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中考英语核心考点 书面表达
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2023 宽城区校级模拟）假如你是李华，暑假你打算邀请你的交换生同学Jack去北京进行一次旅行。请你根据表格，写一篇英语邀请函、字数不少于40词。
时间 7月16日周日
同行人员 同学和老师
目的地 长城
方式 乘火车
计划 （1）早8点乘车从学校出发； （2）首先参观长城，拍一些照片，然后在长城吃个饭；于下午5点乘车到火车站。
感受 这将是一次难忘的旅程。
提示：
（1）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）词数：不少于40词。
2．（2023 历城区模拟）每到春节，贴副传统对联是很多家庭的选择：忠厚传家久，诗书济世长。风吹日晒，字迹或会模糊，但好的家风却会如春风化雨，守着家、护着国。家风是中华文化的缩影，是中华文明的延续。家风就是诚实守信、尊老爱幼、勤俭节俭你对家风是如何理解的？请根据所给提示写一篇英语短文分享给大家。
内容提示：
（1）你的家风是什么？
（2）家庭成员中谁对你影响最大？用事例说明。
（3）从他/她的身上学到了什么？
_________________
3．（2023 曹县一模）随着经济的高速发展，菏泽变得越来越美丽。"曹州牡丹甲天下"，正值牡丹盛花期，大批的中外游客前来观赏旅游。假如你叫李强，是曹州牡丹园的一名志愿者，请根据提示，用英语写一篇100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息）的倡议书，倡导文明观赏。
倡议要点：1）禁止随意扔垃圾；2）遵守园内规则；3）尽力帮助别人。
参考词汇：peony 牡丹；Caozhou Peony Garden 曹州牡丹园；randomly 随意地；the full﹣blossom period 盛花期
Dear visitors，
Welcome to the beautiful city，Heze，the home of peony in China.With the rapid development of economy in recent years，
Li Qiang
4．（2023 泾阳县模拟）今年4月23日，是第28个世界读书日。你们学校在这一天也开展了读书活动，请你根据以下提示以"How to Have Reading Activities"为题，写一篇英语小短文。
参考词汇：set up建立；exchange...with交换；cooperation spirit 合作精神；benefit from 从……中获益
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know，it is important for us__________________________________________________________
5．（2023 思明区校级二模）请根据21st Century 报的征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
From：21st Century
Hi Kids of Grade 9，
This month，our topic is about sports.Can you share your voice with us：
（1）What sport do you usually do？How often do you do it/them？Do you like doing sports？
（2）Do you think it is necessary for students of Grade 9 to do sports？Give your reasons.
Looking forward to hearing from you，Write to Smith@21st Century!
注意：（1）短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息；（2）词数80左右。
Dear Editor，
Yours，
Tom
6．（2023 黑龙江二模） Write a passage according to the information given.（80﹣100 words）
诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德（virtue）。你们学校正在开展以"我诚实，我守信"为话题的英语征文活动。请根据下面的写作提纲（自己补充一点），写一篇短文，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分）
写作提纲：
（1）to be honest with our family；
（2）to be honest with our friends；
（3）…
要求：
（1）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
（2）文章内容可适当发挥。
7．（2023 云南模拟）提示：在我们一路成长的过程中会碰到很多事情，不同的事情会让我们产生不同的情绪，也许是开心的，也许是骄傲的，也许是后悔的……请你以" One Thing that Made Me Feel ________"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述让你印象深刻的一次经历。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
One Thing that Made Me Feel ________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
8．（2023 邹城市校级一模）我们的周围总是充满着爱，父母的爱，老师的爱，同学的爱，朋友的爱……每天我都能得到来自他们的爱。请以"Love Around Me"为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
（1）父母每天为我做早餐，送我上学……
（2）老师为我传授知识，帮助我、鼓励我……
（3）和同学在一起学习、运动，大家和睦相处……
（4）空余时间和朋友在网上交流，分享快乐与烦恼……
（5）得到他们的爱，我感到很幸福，我下决心要努力学习并取得进步。
（6）我想对所有爱我的人说"谢谢你们"。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
（4）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life._____________
9．（2023 武义县一模）每个人都有自己的爱好。爱好可以陶冶我们的情操，帮助我们放松心情，也能增长知识，了解世界。假如你是李华，你所在的英语俱乐部本周的主题活动是分享自己的爱好。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的爱好。
内容要点 参考词汇
What's your hobby？ reading/playing basketball...
How did you start your hobby？ be interested in，fun...
What's the influence on your study and life？ relax，confident，knowledge...
