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Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
(写作项目——Writing an essay about non-
cash payments)
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
　(写作项目——Writing an essay about non-cash payments)
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于“无现金支付”的文章，属于正反观点式议论文。正反观点式议论文针对某个论述话题提出两种对立的见解或主张。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定两种观点的正误，支持或否定某种主张，从而让读者信服或接受其观点或看法。
写作技法指导
(一)品参考范文
Nowadays, non-cash payments are becoming more and more popular across the world, especially in China.It refers to the method of making payments with cards, mobile phones and other electronic devices.New ways of supporting non-cash payments are quickly turning up one after another.
Obviously, there are many benefits of non-cash payments.First, they are so convenient and fast that people could make almost all the payments with a single click on their smartphones.In some shopping centres, they can pay by simply standing in front of a camera and let it recognise their faces.Second, non-cash payments are safe and hygienic.They free people from carrying heavy coins and dirty notes, or even a wallet.Therefore, the risk of losing money or the wallet is not a threat any more.What is more, non-cash payments eliminate the risk of counterfeit money.
However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides, and so do the non-cash payments, even though they don't require a coin.The problems that accompany non-cash payments should not be ignored.When thinking it further, non-cash payments might not be quite safe as people have assumed, as it is not that hard for hackers to access people's bank account and steal the money.It is also easier for your personal information to be stolen, which may bring great trouble.
Meanwhile, to some degree, non-cash payments encourage over-consumption.They also depend too much on the Internet access or battery capacity — just imagine being at a place with no wi-fi and a flat battery, how can people make payments via their computers or smartphones then Last but not least, non-cash payments aren't quite friendly with people not knowing how, especially the elderly.It is such a pity to make them feel excluded and left out.
Nonetheless, non-cash payments are increasingly part of our fast-growing modern society.The current trend is for more non-cash payments, and this trend will probably continue in the future.But embracing a new trend doesn't mean to exclude the “old-fashioned” ways.Perhaps it is more convenient for everyone — young and old, men and women — to have various options, in both cash and non-cash forms, when it comes to making payments.
(二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
(三)由范文学写作
1．学行文逻辑
(1)范文采用了典型的“引言—正文—结论”结构。首段通过介绍非现金支付在全球，特别是中国的普及现状，引出话题。接着，第二、三段分别从非现金支付的优点和缺点两个方面进行详细阐述。尾段总结非现金支付在现代社会中的趋势。
(2)为了增强文章的说服力，范文使用举例的写作手法来阐述非现金支付的优缺点。这些例证和假设使得文章更具说服力，有助于读者更好地理解和接受作者的观点。
2．学衔接过渡
(1)范文恰当使用Obviously, However, Meanwhile, Last but not least等过渡词语，不仅有助于读者理解段落之间的逻辑关系，还使得文章衔接过渡自然流畅，结构更加紧凑和连贯。
(2)范文在结尾部分明确指出非现金支付在现代社会中的趋势，并与前文关于其优点和缺点的讨论相呼应，体现了范文完整而严谨的结构和连贯性。
3．学亮点表达
(1)亮点词汇
①范文在探讨非现金支付方式的利弊时，使用了多个亮点词汇来增强表达的丰富性和准确性。第一段第一句中使用了形容词popular，用来形容非现金支付方式在全球，尤其是在中国的普及程度。第二句使用短语refer to清晰地定义了非现金支付方式的含义，为后续讨论提供了前提。
②第二段第二句中使用了形容词convenient和fast，强调了非现金支付方式的便捷——非现金支付的重要优点之一。第四句中使用了形容词safe和hygienic，分别描述了非现金支付方式在安全和卫生方面的优势。最后一句中使用了动词eliminate，凸显了非现金支付方式规避假币风险的能力，用词精准。
(2)亮点句式
①第二段第二句使用了“so ...that”引导的结果状语从句。
②第三段首句巧妙地运用了“every coin has two sides”这一俗语。第六句通过反问句的形式，指出非现金支付方式在某些极端情况下的局限性。
仿写训练|完成句子/翻译句子
①Cooking a meal _________________________________ by applying heat, often in combination with various ingredients and cooking techniques, to create a dish that is both edible and flavorful.
