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Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing about an artwork
本单元的写作任务是介绍一幅艺术作品，属于事物说明文的范畴。对艺术作品的描写，来源于我们对某一件艺术作品的观察及了解，需要用真实灵动的语言将其创作背景、特点及意义表达出来。
|写作技法指导|
(一)品参考范文
This sunflower painting is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh, a great painter from the Netherlands. It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is among his most famous works.
It shows sunflowers in a vase, mostly in three shades of yellow, from bright yellows to brownish yellows. I can see the flowers are at different stages of life — some are just starting to bloom and some are starting to wither.
The painting leaves a great impression on me. I think it shows the meaning of life. Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty, no matter which stage of life it is at. The painting gives me a deeper understanding of life.
(二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构
(三)由范文学写作
1．学行文逻辑
第一段中作者开门见山地简介画作的作者、创作时间以及作品的特点等。这种写作手法直入主题，清晰简洁；第二段简要描述了画作的内容；最后一段点出作者对该作品的评价和感悟，并举例加以说明。文章层次分明，逻辑顺畅。
2．学亮点表达
(1)亮点词汇
①第一段第二句使用介词短语among his most famous works，说明了该艺术品的重要之处。
②第二段第一句中使用副词mostly表达贴切，使用介词短语from ...to呈现了画作的色彩变化。第二句使用介词短语at different stages of life解释色彩变化的寓意，之后紧跟破折号作进一步说明，使之有理有据。
③第三段第一句中的leaves a great impression on强调了这幅画的重要性和影响力，后面的三句话是作者对其的具体阐释和理解。这种化抽象为具体的写作手法令人印象深刻。
(2)亮点句式
①第一段第一句中使用名词短语a great painter from the Netherlands作Vincent van Gogh的同位语。
②第三段第三句使用no matter which引导让步状语从句，用于转折或对比前后两个情况，为主句做铺垫，以使作者的观点更具说服力。
①The activity designed to arouse students' interest in reading books is ________________________________________.
这项旨在激发学生读书兴趣的活动在我们学生中很受欢迎。
②For a healthy diet, you should eat ________________________________________.
至于健康的饮食，你应该主要摄入米饭、面包、蔬菜和水果。
③We also appreciated the finest arts, __________________________________________ the Irish songs, and they left a deep impression on me.
我们也欣赏了从京剧到爱尔兰歌曲等最精美的艺术，它们给我留下了深刻的印象。　　
④Career planning is a must for contemporary college students. ____________________， hopefully, they can all have a bright future.
职业生涯规划是当代大学生的必修课。无论他们做何选择，希望他们都能有一个光明的未来。
|具体写作指导|
How to write about an artwork——如何介绍一幅艺术作品
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a piece of art.
Part 2 Main body (introduce detailed information)．
Part 3 Conclusion (comment on the piece of art or its value).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　概述艺术家及其艺术作品
1．常用词汇
①______________ n．　　　 杰作
②______________ v. 完成
③______________ adj. 视觉的
④______________ v. 展览；展出
⑤______________ n. 雕塑
⑥______________ n. 美术陈列室；画廊
⑦______________ 因/作为……而出名
⑧______________ 擅长
⑨non-material cultural heritage ______________
⑩be kept in good condition ______________
be set in ______________
be regarded as ______________
2．常用句式
①This painting was the best one ____________________________.
这幅画是齐白石画的最好的一幅。
②Mona Lisa is a portrait ________________ Da Vinci during the Italian Renaissance.
《蒙娜丽莎》是达·芬奇在意大利文艺复兴时期创作的一幅肖像画。
③It is perhaps _____________ ...in the world.
它可能是世界上最著名的……
④The Qingming Scroll is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 created by Zhang Zeduan.
《清明上河图》是中国名画之一，由张择端创作。
第二部分　详细介绍艺术作品的相关细节
1．常用词汇
①__________ adj.　　　　 独一无二的
②__________ adj. 令人惊讶的
③__________ adj. 文化的
④__________ v. 代表，描绘，描述
⑤__________ adj. 生动的，活泼的
⑥__________ v. 表明
⑦__________ v. 描述，形容
⑧__________ adj. 生动的；逼真的
⑨creative adj. ______________
⑩abstract adj. ______________
feature v. ______________
have a history ___________ 有……的历史
date back____________... 追溯到……
be impressed__________ 对……印象深刻
be modelled __________ 模仿
2．常用句式
①The colours ____________brown to bright orange or yellow.
