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话题：家的温度—亲情中的成长
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义
1．（24-25七年级上·河南南阳·期中）下周，学校将举行“和谐家庭”主题演讲活动。假如你是李佳乐，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你自己和你的家人。
My Family My name, age (12岁)...
My family members and their jobs
Our likes or activities
...
参考词汇：farmer 农民；office worker办公室职员
写作要求：
1）文中须包含所给的所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2）短文通顺连贯，语言表达准确，书写规范整洁；
3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4）词数70左右。
My Family
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【审题指导】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
【思维导图】
首先，介绍自己的个人信息并引出主题；My name is……；I'm……;Let me tell you about my family.
其次，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍家庭成员的相关信息；There are……in my family. They are……
最后，表达热爱自己的家人，并收尾。I love my family.That’s all.Thank you!
【遣词造句】
①在我的家庭里有四个人。（there be句型）
There are four people in my family.
②我的爸爸是一位工人，我的妈妈是一位医生。（and连接并列句）
My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor.
【参考范文】
My Family
Hello, my name is Li Jiale, I’m twelve years old. I’m a student in Grade Seven. Let me tell you about my family.
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. My sister is a student in Grade Eight. We’re in the same school. My family like sports. We often do sports at night, such as running and walking. Sometimes we play games at home.
I love my family. That’s all. Thank you!
（24-25七年级上·内蒙古通辽·期末）你校社团计划举办以“I Love My Family”为题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的家庭情况，词数80词左右。
提示：
1. How many people are there in your family Who are they
2. How old are they
3. What do they like
I Love My Family
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【审题指导】
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
【思维导图】
首先，开门见山。介绍你家有几口人以及分别是谁，引出下文。
其次，具体阐述。介绍家庭成员的年龄、爱好等信息。
最后，书写结语。表达你对家人的爱。
【遣词造句】
1.有三个人在我的家庭里：我的爸爸，我的妈妈，和我。(and表并列）
There are three people in it: my dad, my mom, and me.
2.她喜欢弄饭和运动。(and并列结构)
She loves cooking and playing sports.
【参考范文】
I Love My Family
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I have a nice family. There are three people in it: my dad, my mom, and me.
My dad is 45. He’s an engineer. He builds bridges and roads. In his free time, he likes reading and traveling. My mom is 43. She’s a teacher. She teaches English at school. She loves cooking and playing sports. When she is free, she often does some running. I’m 15. I’m a student. I like science and math. I also love playing basketball and spending time with my family. We watch movies and go hiking together on weekends.
I’m happy to have such a great family. I love them very much!
外貌：tall, short, thin, strong, beautiful
性格：kind, friendly, funny, serious, strict
职业：teacher, doctor, cook, driver, student
家庭成员：father/mum, brother/sister, grandfather/grandmother
活动：watch TV, play games, cook, clean, go shopping
1.There be 句型
There are four people in my family.
2.并列句（用and连接两个简单句）
My parents are teachers and they love their jobs.
1."There’s no place like home."家是最好的地方
2. Blood is thicker than water.血浓于水
3.Because a person has a home.he has a home.一个人因为有家,才有了归宿.
4.One heart.one reunion.一颗归心,一席团圆.
5.Real success is family happiness.真正的成功,就是家庭幸福.
1.开头（家庭基本介绍）
There are ___ people in my family. They are ___, ___, and ___.
2.中间（分段落介绍每个家庭成员）
基本句式：
My ___ is ___ years old. He/She is a ___. He/She is ___ (形容词). He/She likes ___ (动词短语).
例句：
My mother is 38 years old. She is a nurse. She is kind and helpful. She likes cooking and reading.
3.结尾（表达情感/家庭关系）
We love each other and have a happy family.
（1）
（24-25七年级上·吉林白城·期末）假如你是刘琳，你的英语老师布置了一个创意作业。她让同学们画一幅“我的家谱”(My Family Tree)，并在图画下方用英语介绍自己的家庭。下图是你创作的家谱，请写一篇70词左右英语短文介绍它吧。
内容提示：1.介绍家庭成员的年龄和职业；
2.介绍家庭成员的兴趣和爱好并说明理由。
要求：1.条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，
2.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和校名：
My family Tree
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【答案】例文
In my family tree, there are my grandparents, parents, uncle, aunt, sister, brother, cousins and me.