注意：（1）短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，并作适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数 80—100 词。
短文开头：Everyone has his own hobby. （仅供选择使用）
________
10．（2023 聊城二模）随着全球国际化，中国的传统节日越来越受国外友人的关注，请你以"The Spring Festival"为题，根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍中国的传统节日——春节。
要点提示：
1.春节是中国传统节日中最重要的节日之一，通常在一月或二月份；
2.春节习俗：前夕，人们打扫房屋等；除夕聚在一起吃饺子，看电视等；春节期间，人们穿着新衣服走亲访友；孩子们收到红包等。
3.身为中国人，你对传统节日的感受。
注意事项：
1.短文词数：80 词左右。
2.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
The Spring Festival
________________________________________________________________________________________
11．（2023 苏州三模）为减轻学生过重的作业负担，控制中小学生的书面作业总量，创新布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以"My Creative English Homework"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
内容包括：
（1）做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；
（2）1﹣2条有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；
参考作业类型：
film review creative English homework poster design
book review survey report
注意：（1）词数不少于90，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.
12．（2023 唐河县二模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。英语报社以"How to Make Myself Better"为题举行征文，请根据下图提示，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
How to make myself better ●lifestyle ●relationship ●study ●……
要求：
1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
3.词数：100词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to Make Myself Better
__________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2023 黑龙江二模） Write a passage according to the information given.（30﹣50 words）
假如你是石磊，是九年级一班的学生。4月20日上午，你把一个黑色书包遗失在学校操场上。书包里有一些书和一串钥匙。你的联系电话是010﹣2238，请根据以上内容写一则寻物启事。
（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分）
LOST
__________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（2023 梅州一模）为弘扬中华民族"劳动最光荣"的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动（a series of labour activities），假如你是李华，请结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
内容包括：
1）列举几个你参加过的劳动实践活动（如种树、修东西等），并适当发挥；
2）你对劳动实践活动的相关感受；
作文要求：
（1）文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
（2）作文词数80左右，必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Let's enjoy working!
_________________________________________________________________________________________
15．（2023 金平区一模） 根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
假设你叫李华，你们校报的英语专栏刊发了上面的文章，你就同学们是否想要机器人老师在班上进行了调查。请你在读者来信栏目发表你的观点。
调查结果（见右图）；
你的观点及两点原因。
作文要求：
不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头结尾已给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
I read the article about robot teachers in your newspaper the other day，and I carried out a survey among my classmates about whether they would like to have robot teachers in the classroom.
Best regards，
Li Hua
中考英语核心考点 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共15小题）
1．（2023 宽城区校级模拟）假如你是李华，暑假你打算邀请你的交换生同学Jack去北京进行一次旅行。请你根据表格，写一篇英语邀请函、字数不少于40词。
时间 7月16日周日
同行人员 同学和老师
目的地 长城
方式 乘火车
计划 （1）早8点乘车从学校出发； （2）首先参观长城，拍一些照片，然后在长城吃个饭；于下午5点乘车到火车站。
感受 这将是一次难忘的旅程。
提示：
（1）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（2）词数：不少于40词。
【考点】书信类；旅游景点．
【答案】Dear Jack，
The summer holiday is coming.I'd like to invite you to visit the Great Wall with my teachers and classmates on Sunday，July 16th.We leave school by bus at 8 o 'clock in the morning.Then we'll go there by train.First we visit the Great Wall and take some photos.Then we will have lunch at the Great Wall.We'll get to the railway station at 5 p.m.I believe this trip will be an unforgettable one.I hope we can enjoy this trip together and look forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I believe this trip will be an unforgettable one.我相信这次旅行将是一次难忘的旅行。
I believe+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope we can enjoy this trip together and look forward to your reply.我希望我们能一起享受这次旅行，期待你的回复。
I hope we +宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
The summer holiday is coming.I'd like to invite you to visit the Great Wall with my teachers and classmates on Sunday，July 16th. （时间，同行人员和目的地）We leave school by bus at 8 o 'clock in the morning.Then we'll go there by train. （交通）First we visit the Great Wall and take some photos.Then we will have lunch at the Great Wall.We'll get to the railway station at 5 p.m.（计划） I believe this trip will be an unforgettable one. 【高分句型一】（感受）I hope we can enjoy this trip together and look forward to your reply.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2023 历城区模拟）每到春节，贴副传统对联是很多家庭的选择：忠厚传家久，诗书济世长。风吹日晒，字迹或会模糊，但好的家风却会如春风化雨，守着家、护着国。家风是中华文化的缩影，是中华文明的延续。家风就是诚实守信、尊老爱幼、勤俭节俭你对家风是如何理解的？请根据所给提示写一篇英语短文分享给大家。
内容提示：
（1）你的家风是什么？
（2）家庭成员中谁对你影响最大？用事例说明。
（3）从他/她的身上学到了什么？
_________________
【考点】说明文；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 Family is the first school of our life.No matter how time has changed，family values must be the most important to our development.In my family，my parents always set good examples for me.They believe working hard，respecting the elders and keeping promise are good qualities and these are values they have followed in life.
