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沪教版（五四学制）（2024）六年级下册英语期末复习：作文练习题
一、U6单元话题期末热点预测：与名人对话/杂交水稻之父/历史名人
1．学校读书会组织开展“与名人对话”活动，鼓励学生积极阅读鲁迅先生的作品。鲁迅先生是中国现代文学的奠基人之一，他不仅是一位作家，也是一位思想家和革命家，对中国文化和社会产生了深远的影响。鲁迅的作品《朝花夕拾》 (Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk),《呐喊》 (Call to Arms)，《彷徨》 (Hesitation)等，至今仍被广泛阅读和研究。请以“A conversation with Lu Xun: Insights from a Literary Giant”为题，根据提示写一篇短文，不少于60词。Suggested questions:
(1)Introduce Lu Xun and his significance in modern Chinese literature;
(2)Describe one of Lu Xun’s famous works and explain its impact on society;
(3)Discuss how Lu Xun’s ideas and writings continue to inspire people today.
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【答案】范文：
A conversation with Lu Xun: Insights from a Literary Giant
Lu Xun was a significant writer in modern China, known for his deep insights into society and his critical spirit. One of his most famous works is Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk, a collection of memoir essays that take us through his childhood and youth. These essays not only tell personal growth stories but also reflect the social landscape of that era. If I could have a conversation with Lu Xun, I would ask him about the inspiration behind his writing and how he looked upon the world around him. I would also inquire about the message he hoped to convey through his vivid and poignant memories. It would be fascinating to hear his thoughts on how literature can be a mirror to society and a tool for change.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍鲁迅及其在现代中国文学中的重要性；
第二步、描述鲁迅的一部著名作品并解释其对社会的影响；
第三步、讨论鲁迅的思想和作品如何继续激励当代人。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②have a conversation交谈
③hope to do sth.希望做某事
[高分句型]
①One of his most famous works is Dawn Blossoms Plucked at Dusk, a collection of memoir essays that take us through his childhood and youth.(one of+the+形容词最高级+名词复数)
2．古今中外的名人犹如一颗颗明星一般闪耀在历史的星空中。请选择一位你了解的历史名人，谈谈你对他/她的看法，60词以上。包括但不限于以下内容：
●对他/她的简要介绍；
●他/她的主要贡献；
●他/她身上值得学习的品质。
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【答案】例文
Albert Einstein was a famous German scientist. He discovered the theory of relativity, which changed how we see time and space. He also came up with the famous equation E = mc2 which shows how energy and matter are related.
I admire Einstein for his curiosity and bravery. He never stopped asking questions and showed us that it’s okay to think differently. He also believed in peace and used his fame to speak up for what was right.
In conclusion, Albert Einstein was an amazing person who made the world a better place. We should learn to be curious, brave and kind, just like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先写一下对他/她的简要介绍；
第二步，写一下他/她的主要贡献；
第三步，最后写一下他/她身上值得学习的品质。
[亮点词汇]
①think differently不同的方式思考
②believed in相信
③a better place一个更好的地方
[高分句型]
①He also came up with the famous equation E = mc2 which shows how energy and matter are related.（定语从句）
②He never stopped asking questions and showed us that it’s okay to think differently.（and连接并列成分，宾语从句）
3．2021年5月22日，“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平院士在湖南长沙与世长辞， 请根据下面所给的袁隆平院士的信息简介，写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 书写规范， 语法正确。
2. 不少于五句话。
Fact Box: Yuan Longping
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【答案】 Fact Box: Yuan Longping
Yuan Longping is a famous scientist. He was born in Beijing in 1930. He developed a new kind of rice in 1976. He travelled around the world and taught people to grow rice in 1980. He won World Food Prize in 2004. He lived to be ninety-one and died in 2021.
I think Mr. Yuan is a great person. He is so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当增加细节描述，写作时保持主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍袁隆平的生平事迹；
第二步，谈谈对袁隆平的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①be born in出生于
②teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事
③live to be活到……岁
[高分句型]
①I think Mr. Yuan is a great person. (宾语从句)
②He is so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. (so…that…“如此……以至于……”)
二、U5单元话题期末热点预测：绿色社区/环保在行动
4．以“My Green Neighbourhood”为题，写一篇短文。描述你所在的绿色社区的样子，人们为建设绿色社区做了哪些事情，以及你对绿色社区的感受。词数60词左右。
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【答案】例文：
My Green Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood is a green and lovely place. There are many trees and flowers everywhere. We have a big community garden where people grow all kinds of plants.
To make it greener, people here do a lot. They sort rubbish carefully and recycle things like bottles and paper. Some also use bicycles instead of cars.
