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(共60张PPT)
Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing about a literary work)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
　(写作项目——Writing about a literary work)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇文学作品评论。文学评论的对象是文学作品(小说、诗歌、散文、戏剧、影视等)。写作时，要首先介绍所要评论的文学作品；主体部分简述作品情节并讨论作品的主题和意义；结尾总结时，通过对文学作品的思想内容、创作风格、艺术特点等方面进行评论、评价，启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Part 1 (Para.1) A general introduction of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
Part 2 (Paras.2～4) The main plot of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
Part 3 (Para.5) The central theme of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
(二)根据教材课文可总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学逻辑衔接
本文以时间为经线，以肖像画的变化为纬线，讲述了相貌俊美的贵族少年多里安·格雷见了画家为他所作的画像后，在沃顿勋爵的蛊惑下，向画像许下心愿：美少年青春永葆，所有岁月的沧桑和少年的罪恶都由画像承担，最终却因此而丧命的故事。文章分析了小说中的人物性格、情感变化、寓意象征和文学手法，展现了作者对人性、时间和命运的深刻理解。最后一段揭示主题，以及作者的创作思想。文章层次分明，逻辑顺畅。
三、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
第一段第一句中使用动词短语tell the story of直截了当地介绍故事主旨。第二段首句中的动词短语start with，第三段首句中的soon afterwards以及第四段第二句中的for the next 18 years等衔接过渡词汇的使用使得故事情节通顺连贯。第二段第三句中的Fascinated，第三段第二句中的heartlessly，第四段第五句中的fearful和倒数第二句中的desperate都准确描写了主人公情感和性格的变化。第二段尾句中的young and good-looking和第四段尾句中的old and awful形成强烈对比，同时也揭示了故事的主题。
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段第三句使用分词短语Fascinated by his words解释故事的起因，并使用with复合结构with his portrait growing old instead of him为主人公的悲剧结局埋下伏笔。
(2)第四段首句使用so that引导目的状语从句，承上启下，使语言表达富有变化。倒数第二句中，分词短语Feeling desperate描写了主人公的情感变化，强调句it is he who is killed则揭示了主人公的悲剧结局。
(3)最后一段首句使用what引导主语从句，以及that引导的两个表语从句，揭示故事的主题思想，表达了作者对于“美”的看法。
仿写训练|完成句子
①_________________________, I kept on practising, which resulted in the flexibility of my body. (fascinated)
我对跳绳很着迷，不断练习，这使我的身体变得灵活。
②______________________________________________, I do hope you can offer me the precious opportunity. (desperate)
我渴望有机会成为一名志愿者，我的确希望您给我这个宝贵的机会。
Fascinated by rope skipping
Desperate to have the opportunity to be a volunteer
③_______________________________________I realized that he had made great contributions to our country.(强调句)
正是通过这次独特的经历，我意识到他对我们的国家做出了巨大贡献。
④He went to the lecture hall early, __________________________
_____.(so that)
他早早就去了演讲厅，想找个好座位。
It was through the unique experience that
so that he would get a good
seat
具体写作指导
How to write about a literary work
——如何写一篇文学作品评论
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a book.
Part 2 Main body (introduce the detailed plot)．
Part 3 Comments(comment on the book or its value).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　概述作家及其作品
如何开门见山地简介作家及其作品？
1．Jane Eyre is ___________________the famous British writer Charlotte Brontё and one of the most influential classics ____________
___________________.
《简·爱》是英国著名作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，也是英国文学史上最具影响力的经典作品之一。
a masterpiece of
in the history
of British literature
2．The Road Not Taken _________________Robert Frost, who uses rural scenes _______________________about life in the poem.
《未选择的路》由罗伯特·弗罗斯特创作，他在诗中用乡村场景来探索关于人生的深层次问题。
is written by
to explore deep questions
3．I__________________________________, but Harry Porter is___________________.