烹饪是指通过加热来准备食物的方法，通常与各种食材和烹饪技术相结合，以制作出既可食用又美味的菜肴。
refers to the method of preparing food
②The storm was ___________ the power lines were blown down, leaving the entire neighborhood without electricity for hours.
风暴太猛烈了，电线被刮倒，整个社区停电数小时。
③Every coin has two sides.So does living on campus.
____________________________
so fierce that
凡事有利有弊，住校也是一样。
具体写作指导
Part 1 Raise a topic.
Part 2 Main body (Positive and negative viewpoints)．
Part 3 Conclusion.
How to write an argumentative essay ——如何写一篇议论文
第一步：构思谋篇
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　提出话题
①_____________________　　 随着……的发展
②______________________ 越来越受欢迎
③_______________________________ 激起关于……的热烈讨论
④____________________________________ people are getting politer than they used to be.
人们变得比过去更有礼貌，这是社会上的一个普遍现象。
with the development of
be more and more popular
arouse a heated discussion about ...
It's a common phenomenon in society that
⑤Recently, there is a widespread concern over _____________ _____________________________.
最近，一个引起普遍关注的问题是：人们是否应该依赖非现金支付。
⑥In recent years, non-cash payments _________________ _________ and different people have different opinions on it.
近年来，无现金支付迅速走红，不同的人对此有不同的看法。
whether people
should rely on non-cash payments
are rapidly gaining
popularity
第二部分　正反观点
①___________________________ 优势和劣势
②________________ 与……比起来
③_____________ 相反
④_______________ 支持
⑤___________________ 反对
advantages and disadvantages
compared with ...
on the contrary
be for/in favor of
be against/opposed to
⑥controversial problems ____________
⑦take all factors into consideration ________________
⑧hold the opposite view ... __________
⑨ Some ____________ that studying abroad is beneficial to them, saying it will broaden their horizons and enrich their experience.However, others believe that it is _______________.
一些人认为出国留学对他们有益，认为这将拓宽他们的视野，丰富他们的经验。然而，也有人认为这是浪费金钱。
有争议的问题
考虑各方面的因素
持相反观点
hold the belief
a waste of money
第三部分　提出观点
①________________　　　 简而言之
②___________________________________________ 就我而言
③___________________ 我坚信
④_________________ 当谈到
⑤Although part-time jobs may __________________, such as shortening our study time, its advantages do overweigh the disadvantages.
尽管兼职工作可能会产生负面影响，比如缩短我们的学习时间，但优点确实大于缺点。
in short/in a word
in my opinion/in my view/as far as I am concerned
I firmly believe that ...
when it comes to ...
have negative effects
⑥____________________, we are supposed to make a practical plan for our future.
在我看来，我们应该为我们的未来制定一个切实可行的计划。
⑦_____________________ good family traditions are very important in our society, without which we can't enjoy sound development of body or mind.
不可否认，良好的家风在我们的社会中非常重要，没有良好的家风，我们就无法享受身心的健康发展。
From my point of view
There is no denying that
[针对练笔]
根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的关于“无现金支付”的正反观点式议论文。
观点 理由
60%学生 赞同 1.简单易操作，不需要携带大量现金；
2．在不同的地方被广泛接受，快捷方便。
40%学生 不赞同 1.存在安全问题，如个人信息泄露、资金盗用等；
2．导致过度消费。
个人观点 ……
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Recently our class ①______________________________________ ________ (就无现金支付进行了热烈的讨论)．
has held a heated discussion about non-cash
payments
60% of the students are in favor of it. Firstly, ②_________________ (简单易操作), as they just need to take a smartphone instead of lots of cash. Meanwhile, ③_________________________________ (在不同的地方被广泛接受), which is really convenient for consumers. However, about 40% of the students are opposed to it. First of all, they are concerned about its security, because it is likely that ④__________________________ _____________________(个人信息泄露和资金被盗用)．Besides, they tend to buy more than what they really need by paying online.
it is easy to operate
it's widely accepted in different places
personal information could be
let out and money stolen
From my perspective, non-cash payments will definitely ⑤_______ ____________ (提高我们的生活质量)．
improve
our life quality
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Online payment develops very fast and the age of non-cash has come.(用so ...that升级)
→____________________________________________________ _____
Online payment develops so fast that the age of non-cash has
come.
