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Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing an expository essay)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
　(写作项目——Writing an expository essay)
本单元的写作任务是介绍一位具有工匠精神的人物，属于人物介绍类说明文。写作时，首先应对要介绍的人物进行概括说明，然后结合其典型事迹分析该人物的形象，最后作出评价，总结该人物的精神品质。
由教材学写作
(二)根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
第一段第一句作者使用设问的修辞手法，引出本文的话题。设问是一种常见的修辞手法，使用设问句，可以增强文章对读者的吸引力，可以更强烈地表达作者的想法，引导读者更深入地思考。
三、学逻辑衔接
本文属于“总—分—总”结构。第一段引入话题；第二至第四段第一句均为各段的主旨句，分别描述了雷氏家族主宰皇宫建筑时间之久、建筑技艺之超群以及成就之斐然和勤奋、谦虚的高尚品质；最后一段句首使用with介词短语承上启下，概括文章大意，并呼应主题。

四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段第一句作者使用高级词汇have in common，通过比较故宫、圆明园和承德避暑山庄的相同点引出本文的话题——雷氏家族。
(2)最后一段作者使用高级词汇remarkable skills, innovation, diligence和humility，对雷氏家族给予高度评价。
仿写训练|完成句子
We should put aside our differences and ______________________
________________.
我们应该抛开分歧，讨论我们的共同点。
discuss the things that we
have in common
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段最后一句中作者使用了so ...that ...引导的结果状语从句的倒装句，生动形象地描绘了雷氏家族高超的建筑技艺。第三段第二句使用了“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句，展现了雷氏家族精巧的网格系统给建筑领域带来的难以磨灭的影响。
(2)最后一段作者使用了that (第一个that)引导的同位语从句表明自己的观点，同时表达了对雷氏家族的赞美和钦佩。
仿写训练|完成句子
①________________________we cannot waste it.
时间是如此宝贵，我们不能浪费它。
②I enjoy every happy moment despite the fact _______________
______________.
尽管训练生活真的很辛苦，但我享受每一个幸福的时刻。
So precious is time that
that training life is
really difficult
具体写作指导
How to write an expository essay to introduce someone with a craftsman's spirit
——如何介绍一位具有工匠精神的人
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Beginning: a brief introduction to ...
Part 2 Main body：organising paragraphs with supporting evidence and facts.
Part 3 Conclusion：a comprehensive assessment (achievements and contributions)
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　引入话题
1．The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, a famous scientist known as “the Father of China's Space Program”．(用同位语)
我最敬佩的人是钱学森，一位被誉为“中国航天之父”的著名科学家。
2．Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, _____________________________________the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria. (用定语从句)
在所有杰出人物中，我最钦佩的是屠呦呦。她因在治疗疟疾方面取得的巨大成就而于2015年荣获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。她是首位获得该奖项的中国科学家。
who is the first Chinese scientist awarded
3．Deng Jiaxian is__________________________________, who is known to the world as the founder and promoter of China's nuclear weapon cause.
邓稼先是中国最受尊敬的科学家之一，他是世界公认的中国核武器事业的创始人和推动者。
one of China's most respected scientists
第二部分　介绍人物的生平及成就
1．常用词汇
①_________ adj.　 　 　 熟练的；有技能的
②__________ adj. 技术(上)的
③___________ adj. 坚定的；有决心的
④____________ adj. 有责任心的
⑤___________ adj. 自信的
skilled
technical
determined
responsible
confident
⑥diligent adj. _______
⑦virtue n. ____________
⑧dignity n. ____________
⑨intelligence n. ________________
⑩be equipped with _________________________
be devoted to ________
勤奋的
美德；品行
尊贵；高尚
智力；才智；智慧
配备着/具有(知识、技能等)
致力于
2．常用句式
①He ___________________his new craftsmanship.
他因他的新手艺而出名。
②A famous craftsman showed us _______________clay figures and displayed many of his art works,___________________________.
一位著名的工匠向我们展示了如何制作泥人，并展示了他的许多艺术作品，这些作品都获得了很高的评价。
became famous for
how to make
which are highly regarded
③Fan Zhongyan, who _________________a great Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, was highly appreciated for his great contributions to society.
范仲淹被认为是中国宋代的杰出作家和政治家，因他对社会做出的巨大的贡献而受到高度赞扬。
was considered as
④________________________is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.”
