特点：
1.写作文体交际性、应用性强
写作文体重点考查书信体(含电子邮件)，倾向于邀请信、求助
信、感谢信、申请信等，交际性、应用性强。
2.命题形式半开放
命题类型是半开放类，汉语提示简洁，要点明确，学生的可
发挥性强。
3.主题范围贴近实际
主题范围围绕人与自我、人与社会、人与自然三大主题，内
容来自学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题，贴近生活、贴近学
生、贴近时代，话题场景性和真实性突出，体现中外交流和“正
能量”。近年来比较突出中国优秀传统文化这个方向，例如中国
的四大艺术“琴棋书画”、四大发明、中国武术等，也会体现社
会主义核心价值观，例如爱国、诚实、守信等，与这些相关的话
题均可能是命题的重要素材。
三、评分标准
(一)评分原则
1.本题总分为 15 分，按以下 5 个档次给分。
2.评分时，应主要从内容组织、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面
考虑，具体为：
(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。
(2)使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后
以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4.评分时还应注意：
(1)词数少于 60 或多于 100 的，从总分中减去 2 分。
(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视
其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美写法及词汇用法均可接受。
(3)书写较差以致影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。
档次 描述
第五档
(13—15分) 能写明全部要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，
表达清楚
第四档
(10—12分) 能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；
行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚
第三档
(7—9分) 能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，但能基
本达意
(二)各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第二档
(4—6 分) 能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达
第一档
(1—3 分) 只能写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个
别句子正确
(续表)
应用文写作贴近考生的生活实际，易于表达，能充分考查考
生的真实写作水平。常见的应用文有书信、电子邮件、通知、演
讲稿、倡议书等。常考的书信类写作有：建议信、邀请信、感谢
信、投诉信、申请信和道歉信。
一、建议信
[题型特点]
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事
提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个
组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建
议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说
服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly
或 to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议，
具体结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)You've asked me for advice with regard to/regarding...and I'll
try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求建议，
在此，我将尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(2)I'm sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in
doing...at the moment.得知此刻你遇到……麻烦，我深感遗憾。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)When it comes to/As for...I would like to suggest/recommend...
涉及/关于……我想建议……
(2)The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as
follows.我的建议如下。
(3)In my opinion/Personally speaking/As far as I'm concerned, it
would be wise to take the following actions.在我看来，采取以下行动
是明智的。
(4)I would like to suggest that...我想建议……
(5)I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我想如果你
能……可能会更有利。
3.结尾常用语
(1)I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my
suggestions will be of benefit to you.我希望你会觉得这些建议有帮
助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。
(2)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration
seriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
[黄金模板]
Dear ________，(建议对象)
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ________.
(引出对方需要建议的主题)
Here are a few suggestions.First, it is important to________.Then,
it also helps to _______.Besides, it should be a good idea to ________.
You can also________.(列举建议)
可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下：
As to________， I suggest ________.(需要具体到某一方面) In
addition，________.(其他的建议) I'm sure ________.(预测可能的结
果，给对方以行动的信心和决心)
I hope ________.(表达愿望)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[例]
你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两
条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim 来信希望
你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1.你建议的线路。
2.你的理由。
3.你的祝愿。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Jim，
I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to
China.
Of the two trips to the Changjiang River and Mount Tai，both are
highly recommended.Personally, I prefer the tour along the Changjiang
River, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese
civilisation, from which you can learn a lot about the history of China
and Chinese people.Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing，
with many well-known sightseeing spots.That's why I think the trip
along the Changjiang River will be a better choice.
Hope you'll have a good time in China.
Yours，
Li Hua
二、邀请信
[题型特点]
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的书信，在写作时，语气
要热情真挚，不要强人所难，其结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)We're throwing a surprise party for...We'd like to invite you
to.../It's my honour to invite you to...我们将为……举办惊喜派对。我
们想邀请你……/我非常荣幸地邀请你……
(2)I am writing to invite you to.../I'm writing to tell you that there
will be...我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你将有……
(3)It is my pleasure/a great honour for me to invite you to...如能
邀请你……是我莫大的荣幸。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)Here are some details about this activity./The following are
some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as
follows.活动的细节如下。
(2)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your
decision soon.我想在那里见到你，请尽快告诉我你的决定。
3.结尾常用语
(1)I would feel very honoured if you could come./We would
appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early
convenience./An early reply is appreciated.如果你能来，我将倍感荣
幸。/如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们将不胜感激。/感激
你的早日回复。
(2)Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can
come to...？如果你能来……请写信告诉我，好吗？
(3)If you are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more
information.如果你对此感兴趣，告诉我，我会给你更多的信息。
[黄金模板]
Dear ________，(邀请对象)
How's everything with you I'm writing to tell you that there will
be a ________ ( 活动) in/at ________ ( 地点) on ________ ( 时间).I
wonder if you'd like to go with me.(发出邀请)
The occasion will start at __________.(具体时间) This will be
followed by a________.(进一步的安排) At around ________(时间)，
________.(另一个安排)
If you are interested in it, let me know.Hope to meet you at
the________ ( 地点)./I really hope you can make it.( 再次邀请) My
phone number is ________(电话号码).Looking forward to________.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[例]
假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的美国朋友 Jim 写
一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加。内容
包括：
1.介绍训练营的相关内容(如：时间、地点、参加者等)。
2.说明你打算参加的原因。
3.询问对方的意向。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim，
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Jim，
I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I
intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if you'd like to
go with me.
