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11.新闻、活动报道
一、高分范文
Hiking to Xishan
Aiming to encourage students to take outdoor activities, our school organized an all-day hiking trip to Hill Xishan last Sunday. Hundreds of us participated.
After being fully prepared, we gathered at the school gate and headed to Hill Xishan in high spirits. Bathed in warm sunshine, we passed through the forest, interacted with wild animals, and climbed up the mountain. Time went by quickly before we knew it. Exhausted though we were, our hearts were filled with delight.
The activity was of great value to all participants. It provided us with a platform, where we built up our bodies and got close to nature.
二、范文积累
（一）亮点词汇
词汇 释义 常用搭配 同义词
encourage v.鼓励，激励 Encourage sb. to do sth. inspire
bathe v.沐浴在......中，沉浸在......中 Be bathed in light/sunshine
interact 与......交流 interact with... communicate
value n.重要性，价值 be of great/little value worth
provide v.提供 provide sb. With sth. provide sth. for sb. supply, offer, give
platform n.平台，机会 provide a platform for opportunity
亮点句型
Aiming to encourage students to... (V-ing分词短语作目的状语)
Bathed in warm sunshine.... (V-ed分词短语作伴随状语)
Exhausted though we were... (倒装句)
It provided us with a platform where... (where引导的定语从句)
仿写训练
1.请根据首字母提示，在空白处填入合适的单词。
(1)The English Poetry Society enjoys a good reputation with the aim of providing a
p for poetry lovers to learn English.
(2)The valley was b in warm light.
(3)World Book Day is a yearly event on 23 April,the aim of which is to e more people to form the habit of reading.
(4)The user present i directly with the library that day.
(5)It p us with a good opportunity to have a better understanding of Chinese traditional music.
2.请翻译以下句子。
（1）为鼓励师生参加体育运动，上周我们学校举办了一年一度的秋季运动会。
（2）当天以一场生动的开幕式开始，随后是跑步、跳远和接力赛等紧张的比赛。
这项活动很有价值。它为我们提供了一个锻炼身体和加强校园团结的平台。
请借鉴本节所学，仿写以下活动报道。
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语言积累
高分词汇及短语
词汇、短语及其释义
thunderous ad.雷鸣般的 stadium n.体育场 solo ad.单独的
atmosphere n.气氛 showcase v.充分展示 applause n.鼓掌
musical n.音乐剧 foster v.培养 audience n.观众
thunderous applause雷鸣般的掌声 a complete success一次圆满的成功
an impressive/a brilliant performance一次令人难忘/精彩的演出
gain a better understanding of..对…有更好的理解
新闻、活动报道写作框架
开篇说明活动概况
①Last Friday,our school hosted the Musical Performance for Youth at the school stadium, which provided a platform for young musicians to show their talents and fostered our appreciation of music.上周五，我们学校在体育场举办了一场青年音乐汇演。该活动不仅给青年音乐家提供了展示天赋的机会，还培养了我们对音乐的欣赏能力。
②In order to encourage us to take part in outdoor activities,our school organized a 5 km cross--country running race on 10 September.为了鼓励我们参加课外活动，我们学校在9月10日组织了一次5公里越野赛跑。
介绍活动内容
活动开始
③As scheduled,the performance began with a moving song.thus arousing the audience's heartfelt emotions..按照安排，这场表演以一首动人的歌曲开场，从而唤起观众内心真实的情感。
④After all preparations had been made,we gathered at the school gate and set out for the top in high spirits,在充分准备之后，我们在学校门口集合，兴致勃勃地朝山顶出发。
活动高潮
⑤Following this, a choir composed of 8 talented students took the stage, whose harmonious voices filled the stadium.接下来，一个由8名有才华的学生组成的合唱团登上舞台，他们和谐的声音充满了整个体育馆。
⑥Immersed in a delightful atmosphere,we feasted our eyes on beautiful scenery all the way.我们沉浸在愉悦的气氛中，一路欣赏着美丽的风景。
活动结束
⑦Exhausted as/though we were,.our hearts were filled with delight.尽管我们精疲力竭，但心中充满喜悦。
(三)强调活动意义
⑧This performance was a huge success, leaving a lasting impact on both the performers and the audience.这场表演是一次巨大的成功，对表演者和观众都影响深远
⑨The activity was of great importance to all participants.It provided us with a platform where we built up our bodies and got close to nature.这次活动对所有参与者意义重大。它为我们提供了一个锻炼身体、亲近大自然的机会。
11.新闻、活动报道
仿写训练
(1) platform (2)bathed (3) encourage (4) interacted (5) provided
(1)Last Sunday, the Musical Performance for Youth was held in our school.
All the way, we were chatting, singing, and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.
Everyone thinks highly of the activity, because it not only gives us a chance to appreciate music, but also enriches our school life.
参考范文
A Musical Performance for Youth
Last Friday afternoon, our school hosted the Musical Performance for Youth at the school stadium, which provided a platform for young musicians to show their talents and fostered our appreciation of music.
As scheduled, the performance began with a moving song, thus arousing the audience's heartfelt emotions. Following this, a choir composed of 8 talented students took the stage, whose harmonious voices filled the stadium. In the end, a band gave an exciting performance, the crowd showing their appreciation with thunderous applause and cheers.
Not only did the performance show the incredible musical abilities of the youth, but it also relieved pressure of study.

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