2024-2025初一英语上写作话题 05时空旅行家的节日(同步写作讲义)(全国通用)

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2024-2025初一英语上写作话题 05时空旅行家的节日(同步写作讲义)(全国通用)

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话题:时空旅行家的节日
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义
你们学校正在举办征文活动,主题是“弘扬中华传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“My Favorite Chinese Festival”为题,写一篇英语短文,为本次活动投稿。
写作提示:
1. 简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日:名称及时间等;
2. 介绍该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式:食物及活动等;
3. 说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含写作提示的全部要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名;
3. 词数70个左右。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
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【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,主题是关于中国传统节日的英文短文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”,描述节日的庆祝方式和感受;
③提示:写作要点已明确给出,包括节日的名称、时间、主要庆祝方式(食物及活动)以及对节日的感受和喜爱原因。考生需围绕这些要点展开,确保内容全面且有条理。
【思维导图】
首先,表明写作意图。开头直接点明自己最喜欢的中国传统节日是什么。
其次,具体阐述写作内容。节日名称及时间;主要庆祝方式;感受及喜爱原因。
最后,书写结语。总结全文,再次强调自己对这一节日的喜爱。
【遣词造句】
在他们中,我最喜欢春节
Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
2.春节使我们感受到爱和快乐和知道家的重要性。
The Spring Festival can make us feel love and happiness and know the importance of home and family.
【参考范文】
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know, there are many traditional festivals in China. Among them, I like the Spring Festival best.
It comes in January or February. It is a time for family members to get together. On the eve of the Spring Festival, all family members enjoy different kinds of food, such as dumplings and fish. We also watch the Spring Festival show and stay up late, because we hope to have a new start in the next year.
The Spring Festival can make us feel love and happiness and know the importance of home and family.
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike非常想了解中国传统节日——春节。请你给他写一封邮件,介绍春节。内容包括:
提示词语:clean the house, have a big dinner, visit, important
提示问题:
What do you usually do during the Spring Festival
What do you like to do Why
What do you think of the Spring Festival
Dear Mike,
How is it going
Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
【思维导图】
首先,承接短文开头。
其次,根据所给的提示信息,给迈克写一封邮件,介绍中国传统节日——春节。
【遣词造句】
春节是中国最重要传统节日之一在中国。
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Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China.
2.我喜欢去拜访亲戚和朋友,因为我可以得到一些礼物。
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I like to visit relatives and friends because I can get some presents.
3.我认为春节对我们来讲很重要。
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I think the Spring Festival is very important for us.
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How is it going Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. It often comes in January or February. Before the festival, we always clean the house to sweep away bad luck. On New Year’s Eve, all the family members come together to have a big dinner. The most traditional food is dumplings. They are delicious. After dinner, we usually watch a special programme on TV.
I like to visit relatives and friends because I can get some presents. I think the Spring Festival is very important for us.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 节日名称
- Spring Festival (春节)
- Mid-Autumn Festival (中秋节)
- Dragon Boat Festival (端午节)
- Lantern Festival (元宵节)
- Chinese New Year (春节的另一种说法)
2. 节日活动
- light lanterns (点灯笼)
- set off fireworks (放烟花)
- make zongzi (包粽子)
- eat mooncakes (吃月饼)
- write Spring Festival couplets (写春联)
- have a family dinner (吃团圆饭)
- give red envelopes (发红包)
3. 节日食物
- dumplings (饺子)
- zongzi (粽子)
- mooncakes (月饼)
- tangyuan (汤圆)
- sticky rice cake (年糕)
4. 情感与意义
- family reunion (团圆)
- happiness (幸福)
- tradition (传统)
- cultural heritage (文化遗产)
- respect for ancestors (对祖先的尊敬)
1. 简单句(基础版)
1. I like Spring Festival because we can eat dumplings.
2. My family always sets off fireworks on New Year’s Eve.
3. During the Mid-Autumn Festival, we eat mooncakes and look at the full moon.
2. 复合句(进阶版)
1. 时间状语从句:
When the Spring Festival comes, my family always cleans the house.
2. 原因状语从句:
We give red envelopes because they bring good luck.