This camp will be open on July 20th.It offers teenagers, like you
and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you
are interested in it, let me know and I'll send you more information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
Yours，
Li Hua
三、感谢信
[题型特点]
感谢信是重要的礼仪文书，是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的
集体或个人表示感谢的书信，有感谢和表扬的双重意思。其结构
为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)I am writing to express my thanks/convey my gratitude to you
for...我写这封信是因为……以表达我对你(们)的感激。
(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you
for...在信中我要为……向你(们)表达我诚挚的谢意。
(3)Thank you so much for the gift you sent me.It's one of the
most wonderful gifts I've ever got.非常感谢你给我寄来的礼物，这是
我收到的最好的礼物之一。
(4)I'd like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for
your timely help and assistance.我谨借此机会表达对你给予我们及
时的帮助和支持的感激。
(5)On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend my
sincere gratitude for...我谨代表我全家对……表示真诚的感激之情。
2.结尾常用语
(1)Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories, and we
will remember them forever.没有什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆，我们
会永远牢记在心。
(2)Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you ！
/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你
的热心帮助再次表示感谢。
[黄金模板]
Dear ________，(感谢对象)
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude to you for ________.
(感谢的原因) If it had not been for your assistance in ________，(对
方给你的具体帮助) I fear that I would have been ________.(没有对
方帮助的结果)
Everyone agrees that it was you who ________.(给出细节)
Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please
accept my gratitude.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[例]
假设你是李华，李萍是你在北京的好朋友，今年暑假你去北
京游玩时，她给了你很多的帮助，热情款待了你，带你参观了北
京的名胜古迹。请根据以下提示内容，给她写一封信，表达你对
她的感谢。内容包括：
1.感谢的原因。
2.具体帮助的细节。
3.表达感谢。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Ping，
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Li Ping，
How is everything with you I'm writing to thank you for your
warm reception during my visit to Beijing this summer holiday.
During the visit, you showed me around quite a few places of
interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer
Palace.Besides, you took many beautiful photos of me and went
shopping with me.I really had a wonderful time.
Thank you for your kindness again and give my best regards to
your parents.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
四、投诉信
[题型特点]
在生活中，通常用写投诉信的方式解决诸如消费利益受损、
正常生活和工作受到干扰等问题。
投诉信通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明投诉的原因并表
示遗憾；实事求是地阐述问题发生的经过，切记不要夸大其词；
指出问题引起的后果；提出批评及处理的意见或敦促对方采取措
施，或者提出所希望的赔偿以及补救方式。其结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/at... 我写此信
表达我对……的不满。
(2)I'm...who bought...from your website several days ago.I am
writing to complain about...我是几天前从你们的网站上购买了……
的……我写信投诉……
2.主体部分常用语
(1)There is something wrong with...I bought.For one thing...for
another (thing)...我买的……有问题。首先……其次……
(2)I am completely disappointed to find...To improve the situation,
it is advisable for you to take the following measures. 当我发现……
我彻底失望了。为了改进这种情况，建议你采取以下措施。
3.结尾常用语
(1)I would be very delighted if you could consider my complaint
seriously.I do hope...will be improved as soon as possible./I do hope
you can give me a satisfactory reply as soon as possible.Thank you for
your consideration.如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。我
确实希望……将会尽快得到改善。/我确实希望你可以尽快给我一
个满意的答复。感谢你的体谅。
(2)...refund the cost and pay me damages.……退回费用并赔偿
我的损失。
(3)I would like to have a refund or a replacement as soon as
possible.我想尽快退款或更换。
(4)I hope you will give due attention to this matter. 我希望你给
予此事应有的重视。
[黄金模板]
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is/I'm ________.( 自 我 介 绍 ) I am writing to you for
something/to tell you something about ________.(投诉的内容)
________.(简述导致矛盾的事件) I ________.(表达本人曾做过
的努力) But ________.(投诉原因一)Besides, ________.(投诉原因二)
To be frank ，________.( 客观的评论，以示诚恳) I do hope/I require
that________.(表达本人期待的解决方案)
Thank you for your time and kind consideration.(信件结尾常用语)
Yours，
________(写信人名称)
[例]
假设你是李华，你在某购物平台上购买了一条连衣裙，作为
顾客，你发现好几处不满意的地方。请你根据以下提示写一封信
投诉商家表达对其服务的不满意。内容包括：
1.发货迟，迟收十多天。
2.裙子颜色本该是黑色，收到的却是灰色。
3.所选尺码为 S 码，错发 L 码。
4.提出理赔要求。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm writing to you to make some complaints about the dress I
bought in your store the other day._____________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm writing to you to make some complaints about the dress I
bought in your store the other day.