我喜欢读不同种类的书，但《哈利·波特》是我最喜欢的一本书。
enjoy reading different kinds of books
my favorite one
第二部分　详细介绍文学作品的故事情节
1．The work tells that a couple adopted a flexible way to _______
________________, who gradually adapted to his new family.
这部作品讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子，使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭。
bring up
their adopted son
2．The hero is Oliver Twist, an orphan _____________________
___________________.
主人公是奥利弗·特威斯特，一个孤儿，身处一个充满贫困和犯罪的世界。
3．Although_______________________________________, he is always very kind.
虽然生长在黑暗和邪恶的环境中，但他总是很善良。
thrown into a world full
of poverty and crime
growing in a dark and evil environment
4．Though at first he____________, in the end, _____________
____________________, he gains happiness.
虽然一开始他很痛苦，但最终在热心肠的人们的帮助下，他获得了幸福。
suffers a lot
with warm-
hearted people's help
第三部分　评价文学作品
1．This novel _______________its lovely details and its expression of belief in man's ability________________________.
这部小说以其优美的细节和对人在大自然中独处时的能力的信仰而闻名于世。
is famous for
when left alone in nature
2．What I have to admit is that this work is wonderful, such as ____________________________________________________________
______________.
我不得不承认的是这部作品很好，比如它对人物外貌的优美的描写和对人物性格的栩栩如生的刻画。
its beautiful description of people's appearances and vivid depiction
of characters
3．The story is very long but I am very interested in it, for it's the best book________________.
这个故事很长，但是我很感兴趣，因为这是我读过的最好的书。
4．The publication of Great Expectations, which ______________
___________________________, strengthened Dickens' status as a leading novelist.
《远大前程》这部小说的出版发行受到各界的评论和高度赞扬，它巩固了狄更斯作为顶尖小说家的地位。
I've ever read
was both widely
reviewed and highly praised
[针对练笔]
请写一篇介绍小说《百万英镑》(The Million Pound Bank Note)的短文，要求包括如下内容：
1．作者：Mark Twain
2．语言风格：幽默、讽刺
3．故事梗概：伦敦的两位富翁打赌，把一张无法兑现的百万支票借给落魄的美国穷人亨利·亚当，看他在一个月内如何收场。一个月的期限到了，亨利不仅没有饿死或被捕，反倒成了富翁，并且赢得了一位漂亮小姐的芳心。
4．你印象最深的地方。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全习作
The novel The Million Pound Bank Note ①___________________
(由马克·吐温创作), a great American writer, ②___________________
_____________________(讲述了一个身无分文的美国人的故事), Henry Adams, who experiences an unbelievable adventure in London.
written by Mark Twain
tells the story of a
penniless American
Two rich men in London have a bet on Henry and want to see
③________________________ (他会怎么样) a month later, if they give him a million-pound bank note which can't be cashed for even a penny. A month later, ④________________ (令他们惊奇的是), Henry isn't starved nor arrested, but becomes a millionaire dramatically. What's more, he even wins the love of a pretty lady.
what will become of him
to their surprise
⑤_______________________ (给我印象最深的) is the humorous and sarcastic language through which Mark Twain successfully depicted the interesting story. Moreover, in the story, Henry's note is only exhibited for the eyes of others as a symbol of wealth. On second thought, maybe ⑥____________________________________________
_____ (不是亨利，而是人们对金钱的疯狂热爱) fools the world.
What impresses me most
it is not Henry, but people's crazy love for money
that
写作素材储备
1．介绍文学作品
①adapt vt.　　　　　　 改编
②comic adj. 喜剧的
③tragic adj. 悲剧的
④hero n. 主人公；英雄
⑤heroine n. 女主人公；女英雄
⑥The fairy tales are my favourites, such as Grimm's Fairy Tales, Anderson's Fairy Tales and so on.
童话故事是我最喜欢的，比如《格林童话》《安徒生童话》等。
⑦His Dark Materials, created by English writer Philip Pullman, is one of the greatest fantasy stories ever written.
由英国作家菲利普·普尔曼创作的《黑暗物质三部曲》是有史以来最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
⑧There are three books in the series, Northern Lights, The Subtle Knife and The Amber Spyglass.
