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中考冲刺核心考点 写作—记叙文
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 文山州模拟）成长的道路上总有一些令人难忘的经历，它们让我们学会坚持与合作。请以"Our Unforgettable Project Together"为题，用英文写一篇短文，描述你和小组成员共同完成的一次实践活动（如科学实验/社区服务/文化展览等），谈谈你们遇到的困难及解决办法，并谈谈你的成长感悟。
要求：（1）根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
（2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
（3）文章不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（4）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Our Unforgettable Project Together
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2．（2025 大姚县二模）光阴似箭，日月如梭，三年的初中生活就要结束，回顾过去，在你的成长过程中，一定有重要的人、事、爱好、习惯等。请以"The Importance of _________"为题写一篇文章谈论某人、某事或某物的重要性；也可通过讲述一次你的经历来说明某人某事某物的重要性，并谈谈你的感悟。
要求：
（1）补全题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
（2）注意紧扣主题，行文连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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3．（2025 青岛校级二模）让人成长的不是年龄，而是阅历。看过的电影，读过的书，交过的朋友，游览过的风景，做过的难题，和我们促膝交谈的师长……都是我们成长过程中不可或缺的部分。丰富多彩的初中生活充满了苦辣酸甜，让我们哭，也让我们笑。请你描述印象最深刻的一次情感经历，题目自拟，写一篇不少于100词的英语作文。
4．（2025 环翠区一模）初中四年以来，我们的每一次变化都见证了我们的成长。请以"The greatest change I have ever made"为题写一篇英语短文，至少包括以下要点：
（1）What is the greatest change？
（2）How did you change？
（3）How did you feel after the change？
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
The greatest change I have ever made
No doubt，everyone is sure to change，and so am I.________
5．（2025 蓝田县三模） 假如你是李华，昨天你和朋友去了市展览馆（the city exhibition hall）参观了中华传统艺术展（a Chinese traditional art exhibition）。请根据下表，写一篇短文，记录你的所见所感。
What you see How you feel
paper cutting works（剪纸作品） 每一幅作品都在讲述着一个有趣的故事
shadow puppet works（皮影作品） 它们能够演艺精彩的戏曲
Chinese calligraphy works（书法作品） 汉字有这么漂亮的写法
Chinese painting（中国画） ……
要求：1.选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday.There was a
From what I saw there，I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
6．（2025春 昆明期中）人的一生会经历许多重要的事件；当得知事件发生时你和你的家人、朋友、同学正在做什么？如：2020年1月23日早10点武汉因新冠疫情被封城时；2021年5月22日下午1点07分，袁隆平在湖南长沙逝世时，2025年3月28日下午2点20分缅甸发生7.9级大地震时，大家在干什么？请你以"An Important Event"为题，写一篇英语短文，在英语课上向大家描述当时的情景。
提示：
（1）消息传来的时间、地点或方式；
（2）当时你和你的家人、朋友、同学正在做什么，以及听到消息后的反应；
（3）简单描述为什么你会记住这件事。
要求：
（1）内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥；词数不少于80词；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名。
7．（2025春 武汉校级期中） "生活就像一本书，每一天都是新的篇章。"在我们的成长过程中，总会经历一些难忘的时刻，比如一场比赛、一次旅行或一次挑战。这些经历不仅让我们印象深刻，也帮助我们不断成长。学校正在开展主题为"An Unforgettable Experience"的英语写作活动。请你以Li Hua的名义，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你亲身经历过的一次难忘事件。
内容提示：
1）What did you experience？
2）How did you feel about the experience？
3）What did you learn from the experience？
4）Something more about the experience.
注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Experience
This is an experience that I will never forget.
8．（2025 市南区二模）请你从以下两幅图片中任选一个，以"The Power of Encouragement"为题，发挥想象，进行故事创编。
要求：
1字数80﹣100；
2不出现真实的人名、校名等。
9．（2025 黑龙江二模）根据下列四幅图片所示内容，写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一；
（2）词数在80﹣100之间；
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
10．（2025春 五华区校级期中）在生活中，一定有那么一个人或一件事，就如一缕阳光，照进你的心灵深处，照亮了你的前路。请以"Sunshine in My Life"为题。用英语写一篇短文，叙述给你带来温暖或希望的一件事或一个人。
要求：
（1）注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
（2）不得使用真实姓名或者校名，如需要使用姓名，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Kunming Middle School。
（3）词数不少于80词。
Sunshine in My Life
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11．（2025春 五华区期中）劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以"Labor is the Key of Happiness"为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
写作要求如下：
（1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80词；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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12．（2025春 渝中区校级期中）下午放学，你像往常一样独自走在回家的路上，突然听见"喵"的一声，你停下脚步，蹲下来仔细寻找，发现一只腿受伤的小猫…
5 p.m.on Friday
5：15 p.m.on Friday
10 a.m.on Sunday
ideas bank
surprised，worried，nervous，weak，blood take action quickly… get an X﹣ray，put a bandage on the cut，care for，have a strong feeling of satisfaction… put up notices，look of joy，be proud of…
请根据上述文字，并借助图片完整描述一个故事。
要求：
（1）80﹣120词；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
At 5 p.m.last Friday，I was walking home from school as usual.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2025 南昌模拟）团结友爱、互帮互助是中华民族的传统美德，也是人与人之间和谐相处之道。本卷完形填空A）篇谈及了陈文君在新疆遇到困难时得到了当地村民的热心帮助，之后他尽全力帮助他们致富的故事。请你根据下面的写作要点写一篇英语短文。先阐述你对这个故事的看法，再描述你生活中难忘的互帮互助的经历，最后谈谈你的收获及打算。
写作要点：
（1）What do you think of the story between Chen Wenjun and the villagers？
（2）What's your experience about helping others or getting help from others？
（3）What can you learn from it？What will you do in the future？
要求：
（1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数80﹣120。
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14．（2025 岳麓区校级模拟）根据要求完成短文写作。
读完第一节（回答问题）内容后，你能想到你现在还拥有的某一件充满童年回忆的物品吗？请选择下图中的一件物品或其他物品，以"An Object Full of Childhood Memories"为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
An Object Full of Childhood Memories
Many people have an object that reminds them of their childhood.______
15．（2025春 成都期中）假设你是李华，早上出门前和妈妈吵了一架，放学回家后你发现家里没人，而餐桌上留着你最爱吃的菜。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述你的所做所想。
