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Unit 3 My School 单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
“多彩多姿的学校生活”
本单元的话题是“谈论学校布局以及学校生活”。核心语言主要围绕学校设施、位置以及设施功能展开。涉及学校设施的介绍（dining hall, modern building, office, sports field, smart whiteboard, locker, drawer, reading corner, bookcase, screen），学校设施的位置（in front of, across from, at the back of），以及设施功能（put up important notices, do exercises, raise the flag, change seats, delicious）等。
学校生活的多彩、安全、有意义对学生的成长至关重要。通过学习本单元内容，学生可以了解学校生活中的各种设施和位置，了解学校内不同设施的功能和作用，进一步熟悉学校环境，为学生更好地适应学校生活奠定基础，有助于他们更好地融入学校大家庭，培养对学校的归属感和责任感。
Draw the map of your school.
【词汇积累】
great极棒的，极好的 /clean洁净的，干净的 /special特殊的，特别的
beautiful美丽的 /amazing令人惊奇(惊喜或惊叹)的 /nice美好的，令人愉快的
small小的 /modern现代的
across from在……对面 / behind在……后面 /next to紧挨着
at the back of在……后面 /in front of在……前面 / in the middle of在……的中间
between...and...在……和……之间
science building科学楼 /classroom building教学楼 /teachers' building教师办公楼
art building艺术楼 /school hall学校礼堂 / sports field运动场
/music hall音乐厅 /library图书馆 /dining hall餐厅
do exercises做体操 /have lunch吃午餐 /raise the national flag升国旗
read books读书 /have classes上课
【句式积累】
This is my new school.It's not big but very beautiful.这是我的新学校。它不大但是很漂亮。
My new school is great and very beautiful.我的新学校很棒并且很漂亮。
There is... in front of/next to/at the back of/...在……前面/旁边/后面/……有……
There are...in...在……里有 … /....is across from... ……在……对面。
Behind...is... ……的后面是 … /It's between...and...它位于……和……之间。
We do exercises/spend most of the time/raise the national flag/enjoy delicious food/...there.
我们在那 里做操/度过大多数时间/升国旗/享用美味的食物……
What a nice school!I love my new school.多好的学校呀!我爱我的新学校。
1．（2021·广西·中考真题）
校园处处都是美，校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美？
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置？
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含所有要点；
2. 结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere._________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere. Among all the places, I like the library best. The library lies in the eastern part of our school. It is between the teaching building and the playground. It is in front of our laboratory building. There are a variety of books and most of my classmates like to go there to relax. We can learn a lot from books and we enjoy the quietness and peace in the library. Reading usually makes me relaxed and knowledgeable.
【详解】
题干解读：
本文是一篇材料作文。要求以The Most Beautiful Place in My School为题，根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：
写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍校园的哪一个地方最美，它在什么位置以及喜欢这个地方的理由。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2.（2022·上海·中考真题）
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：
读者之家（Reading corner） 劳技工坊（Mini workshop） 艺体天地（Arts and sports centre）
义卖集市（Charity market） 科创小屋（High-tech lab） 心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room）
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。
（注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to you to share my ideas about the use of the student activity room. I prefer to make it a heart-to-heart room.
For some students, they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy. They can turn to this place for help if there is one.
Besides, students are likely to suffer from mental problems. If these problems aren’t solved well, they may bring bad results. The heart-to-heart room can offer help to these students in time.
Thank you for reading my e-mail.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：首先选择其中你最喜欢的一种设想，发邮件给校报张老师，并说明理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己喜欢的设想；
第二步，介绍喜欢的理由；
第三步，表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do更喜欢做某事 ②turn to求助于 ③suffer from遭受
[高分句型]
① they may feel helpless and depressed when they meet troubles in life, especially those who are shy.（含有when引导的时间状语和who引导的定语从句）
②They can turn to this place for help if there is one.（if引导的条件状语从句）
(1)
（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）假如你是大明，就读于某中学。你的学校有5栋大楼和48间教室。每间教室里有一台电脑。图书馆在教学楼左面，科学实验室在图书馆后面，体育馆在餐厅前面。请你根据以上信息，以“My School”为题介绍一下你的学校，50词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My School
Hello, everyone! I’m Daming.
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【答案】参考范文
My School
Hello, everyone! I’m Daming. I’m a junior high school student. This is my school. There are five buildings in my school. We have forty-eight classrooms. There is a computer in every classroom. The library is on the left of the teaching building. The science lab is behind the library. The sports hall is in front of the dining hall.
