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第一节 (满分15分)
在英语课堂小组讨论的环节，英语老师让大家就高中生用AI 写作文的现象发言。请你作为小组代表， 撰写一篇发言稿汇报讨论成果，
内容包括：
1. 发表看法；
2. 提出建议。
注 意 ：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Opinion on High School Students' Using AI to Write Essays
Hello , everyone!
A good
composition
Content
内容
Structure
结构
Language
语言
1.good beginning and ending（好的开头结尾）
2.linking words （过渡词）
3.advanced words and sentence patterns（高级词汇和句型）
4.no Chinglish （避免中文式英文）
Beauty
卷面（美观）
在英语课堂小组讨论的环节，英语老师让大家就高中生用AI 写作文的现象发言。请你作为小组代表， 撰写一篇发言稿汇报讨论成果，
内容包括：
1. 发表看法；
2. 提出建议。
Analysis （审 题）
体裁
主题
时态
人称
1.一般现在时为主
要点
发言稿类应用文
2.第一人称
1.发表看法
2. 提出建议
高中生用AI 写作文的现象
the structure of the Speech manuscript
01
the Speech manuscript
02
State the speech topic
03
Introduce the concrete content of speech
speech summary
点明发言的主题.
发言的具体内容
总结发言
三段框架
Introduction
Main Body
Conclusion
向听众问好并自我介绍
简要介绍发言的主题
描述现象、表达看法
建议和措施
概括发言并向听众致谢
1. 分享我们小组关于…… 的看法
2. 一把双刃剑
3. 节省大量时间并减轻压力
4. 削弱我们的独立思考能力
5. 缺乏个人情感和真实经历
6. 合理使用人工智能
7. 将人工智能视为获取灵感的工具
8. 润色我们的草稿而非替我们写作
9. 逐步提高我们的写作技能
10. 平衡人工智能的使用与我们自身的努力
Useful expressions
share our group’s views on...
a double-edged sword
save much time and reduce pressure
weaken our ability to think independently
lack personal feelings and real experiences
use AI properly
take AI as a tool for inspiration
polish our drafts instead of writing for us
improve our writing skills step by step
balance the use of AI and our own efforts
首段常用句型
① Words can’t express my excitement to deliver a speech concerning……
言语无法表达我对关于……的发言的兴奋之情
② Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to deliver this speech concerning….
衷心感谢您给予我这次就……发言的机会。
③ It's my great honor/privilege to deliver a speech whose title is " ... ". On behalf of our school, I would like to express my sincere welcome to you.
能有机会发表题为“……”的演讲，我深感荣幸。谨代表我校，向各位表示诚挚的欢迎。
④ The issue that I would like to concentrate on is （that）...
我想集中讨论的问题是……
常用结尾句
① At last, on behalf of all the students in our school, I wish you a safe and happy journey and hope that we will have more programs like this in the future.Thank you for your attention /listening
最后，我谨代表我校全体学生，祝愿您旅途平安、心情愉快，并希望未来我们能有更多这样的活动。感谢您的关注/聆听。
② Actions speak louder than words.So it's time for us to take action!Only in this way/Only by doing so can our life/ society/ school/future be flooded with endless harmony and happiness.
行动胜于言语。所以现在是我们采取行动的时候了！只有这样，我们的生活、社会、学校、未来才能充满无尽的和谐与幸福。
常用结尾句
③ From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that so long as we make joint efforts, we can achieve our desired results and make a difference.
从以上讨论可以看出，只要我们共同努力，就能实现我们期望的结果并产生影响。
④ Therefore, let's take the responsibility to...，and sparing no effort to do/attaching great importance to doing/...is a must.
因此，让我们肩负起……的责任，全力以赴去做/高度重视去做/……是必须的。
⑤ In conclusion, please allow me once again to express my sincere welcome to you. I hope I have made myself understood. Thank you for listening.
总之，请允许我再次向您表达诚挚的欢迎。希望我的表达能让您明白。感谢您的聆听。
第一段：点明发言的主题。
① Words can’t express my excitement to share my opinion concerning …
语言难以表达我分享自己观点时的兴奋之情.
② Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this opportunity to express my view concerning….
衷心感谢您给我这个机会表达我关于……的看法.
语言难以表达我分享关于使用AI撰写论文的观点时的兴奋之情。
Words can’t express my excitement to share my opinion concerning Writing essays with AI.
第一段 点明发言的主题。
观点总起句（引出小组 / 个人核心看法）
① After heated discussion, our group holds the view that...
经过热烈讨论，我们小组认为……
② We all agree that... is a phenomenon with both advantages and challenges.
我们一致认为……是一种兼具优势与挑战的现象。
③ From our perspective, ... brings both convenience and potential problems.