2．In China, more and more people use their smartphones to pay bills wherever they go.(用no matter where升级)
→_______________________________________________________________________________
3．The foreign people name the new four inventions of China.Online shopping is one of them.(用定语从句升级)
→________________________________________________________ _____________________
In China, more and more people use their smartphones to pay bills
no matter where they go.
The foreign people name the new four inventions of China, one of
which is online shopping.
4．The age of technology changes people's lives and makes the world smaller and promotes the communication between countries.(用定语从句升级)
→_____________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
The age of technology changes people's lives, which makes the
world smaller and promotes the communication between countries.
5．China is generally believed to be the largest mobile payment market.(用it作形式主语升级)
→_______________________________________________________ _______
6．We will never worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.(用倒装句升级)
→_______________________________________________________ _______
It is generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment
market.
Never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count
change.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．_______________________ (根据研究), most people leave little cash in their wallets, and some even don't use it for a long time.Non-cash age _____________________ (带来了巨大的便利)．
2．Online payment is advocated not many years ago and it _________ _______________ (很快就被公众接受)．Now, even the small business like the street pedlars will __________________ (要求你网上支付)．
According to the research
brings great convenience
is accepted
by the public soon
ask you to pay online
3．Electronic Payment App ____________________________ (变得越来越流行) now.People don't have to bring credit cards any more.All they need to do is use their smartphones ____________________ (当他们购物时), check bills or dine in restaurants.It's very convenient but some security issues occur.
is getting more and more popular
when they go shopping
4．________________________________ (通过在线收发账单), customers and businesses are reducing the amount of paper tossed in the trash and doing their part to _______________________ (帮助保护环境)．
5．With the growing convenience of the Internet, electronic payment ___________________________________(已经成为越来越流行的方式) to pay bills.
By sending and receiving bills online
help save the environment
has become an increasingly popular way
6．Most of us ___________________________________ (习惯了扫描二维码来支付) whatever we buy — books, clothes, and electronic devices, ____________ (仅举几个例子), which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family.
are used to paying by scanning QR codes
to name a few
Ⅲ.应用文写作
随着技术和网络的快速发展，在世界上很多国家，尤其是中国，人们越来越多地使用“无现金支付”。请针对该现象写一篇文章，内容包括：
1．什么是“无现金支付”；
2．“无现金支付”的利与弊；
3．你的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Nowadays，non-cash payments are becoming increasingly popular across the world, especially in China，which refer to the method of making payments with cards，mobile phones or other electronic devices.
Obviously, there are many benefits of non-cash payments.Firstly，they're so convenient and fast that people could make almost all the payments with a single click on their smartphones.Secondly，they free people from carrying a wallet，thereby reducing the risk of losing money or the wallet.
However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides，and so do the non-cash payments.Hackers may have access to your bank account，stealing the money and committing personal information theft.Meanwhile，non-cash payments may encourage over-consumption.
As to me，I prefer the convenient non-cash payments.However，I hold the belief that they should coexist with the old-fashioned ways.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Morty was checking out his library books when it caught his eye — a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.“Check this out！” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best buddies.They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip lines.They instantly believed the brochure's headline: Summer won't be complete until you Take it to the Limit at Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.
Ben broke the silence, “We have less than two weeks until registration opens, and it says the camp fills up fast.” Then an idea popped into Morty's head.“Why don't we sell lemonade and snacks by the side of the road We can pool our earnings for the camp.” “That's a great idea，” Ben said.
The sun had barely come up on Saturday morning when the kids set up their business.They chose a spot, asked permission from the homeowner, and then asked to use her garden hose (软管) for water to make lemonade.
Their business went smoothly until Ben announced that they had a comparatively small stock of lemons shortly after noon.Morty decided to make their stock go further.“Fred, when the jug (罐) gets down to one-fourth full, just fill it to the top with the water hose.” Morty was thinking out loud, “I'll change the sign and charge 30 more cents for each cup of lemonade.” Their business went on and the three were secretly proud of the little tricks they had done.