要求：
1）包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2）不少于80词。
参考词汇：给某人拥抱give sb.a hug
16．（2025 新城区校级模拟）每天，运动场上随处可见同学们矫健的身姿和运动的风采。你喜欢运动吗？你最喜欢的运动是什么？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以"Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life"为题写一篇文章，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，并谈谈运动给你带来的好处。
要求：（1）内容应包含要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
（2）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息。
（3）词数：不少于70。
17．（2025 二道区校级二模）在成长的旅程中，我们总会面临一些需要勇气去开启的挑战。回忆一次你走出舒适区，鼓起勇气尝试新事物的经历，可以是参加一场公开演讲、尝试新的户外运动、学习一门陌生的技艺等等。请以"The Braver I Am，the More Wonderful My Journey Will Be"为题，讲述一个故事，谈谈在过程中你遇到的困难，又是如何凭借勇气克服它的，以及这次经历带给你的感受与成长。要求：
（1）文章不少于80词；
（2）不要出现真实的人名和校名。
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18．（2025 新城区校级模拟）许多青少年热衷于志愿者活动，它在青少年成长过程中扮演着重要角色。假如你叫李华，五一假期你去了陕西历史博物馆做志愿者工作。请你以My Volunteer Experience为题写一篇短文，分享你做导游的一次经历。
写作要求：
（1）所写内容应包含图表各栏目所给的关键信息，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于70（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）
My Volunteer Experience
Being a volunteer can be really exciting.Do you have any experiences in volunteering？____________
19．（2025 盐湖区模拟）在人生里，我们会遭遇各种挑战与困难，有时成功，有时失败。但我们走的每一步，不管通向成功还是遭遇挫折，都对成长有价值。请以"Applaud for Myself"（为自己鼓掌）为题写一篇英语作文，讲述你在学习、生活或爱好方面克服困难或取得进步的一次经历，要包含过程、感受以及从中汲取的经验教训。
要求：
1）条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3）字数不少于80词。
20．（2025 武进区校级一模）初中是人生的转折点，初中是我们奋斗史的见证，初中是我们流汗不流泪的青春，初中是我们欢声笑语的天地，初中留给我们最难忘的回忆。你可以选择一个关键词来描述你的成长印记，如change，challenge，thankful，hard﹣working等，请以此关键词为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容：
（1）Which word do you choose to describe your middle school life？
（2）What's your story about the word？
（3）What have you learned from the story？
注意：
（1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
When recalling my school life，the word "________" comes to my mind.________
中考冲刺核心考点 写作—记叙文
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 文山州模拟）成长的道路上总有一些令人难忘的经历，它们让我们学会坚持与合作。请以"Our Unforgettable Project Together"为题，用英文写一篇短文，描述你和小组成员共同完成的一次实践活动（如科学实验/社区服务/文化展览等），谈谈你们遇到的困难及解决办法，并谈谈你的成长感悟。
要求：（1）根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
（2）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
（3）文章不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
（4）请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Our Unforgettable Project Together
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【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
Our Unforgettable Project Together
Last month，our group took part in a community clean﹣up project.It was a great lesson in teamwork and persistence.
We planned to clean the park and make posters for environmental protection.As we started collecting trash，it rained heavily，ruining our posters.We felt disappointed but quickly moved to a shelter.We covered the posters with plastic and kept working.Some picked up litter；others talked to visitors about environmental protection.Though wet and tired，we finished cleaning the park by afternoon.
The project taught me that challenges are part of teamwork.When problems come，we should stay positive and help each other.Even a small group can make a big difference if we work together.It's an experience that I'll never forget!
【分析】【高分句型一】：
We planned to clean the park and make posters for environmental protection.我们计划清理公园，并制作环保海报。
plan to do sth表示计划做某事。
【高分句型二】：
When problems come，we should stay positive and help each other.当问题出现时，我们应该保持积极的态度，互相帮助。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
Our Unforgettable Project Together
Last month，our group took part in a community clean﹣up project.It was a great lesson in teamwork and persistence.（开头点题，简要介绍项目的类型）
We planned to clean the park and make posters for environmental protection.【高分句型一】As we started collecting trash，it rained heavily，ruining our posters.We felt disappointed but quickly moved to a shelter.We covered the posters with plastic and kept working.Some picked up litter；others talked to visitors about environmental protection.Though wet and tired，we finished cleaning the park by afternoon.（遇到的困难及解决办法）
The project taught me that challenges are part of teamwork.When problems come，we should stay positive and help each other.【高分句型二】Even a small group can make a big difference if we work together.It's an experience that I'll never forget!（成长感悟）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2025 大姚县二模）光阴似箭，日月如梭，三年的初中生活就要结束，回顾过去，在你的成长过程中，一定有重要的人、事、爱好、习惯等。请以"The Importance of _________"为题写一篇文章谈论某人、某事或某物的重要性；也可通过讲述一次你的经历来说明某人某事某物的重要性，并谈谈你的感悟。
要求：
（1）补全题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80；
（2）注意紧扣主题，行文连贯，语言通顺，书写规范；
（3）文中不能使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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【考点】记叙文；人物介绍；学校生活．
【答案】
The Importance of Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in my junior high school life.I still remember when I failed my math exam last semester，I felt so upset.It was my best friend Lucy who stayed with me after class.She shared her notes with me and explained the problems patiently.With her help，I improved my math score by 20 points in the next test.
