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Section Ⅵ
Writing
NO 1
写作项目——Writing about the unexplained
NO 2
课时跟踪检测
目 录
　写作项目——Writing about the unexplained
本单元要求写一篇介绍自然界神秘现象的文章，属于现象说明文。此类文体较为常见，一般应先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因，最后发表看法。 文章通常先列举相关事例作为导入，然后深入分析，采用由现象到本质、层层深入的行文模式。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：A general introduction of the unexplained phenomenon.
Para.2：The reason why it is mysterious.
Para.3：The non-scientific explanations.
Para.4：Scientists' explanation.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的介绍神秘现象的文章，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
第二段尾句使用了疑问句，能引起读者兴趣；第三段第一句使用了it作形式主语，最后一句使用了感叹句，以引起读者的关注。
仿写训练|完成句子
①____________________ we should protect the ocean.
我们很有必要保护海洋。
②__________________________ her hometown is!
她的家乡是个多么迷人的地方啊！
It is essential that
What a fascinating place
三、学逻辑衔接
文章第四段作者在介绍科学家的观点时，使用了however, It's more likely ...that ..., The rest ...等连接成分，使句子之间层次清晰，逻辑顺畅，语意连贯。
四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段使用了形容词numerous，强调了这些遗址规模庞大、遍布广泛；使用形容词impressive强调了自然特征的非凡之处。这两个形容词在句子中丰富了语言的表达，增强了读者对句子所描述内容的感知和印象，构建了一个既包含丰富的古代文明遗迹又拥有令人难忘的自然景观的画面。
(2)第三段第二句使用了形容词amazing，强调这些自然特征非同寻常、令人惊叹，使读者在阅读时能够感受到作者对这些自然特征的敬畏和赞赏之情，有助于增强句子的表现力和感染力。
2．亮点句式
第一段使用了过去分词短语“known as the 30th parallel north”作后置定语，修饰名词词组a special line of latitude；介词短语Along ...前置，谓语lie位于主语之前，构成完全倒装句。
仿写训练|完成句子
①The Grand Canyon in Arizona is___________________________.
亚利桑那州的大峡谷是一个令人惊叹的自然奇观。
②Along the ancient Silk Road, _____________________________ dot the landscape, showing the once rich history and culture.
沿着古老的丝绸之路，无数的文明遗迹点缀着风景，显示着曾经丰富的历史和文化。
an amazing natural wonder
numerous ruins of civilizations
③The Great Barrier Reef, stretching for over 2,300 kilometers along the coast of Australia, is _____________________of marine biodiversity.
大堡礁沿着澳大利亚海岸绵延2 300多千米，展示着令人印象深刻的海洋生物多样性。
④The plan _____________________ is under discussion.
与这个项目有关的计划正在讨论中。
⑤___________________ at least twenty umbrellas of various sizes and colors.走廊(corridor)里放着至少二十把雨伞，五颜六色，大小不等。
an impressive display
related to the project
Along the corridor lie
具体写作指导
How to write about the unexplained
——如何写一篇介绍神秘现象的文章
Part 1 A brief introduction of the unexplained phenomenon.
Part 2 Main body (introduce mysterious features and non-scientific explanations)．
Part 3 Conclusion (scientists' explanation).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　自然界的神秘现象
①Have you ever wondered why some lakes seem to disappear without a trace,___________________________
你有没有想过，为什么有些湖泊消失得无影无踪，几年后又重新出现？
only to reappear years later
②The Bermuda Triangle, a part of the ocean ____________________
____________________________, is a fascinating yet unexplained mystery.
百慕大三角是海洋的一部分，船只和飞机在这里神秘失踪，它是一个迷人但无法解释的谜团。
where ships and planes
have mysteriously disappeared
③Did you know that there are strange glowing lights in the sky____________________ Scientists are still trying to figure out what causes this bizarre natural event.
你知道吗，天空中有一些奇怪的发光体，叫做球状闪电？科学家们仍在试图找出是什么导致了这种奇怪的自然事件。
called ball lightning
④Deep in the ocean, there are creatures glowing in the dark, which is _____________________________ we're still learning about how and why these animals produce light.