该系列由三本书构成：《北极光》《魔法神刀》和《琥珀望远镜》。
2．评价文学作品
①humorous adj.　 　 幽默的
②surprising adj. 令人感到惊讶的；出人意料的
③achievement n. 成就
④depressed adj. 沮丧的
⑤give an account of 描述
⑥is acknowledged as 被公认为
⑦We are always finding new beauties in Shakespeare's poetry.
我们总会在莎士比亚的诗歌中发现新的美妙之处。
⑧The line written by Wang Bo “A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near” wipes away the sorrow of departure and has become a famous saying to express friendship.
王勃的这句诗“海内存知己，天涯若比邻”抹去了离别的悲伤，成为表达友谊的名言。
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is set in London, which tells of the tragic life experience of an orphan named Oliver.(用现在分词短语升级)
→_____________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is set in London,
telling of the tragic life experience of an orphan named Oliver.
2．This book, Chicken Soup for the Soul, which was written by Jack Canfield, became a bestseller.(用过去分词短语作定语升级)
→_____________________________________________________
___________________
This book, Chicken Soup for the Soul, written by Jack Canfield,
became a bestseller.
3．That Henry's bank note is not even spent but is only shown to others as a symbol of wealth impresses me most.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
→_____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
What impresses me most is that Henry's bank note is not even
spent but is only shown to others as a symbol of wealth.
4．We come to realize what is the real “truth” through the Little Prince's journey.(用强调句升级，强调状语)
→_____________________________________________________
________________________
It is through the Little Prince's journey that we come to realize
what is the real “truth”．
5．Even though the situation was hard, he still held on to hope and kindness.(用no matter how升级)
→_____________________________________________________
_________________
No matter how hard the situation was, he still held on to hope
and kindness.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The novel, Journey to the West, _______________________(由吴承恩所写), is an outstanding romantic work ____________________
(充满奇异故事)．
written by Wu Cheng'en
full of fantastic tales
2．The story is filled with a tender feeling and kindness, ____________________ (传达了一种信息) that _________________
_________________ (无论我们遇到什么困难), we should take a positive attitude to life and never give up.
conveying a message
no matter what
difficulty we have
3．________________________ (被这个鼓舞人心的故事所感动), I learn that ______________________ (无论我们发生什么事), we should never lose hope.
4．_______________________________________ (正是希望、善良和勇敢) inspire us to keep moving.
Moved by this inspiring story
whatever happens to us
It is hope, kindness and braveness that
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter上周在邮件中提到他想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐一本小说；
2．此书内容简介；
3．给出阅读建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　
　Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels.Generally, there are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels.I'd like to recommend A Dream of Red Mansions, a classical novel, to you, which is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison.Based on Jia and Lin's love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline of a big family, which exposes the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand.So when you read it, you'd better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference.In addition, I suggest that you should learn some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.
I wish you would have fun and learn something by reading it.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I lost all my hair at age two due to a disease.All I wanted growing up was to fit in.I would look at all the beautiful girls and think, “If I had hair, I would be beautiful, too.”
I wore a wig (假发) and was teased for it.They would call me “bald (秃头)” or say, “Lindsay has no hair.” They were right, so I just let them bully me.And I felt like I deserved it.
Sports became my escape, and I was fortunate to have athletic ability.I would race home every day and play basketball in my driveway for hours.I would pretend to make the game-winning shot.The crowd would go wild.I never thought about my bald head during these moments, but rather who I wanted to become and what I wanted to accomplish.
I started to gain recognition from others.I became known as a girl who was good at basketball, not just as the girl who didn't have hair.I was still bullied, but it began to bother me less because I had another distraction.I put all my time and energy into basketball and becoming the best player I could be.
In my senior year of college, I wanted to run the marathon in my town to check this athletic endeavor off my wish list.I barely trained and thought it was just running.I was wrong in countless ways.
I had no idea at the time that this 26.2-mile run would change my life and attitude in more ways than I could have imagined.During that run, something clicked inside me.I felt strong, fierce, and truly like Superwoman.I had never felt this way before, not even during the other sporting games I had played in.I will never forget the feeling of crossing the finish line, all the emotions I felt, and the way everyone celebrated me.I fell in love with the sport and knew I wanted to become a runner.