令我印象最深的是他的名言：“天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。”
What impresses me most
第三部分　总结或发表评论
1．He _______________________researching on rice.
他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。
2．Furthermore, he___________________________________,
dedication as well as intelligence.
此外，他还因其毅力、奉献精神以及聪明才智而受到高度赞扬。
has devoted all his life to
is highly praised for perseverance
3．Having set a great example to me, she ____________________by many people.
她为我树立了一个很好的榜样，受到很多人的高度评价。
4．____________________craftsman's spirit plays a critical role in today's fast-paced world.
毫无疑问，在当今快节奏的世界里，工匠精神起着至关重要的作用。
was highly thought of
There is no doubt that
5．Therefore, let's___________________________________, devote ourselves to work, sharpen our skills and overcome difficulties with perseverance!
因此，让我们跟随那些伟大的工匠的脚步，全身心投入工作，磨砺技艺，用毅力战胜困难！
follow in those great craftsmen's steps
[针对练笔]
请根据下面提示写一篇关于工匠精神的说明文。
1．马宇，秦始皇帝陵博物院文物修复师，他能在毫厘之间把握分寸，重现旷世兵马俑。
2．工作环境十分艰苦，每当夏季来临，覆盖着大棚的兵马俑坑就成了大蒸笼，坑内的温度甚至会达到40摄氏度以上，要在这样的环境中持续保持冷静是最难的。一件兵马俑的修复往往耗时一年，甚至更久。
3．“敬畏文物”成为影响马宇一生的信念。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Ma Yu, a cultural relics restorer at the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Mausoleum Museum, can restore the Terracotta Warriors to their original state by paying attention to the slightest details.①__________
_____________________________ (那里的工作条件非常艰苦).
The working
conditions there are very harsh
②____________________ (当夏天来临时), the Terracotta Warriors' pit, which is covered with a greenhouse, turns into a huge steamer box.The temperature in the pit ③________________ (甚至可以达到) more than 40 degrees Celsius.It is the most difficult to keep calm in such an environment. ④__________________________ (常常需要一年或更长时间) to restore a single terracotta warrior.
“Awing cultural relics” becomes a belief that influences Ma Yu's whole life.
When summer comes
can even reach
It often takes a year or more
写作素材储备
1．介绍人物品质
①intelligent adj.　　　　　　 聪明的；明智的
②outstanding adj. 杰出的
③talented/gifted adj. 有才能的；天才的
④capable adj. 有能力的；有才能的
⑤creative adj. 有创造力的
⑥strong-willed adj. 意志坚强的
⑦diligence and patience 勤奋和耐心
⑧faith and spirits 信念和精神
⑨the spirit of craftsman 工匠精神
2．评价人物品质
①He/She devoted all his/her life to the work to make great contributions to the advance of society.
他/她毕生都致力于工作，对社会的发展做出巨大贡献。
②What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life, which not only inspires me to be a man of integrity but also sets a great example to me.
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲学，这不仅激励我做一个正直的人，而且为我树立了一个很好的榜样。
③In addition to their great achievements, they showed diligence and patience.
除了辉煌的成就之外，他们还展现了勤奋和耐心。
④They didn't seek fame or fortune and lived an indifferent life to them.
他们不追求名利，过着淡泊名利的生活。
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.(用定语从句升级)
→____________________________________________________
________________________________________
Thomas Edison, who was born in America, was a great scientist
and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.
2．I appreciate his landscape poems most, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
→____________________________________________________
___________________________________________
What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are
clear and natural in words with profound messages.
3．In his life, he always came up with new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, and many of them still have a great influence on our life today.(用“介词＋which”引导的定语从句升级)
→______________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
_____________
In his life, he always came up with new ideas and had more
than 1,000 inventions, many of which still have a great influence on
our life today.
4．Our oral English teacher is so good a teacher that we all love him very much.(用倒装句升级)
→______________________________________________________
__________________
So good a teacher is our oral English teacher that we all love
him very much.