3. 定语从句:
The festival, which is full of joy, is my favorite.
3. 高级句型(提升亮点)
1. Not only do we enjoy delicious food, but we also learn about traditions.
2. The lanterns, lit up like stars, filled the night with magic.
3. This festival teaches me that family is the most important treasure.
1.The moon is full, and the family is together.月圆,人团圆。
2.Seeing is believing.百闻不如一见。
3. Home is where happiness begins.家是幸福的开始。
1. 开头(引入节日)
- My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It is the most important day in China.
- During the Mid-Autumn Festival, families reunite and celebrate together.
2. 中间(描述活动)
- First, my family cleans the house and puts up red decorations.
- Then, we cook a big dinner with dumplings and sticky rice cakes.
- Finally, we watch the lantern show and tell stories about the moon goddess Chang’e.
3. 结尾(总结意义)
- This festival reminds me of the importance of family and tradition.
- I love the Mid-Autumn Festival because it brings people together.
(1)
(24-25七年级上·河南南阳·期末)春节对每一位华夏儿女来说都是非常重要的节日。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文,把中国的春节介绍给世界。
Festival the Chinese Spring Festival
Time in January or February
Activities 仅供参考:clean up the house, have a big dinner, wear new clothes...
Your Feelings(感受) …
写作要求:
1.文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点,适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名或校名;
3.词数80个左右。
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【答案】例文
The Chinese Spring Festival is very important to Chines people. Let me tell you something about it.
It is usually in January or February. There are many activities during the Chinese Spring Festival. We clean up the house and buy a lot of things. Children often wear new clothes. We usually have a big dinner with our family and say “Happy New Year!” to each other. Parents and relatives always give lucky money to children. We also buy presents or flowers to visit our friends or relatives.
I like the Chinese Spring Festival best and I feel happy to get together with my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中的介绍要点,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,表明春节的重要性,并引出下文;
第二步,从“时间,活动”等方面来介绍春节;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb something about...告诉某人关于……的一些事情
②clean up the house打扫房子
③each other彼此
④like...best最喜欢
[高分句型]
①I like the Chinese Spring Festival best and I feel happy to get together with my family.(并列句,不定式作原因状语)
(2)
(24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试)“海上生明月,天涯共此时”。自古以来,中秋节就是文人墨客们争相泼墨的对象。请以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题,根据下面的提示内容,用英语写一篇短文介绍中秋节。
提示内容:
1. 中秋节在秋天,天气不太热也不太冷,非常凉爽;
2. 中秋节那天全家一起吃月饼和水果,晚上赏月;
3. 玩花灯 (play lanterns) 是非常有趣的;
4. 小孩子们很开心,可以玩游戏,提着漂亮的灯笼到处 (here and there) 跑。
写作要求:
1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2. 词数70个左右。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
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【答案】例文
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. Here some details about it.
It falls in autumn. The weather is not too hot or too cold. It is very cool. On that day, all family members have mooncakes and fruit together. And people often enjoy the moon at night. It is interesting for children to play lanterns. They are very happy because they can play games and run here and there with the beautiful lanterns.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is a wonderful chance for us to enjoy good time with our families.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“提示内容”中“The Mid-Autumn Festival”的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明中秋节的地位,引出话题;
第二步,具体阐述中秋节的季节天气、具体活动内容;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at night晚上
②play lanterns玩灯笼
③here and there到处
[高分句型]
They are very happy because they can play games and run here and there with the beautiful lanterns.(because引导原因状语从句)
(3)
(24-25七年级上·江苏盐城·期末)学校英语社团正开展“弘扬中华传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”的征文活动。请以 “My Favourite Festival” 为题写一篇征文投稿。 内容需包含以下提示:
What is your favourite festival
When do people celebrate it
How do people celebrate it
Why do you like it
注意事项:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
2.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 词数:80词左右 (文章开头已给出,不计入总词数) 。
My Favourite Festival
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my favourite festival.
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【答案】例文1
My Favourite Festival
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my favourite festival. My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is a very important festival in China. Before the Spring Festival, they clean and decorate the houses and prepare for it.