Just as Morty finished refilling the jug with water for the third time, a vehicle rounded the corner.Morty saw the minivan with his father at the roadside, wheel and his family inside.They pulled up to the roadside, and his brothers and sisters jumped out, each clutching a coin or two.They were eager to support their brother's bustling business.Morty's family bought the last of the brownies (巧克力方块蛋糕) and drank the last drop of watered-down lemonade.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade. _________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.______________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.As to him, it tasted more like water.Overwhelmed with confusion, he asked directly, “What's wrong It tastes just like cold water.” The moment Morty heard his father's doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.Fred and Ben were also speechless.A moment later, they admitted what they had done.Although Morty's father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct your wrongdoings.” Hearing this, they nodded immediately.
They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough lemons first and then reduce the price.They all agreed.When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign, saying, “We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.” They made over 50 cups of lemonade for a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free.As you can imagine, they didn't get enough money for the camp.But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be honest.
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
We all want to save money, and with the cost of living on the rise, it's become more important than ever to watch what we spend. One of the biggest increases in our spending at the moment is on energy. ____ That's why many of us are looking at ways to save energy.
1
___ To try to achieve this, new homes in some countries will be banned from fitting new gas and oil boilers by 2025.Having a heat pump (热泵) instead can help save energy, but it's unaffordable for many people, unless they've got spare cash.
2
For people who have to live within a tight budget, there are some low-budget solutions to lower energy usage. 3 Adding rolled-up towels to block the gaps will help. Investing in new double glass windows will certainly prevent heat from leaking, but if it's still too costly, it might be worth using some heavy curtains to stop the heat escaping.
There are lots of other little things we can do around the home that will help save energy, don't cost a fortune and just require changes to our behaviour. They could be as good as fitting or making something. Put covers on pots and pans when cooking — the food will be ready more quickly. Don't overfill the container when boiling water, and don't leave electrical items on standby. ____
So, we're being encouraged to make the use of fuel more efficient. ___ We need to do it to reduce our carbon footprint, so that our energy usage doesn't cost the Earth.
4
5
A．Warm air can escape from rooms easily.
B．It's advisable to make the best of energy.
C．But our main aim isn't just a financial saving.
D．The oil, gas and electricity used in our homes are costly.
E．We should consider more about the possible ways to deal with it.
F．Making our home more energy-efficient is the obvious way to save money.
G．A combination of such small measures could reduce energy bills by about 10%.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。随着生活成本的上升，人们都想减少日常开销。目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源，文章给出了一些在家中节约能源减少开支的方法。
1．选D　空前提到“目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源”，空后提到“这就是为什么我们一直在思考节能的方法”，故空处内容应涉及能源方面的花费。D项承上启下，符合语境。
2．选F　下文提到“为了实现这一目标，到2025年，一些国家的新住宅将被禁止安装新的燃气和燃油锅炉，用热泵代替它们以帮助节省能源”。分析本段结构和大意可以看出，空后的this指代的应是空处出现的内容，且与节能做法有关。故F项符合语境。
3．选A　空后提到“用卷起的毛巾、双层玻璃窗和厚重的窗帘等物品来阻止热量逸出”，A项“温暖的空气可以很容易地从房间逸出”提出了问题，与后面的解决办法相呼应。
4．选G　本段主要讲了可以在家里做很多其他的小事情来节约能源，如烹饪时盖上锅盖，烧开水时不要将容器装得太满，不要让电器处于待机状态。故G项“这些小方法结合起来可以减少约10%的能源费用”总结上文，符合语境。
5．选C　空前提到“因此，我们被鼓励更加有效地利用燃料”，空后提到“我们需要这样做来减少碳足迹，这样能源使用就不会以破坏地球为代价”。由此可知，空处应起到过渡作用，将节能从减少日常开支引到环境保护，故C项“但我们的主要目标并不仅仅是省钱”符合语境。5 / 5
Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing an essay about non cash payments
本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于“无现金支付”的文章，属于正反观点式议论文。正反观点式议论文针对某个论述话题提出两种对立的见解或主张。作者通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定两种观点的正误，支持或否定某种主张，从而让读者信服或接受其观点或看法。
写作技法指导
(一)品参考范文
Nowadays, non cash payments are becoming more and more popular across the world, especially in China.It refers to the method of making payments with cards, mobile phones and other electronic devices.New ways of supporting non cash payments are quickly turning up one after another.
