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【核心考点集训】2025春人教版英语八年级下册期末复习学案
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
审题
（1）明确体裁：确定是记叙文、说明文、议论文还是应用文等，不同体裁有不同的格式和写作特点。例如，记叙文要注重事件的叙述顺序；应用文如书信，有特定的格式要求。
（2）把握主题：抓住题目中的关键词，明确写作主题和要点。比如，题目是“描述一次旅行”，那就要围绕旅行的时间、地点、人物、活动和感受等方面展开。
（3）注意要求：看清字数要求、是否要使用特定的词汇或句型等，避免因不符合要求而扣分。
构思
（1）搭建框架：根据体裁和主题，构思文章的大致结构。如写记叙文，可以按照“起因 - 经过 （2）结果”的顺序；写议论文则可以采用“提出观点 - 论证观点 - 总结观点”的结构。
（3）组织要点：将题目中的要点进行合理组织和扩展，思考如何将每个要点用恰当的英语句子表达出来。可以先在脑海中形成一些关键的短语或句子。
写作
（1）开头引入：采用适当的方式开头，吸引读者的注意力。可以用一个有趣的问题、一句名言或者直接点明主题等方式。例如，写关于环保的文章，开头可以是“Have you ever thought about what our life will be like if there is no clean water or fresh air ”
（2）正文展开：按照构思好的框架和要点，用清晰、准确的语言进行阐述。注意运用正确的语法和词汇，尽量使用一些学过的高级词汇和句型，使文章更有文采。比如，“not only...but also...”“because of”等。同时，要注意句子之间的衔接，使用适当的过渡词，如“and”“but”“however”“besides”等，使文章逻辑连贯。
- 结尾总结：结尾要对文章进行总结或升华，再次点明主题，或者提出自己的建议、期望等。例如，在关于友谊的文章结尾可以写“True friendship is like a bright star in our life. We should cherish it and make it last forever.”
检查
语法错误：检查句子的时态、语态、主谓一致、名词单复数、形容词和副词的用法等是否
正确。
（2） 拼写错误：仔细检查单词的拼写，尤其要注意一些易混淆的单词，如“their”和“there”，“affect”和“effect”等。
（3）标点符号：确保标点符号使用正确，避免出现一逗到底或滥用标点的情况。
（4）格式规范：如果是应用文，要检查格式是否正确，如书信的称呼、落款等是否符合要求。
1．假定你是李明，你得知在英国的朋友Bob得甲流生病了，请你写一封电子邮件叮嘱他生病后的一些注意事项。
内容包括：
(1) 表达关心 (我很抱歉听说你生病了)；
(2) 描述你出现健康问题的一次经历；
(3) 对如何保持健康提出至少两点建议。
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu. ___________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
2．假如你是张明，你参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部”(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右，注意书信格式。
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
3．假如你是李华，某英文报刊正在就“Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework ”这一话题展开征文活动，请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。
要点提示：
1. 你认为青少年应该帮助父母做家务吗？
2. 你的理由是什么？
写作要求：
1. 词数80词左右（文章格式已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
4．我们在这个世界上最亲的人是父母，他们给予了我们生命，含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据以下提示以“Care for our parents”为题，联系实际，适当发挥，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育；希望父母锻炼身体，保持健康；主动帮助父母做家务。
提示词：offer…to… 为……提供……
Care for our parents
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
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6．同学们，你们一定听过《守株待兔》的故事吧。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示：
1. 一位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上；
2. 农夫把野兔拿回家，做了一顿美餐；
3. 之后，农夫每天都守在树桩旁，希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。
提示词：hare野兔；run into撞到；tree stump树桩；by accident偶然
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7．你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals ” 为题，写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容：
（1）为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中？
（2）为什么保护野生动物很重要？
（3）我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物？
写作要求：
（1）不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）条理清晰，意思连贯，词数80个词左右。
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
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8．动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从country music, light music, classical music, folk music, pop music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favorite music”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的作文。
提示：
1. What kind of music do you like best
2. When do you usually listen to it
3. Why is it your favorite
4. Who is your favorite musician or singer
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My favorite music
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9．假设你是当地的导游，请你写一篇题为“Have You Ever Been to Australia ”的短文，简单介绍一下澳大利亚。
写作内容：
1.对大多数中国游客来说，澳大利亚最大的城市悉尼是最受欢迎的度假地。
2.一方面，悉尼有着世界上最有名的建筑之一——悉尼歌剧院；另一方面，你可以享受美丽的海滩和来自世界各地的美食。
3.澳大利亚还有许许多多让你流连忘返之处，例如那些令人惊奇的海洋公园，以及各种各样有趣的户外活动。
写作要求：
1.不得抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.条理清晰，意思连贯，词数80个左右。
参考词汇:悉尼歌剧院the Sydney Opera House 海洋公园the Ocean Park
Have You Ever Been to Australia
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10.城市的发展日新月异，但变化也带来了机遇与挑战。请以“Changes in My City”为题，写一篇短文，描述城市过去与现在的不同，并讨论这些变化的影响。
提示：
1. 描述城市过去的样貌（如建筑、交通、生活方式）；
2. 描述现在的变化（如高楼大厦、地铁系统、环境污染）；
3. 列举变化带来的好处与问题；
4. 提出你对未来城市发展的建议。
要求：