5．Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering polonium and radium, which enabled her to become the first woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physics and in Chemistry.(用非谓语动词升级)
→_____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________
Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering polonium
and radium, enabling her to become the first woman scientist to win
the Nobel Prize in Physics and in Chemistry.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Lao She, one of the best-known Chinese writers, ___________
__________ (深深扎根于) Chinese society and ___________(因……著名) his novels and plays.
2．He is _______________________________________ (一个如此富有精力和耐心的年轻人以至于) everyone that knows him likes to make friends with him.
is deeply
rooted in
famous for
so energetic and patient a young man that
3．He leaves a good impression on me because of _____________
______________________________ (对我们社会做出的巨大贡献)．
4．I admire Helen because although she became deaf and blind when 19 months old, she was very optimistic about life, ___________
________________________(她给我们所有人树立了一个好榜样)．
5．I want to learn from her and ____________________________
(对我们的社会产生影响)．
the great
contributions made to our society
who set an
excellent example to all of us
make a difference to our society
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科技名人。
姓名 梁建英 出生年份 1972年
职务 高铁设计师
主要经历 (1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作 (2)研制出时速300～350千米的高速动车组 (3)2015年获奖
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：高速动车组high-speed EMU
_____________________________________________________
参考范文：
Liang Jianying, general designer of the China high-speed EMU, was born in 1972. Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting all her time to the development of China's high-speed railway.Afterwards, she invented the 300－350 km/h high-speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high-speed railways all over the world. As a consequence, she was awarded in 2015. However, she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. From her，I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a bright, sunny day and Amelia was on the way to the grocery store that was not far from her house.
Suddenly, she saw an old man holding a cardboard sign (纸牌) near a street crossing.Although some stores hired people to hold signs around to attract business, this man was sitting on the ground, so Amelia thought he was homeless and asking for money.Luckily, she had some bills in her wallet and decided to give him some.
As she got closer, she offered him a $5 bill.To her complete shock, the man refused it.“No, madam.I don't need money.What I really need is a job，” the old man said.
Amelia walked a few steps more to get a good look at his cardboard sign.It read：“A shoemaker is looking for work.I can repair any kind of footwear！” She realized the man was actually not a homeless man begging for money.“Oh! You're a shoemaker.I think many factories out there will offer you some jobs，” she told the man, finally noticing some of his tools around him.
“No, miss.At my age, no one wants to hire me anymore, so I'm trying to find some work this way.If you know someone who needs shoe repair, please let them know about me，” the man said.
Amelia nodded, thinking about a few pairs of shoes at home that needed repairing.Generally, she would donate them and buy new ones, but if this man could repair them, she could keep using them.“What's your name, sir？” Amelia asked.
“I'm Martin, young lady，” he said and smiled at her.“OK, sir.I have to go shopping now, but I'll return with a few pairs of shoes that need some fixing，” Amelia told him with a smile and then walked towards the store.After she finished her shopping, she went back home.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.　
_______________________________________________________
That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture.
________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.“How much would it be？” she asked.“I'll work on them and have them ready by tomorrow.It'll be $10.Would that be alright？” the man asked, watching her expression to see if that was a fair price.“Of course！” Amelia replied, smiling widely.The following day, Martin gave Amelia her shoes and they were in fantastic shape.“Sir, you are skilled！” Amelia said.At that moment, she had an idea of further helping Martin.She took a picture of the man with his sign and went home.
That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture.There were tons of messages on the post the following day.She told Martin about the success of her post and asked for his address.People started mailing shoes to him directly.Martin became famous all of a sudden.Everyone who needed footwear repairing went to him, and he eventually ended up opening a shoe store.Martin made Amelia a unique pair of shoes, grateful for her kindness that changed his life.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Self-disciplined people are not all outstanding people. 1 Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late. The real difference between an elite person and an ordinary person is that an elite person can manage his or her time well. 2
What people call self-discipline is in fact self-management. One example is staying fit. Never underestimate someone who is in good shape. Anyone who has ever tried to lose weight knows that it's not easy. 3 If someone is in good shape, it shows that he knows the principles of staying fit and is able to stick to a plan that uses these principles.
If someone is in good shape, it means that this person is good at managing themselves and their time. 4 It also shows that this person is able to keep persevering and can balance long-term goals with short-term goals. So if someone is in good shape, he or she is more than just healthy.
5 First of all, set a goal and write down your reasons for wanting to achieve it. Create a list of all the things you need to do to achieve this goal and start to work on them one at a time. With self-discipline, small things in life will no longer trouble you. Only through self-discipline can you truly own your future.