Obviously, there are many benefits of non cash payments.First, they are so convenient and fast that people could make almost all the payments with a single click on their smartphones.In some shopping centres, they can pay by simply standing in front of a camera and let it recognise their faces.Second, non cash payments are safe and hygienic.They free people from carrying heavy coins and dirty notes, or even a wallet.Therefore, the risk of losing money or the wallet is not a threat any more.What is more, non cash payments eliminate the risk of counterfeit money.
However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides, and so do the non cash payments, even though they don't require a coin.The problems that accompany non cash payments should not be ignored.When thinking it further, non cash payments might not be quite safe as people have assumed, as it is not that hard for hackers to access people's bank account and steal the money.It is also easier for your personal information to be stolen, which may bring great trouble.Meanwhile, to some degree, non cash payments encourage over consumption.They also depend too much on the Internet access or battery capacity — just imagine being at a place with no wi fi and a flat battery, how can people make payments via their computers or smartphones then Last but not least, non cash payments aren't quite friendly with people not knowing how, especially the elderly.It is such a pity to make them feel excluded and left out.
Nonetheless, non cash payments are increasingly part of our fast growing modern society.The current trend is for more non cash payments, and this trend will probably continue in the future.But embracing a new trend doesn't mean to exclude the “old fashioned” ways.Perhaps it is more convenient for everyone — young and old, men and women — to have various options, in both cash and non cash forms, when it comes to making payments.
(二)根据参考范文，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
(三)由范文学写作
1．学行文逻辑
(1)范文采用了典型的“引言—正文—结论”结构。首段通过介绍非现金支付在全球，特别是中国的普及现状，引出话题。接着，第二、三段分别从非现金支付的优点和缺点两个方面进行详细阐述。尾段总结非现金支付在现代社会中的趋势。
(2)为了增强文章的说服力，范文使用举例的写作手法来阐述非现金支付的优缺点。这些例证和假设使得文章更具说服力，有助于读者更好地理解和接受作者的观点。
2．学衔接过渡
(1)范文恰当使用Obviously, However, Meanwhile, Last but not least等过渡词语，不仅有助于读者理解段落之间的逻辑关系，还使得文章衔接过渡自然流畅，结构更加紧凑和连贯。
(2)范文在结尾部分明确指出非现金支付在现代社会中的趋势，并与前文关于其优点和缺点的讨论相呼应，体现了范文完整而严谨的结构和连贯性。
3．学亮点表达
(1)亮点词汇
①范文在探讨非现金支付方式的利弊时，使用了多个亮点词汇来增强表达的丰富性和准确性。第一段第一句中使用了形容词popular，用来形容非现金支付方式在全球，尤其是在中国的普及程度。第二句使用短语refer to清晰地定义了非现金支付方式的含义，为后续讨论提供了前提。
②第二段第二句中使用了形容词convenient和fast，强调了非现金支付方式的便捷——非现金支付的重要优点之一。第四句中使用了形容词safe和hygienic，分别描述了非现金支付方式在安全和卫生方面的优势。最后一句中使用了动词eliminate，凸显了非现金支付方式规避假币风险的能力，用词精准。
(2)亮点句式
①第二段第二句使用了“so ...that”引导的结果状语从句。
②第三段首句巧妙地运用了“every coin has two sides”这一俗语。第六句通过反问句的形式，指出非现金支付方式在某些极端情况下的局限性。
[仿写训练|完成句子/翻译句子]
①Cooking a meal __________________________________________ by applying heat, often in combination with various ingredients and cooking techniques, to create a dish that is both edible and flavorful.烹饪是指通过加热来准备食物的方法，通常与各种食材和烹饪技术相结合，以制作出既可食用又美味的菜肴。
②The storm was ________________ the power lines were blown down, leaving the entire neighborhood without electricity for hours.