颜色从棕色、亮橘色或黄色都有。
②It's painted __________________________.
它主要是用黑白两色画成的。
③The painting ________________ its accurate images of people and scenery.
这幅画以精准的人物和风景形象而出名。
④It shows that a father who is also a farmer is standing there ________________________ and looking at you.
它展示的是一个父亲，也是一个农民，站在那里，手里拿着一个碗，正看着你。
第三部分　评价艺术作品
1．常用词汇
①______________　　 传播中国文化
②______________ 获得……奖
③______________ 传承
④______________ 为了纪念……
⑤______________ 对……讲究/挑剔
2．常用句式
①I am touched and impressed by this painting for the reason that it__________________.
这幅画让我感动和印象深刻，因为它让我想起了我自己的父亲。
②I mean, this painting can be ________________________Mona Lisa in our country.
我的意思是，这幅画在我们国家可能和《蒙娜丽莎》一样重要。
③____________________________________， in which he showed outstanding talent.
给我印象最深的是画家的艺术技巧，他在这方面显示出了过人的天赋。
|随堂针对练笔|
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征文，要求介绍徐悲鸿的《奔马图》。请你写一篇短文进行投稿。内容包括：
1．介绍徐悲鸿和《奔马图》；
2．表达自己的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全作文：
Xu Beihong was one of China's well-known twentieth-century artists ①_______________________________ (他以栩栩如生的骏马图而出名)．
Xu Beihong ②__________________________________________ (遵循中国传统画法), so Galloping Horse is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors.The painting Galloping Horse ③____________________________________________ (不仅呈现了一匹马正向我们奔跑而来), which looks wonderfully alive, ④____________________________________________________________ (而且也显示了这位天才画家的个性和理想)．
In a word, I am too crazy about the painting Galloping Horse，⑤________________________ (已经被列入) the national grade-one cultural relics.
|写作素材储备|
1．作品特点
①The painting describes the traditional Spring Festival scenery.
这幅画描绘了传统春节的场景。
②The sculptor is good at/does well in an elephant sculpture.
这位雕塑家擅长大象雕塑。
③The masterpiece shows that people lived a hard life in ancient times.
这部杰作表现了人们在古代过着艰难的生活。
2．作品价值
①attract one's attention 引起某人的注意
②give a vivid description of 对……进行生动地描述
③in the traditional Chinese style
按照中国传统风格
④Seal cutting is one of the most important creations in the history of China.
篆刻是中国历史上最重要的发明之一。
⑤There is no doubt that the masterpiece plays an important role in the development of sculpture.
毫无疑问，这部杰出的作品在雕塑发展史上起着重要的作用。
Section Ⅵ
(三)2.①very popular among us students
②mostly rice, bread, vegetables and fruit
③ranging from Beijing Opera to
④No matter which choice they make
第一部分
1．①masterpiece　②complete　③visual　④exhibit
⑤sculpture　⑥gallery　⑦be known for/as
⑧be skilled/good at　⑨非物质文化遗产　⑩保存完好
以……为背景　 被认为
2．①which was drawn by Qi Baishi　②painted by
③the most famous　④one of the famous Chinese paintings
第二部分
1．①unique　②amazing　③cultural　④represent　⑤lively
⑥show　⑦describe　⑧vivid　⑨有创造力的
⑩抽象的；深奥的　 以……为特色　 of　 to　 with　 after
2．①range from 　②mostly in black and white　③is known for
④with a bowl in his hand
第三部分
1．①spread Chinese culture　②win an award for　③pass down
④in memory of　⑤be particular about
2．①reminds me of my own father　②as important as
③What impressed me most are the artist's art skills
随堂针对练笔
①who is famous for his lively horse paintings
②followed the traditional Chinese painting method
③not only shows one horse running towards us
④but also represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter
⑤which has been listed in(共55张PPT)
Section Ⅵ　Writing
目 录
课时跟踪检测
写作项目——Writing about an artwork
本单元的写作任务是介绍一幅艺术作品，属于事物说明文的范畴。对艺术作品的描写，来源于我们对某一件艺术作品的观察及了解，需要用真实灵动的语言将其创作背景、特点及意义表达出来。
写作技法指导
(一)品参考范文
This sunflower painting is an oil painting by Vincent van Gogh, a great painter from the Netherlands. It was completed in Arles in 1889 and is among his most famous works.
