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期末备考单元范文诵读讲义（含写作点评）【人教八下英语】
Unit 1 What's the matter
【剖析】
本单元谈论的话题是针对健康问题给出建议,围绕这一话题学习情态动词 should表达建议的用法。在写这类文章时,给出的意见或建议要语气委婉、内容合理,注意行文应完整、简洁。此类话题写作常用的表达有:
(1) I think you should (2) You'd better not
(3) If you still feel..., you should... (4) It doesn't sound like you have a...
(5) You need to take breaks away from ...
【典例】
假如你是Ann,你的朋友 Mary 患了重感冒。请你给她写一封信,告诉她平时应该如何保持身体健康。词数不少于80。
参考词汇:take more exercise 多运动;enough sleep 足够的睡眠
【范文】
Dear Mary
How are you I'm sorry to hear that you had a bad cold.①
I think you should look after your health.②First③, you should have healthy eating habits. You should eat more vegetables and fruits. And you should drink more milk and water. Second, it's important for you to take more exercise. You can play football and go running every day. It can make you strong.④ Third, you should make yourself stay happy every day. It's very good for your health.Last, I think you should get enough sleep. If you don't, you may feel tired. Make sure to go to bed early and don't stay up late. If you have a healthy lifestyle, you'll be in good health.
I hope you will feel better soon.⑤
Yours,
Ann
①当我们听到不好的消息时,常用“I'm sorry to hear that ... ”表示同情.
②表达个人观点,用should提出建议,总领下文。
③first及下文的second,third,last 的运用使文章层次分明,条理清晰。
④make 在这里为使役动词,其结构为“make+宾语十宾语补足语”。
⑤提出愿望,表达对朋友的关心。
Unit 2 I'll help to clean up the city parks.
【剖析】本单元涉及的话题是志愿者活动,并围绕这一话题谈论如何提供帮助和宣传、倡导公益活等。这是一个适合记叙、说明两种体裁相结合的写作话题。通过这一写作话题,熟练使用短语动以及动词不定式。写好这类文章常用的表达有:
(1) We need to come up with a good plan to... (2) I think we'd better ...
(3) I'd like to volunteer as... (4) So let's ... from now on...
【典例】假如你们学校将要与一所贫困地区的学校(a school in the poor area)开展手拉手活动。请你下面的活动方案中选择一种你喜欢的方案,并说明理由及你将怎样去做。
方案1:捐赠学习用品 方案2:假期去做志愿者
方案3:邀请他们来校参观并到家里做客 方案4:通过写信的方式交朋友
要求:1.语言连贯,有恰当结尾;2.词数:80~100。
【范文】
Our school will have hand-in-hand activities with a school in the poor area①.I'd like to be a volunteer there in summer holidays.②I'm going to take some school things there. I know they don't have enough money to buy these.
I am good at③ English and computer. Maybe I can help them with these two subjects there. I can also help them do farm work. I think it must be very interesting. I can not only help them but also get entertainment.
To be a volunteer is really a good idea.④
①开篇点题,交代出活动的背景。
②用教材中所学句型点明自己选择的方案,切题准确。
③be good at,help sb. with sth. , help sb. do sth.等短语及连接词not only ...but also 的运用,让行文更加流畅。
④文章结尾以一个动词不定式作主语的句子重申了自己的观点。
Unit 3 Could you please clean your room
【剖析】本单元以“家务与许可”为话题,围绕家庭中的日常事务展开,学习和运用情态动词could,让学生学会谈论和分担家务事,促进学生与家庭成员之间的感情。此类话题写作的常用表达有:
(1) Could you please ... (2) I hate to...
(3) We need to... (4) I could at least ...
(5) But first, I have to ...
【典例】
假设你是戴维,今年13岁。上个星期天,你妈妈有事外出,下午5点才回来。妈妈让你帮她做家务。请根据下面表格中的提示,叙述一下你这次做家务的经历。
上午 洗餐具、做作业、去超市买肉和蔬菜
下午 给狗喂水和食物,然后扫地、擦窗户
你的感受 ......
