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2025-2026学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优人教版（2024）Unit 6 Plan for Yourself
专题15 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．诗人说：“所谓的家，不是房子，而是爱的总和。”假如你是李华，下周六是你的生日，你想把家里布置得温馨一些并举办一场小型家庭聚会，可任务繁多，你需要朋友的帮助。请你给好友Tom写一封邮件，内容如下：
1. 说明你布置家的原因和计划；
2. 描述目前家里的状况；
3. 列出需要他帮忙做的具体家务，如打扫客厅、制作手工装饰等；
4. 约定见面的时间和地点。
要求：1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 （姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：clean the living room, make some paper flowers, buy balloons, decorate the dining table, help with cooking...
Dear Tom,
Hi! How’s it going
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．新年是制定新年计划的好时机，请根据以下内容提示，谈谈你去年遇到的问题、解决方法和新年的计划。
内容提示：
·How was your life in 2024
·What problems/challenges did you meet How did you solve them
·What are your New Year’s resolutions How will you keep them
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100左右；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
To Be Better
The year of 2024 came to an end.
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3．每个人都有自己理想中的工作，一切工作都有其意义。你理想中的工作是什么呢？请根据写作要点写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你理想的工作。
写作要点：
1. What do you want to be when you grow up
2. Why do you want to do that
3. How are you going to do that
要求：
1. 应包括所有的写作要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone. Today the topic of my speech is “My dream job”.
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Thanks for your listening.
4．新的一年快到了，乔 (Joe) 一家人的新年决定是什么呢 请根据表格内容提示，写一篇英语短文，对他们各自的新年决定进行介绍。
父亲 找一份好工作；加强锻炼
母亲 学唱歌跳舞；学做更多美味的饭菜
乔 学习更加努力；学打篮球
妹妹 少吃垃圾食品；和同学们处好关系
要求： (1) 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
(2) 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
(3) 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等) ；
(4) 词数：80词左右。
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5．愉快的暑假结束了，为了更好规划新学期生活，现校刊英文专栏以“My Plans for New Term”为题征稿，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
内容要点：
1. 学习计划；
2. 运动计划；
3. ……计划；
4. 你对新学期的期望。
注意：
1. 内容必须包含题干中的所有信息；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得透露真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 词数70左右（短文首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：improve (v.提高), do sports (做运动), look forward to (期望)
My Plans for New Term
Hi, everyone. I’m happy to tell you my plans for the new term.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
6．我们满怀期待地迎接2025年，一切都是崭新的开始，我想你一定也对新的一年充满了很多的想法与期待吧！八年级的我们应该充满干劲，下定决心，这样才能不负韶华，从容不迫。
请你至少从三个方面来制定一下自己的新年计划吧！计划是对自己的承诺，它能让你对自己负责，并且它还能使你更加优秀哦！
要求：
1. 可以从study, health, hobby, exercise, reading, eating habits, personal relationship等方面展开说一说，可适当发挥；
2. 内容要点齐全，条理清楚，行文连贯；
3. 书写工整，短文中不能出现真实的人名, 词数80~100词左右。
My New Year’s Resolutions
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7．假如你是Li Hua，2025新年来临之际，你校英文报刊正以“Looking ahead to the coming year (展望未来)”为题的征文。请你根据以下提示问题，写一篇短文投稿。
提示问题：What’s your New Year’s resolution
What’s your dream job
How are you going to do that
Something more about your future.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Looking ahead to the coming year
The year 2025 is coming.
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8．时光荏苒，转眼间又是一年！新年是我们做规划的好时机。今年你有哪些想要实现的愿望与计划？学校举办英语征文活动，假设你是李华，请以“My New Year’s Plans”为题，结合下图提示写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。
注意事项：
（1）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（2）文章必须包含所有要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
（3）词数80词左右。
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9．假如你是李华，新年来临之际，为了激励同学们积极向上，你校正在开展以“To Be a Better Me”为题的英文演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿谈谈你的新年计划。
提示：
1. How will you improve your health
2. How will you improve your study
3. What hobby will you take up
注意：
1. 演讲稿须包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To Be a Better Me
Hello, boys and girls. I’m Li Hua. The new year is coming in a few days.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening.