My mother has influenced me the most.About two years ago，whenever I came home，I always saw my mother working hard in front of the computer.She even stayed up late to deal with the business.It lasted for about one month.One day，I asked her，"Why are you so hard﹣working？Don't you feel tired and sleepy？" Mum smiled and said，"Of course I do，honey.But I have promised to finish it within one month.I must try my best to keep my promise. "I was moved and shocked by her words completely.From then on，a seed has been planted in my heart.I want to be a person like my mother who is always keeping her promise.
In my opinion，good family values have a big influence on children from a young age.And we should carry forward the spirit from generation to generation.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I want to be a person like my mother who is always keeping her promise.我想成为一个像我母亲一样的人，她总是信守诺言。who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，good family values have a big influence on children from a young age.在我看来，良好的家庭价值观对孩子从小就有很大的影响。In my opinion.在我看来。
【解答】 Family is the first school of our life.No matter how time has changed，family values must be the most important to our development.In my family，my parents always set good examples for me.They believe working hard，respecting the elders and keeping promise are good qualities and these are values they have followed in life.（我的理解）
My mother has influenced me the most.About two years ago，whenever I came home，I always saw my mother working hard in front of the computer.She even stayed up late to deal with the business.It lasted for about one month.One day，I asked her，"Why are you so hard﹣working？Don't you feel tired and sleepy？" Mum smiled and said，"Of course I do，honey.But I have promised to finish it within one month.I must try my best to keep my promise. "I was moved and shocked by her words completely.From then on，a seed has been planted in my heart.I want to be a person like my mother who is always keeping her promise.【高分句型一】（故事）
In my opinion，good family values have a big influence on children from a young age. 【高分句型二】And we should carry forward the spirit from generation to generation.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2023 曹县一模）随着经济的高速发展，菏泽变得越来越美丽。"曹州牡丹甲天下"，正值牡丹盛花期，大批的中外游客前来观赏旅游。假如你叫李强，是曹州牡丹园的一名志愿者，请根据提示，用英语写一篇100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息）的倡议书，倡导文明观赏。
倡议要点：1）禁止随意扔垃圾；2）遵守园内规则；3）尽力帮助别人。
参考词汇：peony 牡丹；Caozhou Peony Garden 曹州牡丹园；randomly 随意地；the full﹣blossom period 盛花期
Dear visitors，
Welcome to the beautiful city，Heze，the home of peony in China.With the rapid development of economy in recent years，
Li Qiang
【考点】倡议书；环境保护．
【答案】Dear visitors，
Welcome to the beautiful city，Heze，the home of peony in China.With the rapid development of economy in recent years，Heze is becoming more and more beautiful.Lots of visitors from home and abroad come here to watch the beautiful peonies during the full﹣blossom period.As a volunteer in Caozhou Peony Garden，I'd like to tell you something about visiting here.
First，throwing rubbish randomly is absolutely forbidden.Second，it's every visitor's duty to follow the rules.We shouldn't break the rules in order to visit politely.What's more，we should make every effort to help others.For example，we can help others carry bags，give directions or just talk with the foreigners in English as much as possible.
Hoping you'll have a good time here.
Li Qiang
【分析】【高分句型一】：
As a volunteer in Caozhou Peony Garden，I'd like to tell you something about visiting here.作为曹州牡丹园的一名志愿者，我想告诉你参观这里的一些情况。would like to do sth表示想做某事。
【高分句型二】；
For example，we can help others carry bags，give directions or just talk with the foreigners in English as much as possible.例如，我们可以尽可能多地帮别人提行李、指路或者和外国人用英语交谈。help sb do sth表示帮助某人做某事。
【解答】Dear visitors，
Welcome to the beautiful city，Heze，the home of peony in China.With the rapid development of economy in recent years，Heze is becoming more and more beautiful.Lots of visitors from home and abroad come here to watch the beautiful peonies during the full﹣blossom period.As a volunteer in Caozhou Peony Garden，I'd like to tell you something about visiting here.【高分句型一】（欢迎游客来曹州牡丹园参观，同时说明参观的时候要遵守一些规则）
First，throwing rubbish randomly is absolutely forbidden.Second，it's every visitor's duty to follow the rules.We shouldn't break the rules in order to visit politely.What's more，we should make every effort to help others.For example，we can help others carry bags，give directions or just talk with the foreigners in English as much as possible.【高分句型二】（具体介绍园内规则）
Hoping you'll have a good time here.（收尾表达祝愿）
Li Qiang
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
4．（2023 泾阳县模拟）今年4月23日，是第28个世界读书日。你们学校在这一天也开展了读书活动，请你根据以下提示以"How to Have Reading Activities"为题，写一篇英语小短文。
参考词汇：set up建立；exchange...with交换；cooperation spirit 合作精神；benefit from 从……中获益
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文章不得出现真实姓名和地名；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know，it is important for us__________________________________________________________
【考点】说明文；学习．
【答案】
How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know，it is important for us to read books.It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves.I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.