在海洋深处，有一些生物在黑暗中发光，这种光是如此美丽又神秘，我们仍在了解这些动物是如何以及为什么发光的。
so beautiful but mysterious that
第二部分　对自然界神秘现象的非科学解释
①__________________ ball lightning is a restless spirit, creating its energy in the form of a glowing ball.
传说球状闪电是一个躁动不安的精灵，以发光的球状表现其能量。
②The fairy circles of Namibia are believed ______________by fairies dancing in the night.
纳米比亚的仙女圈被认为是由仙女们在夜里跳舞创造的。
Legend has it that
to be created
③_______________ the Great Blue Hole in Belize is a gateway to another world, connecting our land with an underwater kingdom filled with wonders.
据说伯利兹的大蓝洞是通往另一个世界的门户，将我们的国度与一个充满奇迹的水下王国连接起来。
It is said that
第三部分　对自然界神秘现象的科学解释
①The Northern Lights _______________ charged particles from the sun entering Earth's atmosphere and interacting with its magnetic field, exciting gases to glow in bright colors.
北极光是由来自太阳的带电粒子进入地球大气层并与其磁场相互作用引起的，激发气体发出亮丽的光。
are caused by
②Fireflies produce light through a chemical reaction in their bellies,___________________________________________.
萤火虫通过其腹部的化学反应产生光。这种光线有助于它们与其他萤火虫交流。
helping them communicate with other fireflies
[针对练笔]
根据下面表格中的内容写一篇有关“北美大脚怪(Bigfoot)”的短文，向校报的“自然探秘”栏目投稿。
出没地址 北美
怪物描述 像猿(ape)，高6—10英尺，重500磅以上，全身覆盖棕色或红色毛，头和眼睛很大，脚印长达24英寸
发现情况 科学家和研究人员也找到了相关的毛发、粪便(waste)及大脚印等
结论 无其他证据证明其存在，也许是当地传说以吓唬徒步者或猎人
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Bigfoot, which was first seen in North America, is ①_______________
_________________ (世界闻名的神秘事件之一)．
Witnesses described it as an ape-like creature. It was said to be 6－10 feet tall, and ②______________________ (体重超过500磅)．Besides, it was claimed to be covered in brown or red fur ③__________________________ _______ (有一双大眼睛和一个大脑袋). Footprints up to 24 inches long have also been found.
one of the world-
famous mysteries
weigh over 500 pounds
with two large eyes and a big
head
Teams of scientists and researchers ④___________________________ _____________(曾去那里做研究的) have found things related to it, such as waste, fur, big footprints and so on. However, ⑤_______________________ __________________________________(到目前为止，还没有其他证据证明它的存在). Some people think it may be just folk tales or stories to terrify hikers or hunters in North America.
who have been there to do
research
so far there has been no
other evidence to prove its existence
写作素材储备
1．描述某种神秘现象
①The monster of ...is back in the news.
②It is known to all that ...
③It lies in ...
④It looks like a ...
2．描述对神秘现象的解释
①Some scientists think that ...
②Some people believe in its existence, because ...
③By recent research, we can learn that ...
④Other scientists consider ...
3．描述个人对此现象的认识
①Personally, I (don't) believe ...
②As far as I am concerned, I think ...
③In my point of view, I believe ...
No.2 课时跟踪检测
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．How the ancient Egyptians built the pyramids without modern machines puzzles people.(用主语从句和表语从句升级)
→
What puzzles people is how the ancient Egyptians built the
pyramids without modern machines.
2．Today the bridge is listed as a world's cultural heritage by the United Nations and thousands of people visit it every year.(with复合结构)
→
Today the bridge is listed as a world's cultural heritage by the
United Nations, with thousands of people visiting it every year.
3．Who created them, and for what, remains a mystery, and this makes it one of the top 10 mysteries.(改写为非谓语动词作状语)
→
4．Why have so many ships and planes disappeared here It is hard to understand.(改写为含形式主语it的主从复合句)
→
Who created them, and for what, remains a mystery, making it one
of the top 10 mysteries.
It is hard to understand why so many ships and planes have
disappeared here.