I really love my green neighbourhood. It makes me feel relaxed and comfortable. It’s great to live in such a place, and I’m proud to be a part of it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合题干介绍社区环境、居民环保行动以及个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍社区的整体环境；
第二步，介绍社区居民具体的环保行为；
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①all kinds of各种各样的
②carefully小心地，仔细地
③like像
④instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①There are many trees and flowers everywhere.（there be句型）
②To make it greener, people here do a lot.（动词不定式表示目的）
5．Write a diary in at least 50 words（假设你是一名关注环保的学生，近期开始尝试在日常生活中实践绿色生活方式。请以日记的形式，记录你采取的一项环保行动以及这些行动对你的生活方式、环保意识或周围人产生的积极影响。不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格）
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【答案】(for reference)
April 17th Sunny
Today marks a new beginning for me. I decided to start being more eco-friendly, so I used my own water bottle instead of buying a new plastic one. It felt really good to do something good for the planet. When my friends saw it, they asked me why. I told them about how plastic hurts the environment and how we can help by using less. They were really interested and said they would try it too. It makes me happy to know that even small things like this can make a big difference. I’m going to keep doing my part to help protect our planet.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的一项环保行动——自己带水喝；
第二步，阐述这一活动对自己和他人的影响；
第三步，书写结语，表达决心。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do 决定做某事
②instead of 代替，而不是
③make a big difference 产生很大影响
④keep doing 坚持做
[高分句型]
①When my friends saw it, they asked me why. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I told them about how plastic hurts the environment and how we can help by using less. (how引导的宾语从句)
③It makes me happy to know that even small things like this can make a big difference. (that引导的宾语从句)
6．Write at least 60 words according to the given information (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格)
One of your friends Phill doesn’t understand why it’s important to have a green neighbourhood. Write an e-mail to tell him the reason (你的朋友Phill不明白绿色城区的重要性，请写一篇电子邮件向他解释人们可以怎样保持健康的环境以及这么做的理由)Suggested questions:
(1) Why are you writing this e-mail
(2) What do people do in your neighbourhood to keep it green Why are these things important
(3) What’s your own experience with green neighbourhood
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【答案】例文：
Dear Phill,
I’m writing this e-mail because I want to share why a green neighbourhood matters.
In my area, people plant trees and flowers, recycle waste, and ride bikes instead of driving. These actions reduce pollution, clean the air, and protect nature. For example, recycling saves resources, and trees give us fresh oxygen. My family also help by using reusable bags and saving water. Last weekend, I joined a park cleanup and felt proud to make our area cleaner. A green neighbourhood keeps us healthy and happy.
Let’s work together to protect our environment!
Best regards,
[×××]
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕提示要点写作，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开篇直接说明本邮件的目的是分享绿色社区很重要的原因；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从社区居民的做法、我家人的做法、这样做的好处等几个方面重点介绍绿色社区很重要；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁大家一起保护环境。
[亮点词汇]
① plant trees 植树
② recycle waste 回收垃圾
③ instead of 代替
④ reduce pollution 减少污染
[高分句型]
① I’m writing this email because I want to share why a green neighbourhood matters.（because引导的原因状语从句；why引导的宾语从句）
② Let’s work together to protect our environment!（不定式作目的状语）
三、U4单元话题期末热点预测：四季的乐趣/我是天气预报员
7．假如你是李华，是学校的播音员，你每天为学校播报天气情况。请你根据以下表格信息，为大家播报近三天的天气状况。
星期 Friday Saturday Sunday
天气
建议 适合课后进行室外活动。 可以在家做家庭作业，帮父母做家务。 适合和家人去参观农场。
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于40词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
参考词汇：do the housework 做家务
Good morning, boys and girls! Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls! Now I’d like to tell you the weather on Friday, Saturday and Sunday.
It’s cloudy on Friday. So it’s cool. It’s a good time to play basketball after class. But on Saturday, it’s a rainy day. You can stay at home to do your homework. Also you can help your parents to do the housework. On Sunday, it’s a sunny day. You can go to the farm with your family.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为天气信息播报；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：注意不要遗漏表格中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。表格中列出了三天的天气，为同学们播报天气信息。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点出本次播报的主题是周五、周六和周日的天气；其次具体介绍这三天的天气情况及活动建议。
第三步：书写结语。表示感谢收听。
[亮点词汇]
①stay at home呆在家里
②play basketball打篮球
③go to the farm去农场
④do housework做家务
⑤do homework做家庭作业
[高分句型]
①You can stay at home to do your homework.（情态动词后跟动词原形）
②It’s a good time to play basketball after class.（it为形式主语，动词不定式为真正的主语）
8．一年有四季，各季节天气不同，带给人们的乐趣也不同。根据以下表格内容介绍一下你的家乡的四季及人们的活动。
season weather activity (活动)
spring warm fly kites
summer hot go swimming
autumn cool help the farmers
winter cold make snowmen
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实。
3. 字迹工整、表达准确。
4. 至少50词。
The Four Seasons in Our Hometown
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【答案】例文
The Four Seasons in Our Hometown
There are four seasons in a year. The weather in different seasons is very different. People can do different activities in our hometown.