I began running marathons all over the country.The more I ran, the stronger and more confident I felt.I slowly started to talk about my hair to close friends and even went out walking without my wig.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Then one day, on a hot twenty-mile training run, I took off my wig halfway.____________________________________________________
Two weeks later, I ran my first marathon, bald. 　
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Then one day, on a hot twenty-mile training run, I took off my wig halfway. Seeing me running without my wig, the people around me was a little shocked.Some even whispered and wondered why I did it.They thought I would not dare to take off my wig and hid my bald head in my whole life.But when they realized that I had had enough confidence to face my true self, they all felt relieved and happy for me.They showed their support to me and thought highly of my braveness.
Two weeks later, I ran my first marathon, bald. All my friends and classmates went to cheer me up.Though there was a little difference between me and other competitors, who were also confused why I was bold, I didn't think that we had any difference.I just spared no effort to run and adjust my breath.With confidence, I crossed the finish line first.All the audience cheered loudly for me.My parents were proud of me as well.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Every time we open a magazine, turn on the TV, or drive past a billboard, we see how far our personal reality is from the standard publicized by the media. 1 .Here are some thoughts that help you embrace your true beauty.
Look around you
Take a good look at the people in your life that you love — your parents, your siblings, and your close friends.It's likely that most of them aren't as beautiful as public figures, and yet, are they not beautiful to you Look at the familiar faces, the warm smiles, the kind gestures, the comforting bodies and arms that embrace you. 2 .You see them as truly beautiful people — and they view you the same way.
Stop struggling
There are some elements of our faces and bodies we simply cannot change. 3 .Struggles and resistance do nothing but push us further away from recognizing our true beauty.
4
Sometimes we become so disconnected from our true beauty that we neglect and mistreat our bodies, further making us less confident.But as you begin to treat your body more lovingly, you will feel better mentally and physically, affording the clarity to recognize your true inner and outer beauty.Feed your body with nutritious foods.Move your body through exercise every day for at least twenty to thirty minutes. 5 .
As Kahlil Gibran said，“Beauty is not in face；beauty is a light in the heart.” Allow the light in your heart to shine for yourself and others, and in so doing, your entire being will glow with a fire of beauty.
A．Take care of your body
B．Ignore those looking ugly
C．Break the bad habits that are harming your body
D．Beauty is the best version of yourself, inside and outside
E．Each person has an inner beauty that makes them who they are
F．Rather than struggling against these things, accept them with love
G．But “true beauty” is much more than having a model-perfect appearance
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了一些可以帮助我们拥抱自己真正的美的建议。
1．选G　上文提到，媒体上展示的“美”脱离了现实生活；再根据下文“Here are some thoughts that help you embrace your true beauty.”可知，选项应与上文构成转折关系，说明“真正的美”的内涵且引出下文。故选项G“但‘真正的美’并不仅仅是拥有完美的外表”符合语境。
2．选E　上文提到，他们中的大多数人虽然没有完美的外表，但是他们所拥有的美好品质也让他们看起来很美。故选项E“每个人都有内在美，他们的内在美决定了他们是怎样的人”承接上文，符合语境。
3．选F　上文提到，我们无法改变外表和身体中的一些元素；下文告诫我们，不要去抵制这些无法改变的元素。故选项F“与其和这些事情作斗争，不如用爱去接受它们”承上启下，符合语境。
4．选A　空处是小标题。本段围绕爱护自己的身体而展开，故选项A“照顾好自己的身体”能够概括本段主旨。
5．选C　上文提到的都是照顾好自己身体的好习惯，故选项C“改掉那些伤害你身体的坏习惯”承接上文，符合语境。1 / 5
Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing about a literary work
本单元的写作任务是写一篇文学作品评论。文学评论的对象是文学作品(小说、诗歌、散文、戏剧、影视等)。写作时，要首先介绍所要评论的文学作品；主体部分简述作品情节并讨论作品的主题和意义；结尾总结时，通过对文学作品的思想内容、创作风格、艺术特点等方面进行评论、评价，启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Part 1(Para.1) A general introduction of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
Part 2(Paras.2～4) The main plot of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
Part 3(Para.5) The central theme of the book The Picture of Dorian Gray.