The children are very happy because they can get lucky money from their parents and relatives.
On the Chinese New Year’s Eve, most families have a big dinner together and watch the Spring Festival Gala.
When it is twelve o’clock at midnight, people say “Happy New Year” to each other.
I love the festival and I hope everyone can have a happy festival.
例文2
My Favourite Festival
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my favourite festival. My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. The Mid-Autumn Festival is an important festival in China. It usually comes in September or October. On that day, Chinese people always celebrate it with our family members. At noon, we get together and have a big meal. In the evening, we usually eat moon cakes and go out to enjoy the full moon.
People often have a good time on that day. We tell the story of Chang’e and watch the Mid-Autumn Festival Gala on TV. How happy we are!
I love the festival and I hope everyone can have a happy festival.
例文3
My Favourite Festival
Hello, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my favourite festival. My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. We celebrate it on 15th August. It is one of the most traditional festivals in China. On that day, family members are certain to come back home to get together, no matter how far they are away from home. On the evening of that day, family members usually sit together and have a big meal together while enjoying the moon. Moon cakes are the most traditional food across the whole China. We have moon cakes, dumplings or some other traditional food.
I love the festival and I hope everyone can have a happy festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇介绍节日的材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作内容要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,针对所选中国佳节,介绍突出重点,合理作答。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明观点。表明自己最喜欢的节日是中秋节;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从家庭团聚、饮食、风俗等多个方面充分介绍中秋节的节日特点;
第三步,书写结语。希望每个人都能度过开心的节日。
[亮点词汇]
①traditional festivals 传统节日
②get together 团聚
③enjoy the moon 赏月
[高分句型]
①On that day, family members are certain to come back home to get together, no matter how far they are away from home.(“no matter how”引导的让步状语从句)
②I love the festival and I hope everyone can have a happy festival.(宾语从句)
(4)
(24-25七年级上·江苏泰州·期末)2025年春节将至,最近,你校正在举办征文活动,主题是“弘扬中华传统文化,畅谈中国传统佳节”。请你以“I like the Spring Festival best”为题,写一篇英语小短文,为本次活动投稿。
内容要点提示:
1. 春节的时间
2. 春节前以及春节期间的活动
3. 你的感受
要求:
1.包含所有要点,表达清晰,过渡合理,衔接自然,可适当拓展;
2.不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息;
3.词数100左右。
I like the Spring Festival best
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Many Chinese people travel a long way home for it.
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【答案】例文
I like the Spring Festival best
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Many Chinese people travel a long way home for it.
It is usually in January or February. People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes. We prepare delicious food and clean their homes. On Chinese New Year’s Eve, we usually put up Spring Festival couplets. Then the family all get together and have a big dinner. After that they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV and stay up till midnight, and then play fireworks. On the first day of the Spring Festival, we visit their relatives and friends. We can wear new clothes and get lucky money from the elders.
I like the Spring Festival a lot because I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时;
③提示:向大家介绍春节,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,指明春节是中国最重要的节日,引出下文;
第二步,介绍春节的时间,以及春节到来前后的各种庆祝活动,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,描述自己的感受,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for 为……做准备
②get together 相聚到一起
③get lucky 压岁钱
[高分句型]
①People usually start preparing for the festival one month before it comes.(时间状语从句)
②I like the Spring Festival a lot because I always have a good time at the Spring Festival.(原因状语从句)
(5)
(24-25七年级上·福建福州·期末)假如你是李华,在学校组织的“中外文化交流周”的活动中,你负责向外国交换生介绍中国传统节日“端午节”的相关习俗及活动。请你根据以下写作模板及提示,完成你的介绍。词数70。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, let me tell you about a traditional Chinese festival—the Dragon Boat Festival. It falls on lunar May 5th. It’s an important day for Chinese people.
We have different activities on that day. First, we prepare for the celebration before it comes. We make zongzi and hang mugwort on the door. Next, on that day, we eat zongzi and have a meal with family together. Lastly, we have dragon boat races to remember Qu Yuan.
