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人教版8年级上册Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals书面表达训练
书面表达。(20分)
(A)为传播环保理念，探索自然生灵奥秘，2025大自然生活节将在净月森林动物园精彩绽放，现面向全体同学招募志愿者，假设你是李华，请根据招募要求写一封40词左右的自荐信。(5分)
A Volunteer of Natural Life Festival Wanted
Dear all， Nature is amazing. Our festival needs you to help more people to learn about it. Would you like to join us If you want to be one of us , please let us know : 1. What hobbies do you have 2. Do you know how to protect wild animals 3. If you' re interested, please e-mail us at natural lifefestival@.
要求:
语言通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清楚,书写规范, 短文须包括所有内容要点;
文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
开头结尾已给出, 不计人总词数。
A Volunteer of Natural Life Festival Wanted
Dear Sir/Madam ,
I am Li Hua, from Sunshine Middle School, I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you.
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I hope I can be a volunteer of this festival. Thank you.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
参考范文One possible version :
A Volunteer of Natural Life Festival Wanted
Dear Sir/Madam ,
I am Li Hua, from Sunshine Middle School, I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you.
First , let me introduce myself. I’ m kind and helpful. I'm crazy about taking photos of all kinds of plants and animals. I really enjoy the natural world.
It's important for us to protect animals. We can build more reserves（保护区）for them. We can also make laws to protect them. If I have the chance to be a volunteer of Natural life Festival, l will try my best to make more people know what to do.
I hope I can be a volunteer of this festival. Thank you.
Yours sincerely ,
Li Hua
书面表达（A）解析
主题与背景：本题围绕 2025 大自然生活节招募志愿者展开，旨在传播环保理念、探索自然奥秘，要求考生以李华的身份写自荐信，向招募方表明自己想成为志愿者的意愿并阐述自身优势。
写作要点分析
个人基本信息：开头已给出“I am Li Hua, from Sunshine Middle School, I am interested in nature, so I want to be one of you.”，明确了身份和兴趣，为后文阐述优势做铺垫。
个人优势阐述：
性格方面：“I’ m kind and helpful.” 体现出善良、乐于助人的性格，这对于志愿者工作来说是很重要的品质，能够在与他人交流、帮助他人了解自然时发挥积极作用。
兴趣爱好：“I'm crazy about taking photos of all kinds of plants and animals. I really enjoy the natural world.” 表明自己对拍摄动植物有浓厚兴趣，热爱自然世界。这一爱好不仅能展现对自然的关注，还可能在实际活动中通过照片更好地传播自然之美，吸引更多人关注自然。
保护野生动物的认识：“It's important for us to protect animals. We can build more reserves（保护区）for them. We can also make laws to protect them.” 阐述了对保护野生动物重要性的认识，并提出了建立更多保护区和制定法律等具体措施，显示出对招募要求中“是否知道如何保护野生动物”的积极回应，也体现了自身对环保的深入思考。
表达意愿：“If I have the chance to be a volunteer of Natural life Festival, l will try my best to make more people know what to do.” 明确表示如果有机会成为志愿者，会尽力让更多人了解如何保护自然，进一步强调了成为志愿者的决心和期望为活动做出的贡献。
语言特点：整体语言通顺、连贯，条理清晰。使用了简单的句式和常用的词汇，如“kind and helpful”“be crazy about”“try my best to do”等，符合 40 词左右短文的简洁要求，同时准确传达了关键信息。
(B)植物和动物在我们生活中扮演着重要角色,只有它们的存在才能使我们人类生态平衡。请你根据以下提示,以“Protecting Plants and Animals”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。(15分)
作用 植物 让世界更多彩；保持空气清新；控制气候
动物 共享地球；带来快乐
现 状 森林越来越小，野生动物濒临灭绝
措 施 禁止滥伐，多植树，保护动物，阻止捕杀(补充1~2点)
提示词: colorful, climate, cut down , too many, wild animals , kill
要求:
表达清楚, 语句通顺, 意思连贯,书写规范;
必须包含所有提示内容。
Protecting Plants and Animals
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(B)参考范文One possible version :
Protecting Plants and Animals
We can't live without animals and plants. The earth is our home, the trees and the animals are our friends.
How can we get along well with our friends
First, we should protect animals and plants because many animals and plants are endangered; Second, we should stop cutting trees and hunting animals. Third, we should protect their homes for animals and plants to create a good environment for their growth.
In short, there are many ways to make our world a batter place for animals and plants. We all need to do whatever we can !
书面表达（B）解析
主题与背景：以“Protecting Plants and Animals”为题，强调植物和动物在人类生活中的重要角色以及人类生态平衡对它们的依赖，要求考生根据提示内容，阐述植物和动物的作用、现状以及保护措施。
写作要点分析：
植物和动物的作用：
植物：“Let world more colorful; keep air fresh; control climate” 分别从让世界多彩、保持空气清新、控制气候三个方面阐述了植物的重要作用，体现了植物对地球生态环境的积极影响。
动物：“Share the earth; bring happiness” 说明动物与人类共享地球，并且能给人类带来快乐，强调了动物在人类生活中的情感价值。
现状：“Forests are getting smaller and smaller, wild animals are facing extinction” 指出森林面积不断缩小，野生动物濒临灭绝的现状，揭示了植物和动物生存面临的严峻问题，为后文提出保护措施做铺垫。
保护措施：
“First, we should protect animals and plants because many animals and plants are endangered” 强调了保护濒危动植物的首要性。
“Second, we should stop cutting trees and hunting animals” 提出禁止滥伐树木和捕杀动物的具体措施，直接针对现状中的问题。
“Third, we should protect their homes for animals and plants to create a good environment for their growth” 进一步说明要保护动植物的栖息地，为它们创造良好的生长环境，从生态层面提出保护措施。
语言特点：表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。使用了常见的词汇和简单的句式结构，如“can't live without”“get along well with”“stop doing sth.”等，易于理解。同时，通过“First”“Second”“Third”等序数词使文章条理清晰，符合 80 词左右英语短文的写作要求，并且完整包含了所有提示内容。

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