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中考冲刺核心考点 写作—应用文
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 昌平区二模）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文网站正举办以"同心协力，共克难关"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你深切体会到团队合作力量的经历以及你的感受。
提示词语：difficulty，cheer，goal，overcome，strength
内容提示：
●What team experience impressed you most？Please describe it.
●What have you learned from this teamwork experience？
Teamwork is important for everyone.
________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2025 朝阳区二模）假设你是李华，你的好友Harry正在参与筹备他们学校的"校园安全宣传周"（Campus Safety Awareness Week）活动，他写信向你征求活动设想。请你用英文给他写一封回信，提供一些活动设想并阐释理由。
提示词语：make posters，realize，a speech competition，increase the knowledge
内容提示： What would you like to suggest in the activity？
Why do you suggest so？
Dear Harry，
I'm glad to hear that you're preparing for the Campus Safety Awareness Week.
I truly hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
3．（2025 南宁校级一模）健康是我们生命中的宝贵财富，没有健康我们就无法享受幸福、成功和实现梦想。你的学校英语文学社正在征稿。主题为：How to live a healthy life？请你写一篇征稿，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
写作要点：
（1）中学生为什么要拥有健康生活；
（2）你是如何保持健康；
（3）呼吁大家一起健康生活。
要求：
（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：energetic（adj.精力旺盛的），efficiently（adv.高效地），balanced（adj.平衡的）
How to live a healthy life？
Health is the most valuable treasure in life.Without it，we can neither enjoy happiness nor achieve our dreams.
_____
4．（2025 裕华区校级二模）随着社会的快节奏发展，压力已成为一个普遍的社会问题，学生也面临各种各样的压力。全国心理健康日到来之际，为了促进学生快乐学习，健康成长，幸福生活，我校校报开展以"Less Stress，Better Life"为主题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，阐述中学生压力大的原因并且提出恰当的减压方法，
Reasons for the stress： have lots of schoolwork and exams don't know how to get along with others ....
Ways to lower stress： do sports ....
Less Stress，Better Life
要求：
（1）短文必须包含提示中所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右，标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Less Stress，Better Life
Nowadays，stress has become a common problem in the society.We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up.
5．（2025 南宁校级二模）校园安全关乎每一位学生的健康成长。为了使同学们提高安全意识，我校英语俱乐部将开展以"School Safety"为主题的英语征文比赛。假如你是学校英语俱乐部的成员，请你根据以下内容要点写一篇短文参赛。
内容要点：
（1）校园安全的重要性；
（2）学生如何确保在校安全；
（3）呼吁学生关注校园安全。
注意：
（1）词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能透露个人信息。
参考词汇：safety awareness （安全意识），sharp objects （尖锐物品），sports equipment （运动器材）
School Safety
As we all know，school safety is important for us.________
6．（2025 海淀区二模）某英文网站正在开展以"重要的人，成长的光"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位对你产生积极影响的人，并讲述在日常生活中他/她是如何影响你的。
提示词语：hard﹣working，encourage，set an example，realize，better
内容提示：Who inspires you most？Please describe him/her.
How does he/she influence you？
I'm glad to say something about the person who inspires me most.
7．（2025 朝阳区二模）某英文网站正在开展以"体验中国传统文化"为题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你体验的传统文化是什么，在体验中你做了什么，并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语：paper﹣cutting，scissors，keep trying，be good for，patient
内容提示： What traditional Chinese culture did you experience？
What did you do in the experience？
What benefits have you got from it？
I'm glad to share my experience of traditional Chinese culture.
8．（2025 西湖区二模） 假如你是李华，请你对你校英国交换生Darrell的邮件进行回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From Darrell
Subject Race next Friday
Hey Li Hua. Remember the charity race I told you about？I can't take part in it because I've hurt my leg!I fell off my bike yesterday.I don't think it's broken，but it's really hard to walk.It really hurts，and I feel quite upset about missing the race. Could you run in the race for me，please？I know you're a great runner and it's only 200 meters.It starts next Friday at 3 p.m. I hope you can help.It would mean a lot to me. Thanks so much! Darrell
Dear Darrell，
Yours，
Li Hua
9．（2025 奎文区二模） Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原贴后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：1.80词左右；2.不要出现考生本人信息；3.禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject：My experience with environmental protection
Hey，guys!Environment is very important for us.What did you do for our environment？How did you feel about it？Please share your story with us. Harry， Australia
Li Hua，
China
10．（2025 大东区二模） 假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Jim向你咨询怎样学好汉语，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表达问候；
2.提供建议；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.词数80—100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jim，
I hope this letter finds you well.
Yours，
Li Hui
11．（2025 和平区二模） 假设你是李辉，某英文网站开展征文活动，倡导学生培养一项爱好或技能。请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。要点如下：
1.你将培养什么；
2.你将如何培养；
3.表达你的希望。
注意：
（1）词数为80﹣100；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful.As for me，I want to develop
12．（2025 庐阳区校级二模）假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Jack得知你想学习一项生活技能。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，向Tom分享你的计划和想法。
注意：
1）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数80～100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your email.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hui
13．（2025 天津二模） 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友John用英文写一封邮件，讲述你在社区志愿者活动中的一次经历，并谈谈感受。
1.上周末，你参加社区组织的环保志愿者活动。
2.你和其他志愿者一起清理垃圾。
3.你们向居民宣传环保知识，鼓励他们进行垃圾分类。
4.活动结束后，公园环境变得整洁。
5.你认为……
参考词汇：环保environmental protection；垃圾分类garbage sorting；社区community
要求：
词数：80—100个。
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear John，
Hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share an unforgettable experience I had.
Last weekend，I
Do you have any similar volunteer stories？I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
14．（2025 昌平区二模）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你校英语社团决定举办一场环保活动，以激发师生关注并参与资源回收再利用，目前正针对活动安排征集师生建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个有关资源回收再利用的活动设计方案并说明理由。
提示词语：organize，recycle，artworks，creative，awareness（意识）
内容提示：
●What do you suggest for the activity？
●Why do you suggest doing that？
I'm Li Hua，a Grade 9 student.