10．2025年春节即将来临，你们学校的英文月刊发起了题为“My New Year’s Plans”的征文活动。请根据以下通知要求，并结合自身实际，用英文写一篇短文。
NoticeChinese New Year is coming! You may have many great things to do. What are your New Year’s plans How are you going to make them come true You can talk about your health, hobbies, schoolwork and so on. Share with us! ENGLISH MONTHLY
注意：
(1)你的新年计划至少包含通知中提到的两项(黑体部分)；
(2)词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My New Year’s Plans
Chinese New Year is coming! I have many great things to do in the new year.
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11．假如你是马欢欢，你的同学Claire给你发来电子邮件邀请你本周六去她家参加她的生日聚会，但你有事无法前往。请你根据下面的要点和要求，用英语给她回复一封不少于40词的电子邮件。
要点：
1.对受到的邀请表示感谢。
2.委婉拒绝并说明原因。
3.采取行动进行弥补。
要求：要点齐全；表述通顺；简洁得体。
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12．时光荏苒，我们的初中生活已过一半。请结合下面提示和要求，谈谈你的变化和计划。
要点：
1. 初中以来你的变化 (性格、学习)；
2. 理想职业及其原因；
3. 新年将怎样为理想努力。
要求：
1. 短文中不允许出现与本人相关的真实姓名和班级等信息；
2. 词数不少于80词。
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13．新年即将来临，你是否会许下一些新年决心呢？李芳想向某英文杂志投稿，来谈谈自己的决心。假如你是李芳，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文。
内容包括：
Resolutions Why do I make it How to do it
get good grades want to be an engineer study math harder
keep physically healthy have a healthy body do more exercise
注意：
（1）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）再补充一条新年决心；
（3）可适当进行发挥。
My name is Li Fang. Here are my resolutions.
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14．暑假生活刚刚结束，同学们的暑假生活肯定过得丰富多彩，请谈谈假期中最令你难忘的一次旅行。暑假生活的确美好值得回忆，但是新的学期已经悄悄拉开帷幕，同学们，新的一学期，我们也要对自己提出新的要求，这样才能成为更好的自己。请按以下要求作文：
要点如下：
1. 旅行时间、地点、人物、天气、交通方式、当地的特色食物等。
2. 至少写旅途中2个活动及其感受。
3.谈一个新学期的自我要求。
注意：
60词左右，内容包含所给全部信息，字迹工整，格式规范。
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15．本学期就要结束了，让我们一起来对自己进行一次复盘吧！假如你是Eric，请参考以下提示，盘点你完成的计划，并谈谈你的感受。
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
2. 短文必须包括所给要点，可结合实际情况适当发挥；
3. 词数不少于70词。 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Hello, I’m Eric. How time flies! This term is coming to the end.
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16．新学期开始了，我校《紫荆校园》月刊英语专栏正在开展“My plan for the new term”主题征文活动。请你围绕学习、运动、饮食和娱乐等方面，撰写一篇英文计划投稿，并说明计划的原因。注意事项：
1.词数为80词左右；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及班级名称。
参考词汇：preview (v.预习)，balanced diet (平衡饮食)，positive (adj.乐观的)
My plan for the new term
As the new term starts, I have a plan to
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17．你刚刚读完了一些有影响力的书籍——也许是一本让你流泪的小说，一本带你去另一个星系的科幻小说，或者一本激励你的传记，在那一刻，你不只是拿着一本书；你手里拿着一把开启自我的钥匙。请以“Reading makes me ________”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇不少于80词的短文。要点包括：1.书的名字和内容；2.阅读的益处（至少写3点）；3.阅读计划（至少写3点）。
写作要求：
1. 结合实际，用适当的形容词或动词短语补全标题；
2. 短文须包含要求中所有信息，并适当拓展；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
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18．我校近期开展了“Brilliant Weekend, Better Living”主题活动。请根据以下学校提供的微调研问卷，进行自我评估并撰写一篇英文短文，在校公众号上分享自己周末生活的具体表现和下一步计划。
Survey (问卷) About Weekend Life
1. How long do you sleep □More than 8 hours □About 8 hours □Less than 8 hours 2. Do you finish your homework on time □Always □ Usually □Sometimes □Never 3. What do you do for fun (You can choose more than 1 answer. ) □Do sports □Meet friends □Enjoy your hobby □Others_
注意：1. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名；
2. 词数70词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My weekend life is
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19．紧张的八年级学习就要结束了，同学们在分小组讨论“What do you plan to do in the summer vacation Why ”以下是你们小组的讨论结果。请你写一篇短文，汇报讨论结果并谈谈自己的计划。
Students Plans Reasons
Sally Go to Beijing To see the Palace Museum and other places of interest in Beijing.