Through this experience，I realized true friends are those who give you warmth when you are down.They encourage you to face challenges bravely.Now I always try my best to help others as Lucy did.Friendship is like sunshine that makes our school life brighter.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I still remember when I failed my math exam last semester，I felt so upset.我还记得上学期数学考试不及格的时候，我感到很沮丧。when 引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
It was my best friend Lucy who stayed with me after class.课后陪我的是我最好的朋友露西。who引导的定语从句。
【解答】
The Importance of Friendship
Friendship plays an important role in my junior high school life.I still remember when I failed my math exam last semester，I felt so upset.【高分句型一】It was my best friend Lucy who stayed with me after class.【高分句型二】She shared her notes with me and explained the problems patiently.With her help，I improved my math score by 20 points in the next test.（经历：友谊在我的初中生活中扮演着重要的角色。我还记得上学期数学考试不及格的时候，我感到很沮丧。课后陪我的是我最好的朋友露西。她与我分享她的笔记，并耐心地解释问题。在她的帮助下，下次考试我的数学成绩提高了20分。）
Through this experience，I realized true friends are those who give you warmth when you are down.They encourage you to face challenges bravely.Now I always try my best to help others as Lucy did.Friendship is like sunshine that makes our school life brighter.（收获：通过这次经历，我意识到真正的朋友是那些在你失落的时候给你温暖的人。他们鼓励你勇敢地面对挑战。现在我总是尽我最大的努力帮助别人露西所做的。友谊就像阳光，使我们的学校生活更加光明。）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2025 青岛校级二模）让人成长的不是年龄，而是阅历。看过的电影，读过的书，交过的朋友，游览过的风景，做过的难题，和我们促膝交谈的师长……都是我们成长过程中不可或缺的部分。丰富多彩的初中生活充满了苦辣酸甜，让我们哭，也让我们笑。请你描述印象最深刻的一次情感经历，题目自拟，写一篇不少于100词的英语作文。
【考点】记叙文；学校生活．
【答案】
It makes me happy
Our junior high school life is full of sweetness and bitterness.When I started middle school，I had no idea how to talk to my classmates.I often felt lonely.
But an unexpected small thing happened and ended my boring school life.One of my classmates invited me to her birthday party.I was so surprised because we were not familiar with each other at all.But I accepted the invitation.On her birthday，I gave her flowers and a birthday card as presents.We watched a movie together and talked about it.Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited.I regretted that we could not be friends earlier.It ended just as you'd expect—we became best friends.I don't feel bored at school anymore.
I always remember that day and I realize what best friends mean to my life.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
When I started middle school，I had no idea how to talk to my classmates.当我开始上中学时，我不知道如何和同学们交谈。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited.与她分享相同的观点让我感到兴奋。
make sb do sth表示让某人做某事。
【解答】
It makes me happy
Our junior high school life is full of sweetness and bitterness.When I started middle school，I had no idea how to talk to my classmates.【高分句型一】I often felt lonely.（引出话题）
But an unexpected small thing happened and ended my boring school life.One of my classmates invited me to her birthday party.I was so surprised because we were not familiar with each other at all.But I accepted the invitation.On her birthday，I gave her flowers and a birthday card as presents.We watched a movie together and talked about it.Sharing the same views with her made me feel excited.【高分句型二】I regretted that we could not be friends earlier.It ended just as you'd expect—we became best friends.I don't feel bored at school anymore.（简要介绍事情的经过）
I always remember that day and I realize what best friends mean to my life.（总结这件事情对自己的影响）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2025 环翠区一模）初中四年以来，我们的每一次变化都见证了我们的成长。请以"The greatest change I have ever made"为题写一篇英语短文，至少包括以下要点：
（1）What is the greatest change？
（2）How did you change？
（3）How did you feel after the change？
注意：
（1）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
The greatest change I have ever made
No doubt，everyone is sure to change，and so am I.________
【考点】记叙文；个人情况．
【答案】
The greatest change I have ever made
No doubt，everyone is sure to change，and so am I.
The greatest change I have ever made is my love of reading.I remember when I was a little child，I used to show no interest in reading simply because it was boring.Noticing this，my mother told me the advantages of reading and started to read books with me.Day by day，I was attracted by books，which led me into a new world.
While reading，I felt as if talking with a wise man.In fact，reading brought me much knowledge，and made my life colorful and joyful.Thanks to my mother's help，I am used to reading，and I learn a lot from it.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I remember when I was a little child，I used to show no interest in reading simply because it was boring.我记得当我还是个孩子的时候，我曾经对阅读不感兴趣，只是因为它很无聊。when引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Day by day，I was attracted by books，which led me into a new world.一天又一天，我被书所吸引，它把我带入了一个新的世界。which引导的定语从句。
【解答】
The greatest change I have ever made
No doubt，everyone is sure to change，and so am I.
The greatest change I have ever made is my love of reading.（是什么）I remember when I was a little child，I used to show no interest in reading simply because it was boring.【高分句型一】Noticing this，my mother told me the advantages of reading and started to read books with me.Day by day，I was attracted by books，which led me into a new world.【高分句型二】（如何改变的）
While reading，I felt as if talking with a wise man.In fact，reading brought me much knowledge，and made my life colorful and joyful.Thanks to my mother's help，I am used to reading，and I learn a lot from it.（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2025 蓝田县三模） 假如你是李华，昨天你和朋友去了市展览馆（the city exhibition hall）参观了中华传统艺术展（a Chinese traditional art exhibition）。请根据下表，写一篇短文，记录你的所见所感。
What you see How you feel
paper cutting works（剪纸作品） 每一幅作品都在讲述着一个有趣的故事
shadow puppet works（皮影作品） 它们能够演艺精彩的戏曲
Chinese calligraphy works（书法作品） 汉字有这么漂亮的写法
Chinese painting（中国画） ……
要求：1.选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.不得出现真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday.There was a
From what I saw there，I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
【考点】记叙文；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday.There was a Chinese traditional art exhibition.We saw many amazing works.The paper cutting works were full of creativity—each piece told an interesting story，like folk tales or historical events.The shadow puppet works impressed us most.They could act out wonderful operas，and the way they moved made the stories come alive.The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written，with different styles from ancient masters.As for Chinese paintings，they used simple ink and brush to create peaceful mountains and rivers，making me feel the beauty of nature and traditional aesthetics.