___________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks.
15．（2025 重庆校级二模）重庆作为今年春晚分会场，备受赞誉。特色建筑、新兴科技、艺术与体育，吸引了众多游客前来游玩。你的美国笔友Steve也对重庆很感兴趣并想来重庆游览，于是写信向你询问相关事宜。请根据Steve的来信给他回邮件。
注意事项：（1）词数80—120词，邮件开头与结尾已在答题卡给出，不计入总词数。
（2）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear Li Hua， After watching the Spring Festival Gala，I fall in love with your hometown Chongqing.I plan to visit it.Is it suitable for me to come in this season？Why？I'm interested in the attractions here.Can you give me some advice？From the show，I know that Chongqing is a wonderful city.What special things can I enjoy here？What else should I pay attention to during my visit？I'm looking forward to your reply. Steve
Dear Steve，
Thanks for your email.I'm glad to tell you something about my hometown Chongqing.________
I can't wait to see you!
Yours，
Li Hua
16．（2025 梁溪区二模） Sunshine English Club本期的主题是"How to make Wuxi more beautiful"，你打算以"Starting from me and now"为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.触动你的一件事情
2.这件事给你的启示
3.你的倡议
注意：
1.具体内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数不少于90个，发言稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文章中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4.文章必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Starting from me and now
Hello，everyone!Today I'm very glad to share my ideas about how to make Wuxi more beautiful with you.
Thank you for your listening!
17．（2025 闵行区校级三模）我校拟于近期举办微电影大赛（microfilm festival），要求各班级创作并提交一部微电影参赛作品。现班主任王老师面向全班同学征集微电影剧本（script）选题方案。假设你是李华，请写一封不少于60词的建议信，要求从以下三个类别中选择其一，并阐述选择理由：
（1）展望未来的原创科幻作品（science fiction）；
（2）基于经典名著（classic）的改编作品；
（3）聚焦校园或学生日常生活的纪录片（documentary）。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
18．（2025 市南区校级二模） 随着国家"体重管理年"三年行动计划的启动，"体重管理"成为社交平台上的热词。目前，学校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight为题的讨论，请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容包括：
1．体重管理的意义；
2．分享你关于体重管理的经历；
3．学校为学生体重管理开展的活动（至少2点）；
4．你的建议（至少2点）。
要求：短文必须包含以上所有信息，开头已给不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名.校名。
提示词：overweight超重v.超重的adj.a balanced diet均衡饮食 regular有规律的adj.
Managing a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national "Weight Management Year" plan， "weight management" has become a hot topic on social media.
19．（2025 麦积区模拟）兴趣爱好不仅为我们的生活增添了无限乐趣，更是我们探索世界、认识自我、培养个性与才能的重要途径。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在以"爱好促成长"为主题，面向广大学生开展征文活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍自己的爱好并分享它对自己的影响。
写作要求：
（1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（3）不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hobbies play an important role in our lives.They make our life fun.My favourite hobby is ____
20．（2025 海淀区二模）假设你是李华，你校英语社团将开展"旧物新生，创意无限（Old Items，New Life）"主题活动，为此在校内征集活动创意。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，提供一个活动方案并说明理由。
提示词语：bring，discuss，create，environment，ability
内容提示：What do you suggest for the activity？
Why do you suggest doing that？
I'm Li Hua from Class I，Grade 9.
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks!
中考冲刺核心考点 写作—应用文
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共20小题）
1．（2025 昌平区二模）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文网站正举办以"同心协力，共克难关"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你深切体会到团队合作力量的经历以及你的感受。
提示词语：difficulty，cheer，goal，overcome，strength
内容提示：
●What team experience impressed you most？Please describe it.
●What have you learned from this teamwork experience？
Teamwork is important for everyone.
________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】其他应用文写作；人际关系．
【答案】 Teamwork is important for everyone.Last term，our school had a basketball game.As a member of our class team，I was excited yet nervous.At first，our class team didn't play well and fell far behind.Everyone was really frustrated.But we didn't give up.We cheered each other up.With all of us working hard，we slowly caught up.In the end，we won the game!
I have learned from this unforgettable team experience that when we work together for one goal，we can overcome difficulties.Teamwork brings our strengths together and turns challenges into manageable tasks.
【分析】【高分句型一】
At first，our class team didn't play well and fell far behind.起初，我们班的队伍打得不好，远远落后了。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I have learned from this unforgettable team experience that when we work together for one goal，we can overcome difficulties.我从这次难忘的团队经历中学到，当我们为一个目标而努力时，我们可以克服困难。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】 Teamwork is important for everyone.Last term，our school had a basketball game.As a member of our class team，I was excited yet nervous.At first，our class team didn't play well and fell far behind【高分句型一】.Everyone was really frustrated.But we didn't give up.We cheered each other up.With all of us working hard，we slowly caught up.In the end，we won the game!（经历）
I have learned from this unforgettable team experience that when we work together for one goal，we can overcome difficulties.【高分句型二】Teamwork brings our strengths together and turns challenges into manageable tasks.（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2025 朝阳区二模）假设你是李华，你的好友Harry正在参与筹备他们学校的"校园安全宣传周"（Campus Safety Awareness Week）活动，他写信向你征求活动设想。请你用英文给他写一封回信，提供一些活动设想并阐释理由。
提示词语：make posters，realize，a speech competition，increase the knowledge
内容提示： What would you like to suggest in the activity？
Why do you suggest so？
Dear Harry，
I'm glad to hear that you're preparing for the Campus Safety Awareness Week.