从我们的角度来看，……既带来了便利，也带来了潜在的问题。
经过我们热烈的小组讨论，我认为使用人工智能撰写作文是一把双刃剑。
After our heated group discussion, I hold the view that using AI to write essays is a double-edged sword.
第二段 描述现象、表达看法
优势阐述句（分析积极面）
① On one hand, ... can help us... ( save time, get creative ideas).
一方面，……可以帮助我们……（节省时间，获得创意想法）。
② One obvious benefit of ... is that it allows students to...
一个显而易见的好处是，它能让学生……
③ It’s undeniable that ... offers great convenience, such as...
毫无疑问，……提供了极大的便利，例如……
一方面，它在我们忙碌时能帮我们节省大量时间，并提供创意点子来启发我们。
On one hand, it saves us much time when we’re busy and offers creative ideas to inspire us.
第二段 描述现象、表达看法
劣势 / 问题阐述句（分析消极面）
① On the other hand, over-reliance on ... may lead to... (weakened thinking ability).
另一方面，过度依赖……可能会导致……（思维能力减弱）
② However, we also notice that ... could make us... (lose interest in independent writing).
然而，我们也注意到……可能会让我们……（对独立写作失去兴趣）。
③ The downside of ... is that it often makes essays lack... (personal feelings, real experiences).
......的缺点是它常常使文章缺乏...（个人感受、真实经历）。
另一方面，过度依赖它会削弱我们的独立思考能力。
On the other hand, over-reliance on it weakens our independent thinking ability.
第二段 描述现象、表达看法
建议提出句（给出具体做法）
① To deal with this, we suggest that students... (use AI as a tool, not a replacement).
为了恰当地应对这一问题，我们建议学生……（将人工智能用作工具，而非替代品）。
② We think it’s better to... rather than... (use AI for inspiration rather than let it write essays directly).
我们认为……比……更好（用AI获取灵感，而不是直接让它撰写文章）。
③ The key is to... ( balance AI use with our own efforts to improve writing skills).
关键在于……（平衡AI的使用与我们自身提升写作能力的努力）。
为了正确使用人工智能，我们建议仅将其视为一种工具：用它来获取灵感，而非替代人类。
To use AI properly, we suggest taking it only as a tool: use it for inspiration rather than for replacement.
第三段 概括发言并向听众致谢
总结过渡句（衔接观点与建议）
① In conclusion, ... is not good or bad in itself; it depends on how we use it.
总之，……本身并非好与坏；关键在于我们如何使用它。
② Based on the above, we believe that proper use of ... can help rather than harm us.
基于以上，我们认为正确使用……可以对我们有所帮助，而非造成伤害。
③ To sum up, we should make good use of ... while keeping our own ability developed.
总之，我们应该充分利用……的同时，保持自身能力的发展。
总之，如果明智地使用，人工智能会有所帮助，但学生仍应重视自身的努力和成长。
In conclusion , AI helps a lot if used wisely , but students should still value their own effort and growth.
Opinion on High School Students' Using AI to Write Essays
Hello , everyone! Words can’t express my excitement to share my opinion concerning Writing essays with AI. After our heated group discussion, I hold the view that using AI to write essays is a double-edged sword.
On one hand, it saves us much time when we’re busy and offers creative ideas to inspire us. On the other hand, over-reliance on it weakens our independent thinking ability. What’s more, AI-written essays often lack our personal feelings and real life experiences, making them less genuine. To use AI properly, we suggest taking it only as a tool: use it for inspiration rather than for replacement. We can use AI to polish small parts, not the whole essay. Only in this way can we balance AI use and improve our writing skills step by step.
In conclusion , AI helps a lot if used wisely , but students should still value their own effort and growth. Thank you for listening!
My views on filming short videos on camps
Good morning, everyone,
It's my great honor to deliver a speech whose title is "My views on filming short videos on campus". On behalf of our school, I would like to express my sincere welcome to your visit.
With the increasing popularity of short videos, shooting short videos appeals to a growing number of people. Short videos not only make it possible for us to have access to recording our lives, but also saves us much time,which contributes to sharing amusing moments. Meanwhile, excessive addiction to them presents challenges as well, the biggest of which is distracting us in academic pursuits, disrupt others' normal life and even violate their privacy potentially. Therefore, I recommend that we strike a balance between enjoying short videos and managing our time efficiently, to avoid getting priorities mixed up. Furthermore, it is crucial for us to prioritize our own learning and growth, dedicating ourselves to academic endeavors.
Hopefully, you will have a wonderful and unforgettable experience here. In conclusion, please allow me once again to express my sincere welcome to you. That’s all ! Thank you for listening.
（2025年1月浙江首考卷）
你将参加英语课上的一分钟演讲活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括；1.陈述看法；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸相应位置作答。
My views on filming short videos on camps
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