Tom Stay at home Finish homework and learn new skills.
You ... ...
写作要求：1.短文必须包含表格中的信息，可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等；
3.词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation
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20．读书可以丰富知识、开阔视野、陶冶情操。暑假即将来临，为丰富暑假生活，学校号召同学们多读书，读好书。为使更多的同学了解读书的意义，校园公众号英语专栏向同学们约稿。请你用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的读书感悟和假期读书计划。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
写作要点：
1.你的读书感悟；
2. 你的假期读书计划；
3. 发出读书倡议。
写作要求：1. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 80~100词。
Summer vacation is coming. Our school wants students to read more books during the vacation. I think it’s a good idea
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Dear Tom,
Hi! How’s it going
I’m writing to ask for your help with my birthday party next Saturday. I want to decorate my home to make it warm and cosy because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.
Currently, my house is a bit messy, especially the living room and dining area. The furniture needs rearranging, and there’s no decoration yet.
Could you please help me with the following tasks First, clean the living room and move the sofa to the corner. Second, make some paper flowers and buy balloons to decorate the walls. Finally, help me set the dining table and prepare some snacks.
Let’s meet at my place at 10 a.m. next Saturday. I’d really appreciate your help!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，需涵盖布置原因、家庭现状、具体任务和见面安排，不可遗漏任何信息提示，适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接邮件的开头，表明意图，说明布置家的原因和计划；
第二步，描述当前家里的状况；
第三步，列出需要Tom帮忙的具体家务；
第四步，约定见面时间和地点。
[亮点词汇]
①ask for your help请求你的帮助
②not...but...不是……而是……
③help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I want to decorate my home to make it warm and cosy because I believe a home is not just a house but a place filled with love.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Let’s meet at my place at 10 a.m. this Saturday.（祈使句）
2．One possible version:
To Be Better
The year of 2024 came to an end. Looking back, I have experienced many challenges and made some resolutions to improve myself.
In 2024, I faced the challenge of balancing my schoolwork and my hobbies. I solved this problem by making a schedule and sticking to it.
For the New Year, I have made several resolutions. First, I will try my best to get good grades in all my subjects. Second, I will continue to practice English. Third, I will take up a new hobby. I believe I can keep these resolutions by being disciplined and persistent.
In conclusion, I am determined to be a better person in the New Year.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给的开头，介绍2024年自己的生活怎么样；
第二步，介绍自己遇到的问题或挑战以及自己是如何解决的；
第三步，介绍自己的新年决心以及如何保持并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end结束
②balance…and…平衡……和……
③stick to坚持
④take up开始从事
⑤in conclusion总而言之
⑥be determined to do sth.决心做某事
[高分句型]
I believe I can keep these resolutions by being disciplined and persistent. (省略that的宾语从句)
3．例文
Good morning, everyone. Today the topic of my speech is “My dream job”.
Everyone has his or her own dream job and each job has its meaning. I also have my dream job. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think teachers are great. On the one hand, they teach their students much knowledge. On the other hand, they can learn something new from their students while teaching. So I think this job is meaningful.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education.
I believe I’ll realize my dream — to be a teacher.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，谈论自己理想的工作；
②时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，需涵盖自己的理想工作、原因以及实现方式等要点，注意语言流畅，逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明演讲主题是理想工作；
第二步，说明自己的理想工作，具体阐述原因，讲述为实现梦想的具体行动；
第三步，表达对实现梦想的信念，结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
①knowledge知识
②meaningful有意义的
③realize实现
[高分句型]
①I think teachers are great. (宾语从句)
②To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4．One possible version:
The New Year is coming. Everyone in Joe’s family has made their own resolutions.