5．To be frank, some unexplained phenomena happened in this area.(改写为含现在分词作定语的there be 句型)
→
To be frank, there were some unexplained phenomena happening
in this area.
Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．As we all know, the Pyramid is _____________________________ (最著名的象征之一) of ancient Egyptian civilisation.The Pyramid was made of blocks of stone, some of which _____________________________ (重达15吨)．
one of the most famous symbols
weighed as much as fifteen tons
2．The ancient stones in the southwest of England ________________ ___________(举世闻名)．How Stonehenge was built ___________________ ____________________(几千年来一直是个谜)．
3．Scientists have been exploring the area to ____________________ (解开这一谜团)．So far ________________________________________(对此一直没有科学的解释)．
are famous all over
the world
has been a mystery for
thousands of years
work out the mystery
there has been no scientific explanation for it
4．The Bigfoot_______________ (得名) because of its large footprints.It lives in the mountainous forests of northwest America and probably ____________________________(看起来像只巨大的猴子) — tall and hairy with big arms and legs.Local people have many stories to tell about it.
got its name
looks like a very large monkey
5．_____________________________________________ (世界上最著名的怪物之一) is the Loch Ness Monster.It lives in a deep lake in the north of Scotland and it is very old.It has a small head and a long tail and __________________________________(有些人认为它是一只恐龙)．
One of the most famous monsters in the world
some people believe it is a dinosaur
Ⅲ.应用文写作
百慕大三角是大西洋西北部的一个地区，据称在那里已有20多架飞机和50多艘水面船只失踪了。有些科学家认为该现象有可能是由导航错误或者超级巨浪(rogue waves)所导致，但也有一些人声称这些失踪事件超出了人为错误或自然行为的界限。请以The Bermuda Triangle为题写一篇介绍世界未解之谜的文章。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：a distress signal求救信号；triangular三角形的
The Bermuda Triangle
参考范文：
The Bermuda Triangle
Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean, in a roughly triangular area known as the Bermuda Triangle, lie more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks.
What makes these wrecks so mysterious is that the cause of them remains largely unknown — ships were abandoned without apparent reason. Distress signals were never sent and aircraft were lost without trace. Some believe that supernatural forces are responsible while others put the accidents and disappearances down to coincidence.Scientific theories, meanwhile, include pilot error when trying to navigate the area, and huge “rogue waves” caused by terrible storms.
Although many ships and planes cross the Bermuda Triangle without incident，the stories behind those doomed vessel's fates continue to intrigue people's imagination.
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Banjo woke up early this morning. He pulled hard at his sister Mog's sleeping bag. “Get out of that，” he said. “It's a great day for exploring.”
After breakfast, they put their boots and packs on, and then set off down the overgrown track.
Having been walking for a while, Mog suddenly stopped. “Look，” she said, pointing through the trees. “An old hut with an old car. Someone must have lived here years ago.”
“Maybe they're still there，” said Banjo.
“I don't think so，” said Mog. “Why would anyone want to live in that old dump？”
“Well, let's just check.” Banjo threw a handful of stones at the hut door, making loud noise.
Abruptly, an old man with gray hair and a beard rushed out of the hut, waving a frying pan and shouting, “What do you think you are doing Get off my land! You are not allowed here！”
Banjo and Mog had never seen anyone so frightening. His eyes were wide and he was swinging the frying pan around.
“Run！” Banjo yelled.
The two started running as if they were deer pursued by a hungry lion. Wild thoughts raced through Mog's mind. What if he caught them He looked half crazy. They kept running for quite a while. Banjo was well ahead of Mog. He glanced behind, no the hut man. Great. Wait, no Mog! Where is she？！
“Mog！” Banjo shouted. Silence. He could feel fear. Something terrible must have happened to Mog. Banjo felt it hard to breathe.
Suddenly, he heard a faint sound, a depressed moan. Then he heard Mog's voice; it was a panicky voice and far away. “Help! Help！”
He moved forward carefully towards Mog's voice, knelt down and found himself peering into a deep, dark hole. Mog was sitting at the bottom of the hole, sobbing, with her leg bleeding. Banjo could see the steep, slippery walls of the hole. There was no way he could save Mog out on his own. He could feel his heart pounding but he had to keep calm, for Mog's sake.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Banjo realized there was only one he could turn to.