I truly hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；安全与健康．
【答案】Dear Harry，I'm glad to hear that you're preparing for the Campus Safety Awareness Week.I'd like to share some ideas with you.First，you can design safety posters.In this way，you can remind students of safety in their daily life at school.Second，you can hold a speech competition.It can help students increase their knowledge about safety.Third，you can organize a visit to the traffic station.Students can learn more about traffic safety.I truly hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
In this way，you can remind students of safety in their daily life at school.通过这种方式，你可以提醒学生在学校日常生活中的安全问题。
remind of 提醒，固定短语。
【高分句型二】
I truly hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.我真心希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。
hope希望，后接宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Harry，
I'm glad to hear that you're preparing for the Campus Safety Awareness Week.I'd like to share some ideas with you.（引入话题）First，you can design safety posters.In this way，you can remind students of safety in their daily life at school.【高分句型一】Second，you can hold a speech competition.It can help students increase their knowledge about safety.Third，you can organize a visit to the traffic station.Students can learn more about traffic safety.（活动设想）I truly hope my suggestions can be helpful to you.【高分句型二】（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2025 南宁校级一模）健康是我们生命中的宝贵财富，没有健康我们就无法享受幸福、成功和实现梦想。你的学校英语文学社正在征稿。主题为：How to live a healthy life？请你写一篇征稿，谈一谈你对这问题的见解。
写作要点：
（1）中学生为什么要拥有健康生活；
（2）你是如何保持健康；
（3）呼吁大家一起健康生活。
要求：
（1）要点齐全，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
（3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：energetic（adj.精力旺盛的），efficiently（adv.高效地），balanced（adj.平衡的）
How to live a healthy life？
Health is the most valuable treasure in life.Without it，we can neither enjoy happiness nor achieve our dreams.
_____
【考点】其他应用文写作；安全与健康．
【答案】
How to live a healthy life？
Health is the most valuable treasure in life.Without it，we can neither enjoy happiness nor achieve our dreams.
As students，we need healthy lifestyles to stay energetic and study efficiently.Poor habits like eating junk food or lacking exercise may lead to illnesses and low concentration.
Personally，I keep healthy by eating balanced meals，exercising daily，and sleeping early.I also drink plenty of water and avoid sugary drinks.Most importantly，I stay positive to reduce stress.
Let's take action now!Choose healthy food，exercise regularly，and maintain good habits.Remember，a healthy life starts with small steps today!
【分析】【高分句型一】
Personally，I keep healthy by eating balanced meals，exercising daily，and sleeping early.就我个人而言，我通过均衡饮食、每天锻炼和早睡来保持健康。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
Remember，a healthy life starts with small steps today!记住，健康的生活从今天的小步骤开始！祈使句。
【解答】
How to live a healthy life？
Health is the most valuable treasure in life.Without it，we can neither enjoy happiness nor achieve our dreams.
As students，we need healthy lifestyles to stay energetic and study efficiently.Poor habits like eating junk food or lacking exercise may lead to illnesses and low concentration.（中学生为什么要拥有健康生活）
Personally，I keep healthy by eating balanced meals，exercising daily，and sleeping early.【高分句型一】I also drink plenty of water and avoid sugary drinks.Most importantly，I stay positive to reduce stress.（我如何保持健康）
Let's take action now!Choose healthy food，exercise regularly，and maintain good habits.Remember，a healthy life starts with small steps today!【高分句型二】（呼吁大家一起健康生活）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2025 裕华区校级二模）随着社会的快节奏发展，压力已成为一个普遍的社会问题，学生也面临各种各样的压力。全国心理健康日到来之际，为了促进学生快乐学习，健康成长，幸福生活，我校校报开展以"Less Stress，Better Life"为主题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，阐述中学生压力大的原因并且提出恰当的减压方法，
Reasons for the stress： have lots of schoolwork and exams don't know how to get along with others ....
Ways to lower stress： do sports ....
Less Stress，Better Life
要求：
（1）短文必须包含提示中所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右，标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Less Stress，Better Life
Nowadays，stress has become a common problem in the society.We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up.
【考点】其他应用文写作；情感与情绪．
【答案】
Less Stress，Better Life
Nowadays，stress has become a common problem in the society.We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up.
The main reason for stress is schoolwork and exams.Students have been competing with each other since they were very young，which brings them too much stress.Some students don't know how to get along well with others.This can also bring them stress and worries.I'll give you some ways to relieve stress.First of all，you need to do sports as much as possible.In addition，you should be brave enough to express your ideas.Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.
In my opinion，stress is not a bad thing.Proper stress is beneficial to our growth and development.If a person doesn't have stress，he will become lazy easily.We should learn to face stress in our life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Students have been competing with each other since they were very young，which brings them too much stress.学生们从很小的时候就开始相互竞争，这给他们带来了太多的压力。which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
If a person doesn't have stress，he will become lazy easily.如果一个人没有压力，他很容易变得懒惰。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】
Less Stress，Better Life
Nowadays，stress has become a common problem in the society.We teenagers also have a lot of stress while growing up.
The main reason for stress is schoolwork and exams.Students have been competing with each other since they were very young，which brings them too much stress.Some students don't know how to get along well with others.This can also bring them stress and worries.（原因）I'll give you some ways to relieve stress.First of all，you need to do sports as much as possible.In addition，you should be brave enough to express your ideas.Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.（建议）
In my opinion，stress is not a bad thing.Proper stress is beneficial to our growth and development.If a person doesn't have stress，he will become lazy easily.We should learn to face stress in our life.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2025 南宁校级二模）校园安全关乎每一位学生的健康成长。为了使同学们提高安全意识，我校英语俱乐部将开展以"School Safety"为主题的英语征文比赛。假如你是学校英语俱乐部的成员，请你根据以下内容要点写一篇短文参赛。
内容要点：
（1）校园安全的重要性；
（2）学生如何确保在校安全；
（3）呼吁学生关注校园安全。
注意：
（1）词数为80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能透露个人信息。
参考词汇：safety awareness （安全意识），sharp objects （尖锐物品），sports equipment （运动器材）
School Safety
As we all know，school safety is important for us.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；安全与健康．
【答案】
School Safety
As we all know，school safety is important for us.It protects our lives and provides a good environment for study.By following safety rules，we learn to care for ourselves and others.We can't have a happy school life without safety.
Here are some ways to improve safety awareness and protect ourselves in different areas of the school.First of all，we must be careful in the classroom.Do not play with sharp objects like scissors or pens.When doing experiments in the labs，we need to listen to the teachers' instructions carefully.Second，we can't run after each other when we are on the stairs and in the hallways.Do not crowd or push others.Last but not least，it's necessary to warm up before sports activities to avoid getting hurt in the playground and sports areas.Remember to use the sports equipment properly.