To begin with, the colour of the dress I ordered was black, but
what I received was grey.In addition, what fits me is size S while the
size of the dress I received was size L which is far larger for me.Worse
still, the dress should have been received on December 5th.However,
the date I got it was more than ten days later.
I think you should take full responsibility for it and pay for the
postage.I do want you to exchange a new dress or give me my money
back as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
五、申请信
[题型特点]
申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、
报考申请、留学申请等，其目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能
力、成就以及愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心
内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得
面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注
意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注
意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。其结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)I learnt on your website that...我从你们的网站上得知……
(2)I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified
candidate for...我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。
(3)I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity
to...我写信给你是希望我可以获得一个……的机会。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)For one thing, I can help...For another thing, I can improve my
English, make more friends, and enrich my life. 一方面，我能帮
助……另一方面，我能提高我的英语水平，结交更多的朋友，并
充实生活。
(2)I am confident that I'm suitable for.../I'm qualified to do.../I'm
equal to (doing)...我确信，我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任
(做)……
3.结尾常用语
(1)I would appreciate it if I have the chance of doing/to do...如果
我有做……的机会，我将不胜感激。
(2)Should you offer me an interview, I would be most
grateful.Looking forward to your reply soon.如果你能给我提供面试
的机会，我将非常感激。期待你的早日答复。
[黄金模板]
模板一
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm _______________.(简单自我介绍) When I was reading the
advertisement，_________.(表达看到相关广告后的感受) I think it's
a good opportunity for me to _________.( 应聘的原因 ) Therefore I
recommend myself to you without hesitation.
I ______.(陈述本人的性格优势) For one thing, I can ________.
(陈述本人特长一) For another thing, I can__________.(陈述本人特
长二)
Please contact me at ________(联系方式一：电话号码).Or email
me at________(联系方式二：电子邮箱地址).I am looking forward to
your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
模板二
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm___________.(自我介绍) I'm writing to apply for the position
___________.( 说 明 写 信 目 的 ) I really want to obtain this precious
opportunity because________.(说明自己为什么很想得到这次宝贵
机会).Besides，________.(分层次说明自己的优势)
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will
be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.(表达期望)
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
[例]
2024 年奥运会将在巴黎举办，目前在招募志愿者。假如你是
李华，你希望成为一名该奥运会志愿者。请根据以下提示给组委
会写封英文申请信：
1.个人情况：年龄、性别、学历(高中)。
2.个人条件：英语好、爱好运动、善于交际、乐于助人、熟悉
当地情况。
3.承诺：提供最佳服务。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua.I would like to apply to work as a volunteer
for the Paris 2024 Summer Olympic Games._____________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua.I would like to apply to work as a volunteer
for the Paris 2024 Summer Olympic Games.
I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at a high school now.I am
good at English and can communicate with foreign tourists in English
fluently.I believe I can do a good job in the Games.First，I like sports
and I am familiar with our city.Second, I can get along well with
others.Third，I'm ready to give help whenever it is needed.I promise to
offer the best service possible to the people at the Games.
Please take my request into consideration.Looking forward to
your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
六、道歉信
[题型特点]
道歉信是因过失或疏忽做错了事，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，
发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。其结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)I am writing this letter to apologise to you for...我写这封信是
因……向你道歉。
(2)I am writing to express/convey my deepest apology to you. 我
写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)Much to my regret, I was unable to...and I wish that my
apology could help to some extent.很遗憾，我不能够……希望我的
道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。
(2)I remember we planned to...but now because...I cannot...with
you as planned.我记得我们原本计划……但是现在由于……我不能
与你如期……
3.结尾常用语
(1)Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.对于造成
的任何不便我再次表示歉意。
(2)I sincerely hope that you'll be able to think in my position and
accept my apologies.我衷心地希望你能够站在我的角度考虑一下，
并接受我的道歉。
[黄金模板]
Dear________，
I am sorry to tell you that__________.(陈述道歉原因) Now I am
writing you this letter of an apology to show my deep regret.