风暴太猛烈了，电线被刮倒，整个社区停电数小时。
③Every coin has two sides.So does living on campus.
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具体写作指导
How to write an argumentative essay
——如何写一篇议论文
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 Raise a topic.
Part 2 Main body (Positive and negative viewpoints)．
Part 3 Conclusion.
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　提出话题
①______________　　 随着……的发展
②______________ 越来越受欢迎
③______________ 激起关于……的热烈讨论
④____________________________ people are getting politer than they used to be.
人们变得比过去更有礼貌，这是社会上的一个普遍现象。
⑤Recently, there is a widespread concern over ____________________________________.
最近，一个引起普遍关注的问题是：人们是否应该依赖非现金支付。
⑥In recent years, non cash payments ________________________________， and different people have different opinions on it.近年来，无现金支付迅速走红，不同的人对此有不同的看法。
第二部分　正反观点
①______________　　　　　 优势和劣势
②______________ 与……比起来
③______________ 相反
④______________ 支持
⑤______________ 反对
⑥controversial problems ______________
⑦take all factors into consideration ______________
⑧hold the opposite view ... ______________
⑨ Some ______________ that studying abroad is beneficial to them, saying it will broaden their horizons and enrich their experience.However, others believe that it is __________.
一些人认为出国留学对他们有益，认为这将拓宽他们的视野，丰富他们的经验。然而，也有人认为这是浪费金钱。
第三部分　提出观点
①______________　　　　　 简而言之
②______________ 就我而言
③______________ 我坚信
④______________ 当谈到
⑤Although part time jobs may ____________， such as shortening our study time, its advantages do overweigh the disadvantages.
尽管兼职工作可能会产生负面影响，比如缩短我们的学习时间，但优点确实大于缺点。
⑥______________， we are supposed to make a practical plan for our future.在我看来，我们应该为我们的未来制定一个切实可行的计划。
⑦______________ good family traditions are very important in our society, without which we can't enjoy sound development of body or mind.
不可否认，良好的家风在我们的社会中非常重要，没有良好的家风，我们就无法享受身心的健康发展。
[针对练笔]
根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的关于“无现金支付”的正反观点式议论文。
观点 理由
60%学生赞同 1.简单易操作，不需要携带大量现金；2．在不同的地方被广泛接受，快捷方便。
40%学生不赞同 1.存在安全问题，如个人信息泄露、资金盗用等；2．导致过度消费。
个人观点 ……
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Recently our class ①________________________________________________________ (就无现金支付进行了热烈的讨论)．
60% of the students are in favor of it. Firstly, ②__________________ (简单易操作), as they just need to take a smartphone instead of lots of cash. Meanwhile, ③______________________________ (在不同的地方被广泛接受), which is really convenient for consumers. However, about 40% of the students are opposed to it. First of all, they are concerned about its security, because it is likely that ④______________________________________ (个人信息泄露和资金被盗用)．Besides, they tend to buy more than what they really need by paying online.
From my perspective, non cash payments will definitely ⑤__________________________ (提高我们的生活质量)．
Section Ⅵ
写作技法指导
①refers to the method of preparing food　②so fierce that
③凡事有利有弊，住校也是一样。
具体写作指导
第二步　第一部分：①with the development of
②be more and more popular
③arouse a heated discussion about ...
④It's a common phenomenon in society that
⑤whether people should rely on non cash payments
⑥are rapidly gaining popularity
第二部分：①advantages and disadvantages　②compared with ...
③on the contrary　④be for/in favor of
⑤be against/opposed to　⑥有争议的问题
⑦考虑各方面的因素　⑧持相反观点
⑨hold the belief; a waste of money
第三部分：①in short/in a word
②in my opinion/in my view/as far as I am concerned
③I firmly believe that ...　④when it comes to ...