It shows sunflowers in a vase, mostly in three shades of yellow, from bright yellows to brownish yellows. I can see the flowers are at different stages of life — some are just starting to bloom and some are starting to wither.
The painting leaves a great impression on me. I think it shows the meaning of life. Each of the flowers is trying its best to grow and show its beauty, no matter which stage of life it is at. The painting gives me a deeper understanding of life.
(二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构
(三)由范文学写作
1．学行文逻辑
第一段中作者开门见山地简介画作的作者、创作时间以及作品的特点等。这种写作手法直入主题，清晰简洁；第二段简要描述了画作的内容；最后一段点出作者对该作品的评价和感悟，并举例加以说明。文章层次分明，逻辑顺畅。
2．学亮点表达
(1)亮点词汇
①第一段第二句使用介词短语among his most famous works，说明了该艺术品的重要之处。
②第二段第一句中使用副词mostly表达贴切，使用介词短语from ...to呈现了画作的色彩变化。第二句使用介词短语at different stages of life解释色彩变化的寓意，之后紧跟破折号作进一步说明，使之有理有据。
③第三段第一句中的leaves a great impression on强调了这幅画的重要性和影响力，后面的三句话是作者对其的具体阐释和理解。这种化抽象为具体的写作手法令人印象深刻。
(2)亮点句式
①第一段第一句中使用名词短语a great painter from the Netherlands作Vincent van Gogh的同位语。
②第三段第三句使用no matter which引导让步状语从句，用于转折或对比前后两个情况，为主句做铺垫，以使作者的观点更具说服力。
[提能训练|完成句子]
①The activity designed to arouse students' interest in reading books is _____________________________.
这项旨在激发学生读书兴趣的活动在我们学生中很受欢迎。
②For a healthy diet, you should eat __________________________
________.
至于健康的饮食，你应该主要摄入米饭、面包、蔬菜和水果。
very popular among us students
mostly rice, bread, vegetables
and fruit
③We also appreciated the finest arts, ___________________________ the Irish songs, and they left a deep impression on me.
我们也欣赏了从京剧到爱尔兰歌曲等最精美的艺术，它们给我留下了深刻的印象。
ranging from Beijing Opera to
④Career planning is a must for contemporary college students. _______________________________, hopefully, they can all have a bright future.
职业生涯规划是当代大学生的必修课。无论他们做何选择，希望他们都能有一个光明的未来。　　
No matter which choice they make
具体写作指导
How to write about an artwork——如何介绍一幅艺术作品
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction to a piece of art.
Part 2 Main body (introduce detailed information)．
Part 3 Conclusion (comment on the piece of art or its value).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　概述艺术家及其艺术作品
1．常用词汇
①____________ n．　　　　杰作
②____________ v. 完成
③____________ adj. 视觉的
④____________ v. 展览；展出
masterpiece
complete
visual
exhibit
⑤________________ n. 雕塑
⑥________________ n. 美术陈列室；画廊
⑦________________ 因/作为……而出名
⑧________________ 擅长
⑨non-material cultural heritage ________________
⑩be kept in good condition _____________
be set in _____________
be regarded as _____________
sculpture
gallery
be known for/as
be skilled/good at
非物质文化遗产
保存完好
以……为背景
被认为
2．常用句式
①This painting was the best one ____________________________.
这幅画是齐白石画的最好的一幅。
②Mona Lisa is a portrait ___________ Da Vinci during the Italian Renaissance.
《蒙娜丽莎》是达·芬奇在意大利文艺复兴时期创作的一幅肖像画。
which was drawn by Qi Baishi
painted by
③It is perhaps ________________ ...in the world.
它可能是世界上最著名的……
④The Qingming Scroll is ________________________________ created by Zhang Zeduan.