1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
2. 不少于80词,开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Changes in My City
My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.
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I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture.
参考答案
1．例文
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu. I also caught a cold last month. I had a high fever and coughed. I drank a lot of water and took some medicine. I realized the importance of health. So it is
necessary for us to know how to keep healthy.
First, it’s necessary for us to keep a balanced diet. We should eat more vegetables and fruit which contain lots of vitamins and less fat. We should also try to eat less meat. What’s more, keeping a positive attitude to our life is good for our health. Last but not least, take proper exercise every day.
I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
2．例文：
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, we organized a volunteer activity and it was really meaningful.
We started by putting up posters and handing out advertisements to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection. Then, we cleaned the streets and the park. We picked up litter and made the places look much neater.
I think volunteer work is very important. It not only helps make our environment better but also lets us learn to care for others and our community. I feel happy to be a part of it.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
3．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I think that teenagers like me should help their parents with housework.
First, doing housework makes us independent. We can’t depend on our parents all the time. So we should learn how to take care of ourselves now. Second, doing housework is a kind of physical exercise. It helps us stay healthy and strong. Third, since we live in a house with our parents, it’s fair for us to work together and make the house clean and comfortable.
In my opinion, doing housework helps us learn life skills and understand the idea of fairness. So I think teenagers should learn to enjoy doing chores with their parents.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．例文：
Care for our parents
Our dear parents, you love us more than anybody else in the world. As your children, how should we care for you You have tried to offer the best life and education to us, so you are very tired and have too much pressure. To keep healthy, you should do more exercise. You shouldn’t stay up so that you can get enough sleep. You should also eat healthy food.
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Third, we should study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
We love you, our parents.
5．例文
October 6th, Saturday Fine
There was a terrible car accident happened at 8:10 on Xin Hua Road. That’s because the driver was very careless. When he was driving, he didn’t find there were two students near the car. When he stopped the car, it was too late. In the accident, the driver hurt badly and was sent to the hospital. Luckily, the two students were a little hurt. They were also sent to the hospital.
The accident told us that we must be careful when we drove or walked on the road. I thought we must obey the traffic rules and have to wait for the green traffic light. Especially, for students, we must learn to protect ourselves when we walk on the road. The safety is the most important thing to us.
6．例文
Once upon a time, there was a farmer. One day, while he was working in the field, he saw a hare run into a tree stump by accident and die. The farmer took the hare home and cooked a delicious meal for himself. That night, he thought, “I don't have to work so hard. All I have to do is to wait for a hare every day by the tree stump.” So from then on, he gave up farming, and waited by the tree stump. But just from then on, he never saw another hare run into the tree stump.
This story tells us we will get nothing unless we work hard. Remember: no pain, no gain.
7．例文
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wildlife animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful.