⑤have negative effects　⑥From my point of view
⑦There is no denying that
[针对练笔]
①has held a heated discussion about non cash payments
②it is easy to operate　③it's widely accepted in different places　④personal information could be let out and money stolen
⑤improve our life quality4 / 4
UNIT 4　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．Online payment develops very fast and the age of non cash has come.(用so ...that升级)
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2．In China, more and more people use their smartphones to pay bills wherever they go.
(用no matter where升级)
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3．The foreign people name the new four inventions of China.Online shopping is one of them.
(用定语从句升级)
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4．The age of technology changes people's lives and makes the world smaller and promotes the communication between countries.(用定语从句升级)
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5．China is generally believed to be the largest mobile payment market.(用it作形式主语升级)
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6．We will never worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.(用倒装句升级)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．______________________ (根据研究), most people leave little cash in their wallets, and some even don't use it for a long time.Non cash age ______________________ (带来了巨大的便利)．
2．Online payment is advocated not many years ago and it ________________________ (很快就被公众接受)．Now, even the small business like the street pedlars will ________________________ (要求你网上支付)．
3．Electronic Payment App __________________________________________ (变得越来越流行) now.People don't have to bring credit cards any more.All they need to do is use their smartphones ________________________ (当他们购物时), check bills or dine in restaurants.It's very convenient but some security issues occur.
4．______________________________ (通过在线收发账单), customers and businesses are reducing the amount of paper tossed in the trash and doing their part to ______________________________ (帮助保护环境)．
5．With the growing convenience of the Internet, electronic payment ____________________________________ (已经成为越来越流行的方式) to pay bills.
6．Most of us __________________________________ (习惯了扫描二维码来支付) whatever we buy — books, clothes, and electronic devices, ____________ (仅举几个例子), which is a glimpse into the life of most Chinese like me and my family.
Ⅲ.应用文写作
随着技术和网络的快速发展，在世界上很多国家，尤其是中国，人们越来越多地使用“无现金支付”。请针对该现象写一篇文章，内容包括：
1．什么是“无现金支付”；
2．“无现金支付”的利与弊；
3．你的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
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Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Morty was checking out his library books when it caught his eye — a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.“Check this out！” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best buddies.They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip lines.They instantly believed the brochure's headline: Summer won't be complete until you Take it to the Limit at Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.
Ben broke the silence, “We have less than two weeks until registration opens, and it says the camp fills up fast.” Then an idea popped into Morty's head.“Why don't we sell lemonade and snacks by the side of the road We can pool our earnings for the camp.” “That's a great idea，” Ben said.
The sun had barely come up on Saturday morning when the kids set up their business.They chose a spot, asked permission from the homeowner, and then asked to use her garden hose (软管) for water to make lemonade.
Their business went smoothly until Ben announced that they had a comparatively small stock of lemons shortly after noon.Morty decided to make their stock go further.“Fred, when the jug (罐) gets down to one fourth full, just fill it to the top with the water hose.” Morty was thinking out loud, “I'll change the sign and charge 30 more cents for each cup of lemonade.” Their business went on and the three were secretly proud of the little tricks they had done.
Just as Morty finished refilling the jug with water for the third time, a vehicle rounded the corner.Morty saw the minivan with his father at the roadside, wheel and his family inside.They pulled up to the roadside, and his brothers and sisters jumped out, each clutching a coin or two.They were eager to support their brother's bustling business.Morty's family bought the last of the brownies (巧克力方块蛋糕) and drank the last drop of watered down lemonade.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
We all want to save money, and with the cost of living on the rise, it's become more important than ever to watch what we spend. One of the biggest increases in our spending at the moment is on energy. __1__ That's why many of us are looking at ways to save energy.
__2__ To try to achieve this, new homes in some countries will be banned from fitting new gas and oil boilers by 2025.Having a heat pump (热泵) instead can help save energy, but it's unaffordable for many people, unless they've got spare cash.
For people who have to live within a tight budget, there are some low budget solutions to lower energy usage. __3__ Adding rolled up towels to block the gaps will help. Investing in new double glass windows will certainly prevent heat from leaking, but if it's still too costly, it might be worth using some heavy curtains to stop the heat escaping.