I hope you will understand me and excuse me for __________.
(请求对方原谅的事由) The reason for my delay/absence is/was that
_________.(解释道歉原因) Therefore, ________.
I sincerely hope that you can accept my apology and understand
it.I would appreciate your allowing me to _________.(提出补救措施)
Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(再次道歉)
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[例]
假设你是李华，与 Tom 约定下周末去北京游玩，但临时有事
不能应约，请你用英语给他写封邮件，说明情况。内容包括：
1.表示歉意。
2.说明具体原因。
3.另约时间。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom，
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
[范文欣赏]
Dear Tom，
I am indeed very sorry that I am unable to go to Beijing with you
next weekend, which I have promised.I feel sorry about it and want
you to know what happened.
Just now, my cousin, who left home for Australia for his further
study last year, informed me that he would return this Saturday
morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his
family.You know, we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it.I
would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you
around Beijing.Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
七、演讲稿
[题型特点]
演讲稿包括发言稿、致辞、竞选稿等，句子要求短小精悍、
铿锵有力。赞成什么、反对什么要旗帜鲜明，不能模棱两可。其
结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)I am honoured to have a chance to speak to you today.我今天
很荣幸有机会跟大家讲几句。
(2)Today I want to talk to you about...今天我想跟你们谈谈……
(3)The purpose of my presentation is to introduce... 我演讲的目
的是介绍……
(4)My name is...Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to
make this presentation.I shall be speaking about...我的名字是……今
天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
(5) Good morning, everyone! It is my great honour to share with
you my opinions on...大家上午好！很荣幸能和你们分享一下我的关
于……的看法。
(6)It's my honour to stand here and say something about friendship.
站在这里，谈谈关于友谊的话题对我来说是件荣耀的事情。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)To start with, I'd like to talk about the...首先，我想谈谈……
(2)The first problem today is that...今天的第一个问题……
(3)During my talk, I'll be covering three areas.First，...Second，...
Third，...在我的谈话中，我将涉及以下三个领域。第一，……第
二，……第三，……
(4)I ask all of you present to join me in raising your glasses to
our everlasting friendship.我请在座的各位与我一起为我们永恒的
友谊干杯。
(5)The topic of my speech today is...我今天演讲的主题是……
(6)As far as I am concerned，I think it is a good idea to...就我而
言，我认为……是一个好主意。
(7)I would like to concentrate on the problem of...我想把重点集
中在……问题上。
3.结尾常用语
(1)In conclusion, my recommendations are... 总之，我的建议
是……
(2)I wish you the best of luck in everything you do.祝你们一切
顺利。
(3)Thanks for your listening (to my speech).感谢大家倾听我的
演讲。
(4)That's all I want to say about this point.关于这一点，我就讲
这些。
[黄金模板]
模板一
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen，
It's a great honour for me to stand here and give my speech.(表示
荣幸) My name is ___________.(自我介绍) The topic of my speech
is __________.(提出演讲主题)
To begin with, many people suggest that __________.Secondly，
__________.Thirdly，__________.(话题或现象列举)
What I want to stress is that __________.(重申主题) For one
Thing，_________.For another，__________.Besides，_________.
(原因或重要性列举) In a word，__________.(总结)
模板二
Good morning/afternoon/evening, everyone!
It's nice to see all of you here.I feel honoured to have opportunity
to give/make/deliver you a speech.The topic of my speech is
_________./Today I will talk about __________./It's nice to talk/speak
about ___________.(演讲的主题)First of all, ___________. Besides，
__________.Secondly, __________.What's more, __________.(演讲
的具体内容)
As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, __________.(表达看法/
见解 ) From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the
conclusion that _____________.(得出结论) Thanks for your attention/
listening.(概括总结演讲)
[例]
假定你校要举办一次英语演讲比赛，题目是“我的梦想”。
你打算参加比赛，要求写一篇演讲稿，演讲稿包括以下内容：
1.不同的人的梦想：成为科学家、宇航员或富有的人。
2.我的梦想：成为一个自食其力，有责任感的人；一个乐于助
人，懂得感恩的人。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone!
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
[范文欣赏]
Good afternoon，everyone!
Today I feel honoured to have a chance to share with you my
dream.
We all have dreams.Some people dream of becoming scientists
while others wish to become doctors like Zhong Nanshan.Of course，
there are many that would love to be rich.Personally, I want to be a
man who is self-dependent and has a full sense of responsibility ， a
man who is helpful to those in trouble and knows how to be grateful.