《清明上河图》是中国名画之一，由张择端创作。
the most famous
one of the famous Chinese paintings
第二部分　详细介绍艺术作品的相关细节
1．常用词汇
①________ adj.　　　　 独一无二的
②________ adj. 令人惊讶的
③________ adj. 文化的
④________ v. 代表，描绘，描述
unique
amazing
cultural
represent
⑤________ adj. 生动的，活泼的
⑥________ v. 表明
⑦________ v. 描述，形容
⑧_________ adj. 生动的；逼真的
⑨creative adj. ____________
lively
show
describe
vivid
有创造力的
⑩abstract adj. ________________
feature v. ________________
have a history ___ 有……的历史
date back ___ ... 追溯到……
be impressed _____ 对……印象深刻
be modelled _____ 模仿
抽象的；深奥的
以……为特色
of
to
with
after
2．常用句式
①The colours ____________ brown to bright orange or yellow.
颜色从棕色、亮橘色或黄色都有。
②It's painted _______________________.
它主要是用黑白两色画成的。
range from
mostly in black and white
③The painting _____________ its accurate images of people and scenery.
这幅画以精准的人物和风景形象而出名。
④It shows that a father who is also a farmer is standing there ______________________ and looking at you.
它展示的是一个父亲，也是一个农民，站在那里，手里拿着一个碗，正看着你。
is known for
with a bowl in his hand
第三部分　评价艺术作品
1．常用词汇
①____________________　 传播中国文化
②____________________ 获得……奖
③____________________ 传承
④____________________ 为了纪念……
⑤____________________ 对……讲究/挑剔
spread Chinese culture
win an award for
pass down
in memory of
be particular about
2．常用句式
①I am touched and impressed by this painting for the reason that it __________________________.
这幅画让我感动和印象深刻，因为它让我想起了我自己的父亲。
②I mean, this painting can be _______________ Mona Lisa in our country.
我的意思是，这幅画在我们国家可能和《蒙娜丽莎》一样重要。
reminds me of my own father
as important as
③___________________________________________, in which he showed outstanding talent.
给我印象最深的是画家的艺术技巧，他在这方面显示出了过人的天赋。
What impressed me most are the artist's art skills
随堂针对练笔
假定你是李华，你校英文报正在征文，要求介绍徐悲鸿的《奔马图》。请你写一篇短文进行投稿。内容包括：
1．介绍徐悲鸿和《奔马图》；
2．表达自己的看法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
根据括号内的汉语提示补全作文：
Xu Beihong was one of China's well-known twentieth-century artists ①_______________________________________ (他以栩栩如生的骏马图而出名)．
who is famous for his lively horse paintings
Xu Beihong ②____________________________________________ (遵循中国传统画法), so Galloping Horse is known for its brush drawings in black inks and natural colors.The painting Galloping Horse ③________________________________________ (不仅呈现了一匹马正向我们奔跑而来), which looks wonderfully alive, ④________
_________________________________________________ (而且也显示了这位天才画家的个性和理想)．
followed the traditional Chinese painting method
not only shows one horse running towards us
but also
represents the personality and ideal of the gifted painter
In a word, I am too crazy about the painting Galloping Horse， ⑤_______________________ (已经被列入) the national grade-one cultural relics.
which has been listed in
写作素材储备
1．作品特点
①The painting describes the traditional Spring Festival scenery.
这幅画描绘了传统春节的场景。
②The sculptor is good at/does well in an elephant sculpture.
这位雕塑家擅长大象雕塑。
③The masterpiece shows that people lived a hard life in ancient times.
这部杰作表现了人们在古代过着艰难的生活。
2．作品价值
①attract one's attention　　 引起某人的注意
②give a vivid description of 对……进行生动地描述
③in the traditional Chinese style 按照中国传统风格
④Seal cutting is one of the most important creations in the history of China.
篆刻是中国历史上最重要的发明之一。
⑤There is no doubt that the masterpiece plays an important role in the development of sculpture.
毫无疑问，这部杰出的作品在雕塑发展史上起着重要的作用。
课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．Last week, I was off to the gallery, where many abstract oil paintings, ______________________________________________, were exhibited.
上周我去了画廊，那里展出了很多从13世纪到20世纪的抽象派油画。
ranging from the 13th century to the 20th century
2．___________________________________, I'd like to give you a Chinese painting “Wintersweet” as a birthday gift.