The hut man found a long rope and some wood and followed Banjo.
参考范文：
Banjo realized there was only one he could turn to. Without hesitation, he rushed to the hut. His heart beating fiercely, Banjo knocked on the door cautiously. The door was open and there stood the old man, staring at him. Banjo gathered all his courage, murmured an apology and begged the old man to save Mog. With no reply, Banjo's heart sank and he ducked his head, trying to hide tears. At the critical moment, the old man turned around, searching for something. Banjo waited outside, worried and expectant.
The hut man found a long rope and some wood and followed Banjo. Arriving at the hole, the hut man lit the wood so that they could gain a clear sight into the hole. “Mog! Are you all right？” “No ...”answered Mog in a shaky voice. The hut man slowly threw one end of the rope into the hole with the other in his hands, “Fasten his rope to your waist and grasp it tightly. We will pull you out.” Mog did it accordingly. They finally made it! Tears in eyes, the two siblings looked at the kind and forgiving old man, saying in earnest, “Thank you so much.”
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Now, imagine we're deep space explorers and that we've found something out in space that is both extremely heavy and very small.This mysterious object would pull so powerfully that nothing inside could escape to the outside. 1 Again imagine we stay in our spaceship at a safe distance and make a movie of this black hole. 2 We would instead see the black hole eat anything that came too close.We get lucky: as we watch, the black hole swallows an entire star!
Our movie, titled “Black hole eats a star”， gets a million views online. 3 In the movie played backwards, we'd see a very heavy, very small object just sitting there — and then, all of a sudden, spit out an entire star! The object we're looking at now, which spits everything out and eats nothing, would be called a white hole.
Are there white holes We have good evidence from our telescopes that black holes really do exist. 4 That astronomers think about white holes is because of Albert Einstein. He came up with an excellent idea about gravity. His theory describes how black holes work, with their huge gravitational pull and also says white holes are possible. So could our universe actually make a white hole 5 Probably not. Something can be “possible” as an idea, but also extremely unlikely in real life.
White holes are unlikely because they are an “in reverse” kind of thing. Time in our universe only flows in one direction: forward. So for now, white holes are just an interesting possibility.
A．This kind of object is a black hole.
B．Is there a white hole in the universe
C．Now picture yourself near a black hole.
D．However, we've never seen a white hole.
E．And could a black hole become a white hole
F．We'd never see anything escape from the black hole.
G．But now imagine what would happen if we played it in reverse.
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了宇宙中是否存在白洞的问题。
1．选A　空前一句提到了一个神秘的物体，结合下文“Again imagine we stay in our spaceship at a safe distance and make a movie of this black hole.”可知，这个神秘的物体就是黑洞。故A项符合语境。
2．选F　空格后面的“instead”说明前后意义相反。空格后一句表达的是“我们会看到黑洞吞掉任何靠得太近的东西”，所以F项“我们永远看不到任何东西从黑洞中逃脱”符合语境。
3．选G　空后一句提到了倒放的电影中呈现的画面，空格后的“In the movie played backwards”与G项中的“played it in reverse”都强调倒放，意义一致，故G选项“但是现在想象一下，如果我们倒着播放它会发生什么”符合语境。
4．选D　上文提到望远镜提供了很好的证据表明黑洞确实存在，所以D选项“然而，我们却从没有见过白洞”与上文形成对比和转折，符合语境。
5．选E　根据上文“So could our universe actually make a white hole？”以及后文“Probably not.”可知，设空处应该也是一个针对白洞的设问句，故E选项“黑洞会变成白洞吗？”符合语境。5 / 5
Section Ⅵ　Writing
写作项目——Writing about the unexplained
本单元要求写一篇介绍自然界神秘现象的文章，属于现象说明文。此类文体较为常见，一般应先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因，最后发表看法。 文章通常先列举相关事例作为导入，然后深入分析，采用由现象到本质、层层深入的行文模式。
由教材学写作
一、学文体架构
(一)析教材课文
Para.1：A general introduction of the unexplained phenomenon.