A．How do you learn self-management
B．That's where their success comes from.
C．It's even harder to avoid putting weight back on.
D．Whether it is natural or acquired, it is a great skill.
E．This skill gives you the power to stick to your decisions.
F．But nearly all outstanding people are self-disciplined people.
G．Self-discipline means self control, which is a sign of inner strength.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了自律的人并不都是优秀的人，但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人。文章论述了自律的重要性以及进行自我管理的方法。
1．选F　根据上文“Self-disciplined people are not all outstanding people.”以及下文“Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late.”可知，后文列举了一些自律的人的良好行为习惯。本句与上文构成转折，指出杰出的人都很自律。F选项中all outstanding people对应后文中them。故F选项“但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人”符合语境。
2．选B　上文提到，精英能很好地管理自己的时间。本句为本段最后一句，应承接上文，说明这一做法的意义：是他们成功的来源。故B选项“那就是他们成功的来源”符合语境。
3．选C　根据空格前后句可知，本段主要是关于保持健康和好身材的人是如何做的。上文提到减肥并不容易，故本句也应是与体重相关的论述。C选项中weight与上文中weight相对应。故C选项“要避免体重反弹就更难了”符合语境。
4．选D　根据空格前后句可知，本段主要说明了“一个人状态很好，说明这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”。故本句应承接上文，对“这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”这一技能进行评价。故D选项“无论是天生的还是后天习得的，这都是一项了不起的技能”符合语境。
5．选A　根据空后内容可知，本段的主旨是如何进行自我管理。故A选项“你如何学习自我管理？”符合语境。1 / 5
Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing an expository essay
本单元的写作任务是介绍一位具有工匠精神的人物，属于人物介绍类说明文。写作时，首先应对要介绍的人物进行概括说明，然后结合其典型事迹分析该人物的形象，最后作出评价，总结该人物的精神品质。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
　Lead in the topic — the Lei family.
A detailed introduction of the Lei family.
The conclusion of the Lei family.
(二)根据教材课文总结出该类文体的框架：
二、学写作手法
第一段第一句作者使用设问的修辞手法，引出本文的话题。设问是一种常见的修辞手法，使用设问句，可以增强文章对读者的吸引力，可以更强烈地表达作者的想法，引导读者更深入地思考。
三、学逻辑衔接
本文属于“总—分—总”结构。第一段引入话题；第二至第四段第一句均为各段的主旨句，分别描述了雷氏家族主宰皇宫建筑时间之久、建筑技艺之超群以及成就之斐然和勤奋、谦虚的高尚品质；最后一段句首使用with介词短语承上启下，概括文章大意，并呼应主题。
四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段第一句作者使用高级词汇have in common，通过比较故宫、圆明园和承德避暑山庄的相同点引出本文的话题——雷氏家族。
(2)最后一段作者使用高级词汇remarkable skills, innovation, diligence和humility，对雷氏家族给予高度评价。
We should put aside our differences and ______________________________________.
我们应该抛开分歧，讨论我们的共同点。　　
2．亮点句式
(1)第二段最后一句中作者使用了so ...that ...引导的结果状语从句的倒装句，生动形象地描绘了雷氏家族高超的建筑技艺。第三段第二句使用了“介词＋关系代词”引导的定语从句，展现了雷氏家族精巧的网格系统给建筑领域带来的难以磨灭的影响。
(2)最后一段作者使用了that (第一个that)引导的同位语从句表明自己的观点，同时表达了对雷氏家族的赞美和钦佩。
①______________________ we cannot waste it.
时间是如此宝贵，我们不能浪费它。
②I enjoy every happy moment despite the fact ________________________________.
尽管训练生活真的很辛苦，但我享受每一个幸福的时刻。　　
具体写作指导
How to write an expository essay to introduce someone with a craftsman's spirit
——如何介绍一位具有工匠精神的人
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Beginning: a brief introduction to ...
Part 2 Main body：organising paragraphs with supporting evidence and facts.