I love my school.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示描述一下学校的建筑，包括教室、图书馆、实验楼、体育馆等信息。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，介绍自己的身份；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍学校的建筑——教室、图书馆、实验楼、体育馆等信息；
第三步，最后表达对学校的热爱。
[亮点词汇]
① on the left of在……的左边 ② teaching building教学楼 ③ in front of在……的前面
[高分句型]
① This is my school.（用This is...进行介绍）
②There are five buildings in my school.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
(2)
请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，描述一下你的学校。
提示： 1. 学校：又大又漂亮，有30个教室，大且明亮；
2. 新的操场：打篮球，踢足球；
3. 图书馆：又大又现代化；大厅：开会；
4. 老师：很友好，很受学生爱戴；
5. 住在离学校很远的地方，骑自行车上学，时间约为20分钟。
要求： 1. 80词左右，可适当发挥；
2. 语法正确，语句通顺。
My School
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【答案】参考范文
My School
My school is big and beautiful. We have thirty classrooms. They are big and bright. Our school has a new playground. The students in my school often play basketball and football there. We have a big and modern library with all kinds of books. We have a hall and we often have meetings there. Our teachers are all very kind. We like them very much.
I live far away from the school. I go to school by bike. It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school.
Do you like my school
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示描述一下学校，包括学校的建筑、老师以及上学的方式等内容，写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步聚]
第一步，先总体介绍学校的概况；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次介绍学校的建筑——教室、图书馆、礼堂等，然后介绍老师。
第三步，最后介绍上学方式。
[亮点词汇]
①all kind of各种各样的 ②have meetings开会 ③far away from远离……
[高分句型]
①There are all kinds of books in it.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
②I go to school by bike.（用“by+交通工具”表达出行方式）
③It takes me about twenty minutes to get to school.（用“It takes sb. some time to do sth.”表达做某事花费某人多少时间）
(3)
假如你是Alice，你的网友Tom想了解你学校的情况。请你根据以下提示，给Tom发一封电子邮件，告诉他有关你学校的情况。
提示：(1)在第一中学上学，学校很大，很漂亮，在学校很开心；
(2)家离学校很近，经常步行去上学，到校大约花费5分钟；
(3)学校有一个图书馆，图书馆里有两间阅览室……；
(4)有一个大操场……；
(5)老师们对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们。
要求：80词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当补充细节，书写工整。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Alice
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I study at No. 1 Middle School now. My school is very big and beautiful. I have fun at school. I live near my school so I often go to school on foot. It takes me about five minutes to get there.
There is a library in my school. There are two reading rooms in the library. We often read books there. We also have a big playground. We usually play basketball in the playground.
Our teachers are very kind to us. We like them very much.
This is my school. I love it.
Yours,
Alice
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明自己所在的学校，以及家里距离学校远近，交通方式等信息；
第二步，具体阐述学校设施和学校人员；
第三步，最后表达对于这个学校的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have fun玩得高兴 ②be kind to对……友好 ③like...very much非常喜欢……
[高分句型]
①I live near my school so I often go to school on foot.（so连接并列句）
②It takes me about five minutes to get there.（it固定句型）
(4)
假如你叫Millie，请以“My School”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括：
1. 我在阳光中学 (Sunshine Middle School) 上学，学校不是很大，但是很干净；
2. 有一个现代化的操场和一幢大楼；
3. 大楼有五层，每层楼都有一间办公室、两个卫生间和四间教室；
4. 学校还有一个礼堂、一个图书馆和一间阅览室，图书馆是我最喜欢的地方；
5. 老师和同学们都很友好，我非常喜欢我的学校。
My School
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【答案】参考例文:
My School
My name is Millie and I study at Sunshine Middle School.
It’s not very big but very clean. There’s a modern playground and a big building in my school. The building has 5 floors and each floor has an office, 2 toilets and 4 classrooms. My school also has a hall, a library and a reading room. And the library is my favourite place. My teachers and classmates are all very friendly.