听说你的生日快到了，我想送给你一幅中国画《梅花》作为生日礼物。
3．According to the statement, his painting style _______________ that of Xu Beihong.
根据声明，他的绘画风格是模仿徐悲鸿的。
Hearing that your birthday is coming
is modelled after
4．She ______________ a talented artist.In fact, she ______________ the western paintings by coincidence.
她被认为是一位才华横溢的艺术家。事实上，她是机缘巧合地爱上了西方绘画。
5．In that picture, around the table ____________________ sit three students.
在那幅图画中，三个学生坐在桌子周围，桌上有三本书。
was regarded as
fell in love with
with three books on it
Ⅱ.应用文写作
根据下列提示写一篇短文，介绍《清明上河图》(the Qingming Scroll)。内容包括：
1．作者：张择端(北宋)；
2．形式：手卷(hand scroll)；
3．内容：北宋首都汴京(现开封)的人们的日常生活；
4．主题：庆祝清明节，当时社会各阶层人民的生活状况。
参考范文：
The Qingming Scroll is a masterpiece painted by Zhang Zeduan in the Northern Song Dynasty.
The painting shows the daily lives of people in Bianjing, the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty.The theme focuses on the celebration of the Qingming Festival.The entire piece is painted in hand scroll and it reveals the lifestyle of people from all classes as well as different economic activities in rural areas and the city, which is still regarded as a famous art treasure at home and abroad.
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny morning, the sun began to rise, casting a warm golden glow over the park.Two young men named Tom and Jerry, who was lost in their own books, found themselves siting on opposite ends of a bench. The air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming flowers and the
distant sound of children playing.Their eyes met for a brief moment before they both bent down to pick up their pens.It seemed as if they had known before.They quickly became friends and then began to spend many happy times together.They played basketball, watched movies, and spent many unforgettable days together.However, as time went on, their lives changed, and their friendship was put to the test.
A few years later, Tom became a successful lawyer, while Jerry chose a different path and became an artist.Despite different kinds of changes in their lifestyles, they still kept in touch and would gather together every once in a while to recall the good old days.
One day, Tom received a letter from Jerry.The letter said, “Dear Tom, I hope you can come and visit my art exhibition.I know you may not be interested in art, but I think you will like these works.They are all paintings I made during the days we spent together.I hope you can feel the friendship between us.”
After reading the letter, Tom immediately decided to attend Jerry's art exhibition.He bought a bunch of flowers as a gift and arrived at the exhibition site.When he walked into the exhibition hall, he was shocked by what he saw.The walls were filled with Jerry's works, each painting full of life and emotion.He saw scenes of them playing basketball in the park, watching movies together, and walking in the rain.These paintings made him feel the deep friendship between them.
(根据前文和段首的句子可知续写的线索为：看到画作→Tom非常感动→分享过去的故事→因友谊而感到高兴。要求逻辑通顺，情节合理。词数80左右。)
参考范文：
At the exhibition，Tom felt happy and proud to see how much Jerry had accomplished.Some of Jerry's paintings reminded Tom of specific memories, and he shared those stories with their friends, making everyone laugh.Jerry looked up and saw Tom, his eyes widened with surprise and delight.Tom walked up to Jerry and handed him flowers, saying, “Congratulations, Jerry.Your works are amazing.” Jerry thanked him and hugged him tightly.They stood there for a moment, enjoying the warmth of their friendship.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
For nearly 50 years，Zhao Yuming has been absorbed in his own world of clay figurines (泥塑)．At age 62, Zhao is the only remaining clay sculpture master craftsman in Laoting County，Hebei Province. He has been officially recognised as a master of intangible cultural heritage (非物质文化遗产)． 1 This is more of a responsibility and a source of pressure.
2 In ancient times, Laoting clay figurines were mainly children's toys made by countryside artists.After the founding of the People's Republic of China in 1949，there were several workshops in villages in Laoting County and the production reached a high level, but the prices were too low. 3 However, for a long period, many clay artists relied on making and selling clay figurines at those poor prices to make ends meet.