(二)根据教材课文可总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学逻辑衔接
本文以时间为经线，以肖像画的变化为纬线，讲述了相貌俊美的贵族少年多里安·格雷见了画家为他所作的画像后，在沃顿勋爵的蛊惑下，向画像许下心愿：美少年青春永葆，所有岁月的沧桑和少年的罪恶都由画像承担，最终却因此而丧命的故事。文章分析了小说中的人物性格、情感变化、寓意象征和文学手法，展现了作者对人性、时间和命运的深刻理解。最后一段揭示主题，以及作者的创作思想。文章层次分明，逻辑顺畅。
三、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
第一段第一句中使用动词短语tell the story of直截了当地介绍故事主旨。第二段首句中的动词短语start with，第三段首句中的soon afterwards以及第四段第二句中的for the next 18 years等衔接过渡词汇的使用使得故事情节通顺连贯。第二段第三句中的Fascinated，第三段第二句中的heartlessly，第四段第五句中的fearful和倒数第二句中的desperate都准确描写了主人公情感和性格的变化。第二段尾句中的young and good looking和第四段尾句中的old and awful形成强烈对比，同时也揭示了故事的主题。
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段第三句使用分词短语Fascinated by his words解释故事的起因，并使用with复合结构with his portrait growing old instead of him为主人公的悲剧结局埋下伏笔。
(2)第四段首句使用so that引导目的状语从句，承上启下，使语言表达富有变化。倒数第二句中，分词短语Feeling desperate描写了主人公的情感变化，强调句it is he who is killed则揭示了主人公的悲剧结局。
(3)最后一段首句使用what引导主语从句，以及that引导的两个表语从句，揭示故事的主题思想，表达了作者对于“美”的看法。
①______________________________， I kept on practising, which resulted in the flexibility of my body. (fascinated)
我对跳绳很着迷，不断练习，这使我的身体变得灵活。
②________________________________________________， I do hope you can offer me the precious opportunity. (desperate)
我渴望有机会成为一名志愿者，我的确希望您给我这个宝贵的机会。　　
③________________________________________________ I realized that he had made great contributions to our country.(强调句)
正是通过这次独特的经历，我意识到他对我们的国家做出了巨大贡献。
④He went to the lecture hall early, ____________________________________.(so that)
他早早就去了演讲厅，想找个好座位。
　具体写作指导
How to write about a literary work
——如何写一篇文学作品评论
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a book.
Part 2 Main body (introduce the detailed plot)．
Part 3 Comments(comment on the book or its value).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　概述作家及其作品
如何开门见山地简介作家及其作品？
1．Jane Eyre is ________________________ the famous British writer Charlotte Brontё and one of the most influential classics __________________________________________.
《简·爱》是英国著名作家夏洛蒂·勃朗特的代表作，也是英国文学史上最具影响力的经典作品之一。
2．The Road Not Taken ________________ Robert Frost, who uses rural scenes ________________________ about life in the poem.
《未选择的路》由罗伯特·弗罗斯特创作，他在诗中用乡村场景来探索关于人生的深层次问题。
3．I ____________________________________， but Harry Porter is __________________.
我喜欢读不同种类的书，但《哈利·波特》是我最喜欢的一本书。
第二部分　详细介绍文学作品的故事情节
1．The work tells that a couple adopted a flexible way to ______________________， who gradually adapted to his new family.
这部作品讲述了一对夫妇采用一种灵活的方法来抚养他们收养的儿子，使他逐渐适应了他的新家庭。
2．The hero is Oliver Twist, an orphan ________________________________________________________.
主人公是奥利弗·特威斯特，一个孤儿，身处一个充满贫困和犯罪的世界。
3．Although ________________________________________________________________， he is always very kind.
虽然生长在黑暗和邪恶的环境中，但他总是很善良。
4．Though at first he ____________________， in the end, ________________________________________， he gains happiness.