I like my school very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为说明文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我的学校的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请以 ‘My School’ 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学校的名字、学校的设施、学校的师生等”几个方面重点介绍我的学校的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“我非常喜欢我的学校”。
[亮点词汇]
①middle school中学 ②reading room阅览室 ③there be有 ④very much非常
[高分句型]
①There’s a modern playground and a big building in my school. (there be句型)
②My school also has a hall, a library and a reading room. (and表并列)
(5)
假如你是Alice，你的网友Mary发邮件向你了解你的学校的情况。现在请你根据以下提示，给她发一封电子邮件，告诉她有关你的学校的情况。(词数60左右)
提示：1. 学校很大，很漂亮，在学校上学很开心；
2. 我们有一个图书馆，有两个阅览室，两个电脑房;
3. 我最喜欢的地方是操场。它在教室的前面，我们可以在那儿打排球等；
4. 老师对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们；
5. 我校不大， 我经常步行上学，对我而言是个特殊的地方。
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【答案】One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m glad to get your e-mail. Our school is very big and beautiful. I have a great time at school. There is a library, two reading rooms and two computer rooms in our school. My favourite place is the playground in front of the classrooms. We can play volleyball and football there. Our teachers are very kind to us. We like them very much. I often go to school on foot. Our school is not very big, but I think it is special for me. I love it very much.
Best wishes,
Alice
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据提示要点介绍学校；
第二步，书写总结，发表对学校的情感。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心 ②in front of在……前面 ③on foot步行
[高分句型]
①There is a library, two reading rooms and two computer rooms in our school.（there be句型）
②Our school is not very big, but I think it is special for me.（宾语从句）
(6)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite place at school”. (以“我最喜欢的校园一角”为题，写一篇不少于60词的作文。) (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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【答案】参考例文：
My favourite place at school
I’m a middle school student. I like my school. I like the school garden best. The garden is behind the library. It is not big, but very beautiful. There is always a lot to see and a lot to do in the garden. We grow some flowers in the garden. We go to work there once a week. Sometimes we feel tired, but we are always happy. There are many colourful flowers in the garden now. Welcome to our garden.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作时注意要紧扣题目，表达内容要完整。在叙述时，英语表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直接点题，讲明自己最喜欢学校哪里；
第二步，对喜欢的地方进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot许多 ②welcome to欢迎到……
[高分句型]
①Sometimes we feel tired, but we are always happy. (but引导表示转折的并列句)
②There are many colourful flowers in the garden now. (there be句型)
(7)
你已经迈入初中生涯一年了，相信你对自己的学校已经非常了解。请根据以下提示词，以“My School”为题，写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你的学校。
提示词：on the Center Street; near a bank; playground (操场); library; dining hall; classroom...
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，短文词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。如需使用，姓名请用Li Hua，校名一律用Guangming Middle School；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。
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【答案】例文：
My School
I’m Li Hua. I’m a student from Guangming Middle School. Let me tell you something about my school.
My school is on the Center Street. It’s near a bank. It is very beautiful. We can see lots of trees and flowers around the school. There is a big playground on the left. We usually play on it. The library is on the right. I like reading books there. The dining hall is next to the classrooms. And my classroom is clean and tidy.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“My School”为题，结合提示词来介绍自己的学校，注意正确用词，避免出现语法和拼写方面的错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单自我介绍，直入主题，点明要介绍自己的学校；
第二步，介绍学校，包括地理位置、环境和教学设施等。
[亮点词汇]
① tell sb. sth. 告诉某人某事 ② lots of 很多 ③ next to 在……旁边
[高分句型]
① Let me tell you something about my school. (祈使句)
② There is a big playground on the left. (there be句式)
(8)
每个人都有自己梦想中的东西，作为学生，你梦想中的学校是什么样？请以My dream school为题。
要点：1.梦想中的学校环境怎么样？
2.梦想中的学校开设什么课程，老师怎么样？
3.……
要求：1.文中不得出现所在学校校名和师生姓名；
2.80 词左右。
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【答案】例文
My Dream School
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m.. There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We don’t need to do so much homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hours and play sports for hours every day. We can study music, PE, art and so on every day. My dream school looks like a big garden. There are all kinds of flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening to music. The teachers here are kind and helpful. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
How I wish I could receive education at such a school!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍梦想的学校生活；
第二步，介绍学校的样子和老师情况。
[亮点词汇]
①for example例如 ②look like看起来像 ③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.（there be句型）
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假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华。下周，20名新西兰中学生将到你校参观。请你写一篇短文向他们介绍学校的情况，
内容包括：1. 校园环境； 2. 师生关系； 3. 校园活动。
注意：1. 内容必须包含所给要点的信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：sports hall (n. 体育馆) , strict (adj. 严格的) , art festival (n. 艺术节)
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. I am Li Hua.
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I hope you can enjoy yourselves here. If you have any questions, you can ask me.
【答案】例文：
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. I am Li Hua. Now let me tell you something about my school. It is big with several tall buildings, a big playground and a sports hall. There are lots of flowers and trees everywhere. We like it very much.
There are more than 150 teachers in our school. In class, they are strict with us, but after class, they are kind and friendly to us. They teach us a lot and help us a lot. We are friends.