Nowadays, shopping malls are full of high-end toys, so the Laoting clay figurines have gradually fallen out of favor. 4 Zhao said that although his children have other jobs to feed their families, he still wants to pass on his skills to them and his grandchildren.“If we do not pass it on, we will do a disservice to our country.Passing on the skills, honoring ourselves and repaying the country is the best option.”
Facing a demand for economic development, many regions are increasingly attaching importance to the protection of valuable traditional cultural skills.People come to realise that developing our cultural relics promotes the development of local economies. 5
A．But for him, this is not only an honor.
B．Later, it became known as “literary clay figurines”．
C．Clay figurines were sold for just a few pennies each.
D．Laoting clay sculpture has a nearly 500-year history.
E．Laoting clay sculpture is an important part of Zhao's life.
F．However, some craftsmen have chosen to continue the tradition.
G．More importantly，it contributes to the goal of building “a beautiful China”．
语篇解读：本文是说明文。文章主要介绍了河北省乐亭县的非物质文化遗产——泥塑及传承人赵玉明以及乐亭泥塑从古到今的发展历史。
1．选A　由此处语境以及空后的“a responsibility and a source of pressure”可知，A项中的an honor与此呼应，其中的not only与空后的more of相对应，故选A项。
2．选D　设空处在第二段段首，为该段的主题句，接下来都在介绍泥塑的发展历史，故选D项。
3．选C　与设空处上文中的“the prices were too low”相对应的是C项“每个泥塑才卖几分钱”。
4．选F　设空处上一句提到“如今，商场里充满了高档玩具，泥塑逐渐失宠”，下文提到“赵玉明说虽然孩子们都有自己养家糊口的工作，但是他仍然希望把这项技艺传给他们和孙辈们”，所以F项“然而，一些工匠选择继续延续这一传统”符合语境。
5．选G　设空处上文阐述发展文化遗产的意义，所以接下来会继续说明其具有十分重大的意义。G项“更重要的是，它有助于实现建设‘美丽中国’的目标”符合语境。UNIT 4　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．Last week, I was off to the gallery, where many abstract oil paintings, __________________________________________， were exhibited.
上周我去了画廊，那里展出了很多从13世纪到20世纪的抽象派油画。
2．________________________________， I'd like to give you a Chinese painting “Wintersweet” as a birthday gift.
听说你的生日快到了，我想送给你一幅中国画《梅花》作为生日礼物。
3．According to the statement, his painting style ______________________ that of Xu Beihong.
根据声明，他的绘画风格是模仿徐悲鸿的。
4．She ________________________ a talented artist.In fact, she __________________ the western paintings by coincidence.
她被认为是一位才华横溢的艺术家。事实上，她是机缘巧合地爱上了西方绘画。
5．In that picture, around the table__________________________sit three students.
在那幅图画中，三个学生坐在桌子周围，桌上有三本书。
Ⅱ.应用文写作
根据下列提示写一篇短文，介绍《清明上河图》(the Qingming Scroll)。内容包括：
1．作者：张择端(北宋)；
2．形式：手卷(hand scroll)；
3．内容：北宋首都汴京(现开封)的人们的日常生活；
4．主题：庆祝清明节，当时社会各阶层人民的生活状况。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Ⅲ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One sunny morning, the sun began to rise, casting a warm golden glow over the park.Two young men named Tom and Jerry, who was lost in their own books, found themselves siting on opposite ends of a bench.The air was filled with the sweet scent of blooming flowers and the distant sound of children playing.Their eyes met for a brief moment before they both bent down to pick up their pens.It seemed as if they had known before.They quickly became friends and then began to spend many happy times together.They played basketball, watched movies, and spent many unforgettable days together.However, as time went on, their lives changed, and their friendship was put to the test.
A few years later, Tom became a successful lawyer, while Jerry chose a different path and became an artist.Despite different kinds of changes in their lifestyles, they still kept in touch and would gather together every once in a while to recall the good old days.
One day, Tom received a letter from Jerry.The letter said, “Dear Tom, I hope you can come and visit my art exhibition.I know you may not be interested in art, but I think you will like these works.They are all paintings I made during the days we spent together.I hope you can feel the friendship between us.”