In conclusion, I will stick to my dream forever.
Thank you for listening.
八、通知
[题型特点]
通知一般分为书面通知和口头通知两种。它是上级对下级、
组织对成员部署工作，传达事情，召开会议所使用的一种文体。
其要素常常包括：时间、地点、事件、参与者、活动内容及注意
事项等。要求：言简意赅、措辞得当。
正文上方 正中位置写上 NOTICE
正文 通知的对象、事由、时间、地点等
正文右下角 通知的单位(可以省略)
正文左下角 通知的日期(可以省略)
英文书面通知的一般格式为：
口头通知的结构为：
[常用句式]
1.开头常用语
(1)Ladies and gentlemen.May I have your attention, please I
have an announcement to make.女士们和先生们。请大家注意一下，
我要宣布一件事。
(2)Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.请注
意！我有重要的事要告诉你们。
(3)Be quiet.There is something important I have to tell you.请安
静。我有重要的事要宣布。
2.主体部分常用语
(1)There will be a party/speech/contest held by... 将有一个……
举办的晚会/演讲/比赛。
(2)Our school has decided to hold an activity to...我们学校决定
举办一项活动……
(3)It will begin at...and last about...hours. 它将从……开始，持
续……小时。
(4)There will be colourful activities then，such as...届时会有丰
富多彩的活动，如……
(5)Our school/The Students' Union will/is going to hold...我们学
校/学生会将会举办……
(6)A lecture will be given at 7 ：00 this evening in... 今晚七点
在……有一个讲座。
(7)All teachers and students are required to...所有师生要求……
3.结尾常用语
(1)Those who are interested in the activity are (warmly)
welcome.(热烈)欢迎那些对这项活动感兴趣的人。
(2)Everyone should be there (is required to be present) on time.
每个人要按时到场。
(3)There's sure to be a lot of fun.Everyone is welcome.肯定很有
趣。欢迎大家的到来。
(4)Please pass on this message to those who are not here today.请
把消息告诉今天不在场的人。
(5)Please take your notebooks with you and be sure on time.请带
上你的笔记本并准时到场。
(6)Have an active part in it，and wish you good luck！快来积极
参加吧，祝你们好运！
(7)That's all.Thank you.说完了。谢谢！
[黄金模板]
模板一
Notice/NOTICE
________ (活动方) will organise ________ (活动).This activity
aims to _________ (活动目的).This activity is arranged to _________
or so.It is planned to begin at/on ________ (时间).The team members
will be arranged to ________.Your main task is to ________.Anyone
who ____________ is welcome warmly.Those who are interested can
contact ________ for further information (联系方式).
Looking forward to your active participation.
________ (单位和日期)
模板二
Good __________, everyone.May I have your attention, please？
(引起注意)
I'm the chairman of the Student Union.As _______ (时间、节目
等) is around the corner, we are going to hold________ (活动名) for
you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of
________ (活动目的).
During the party, not only can you__________, but you will also
_________.What's more, you'll _________.( 活动益处)_________ is
scheduled ________.(主要内容)
Please make sure you won't miss it.Thank you for your attention.
(结束语)
[例]
为了方便同学们购书，新华书店定于 9 月 16 日来你校设一天
书市。书籍主要有各种参考书、字典等。另外还有科普读物及一
些文学作品，如诗集、中外小说等。书市设在你校大门口，从上
午 9：30 开始到下午 5：00 结束。今天是 9 月 14 日，现由你向全
班同学口头通知并欢迎同学们届时参观选购。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80 左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[范文欣赏]
Boys and girls, attention please! A book exhibition is going to be
held at the school gate the day after tomorrow from 9：30 a.m.to 5：00
p.m.
It will provide a golden opportunity for you to get exposed to a
wide range of books.You are sure to find whatever kinds of books
interest you.Apart from various reference books and dictionaries, there
will be other books such as popular science books and works of
literature like collections of poems and Chinese and foreign novels.
Everyone is welcome to go and buy.Thanks for your attention.
(2024·新课标Ⅰ卷)
假定你是李华，上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你
给英国朋友 Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括：
(1)你完成的作品；
(2)你的感想。
注意：写作词数应为 80 个左右；
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last
Friday.___________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Chris，
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last
Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us
most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery, I decided to create a watercolor
painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded by
blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being surrounded
by nature not only sparked my creativity but also offered a much-
needed break from the usual hustle and bustle of school life.I felt a
deep sense of peace as I painted.
In a word, It was not just an art class; it was a moment of
connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours，
Li Hua

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