Joe’s father is going to find a good job to make more money. Also, he is going to get more exercise to keep healthy. Joe’s mother is going to learn to sing and dance and learn to cook more delicious food. Joe plans to study harder and learn to play basketball. Joe’s younger sister is going to eat less junk food and get on with her classmates.
What good resolutions they have made! They all believe keeping good resolutions will help them be better people.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中Joe一家人的新年决定，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新的一年快到了，Joe家的每个人都做了自己的决定”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。分别介绍Joe家每个人的新年决定，包括父亲找一份好工作并加强锻炼、母亲学唱歌跳舞并学做更多美味的饭菜、乔学习更加努力并学打篮球、妹妹少吃垃圾食品并和同学们处好关系；
第三步，书写结语。表达“他们都相信保持好的决心将帮助他们成为更好的人”的祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①make resolutions 制定决心/计划
②plan to do 计划做某事
③get on with 与...相处
④what引导的感叹句
[高分句型]
Joe’s father is going to find a good job to make more money.（动词不定式作目的状语）
5．（参考范文）
My Plans for New Term
Hi, everyone. I’m happy to tell you my plans for the new term.
First, I’m going to study English hard. Last term, I didn’t get good scores in English. In the new term, I plan to join the English Club and improve my spoken English. Second, I will do sports every day to keep healthy because exercise will make me happy and relaxed. Last, I’m going to share more housework with my parents. I will learn to cook and cook for them at weekends. I’m looking forward to having a wonderful new term.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：本文以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示谈谈新学期的计划，要从学习、运动等方面展开，最后谈对新学期的期望。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题（已给出）；
第二步，根据所给要点，依次从学习、运动、分担家务方面展开介绍自己的计划；
第三步，最后表达自己的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth. 计划做某事
②do sports 做运动
③look forward to doing 期待做某事
[高分句型]
①Second, I will do sports every day to keep healthy because exercise will make me happy and relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I will learn to cook and cook for them at weekends.（动词不定式作宾语）
6．例文
My New Year’s Resolutions
2025 is coming. It’s a good time to make resolutions. To make me a better person and make my life easier, I am going to make the following resolutions.
The first resolution is about how to do better at school. I am going to study harder and get better grades. In my free time, I will keep on reading more books. I always believe “No pains, no gains”. The second resolution has to do with improving my relationship with my parents and friends. I’m going to spend more time with my family. I will do more housework to make my parents happy. I am also going to help my friends more, because they are important to me. The last resolution is about improving my physical health. I plan to get lots of exercise and eat more fruit and vegetables. After all, exercise and vegetables are good for my health.
A good plan is a good start to success. Therefore, I hope I can keep my resolutions and I will try my best to make my resolutions come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为一般将来时；
③提示：需包含学习、人际关系、健康三个方面的计划，使用范文中的原词原句进行整合。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题；
第二步，分三点说明计划；
第三步，总结展望。
[亮点词汇]
①make resolutions制定计划
②get better grades取得更好成绩
③physical health身体健康
[高分句型]
I am going to study harder and get better grades.（be going to表将来计划）
7．例文
Looking ahead to the coming year
The year 2025 is coming. My New Year’s resolution is to become a better English speaker and to keep healthy.
I dream of being a wildlife reporter because I love animals and writing. To achieve my dream, I’m going to read two English books every month, write a weekly diary, and join the school newspaper club. I will also watch short English videos to improve my listening.
In the future, I hope to travel around the world, interview scientists, and tell people how to protect our Earth. I believe hard work will make my dream come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般将来时和一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍自己的新年决心；
第二步：介绍你的梦想工作以及如何实现自己的梦想；
第三步：介绍更多关于你的未来的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①keep healthy保持健康
②dream of梦想
③travel around the world环游世界
④come true实现
[高分句型]
①I dream of being a wildlife reporter because I love animals and writing. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I believe hard work will make my dream come true. (宾语从句)
8．Dear teachers and classmates,
As time goes by, a new year begins. It’s a good time to make plans, so let me tell you mine.
First, I’ll work harder at school. I’ll listen carefully in class and do my homework on time. If I have problems, I’ll ask my teachers for help. Second, I want to take part in outdoor activities. I’ll go for a walk with my family on Sundays and play football with friends after school. Third, I’ll try to protect wild animals. I’ll learn about them from TV shows and tell my friends why it’s important to protect them. Fourth, I plan to read more books in my free time. My goal is to read one book a month.