After reading the letter, Tom immediately decided to attend Jerry's art exhibition.He bought a bunch of flowers as a gift and arrived at the exhibition site.When he walked into the exhibition hall, he was shocked by what he saw.The walls were filled with Jerry's works, each painting full of life and emotion.He saw scenes of them playing basketball in the park, watching movies together, and walking in the rain.These paintings made him feel the deep friendship between them.
(根据前文和段首的句子可知续写的线索为：看到画作→Tom非常感动→分享过去的故事→因友谊而感到高兴。要求逻辑通顺，情节合理。词数80左右。)
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[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
For nearly 50 years，Zhao Yuming has been absorbed in his own world of clay figurines (泥塑)．At age 62, Zhao is the only remaining clay sculpture master craftsman in Laoting County，Hebei Province.He has been officially recognised as a master of intangible cultural heritage (非物质文化遗产)．__1__ This is more of a responsibility and a source of pressure.
__2__ In ancient times, Laoting clay figurines were mainly children's toys made by countryside artists.After the founding of the People's Republic of China in 1949，there were several workshops in villages in Laoting County and the production reached a high level, but the prices were too low.__3__ However, for a long period, many clay artists relied on making and selling clay figurines at those poor prices to make ends meet.
Nowadays, shopping malls are full of high-end toys, so the Laoting clay figurines have gradually fallen out of favor.__4__ Zhao said that although his children have other jobs to feed their families, he still wants to pass on his skills to them and his grandchildren.“If we do not pass it on, we will do a disservice to our country.Passing on the skills, honoring ourselves and repaying the country is the best option.”
Facing a demand for economic development, many regions are increasingly attaching importance to the protection of valuable traditional cultural skills.People come to realise that developing our cultural relics promotes the development of local economies.__5__
A．But for him, this is not only an honor.
B．Later, it became known as “literary clay figurines”．
C．Clay figurines were sold for just a few pennies each.
D．Laoting clay sculpture has a nearly 500-year history.
E．Laoting clay sculpture is an important part of Zhao's life.
F．However, some craftsmen have chosen to continue the tradition.
G．More importantly，it contributes to the goal of building “a beautiful China”．
UNIT 4　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.完成句子
1．ranging from the 13th century to the 20th century　2.Hearing that your birthday is coming　3.is modelled after　4.was regarded as; fell in love with　5.with three books on it
Ⅱ.应用文写作(参考范文)
The Qingming Scroll is a masterpiece painted by Zhang Zeduan in the Northern Song Dynasty.
The painting shows the daily lives of people in Bianjing, the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty.The theme focuses on the celebration of the Qingming Festival.The entire piece is painted in hand scroll and it reveals the lifestyle of people from all classes as well as different economic activities in rural areas and the city, which is still regarded as a famous art treasure at home and abroad.
Ⅲ.读后续写(参考范文)
At the exhibition，Tom felt happy and proud to see how much Jerry had accomplished.Some of Jerry's paintings reminded Tom of specific memories, and he shared those stories with their friends, making everyone laugh.Jerry looked up and saw Tom, his eyes widened with surprise and delight.Tom walked up to Jerry and handed him flowers, saying, “Congratulations, Jerry.Your works are amazing.” Jerry thanked him and hugged him tightly.They stood there for a moment, enjoying the warmth of their friendship.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是说明文。文章主要介绍了河北省乐亭县的非物质文化遗产——泥塑及传承人赵玉明以及乐亭泥塑从古到今的发展历史。
1．选A　由此处语境以及空后的“a responsibility and a source of pressure”可知，A项中的an honor与此呼应，其中的not only与空后的more of相对应，故选A项。
2．选D　设空处在第二段段首，为该段的主题句，接下来都在介绍泥塑的发展历史，故选D项。
3．选C　与设空处上文中的“the prices were too low”相对应的是C项“每个泥塑才卖几分钱”。
4．选F　设空处上一句提到“如今，商场里充满了高档玩具，泥塑逐渐失宠”，下文提到“赵玉明说虽然孩子们都有自己养家糊口的工作，但是他仍然希望把这项技艺传给他们和孙辈们”，所以F项“然而，一些工匠选择继续延续这一传统”符合语境。
5．选G　设空处上文阐述发展文化遗产的意义，所以接下来会继续说明其具有十分重大的意义。G项“更重要的是，它有助于实现建设‘美丽中国’的目标”符合语境。

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