Welcome to celebrate the festival with us and experience Chinese traditional culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示信息进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己,并引出要介绍的内容;
第二步,具体介绍端午节当天进行的一些活动;
第三步,书写结语,欢迎大家一起庆祝这个节日。
[亮点词汇]
①fall on降临
②prepare for sth为某事做准备
③make zongzi and hang mugwort包粽子和挂艾草
④celebrate sth with sb和某人庆祝某事
[高分句型]
①First, we prepare for the celebration before it comes. (before引导的时间状语从句)
②Welcome to celebrate the festival with us and experience Chinese traditional culture. (运用了祈使句)
(6)
(24-25七年级上·江苏无锡·期末)假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Roy给你写了一封信。请认真阅读来信内容并根据来信内容写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, The new year 2025 is coming. I’m really interested in the Spring Festival. Would you like to introduce the Chinese New Year to me How do your family celebrate it Will you get some lucky money How do you usually spend your lucky money I look forward to hearing from you soon.Best wishes, Roy
注意:1. 回信须包含所有问题,要求语句通顺意思连贯。
2. 词数不少于70词, 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总次数。
Dear Roy,
I’m glad to get your letter and I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Roy,
I’m glad to get your letter and I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival.
It is always in January or February. It is the most important holiday in China. Usually, people clean their homes and put up the Spring Festival couplets beforehand. Families get together and enjoy a big dinner. I often get lucky money from the elders. They want to wish us good luck. I spend most of my lucky money on school things like pens. I also use some money to help people in need.
You can come here to celebrate the Spring Festival with me one day.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
② 时态:“一般现在时”为主;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山。表达很高兴收到对方的来信,引出下文。(开头已给出)
第二步,具体阐述。根据来信中的问题,介绍你们家是怎么庆祝春节的、你是否会得到压岁钱、通常怎么花压岁钱等。
第三步,书写结语。表达希望能和对方一起过春节。
[亮点词汇]
① put up 张贴
② couplets 对联
③ beforehand 提前
④ spend money on sth. 在某事/物上花钱
[高分句型]
Usually, people clean their homes and put up the Spring Festival couplets beforehand. (and并列结构)
(7)
(24-25七年级上·江苏无锡·期末)假如你是阳光中学学生张华,寒假期间,英国学生Janice即将寄宿你家,体验春节文化。请根据图表内容用英语写封信,向她介绍一些必要信息。
注意:
1. 须包含所给提示内容,可适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;
2. 词数不少于70,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Janice,
I am so happy that you are coming to China and will stay at my home this winter holiday. Now let me tell you something you would like to know about.
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Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Janice,
I am so happy that you are coming to China and will stay at my home this winter holiday. Now let me tell you something you would like to know about.
My name is Zhang Hua and I’m 12 years old. I’m tall and slim. I like listening to music.
I have a healthy lifestyle. For example, I eat vegetables and fruit every day. I exercise often. I like running best.
The Spring Festival is coming. All the Chinese people celebrate it. My family will get
together and have a big meal. It’s my favourite festival because I can enjoy myself.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己的信息以及春节期间的活动的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“寒假期间,英国学生Janice即将寄宿你家,体验春节文化。请根据图表内容用英语写封信,向她介绍一些必要信息。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“个人信息、自己的生活方式、春节期间的活动等”几个方面重点介绍自己的信息以及春节期间的活动的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“希望我们早日见面”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to music听音乐
②like doing sth喜欢做某事
③get together相聚
④enjoy oneself玩得高兴
[高分句型]
①I like listening to music. (动名词作宾语)
②It’s my favourite festival because I can enjoy myself. (because引导的原因状语从句)
为增进校园文化交流,育英中学将与结对的英国学校开展一次“云访学校”的线上活动。假如你是该校学生代表Teng Fei,请根据下面导图和问题,向他们介绍你们的学校生活。
Our School Life What is our school like (beautiful ...) What do we do at school (do exercises ...)
What subjects do we learn (Chinese …) What’s our favorite subject Why (useful ...)
What clubs do we have (the nature club …) What can we do in the clubs (watch birds …)
要求:
(1)可适当增加内容,以使行文流畅;
(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;

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