First，we can read in our school library.There are all kinds of books there.It's a good place to read.Second，we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class.Third，we can exchange books with one another.It helps develop our cooperation spirit.At last，it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.I suggest reading a book a week or two.I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society.Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines，I find my comprehension ability stably improved.
All in all，we can benefit from colorful reading activities.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves.它不仅让我们了解世界，也帮助我们放松自己。not only…but also…不仅……而且……
【高分句型二】
At last，it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.最后，有必要计划阅读时间和阅读书籍的数量。It is+形容词 to do sth做某事是……的。
【解答】
How to Have Reading Activities
As we all know，it is important for us to read books.It not only makes us know about the world but also helps us relax ourselves.【高分句型一】I have some good advice about how to have reading activities.（读书的好处）
First，we can read in our school library.There are all kinds of books there.It's a good place to read.Second，we can set up a reading corner in order to read at any time after class.Third，we can exchange books with one another.It helps develop our cooperation spirit.At last，it's necessary to plan reading time and the number of reading books.【高分句型二】I suggest reading a book a week or two. （如何开展读书活动）I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society.Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines，I find my comprehension ability stably improved.（我的观点）
All in all，we can benefit from colorful reading activities.（总结全文）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
5．（2023 思明区校级二模）请根据21st Century 报的征稿要求，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
From：21st Century
Hi Kids of Grade 9，
This month，our topic is about sports.Can you share your voice with us：
（1）What sport do you usually do？How often do you do it/them？Do you like doing sports？
（2）Do you think it is necessary for students of Grade 9 to do sports？Give your reasons.
Looking forward to hearing from you，Write to Smith@21st Century!
注意：（1）短文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息；（2）词数80左右。
Dear Editor，
Yours，
Tom
【考点】书信类；文娱体育．
【答案】Dear Editor，
Life is movement.Sports make us energetic．Exercise makes us feel good and keeps us away from diseases．Now more and more people join in sports．I love sports．I like basketball best．My favorite player is Jordan．I watch every game Jordan plays．I play basketball after school every day．I usually play at school with my classmates．I feel better after playing basketball．Playing basketball makes me stronger and more outgoing．
Yours，
Tom
【分析】【高分句型一】
I like basketball best．我最喜欢篮球。like…best最喜欢…
【高分句型二】
Playing basketball makes me stronger and more outgoing．打篮球使我更强壮，更外向。动名词作主语；make sb +形容词，使某人…的。
【解答】Dear Editor，
Life is movement.Sports make us energetic．Exercise makes us feel good and keeps us away from diseases．Now more and more people join in sports．（运动的意义）I love sports．I like basketball best．【高分句型一】My favorite player is Jordan．（我最喜欢的运动和球员）I watch every game Jordan plays．I play basketball after school every day．I usually play at school with my classmates．（和同学一起在学校打篮球和频率）I feel better after playing basketball．Playing basketball makes me stronger and more outgoing．（感受）【高分句型二】
Yours，
Tom
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2023 黑龙江二模） Write a passage according to the information given.（80﹣100 words）
诚实守信是中华民族的传统美德（virtue）。你们学校正在开展以"我诚实，我守信"为话题的英语征文活动。请根据下面的写作提纲（自己补充一点），写一篇短文，谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分）
写作提纲：
（1）to be honest with our family；
（2）to be honest with our friends；
（3）…
要求：
（1）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰。
（2）文章内容可适当发挥。
【考点】说明文；中华文化与传统．
【答案】 It's one of our traditional virtues to be honest.In my opinion，we should always choose to be honest with the people in our lives.
We need to be honest with our family because they care about us the most.We can tell them anything and they will help us.Therefore，they deserve our honesty.We must be honest with our friends and keep our promise because friendship is based on honesty.True friends avoid telling white lies and tell the truth instead.Of course，we must be honest with our teachers，too.They are there to help us learn and to guide us.We should never cheat in the exams.Most importantly，we have to be honest with ourselves.That means we must recognize our shortcomings.Only then can we work to improve them.