Part 3 Conclusion：a comprehensive assessment (achievements and contributions)
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　引入话题
1．The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, ______________________________ “the Father of China's Space Program”．(用同位语)
我最敬佩的人是钱学森，一位被誉为“中国航天之父”的著名科学家。
2．Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, ____________________________________________ the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015 for her great achievements in curing malaria. (用定语从句)
在所有杰出人物中，我最钦佩的是屠呦呦。她因在治疗疟疾方面取得的巨大成就而于2015年荣获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。她是首位获得该奖项的中国科学家。
3．Deng Jiaxian is ____________________________________________， who is known to the world as the founder and promoter of China's nuclear weapon cause.
邓稼先是中国最受尊敬的科学家之一，他是世界公认的中国核武器事业的创始人和推动者。
第二部分　介绍人物的生平及成就
1．常用词汇
①____________ adj.　 　 　 熟练的；有技能的
②____________ adj. 技术(上)的
③____________ adj. 坚定的；有决心的
④____________ adj. 有责任心的
⑤____________ adj. 自信的
⑥diligent adj. ____________
⑦virtue n. ____________
⑧dignity n. ____________
⑨intelligence n. ____________
⑩be equipped with ____________
be devoted to ____________
2．常用句式
①He __________________________________ his new craftsmanship.
他因他的新手艺而出名。
②A famous craftsman showed us ________________ clay figures and displayed many of his art works, ________________________.
一位著名的工匠向我们展示了如何制作泥人，并展示了他的许多艺术作品，这些作品都获得了很高的评价。
③Fan Zhongyan, who ____________________ a great Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, was highly appreciated for his great contributions to society.
范仲淹被认为是中国宋代的杰出作家和政治家，因他对社会做出的巨大的贡献而受到高度赞扬。
④______________________________________ is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety nine percent perspiration.”
令我印象最深的是他的名言：“天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。”
第三部分　总结或发表评论
1．He ______________________________ researching on rice.
他把他的一生奉献给了水稻研究。
2．Furthermore, he ______________________________， dedication as well as intelligence.
此外，他还因其毅力、奉献精神以及聪明才智而受到高度赞扬。
3．Having set a great example to me, she ___________________________ by many people.
她为我树立了一个很好的榜样，受到很多人的高度评价。
4．____________________________ craftsman's spirit plays a critical role in today's fast paced world.
毫无疑问，在当今快节奏的世界里，工匠精神起着至关重要的作用。
5．Therefore, let's __________________________________________， devote ourselves to work, sharpen our skills and overcome difficulties with perseverance!
因此，让我们跟随那些伟大的工匠的脚步，全身心投入工作，磨砺技艺，用毅力战胜困难！
[针对练笔]
请根据下面提示写一篇关于工匠精神的说明文。
1．马宇，秦始皇帝陵博物院文物修复师，他能在毫厘之间把握分寸，重现旷世兵马俑。
2．工作环境十分艰苦，每当夏季来临，覆盖着大棚的兵马俑坑就成了大蒸笼，坑内的温度甚至会达到40摄氏度以上，要在这样的环境中持续保持冷静是最难的。一件兵马俑的修复往往耗时一年，甚至更久。
3．“敬畏文物”成为影响马宇一生的信念。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Ma Yu, a cultural relics restorer at the Emperor Qin Shihuang's Mausoleum Museum, can restore the Terracotta Warriors to their original state by paying attention to the slightest details.①__________________________________________________ (那里的工作条件非常艰苦). ②____________________ (当夏天来临时), the Terracotta Warriors' pit, which is covered with a greenhouse, turns into a huge steamer box.The temperature in the pit ③____________________ (甚至可以达到) more than 40 degrees Celsius.It is the most difficult to keep calm in such an environment. ④________________________________ (常常需要一年或更长时间) to restore a single terracotta warrior.
“Awing cultural relics” becomes a belief that influences Ma Yu's whole life.
写作素材储备
1．介绍人物品质
①intelligent adj.　　　　　 聪明的；明智的
②outstanding adj. 杰出的
③talented/gifted adj. 有才能的；天才的
④capable adj. 有能力的；有才能的
⑤creative adj. 有创造力的
⑥strong willed adj. 意志坚强的
⑦diligence and patience 勤奋和耐心
⑧faith and spirits 信念和精神
⑨the spirit of craftsman 工匠精神
2．评价人物品质
①He/She devoted all his/her life to the work to make great contributions to the advance of society.
他/她毕生都致力于工作，对社会的发展做出巨大贡献。
②What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life, which not only inspires me to be a man of integrity but also sets a great example to me.