虽然一开始他很痛苦，但最终在热心肠的人们的帮助下，他获得了幸福。
第三部分　评价文学作品
1．This novel ________________ its lovely details and its expression of belief in man's ability ____________________________.
这部小说以其优美的细节和对人在大自然中独处时的能力的信仰而闻名于世。
2．What I have to admit is that this work is wonderful, such as ________________________________________________________________________________________.
我不得不承认的是这部作品很好，比如它对人物外貌的优美的描写和对人物性格的栩栩如生的刻画。
3．The story is very long but I am very interested in it, for it's the best book __________________.
这个故事很长，但是我很感兴趣，因为这是我读过的最好的书。
4．The publication of Great Expectations, which __________________________________________________， strengthened Dickens' status as a leading novelist.
《远大前程》这部小说的出版发行受到各界的评论和高度赞扬，它巩固了狄更斯作为顶尖小说家的地位。
[针对练笔]
请写一篇介绍小说《百万英镑》(The Million Pound Bank Note)的短文，要求包括如下内容：
1．作者：Mark Twain
2．语言风格：幽默、讽刺
3．故事梗概：伦敦的两位富翁打赌，把一张无法兑现的百万支票借给落魄的美国穷人亨利·亚当，看他在一个月内如何收场。一个月的期限到了，亨利不仅没有饿死或被捕，反倒成了富翁，并且赢得了一位漂亮小姐的芳心。
4．你印象最深的地方。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全习作
The novel The Million Pound Bank Note ①__________________________ (由马克·吐温创作), a great American writer, ②__________________________________________ (讲述了一个身无分文的美国人的故事), Henry Adams, who experiences an unbelievable adventure in London.
Two rich men in London have a bet on Henry and want to see ③________________________ (他会怎么样) a month later, if they give him a million pound bank note which can't be cashed for even a penny. A month later, ④__________________ (令他们惊奇的是), Henry isn't starved nor arrested, but becomes a millionaire dramatically. What's more, he even wins the love of a pretty lady.
⑤____________________________ (给我印象最深的) is the humorous and sarcastic language through which Mark Twain successfully depicted the interesting story. Moreover, in the story, Henry's note is only exhibited for the eyes of others as a symbol of wealth. On second thought, maybe ⑥________________________________________________________ (不是亨利，而是人们对金钱的疯狂热爱) fools the world.
写作素材储备
1．介绍文学作品
①adapt vt.　　　　　　 改编
②comic adj. 喜剧的
③tragic adj. 悲剧的
④hero n. 主人公；英雄
⑤heroine n. 女主人公；女英雄
⑥The fairy tales are my favourites, such as Grimm's Fairy Tales, Anderson's Fairy Tales and so on.
童话故事是我最喜欢的，比如《格林童话》《安徒生童话》等。
⑦His Dark Materials, created by English writer Philip Pullman, is one of the greatest fantasy stories ever written.
由英国作家菲利普·普尔曼创作的《黑暗物质三部曲》是有史以来最伟大的奇幻小说之一。
⑧There are three books in the series, Northern Lights, The Subtle Knife and The Amber Spyglass.
该系列由三本书构成：《北极光》《魔法神刀》和《琥珀望远镜》。
2．评价文学作品
①humorous adj.　 　 幽默的
②surprising adj. 令人感到惊讶的；出人意料的
③achievement n. 成就
④depressed adj. 沮丧的
⑤give an account of 描述
⑥is acknowledged as 被公认为
⑦We are always finding new beauties in Shakespeare's poetry.
我们总会在莎士比亚的诗歌中发现新的美妙之处。
⑧The line written by Wang Bo “A bosom friend afar brings a distant land near” wipes away the sorrow of departure and has become a famous saying to express friendship.