We have lots of colorful and meaningful activities, such as singing competitions and basketball matches. And there is always a sports meeting and an art festival every year. These school activities help us have a healthy body and make us happy.
I hope you can enjoy yourselves here. If you have any questions, you can ask me.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校环境。
第二步，介绍师生关系。
第三步，介绍校园活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb.对某人要求严格 ②be kind and friendly to sb.对某人友好 ③make us happy使我们快乐
[高分句型]
①I hope you can enjoy yourselves here. (省略that的宾语从句)
②If you have any questions, you can ask me. (if引导条件状语从句)
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假设你叫李明，你刚结识的美国笔友Mike 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的学校生活。请你阅读他的邮件并用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Ming,
Glad to make friends with you.
Can you tell me something about your school life What time do you usually go to school How do you get to school What subjects do you have in school What’s your favorite subject Why Oh, I’m wondering what your school life is like. Is it different from mine
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Mike
要求：(1)回复Mike的邮件，邮件中需涵盖以上内容要点提示(黑体部分)，可适当增加相关信息；
(2)词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to get your email. I am glad to tell you about my school life. Our school is big and beautiful. There is a tall teaching building with many classrooms. I usually go to school at 7:20 from Monday to Friday. I get to school by bike. I have many subjects, such as Chinese, maths, English, PE and so on. I like Chinese best. I often play ball games after school. I always have a good time at school. I think that it is different from your school life.
I hope we can be good friends.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很高兴收到你的邮件”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——上学时间、上学的交通方式、所学科目、最喜欢的科目、评价学习生活及不同等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望我们能成为好朋友”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①big and beautiful又大又漂亮 ②have a good time玩得开心 ③is different from与……不同
[高分句型]
①There is a tall teaching building with many classrooms. (there be句型）
②I think that it is different from your school life. (宾语从句）Unit 3 My School 单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
“多彩多姿的学校生活”
本单元的话题是“谈论学校布局以及学校生活”。核心语言主要围绕学校设施、位置以及设施功能展开。涉及学校设施的介绍（dining hall, modern building, office, sports field, smart whiteboard, locker, drawer, reading corner, bookcase, screen），学校设施的位置（in front of, across from, at the back of），以及设施功能（put up important notices, do exercises, raise the flag, change seats, delicious）等。
学校生活的多彩、安全、有意义对学生的成长至关重要。通过学习本单元内容，学生可以了解学校生活中的各种设施和位置，了解学校内不同设施的功能和作用，进一步熟悉学校环境，为学生更好地适应学校生活奠定基础，有助于他们更好地融入学校大家庭，培养对学校的归属感和责任感。
Draw the map of your school.
【词汇积累】
great极棒的，极好的 /clean洁净的，干净的 /special特殊的，特别的
beautiful美丽的 /amazing令人惊奇(惊喜或惊叹)的 /nice美好的，令人愉快的
small小的 /modern现代的
across from在……对面 / behind在……后面 /next to紧挨着
at the back of在……后面 /in front of在……前面 / in the middle of在……的中间
between...and...在……和……之间
science building科学楼 /classroom building教学楼 /teachers' building教师办公楼
art building艺术楼 /school hall学校礼堂 / sports field运动场
/music hall音乐厅 /library图书馆 /dining hall餐厅
do exercises做体操 /have lunch吃午餐 /raise the national flag升国旗
read books读书 /have classes上课
【句式积累】
This is my new school.It's not big but very beautiful.这是我的新学校。它不大但是很漂亮。
My new school is great and very beautiful.我的新学校很棒并且很漂亮。
There is... in front of/next to/at the back of/...在……前面/旁边/后面/……有……
There are...in...在……里有 … /....is across from... ……在……对面。
Behind...is... ……的后面是 … /It's between...and...它位于……和……之间。
We do exercises/spend most of the time/raise the national flag/enjoy delicious food/...there.
我们在那 里做操/度过大多数时间/升国旗/享用美味的食物……
What a nice school!I love my new school.多好的学校呀!我爱我的新学校。
1．（2021·广西·中考真题）
校园处处都是美，校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点：
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美？
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置？
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含所有要点；
2. 结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息，否则不予评分；
5. 词数80左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere._________________________________________________________
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2.（2022·上海·中考真题）
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
你校将增设一间学生活动室（student activity room），现有以下六种关于活动室用途的设想：
读者之家（Reading corner） 劳技工坊（Mini workshop） 艺体天地（Arts and sports centre）
义卖集市（Charity market） 科创小屋（High-tech lab） 心灵驿站（Heart-to-heart room）
学校正通过校报了解学生的意向。假设你是李华，请给校报张老师写封邮件，表明你最喜欢的一种设想，并说明理由。
（注意：1. 邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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（24-25七年级上·全国·单元测试）假如你是大明，就读于某中学。你的学校有5栋大楼和48间教室。每间教室里有一台电脑。图书馆在教学楼左面，科学实验室在图书馆后面，体育馆在餐厅前面。请你根据以上信息，以“My School”为题介绍一下你的学校，50词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
My School
Hello, everyone! I’m Daming.