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲学，这不仅激励我做一个正直的人，而且为我树立了一个很好的榜样。
③In addition to their great achievements, they showed diligence and patience.
除了辉煌的成就之外，他们还展现了勤奋和耐心。
④They didn't seek fame or fortune and lived an indifferent life to them.
他们不追求名利，过着淡泊名利的生活。
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作　
四、1.discuss the things that we have in common
2．①So precious is time that　②that training life is really difficult
具体写作指导　
第二步　第一部分：1.a famous scientist known as
2．who is the first Chinese scientist awarded
3．one of China's most respected scientists
第二部分：1.①skilled　②technical　③determined
④responsible　⑤confident　⑥勤奋的　⑦美德；品行
⑧尊贵；高尚　⑨智力；才智；智慧
⑩配备着/具有(知识、技能等)　 致力于
2．①became famous for　②how to make; which are highly regarded　③was considered as　④What impresses me most
第三部分：1.has devoted all his life to　2.is highly praised for perseverance　3.was highly thought of　4.There is no doubt that　5.follow in those great craftsmen's steps
[针对练笔]
①The working conditions there are very harsh　②When summer comes　③can even reach　④It often takes a year or more1 / 4
UNIT 2　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Thomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.(用定语从句升级)
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2．I appreciate his landscape poems most, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.(用what引导的主语从句升级)
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3．In his life, he always came up with new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, and many of them still have a great influence on our life today.(用“介词＋which”引导的定语从句升级)
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4．Our oral English teacher is so good a teacher that we all love him very much.(用倒装句升级)
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5．Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering polonium and radium, which enabled her to become the first woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physics and in Chemistry.(用非谓语动词升级)
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　Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．Lao She, one of the best known Chinese writers, ________________________ (深深扎根于) Chinese society and ____________ (因……著名) his novels and plays.
2．He is ______________________________ (一个如此富有精力和耐心的年轻人以至于) everyone that knows him likes to make friends with him.
3．He leaves a good impression on me because of __________________________________________ (对我们社会做出的巨大贡献)．
4．I admire Helen because although she became deaf and blind when 19 months old, she was very optimistic about life, ____________________________________________ (她给我们所有人树立了一个好榜样)．
5．I want to learn from her and ________________________________ (对我们的社会产生影响)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科技名人。
姓名 梁建英 出生年份 1972年
职务 高铁设计师
主要经历 (1)1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作(2)研制出时速300～350千米的高速动车组(3)2015年获奖
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：高速动车组high speed EMU
　
　
　
　
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a bright, sunny day and Amelia was on the way to the grocery store that was not far from her house.
Suddenly, she saw an old man holding a cardboard sign (纸牌) near a street crossing.Although some stores hired people to hold signs around to attract business, this man was sitting on the ground, so Amelia thought he was homeless and asking for money.Luckily, she had some bills in her wallet and decided to give him some.
As she got closer, she offered him a $5 bill.To her complete shock, the man refused it.“No, madam.I don't need money.What I really need is a job，” the old man said.
Amelia walked a few steps more to get a good look at his cardboard sign.It read：“A shoemaker is looking for work.I can repair any kind of footwear！” She realized the man was actually not a homeless man begging for money.“Oh! You're a shoemaker.I think many factories out there will offer you some jobs，” she told the man, finally noticing some of his tools around him.
“No, miss.At my age, no one wants to hire me anymore, so I'm trying to find some work this way.If you know someone who needs shoe repair, please let them know about me，” the man said.
Amelia nodded, thinking about a few pairs of shoes at home that needed repairing.Generally, she would donate them and buy new ones, but if this man could repair them, she could keep using them.“What's your name, sir？” Amelia asked.
“I'm Martin, young lady，” he said and smiled at her.“OK, sir.I have to go shopping now, but I'll return with a few pairs of shoes that need some fixing，” Amelia told him with a smile and then walked towards the store.After she finished her shopping, she went back home.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.　
　
　
　
　
That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture.　
　
　
　
　
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Self disciplined people are not all outstanding people. __1__ Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late. The real difference between an elite person and an ordinary person is that an elite person can manage his or her time well. __2__
What people call self discipline is in fact self management. One example is staying fit. Never underestimate someone who is in good shape. Anyone who has ever tried to lose weight knows that it's not easy. __3__ If someone is in good shape, it shows that he knows the principles of staying fit and is able to stick to a plan that uses these principles.