I think these plans are easy to follow. Let’s have a great new year together! Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为一般将来时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明新年来临，引出要分享自己的新年计划。
第二步，从四个方面阐述新年计划：在学校更努力学习，参加户外活动，尽力保护野生动物，多读书。
第三步，对计划的肯定，表达良好的祝愿与感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①As time goes by 随着时间的流逝
②make plans 做计划
③work harder 更努力地学习
④listen carefully 仔细听
⑤on time 按时
⑥ask...for help 向……求助
⑦take part in 参加
⑧outdoor activities 户外活动
⑨protect wild animals 保护野生动物
⑩learn about 了解
in one’s free time 在某人的空闲时间
follow 遵循，执行
[高分句型]
①If I have problems, I’ll ask my teachers for help. （条件状语从句）
②I think these plans are easy to follow.（宾语从句）
9．例文
To Be a Better Me
Hello, boys and girls. I’m Li Hua. The new year is coming in a few days. To be a better me, I’ll try my best to improve myself. And here is my plan.
First, I’m going to exercise for at least an hour every day. What’s more, I’m going to do some reading in my free time. I think we should study not only at school but also out of school. Also, I’m going to take up a new hobby—dancing, so that I can relax through it. Finally, I’m going to help my parents with the housework. In this way, they won’t be that busy and tired.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以新年为契机，点明“成为更好的自己”的目标，引出下文的自我提升计划；
第二步，具体阐述自我提升计划，从锻炼、阅读、培养新爱好、分担家务四个方面展开；
第三步，结束发言，向听众表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①in this way用这种方式
②what’s more另外
③take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①I think we should study not only at school but also out of school. (宾语从句)
②Also, I’m going to take up a new hobby—dancing, so that I can relax through it. (so that引导的目的状语从句)
10．例文
My New Year’s Plans
Chinese New Year is coming! I have many great things to do in the new year.
First, I will improve my health by jogging every morning and eating more vegetables. This will help me stay energetic. Second, for schoolwork, I plan to review lessons daily and join a study group. I aim to get better grades in math. Dumplings are a must-eat delicacy for the New Year. So I plan to learn how to make dumplings with my grandmother during the holiday.
By working step by step, I believe my plans will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示信息写作，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据提示信息介绍你的新年计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①stay energetic保持精力充沛
②review lessons复习功课
③delicacy美食
④step by step一步一步
⑤come true实现
[高分句型]
①So I plan to learn how to make dumplings with my grandmother during the holiday. (“how + 不定式”结构作宾语)
11．范文：
Dear Claire,
Thank you so much for inviting me to your birthday party this Saturday. I truly appreciate your kindness! However, I’m afraid I can’t make it because I have a prior family commitment. To make it up to you, I’d love to treat you to coffee next week and celebrate your birthday separately. Hope you have a wonderful party!
Best wishes,
Ma Huanhuan
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：内容要点已给出，考生应按要求进行写作，不可遗漏任何信息提示（感谢、拒绝+原因、弥补行动），适当添加细节，注意行文连贯，表述完整并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达感谢；
第二步，委婉拒绝并说明原因；
第三步，提出弥补措施，并表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①appreciate感激
②commitment承诺
③make it up to you弥补你
[高分句型]
①However, I’m afraid I can’t make it because I have a prior family commitment.（宾语从句，原因状语从句）
②To make it up to you, I’d love to treat you to coffee next week and celebrate your birthday separately.（不定式表目的）
12．例文：
Time flies, and half of our junior high school life has passed. Looking back, I’ve changed a lot. I used to be shy, but now I’m more outgoing and enjoy making friends. My grades have also improved because I’ve learned to manage my time better.
I dream of becoming a teacher in the future. Teachers can inspire students and share knowledge, which I find meaningful.