王勃的这句诗“海内存知己，天涯若比邻”抹去了离别的悲伤，成为表达友谊的名言。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作　
①Fascinated by rope skipping　②Desperate to have the opportunity to be a volunteer　③It was through the unique experience that　④so that he would get a good seat
具体写作指导　
第二步　第一部分：1.a masterpiece of; in the history of British literature　2.is written by; to explore deep questions
3．enjoy reading different kinds of books; my favorite one
第二部分：1.bring up their adopted son　2.thrown into a world full of poverty and crime　3.growing in a dark and evil environment　4.suffers a lot; with warm hearted people's help
第三部分：1.is famous for; when left alone in nature
2．its beautiful description of people's appearances and vivid depiction of characters　3.I've ever read
4．was both widely reviewed and highly praised
[针对练笔]
①written by Mark Twain　②tells the story of a penniless American　③what will become of him　④to their surprise
⑤What impresses me most
⑥it is not Henry, but people's crazy love for money that1 / 4
UNIT 1　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is set in London, which tells of the tragic life experience of an orphan named Oliver.(用现在分词短语升级)
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2．This book, Chicken Soup for the Soul, which was written by Jack Canfield, became a bestseller.(用过去分词短语作定语升级)
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3．That Henry's bank note is not even spent but is only shown to others as a symbol of wealth impresses me most.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
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4．We come to realize what is the real “truth” through the Little Prince's journey.(用强调句升级，强调状语)
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5．Even though the situation was hard, he still held on to hope and kindness.(用no matter how升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．The novel, Journey to the West, ____________________________ (由吴承恩所写), is an outstanding romantic work ____________________________ (充满奇异故事)．
2．The story is filled with a tender feeling and kindness, ________________________ (传达了一种信息) that ______________________________ (无论我们遇到什么困难), we should take a positive attitude to life and never give up.
3．____________________________________ (被这个鼓舞人心的故事所感动), I learn that ________________________ (无论我们发生什么事), we should never lose hope.
4．__________________________________________ (正是希望、善良和勇敢) inspire us to keep moving.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter上周在邮件中提到他想阅读中国著名的小说，就此请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．推荐一本小说；
2．此书内容简介；
3．给出阅读建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels.　
　
　
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I lost all my hair at age two due to a disease.All I wanted growing up was to fit in.I would look at all the beautiful girls and think, “If I had hair, I would be beautiful, too.”
I wore a wig (假发) and was teased for it.They would call me “bald (秃头)” or say, “Lindsay has no hair.” They were right, so I just let them bully me.And I felt like I deserved it.
Sports became my escape, and I was fortunate to have athletic ability.I would race home every day and play basketball in my driveway for hours.I would pretend to make the game winning shot.The crowd would go wild.I never thought about my bald head during these moments, but rather who I wanted to become and what I wanted to accomplish.
I started to gain recognition from others.I became known as a girl who was good at basketball, not just as the girl who didn't have hair.I was still bullied, but it began to bother me less because I had another distraction.I put all my time and energy into basketball and becoming the best player I could be.
In my senior year of college, I wanted to run the marathon in my town to check this athletic endeavor off my wish list.I barely trained and thought it was just running.I was wrong in countless ways.
I had no idea at the time that this 26.2 mile run would change my life and attitude in more ways than I could have imagined.During that run, something clicked inside me.I felt strong, fierce, and truly like Superwoman.I had never felt this way before, not even during the other sporting games I had played in.I will never forget the feeling of crossing the finish line, all the emotions I felt, and the way everyone celebrated me.I fell in love with the sport and knew I wanted to become a runner.
I began running marathons all over the country.The more I ran, the stronger and more confident I felt.I slowly started to talk about my hair to close friends and even went out walking without my wig.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Then one day, on a hot twenty mile training run, I took off my wig halfway. 　
　
　
　
Two weeks later, I ran my first marathon, bald. 　
　
　
　
　
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Every time we open a magazine, turn on the TV, or drive past a billboard, we see how far our personal reality is from the standard publicized by the media.__1__.Here are some thoughts that help you embrace your true beauty.
Look around you
Take a good look at the people in your life that you love — your parents, your siblings, and your close friends.It's likely that most of them aren't as beautiful as public figures, and yet, are they not beautiful to you Look at the familiar faces, the warm smiles, the kind gestures, the comforting bodies and arms that embrace you.__2__.You see them as truly beautiful people — and they view you the same way.