Para.2：The reason why it is mysterious.
Para.3：The non scientific explanations.
Para.4：Scientists' explanation.
(二)根据教材课文呈现的介绍神秘现象的文章，可总结出该类文体的框架结构如下：
二、学写作手法
第二段尾句使用了疑问句，能引起读者兴趣；第三段第一句使用了it作形式主语，最后一句使用了感叹句，以引起读者的关注。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①_________________________ we should protect the ocean.我们很有必要保护海洋。
②____________________________________her hometown is!
她的家乡是个多么迷人的地方啊！
三、学逻辑衔接
文章第四段作者在介绍科学家的观点时，使用了however, It's more likely ...that ..., The rest ...等连接成分，使句子之间层次清晰，逻辑顺畅，语意连贯。
四、学亮点表达
1．亮点词汇
(1)第一段使用了形容词numerous，强调了这些遗址规模庞大、遍布广泛；使用形容词impressive强调了自然特征的非凡之处。这两个形容词在句子中丰富了语言的表达，增强了读者对句子所描述内容的感知和印象，构建了一个既包含丰富的古代文明遗迹又拥有令人难忘的自然景观的画面。
(2)第三段第二句使用了形容词amazing，强调这些自然特征非同寻常、令人惊叹，使读者在阅读时能够感受到作者对这些自然特征的敬畏和赞赏之情，有助于增强句子的表现力和感染力。
2．亮点句式
第一段使用了过去分词短语“known as the 30th parallel north”作后置定语，修饰名词词组a special line of latitude；介词短语Along ...前置，谓语lie位于主语之前，构成完全倒装句。
[仿写训练|完成句子]
①The Grand Canyon in Arizona is ______________________________.
亚利桑那州的大峡谷是一个令人惊叹的自然奇观。
②Along the ancient Silk Road, ______________________________ dot the landscape, showing the once rich history and culture.
沿着古老的丝绸之路，无数的文明遗迹点缀着风景，显示着曾经丰富的历史和文化。
③The Great Barrier Reef, stretching for over 2,300 kilometers along the coast of Australia, is ___________________ of marine biodiversity.
大堡礁沿着澳大利亚海岸绵延2 300多千米，展示着令人印象深刻的海洋生物多样性。
④The plan ___________________________________ is under discussion.
与这个项目有关的计划正在讨论中。
⑤__________________________ at least twenty umbrellas of various sizes and colors.
走廊(corridor)里放着至少二十把雨伞，五颜六色，大小不等。
具体写作指导
How to write about the unexplained
——如何写一篇介绍神秘现象的文章
第一步：构思谋篇
Part 1 A brief introduction of the unexplained phenomenon.
Part 2 Main body (introduce mysterious features and non scientific explanations)．
Part 3 Conclusion (scientists' explanation).
第二步：要点表达
第一部分　自然界的神秘现象
①Have you ever wondered why some lakes seem to disappear without a trace, ________________________________？
你有没有想过，为什么有些湖泊消失得无影无踪，几年后又重新出现？
②The Bermuda Triangle, a part of the ocean ____________________________________， is a fascinating yet unexplained mystery.
百慕大三角是海洋的一部分，船只和飞机在这里神秘失踪，它是一个迷人但无法解释的谜团。
③Did you know that there are strange glowing lights in the sky ______________________？ Scientists are still trying to figure out what causes this bizarre natural event.
你知道吗，天空中有一些奇怪的发光体，叫做球状闪电？科学家们仍在试图找出是什么导致了这种奇怪的自然事件。
④Deep in the ocean, there are creatures glowing in the dark, which is _____________________________ we're still learning about how and why these animals produce light.
在海洋深处，有一些生物在黑暗中发光，这种光是如此美丽又神秘，我们仍在了解这些动物是如何以及为什么发光的。
第二部分　对自然界神秘现象的非科学解释
①__________________________ ball lightning is a restless spirit, creating its energy in the form of a glowing ball.
传说球状闪电是一个躁动不安的精灵，以发光的球状表现其能量。
②The fairy circles of Namibia are believed __________________________ by fairies dancing in the night.