8．例文:
My favorite music
There are many kinds of music. I like soft music best. Before I go to sleep, I always listen to soft music. It can help me relax and have a good dream. My mother tells me that before I was born, she listened to soft music all the time, so I must be affected by her. My favorite musician is Matthew Lien. His goal is to arouse people’s awareness of protecting the environment by music.
9．例文：
Have You Ever Been to Australia
Have you ever been to Australia For many Chinese tourists, Sydney, the biggest city in Australia, is a wonderful place to take a holiday. On the one hand, you can visit the Sydney Opera House that is one of the most famous buildings in the world. On the other hand you can enjoy the beautiful beaches and the delicious food from all over the world. Besides Sydney, there are also many fascinating places for you. For example, the Ocean Park is amazing! There are many interesting outdoor activities for you, too!
10．例文：
Changes in My City
My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.
Twenty years ago, there were only a few buses, and traffic jams were common. Most people lived in low houses. The air was fresh. Now, skyscrapers fill the city center, and a subway system makes traveling fast. However, the air pollution is getting worse because of too many cars.
These changes bring both good and bad effects. Life is faster and more modern, but the
environment is suffering. In my opinion, we should plant more trees and use public transportation more often.
I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture./ 让教学更有效 高效备考 | 英语学科
【核心考点集训】2025春人教版英语八年级下册期末复习学案
题型过关第6讲 书面表达
审题
（1）明确体裁：确定是记叙文、说明文、议论文还是应用文等，不同体裁有不同的格式和写作特点。例如，记叙文要注重事件的叙述顺序；应用文如书信，有特定的格式要求。
（2）把握主题：抓住题目中的关键词，明确写作主题和要点。比如，题目是“描述一次旅行”，那就要围绕旅行的时间、地点、人物、活动和感受等方面展开。
（3）注意要求：看清字数要求、是否要使用特定的词汇或句型等，避免因不符合要求而扣分。
构思
（1）搭建框架：根据体裁和主题，构思文章的大致结构。如写记叙文，可以按照“起因 - 经过 （2）结果”的顺序；写议论文则可以采用“提出观点 - 论证观点 - 总结观点”的结构。
（3）组织要点：将题目中的要点进行合理组织和扩展，思考如何将每个要点用恰当的英语句子表达出来。可以先在脑海中形成一些关键的短语或句子。
写作
（1）开头引入：采用适当的方式开头，吸引读者的注意力。可以用一个有趣的问题、一句名言或者直接点明主题等方式。例如，写关于环保的文章，开头可以是“Have you ever thought about what our life will be like if there is no clean water or fresh air ”
（2）正文展开：按照构思好的框架和要点，用清晰、准确的语言进行阐述。注意运用正确的语法和词汇，尽量使用一些学过的高级词汇和句型，使文章更有文采。比如，“not only...but also...”“because of”等。同时，要注意句子之间的衔接，使用适当的过渡词，如“and”“but”“however”“besides”等，使文章逻辑连贯。
- 结尾总结：结尾要对文章进行总结或升华，再次点明主题，或者提出自己的建议、期望等。例如，在关于友谊的文章结尾可以写“True friendship is like a bright star in our life. We should cherish it and make it last forever.”