There are lots of other little things we can do around the home that will help save energy, don't cost a fortune and just require changes to our behaviour. They could be as good as fitting or making something. Put covers on pots and pans when cooking — the food will be ready more quickly. Don't overfill the container when boiling water, and don't leave electrical items on standby. __4__
So, we're being encouraged to make the use of fuel more efficient. __5__ We need to do it to reduce our carbon footprint, so that our energy usage doesn't cost the Earth.
A．Warm air can escape from rooms easily.
B．It's advisable to make the best of energy.
C．But our main aim isn't just a financial saving.
D．The oil, gas and electricity used in our homes are costly.
E．We should consider more about the possible ways to deal with it.
F．Making our home more energy efficient is the obvious way to save money.
G．A combination of such small measures could reduce energy bills by about 10%.
UNIT 4　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.Online payment develops so fast that the age of non cash has come.
2．In China, more and more people use their smartphones to pay bills no matter where they go.
3．The foreign people name the new four inventions of China, one of which is online shopping.
4．The age of technology changes people's lives, which makes the world smaller and promotes the communication between countries.
5．It is generally believed that China is the largest mobile payment market.
6．Never will we worry about getting fake notes or having to count change.
Ⅱ.1.According to the research; brings great convenience
2．is accepted by the public soon; ask you to pay online
3．is getting more and more popular; when they go shopping
4．By sending and receiving bills online; help save the environment
5．has become an increasingly popular way
6．are used to paying by scanning QR codes; to name a few
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
Nowadays，non cash payments are becoming increasingly popular across the world, especially in China，which refer to the method of making payments with cards，mobile phones or other electronic devices.
Obviously, there are many benefits of non cash payments.Firstly，they're so convenient and fast that people could make almost all the payments with a single click on their smartphones.Secondly，they free people from carrying a wallet，thereby reducing the risk of losing money or the wallet.
However, as the old saying goes, every coin has two sides，and so do the non cash payments.Hackers may have access to your bank account，stealing the money and committing personal information theft.Meanwhile，non cash payments may encourage over consumption.
As to me，I prefer the convenient non cash payments.However, I hold the belief that they should coexist with the old fashioned ways.
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Morty's father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.As to him, it tasted more like water.Overwhelmed with confusion, he asked directly, “What's wrong It tastes just like cold water.” The moment Morty heard his father's doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.Fred and Ben were also speechless.A moment later, they admitted what they had done.Although Morty's father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct your wrongdoings.” Hearing this, they nodded immediately.
They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week.Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough lemons first and then reduce the price.They all agreed.When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign, saying, “We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.” They made over 50 cups of lemonade for a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free.As you can imagine, they didn't get enough money for the camp.But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be honest.
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。随着生活成本的上升，人们都想减少日常开销。目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源，文章给出了一些在家中节约能源减少开支的方法。
1．选D　空前提到“目前我们支出增长最大的方面之一是能源”，空后提到“这就是为什么我们一直在思考节能的方法”，故空处内容应涉及能源方面的花费。D项承上启下，符合语境。
2．选F　下文提到“为了实现这一目标，到2025年，一些国家的新住宅将被禁止安装新的燃气和燃油锅炉，用热泵代替它们以帮助节省能源”。分析本段结构和大意可以看出，空后的this指代的应是空处出现的内容，且与节能做法有关。故F项符合语境。
3．选A　空后提到“用卷起的毛巾、双层玻璃窗和厚重的窗帘等物品来阻止热量逸出”，A项“温暖的空气可以很容易地从房间逸出”提出了问题，与后面的解决办法相呼应。
4．选G　本段主要讲了可以在家里做很多其他的小事情来节约能源，如烹饪时盖上锅盖，烧开水时不要将容器装得太满，不要让电器处于待机状态。故G项“这些小方法结合起来可以减少约10%的能源费用”总结上文，符合语境。
5．选C　空前提到“因此，我们被鼓励更加有效地利用燃料”，空后提到“我们需要这样做来减少碳足迹，这样能源使用就不会以破坏地球为代价”。由此可知，空处应起到过渡作用，将节能从减少日常开支引到环境保护，故C项“但我们的主要目标并不仅仅是省钱”符合语境。

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