My grandfather is 70 and he is a retired teacher. He likes reading because it enriches his mind. My grandmother, 68, is a housewife. She loves gardening as it makes our home beautiful. My father, 45, is a doctor. He enjoys playing golf for relaxation. My mother, 43, is a nurse. She is fond of cooking delicious food for us. My uncle, 40, is a policeman. He likes watching action movies. My aunt, 38, is a teacher. She is interested in painting. My sister, 8, is an elementary school student. She loves singing as it makes her happy. My brother, 2, is a little baby. My cousins are students. I am 13 and I like drawing. It allows me to express my feelings.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇看图作文。
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：文章围绕家谱展开，逐一介绍家庭成员的年龄、职业、兴趣爱好及理由，内容完整，条理清晰，符合题目要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明要介绍家谱中的家庭成员。
第二步，具体阐述。分别描述祖父、祖母、父亲、母亲、叔叔、阿姨、妹妹、弟弟、表兄、表妹和自己的年龄、职业、兴趣爱好及原因，如祖父喜欢阅读是因为能丰富思想，祖母喜欢园艺是因为能美化家庭等。
[亮点词汇]
①retired teacher退休教师
②housewife家庭主妇
③enrich one’s mind丰富某人的思想
④gardening园艺
⑤for relaxation为了放松
⑥be fond of喜欢
⑦action movies动作电影
⑧be interested in对……感兴趣
⑨express one’s feelings表达某人的感情
[高分句型]
He likes reading because it enriches his mind. (because引导的原因状语从句)
（2）
（24-25七年级上·云南·单元测试）假设你是 Tom，请以“My Family”为题，结合下列的要点提示，写一篇英语短文介绍一下你的家庭成员。
要点：1. 你的家里有几口人？
2. 他们分别是谁，他们各自叫什么名字？
3. 他们各自都喜欢什么？
要求：1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3. 词数80左右。
My Family
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【答案】范文：
My Family
My name is Tom. I have a big family. There are five people in my family. Here is a photo of my family.
In the middle of the photo, you can see my grandparents. My grandparents, John and Linda, like to plant flowers. My parents are behind my grandparents. My father Jack is tall. His favourite sport is tennis. My mother Alice is beautiful. She likes listening to music. Who is the little boy Oh, it’s me. I’m not tall or short. I love to read a lot. We love each other.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍自己的姓名以及家里有几口人；
第二步、介绍家人分别是谁，各自的姓名以及爱好。
[亮点词汇]
①a photo of my family一张我的全家福
②in the middle of…在……的中间
③like doing sth.喜欢做某事
④each other彼此
[高分句型]
①Here is a photo of my family.(倒装句)
（3）
（23-24七年级上·陕西榆林·期末）为宣传世界家庭日，你校英语报刊正在开展以“My family”为题的征稿活动。假如你是张亮，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇英文稿参赛。
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于50词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）
My Family
I am Zhang Liang.
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I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
【答案】参考范文：
My Family
I am Zhang Liang. There are three people in my family—my parents and me. My father is tall. He is a math teacher. My mother has long hair. She is a nurse. She works in a hospital. I am a student. I’m in Grade 7 and I am 13 years old. My parents and I like eating chicken and vegetables. On Sundays, we often play sports because it is good for us.
I have a happy family and we love each other very much!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对家人的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“家人信息，喜欢的食物，活动和感受”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing喜欢做某事
②be good for有益于
[高分句型]
①There are three people in my family—my parents and me.（There be句型）
②On Sundays, we often play sports because it is good for us.（原因状语从句）
（4）
（24-25七年级上·湖北荆门·期末）在跳水界，全红婵这个名字早已家喻户晓。这个年仅17岁的女孩以其无与伦比的天赋和刻苦训练，连续夺得奥运会金牌，成为中国跳水队的传奇人物。请根据下面有关于全红婵的思维导图写一篇文章向喜欢她的外国朋友介绍一下这位体育明星。
要求：
（1）你的文章必须包括思维导图中所有的要点信息，顺序不限；
（2）文中不得出现你个人真实姓名和校名；
（3）词数50词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Quan Hongchan is a great diving player.