【范文】
I'm David. I had a busy day last Sunday. My mother had something important to do last Sunday and couldn't get back home until 5:00 p.m., so I had to do chores all day.①I did the dishes and finished my homework in the morning. After that②,I went to the supermarket and bought some meat and vegetables.In the afternoon, first I fed our dog on water and food. Then I swept the floor and cleaned the windows.
When my mother saw the clean house, she felt very happy. I think it is fun to do housework.③
①开门见山，交代做家务的原因。
②after that.first.then 等过渡词或短语的使用.使句子之间的衔接自然、流畅。
③I think...表达了作者自己的观点,认为劳动很有乐趣。
Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents
【剖析】
本单元以“人际交往”为话题,这类话题涉及的写作多以应用文(如书信、日记等)为主,要求学生
从实际问题出发,倾诉人际交往中的烦恼。写作时可运用情态动词及提建议的句型。常用表达有:
(1) My problem is that ... (2) Why don't you ...
(3) I had a fight with ... because .. (4) In my opinion, it's important for you to ..
【典例】
假设你是刘明,是美国中学生艾丽斯的朋友,你收到了她的电子邮件,请就她的问题给她回复,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。要求:80 词左右。
Hi! Liu Ming,
I'm so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine.This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I'm afraid she won't pay me back.I don't know what to do. Do you have the same problem I need your help.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours.
Alice
【范文】
Hi! Alice,
I am glad to hear from you. I knew you are in trouble now.①To tell you the truth②, I have experienced the same problem before and I can understand you. Do you really think Angela is your close friend If so, you should believe her. Why don't you lend her the money③ I am sure she'll pay it back to you in time. On the other hand, if you're not willing to lend her the money, you can advise her to turn to her parents for help. As your close friend, she can understand you and take your advice.
I hope what I said can help you to solve the problem. Calm down and everything will be better soon.④
Yours,
Liu Ming
①开门见山,直奔话题。be in trouble为高级短语,表明了对方的苦恼,使用准确。
②该短语意为“说实话”,拉近了写信人与对方的距离。
③利用句型“Why don’t you... "提出自己的建议,为文章增色不少。
④此句为“祈使句十and+陈述句”句式。作为文章结尾,既是建议,又是祝愿。
Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came
【剖析】
本单元以“难忘的事件”为话题,围绕这一话题帮助学生学习了如何讲述过去已开展的活动或生的事件。此类话题写作多以记叙文为主。写人时,要注意介绍人物的身份、经历和事迹等;叙时,要写清事件发生的前因后果及发展过程等。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
(1) It happened in/on ... (2) I was doing ... when ...
(3) While I was doing ... he ... (4) What a pleasant day I had!
(5) This is a day I will never forget.
【典例】
假设上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale 活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club 栏目
写一篇关于此次活动的介绍。
要点如下:
1.有200多人参加了此次活动; 2.有的人出售旧物.如衣服、玩具、自行车等;
3.有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等; 4.还有的人交换旧书;
5. 请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。
注意:1.词数60~80,文章的开头已给出,不计人总词数;2.不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇:Changjiang Community 长江社区;exchange v.交换;environment n.环境
【范文】
It was sunny last Sunday. We went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community①.There were more than 200 people at the Yard Sale. Some were selling their used bikes, toys and clothes. Some were selling cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves while②others were exchanging used books. I enjoyed myself and I got my favorite books there.
In my opinion③, it is a very good activity.We can make full use of old things, and we can do something good for our environment as well④.
What a pleasant day I had !
①语言简练,清楚地交代了活动的时间、地点和活动内容。
②连词while 的使用使活动内容对比鲜明,形象地再现了活动场景。
③in my opinion, make full use of等短语的使用，使文章增色不少。
④as well 的使用明确地表达出了作者的另一观点,深化了主题。
Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains.
【剖析】本单元的写作话题是影视文学,该话题内容涉及电影、戏剧、传统故事等,体裁以记叙文为主，而涉及文学、电视节目介绍时,经常有观点性的评述语言。叙议结合是这类话题写作的显著特点。
常用表达有:
(1) It happened on/in... (2) I think it's a little bit...