In short，honesty is indeed the best quality.There are many benefits of being an honest child such as the friendship and respect of others.
【分析】【高分句型一】
We need to be honest with our family because they care about us the most.我们需要对家人诚实，因为他们最关心我们。
need to do需要干某事，固定用法；because因为，引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
True friends avoid telling white lies and tell the truth instead.真正的朋友避免说善意的谎言，而是说实话。
avoid doing sth.避免干某事，固定用法。
【解答】 It's one of our traditional virtues to be honest.In my opinion，we should always choose to be honest with the people in our lives.（点题）
We need to be honest with our family because they care about us the most. 【高分句型一】We can tell them anything and they will help us. （对家人诚实）Therefore，they deserve our honesty.We must be honest with our friends and keep our promise because friendship is based on honesty.True friends avoid telling white lies and tell the truth instead. 【高分句型二】（对朋友诚实）Of course，we must be honest with our teachers，too.They are there to help us learn and to guide us.We should never cheat in the exams.Most importantly，we have to be honest with ourselves.That means we must recognize our shortcomings.Only then can we work to improve them.
In short，honesty is indeed the best quality.There are many benefits of being an honest child such as the friendship and respect of others.（总结）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2023 云南模拟）提示：在我们一路成长的过程中会碰到很多事情，不同的事情会让我们产生不同的情绪，也许是开心的，也许是骄傲的，也许是后悔的……请你以" One Thing that Made Me Feel ________"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述让你印象深刻的一次经历。
要求：
1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
One Thing that Made Me Feel ________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
One Thing that Made Me Feel Unforgettable
We have met with lots of things in our life.There is a small thing that touched me most，which I will never forget.That was when I was in junior three and I was in a boarding school.Before the final examination in the first semester，my leg hurt badly.My mother，who is a doctor，having finished a whole day's work，cycled 5 kilometers every day to give me an injection and then cycled back home.It was so cold and dark and she was not skilled at biking.However，she insisted on doing so.It is through this small thing that I understand how great a mom's love is!
【分析】【高分句型一】
There is a small thing that touched me most，which I will never forget.有一件小事最让我感动，我永远不会忘记。
There be结构，表示有；存在。
【高分句型二】
However，she insisted on doing so.然而，她坚持这样做。
insist on ，坚持。
【解答】
One Thing that Made Me Feel Unforgettable
We have met with lots of things in our life.There is a small thing that touched me most，which I will never forget.（点明主题）【高分句型一】That was when I was in junior three and I was in a boarding school.Before the final examination in the first semester，my leg hurt badly.My mother，who is a doctor，having finished a whole day's work，cycled 5 kilometers every day to give me an injection and then cycled back home.It was so cold and dark and she was not skilled at biking.However，she insisted on doing so.（叙述事件的经过）【高分句型二】It is through this small thing that I understand how great a mom's love is!（感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
8．（2023 邹城市校级一模）我们的周围总是充满着爱，父母的爱，老师的爱，同学的爱，朋友的爱……每天我都能得到来自他们的爱。请以"Love Around Me"为题，用英语写一篇短文。内容要点如下：
（1）父母每天为我做早餐，送我上学……
（2）老师为我传授知识，帮助我、鼓励我……
（3）和同学在一起学习、运动，大家和睦相处……
（4）空余时间和朋友在网上交流，分享快乐与烦恼……
（5）得到他们的爱，我感到很幸福，我下决心要努力学习并取得进步。
（6）我想对所有爱我的人说"谢谢你们"。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（2）必须包含所给提示，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
（4）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life._____________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.We live in a world full of love．Every day I can receive love from my parents，my teachers，my classmates and my friends．In the morning，my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me．Then my father drives me to school．At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge．My dear classmates and I study together happily and get on well with each other．I chat online with friends in my spare time．They often share my pleasure and trouble．I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them．I make a decision to study hard and make great progress．Here，I should say thanks to them．
【分析】高分句型一：
I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them．I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them．当我从他们那里得到爱时，我常常感到快乐和兴奋。句子中when引导一个时间状语从句。
高分句型二：
I make a decision to study hard and make great progress．我决定努力学习，取得巨大进步。句子中to引导的不定式短语表目的。
【解答】
Love Around Me
There is lots of love around me in my everyday life.We live in a world full of love．（引出话题） Every day I can receive love from my parents，my teachers，my classmates and my friends．In the morning，my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me．Then my father drives me to school． （父母）At school all the teachers not only look after me well but also teach me lots of useful knowledge．（老师） My dear classmates and I study together happily and get on well with each other．I chat online with friends in my spare time．（同学） They often share my pleasure and trouble．I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them．【高分句型一】（朋友） I make a decision to study hard and make great progress．【高分句型二】Here，I should say thanks to them．（决定与感谢）
【点评】本篇文章结构紧凑，层次分明，使用了多种表达。文章首先开门见山，直入主题，然后采用总分总的结构对正文内容总述。文章结尾画龙点睛，表达感情。
9．（2023 武义县一模）每个人都有自己的爱好。爱好可以陶冶我们的情操，帮助我们放松心情，也能增长知识，了解世界。假如你是李华，你所在的英语俱乐部本周的主题活动是分享自己的爱好。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的爱好。
内容要点 参考词汇
What's your hobby？ reading/playing basketball...