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【答案】例文：
Quan Hongchan is a great diving player. She was born on March 28th. Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math. She studies at Zhanjiang Sports School. In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers.
She has achieved great success in diving and is well-known all over the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据图片所列出的要点提示介绍全红婵，注意避免语法错误，确保行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：点明全红婵是一名优秀的跳水运动员；
第二步：根据图片要点提示，具体介绍全红婵的生日、爱好、家人信息等；
第三步：介绍全红婵的成就和知名度。
[亮点词汇]
①be born出生
②be well-known著名
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
①Her hobby is dancing and her favorite subject is math.（and连接的并列句）
②In her family, there are her grandmother, grandfather, mother, father, two sisters and two brothers. （there be句型）
（5）
（23-24七年级上·广东云浮·期末）假如你是王琳，你的英语老师布置了一个创意作业。她让同学们画一幅“我的家谱”（My Family Tree），并在图画下方用英语介绍自己的家庭。下图是你创作的家谱，请写一篇英语短文介绍它吧。
作文要求：
1. 须包含图示中的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
3. 不少于50词；短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Family Tree
Come and see my family tree!
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【答案】例文
My Family Tree
Come and see my family tree! I am Wang Lin. I have loving grandparents, whom we call grandfather and grandmother. My father is a kind-hearted man, and my mother is a caring homemaker. My younger brother’s name is Jim. I also have a dog that is very close to our family. We are a close-knit family, always supporting and looking after each other. Our family is my safe heaven, and I feel blessed to be a part of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍家谱；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“爷爷奶奶、父母、弟弟和宠物”几个方面重点介绍具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达对家庭的美好祝愿与喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① kind-hearted 仁慈的；
② be very close to对……亲近
[高分句型]
① I have loving grandparents, whom we call grandfather and grandmother. （句子中应用了whom引导的定语从句）
② I also have a dog that is very close to our family.（句子中应用了that引导的定语从句）
（6）
（22-23七年级上·广东清远·期末）假如你是Li Hua，请你写一封信给Lucy，介绍一下你自己和家人的情况。内容包括：
1. 介绍你自己的个人情况（包括年龄，外貌等）；
2. 介绍你的家庭成员的工作及工作地点（至少两个家庭成员）；
3. 表达你对家人的感情。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，语法正确，不少于60词。作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Lucy,
How are you I’m Li Hua.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Lucy,
How are you I’m Li Hua. I am twelve years old. I’m from China. Now I live in Qingyuan, Guangdong. I am tall with short black hair. I have a round face and two big eyes. My nose and mouth are both small.
I have a happy family. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital and he is very busy every day. My mother is a Chinese teacher in a middle school. She is very nice. Her students all like her very much. My brother is 5 years old. He is very cute. He likes running. I like to play with him.
On weekends, we often go to the park to have a picnic. We always have fun together. I love my family!
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封信；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己以及家人情况，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接文章开头，介绍自己的相关信息；
第二步，介绍家庭成员的工作及工作地点；
第三步，表达你对家人的感情。
[亮点词汇]
①have a picnic去野餐
②have fun玩儿得开心
[高分句型]
①He works in a hospital and he is very busy every day.（and连接的并列句）
（7）
（24-25七年级上·甘肃兰州·期中）假如你是Tom，请根据你的全家福照片向你的新朋友介绍你自己以及家人。
要求：
（1）字迹工整，书写规范，语句通顺，注意单词的大小写和标点等。
（2）50—60 词左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
（3）相关词汇：宠物 pet 幸福的 happy 爱 love
Hello! I’m Tom. Here is my family photo.
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【答案】例文
Hello! I’m Tom. Here is my family photo.
This is my dad, Frank, and my mom, Lisa. They love me very much. Next to me is my little brother, Dale. He’s very funny. These are my grandparents, Mary and Bill. They are very kind. We have a lovely dog named Coco and a cute cat named Kitty. We all live happily together and love each other a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，文章开头已给出，介绍自己的姓名；
第二步，介绍自己的家庭成员及宠物；
第三步，最后表达对自己家人的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①next to在……旁边
②happily开心地
③each other相互
[高分句型]
We have a lovely dog named Coco and a cute cat named Kitty.（过去分词作后置定语）

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