In the new year, I plan to study harder, especially in subjects like English and math. I’ll also read more books to broaden my horizons. I believe with effort, my dream will come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“时光荏苒，初中生活已过一半”来引出自己初中以来的变化和计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“初中以来性格和学习的变化、理想职业及其原因、新年为理想努力的计划”几个方面重点介绍自己的情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达对未来实现理想的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①time flies 时光飞逝
②look back 回顾，回头看
③used to do 过去常常做
④come true 实现
[高分句型]
①Teachers can inspire students and share knowledge, which I find meaningful.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
13．例文
My name is Li Fang. Here are my resolutions.
The New Year is coming, and I have made some resolutions to improve myself. First, I want to get good grades, especially in math. My dream is to become an engineer in the future, so I need to study hard. I will spend more time practicing math problems and ask my teachers for help when I have difficulties. Second, I plan to keep physically healthy. A healthy body is important for both study and life. To achieve this, I will do more exercise. Besides these, I also want to learn a new skill, such as playing the guitar. Music can make life more colorful. I will practice for at least 30 minutes every day.
I believe that with hard work and persistence, I can achieve my goals. Let’s welcome the New Year with a better version of ourselves!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③ 提示：需包含表格中的两项决心（成绩、健康）及补充一条决心，注意逻辑连贯和语言规范。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用已给句引入主题，简要说明制定决心的背景；
第二步，分点阐述决心内容；
第三步，总结并表达实现决心的信心。
[亮点词汇]
① need to do需要做
② at least至少
③ persistence坚持
[高分句型]
①I will spend more time practicing math problems and ask my teachers for help when I have difficulties. （时间状语从句）
②I believe that with hard work and persistence, I can achieve my goals.（宾语从句）
14．例文
My most unforgettable trip was to Qingdao in July. I went there with my parents. The weather was sunny. We traveled by train. I tasted tasty seafood there.
We played on the beach. The sand felt very soft. We also visited the aquarium. It was very interesting.
Now school starts. I will study harder to improve my English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍旅行时间、地点、人物、天气、交通方式、当地的特色食物等；
第二步、介绍旅途中2个活动及感受；
第三步、谈一个新学期的自我要求。
[亮点词汇]
①by train乘火车
②on the beach在海滩上
③study harder更努力学习
[高分句型]
I will study harder to improve my English.(不定式作目的状语)
15．例文
Hello, I’m Eric. How time flies! This term is coming to the end. I have finished many plans. I have read a book about history, which helped me learn a lot about the past. I have been to a nursing home. There, I helped the old people clean their rooms and told them interesting stories. I also cleaned my room every day. It made my living space tidy and comfortable. Besides, I have learned to play the guitar. I practice it for half an hour every day. I feel very happy and fulfilled this term. I have gained knowledge and happiness from these activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以“现在完成时”为主，结合“一般现在时”（描述日常行为、当下感受）；
③主旨：Eric盘点本学期完成的各项计划，如读书、去养老院、打扫房间、学吉他等，并表达学期中的愉悦与充实感。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以感叹时光飞逝、学期将结束开启，点明要复盘完成的计划；
第二步，分述各项完成的计划，包括读书、去养老院帮助老人、日常打扫房间、学习弹吉他及练习情况；
第三步，总结学期感受，表达从这些活动中收获知识与快乐的心情。
[亮点词汇]
①fulfilled满足的；有成就感的
②nursing home养老院
③tidy整洁的；使整洁
④gain获得；收获
[高分句型]
I have read a book about history, which helped me learn a lot about the past.（“which”引导的定语从句）
16．例文：
My plan for the new term
As the new term starts, I have a plan to make myself better. For study, I’ll preview lessons before class and review them after school to understand better. For sports, I plan to run every morning to keep fit. As for diet, I’ll eat more vegetables and fruits for a balanced diet. For entertainment, I’ll spend less time on games and more on reading to broaden my horizons. I believe this plan will help me become more positive and successful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应围绕学习、运动、饮食和娱乐等方面撰写计划，并适当增加细节，同时说明计划的原因，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新学期开始，我有一个计划”来引出下文计划的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“学习（预习、复习）、运动（跑步）、饮食（平衡饮食）、娱乐（阅读）”几个方面重点介绍计划的具体情况，并说明原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望新学期能更积极乐观”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①have a plan to有计划做某事
②as for至于
③a balanced diet均衡饮食
④broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野
[高分句型]
①I’ll preview lessons before class and review them after school to understand better.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②I believe this plan will help me become more positive and successful.（宾语从句）
17．例文
Reading makes me happy
Reading plays an important role in growth and development of a person. As for me, reading makes me happy.