Dear friends，let's pay attention to school safety.By keeping these tips in mind，we can work together to build a safer school.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Here are some ways to improve safety awareness and protect ourselves in different areas of the school.这里有一些方法来提高安全意识，保护自己在学校的不同领域。倒装句。
【高分句型二】
Remember to use the sports equipment properly.记得正确使用运动器材。祈使句。
【解答】
School Safety
As we all know，school safety is important for us.It protects our lives and provides a good environment for study.By following safety rules，we learn to care for ourselves and others.We can't have a happy school life without safety.（校园安全的重要性）
Here are some ways to improve safety awareness and protect ourselves in different areas of the school.【高分句型一】First of all，we must be careful in the classroom.Do not play with sharp objects like scissors or pens.When doing experiments in the labs，we need to listen to the teachers' instructions carefully.Second，we can't run after each other when we are on the stairs and in the hallways.Do not crowd or push others.Last but not least，it's necessary to warm up before sports activities to avoid getting hurt in the playground and sports areas.Remember to use the sports equipment properly.【高分句型二】（学生如何确保在校安全）
Dear friends，let's pay attention to school safety.By keeping these tips in mind，we can work together to build a safer school.（呼吁学生关注校园安全）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2025 海淀区二模）某英文网站正在开展以"重要的人，成长的光"为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位对你产生积极影响的人，并讲述在日常生活中他/她是如何影响你的。
提示词语：hard﹣working，encourage，set an example，realize，better
内容提示：Who inspires you most？Please describe him/her.
How does he/she influence you？
I'm glad to say something about the person who inspires me most.
【考点】其他应用文写作；人物介绍．
【答案】 I'm glad to say something about the person who inspires me most.Mine is my mother.She is kind and hard﹣working，always supporting and encouraging me.When I face difficulties，she tells me to be strong and never give up.With her support，I've formed good study habits and become more confident.She teaches me to be kind to others and to dream big.Thanks to her，I've grown into a better person.My mother is my guiding star，lighting my way forward.She set a very good example for my life.I also realize that persistence will make me better and better.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I face difficulties，she tells me to be strong and never give up.当我遇到困难时，她告诉我要坚强，永不放弃。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I also realize that persistence will make me better and better.我也意识到坚持会让我变得越来越好。I also realize that+宾语从句。
【解答】 I'm glad to say something about the person who inspires me most.Mine is my mother.（是谁）She is kind and hard﹣working，always supporting and encouraging me.When I face difficulties，she tells me to be strong and never give up.【高分句型一】With her support，I've formed good study habits and become more confident.She teaches me to be kind to others and to dream big.（经历）Thanks to her，I've grown into a better person.My mother is my guiding star，lighting my way forward.She set a very good example for my life.I also realize that persistence will make me better and better.【高分句型二】（对我的影响）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2025 朝阳区二模）某英文网站正在开展以"体验中国传统文化"为题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你体验的传统文化是什么，在体验中你做了什么，并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语：paper﹣cutting，scissors，keep trying，be good for，patient
内容提示： What traditional Chinese culture did you experience？
What did you do in the experience？
What benefits have you got from it？
I'm glad to share my experience of traditional Chinese culture.
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 I'm glad to share my experience of traditional Chinese culture.I'm interested in paper﹣cutting and I had a chance to experience it last week.To make them，only paper and a pair of scissors are needed.
Our art teacher Miss Li led us to the art room.First，she introduced paper﹣cutting to us.Then she taught us how to cut paper carefully.Next，we began to have a try.It was a little difficult and I couldn't control my hands quite well.But I didn't give up.I kept trying.Finally，I cut some beautiful flowers.
I had a good time.I have learned about our rich culture.Besides，I practiced my patience and developed my hand﹣on skills.I think making paper﹣cutting is good for cultivating my patience.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Besides，I practiced my patience and developed my hand﹣on skills.此外，我锻炼了我的耐心和发展我的动手能力。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I think making paper﹣cutting is good for cultivating my patience.我认为剪纸对培养我的耐心有好处。I think+宾语从句。
【解答】 I'm glad to share my experience of traditional Chinese culture.I'm interested in paper﹣cutting and I had a chance to experience it last week.To make them，only paper and a pair of scissors are needed.
Our art teacher Miss Li led us to the art room.First，she introduced paper﹣cutting to us.Then she taught us how to cut paper carefully.Next，we began to have a try.It was a little difficult and I couldn't control my hands quite well.But I didn't give up.I kept trying.Finally，I cut some beautiful flowers.（经历）
I had a good time.I have learned about our rich culture.Besides，I practiced my patience and developed my hand﹣on skills.【高分句型一】I think making paper﹣cutting is good for cultivating my patience.【高分句型二】（收获）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2025 西湖区二模） 假如你是李华，请你对你校英国交换生Darrell的邮件进行回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
From Darrell
Subject Race next Friday
Hey Li Hua. Remember the charity race I told you about？I can't take part in it because I've hurt my leg!I fell off my bike yesterday.I don't think it's broken，but it's really hard to walk.It really hurts，and I feel quite upset about missing the race. Could you run in the race for me，please？I know you're a great runner and it's only 200 meters.It starts next Friday at 3 p.m. I hope you can help.It would mean a lot to me. Thanks so much! Darrell
Dear Darrell，
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；个人情况．
【答案】Dear Darrell，
I'm so sorry to hear about your bike accident!I hope your leg heals soon.Don't worry about the charity race—I'd be happy to run for you.
The 200﹣meter race next Friday at 3 p.m.sounds easy for me.I'll make sure to wear your race number and bring some extra water.Would you like me to share any specific message about the charity while running？I'll take photos during the race so that you can see how it goes.
Just focus on resting now.Let me know if you need anything else，like notes from class or someone to carry your books.I'm sure you'll recover in no time!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Let me know if you need anything else，like notes from class or someone to carry your books.如果你还需要什么东西，比如课堂笔记或有人帮你拿书，就告诉我。if引导的条件状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I'm sure you'll recover in no time!我相信你很快就会康复的！I'm sure+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Darrell，
I'm so sorry to hear about your bike accident!I hope your leg heals soon.Don't worry about the charity race—I'd be happy to run for you.