纳米比亚的仙女圈被认为是由仙女们在夜里跳舞创造的。
③__________________________ the Great Blue Hole in Belize is a gateway to another world, connecting our land with an underwater kingdom filled with wonders.
据说伯利兹的大蓝洞是通往另一个世界的门户，将我们的国度与一个充满奇迹的水下王国连接起来。
第三部分　对自然界神秘现象的科学解释
①The Northern Lights ________________ charged particles from the sun entering Earth's atmosphere and interacting with its magnetic field, exciting gases to glow in bright colors.
北极光是由来自太阳的带电粒子进入地球大气层并与其磁场相互作用引起的，激发气体发出亮丽的光。
②Fireflies produce light through a chemical reaction in their bellies, ____________________.
萤火虫通过其腹部的化学反应产生光。这种光线有助于它们与其他萤火虫交流。
[针对练笔]
根据下面表格中的内容写一篇有关“北美大脚怪(Bigfoot)”的短文，向校报的“自然探秘”栏目投稿。
出没地址 北美
怪物描述 像猿(ape)，高6—10英尺，重500磅以上，全身覆盖棕色或红色毛，头和眼睛很大，脚印长达24英寸
发现情况 科学家和研究人员也找到了相关的毛发、粪便(waste)及大脚印等
结论 无其他证据证明其存在，也许是当地传说以吓唬徒步者或猎人
根据括号内的汉语提示补全短文
Bigfoot, which was first seen in North America, is ①____________________________ (世界闻名的神秘事件之一)．
Witnesses described it as an ape like creature. It was said to be 6－10 feet tall, and ②______________________ (体重超过500磅)．Besides, it was claimed to be covered in brown or red fur ③______________________________ (有一双大眼睛和一个大脑袋). Footprints up to 24 inches long have also been found.
Teams of scientists and researchers ④__________________________________ (曾去那里做研究的) have found things related to it, such as waste, fur, big footprints and so on. However, ⑤____________________________________________________________ (到目前为止，还没有其他证据证明它的存在). Some people think it may be just folk tales or stories to terrify hikers or hunters in North America.
写作素材储备
1．描述某种神秘现象
①The monster of ...is back in the news.
②It is known to all that ...
③It lies in ...
④It looks like a ...
2．描述对神秘现象的解释
①Some scientists think that ...
②Some people believe in its existence, because ...
③By recent research, we can learn that ...
④Other scientists consider ...
3．描述个人对此现象的认识
①Personally, I (don't) believe ...
②As far as I am concerned, I think ...
③In my point of view, I believe ...
Section Ⅵ
由教材学写作
二、①It is essential that　②What a fascinating place
四、①an amazing natural wonder
②numerous ruins of civilizations　③an impressive display
④related to the project　⑤Along the corridor lie
具体写作指导
第二步　第一部分：①only to reappear years later
②where ships and planes have mysteriously disappeared
③called ball lightning　④so beautiful but mysterious that
第二部分：①Legend has it that　②to be created
③It is said that
第三部分：①are caused by
②helping them communicate with other fireflies
[针对练笔]
①one of the world famous mysteries　②weigh over 500 pounds
③with two large eyes and a big head
④who have been there to do research
⑤so far there has been no other evidence to prove its existence4 / 4
UNIT 5　课时检测(六)　Writing
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.靓表达升级
1．How the ancient Egyptians built the pyramids without modern machines puzzles people.(用主语从句和表语从句升级)
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　2．Today the bridge is listed as a world's cultural heritage by the United Nations and thousands of people visit it every year.(with复合结构)
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3．Who created them, and for what, remains a mystery, and this makes it one of the top 10 mysteries.(改写为非谓语动词作状语)
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4．Why have so many ships and planes disappeared here It is hard to understand.(改写为含形式主语it的主从复合句)
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5．To be frank, some unexplained phenomena happened in this area.(改写为含现在分词作定语的there be 句型)
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Ⅱ.微语境写作
1．As we all know, the Pyramid is ____________________________________ (最著名的象征之一) of ancient Egyptian civilisation.The Pyramid was made of blocks of stone, some of which
____________________________________________ (重达15吨)．
2．The ancient stones in the southwest of England __________________________ (举世闻名)．How Stonehenge was built _____________________________ (几千年来一直是个谜)．
3．Scientists have been exploring the area to __________________________ (解开这一谜团)．So far ________________________________________ (对此一直没有科学的解释)．
4．The Bigfoot ______________ (得名) because of its large footprints.It lives in the mountainous forests of northwest America and probably ____________________ (看起来像只巨大的猴子) — tall and hairy with big arms and legs.Local people have many stories to tell about it.