It is warm in spring. We can fly kites in the park. In summer, it is hot. We can go swimming in the river. In autumn, it is cool. We can help the farmers get the crops in. It is cold in winter. We can make snowmen.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍不同季节的天气以及人们所做的活动。
[亮点词汇]
①fly kites放风筝
②go swimming去游泳
③help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
④make snowmen堆雪人
[高分句型]
①There are four seasons in a year.（there be句型）
四、U3单元话题期末热点预测：难忘的节日/节日美食
9．Write a composition in at least 60 words about the topic “An Unforgettable Festival”（以“一个难忘的节日”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的作文，标点符号不占格）
节日常常给人们带来温暖和特别的回忆。描述一个你庆祝过的、给你留下深刻印象的节日。分享你的庆祝活动和感受并说明这个节日令你难忘的原因。
Guiding Questions:
1. What was the unforgettable festival
2. What did you do during the festival
3. Why was the festival unforgettable
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Festival
The most unforgettable festival I experienced was the Spring Festival last year. On that day, my family decorated the house with red lanterns and paper cuttings. We cooked dumplings together and enjoyed a big family reunion dinner. At night, we set off fireworks in the yard, lighting up the dark sky with colorful sparks.This festival was special because my grandparents, who live far away, came to celebrate with us. Their laughter and stories made the day warm and happy. Even though the fireworks faded quickly, the joy of being together stayed in my heart forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最难忘的节日是春节；
第二步，根据题干的要点，描述春节期间的活动，介绍为什么这个节日令人难忘；
第三步，给出评价并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①set off引发
②even though虽然
[高分句型]
①We cooked dumplings together and enjoyed a big family reunion dinner.（and连接并列句）
②This festival was special because my grandparents, who live far away, came to celebrate with us.（定语从句，原因状语从句）
10．假如你的好朋友李华是学校英文记者团的一员，他正在征集“Chinese festival food spreads around the world”的文章，请你写一篇不少于60词的短文介绍你最喜爱的中国传统节日美食。
Suggested questions:
(1) What is your favourite traditional Chinese festival food
(2) What does this food taste like, and what does it look like
(3) Why do you like this food, and why do you think it could attract foreigners
(4) How do you think this food represents the culture and traditions of the festival
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【答案】例文
Chinese festival food spreads around the world
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival, and the food I love most is mooncakes. Mooncakes are round pastries filled with sweet or savoury fillings, such as red bean paste, lotus seed paste, or even salted egg yolk. They have a rich, dense texture and a beautiful design on top.
I like mooncakes because they not only taste delicious but also show family unity and togetherness during the festival. I think mooncakes could attract foreigners because of their unique flavours and the cultural story behind them. They are a perfect blend of tradition and taste, making them a delightful treat for anyone interested in Chinese culture.
This food truly represents the spirit of the Mid-Autumn Festival, when families gather to celebrate and share happiness under the full moon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕最喜欢的中国传统节日美食——月饼展开介绍，涵盖月饼的外观、口味、喜爱原因、对外国人的吸引力以及其代表的节日精神等要点，无明显遗漏要点，突出了月饼这一写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写作主题，明确阐述了自己最喜欢的传统中国节日是中秋节，最喜欢的节日美食是月饼；
第二步，详细介绍了月饼的外观、口味，阐述了喜欢月饼的原因，并分析了月饼对外国人的吸引力；
第三步，通过总结再次强调月饼真正代表了中秋节家人团聚、共享幸福的节日精神，对月饼进行了评价，认为它完美融合了传统与美味，是展现中国文化的绝佳美食。
[亮点词汇]
①pastries糕点
②savoury咸香的
③texture质地
④unity团结
⑤delightful令人愉快的
[高分句型]
①Mooncakes are round pastries filled with sweet or savoury fillings, such as red bean paste, lotus seed paste, or even salted egg yolk. (过去分词短语filled with…作后置定语修饰)
②I like mooncakes because they not only taste delicious but also show family unity and togetherness during the festival. (not only…but also…连接并列谓语)
五、U2单元话题期末热点预测：校规/家规
11．近来，为了进一步加强学生在校的管理，许多学校制定了新的校规。假如你是李华，请你根据下面表格的内容提示，用英文给你的笔友Mark写一封信，介绍你校的新校规，并谈谈你对新校规的看法。
作业 按时完成 手机 禁止进校
睡眠 约9小时 阅读 一周一本好书
锻炼 一天1小时 安全 1. 不打架 2.…… (至少补充一点)
你的看法 ……
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；
2. 词数70左右。开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I'm glad to share my new school rules with you.