The 200﹣meter race next Friday at 3 p.m.sounds easy for me.I'll make sure to wear your race number and bring some extra water.Would you like me to share any specific message about the charity while running？I'll take photos during the race so that you can see how it goes.
Just focus on resting now.Let me know if you need anything else，like notes from class or someone to carry your books.【高分句型一】I'm sure you'll recover in no time!【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2025 奎文区二模） Teens Around the World是一个国际青少年交流网站，近日有人发了一个帖子。假设你是李华，请阅读原贴后，结合自己的经历，用英语跟帖。
注意：1.80词左右；2.不要出现考生本人信息；3.禁止抄袭本试卷中所有语篇内容。
Teens Around the World
Subject：My experience with environmental protection
Hey，guys!Environment is very important for us.What did you do for our environment？How did you feel about it？Please share your story with us. Harry， Australia
Li Hua，
China
【考点】其他应用文写作；环境保护．
【答案】 Hi，Harry!I've done small things to protect the environment.Last year，I joined my school's "Green Team".We collected old books and bottles every month and sent them to recycling centers.Once，I organized a "No Car Day" in my community.We encouraged people to walk or ride bikes instead of driving，which reduced air pollution.
I felt proud when seeing our efforts make a difference.Though these are small steps，I realize everyone's action matters.Let's keep doing our part to make the earth greener!
Li Hua，
China
【分析】【高分句型一】
We encouraged people to walk or ride bikes instead of driving，which reduced air pollution.我们鼓励人们步行或骑自行车而不是开车，这减少了空气污染。which引导非限制性定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Though these are small steps，I realize everyone's action matters.虽然这些只是小步骤，但我意识到每个人的行动都很重要。Though引导让步状语从句。
【解答】 Hi，Harry!I've done small things to protect the environment.Last year，I joined my school's "Green Team".We collected old books and bottles every month and sent them to recycling centers.Once，I organized a "No Car Day" in my community.We encouraged people to walk or ride bikes instead of driving，which reduced air pollution.【高分句型一】（活动）
I felt proud when seeing our efforts make a difference.Though these are small steps，I realize everyone's action matters.【高分句型二】（感受）Let's keep doing our part to make the earth greener!
Li Hua，
China
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2025 大东区二模） 假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Jim向你咨询怎样学好汉语，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1.表达问候；
2.提供建议；
3.表达期待。
注意：1.词数80—100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Jim，
I hope this letter finds you well.
Yours，
Li Hui
【考点】书信类；学习．
【答案】Dear Jim，
I hope this letter finds you well.Here are a few suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your students.Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.I hope you can learn Chinese well.
Yours，
Li Hui
【分析】【高分句型一】
Here are a few suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.这里有一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。倒装句。
【高分句型二】
I hope you can learn Chinese well.我希望你能学好汉语。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I hope this letter finds you well.（表达问候）Here are a few suggestions on how to learn Chinese well.【高分句型一】
First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practise with your students.Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.（提供建议）
Try and write to me in Chinese next time.I hope you can learn Chinese well.【高分句型二】（表达期待）
Yours，
Li Hui
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2025 和平区二模） 假设你是李辉，某英文网站开展征文活动，倡导学生培养一项爱好或技能。请你写一篇英语短文进行投稿。要点如下：
1.你将培养什么；
2.你将如何培养；
3.表达你的希望。
注意：
（1）词数为80﹣100；开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful.As for me，I want to develop
【考点】其他应用文写作；兴趣爱好．
【答案】 A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful.As for me，I want to develop the skill of playing the piano.
I'll start by taking weekly piano lessons from a professional teacher to learn basic notes and techniques.Practice is key，so I'll spend at least an hour daily practicing scales and simple songs.I'll also join a school music club to play with others and attend concerts to gain inspiration.
I hope this skill will not only help me relax but also become a way to connect with others.Maybe one day I can perform for my family and friends，bringing joy through music.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I'll start by taking weekly piano lessons from a professional teacher to learn basic notes and techniques.我将从每周上专业老师的钢琴课开始，学习基本的音符和技巧。不定式作目的状语。
【高分句型二】
I hope this skill will not only help me relax but also become a way to connect with others.我希望这项技能不仅能帮助我放松，还能成为一种与他人联系的方式。I hope +宾语从句。
【解答】 A hobby or skill can make our lives more colourful.As for me，I want to develop the skill of playing the piano.（将培养什么）
I'll start by taking weekly piano lessons from a professional teacher to learn basic notes and techniques.【高分句型一】Practice is key，so I'll spend at least an hour daily practicing scales and simple songs.I'll also join a school music club to play with others and attend concerts to gain inspiration.（将如何培养）
I hope this skill will not only help me relax but also become a way to connect with others.【高分句型二】Maybe one day I can perform for my family and friends，bringing joy through music.（期望）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2025 庐阳区校级二模）假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Jack得知你想学习一项生活技能。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，向Tom分享你的计划和想法。
注意：
1）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数80～100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your email.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hui
【考点】书信类；学习．
【答案】Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your email.I'd like to share my plan for learning a new life skill.
I'm interested in cooking，because it's a practical skill that can benefit my family.It helps me develop patience and teamwork skills.Moreover，it's a way to show love to my family by preparing healthy meals.I have made a learning plan.First，I'll read recipes and learn basic techniques.Then，I'll watch videos to understand the cooking process.Finally，I plan to try out the recipes myself and cook for my family.