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请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，描述一下你的学校。
提示： 1. 学校：又大又漂亮，有30个教室，大且明亮；
2. 新的操场：打篮球，踢足球；
3. 图书馆：又大又现代化；大厅：开会；
4. 老师：很友好，很受学生爱戴；
5. 住在离学校很远的地方，骑自行车上学，时间约为20分钟。
要求： 1. 80词左右，可适当发挥； 2. 语法正确，语句通顺。
My School
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假如你是Alice，你的网友Tom想了解你学校的情况。请你根据以下提示，给Tom发一封电子邮件，告诉他有关你学校的情况。
提示：(1)在第一中学上学，学校很大，很漂亮，在学校很开心；
(2)家离学校很近，经常步行去上学，到校大约花费5分钟；
(3)学校有一个图书馆，图书馆里有两间阅览室……；
(4)有一个大操场……；
(5)老师们对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们。
要求：80词左右，要点齐全，语句通顺，条理清晰，可适当补充细节，书写工整。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Alice
(4)
假如你叫Millie，请以“My School”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文，内容包括：
1. 我在阳光中学 (Sunshine Middle School) 上学，学校不是很大，但是很干净；
2. 有一个现代化的操场和一幢大楼；
3. 大楼有五层，每层楼都有一间办公室、两个卫生间和四间教室；
4. 学校还有一个礼堂、一个图书馆和一间阅览室，图书馆是我最喜欢的地方；
5. 老师和同学们都很友好，我非常喜欢我的学校。
My School
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(5)
假如你是Alice，你的网友Mary发邮件向你了解你的学校的情况。现在请你根据以下提示，给她发一封电子邮件，告诉她有关你的学校的情况。(词数60左右)
提示：1. 学校很大，很漂亮，在学校上学很开心；
2. 我们有一个图书馆，有两个阅览室，两个电脑房;
3. 我最喜欢的地方是操场。它在教室的前面，我们可以在那儿打排球等；
4. 老师对我们很友好，我们很喜欢他们；
5. 我校不大， 我经常步行上学，对我而言是个特殊的地方。
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(6)
Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite place at school”. (以“我最喜欢的校园一角”为题，写一篇不少于60词的作文。) (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
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(7)
你已经迈入初中生涯一年了，相信你对自己的学校已经非常了解。请根据以下提示词，以“My School”为题，写一篇短文向大家介绍一下你的学校。
提示词：on the Center Street; near a bank; playground (操场); library; dining hall; classroom...
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，短文词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。如需使用，姓名请用Li Hua，校名一律用Guangming Middle School；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分；
4. 抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。
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每个人都有自己梦想中的东西，作为学生，你梦想中的学校是什么样？请以My dream school为题。
要点：1.梦想中的学校环境怎么样？
2.梦想中的学校开设什么课程，老师怎么样？
3.……
要求：1.文中不得出现所在学校校名和师生姓名；
2.80 词左右。
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(9)
假设你是新华中学的学生会主席李华。下周，20名新西兰中学生将到你校参观。请你写一篇短文向他们介绍学校的情况，
内容包括：1. 校园环境； 2. 师生关系； 3. 校园活动。
注意：1. 内容必须包含所给要点的信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露个人信息；
4. 词数80左右（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：sports hall (n. 体育馆) , strict (adj. 严格的) , art festival (n. 艺术节)
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. I am Li Hua.
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I hope you can enjoy yourselves here. If you have any questions, you can ask me.
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假设你叫李明，你刚结识的美国笔友Mike 给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的学校生活。请你阅读他的邮件并用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Ming,
Glad to make friends with you.
Can you tell me something about your school life What time do you usually go to school How do you get to school What subjects do you have in school What’s your favorite subject Why Oh, I’m wondering what your school life is like. Is it different from mine
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours,
Mike
要求：(1)回复Mike的邮件，邮件中需涵盖以上内容要点提示(黑体部分)，可适当增加相关信息；
(2)词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名等信息。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to get your email.
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Yours,
Li Ming

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