How did you start your hobby？ be interested in，fun...
What's the influence on your study and life？ relax，confident，knowledge...
注意：（1）短文内容必须包含所提供的要点，并作适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数 80—100 词。
短文开头：Everyone has his own hobby. （仅供选择使用）
________
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】 Everyone has his own hobby.Some people like collecting stamps while others choose to spend their free time on sports.As for me，I enjoy singing.I used to be shy .I was afraid of talking in front of others.What's worse，I hardly had friends.Later，my mother encouraged me to learn to sing to overcome my shyness.With the help of my mother，I got better little by little.I dared to sing in front of my class，and then for the whole school.Now I am not shy any more and love singing in front of people.How amazing!Personally，singing is a good way to build up my confidence and relax my mind after a busy day.And I have done better in my study and also made lots of friends who have the same interest.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Some people enjoy collecting stamps while others choose to spend their free time on sports.有些人喜欢集邮，而另一些人则选择把空闲时间花在体育上。enjoy doing sth表示喜欢做某事；while引导一个时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
And I have done better in my study and also made lots of friends who have the same interest.我在学习上做得更好，也交了很多有同样兴趣的朋友。who引导一个定语从句。
【解答】 Everyone has his own hobby.（引出话题）Some people like collecting stamps while others choose to spend their free time on sports.【高分句型一】As for me，I enjoy singing.I used to be shy .I was afraid of talking in front of others.What's worse，I hardly had friends.Later，my mother encouraged me to learn to sing to overcome my shyness.With the help of my mother，I got better little by little.I dared to sing in front of my class，and then for the whole school.（交代自己爱好开始的过程）Now I am not shy any more and love singing in front of people.How amazing!Personally，singing is a good way to build up my confidence and relax my mind after a busy day.And I have done better in my study and also made lots of friends who have the same interest.【高分句型二】（突出爱好对自己的积极影响）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2023 聊城二模）随着全球国际化，中国的传统节日越来越受国外友人的关注，请你以"The Spring Festival"为题，根据下面的要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍中国的传统节日——春节。
要点提示：
1.春节是中国传统节日中最重要的节日之一，通常在一月或二月份；
2.春节习俗：前夕，人们打扫房屋等；除夕聚在一起吃饺子，看电视等；春节期间，人们穿着新衣服走亲访友；孩子们收到红包等。
3.身为中国人，你对传统节日的感受。
注意事项：
1.短文词数：80 词左右。
2.短文必须包含以上内容，但可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
The Spring Festival
________________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】说明文；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is one of the most popular/important traditional festivals in China.It usually comes in January or February.
Before the festival，people usually clean their houses carefully，because they think cleaning can sweep away bad luck.They also put things away and buy lots of delicious food.On the evening before the festival，family members get together and have a big dinner.They enjoy different kinds of food，such as dumplings and fish.Then they watch a special programme on TV.During the festival，people wear new clothes and visit their relatives and friends and say"Happy New Year".Children get hongbao from the old.