I'm committed to mastering cooking and will stick to my plan.What about your life skill learning plan？Looking forward to hearing from you!Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hui
【分析】【高分句型一】
I'm interested in cooking，because it's a practical skill that can benefit my family.我对烹饪感兴趣，因为这是一项实用的技能，可以让我的家人受益。
because因为，引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Then，I'll watch videos to understand the cooking process.然后，我会看视频了解烹饪过程。
动词不定式做目的状语的用法。
【解答】Dear Jack，
Glad to receive your email.I'd like to share my plan for learning a new life skill.（点题）
I'm interested in cooking，because it's a practical skill that can benefit my family.【高分句型一】It helps me develop patience and teamwork skills.Moreover，it's a way to show love to my family by preparing healthy meals.（想学习的新技能及原因）I have made a learning plan.First，I'll read recipes and learn basic techniques.Then，I'll watch videos to understand the cooking process.【高分句型二】Finally，I plan to try out the recipes myself and cook for my family.（如何实施计划）
I'm committed to mastering cooking and will stick to my plan.What about your life skill learning plan？Looking forward to hearing from you!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hui
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2025 天津二模） 假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友John用英文写一封邮件，讲述你在社区志愿者活动中的一次经历，并谈谈感受。
1.上周末，你参加社区组织的环保志愿者活动。
2.你和其他志愿者一起清理垃圾。
3.你们向居民宣传环保知识，鼓励他们进行垃圾分类。
4.活动结束后，公园环境变得整洁。
5.你认为……
参考词汇：环保environmental protection；垃圾分类garbage sorting；社区community
要求：
词数：80—100个。
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear John，
Hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share an unforgettable experience I had.
Last weekend，I
Do you have any similar volunteer stories？I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；环境保护．
【答案】Dear John，
Hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share an unforgettable experience I had.
Last weekend，I took part in an environmental﹣protection volunteer activity organized by our community.Together with other volunteers，I picked up litter in the park.We also spread knowledge about environmental protection among the residents and encouraged them to do garbage sorting.Thanks to our efforts，the park became clean and tidy.I truly believe that small actions can make a big difference.Everyone's participation is crucial for a better environment.
Do you have any similar volunteer stories？I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
We also spread knowledge about environmental protection among the residents and encouraged them to do garbage sorting.我们还向居民宣传环保知识，鼓励他们进行垃圾分类。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I truly believe that small actions can make a big difference.我真的相信小的行动可以产生大的影响。truly believe that+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
Hope this email finds you well.I'm writing to share an unforgettable experience I had.
Last weekend，I took part in an environmental﹣protection volunteer activity organized by our community.（上周末，参加社区组织的环保志愿者活动。）Together with other volunteers，I picked up litter in the park.（和其他志愿者一起清理垃圾。）We also spread knowledge about environmental protection among the residents and encouraged them to do garbage sorting.【高分句型一】（向居民宣传环保知识，鼓励他们进行垃圾分类。）Thanks to our efforts，the park became clean and tidy.（活动结束后，公园环境变得整洁。）I truly believe that small actions can make a big difference.【高分句型二】Everyone's participation is crucial for a better environment.（看法）
Do you have any similar volunteer stories？I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2025 昌平区二模）根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你是李华，你校英语社团决定举办一场环保活动，以激发师生关注并参与资源回收再利用，目前正针对活动安排征集师生建议。请你给英语社团公众号留言，提供一个有关资源回收再利用的活动设计方案并说明理由。
提示词语：organize，recycle，artworks，creative，awareness（意识）
内容提示：
●What do you suggest for the activity？
●Why do you suggest doing that？
I'm Li Hua，a Grade 9 student.
___________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks.
【考点】其他应用文写作；环境保护．
【答案】 I'm Li Hua，a Grade 9 student.I'm excited to share my idea for the activity.
I suggest organizing a "Recycling Art Competition" with three steps.First，a teacher can give a short talk on recycling and show practical examples，such as making flower pots from plastic bottles.Then，participants will have one week to create their own artworks using waste materials.After the creation period，art teachers will judge the artworks to select the best ones.The top 10 works will receive prizes，like eco﹣friendly notebooks or recycled﹣material pens.
This activity not only encourages creative thinking，but also helps participants better understand recycling principles，making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks.
【分析】【高分句型一】
First，a teacher can give a short talk on recycling and show practical examples，such as making flower pots from plastic bottles.。首先，老师可以做一个关于回收的简短演讲，并展示实际的例子，比如用塑料瓶制作花盆。such as 例如。
【高分句型二】
This activity not only encourages creative thinking，but also helps participants better understand recycling principles，making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.这个活动不仅鼓励创意思维，也帮助参加者更好地理解回收原则，使他们更容易在日常生活中采用这些做法。not only...but also...不仅......而且......
【解答】 I'm Li Hua，a Grade 9 student.I'm excited to share my idea for the activity.
I suggest organizing a "Recycling Art Competition" with three steps.（建议）First，a teacher can give a short talk on recycling and show practical examples，such as making flower pots from plastic bottles.【高分句型一】Then，participants will have one week to create their own artworks using waste materials.After the creation period，art teachers will judge the artworks to select the best ones.The top 10 works will receive prizes，like eco﹣friendly notebooks or recycled﹣material pens.（活动）
This activity not only encourages creative thinking，but also helps participants better understand recycling principles，making them more likely to adopt these practices in daily life.【高分句型二】（理由）
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2025 重庆校级二模）重庆作为今年春晚分会场，备受赞誉。特色建筑、新兴科技、艺术与体育，吸引了众多游客前来游玩。你的美国笔友Steve也对重庆很感兴趣并想来重庆游览，于是写信向你询问相关事宜。请根据Steve的来信给他回邮件。
注意事项：（1）词数80—120词，邮件开头与结尾已在答题卡给出，不计入总词数。
（2）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
（3）不得使用真实姓名、校名。
Dear Li Hua， After watching the Spring Festival Gala，I fall in love with your hometown Chongqing.I plan to visit it.Is it suitable for me to come in this season？Why？I'm interested in the attractions here.Can you give me some advice？From the show，I know that Chongqing is a wonderful city.What special things can I enjoy here？What else should I pay attention to during my visit？I'm looking forward to your reply. Steve
Dear Steve，
Thanks for your email.I'm glad to tell you something about my hometown Chongqing.________
I can't wait to see you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；旅游景点．
【答案】Dear Steve，
Thanks for your email.I'm glad to tell you about my hometown Chongqing.
Spring （March to April） is the best season to visit，as the weather is mild with blooming flowers.You'll love Hongyadong for its unique stilted buildings and the futuristic Chongqing Science and Technology Museum.Don' t miss the Yangtze River Cable Car for breathtaking views!Chongqing's hot pot is a must﹣try，and the night scenery along the Jialing River will amaze you.Also，our light rail passing through residential areas is a special experience!Remember to wear comfortable shoes for hilly walks and use a map app，as the complex roads can be confusing.Bring an umbrella for sudden showers.