(3) It tells one of the most popular stories ... (4) As soon as the program came out, the ...
【典例】
2013 年,一部儿童电影《愤怒的小孩》(The Angry Kids)让越来越多的孩子产生了情感共鸣，在社会上也引起了如何关爱儿童的大讨论。请根据表格提示,以“My favorite movie”为题写一篇英语短文。
故事背景 爸爸和妈妈常年在俄罗斯工作,男孩孙小傲一直由爷爷照顾。渴望父母关爱的小傲在十二岁生日这一天离家出走
主要情节 ●流浪经历:沿街乞讨、救助女孩兰兰等●经过各种奇遇、磨难,最后踏上回家的路
我的看法 ... ...
要求:1.词数:不少于80词(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2. 不要逐句翻译,根据表格提示可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯、流畅。
【范文】
In 2013, a film named The Angry Kids was on at movie theaters across the country. Sun Xiaoao is a lovely boy in the film①. He lives together with his old grandpa only because his parents work in Russia all the year round②. Xiaoao misses them very much and leaves home alone on his twelfth birthday. During those days, he becomes homeless,and has to ask for food in the streets. Even though the boy is in rouble③,he still offers to help a girl named Lanlan to go home.
I love the film④because of Xiaoao, who is kind and friendly. From Xiaoao's story, I think ee really need more love from our parents.Of course, we should also understand them.
①开门见山,引出话题,为下文介绍主人公作好铺垫.
②用简练的语言分析了孙小傲性格有缺陷的原因是缺乏关爱。
③恰到好处地使用了让步状语从句,用even though 渲染了他的不利处境,彰显出他积极向上的品格。
④直抒胸臆,表达了作者对这部电影的喜爱。
Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world
【剖析】本单元的话题是谈论大自然及保护野生动物。该话题取材广泛,包括濒危动物保护、环境保护等内容。在写作时应合理、正确地运用本单元学习的形容词和副词的比较等级,文章的体裁以说明文和议论文为主。此类话题写作常用的表达有:
(l) As far as I know ... (2) The main reason is to...
(3) One of the most endangered animals is ... (4) As a student, I will take an active part in...
(5) Another reason for fewer and fewer ... is because ...
【典例】你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗 请以“Why should we protect wild animals ”为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明保护野生动物的重要性。词数:80左右。
提示:1.为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中;
2.为什么保护野生动物很重要;
3.我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
参考词汇:wild，endangered，tiger，panda,destroy(破坏)，fur(毛皮)，take measures
【范文】这是一篇要点提示作文,时态以一般现在时为主。写作时可参考下面的模板。
Why should we protect wild animals
Do you know any endangered animals Why are they in danger ①
I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as②tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money③. And there are few places where pandas can live.
We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed④. We all hope that in the future there will be a lot more forests and wild animals.⑤
①短文以Do you know ... 和Why... 两个问句开头,开门见山切入话题。
②短文中运用了such as，cut down，no longer等短语，使行文更加灵活.
③被动句式的灵活运用是本文的一个亮点。
④此句中 take measures to ...，keep sth.from doing...，stop sth.from doing ...的运用体现出作者极强的语言驾驭能力。
⑤短文最后提出希望,回扣文章主题,起到了点睛的作用。
Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
【剖析】谈论近期发生的事件及经历是本单元涉及的主要内容,也是较为常见的一个写作话题。写作此类话题作文,通常以夹叙夹议的方式行文,在陈述近期发生的事件及经历过程中谈论自己的所
感、所得。写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
(1) ... have/has ... (2) It is... (3) I will.. (4) I hope ..
【典例】假设你是赵铭,你班来自美国的交流生Robert 患病住院已有三周,请你用英文给他发一封电
子邮件,主要内容包括:1.询问病情;2.介绍班级近期活动和学习情况;3.表达祝愿。
要求:词数:80~100
【范文】这是一篇要点提示类作文,时态以现在完成时和一般过去时为主。类似话题作文可借鉴下面的模板。
Dear Robert,
It has been three weeks since you were ill. ①
How are you feeling now Are you feeling better ②We all miss you very much. In the past three weeks we have had many activities. We took part in③the sports meeting in our school and won first prize. The matches were exciting and tough. And we tried our best and got the good result.What a pity! You didn't watch them. We're busy preparing for the singing competition now. We practice the song every day in order to sing well. Wish you to cone back earlier and join us.