As a Chinese，I feel proud.And I think everyone in China likes Chinese traditional festivals，just like me.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Before the festival，people usually clean their houses carefully，because they think cleaning can sweep away bad luck.在春节之前，人们通常会仔细打扫他们的房子，因为他们认为清洁可以扫除厄运。because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
And I think everyone in China likes Chinese traditional festivals，just like me.我想每个中国人都喜欢中国的传统节日，就像我一样。And I think+宾语从句。
【解答】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is one of the most popular/important traditional festivals in China.It usually comes in January or February.（春节是中国传统节日中最重要的节日之一，通常在一月或二月份）
Before the festival，people usually clean their houses carefully，because they think cleaning can sweep away bad luck.【高分句型一】They also put things away and buy lots of delicious food.On the evening before the festival，family members get together and have a big dinner.They enjoy different kinds of food，such as dumplings and fish.Then they watch a special programme on TV.During the festival，people wear new clothes and visit their relatives and friends and say"Happy New Year".Children get hongbao from the old.（春节习俗：前夕，人们打扫房屋等；除夕聚在一起吃饺子，看电视等；春节期间，人们穿着新衣服走亲访友；孩子们收到红包等）
As a Chinese，I feel proud.And I think everyone in China likes Chinese traditional festivals，just like me.【高分句型二】（身为中国人，我对传统节日的感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2023 苏州三模）为减轻学生过重的作业负担，控制中小学生的书面作业总量，创新布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以"My Creative English Homework"为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
内容包括：
（1）做过的最有创意的英语作业（内容、收获……）；
（2）1﹣2条有创意的英语作业建议（形式、理由……）；
参考作业类型：
film review creative English homework poster design
book review survey report
注意：（1）词数不少于90，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.
【考点】其他应用文写作；教育．
【答案】
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.Doing creative homework can make us more interested in English.Last winter vacation，our teacher asked us to design a poster about the Spring Festival.That was my favourite homework.It took me about three hours to finish it.It not only helped me go over the knowledge we've learned，but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion，it's also a good choice to write book reviews.It can help us to have a better understanding of the book.Besides，we can do some surveys on our hobbies and write reports.In this way，our English will develop quickly.
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It not only helped me go over the knowledge we've learned，but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
它不仅帮助我复习了我们所学的知识，而且为传播中国传统文化提供了一个很好的机会。not only...but also不但……而且，在本句中连接并列谓语。
【高分句型二】
In my opinion，it's also a good choice to write book reviews.
在我看来，写书评也是一个不错的选择。本句使用的句型是It's a good choice to do sth.做某事是一个不错的选择。
【解答】
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practise and use what we've learned in class.Doing creative homework can make us more interested in English.Last winter vacation，our teacher asked us to design a poster about the Spring Festival.That was my favourite homework.It took me about three hours to finish it.It not only helped me go over the knowledge we've learned，but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.【高分句型一】（做过的最有创意的英语作业）
In my opinion，it's also a good choice to write book reviews.【高分句型二】It can help us to have a better understanding of the book.Besides，we can do some surveys on our hobbies and write reports.In this way，our English will develop quickly.（有创意的英语作业建议）
I hope we'll have more creative English homework in the future.（愿望）
【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
12．（2023 唐河县二模）作为新时代青年中的一员，未来属于我们，希望寄予我们，奋斗的青春更美丽。英语报社以"How to Make Myself Better"为题举行征文，请根据下图提示，谈谈你将如何塑造更好的自己。
How to make myself better ●lifestyle ●relationship ●study ●……
要求：
1.字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；
2.思维导图中的提示词仅供参考，可适当发挥；
3.词数：100词左右；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to Make Myself Better
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【考点】说明文；个人情况．
【答案】
How to Make Myself Better
As a member of the youth in the new era，the future belongs to us.Hope is placed on us.The struggling youth is more beautiful.As a teenager，I think I should work harder to make myself better.
First of all，it is important to live healthily.I will eat more fruit and vegetables.I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep.What's more，I should work hard at all my subjects.I'll not be afraid to face challenges anymore and try my best to solve the problems.Besides，it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.Last but not least，it's our responsibility to take care of our parents.I'll also do what I can to help other people.
By doing these，I will make myself better and better.
【分析】【高分句型一】
As a teenager，I think I should work harder to make myself better.作为一个青少年，我认为我应该更加努力地工作，让自己变得更好。
I think +宾语从句，表示我认为……
【高分句型二】
I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep.我也会每天锻炼身体，保证充足的睡眠。
will+动词原形，表示将要……
【解答】
How to Make Myself Better
As a member of the youth in the new era，the future belongs to us.Hope is placed on us.The struggling youth is more beautiful.As a teenager，I think I should work harder to make myself better.【高分句型一】
First of all，it is important to live healthily.I will eat more fruit and vegetables.I will also take exercise every day and get enough sleep.【高分句型二】（生活方式）What's more，I should work hard at all my subjects.I'll not be afraid to face challenges anymore and try my best to solve the problems.（努力学习）Besides，it is necessary to have a good relationship with family and friends.（家人关系）Last but not least，it's our responsibility to take care of our parents.I'll also do what I can to help other people.（其它）
By doing these，I will make myself better and better.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2023 黑龙江二模） Write a passage according to the information given.（30﹣50 words）
假如你是石磊，是九年级一班的学生。4月20日上午，你把一个黑色书包遗失在学校操场上。书包里有一些书和一串钥匙。你的联系电话是010﹣2238，请根据以上内容写一则寻物启事。
（注意：文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和师名，否则不得分）
LOST
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【考点】启事；学校生活．
【答案】
LOST
I'm Shi Lei.I am a student of Class 1，Grade 9.On the morning of April 20th，I lost my schoolbag on the playground this morning.It's black.There are some books and a set of keys in it.If you find it，please call me at 010﹣2238.