From what I saw there，I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
【分析】【高分句型一】
They could act out wonderful operas，and the way they moved made the stories come alive.他们可以表演出精彩的歌剧，他们的动作方式让故事变得生动起来。
and并列句。
【高分句型二】
The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written，with different styles from ancient masters.中国书法作品展示了汉字的美丽，风格与古代大师不同。
宾语从句+被动语态+伴随状语。
【解答】 I went to visit the city exhibition hall with my friend Tom yesterday.There was a Chinese traditional art exhibition.We saw many amazing works.The paper cutting works were full of creativity—each piece told an interesting story，like folk tales or historical events.（剪纸作品）The shadow puppet works impressed us most.They could act out wonderful operas，and the way they moved made the stories come alive.【高分句型一】（皮影作品）The Chinese calligraphy works showed how beautiful Chinese characters could be written，with different styles from ancient masters.【高分句型二】（书法作品）As for Chinese paintings，they used simple ink and brush to create peaceful mountains and rivers，making me feel the beauty of nature and traditional aesthetics.（中国画）
From what I saw there，I become much prouder of the Chinese traditional art.
【点评】这是一篇材料作文；时态：时态以"一般过去时"为主；提示：根据所给表格中的要点完成写作，不能遗漏信息，适当添加细节。[亮点词汇]①be full of充满②come alive活跃起来③the beauty of nature自然之美
6．（2025春 昆明期中）人的一生会经历许多重要的事件；当得知事件发生时你和你的家人、朋友、同学正在做什么？如：2020年1月23日早10点武汉因新冠疫情被封城时；2021年5月22日下午1点07分，袁隆平在湖南长沙逝世时，2025年3月28日下午2点20分缅甸发生7.9级大地震时，大家在干什么？请你以"An Important Event"为题，写一篇英语短文，在英语课上向大家描述当时的情景。
提示：
（1）消息传来的时间、地点或方式；
（2）当时你和你的家人、朋友、同学正在做什么，以及听到消息后的反应；
（3）简单描述为什么你会记住这件事。
要求：
（1）内容包含提示要点，可适当发挥；词数不少于80词；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名。
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
An Important Event
On May 22，2021，our math teacher suddenly paused the class and announced，"Dr.Yuan Longping has passed away."The class felt silent.It was 1：07 p.m.and we were solving equations，but everyone stopped writing.I remember some classmates checking their phones nervously，while others whispered about his achievements.My best friend，Li Hua，murmured，"He saved millions from hunger."After school，we gathered under the old tree in the schoolyard，sharing stories about his hybrid rice research.Teachers brought white flowers and we placed them on a makeshift memorial.I will never forget this event because Dr.Yaun taught us the power of perseverance.His work reminds me that even small efforts can change the world.Whenever I face challenges，I think of his words："Success comes from hard work."That day，I learned to cherish every grain of rice and every opportunity to make a difference.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
It was 1：07 p.m.and we were solving equations，but everyone stopped writing.当时是下午1：07，我们正在解方程式，但每个人都停止了写作。
stop doing sth表示停止做某事。
【高分句型二】：
Whenever I face challenges，I think of his words："Success comes from hard work."每当我面临挑战时，我都会想起他的话："成功来自努力。"
whenever引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
An Important Event
On May 22，2021，our math teacher suddenly paused the class and announced，"Dr.Yuan Longping has passed away."The class felt silent.It was 1：07 p.m.and we were solving equations，but everyone stopped writing.【高分句型一】（消息传来的时间、地点或方式）I remember some classmates checking their phones nervously，while others whispered about his achievements.My best friend，Li Hua，murmured，"He saved millions from hunger."After school，we gathered under the old tree in the schoolyard，sharing stories about his hybrid rice research.Teachers brought white flowers and we placed them on a makeshift memorial.I will never forget this event because Dr.Yaun taught us the power of perseverance.（当时你和你的家人、朋友、同学正在做什么，以及听到消息后的反应）His work reminds me that even small efforts can change the world.Whenever I face challenges，I think of his words："Success comes from hard work."【高分句型二】That day，I learned to cherish every grain of rice and every opportunity to make a difference.（为什么会记住这件事）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2025春 武汉校级期中） "生活就像一本书，每一天都是新的篇章。"在我们的成长过程中，总会经历一些难忘的时刻，比如一场比赛、一次旅行或一次挑战。这些经历不仅让我们印象深刻，也帮助我们不断成长。学校正在开展主题为"An Unforgettable Experience"的英语写作活动。请你以Li Hua的名义，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你亲身经历过的一次难忘事件。
内容提示：
1）What did you experience？
2）How did you feel about the experience？
3）What did you learn from the experience？
4）Something more about the experience.
注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
An Unforgettable Experience
This is an experience that I will never forget.
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
An Unforgettable Experience
This is an experience that I will never forget.Last year，I took part in a school﹣wide English speech contest.
At first，I was extremely nervous.The moment I stepped onto the stage，my mind went blank.But I took a deep breath and tried to calm down.I began to speak，and as I went on，I became more confident.
When the result was announced and I found I won the first prize，I was overjoyed.This experience taught me that we should face our fears bravely.Only by stepping out of our comfort zone can we grow and achieve something great.It also strengthened my belief in myself and made me more passionate about English.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
I began to speak，and as I went on，I became more confident.我开始说话，随着我继续说下去，我变得更加自信了。
begin to do sth表示开始做某事。
【高分句型二】：
When the result was announced and I found I won the first prize，I was overjoyed.当结果宣布时，我发现我得了一等奖，我欣喜若狂。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
An Unforgettable Experience
This is an experience that I will never forget.Last year，I took part in a school﹣wide English speech contest.（表明写作意图：开篇点题，引出要讲述的难忘经历，直接点明事件）
At first，I was extremely nervous.The moment I stepped onto the stage，my mind went blank.But I took a deep breath and tried to calm down.I began to speak，and as I went on，I became more confident.【高分句型一】When the result was announced and I found I won the first prize，I was overjoyed.【高分句型二】（具体阐述写作内容：描述经历过程）This experience taught me that we should face our fears bravely.Only by stepping out of our comfort zone can we grow and achieve something great.It also strengthened my belief in myself and made me more passionate about English.（总结从经历中获得的启示或成长）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2025 市南区二模）请你从以下两幅图片中任选一个，以"The Power of Encouragement"为题，发挥想象，进行故事创编。
要求：
1字数80﹣100；
2不出现真实的人名、校名等。
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
The Power of Encouragement
One day，I joined a basketball practice session.When I tried to shoot，the ball always missed the hoop.I felt upset and wanted to quit.However，my coach encouraged me，saying， "You can do it!Keep practicing，and you'll improve." Encouraged by his words，I tried harder and scored for the first time.That amazing moment made me believe in myself again.From then on，I kept training with determination.The power of encouragement pushed me forward and taught me that with confidence and effort，anything is possible.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I tried to shoot，the ball always missed the hoop.当我想投篮时，球总是投偏。When引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Keep practicing，and you'll improve.坚持练习，你会进步的。祈使句。
【解答】
The Power of Encouragement
One day，I joined a basketball practice session.When I tried to shoot，the ball always missed the hoop.【高分句型一】I felt upset and wanted to quit.However，my coach encouraged me，saying， "You can do it!Keep practicing，and you'll improve."【高分句型二】Encouraged by his words，I tried harder and scored for the first time.That amazing moment made me believe in myself again.From then on，I kept training with determination.The power of encouragement pushed me forward and taught me that with confidence and effort，anything is possible.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2025 黑龙江二模）根据下列四幅图片所示内容，写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一；
（2）词数在80﹣100之间；
（3）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
【考点】记叙文；人际关系．
【答案】 Last Monday，my mother had a bad cold and couldn't get out of bed.I wanted to help her feel better，so I decided to cook dinner for her.Since she had a sore throat，I made some light and warm porridge.I washed the rice carefully and boiled it slowly.Then，I added a little salt to make it tasty.When I brought the porridge to her，she smiled and said， "Thank you，dear."