I can't wait to see you!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Spring （March to April） is the best season to visit，as the weather is mild with blooming flowers.春天（三月到四月）是旅游的最佳季节，因为天气温和，鲜花盛开。
as因为，引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Remember to wear comfortable shoes for hilly walks and use a map app，as the complex roads can be confusing.记得穿舒适的鞋子走山路，并使用地图应用程序，因为复杂的道路可能会令人困惑。
remember to do sth.记得要干某事。
【解答】Dear Steve，
Thanks for your email.I'm glad to tell you about my hometown Chongqing.（点题）
Spring （March to April） is the best season to visit，as the weather is mild with blooming flowers.【高分句型一】（时间）You'll love Hongyadong for its unique stilted buildings and the futuristic Chongqing Science and Technology Museum.Don' t miss the Yangtze River Cable Car for breathtaking views!Chongqing's hot pot is a must﹣try，and the night scenery along the Jialing River will amaze you.Also，our light rail passing through residential areas is a special experience!Remember to wear comfortable shoes for hilly walks and use a map app，as the complex roads can be confusing.【高分句型二】Bring an umbrella for sudden showers.（旅游提示）
I can't wait to see you!（总结）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
16．（2025 梁溪区二模） Sunshine English Club本期的主题是"How to make Wuxi more beautiful"，你打算以"Starting from me and now"为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
内容包括：
1.触动你的一件事情
2.这件事给你的启示
3.你的倡议
注意：
1.具体内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数不少于90个，发言稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文章中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4.文章必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Starting from me and now
Hello，everyone!Today I'm very glad to share my ideas about how to make Wuxi more beautiful with you.
Thank you for your listening!
【考点】演讲稿；环境保护．
【答案】
Starting from Me and Now
Hello，everyone!Today I'm very glad to share my ideas about how to make Wuxi more beautiful with you.
Last summer，while visiting Xihui Park，I was deeply shocked by the sight of plastic bottles and food wrappers scattered among the fallen leaves.The once﹣pristine lake was covered with floating trash，and the air smelled unpleasant.This experience made me realize that even a small act of carelessness could harm our city's beauty.It dawned on me that even small actions，like picking up a piece of trash or saving a drop of water，can contribute to a greener Wuxi.Our city is not just a place to live in—it's a shared home that requires collective effort to protect.Therefore，I propose three simple steps：1.Reduce waste by using reusable bags and avoiding single﹣use plastics.2.Save resources by turning off lights when leaving a room and fixing leaks promptly.3.Join community clean﹣ups or plant trees to restore green spaces.If each of us takes responsibility for our own actions，we can turn Wuxi into a model city where nature and humanity coexist harmoniously.Let's start today—because a beautiful Wuxi begins with me and now.
Thank you for your listening!
【分析】【高分句型一】
This experience made me realize that even a small act of carelessness could harm our city's beauty.这次经历让我意识到，即使是一个小小的疏忽也会损害我们城市的美丽。that引导宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
If each of us takes responsibility for our own actions，we can turn Wuxi into a model city where nature and humanity coexist harmoniously.如果我们每个人都对自己的行为负责，我们就可以把无锡变成一个自然与人类和谐共处的模范城市。If引导条件状语从句。
【解答】
Starting from Me and Now
Hello，everyone!Today I'm very glad to share my ideas about how to make Wuxi more beautiful with you.
Last summer，while visiting Xihui Park，I was deeply shocked by the sight of plastic bottles and food wrappers scattered among the fallen leaves.The once﹣pristine lake was covered with floating trash，and the air smelled unpleasant.This experience made me realize that even a small act of carelessness could harm our city's beauty.【高分句型一】It dawned on me that even small actions，like picking up a piece of trash or saving a drop of water，can contribute to a greener Wuxi.Our city is not just a place to live in—it's a shared home that requires collective effort to protect.（触动我的一件事情）Therefore，I propose three simple steps：1.Reduce waste by using reusable bags and avoiding single﹣use plastics.2.Save resources by turning off lights when leaving a room and fixing leaks promptly.3.Join community clean﹣ups or plant trees to restore green spaces.If each of us takes responsibility for our own actions，we can turn Wuxi into a model city where nature and humanity coexist harmoniously.【高分句型二】（启示）Let's start today—because a beautiful Wuxi begins with me and now.（倡议）
Thank you for your listening!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
17．（2025 闵行区校级三模）我校拟于近期举办微电影大赛（microfilm festival），要求各班级创作并提交一部微电影参赛作品。现班主任王老师面向全班同学征集微电影剧本（script）选题方案。假设你是李华，请写一封不少于60词的建议信，要求从以下三个类别中选择其一，并阐述选择理由：
（1）展望未来的原创科幻作品（science fiction）；
（2）基于经典名著（classic）的改编作品；
（3）聚焦校园或学生日常生活的纪录片（documentary）。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）
【考点】书信类；学校生活．
【答案】Dear Mr.Wang，I suggest creating a documentary about campus life and the daily life of students.First，it can truly reflect our daily activities like sports festivals and study groups.Second，all classmates can easily take part in by sharing their stories and experiences.Finally，showing our real school spirit will make the film special and real.I believe this choice can best present our class characteristics.Yours sincerely，Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Finally，showing our real school spirit will make the film special and real.最后，展现我们真实的校风，会让电影特别真实。
动名词做主语的用法。
【高分句型二】
I believe this choice can best present our class characteristics.我相信这个选择最能呈现我们的阶级特色。
believe相信，后接宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Wang，
I suggest creating a documentary about campus life and the daily life of students.（引入话题）
First，it can truly reflect our daily activities like sports festivals and study groups.Second，all classmates can easily take part in by sharing their stories and experiences.Finally，showing our real school spirit will make the film special and real.【高分句型一】（建议内容）
I believe this choice can best present our class characteristics.【高分句型二】（总结）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2025 市南区校级二模） 随着国家"体重管理年"三年行动计划的启动，"体重管理"成为社交平台上的热词。目前，学校英文报正在开展以The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight为题的讨论，请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文投稿。
内容包括：
1．体重管理的意义；
2．分享你关于体重管理的经历；
3．学校为学生体重管理开展的活动（至少2点）；
4．你的建议（至少2点）。
要求：短文必须包含以上所有信息，开头已给不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名.校名。
提示词：overweight超重v.超重的adj.a balanced diet均衡饮食 regular有规律的adj.