Stop struggling
There are some elements of our faces and bodies we simply cannot change.__3__.Struggles and resistance do nothing but push us further away from recognizing our true beauty.
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Sometimes we become so disconnected from our true beauty that we neglect and mistreat our bodies, further making us less confident.But as you begin to treat your body more lovingly, you will feel better mentally and physically, affording the clarity to recognize your true inner and outer beauty.Feed your body with nutritious foods.Move your body through exercise every day for at least twenty to thirty minutes.__5__.
As Kahlil Gibran said，“Beauty is not in face；beauty is a light in the heart.” Allow the light in your heart to shine for yourself and others, and in so doing, your entire being will glow with a fire of beauty.
A．Take care of your body
B．Ignore those looking ugly
C．Break the bad habits that are harming your body
D．Beauty is the best version of yourself, inside and outside
E．Each person has an inner beauty that makes them who they are
F．Rather than struggling against these things, accept them with love
G．But “true beauty” is much more than having a model perfect appearance
UNIT 1　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Oliver Twist written by Charles Dickens is set in London, telling of the tragic life experience of an orphan named Oliver.
2．This book, ChickenSoup for the Soul, written by Jack Canfield, became a bestseller.
3．What impresses me most is that Henry's bank note is not even spent but is only shown to others as a symbol of wealth.
4．It is through the Little Prince's journey that we come to realize what is the real “truth”．
5．No matter how hard the situation was, he still held on to hope and kindness.
Ⅱ.1.written by Wu Cheng'en; full of fantastic tales
2．conveying a message; no matter what difficulty we have
3．Moved by this inspiring story; whatever happens to us
4．It is hope, kindness and braveness that
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Dear Peter，
I'm very glad to know that you have interest in Chinese novels.Generally, there are so many famous novels written in Chinese, including classical novels and modern novels.I'd like to recommend A Dream of Red Mansions, a classical novel, to you, which is an interesting novel and is excellent beyond comparison.Based on Jia and Lin's love story, it describes a tragedy about love and the decline of a big family, which exposes the social crisis.
The book is written in old Chinese, which is difficult to understand.So when you read it, you'd better get a Chinese dictionary ready for reference.In addition, I suggest that you should learn some background knowledge about the Qing Dynasty.
I wish you would have fun and learn something by reading it.
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Then one day, on a hot twenty mile training run, I took off my wig halfway. Seeing me running without my wig, the people around me was a little shocked.Some even whispered and wondered why I did it.They thought I would not dare to take off my wig and hid my bald head in my whole life.But when they realized that I had had enough confidence to face my true self, they all felt relieved and happy for me.They showed their support to me and thought highly of my braveness.
Two weeks later, I ran my first marathon, bald. All my friends and classmates went to cheer me up.Though there was a little difference between me and other competitors, who were also confused why I was bold, I didn't think that we had any difference.I just spared no effort to run and adjust my breath.With confidence, I crossed the finish line first.All the audience cheered loudly for me.My parents were proud of me as well.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍了一些可以帮助我们拥抱自己真正的美的建议。
1．选G　上文提到，媒体上展示的“美”脱离了现实生活；再根据下文“Here are some thoughts that help you embrace your true beauty.”可知，选项应与上文构成转折关系，说明“真正的美”的内涵且引出下文。故选项G“但‘真正的美’并不仅仅是拥有完美的外表”符合语境。
2．选E　上文提到，他们中的大多数人虽然没有完美的外表，但是他们所拥有的美好品质也让他们看起来很美。故选项E“每个人都有内在美，他们的内在美决定了他们是怎样的人”承接上文，符合语境。
3．选F　上文提到，我们无法改变外表和身体中的一些元素；下文告诫我们，不要去抵制这些无法改变的元素。故选项F“与其和这些事情作斗争，不如用爱去接受它们”承上启下，符合语境。
4．选A　空处是小标题。本段围绕爱护自己的身体而展开，故选项A“照顾好自己的身体”能够概括本段主旨。
5．选C　上文提到的都是照顾好自己身体的好习惯，故选项C“改掉那些伤害你身体的坏习惯”承接上文，符合语境。

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