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What about your school rules Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
How’s it going I’m glad to share my new school rules with you.
We must finish our homework on time. We can’t bring mobile phones to school. We should get about 9 hours’ sleep a day. We must read a good book once a week. Doing exercise is also important. We must do exercise an hour a day. We must keep safe first. Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. I think these school rules are good for us. We must follow them.
What about your school rules Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为信件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中学校新规则的介绍要点，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单问候朋友，说明写信意图，引出重点内容“学校新校规”；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。简述学校新校规并谈论一下你对新校规的个人看法；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到对方来信的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do很高兴做某事
②share sth with sb和某人分享某事
③on time准时
④fight with sb和某人打架
⑤go swimming alone独自去游泳
⑥be good for对……有好处
⑦what about… 做某事怎么样
[高分句型]
①Doing exercise is also important. (动名词作主语)
②Don’t fight with each other and never go swimming alone. (祈使句)
③I think these school rules are good for us. (宾语从句)
12．根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容，不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名：
国有国法，家有家规。没有规矩不成方圆。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter在邮件中询问你家的家规，并让你谈谈对这些家规的看法或感受。请根据Peter所提出的问题，给他写封回信。
提示词语：can’t, have to, necessary, strict, important, unfair
提示问题：
1. What rules do you have at home
2. What do you think of the rules Why
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you. Here are some rules in my family.
First, I can’t stay up late because my parents think sleep is important for health. Besides, I have to finish homework before using my phone. Although this feels strict sometimes, I know it’s necessary to focus on studies.
However, I think the rule “can’t eat snacks after 8 PM” is a bit unfair – I’m always hungry while studying!
What about your family rules Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍家里的规矩；
第三步，谈谈你对这些规则的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②look forward to期盼
[高分句型]
①First , I can’t stay up late because my parents think sleep is important for health.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Although this feels strict sometimes, I know it’s necessary to focus on studies.（Although引导让步状语从句）
六、U1单元话题期末热点预测：身边的人/每个人不同的活动
13．假如你是王涛，今天是星期六，天气很好，你和你的同学现在正在公园里玩耍。请发挥你的想象，介绍一下你和你的同学们都在做什么，还可以介绍你看到的动物在做什么。
要求：
1.条理清晰，语义连贯, 时态正确 ；
2.合理发挥想象，人物姓名自拟，不少于 60词。
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【答案】例文
I’m Wang Tao. Today is Saturday and the weather is really nice. I’m having fun in the park with my classmates now.
Look! Li Ming and Zhang Hua are playing badminton on the grass. They’re laughing and having a great time. Wang Fang and Liu Mei are sitting under a big tree, chatting and enjoying the sunshine.
As for the animals, I see some birds flying in the sky freely. A little dog is running after a butterfly nearby. It’s so cute! I’m really enjoying this wonderful day in the park.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述作者和同学在公园的活动；
②时态：时态为“现在进行时”，因为描述的是正在进行的动作；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“在公园里玩耍”的情境设定，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，即描述人物和动物的活动。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“今天是星期六，天气很好，我和我的同学现在正在公园里玩耍”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“人物活动、动物活动”几个方面重点介绍公园里的情况，比如人物可以是在打篮球、踢足球、放风筝等，动物可以是在树上唱歌、在草地上吃草等；
第三步，书写结语。表达“大家在公园里玩得很开心”的感想。
[亮点词汇]
① have fun 玩得开心
② play badminton 打羽毛球
③ have a great time 玩得愉快
④ as for 至于
⑤ run after 追逐
[高分句型]
①Today is Saturday and the weather is really nice.（and连接并列句）
14．Write at least 50 words on the topic “Someone special around me” (以“我身边一个特别的人”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格)。
In this unit, we learned how to introduce ourselves by talking about what makes us special. Now, think about someone special around you. Have you noticed his/her strong points Please write a passage about this person.
Suggested questions:
(1) Who is he/she
(2) What does he/she look like
(3) What is he/she good at
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【答案】例文
Someone special around me
My friend Ethan is really special to me. He has short hair and always wears glasses. Ethan is interested in science and is good at it. He loves doing experiments in our science class. But what makes him really special is that he is always willing to help others. If someone doesn’t understand something, Ethan will be patient enough to explain it. He is also really funny and makes me laugh all the time. I’m glad to have a friend like him!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合给出的问题介绍身边一个特别的人。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个特殊的人是谁；
第二步，具体介绍这个人的外貌，特长，性格特点等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in sth对……感兴趣
②be good at擅长……
③all the time一直
[高分句型]
①If someone doesn’t understand something, Ethan will be patient enough to explain it. (if引导条件状语从句)

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