Thank you very much.
【分析】【高分句型一】
There are some books and a set of keys in it.里面有一些书和一套钥匙。
there be句型表示某地有某物。
【高分句型二】
If you find it，please call me at 010﹣2238.如果你找发现了，请打010﹣2238给我。
if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】
LOST
I'm Shi Lei.I am a student of Class 1，Grade 9.On the morning of April 20th，I lost my schoolbag on the playground this morning.It's black.（丢了什么）There are some books and a set of keys in it.【高分句型一】（里面的物品）If you find it，please call me at 010﹣2238.【高分句型二】（联系方式）
Thank you very much.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2023 梅州一模）为弘扬中华民族"劳动最光荣"的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动（a series of labour activities），假如你是李华，请结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。
内容包括：
1）列举几个你参加过的劳动实践活动（如种树、修东西等），并适当发挥；
2）你对劳动实践活动的相关感受；
作文要求：
（1）文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
（2）作文词数80左右，必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Let's enjoy working!
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【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
Let's enjoy working!
This term，I took part in a series of labor activities in our school.I was happy that I learned a lot.In March，I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on the farm near our school.In April，I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers.In May，I learned to do much housework，such as cooking dinner，making the bed，sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful.I'm sure the more life skills I have，the more independent I will be.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful.我认为劳动实践活动不仅有教育意义，而且很有用。
not only...but also不但……而且……
【高分句型二】
I'm sure the more life skills I have，the more independent I will be.我相信我的生活技能越多，我就会越独立。
the +比较级，the+比较级，意思是"越……就越……"
【解答】
Let's enjoy working!
This term，I took part in a series of labor activities in our school.I was happy that I learned a lot.In March，I learned to grow vegetables and plant trees on the farm near our school.In April，I learned to repair things like electric fans and bicycles with the help of our teachers.In May，I learned to do much housework，such as cooking dinner，making the bed，sweeping the floor and folding clothes.（参加过的劳动实践活动）
I think the labour activities are not only educational but also useful.【高分句型一】I'm sure the more life skills I have，the more independent I will be.【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2023 金平区一模） 根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
假设你叫李华，你们校报的英语专栏刊发了上面的文章，你就同学们是否想要机器人老师在班上进行了调查。请你在读者来信栏目发表你的观点。
调查结果（见右图）；
你的观点及两点原因。
作文要求：
不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头结尾已给出，不必抄写在试卷上，也不计入总词数。
Dear Editor，
I read the article about robot teachers in your newspaper the other day，and I carried out a survey among my classmates about whether they would like to have robot teachers in the classroom.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；教育．
【答案】Dear Editor，
I read the article about robot teachers in your newspaper the other day，and I carried out a survey among my classmates about whether they would like to have robot teachers in the classroom.Here's the result.
Forty﹣eight percent of the students said that they wanted robot teachers.They thought robot teachers would teach students more knowledge.Forty﹣four percent of the students disagreed with them.They thought that robot teachers didn't have human emotions after all.Eight percent of them didn't have clear answers.I don't want to have a robot teacher.I think a teacher's job is not only to teach students knowledge，but also to communicate with students.Besides，if I don't get good grades，I hope to see the teacher's warm smile.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think a teacher's job is not only to teach students knowledge，but also to communicate with students.我认为老师的工作不仅是教给学生知识，而且还要与学生交流。
not only...but also...不仅……而且……
【高分句型二】
Besides，if I don't get good grades，I hope to see the teacher's warm smile.此外，如果我没有得到好成绩，我希望看到老师温暖的微笑。
if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear Editor，
I read the article about robot teachers in your newspaper the other day，and I carried out a survey among my classmates about whether they would like to have robot teachers in the classroom.Here's the result.（点题）
Forty﹣eight percent of the students said that they wanted robot teachers.They thought robot teachers would teach students more knowledge.Forty﹣four percent of the students disagreed with them.They thought that robot teachers didn't have human emotions after all.Eight percent of them didn't have clear answers.（调查结果）I don't want to have a robot teacher.I think a teacher's job is not only to teach students knowledge，but also to communicate with students. 【高分句型一】Besides，if I don't get good grades，I hope to see the teacher's warm smile.【高分句型二】（我的观点及原因）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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