5．__________________________________________ (世界上最著名的怪物之一) is the Loch Ness Monster.It lives in a deep lake in the north of Scotland and it is very old.It has a small head and a long tail and ______________________________ (有些人认为它是一只恐龙)．
Ⅲ.应用文写作
百慕大三角是大西洋西北部的一个地区，据称在那里已有20多架飞机和50多艘水面船只失踪了。有些科学家认为该现象有可能是由导航错误或者超级巨浪(rogue waves)所导致，但也有一些人声称这些失踪事件超出了人为错误或自然行为的界限。请以The Bermuda Triangle为题写一篇介绍世界未解之谜的文章。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：a distress signal求救信号；triangular三角形的
The Bermuda Triangle
　
　
　
　
　
　
Ⅳ.读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Banjo woke up early this morning. He pulled hard at his sister Mog's sleeping bag. “Get out of that，” he said. “It's a great day for exploring.”
After breakfast, they put their boots and packs on, and then set off down the overgrown track.
Having been walking for a while, Mog suddenly stopped. “Look，” she said, pointing through the trees. “An old hut with an old car. Someone must have lived here years ago.”
“Maybe they're still there，” said Banjo.
“I don't think so，” said Mog. “Why would anyone want to live in that old dump？”
“Well, let's just check.” Banjo threw a handful of stones at the hut door, making loud noise.
Abruptly, an old man with gray hair and a beard rushed out of the hut, waving a frying pan and shouting, “What do you think you are doing Get off my land! You are not allowed here！”
Banjo and Mog had never seen anyone so frightening. His eyes were wide and he was swinging the frying pan around.
“Run！” Banjo yelled.
The two started running as if they were deer pursued by a hungry lion. Wild thoughts raced through Mog's mind. What if he caught them He looked half crazy. They kept running for quite a while. Banjo was well ahead of Mog. He glanced behind, no the hut man. Great. Wait, no Mog! Where is she？！
“Mog！” Banjo shouted. Silence. He could feel fear. Something terrible must have happened to Mog. Banjo felt it hard to breathe.
Suddenly, he heard a faint sound, a depressed moan. Then he heard Mog's voice; it was a panicky voice and far away. “Help! Help！”
He moved forward carefully towards Mog's voice, knelt down and found himself peering into a deep, dark hole. Mog was sitting at the bottom of the hole, sobbing, with her leg bleeding. Banjo could see the steep, slippery walls of the hole. There was no way he could save Mog out on his own. He could feel his heart pounding but he had to keep calm, for Mog's sake.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
Banjo realized there was only one he could turn to.　
　
　
　
　
　
The hut man found a long rope and some wood and followed Banjo.　
　
　
　
　
　
[阅读拓展训练]
阅读七选五
Now, imagine we're deep space explorers and that we've found something out in space that is both extremely heavy and very small.This mysterious object would pull so powerfully that nothing inside could escape to the outside.__1__ Again imagine we stay in our spaceship at a safe distance and make a movie of this black hole.__2__ We would instead see the black hole eat anything that came too close.We get lucky: as we watch, the black hole swallows an entire star!
Our movie, titled “Black hole eats a star”， gets a million views online. __3__ In the movie played backwards, we'd see a very heavy, very small object just sitting there — and then, all of a sudden, spit out an entire star! The object we're looking at now, which spits everything out and eats nothing, would be called a white hole.
Are there white holes We have good evidence from our telescopes that black holes really do exist.__4__ That astronomers think about white holes is because of Albert Einstein. He came up with an excellent idea about gravity. His theory describes how black holes work, with their huge gravitational pull and also says white holes are possible. So could our universe actually make a white hole __5__ Probably not. Something can be “possible” as an idea, but also extremely unlikely in real life.