检查
语法错误：检查句子的时态、语态、主谓一致、名词单复数、形容词和副词的用法等是否
正确。
（2） 拼写错误：仔细检查单词的拼写，尤其要注意一些易混淆的单词，如“their”和“there”，“affect”和“effect”等。
（3）标点符号：确保标点符号使用正确，避免出现一逗到底或滥用标点的情况。
（4）格式规范：如果是应用文，要检查格式是否正确，如书信的称呼、落款等是否符合要求。
1．假定你是李明，你得知在英国的朋友Bob得甲流生病了，请你写一封电子邮件叮嘱他生病后的一些注意事项。
内容包括：
(1) 表达关心 (我很抱歉听说你生病了)；
(2) 描述你出现健康问题的一次经历；
(3) 对如何保持健康提出至少两点建议。
作文要求：
(1) 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to hear that you have H1N1 flu. ___________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will get better soon. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ming
2．假如你是张明，你参加了学校上周六“环保俱乐部”(Saving the Environment Club)组织的志愿者活动。其内容包括：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。
请给你的笔友Bruce写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动的情况，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。80词左右，注意书信格式。
Dear Bruce,
I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Ming
3．假如你是李华，某英文报刊正在就“Should Teenagers Help Their Parents with Housework ”这一话题展开征文活动，请你根据自己的体会，写一篇短文向该报社投稿。
要点提示：
1. 你认为青少年应该帮助父母做家务吗？
2. 你的理由是什么？
写作要求：
1. 词数80词左右（文章格式已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Dear Sir or Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
4．我们在这个世界上最亲的人是父母，他们给予了我们生命，含辛茹苦地抚养我们长大。请根据以下提示以“Care for our parents”为题，联系实际，适当发挥，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：父母尽力给我们提供最好的生活和教育；希望父母锻炼身体，保持健康；主动帮助父母做家务。
提示词：offer…to… 为……提供……
Care for our parents
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．今天是星期六 (10月6日)，上午8:10在新华大街上发生了一起交通事故。由于司机没注意到两个学生而发生事故。司机严重受伤，已被送往医院救助。两个学生受轻伤。假如你是南京一中的学生，请你就此事故写一篇日记。
内容要求：
1.要写出事故发生的时间和地点；
2.要写出事故的大致情况，可以适当添加内容；
3.就此写出你的有关安全的观点。
写作要求：
1.一定要注意写日记的格式；
2.内容流畅，可以适当添加你自己的观点；
3.不少于80词。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．同学们，你们一定听过《守株待兔》的故事吧。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示：
1. 一位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上；
2. 农夫把野兔拿回家，做了一顿美餐；
3. 之后，农夫每天都守在树桩旁，希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。
提示词：hare野兔；run into撞到；tree stump树桩；by accident偶然
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7．你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗？请以“Why Should We Protect Wild Animals ” 为题，写一篇短文，说明为什么要保护野生动物。
写作内容：
（1）为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中？
（2）为什么保护野生动物很重要？
（3）我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物？
写作要求：
（1）不得照抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）条理清晰，意思连贯，词数80个词左右。
Why Should We Protect Wild Animals
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8．动听的音乐就像是飞舞的蝴蝶在空中翩翩起舞，也像是叮咚的泉水在山间流淌，有时候，也像是璀璨的星辰，在夜空里闪烁。各种各样的音乐中，你最喜欢哪一种呢？请从country music, light music, classical music, folk music, pop music…中选择你最喜欢的音乐种类，以“My favorite music”为题，写一篇不少于80 词的作文。
提示：
1. What kind of music do you like best
2. When do you usually listen to it
3. Why is it your favorite
4. Who is your favorite musician or singer
要求：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，并适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2. 书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和校名。
My favorite music
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9．假设你是当地的导游，请你写一篇题为“Have You Ever Been to Australia ”的短文，简单介绍一下澳大利亚。
写作内容：
1.对大多数中国游客来说，澳大利亚最大的城市悉尼是最受欢迎的度假地。
2.一方面，悉尼有着世界上最有名的建筑之一——悉尼歌剧院；另一方面，你可以享受美丽的海滩和来自世界各地的美食。
3.澳大利亚还有许许多多让你流连忘返之处，例如那些令人惊奇的海洋公园，以及各种各样有趣的户外活动。
写作要求：
1.不得抄原文；不得出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.条理清晰，意思连贯，词数80个左右。
参考词汇:悉尼歌剧院the Sydney Opera House 海洋公园the Ocean Park
Have You Ever Been to Australia
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10.城市的发展日新月异，但变化也带来了机遇与挑战。请以“Changes in My City”为题，写一篇短文，描述城市过去与现在的不同，并讨论这些变化的影响。
提示：
1. 描述城市过去的样貌（如建筑、交通、生活方式）；
2. 描述现在的变化（如高楼大厦、地铁系统、环境污染）；
3. 列举变化带来的好处与问题；
4. 提出你对未来城市发展的建议。
要求：
1. 作文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
2. 不少于80词,开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Changes in My City
My city has experienced great changes in recent years. Let me tell you what it was like before and what it is like now.
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I hope our city can develop wisely and keep its unique culture.

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