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Unit 10 Lending a Helping Hand
Lesson 7 Reading for Writing
校团委
招募
校团委寻找最美志愿者，你参加过志愿者活动吗？快快将你的志愿者经历梳理并写下来，发送给校团委，可能你就是本届最美志愿者了哦！
V is for visit, go to help V是探访，伸出援手
O is for offer, give a hand O是给予，慷慨帮扶
L is for love, share it all L是关爱，尽情播撒
U is for unite, work as one U是团结，齐心协力
N is for nice, be friendly too.N是友善，友好待人
T is for try, do our best T是尝试，全力以赴
E is for each, help everyone E是每人，悉心帮助
R is for reach, never rest R是向前，永不止步
Volunteer
In this class, you will
分析范文结构，列出描述志愿者活动的内容要点；
绘制思维导图，谋篇布局，拟定框架，完成写作任务；
通过自评和互评，学会反思，改进文章结构、内容和语言；
了解帮助他人的意义和团队合作的重要性。
Learning Objectives
一、单元导入，明确目标
Volunteer
activity
when
where
what
...
how
Activity 1
Read for title
①On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
②...
③...
二、阅读感悟、自学检测
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
1.What's the title of the text
2.Volunteering at a Nursing Home was a ______experience.
Tip : A proper（恰当的） title can attract(吸引） reader's interest（兴趣）
养老院
Activity 2
Listen for details(细节）
1. When did the writer(作者) take part in the volunteer activity
2. Where did he volunteer
3. What did he do in the activity
4. How did he feel about the activity
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day.
At a nursing home.
He cleaned the window, swept the floor, visited some elders, chatted and played with the elders, and told an old lady about his school life.
He felt good about the activity.
①On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
②We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
③I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Activity 3
Read for structure(结构）.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
①On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
②We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
③I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
三、大组汇报、教师点拨
Activity 4
Complete the plot chart.
.
What is Lulu doing
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a
nursing home.
Beginning
Middle
End
We cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. We told Mrs. Li about our school life.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home.
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
Read the text aloud and analyze the text.
Beginning
Body
End
when
who, what and where
Remark(评价）
the things we did in the activity
the feelings and the meaning
“一点二展三收”法
一点即开篇点题
说明：
志愿者活动的时间、地点、任务等基础信息
二展是指展开介绍，具体描述：
志愿者活动的具体过程
三收是指总结收尾抒发：
号召：
活动感受
参与志愿活动
Activity 5
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a
nursing home.
_
Beginniing
Middle
End
四、巩固练习、拓展提升
Draw your own plot chart about a community service activity.
志愿者活动的时间、地点、任务等基础信息
志愿者活动的具体过程
活动感受
参与志愿活动
Activity 6
Draft your essay about a community service activity.
Volunteering at ____________
①On____________________, I volunteered at__________________
____________________. It was____________________________.
②At first, _______________________________________________
______________________________________________________.
Next,__________________________________________________
③I feel___________________________.We ___________________
______________________________________________________.
描述过去的事情用一般过去时;
句子结构准确，要点齐全（when,where,who,what,how...).
Activity 7
Invite your partner to rate your final draft. Write 1 (more improvements needed), 2 (fair), 3(good), or 4(excellent) for the ratings.
National Day
How well can you__________________ Partner's rating express your view of helping others
use the thinking skill of making a plot
introduce a community service activity
organize ideas into a well-balanced structure
use the theme vocabulary of the unit
use the simple past tense
use punctuation
spell the words
A rose given to others leaves
fragrance(芳香） in the hand.
In this class, we learnt
1. how to analyze the plot of an event.
2. how to organize a passage according to the plot.
3. to use the simple past tense more correctly.
4. to understand the meaning of helping others.
Summary
Activity 6
Revise your draft and write your final draft in your exercise book.
Attention(注意):
1. on+ 具体某一天
2. at+时间点
3. in/ at +地点
4. 描述过去的事情用一般过去时
5. 描述清晰，要点齐全（the date, the place, the person, the things and the feelings)
Activity 2
Read again and complete the plot chart.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Plot:
Beginning
Middle
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Plot:
End
Activity 3
Retell the text based on the clue.
.
What is Lulu doing
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a
nursing home.
_
Beginniing
Body
End
On ...,
I volunteered at ...
We arrived there at .... We cleaned ... and ... the floor, and then we visited ...there. We ... and played ... them. We told Mrs. Li about ... She was very ...
I felt... about... Together, we can ...
Activity 4
__
Beginniing
Middle
End
A Survey Report
eg: In our group/ family, there are four members. ...took part in... . She/ He went there with... She/ He ... in the activity. She/ He felt...
...
Activity 2
Read again and complete the plot chart.
Title
Beginning
Body
End
Plot:
Beginning
Middle
Volunteering at a Nursing Home
On March 5th, Lei Feng Day, I volunteered at a nursing home. It was a wonderful experience.
We arrived there at 9:00 a.m. At first, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor, and then we visited some elders there. We chatted and played cards with them. Mrs. Li, an old lady, was an English teacher. We told her about our school life. She was very happy to be with us.
I felt good about helping others. Together, we can make the world a better place.
Plot:
End
Homework
You should
1. review the key points of this class;
2. go on polishing the passage you wrote in class to make it more beautiful.
You may
collect more words and stories of volunteer work.
Thank you!
Thanks!
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