White holes are unlikely because they are an “in reverse” kind of thing. Time in our universe only flows in one direction: forward. So for now, white holes are just an interesting possibility.
A．This kind of object is a black hole.
B．Is there a white hole in the universe
C．Now picture yourself near a black hole.
D．However, we've never seen a white hole.
E．And could a black hole become a white hole
F．We'd never see anything escape from the black hole.
G．But now imagine what would happen if we played it in reverse.
UNIT 5　课时检测(六)
[写作专项训练]
Ⅰ.1.What puzzles people is how the ancient Egyptians built the pyramids without modern machines.
2．Today the bridge is listed as a world's cultural heritage by the United Nations, with thousands of people visiting it every year.
3．Who created them, and for what, remains a mystery, making it one of the top 10 mysteries.
4．It is hard to understand why so many ships and planes have disappeared here.
5．To be frank, there were some unexplained phenomena happening in this area.
Ⅱ.1.one of the most famous symbols; weighed as much as fifteen tons
2．are famous all over the world; has been a mystery for thousands of years
3．work out the mystery; there has been no scientific explanation for it
4．got its name; looks like a very large monkey
5．One of the most famous monsters in the world; some people believe it is a dinosaur
Ⅲ.应用文写作(参考范文)
The Bermuda Triangle
Far below the surface of the North Atlantic Ocean, in a roughly triangular area known as the Bermuda Triangle, lie more than 50 shipwrecks and 20 plane wrecks.
What makes these wrecks so mysterious is that the cause of them remains largely unknown — ships were abandoned without apparent reason. Distress signals were never sent and aircraft were lost without trace. Some believe that supernatural forces are responsible while others put the accidents and disappearances down to coincidence.Scientific theories, meanwhile, include pilot error when trying to navigate the area, and huge “rogue waves” caused by terrible storms.
Although many ships and planes cross the Bermuda Triangle without incident，the stories behind those doomed vessel's fates continue to intrigue people's imagination.
Ⅳ.读后续写(参考范文)
Banjo realized there was only one he could turn to. Without hesitation, he rushed to the hut. His heart beating fiercely, Banjo knocked on the door cautiously. The door was open and there stood the old man, staring at him. Banjo gathered all his courage, murmured an apology and begged the old man to save Mog. With no reply, Banjo's heart sank and he ducked his head, trying to hide tears. At the critical moment, the old man turned around, searching for something. Banjo waited outside, worried and expectant.
The hut man found a long rope and some wood and followed Banjo. Arriving at the hole, the hut man lit the wood so that they could gain a clear sight into the hole. “Mog! Are you all right？” “No ...”answered Mog in a shaky voice. The hut man slowly threw one end of the rope into the hole with the other in his hands, “Fasten his rope to your waist and grasp it tightly. We will pull you out.” Mog did it accordingly. They finally made it! Tears in eyes, the two siblings looked at the kind and forgiving old man, saying in earnest, “Thank you so much.”
[阅读拓展训练]
语篇解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章主要说明了宇宙中是否存在白洞的问题。
1．选A　空前一句提到了一个神秘的物体，结合下文“Again imagine we stay in our spaceship at a safe distance and make a movie of this black hole.”可知，这个神秘的物体就是黑洞。故A项符合语境。
2．选F　空格后面的“instead”说明前后意义相反。空格后一句表达的是“我们会看到黑洞吞掉任何靠得太近的东西”，所以F项“我们永远看不到任何东西从黑洞中逃脱”符合语境。
3．选G　空后一句提到了倒放的电影中呈现的画面，空格后的“In the movie played backwards”与G项中的“played it in reverse”都强调倒放，意义一致，故G选项“但是现在想象一下，如果我们倒着播放它会发生什么”符合语境。
4．选D　上文提到望远镜提供了很好的证据表明黑洞确实存在，所以D选项“然而，我们却从没有见过白洞”与上文形成对比和转折，符合语境。
5．选E　根据上文“So could our universe actually make a white hole？”以及后文“Probably not.”可知，设空处应该也是一个针对白洞的设问句，故E选项“黑洞会变成白洞吗？”符合语境。

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