Last week, I read a book called Little Women. The book mainly tells the story of four sisters. Although they lived a poor life, they spared no effort to help their neighbors. Finally, they got over all the difficulties and achieved their dreams.
Reading books has many benefits. First of all, we can get a lot of knowledge from it. Secondly, reading enables us to develop our skills and understand the world better. Finally, reading is of great help to our future development.
Therefore, I have some plans about reading. First, I will find some good books. Secondly, I will write down my ideas about reading. Finally, I will share my reading experience with my friends.
The more you read, the more you’ll know and get.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点进行写作，可适当增添细节，注意需先补充完整题目。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，表达“阅读使我高兴”；
第二步，介绍自己读过的一本书；
第三步，表达阅读带来的好处；
第四步，介绍自己的阅读计划并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①spare no effort to do不遗余力地做
②get over克服
③write down写下
[高分句型]
①Although they lived a poor life, they spared no effort to help their neighbors. (although引导让步状语从句)
②The more you read, the more you’ll know and get. (the+比较级，the+比较级)
18．One possible version:
My weekend life is colorful but needs improvement. I usually sleep for about 8 hours, which helps me stay energetic. I always finish homework on time, but sometimes I spend too much time on video games. For fun, I often play basketball with friends and draw pictures in the art club.
Next, I plan to cut down on screen time and develop reading habits. I’ll also help with housework to make weekends more meaningful. Balancing rest and growth will make my weekends better!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为自我评估类短文写作；
② 时态：时态以一般现在时为主；
③ 提示：写作时需基于问卷结果描述周末生活表现，并提出改进计划。
[写作步骤]
第一步：简要说明问卷结果（睡眠、作业、娱乐）；
第二步：具体描述当前周末生活的亮点与不足；
第三步：针对不足提出改进计划，结尾表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
① on time准时
② play basketball打篮球
③ plan to do计划去做
④ cut down削减
[高分句型]
① I usually sleep for about 8 hours, which helps me stay energetic.（非限制性定语从句）
② I always finish homework on time, but sometimes I spend too much time on video games.（并列句）
③ Balancing rest and growth will make my weekends better!（动名词作主语）
19．例文
In our group, everyone has made a plan for the summer vacation. Sally plans to go to Beijing because she wants to see the Palace Museum and other places of interest in Beijing. Tom decides to stay at home to finish homework and learn new skills like cooking.
As for me, I want to take a volunteer job in an animal shelter. I love animals and hope to care for homeless dogs and cats. Also, I’ll read at least five books to improve my knowledge. I believe this vacation will be meaningful and colorful!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，描述小组成员的暑假计划以及制定计划的原因；
第二步，谈谈你自己的暑假计划，并说明原因。
[亮点词汇]
①place of interest名胜古迹
②volunteer志愿者
③care for照料
④improve提高
[高分句型]
①Sally plans to go to Beijing because she wants to see the Palace Museum and other places of interest in Beijing.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I believe this vacation will be meaningful and colorful!（省略that的宾语从句）
20．例文：
Summer vacation is coming. Our school wants students to read more books during the vacation. I think it’s a good idea. In my opinion, reading is really useful to us. It can open up our eyes and help us learn more about the world. So, I like reading very much. Here are some reading plans for my summer vacation.
First, I’m going to read two books. One is Journey to the West, and the other is The Old Man and the Sea. They are both classics. Second, I’m going to write down two book reports about them. That can help me understand the books better. Finally, I’m going to volunteer at a reading school and help kids to read.
I hope everyone can love reading. Let’s read more good books together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据要点提示完成写作，需涵盖读书感悟、假期计划、读书倡议三要点，可适当添加个人经历或书目细节，注意逻辑衔接。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇承接已给句，写自己的读书感悟；
第二步：介绍自己的假期读书计划（书名/阅读方式）；
第三步：发出读书倡议。
[亮点词汇]
① open up our eyes开阔我们的视野
② write down写下
[高分句型]
I hope everyone can love reading.（省略that的宾语从句）
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