After eating it，she rested for a while.I was tired but happy because I could help her.Cooking for my mom made me realize how much she usually does for me.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
I wanted to help her feel better，so I decided to cook dinner for her.我想让她感觉好些，所以我决定给她做晚饭。
want to do sth表示想做某事。
【高分句型二】：
When I brought the porridge to her，she smiled and said， "Thank you，dear."当我把粥端给她时，她笑着说："谢谢你，亲爱的。"
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】 Last Monday，my mother had a bad cold and couldn't get out of bed.I wanted to help her feel better，so I decided to cook dinner for her.【高分句型一】Since she had a sore throat，I made some light and warm porridge.I washed the rice carefully and boiled it slowly.Then，I added a little salt to make it tasty.When I brought the porridge to her，she smiled and said， "Thank you，dear."【高分句型二】（表明写作意图，根据图片顺序介绍其内容）
After eating it，she rested for a while.I was tired but happy because I could help her.Cooking for my mom made me realize how much she usually does for me.（谈谈收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2025春 五华区校级期中）在生活中，一定有那么一个人或一件事，就如一缕阳光，照进你的心灵深处，照亮了你的前路。请以"Sunshine in My Life"为题。用英语写一篇短文，叙述给你带来温暖或希望的一件事或一个人。
要求：
（1）注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
（2）不得使用真实姓名或者校名，如需要使用姓名，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Kunming Middle School。
（3）词数不少于80词。
Sunshine in My Life
_______________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文；人物介绍；日常生活．
【答案】
Sunshine in My Life
In my life，my best friend，Gina，is the sunshine.Let me tell you something about her.
When I was in the seventh grade，I took part in a school sports meeting.However，I failed in the 800﹣meter race and felt extremely disappointed.I was so sad that I even thought about giving up running.Just then，Gina came to me.She sat beside me，holding my hand，and said， "Failure is just a stepping﹣stone to success.Don't be sad.You've already done your best." Her words were like warm sunshine，cheering me up at once.After that，she often accompanied me to practice running.With her encouragement，I became more confident.
Gina is really the sunshine in my life.Her support and love always light up my heart，making me stronger and more positive.I'm so grateful to have such a precious friend.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I was in the seventh grade，I took part in a school sports meeting.当我在七年级的时候，我参加了学校的运动会。When引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Don't be sad.不要难过。祈使句。
【解答】
Sunshine in My Life
In my life，my best friend，Gina，is the sunshine.Let me tell you something about her.
When I was in the seventh grade，I took part in a school sports meeting.【高分句型一】However，I failed in the 800﹣meter race and felt extremely disappointed.I was so sad that I even thought about giving up running.Just then，Gina came to me.She sat beside me，holding my hand，and said， "Failure is just a stepping﹣stone to success.Don't be sad.【高分句型二】You've already done your best." Her words were like warm sunshine，cheering me up at once.After that，she often accompanied me to practice running.With her encouragement，I became more confident.
Gina is really the sunshine in my life.Her support and love always light up my heart，making me stronger and more positive.I'm so grateful to have such a precious friend.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2025春 五华区期中）劳动创造美好生活。每个人都可以从劳动中收获珍贵的回忆。作为一名初中生，在学习之余，承担起家务劳动，有助于提升自己的生活能力。请大家以"Labor is the Key of Happiness"为题，讲述一次自己做家务的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
写作要求如下：
（1）语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80词；
（2）文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。
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【考点】记叙文；家庭生活．
【答案】
Labor is the Key of Happiness
Last Saturday，with my parents out，I decided to clean the messy living room.I first organized scattered books and toys，then mopped the floor until it was shiny.Doing the laundry was tiring—sorting clothes，using the machine，and hanging them to dry.Though my back ached，the house turned tidy.When my parents returned，they were surprised and praised me.I felt proud and realized how much work goes into keeping a home.