If someone is in good shape, it means that this person is good at managing themselves and their time. __4__ It also shows that this person is able to keep persevering and can balance long term goals with short term goals. So if someone is in good shape, he or she is more than just healthy.
__5__ First of all, set a goal and write down your reasons for wanting to achieve it. Create a list of all the things you need to do to achieve this goal and start to work on them one at a time. With self discipline, small things in life will no longer trouble you. Only through self discipline can you truly own your future.
A．How do you learn self management
B．That's where their success comes from.
C．It's even harder to avoid putting weight back on.
D．Whether it is natural or acquired, it is a great skill.
E．This skill gives you the power to stick to your decisions.
F．But nearly all outstanding people are self disciplined people.
G．Self discipline means self control, which is a sign of inner strength.
UNIT 2　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Thomas Edison, who was born in America, was a great scientist and inventor full of curiosity and imagination.
2．What I appreciate most are his landscape poems, which are clear and natural in words with profound messages.
3．In his life, he always came up with new ideas and had more than 1,000 inventions, many of which still have a great influence on our life today.
4．So good a teacher is our oral English teacher that we all love him very much.
5．Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering polonium and radium, enabling her to become the first woman scientist to win the Nobel Prize in Physics and in Chemistry.
Ⅱ.1.is deeply rooted in; famous for 　2.so energetic and patient a young man that　3.the great contributions made to our society
4．who set an excellent example to all of us
5．make a difference to our society
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Liang Jianying, general designer of the China high speed EMU, was born in 1972. Since she graduated in 1995, she has been devoting all her time to the development of China's high speed railway.Afterwards, she invented the 300－350 km/h high speed EMU, making it more convenient for us to get around quickly. It is because of her outstanding contributions to our country that China is playing a leading role in high speed railways all over the world. As a consequence, she was awarded in 2015. However, she never shows any signs of pride.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. From her，I realize that we should keep on trying until we realize our dreams.
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Then Amelia returned to Martin and gave him her shoes for repair.“How much would it be？” she asked.“I'll work on them and have them ready by tomorrow.It'll be $10.Would that be alright？” the man asked, watching her expression to see if that was a fair price.“Of course！” Amelia replied, smiling widely.The following day, Martin gave Amelia her shoes and they were in fantastic shape.“Sir, you are skilled！” Amelia said.At that moment, she had an idea of further helping Martin.She took a picture of the man with his sign and went home.
That night, she posted Martin's story online along with the picture.There were tons of messages on the post the following day.She told Martin about the success of her post and asked for his address.People started mailing shoes to him directly.Martin became famous all of a sudden.Everyone who needed footwear repairing went to him, and he eventually ended up opening a shoe store.Martin made Amelia a unique pair of shoes, grateful for her kindness that changed his life.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了自律的人并不都是优秀的人，但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人。文章论述了自律的重要性以及进行自我管理的方法。
1．选F　根据上文“Self disciplined people are not all outstanding people.”以及下文“Some of them read every day. Some of them never run late.”可知，后文列举了一些自律的人的良好行为习惯。本句与上文构成转折，指出杰出的人都很自律。F选项中all outstanding people对应后文中them。故F选项“但是几乎所有杰出的人都是自律的人”符合语境。
2．选B　上文提到，精英能很好地管理自己的时间。本句为本段最后一句，应承接上文，说明这一做法的意义：是他们成功的来源。故B选项“那就是他们成功的来源”符合语境。
3．选C　根据空格前后句可知，本段主要是关于保持健康和好身材的人是如何做的。上文提到减肥并不容易，故本句也应是与体重相关的论述。C选项中weight与上文中weight相对应。故C选项“要避免体重反弹就更难了”符合语境。
4．选D　根据空格前后句可知，本段主要说明了“一个人状态很好，说明这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”。故本句应承接上文，对“这个人善于管理自己和自己的时间”这一技能进行评价。故D选项“无论是天生的还是后天习得的，这都是一项了不起的技能”符合语境。
5．选A　根据空后内容可知，本段的主旨是如何进行自我管理。故A选项“你如何学习自我管理？”符合语境。

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