Managing a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national "Weight Management Year" plan， "weight management" has become a hot topic on social media.
【考点】其他应用文写作；安全与健康．
【答案】
The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national "Weight Management Year" plan， "weight management" has become a hot topic on social media.Maintaining a healthy weight is not only about appearance but also crucial for preventing diseases.It helps us stay energetic and confident in daily life.
Last year，I realized I was slightly overweight，so I decided to make a change.I replaced sugary snacks with fruits and joined a morning running group.These small steps helped me lose weight sustainably and improved my energy levels significantly.
My school also takes weight management seriously.For example，we now have fun fitness challenges every week，such as skipping rope competitions.Additionally，the school invites nutritionists to give talks on balanced diets，teaching us how to choose healthier meals in the canteen.
Here are my suggestions：First，avoid junk food and stick to regular meals with vegetables and proteins.Second，exercise for at least 30 minutes daily，like cycling or playing basketball.Remember，a healthy weight leads to a happier life!
【分析】【高分句型一】
Maintaining a healthy weight is not only about appearance but also crucial for preventing diseases.保持健康的体重不仅关乎外表，对预防疾病也至关重要。运用了not only...but also...并列结构，强调双重意义。
【高分句型二】
Additionally，the school invites nutritionists to give talks on balanced diets，teaching us how to choose healthier meals in the canteen.此外，学校还邀请营养学家进行均衡饮食讲座，教我们如何在食堂选择更健康的膳食。现在分词作伴随状语。
【解答】
The Importance of Controlling a Healthy Weight
With the start of the national "Weight Management Year" plan， "weight management" has become a hot topic on social media.Maintaining a healthy weight is not only about appearance but also crucial for preventing diseases.【高分句型一】It helps us stay energetic and confident in daily life.（体重管理的意义）
Last year，I realized I was slightly overweight，so I decided to make a change.I replaced sugary snacks with fruits and joined a morning running group.These small steps helped me lose weight sustainably and improved my energy levels significantly.（经历）
My school also takes weight management seriously.For example，we now have fun fitness challenges every week，such as skipping rope competitions.Additionally，the school invites nutritionists to give talks on balanced diets，teaching us how to choose healthier meals in the canteen.【高分句型二】（学生体重管理开展的活动）
Here are my suggestions：First，avoid junk food and stick to regular meals with vegetables and proteins.Second，exercise for at least 30 minutes daily，like cycling or playing basketball.Remember，a healthy weight leads to a happier life!（建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．（2025 麦积区模拟）兴趣爱好不仅为我们的生活增添了无限乐趣，更是我们探索世界、认识自我、培养个性与才能的重要途径。假如你是李华，你校英语广播站正在以"爱好促成长"为主题，面向广大学生开展征文活动。请你结合以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍自己的爱好并分享它对自己的影响。
写作要求：
（1）要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（3）不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hobbies play an important role in our lives.They make our life fun.My favourite hobby is ____
【考点】其他应用文写作；兴趣爱好．
【答案】 Hobbies play an important role in our lives.They make our life fun.My favorite hobby is playing basketball.
I took it up three years ago when I joined my school's basketball team.To improve my skills，I watch basketball games，learn new moves online and practice with my friends every weekend.This hobby makes me stronger and teaches me about teamwork，which helps me get on well with others.Thanks to basketball，I have gained confidence and made many good friends.
I believe a suitable hobby can help us grow in many ways.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I took it up three years ago when I joined my school's basketball team.三年前，当我加入学校的篮球队时，我开始了这项运动。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Thanks to basketball，I have gained confidence and made many good friends.由于篮球，我获得了信心，结交了很多好朋友。and表并列。
【解答】 Hobbies play an important role in our lives.They make our life fun.My favorite hobby is playing basketball.（是什么）
I took it up three years ago when I joined my school's basketball team.【高分句型一】（时间）To improve my skills，I watch basketball games，learn new moves online and practice with my friends every weekend.（如何做的）This hobby makes me stronger and teaches me about teamwork，which helps me get on well with others.Thanks to basketball，I have gained confidence and made many good friends.【高分句型二】（收获）
I believe a suitable hobby can help us grow in many ways.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
20．（2025 海淀区二模）假设你是李华，你校英语社团将开展"旧物新生，创意无限（Old Items，New Life）"主题活动，为此在校内征集活动创意。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，提供一个活动方案并说明理由。
提示词语：bring，discuss，create，environment，ability
内容提示：What do you suggest for the activity？
Why do you suggest doing that？
I'm Li Hua from Class I，Grade 9.
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks!
【考点】其他应用文写作；学校生活．
【答案】 I'm Li Hua from Class I，Grade 9.I have brought the result of the discussion among the students in our class.We think we can hold a special creative art show for the activity.In the art show，we can sell the works made from the old items.For example，we can use the old bottles to make beautiful vases.After the art show，we can give the money we raise to the charity.On the one hand，the activity can encourage students to recycle items.On the other hand，it is a good way to remind us to protect the environment by using the old items again.What's more，it helps cultivate students' creative ability.
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks!
【分析】【高分句型一】
We think we can hold a special creative art show for the activity.我们认为我们可以为活动举办一个特别的创意艺术展。We think+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
What's more，it helps cultivate students' creative ability.更重要的是，它有助于培养学生的创新能力。What's more更重要的是。
【解答】 I'm Li Hua from Class I，Grade 9.I have brought the result of the discussion among the students in our class.We think we can hold a special creative art show for the activity.【高分句型一】（建议） In the art show，we can sell the works made from the old items.For example，we can use the old bottles to make beautiful vases.After the art show，we can give the money we raise to the charity.On the one hand，the activity can encourage students to recycle items.On the other hand，it is a good way to remind us to protect the environment by using the old items again.What's more，it helps cultivate students' creative ability.【高分句型二】（理由）
I hope my idea can be considered.Thanks!
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