This experience taught me practical skills and made me understand my parents' efforts.Now I help with chores weekly，finding joy in creating a clean space.Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Doing the laundry was tiring—sorting clothes，using the machine，and hanging them to dry.洗衣服是件累人的事——把衣服分类，用洗衣机，然后把它们挂起来晾干。动名词作主语。
【高分句型二】
When my parents returned，they were surprised and praised me.当我的父母回来时，他们很惊讶，并表扬了我。When引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
Labor is the Key of Happiness
Last Saturday，with my parents out，I decided to clean the messy living room.I first organized scattered books and toys，then mopped the floor until it was shiny.Doing the laundry was tiring—sorting clothes，using the machine，and hanging them to dry.【高分句型一】Though my back ached，the house turned tidy.When my parents returned，they were surprised and praised me.【高分句型二】I felt proud and realized how much work goes into keeping a home.（经历：上周六，我的父母不在家，我决定打扫凌乱的客厅。我先把散乱的书和玩具整理好，然后拖地板，直到地板发亮。洗衣服是件累人的事——把衣服分类，用洗衣机，然后把它们挂起来晾干。虽然我的背很疼，但房子还是很整洁。当我的父母回来时，他们很惊讶，并表扬了我。我感到很自豪，也意识到维持一个家需要付出多少努力。）
This experience taught me practical skills and made me understand my parents' efforts.Now I help with chores weekly，finding joy in creating a clean space.Labor shows me happiness comes from my own hard work.（收获：这段经历教会了我一些实用的技能，也让我明白了父母的努力。现在我每周都帮忙做家务，从创造一个干净的空间中找到乐趣。劳动告诉我，幸福来自于我自己的辛勤劳动。）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2025春 渝中区校级期中）下午放学，你像往常一样独自走在回家的路上，突然听见"喵"的一声，你停下脚步，蹲下来仔细寻找，发现一只腿受伤的小猫…
5 p.m.on Friday
5：15 p.m.on Friday
10 a.m.on Sunday
ideas bank
surprised，worried，nervous，weak，blood take action quickly… get an X﹣ray，put a bandage on the cut，care for，have a strong feeling of satisfaction… put up notices，look of joy，be proud of…
请根据上述文字，并借助图片完整描述一个故事。
要求：
（1）80﹣120词；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
At 5 p.m.last Friday，I was walking home from school as usual.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 At 5 p.m.last Friday，I was walking home from school as usual.Suddenly，I heard a weak "meow" behind some bushes.Surprised and worried，I looked around carefully and found a little cat lying on the ground.It seemed so weak and there was blood on its leg.I took action quickly and brought it to a nearby vet.Fifteen minutes later，the vet gave it an X﹣ray and put a bandage on the cut.I kept the cat at my home and cared for it.On Sunday morning，I put up notices，hoping to find its owner.When a girl finally showed up to take her cat back，she looked so happy.I felt proud and had a strong sense of satisfaction.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Surprised and worried，I looked around carefully and found a little cat lying on the ground.我又惊讶又担心，仔细地环顾四周，发现一只小猫躺在地上。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
When a girl finally showed up to take her cat back，she looked so happy.当一个女孩终于出现把她的猫带回来时，她看起来很高兴。When引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】 At 5 p.m.last Friday，I was walking home from school as usual.Suddenly，I heard a weak "meow" behind some bushes.Surprised and worried，I looked around carefully and found a little cat lying on the ground.【高分句型一】It seemed so weak and there was blood on its leg.I took action quickly and brought it to a nearby vet.Fifteen minutes later，the vet gave it an X﹣ray and put a bandage on the cut.I kept the cat at my home and cared for it.On Sunday morning，I put up notices，hoping to find its owner.When a girl finally showed up to take her cat back，she looked so happy.【高分句型二】I felt proud and had a strong sense of satisfaction.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2025 南昌模拟）团结友爱、互帮互助是中华民族的传统美德，也是人与人之间和谐相处之道。本卷完形填空A）篇谈及了陈文君在新疆遇到困难时得到了当地村民的热心帮助，之后他尽全力帮助他们致富的故事。请你根据下面的写作要点写一篇英语短文。先阐述你对这个故事的看法，再描述你生活中难忘的互帮互助的经历，最后谈谈你的收获及打算。
写作要点：
（1）What do you think of the story between Chen Wenjun and the villagers？
（2）What's your experience about helping others or getting help from others？
（3）What can you learn from it？What will you do in the future？
要求：
（1）短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
（3）词数80﹣120。
______
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 I think the story between them reflects the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation.They are our role models.I remember once I lost my lunch money.When I had lunch，I just sat there by myself.At this time，my deskmate noticed that I had no lunch，so he offered to give me half of his lunch.So I also secretly determined that in the future life，I will actively help others.Because we all need help，and helping others is helping ourselves.As an old saying goes：Give someone a rose，and the hand will keep the fragrance.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think the story between them reflects the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation.我认为他们之间的故事体现了中华民族的传统美德。I think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
就像一句俗语说的：赠人玫瑰，手留有余香。As an old saying goes：Give someone a rose，and the hand will keep the fragrance.引用谚语。
【解答】 I think the story between them reflects the traditional virtues of the Chinese nation. 【高分句型一】They are our role models.（看法） I remember once I lost my lunch money.When I had lunch，I just sat there by myself.At this time，my deskmate noticed that I had no lunch，so he offered to give me half of his lunch. （经历）So I also secretly determined that in the future life，I will actively help others.Because we all need help，and helping others is helping ourselves.As an old saying goes：Give someone a rose，and the hand will keep the fragrance.【高分句型二】（收获和要怎么做）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2025 岳麓区校级模拟）根据要求完成短文写作。
读完第一节（回答问题）内容后，你能想到你现在还拥有的某一件充满童年回忆的物品吗？请选择下图中的一件物品或其他物品，以"An Object Full of Childhood Memories"为题，写一篇短文。
要求：
（1）短文必须包含提示中的所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
An Object Full of Childhood Memories
Many people have an object that reminds them of their childhood.______
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
An Object Full of Childhood Memories
Many people have an object that reminds them of their childhood.So do I.It's a teddy bear.I got it from my parents on my sixth birthday.
The teddy bear is very soft and as big as my head.It has black and white fur and a smiling face.It looks so cute.When I was young，the teddy bear was my best friend.At night，I often hugged it and slept.When I was sad，I would tell my teddy bear what happened.When it was dirty，I would wash it very carefully.