Remember to have a good rest and don't worry about your lessons. I'll help you with them. I hope you'll get well soon④.
Yours,
Zhao Ming
①文章开头用现在完成时准确表达了Robert 的病情。
②“How are you... "“Are you... ”两个问句的使用表达出作者对Robert 的关心。
③take part in, try one's best, be busy doing等的使用为文章增添了亮点。
④最后一段表达了作者对 Robert 的安慰和美好祝愿。
Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum
【剖析】本单元的写作任务是描写去某地旅行，此类话题适合记叙文写作。旅行的时间、地点、天气、旅游方式等都是必不可少的要点,最后总结感受,这往往会起到点睛的作用。常用表达有:
(1) Have you ever been to ... (2) I've recently been to a/an ..
(3) This is the best time to ... (4) On the one hand ... on the other hand ..
【典例】请你根据下面的内容提示,写一篇短文,向大家推荐一个好去处。
内容提示:1.Where is the best place to go
2. What is the place special for
3. What should you pay attention to
要求:1.中心突出,语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范;2.词数:80 左右。
【范文】这是一篇要点提示作文,时态以一般现在时为主。写作时可参考下面的模板。
I think the best place to visit is the Palace Museum.①As we all know②, the Palace Museum, also known as the Forbidden City, is wonderful and famous for its long history in the world. We can see a lot of ancient buildings,including palaces,temples and towers③.When we visit the Palace Museum, we should protect everything there④. For example, don't write words on the things in the museum.
I am sure you can know well about the Chinese culture in it.And of course,you can have a wonderful time there!⑤
①开门见山地提出了自己的观点:最好的旅游去处就是故宫博物院。
②插人语As we all know使用恰当,既丰富了语言表达,同时也使得下文的描述具有说服力。
③列举的事例准确,印证了上句中的 ancient。
④内容选择适当,建议旅游时要保护文物,很好地宣传了正能量。
⑤文章最后的总结很有感染力。
Unit 10 I've had this bike for three years.
【剖析】本单元围绕“居住的环境”这一话题谈论私人物品和周围事物的发展与变化,学会运用所学时态和短语描写物品承载的记忆、讲述周围事物的变化以及对将来的展望。常用表达有:
(1) I've had the book for ... (2) The stories inside it may be a bit ...
(3) Amy wants to keep her old things because ...
(4). ... have/has left many soft and sweet memories in our hearts.
【典例】艾米。金(Amy Kim)是当今世界最出名的中国摄影师之一.她的一些作品将于近日在丽都画廊(Lido Gallery)展出。假如你是《学英语》的小记者.请你根据下面的提示就这次摄影展写一篇评论报道。词数:80左右。
提示:1.这次将展出她最受欢迎的部分摄影作品。
2.有许多优秀的人物照和乡村照。
3.每个人都能从中找到自己喜欢的摄影作品。
4.少数艾米·金的城市题材摄影作品,人们不是非常感兴趣。
5.这是世界级别的摄影大师的一次展出。
【范文】这是一篇要点提示作文,时态以一般过去时和现在完成时为主。写作时可参考下面的模板。
There will be an exhibition at the Lido Gallery.Be sure to see it.①Amy Kim is one of the best known Chinese photographers in the world today and she has taken so many nice photos so far. This time part of her most popular photographs will be on show. The stories in her photos really have some meanings to everyone②.There are many great photos of people and of the countryside③.A few city photographs are less successful and they don't interest visitors as much.But this is a great show from a world-class photographer. Whatever you do,don't miss this exhibition④.
①使用祈使句 Be sure to...,使语气更加强烈,为下文评价Amy的作品做好铺垫.
②语言简练,但是表达到位。have some meanings to ...恰如其分地表达出了作品具有一定的内涵。
③there be 句型的使用体现了作者的语言功底。
④使用让步状语从句,使本文句式表达精彩纷呈。
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