It is old now，but I still love it.Although I don't sleep with it，I will never forget the good times we have had.It's special to me.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I was young，the teddy bear was my best friend.当我小的时候，泰迪熊是我最好的朋友。When引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Although I don't sleep with it，I will never forget the good times we have had.虽然我没有和它一起睡觉，但我永远不会忘记我们一起度过的美好时光。Although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】
An Object Full of Childhood Memories
Many people have an object that reminds them of their childhood.So do I.It's a teddy bear.I got it from my parents on my sixth birthday.（是什么）
The teddy bear is very soft and as big as my head.It has black and white fur and a smiling face.It looks so cute.When I was young，the teddy bear was my best friend. 【高分句型一】At night，I often hugged it and slept.When I was sad，I would tell my teddy bear what happened.When it was dirty，I would wash it very carefully.（理由）
It is old now，but I still love it.Although I don't sleep with it，I will never forget the good times we have had. 【高分句型二】It's special to me.（现在仍然用它和理由）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2025春 成都期中）假设你是李华，早上出门前和妈妈吵了一架，放学回家后你发现家里没人，而餐桌上留着你最爱吃的菜。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述你的所做所想。
要求：
1）包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
2）不少于80词。
参考词汇：给某人拥抱give sb.a hug
【考点】记叙文；家庭生活．
【答案】 I argued with my mom this morning.When I came back this evening，there was no one at home.Dinner was ready on the table.It was my favorite dish.Mom loves me so much but I shouted at her this morning.I decided to do something to make her feel better.I did the dishes after dinner.I swept the floor and cleaned the tables.Mom didn't come back until 9 o'clock.She looked at the clean house in surprise，and later she gave me a hug.My parents are always busy and tired.I will offer to help at home every day.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I came back this evening，there was no one at home.今天晚上我回来的时候，家里一个人也没有。
when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I decided to do something to make her feel better.我决定做点什么让她感觉好点。
decide to do sth决定做某事。
【解答】 I argued with my mom this morning.When I came back this evening，there was no one at home.【高分句型一】Dinner was ready on the table.It was my favorite dish.Mom loves me so much but I shouted at her this morning.I decided to do something to make her feel better.【高分句型二】I did the dishes after dinner.I swept the floor and cleaned the tables.Mom didn't come back until 9 o'clock.She looked at the clean house in surprise，and later she gave me a hug.（分享经历）My parents are always busy and tired.I will offer to help at home every day.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
16．（2025 新城区校级模拟）每天，运动场上随处可见同学们矫健的身姿和运动的风采。你喜欢运动吗？你最喜欢的运动是什么？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以"Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life"为题写一篇文章，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，并谈谈运动给你带来的好处。
要求：（1）内容应包含要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
（2）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息。
（3）词数：不少于70。
【考点】记叙文；文娱体育．
【答案】
Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life
Sports play an important role in my life.Among all the sports，basketball is my favorite.It not only keeps me healthy but also brings me a lot of joy.
Last weekend，I had a memorable basketball game with my friends.We formed two teams and played for two hours.Although we were all tired，the excitement and teamwork made us forget about the tiredness.I scored several points，and my teammates cheered for me.That moment made me realize how much I love sports and how it brings people together.
Through sports，I have learned the importance of teamwork，perseverance，and discipline.It helps me stay active and positive in my daily life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It not only keeps me healthy but also brings me a lot of joy.它不仅让我保持健康，还带给我很多快乐。
not only...but also ...不仅……而且……，固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
Although we were all tired，the excitement and teamwork made us forget about the tiredness.虽然我们都很累，但兴奋和团队合作让我们忘记了疲劳。
although虽然，引导让步状语从句。
【解答】
Enjoy Sports，Enjoy Life
Sports play an important role in my life.Among all the sports，basketball is my favorite.It not only keeps me healthy but also brings me a lot of joy.【高分句型一】（最喜欢的运动）
Last weekend，I had a memorable basketball game with my friends.We formed two teams and played for two hours.Although we were all tired，the excitement and teamwork made us forget about the tiredness.【高分句型二】I scored several points，and my teammates cheered for me.That moment made me realize how much I love sports and how it brings people together.（和运动之间的故事）
Through sports，I have learned the importance of teamwork，perseverance，and discipline.It helps me stay active and positive in my daily life.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
17．（2025 二道区校级二模）在成长的旅程中，我们总会面临一些需要勇气去开启的挑战。回忆一次你走出舒适区，鼓起勇气尝试新事物的经历，可以是参加一场公开演讲、尝试新的户外运动、学习一门陌生的技艺等等。请以"The Braver I Am，the More Wonderful My Journey Will Be"为题，讲述一个故事，谈谈在过程中你遇到的困难，又是如何凭借勇气克服它的，以及这次经历带给你的感受与成长。要求：
（1）文章不少于80词；
（2）不要出现真实的人名和校名。
________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
The Braver I Am，the More Wonderful My Journey Will Be
Last summer，I decided to join an English debate competition despite my fear of public speaking.My hands trembled whenever I stood before crowds.To prepare，I practiced daily in front of a mirror and recorded videos to improve.The hardest moment came when I froze during my first speech – the audience's whispers felt like thunder.But I remembered my coach's advice： "Breathe and focus on your message."
Taking three deep breaths，I continued firmly.Though my voice shook，I finished strongly.Surprisingly，the judges praised my persistence.Through six rounds of competition，each challenge made me braver.When receiving the third﹣place certificate，I realized courage grows like muscles – by pushing boundaries.
This experience taught me that true growth begins where comfort ends.Now I volunteer as classroom presenter weekly，carrying this lesson：Every brave step makes life's journey more vibrant.
【分析】【高分句型一】
The hardest moment came when I froze during my first speech – the audience's whispers felt like thunder.最困难的时刻出现在我第一次演讲的时候——听众的窃窃私语就像打雷一样。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
This experience taught me that true growth begins where comfort ends.这段经历告诉我，真正的成长始于安逸的终结。that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
The Braver I Am，the More Wonderful My Journey Will Be
Last summer，I decided to join an English debate competition despite my fear of public speaking.My hands trembled whenever I stood before crowds.To prepare，I practiced daily in front of a mirror and recorded videos to improve.The hardest moment came when I froze during my first speech – the audience's whispers felt like thunder. 【高分句型一】But I remembered my coach's advice： "Breathe and focus on your message."
Taking three deep breaths，I continued firmly.Though my voice shook，I finished strongly.Surprisingly，the judges praised my persistence.Through six rounds of competition，each challenge made me braver.When receiving the third﹣place certificate，I realized courage grows like muscles – by pushing boundaries.（经历）
This experience taught me that true growth begins where comfort ends. 【高分句型二】Now I volunteer as classroom presenter weekly，carrying this lesson：Every brave step makes life's journey more vibrant.（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2025 新城区校级模拟）许多青少年热衷于志愿者活动，它在青少年成长过程中扮演着重要角色。假如你叫李华，五一假期你去了陕西历史博物馆做志愿者工作。请你以My Volunteer Experience为题写一篇短文，分享你做导游的一次经历。
写作要求：
（1）所写内容应包含图表各栏目所给的关键信息，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于70（开头已经给出，但不计入总词数）
My Volunteer Experience
Being a volunteer can be really exciting.Do you have any experiences in volunteering？____________
【考点】记叙文；节假日活动．
【答案】
My Volunteer Experience
Being a volunteer can be really exciting.Do you have any experiences in volunteering？I have to say my volunteer experience is so meaningful that I can't forget it.Now let me tell you something about it.
During May Day holiday，I went to Shaanxi History Museum to be a volunteer.I was a guide for the visitors.I introduced the history of Shaanxi to the visitors.I also told them the meaning of the old things.When the visitors heard what I said，they felt very excited.I was very happy to hear that.From the volunteer activity，I know that it is not easy to work as a guide.I am proud of myself.I hope you can join the volunteer activity.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I have to say my volunteer experience is so meaningful that I can't forget it.我不得不说，我的志愿者经历非常有意义，我无法忘记。
so...that...如此……以致于……，引导结果状语从句。
【高分句型二】
During May Day holiday，I went to Shaanxi History Museum to be a volunteer.五一假期，我去了陕西历史博物馆做志愿者。
动词不定式做目的状语的用法。
【解答】
My Volunteer Experience
Being a volunteer can be really exciting.Do you have any experiences in volunteering？I have to say my volunteer experience is so meaningful that I can't forget it.【高分句型一】Now let me tell you something about it.（点题）
During May Day holiday，I went to Shaanxi History Museum to be a volunteer.【高分句型二】（时间、地点）I was a guide for the visitors.I introduced the history of Shaanxi to the visitors.I also told them the meaning of the old things.（活动）When the visitors heard what I said，they felt very excited.I was very happy to hear that.From the volunteer activity，I know that it is not easy to work as a guide.I am proud of myself.I hope you can join the volunteer activity.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．（2025 盐湖区模拟）在人生里，我们会遭遇各种挑战与困难，有时成功，有时失败。但我们走的每一步，不管通向成功还是遭遇挫折，都对成长有价值。请以"Applaud for Myself"（为自己鼓掌）为题写一篇英语作文，讲述你在学习、生活或爱好方面克服困难或取得进步的一次经历，要包含过程、感受以及从中汲取的经验教训。
要求：
1）条理清晰，内容完整，语句通顺，书写工整；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名；
3）字数不少于80词。
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
Applaud for Myself
Problems are part of our daily lives and they are unavoidable.If we solve them in proper ways，they can even help us a lot.Once，I had an argument with my parents.I wanted to draw but they didn't support me.So I shouted at them and they were really sad.We even didn't talk for many days.I couldn't fight my fear to talk to them but I didn't want to make it worse.I thought the only thing I could do was to solve it instead of running away from it.Then I tried to understand them from their point of view and soon I understood them.We talked together and knew more about each other.
From this experience，I know we shouldn't run away from problems.I applaud myself for this growth.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
If we solve them in proper ways，they can even help us a lot.如果我们以适当的方式解决它们，它们甚至可以帮助我们很多。
if引导一个条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
I wanted to draw but they didn't support me.我想画画，但他们不支持我。
want to do sth表示想做某事。
【解答】
Applaud for Myself
Problems are part of our daily lives and they are unavoidable.（介绍每个人都会遇到问题）If we solve them in proper ways，they can even help us a lot.【高分句型一】Once，I had an argument with my parents.I wanted to draw but they didn't support me.【高分句型二】So I shouted at them and they were really sad.We even didn't talk for many days.I couldn't fight my fear to talk to them but I didn't want to make it worse.I thought the only thing I could do was to solve it instead of running away from it.Then I tried to understand them from their point of view and soon I understood them.We talked together and knew more about each other.（细描述生活上遇到的一次挫折以及解决过程）
From this experience，I know we shouldn't run away from problems.I applaud myself for this growth.（总结经验教训，并收尾）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
20．（2025 武进区校级一模）初中是人生的转折点，初中是我们奋斗史的见证，初中是我们流汗不流泪的青春，初中是我们欢声笑语的天地，初中留给我们最难忘的回忆。你可以选择一个关键词来描述你的成长印记，如change，challenge，thankful，hard﹣working等，请以此关键词为题，写一篇英语短文。
内容：
（1）Which word do you choose to describe your middle school life？
（2）What's your story about the word？
（3）What have you learned from the story？
注意：
（1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
When recalling my school life，the word "________" comes to my mind.________
【考点】记叙文；学校生活．
【答案】 When recalling my school life，the word "hard﹣working" comes to my mind.As a ninth grader，making an effort to get better grades was my main task.
During my first two years in junior high school，I took an active part in various activities，like sports meetings and art festivals.As a result，I couldn't do well in my schoolwork as before.But luckily，I had gradually made my way toward becoming a top student，especially in English.I made a bet with my English teacher：If I could recite all the articles in my English book fluently，then I would win the bet.Finally，I won!This achievement also encouraged me to work harder on other subjects.
It's not easy to fight all the time.However，life will surely be better if we work hard every day.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
If I could recite all the articles in my English book fluently，then I would win the bet.如果我能流利地背诵英语书中的所有文章，那么我就赢了。
if引导一个条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
This achievement also encouraged me to work harder on other subjects.这一成就也鼓励我在其他科目上更加努力。
encourage sb to do sth表示鼓励某人做某事。
【解答】 When recalling my school life，the word "hard﹣working" comes to my mind.As a ninth grader，making an effort to get better grades was my main task.（引出话题）
During my first two years in junior high school，I took an active part in various activities，like sports meetings and art festivals.As a result，I couldn't do well in my schoolwork as before.But luckily，I had gradually made my way toward becoming a top student，especially in English.I made a bet with my English teacher：If I could recite all the articles in my English book fluently，then I would win the bet.【高分句型一】Finally，I won!This achievement also encouraged me to work harder on other subjects.【高分句型二】（详细介绍我的故事）
It's not easy to fight all the time.However，life will surely be better if we work hard every day.（从中学到了什么）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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