Unit8 Collecting as a hobby单元话题写作指导沪教版(2024)英语七年级上册

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Unit8 Collecting as a hobby单元话题写作指导沪教版(2024)英语七年级上册

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Unit 8 单元话题写作指导
【单元话题分析】
本单元核心话题为“Collecting as a hobby(收藏爱好)”,写作围绕“介绍收藏物品、讲述收藏故事、分享收藏意义”展开。需紧密结合课本Unit 8核心内容——用人称代词与物主代词(Personal pronouns/Possessives)描述收藏归属(课本P121语法)、用一般过去时(Simple past)讲述收藏起源故事(课本P117赵锐的邮票收藏),同时融入“邮票收藏”(课本P117阅读)、“特殊收藏(巧克力包装纸、昆虫标本等)”(课本P124-P126)、“博物馆收藏”(课本P126大英博物馆、伊甸园项目)等课本场景,让写作既贴合单元知识,又能引导学生挖掘收藏背后的情感与文化价值,锻炼“介绍个人爱好”的实用表达能力,符合七年级学生的认知与语言水平。
【单元写作指导】
一、话题词汇必备(结合课本P114-P129)
【单词】
Collections 收藏物品
stamp(邮票,课本P117)/ coin(硬币,课本P120)
shell(贝壳,课本P116)/ sticker(贴纸,课本P120)
wrapper(包装纸,课本P124)/ model(模型,课本P116)
rock(石头,课本P122)/ insect(昆虫标本,课本P113)
Actions & feelings 动作与感受
collect(收藏,课本P116)/ own(拥有,课本P117)
add...to...(把……加入……,课本P117往邮票集加新邮票)
handle with care(小心保管,课本P117爷爷保管珍贵邮票)
cherish(珍视,课本P129线上博物馆项目)
valuable(珍贵的,课本P117爷爷的老邮票)
Culture & meaning 文化与意义
story(故事,课本P117邮票背后的历史故事)
memory(回忆,课本P124包装纸承载的美好时光)
museum(博物馆,课本P126收藏展示)
heritage(遗产,课本P126博物馆收藏的文化价值)
【短语】(课本原句高频短语)
a collection of(一批……收藏,课本P116)
thanks to(多亏,课本P117多亏爷爷爱上集邮)
add new ones to...(往……加新藏品,课本P117)
take care of(保管,课本P117保管邮票)
interesting bits of history(有趣的历史片段,课本P117)
create an online museum(创建线上博物馆,课本P129)
a waste of time(浪费时间,课本P120对收藏的不同看法)
二、话题句子必备(贴合课本语境)
1. 介绍收藏物品与起源
I have a collection of stamps. I started collecting them thanks to my grandpa—he owns thousands of stamps and tells me stories about each one.(课本P117原句改编)
(我有一批邮票收藏。我开始集邮多亏了爷爷,他有几千张邮票,还会给我讲每张邮票的故事。)
My collection of chocolate wrappers has over 100 pieces. I started keeping them when my dad brought me two European chocolate bars with beautiful wrappers.(课本P124场景改编)
(我的巧克力包装纸收藏有100多张。爸爸给我带了两块包装精美的欧洲巧克力后,我就开始保存它们了。)
2. 描述收藏过程与感受
Every Sunday, I help my grandpa take old stamps from envelopes. We handle them with care—he even wears white gloves to protect the valuable ones.(课本P117原句)
(每周日,我帮爷爷从信封上取下旧邮票。我们小心地处理它们,爷爷甚至会戴白手套保护那些珍贵的邮票。)
My favourite item is a stamp of the Palace Museum. It’s mine because grandpa gave it to me as a gift. It taught me about traditional Chinese buildings.(课本P117语法+场景)
(我最喜欢的藏品是一张故宫邮票,它是我的,因为爷爷把它当作礼物送给了我。这张邮票让我了解了中国传统建筑。)
3. 分享收藏意义与文化
Collecting stamps is not just a hobby for me—it’s a way to learn about history and culture of different countries.(课本P117核心思想)
(对我来说,集邮不只是爱好,更是了解不同国家历史与文化的方式。)
The British Museum has a collection of things from all over the world, like the Rosetta Stone. It helps us unlock ancient cultures.(课本P126阅读内容)
(大英博物馆收藏了来自世界各地的物品,比如罗塞塔石碑,它帮助我们解读古老文化。)
三、话题范文必背(贴合课本Unit 8结构)
My Collection of Sea Shells
My hobby is collecting sea shells. I now have more than 50 shells, and each one has a special story.
I started this collection three years ago. My family went to Qingdao for a holiday. One afternoon, I played on the beach and found a small, white shell that looked like a little moon. I loved it so much that I decided to keep it. Since then, every time we go to a place by the sea, I look for new shells to add to my collection.
My favourite shell is a big, brown one with stripes. My uncle gave it to me last summer—he found it in Sanya. It’s special because it reminds me of our fun phone calls: he told me how he walked along the beach at sunrise to find it.
I keep all my shells in a glass box on my desk. Looking at them makes me think of happy family trips and warm moments. Collecting shells is not just about keeping things—it’s about keeping memories.
参考译文:我的贝壳收藏
我的爱好是收藏贝壳,现在我有50多枚贝壳,每一枚都有特别的故事。
三年前我开始了这项收藏。当时我们家去青岛度假,一天下午我在海滩玩耍,发现了一枚小小的白色贝壳,看起来像个小月亮。我太喜欢它了,决定把它留下来。从那以后,每次我们去海边的地方,我都会找新的贝壳加入我的收藏。
我最喜欢的是一枚带条纹的棕色大贝壳,是去年夏天叔叔送给我的——他在三亚找到的。它很特别,因为它让我想起我们开心的通话:叔叔告诉我,他是如何在日出时沿着海滩散步找到它的。
我把所有贝壳都放在书桌的玻璃盒子里,看着它们,我就会想起快乐的家庭旅行和温暖的瞬间。收藏贝壳不只是留存物品,更是留存回忆。
四、话题写作训练(结合课本P124“写收藏文章”任务)
假设你是赵锐,学校“兴趣天地”栏目正在征集“我的收藏故事”稿件,请你根据要求,介绍你的收藏物品、讲述收藏的起源故事,并说说收藏带给你的收获。
提示词语(课本核心词):
collection(收藏)/ stamp(邮票)/ memory(回忆)/ learn about(了解)
提示问题(贴合课本P124写作任务):
What do you collect How many items do you have
How did you start this collection
What have you learned from your collection
要求:
要点齐全,可结合课本“邮票收藏、爷爷的影响”等场景补充细节;
文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
词数80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
思路点拨(参考课本P124写作框架)
开头:点明收藏物品(如邮票,课本P117核心收藏)及数量;
主体:
讲述收藏起源(如“爷爷带自己集邮”,课本P117故事);
分享收藏中的小故事(如“第一张邮票的来历”,课本P117细节);
说明收获(如“了解历史文化”,课本P117收藏意义);
结尾:表达对收藏的喜爱,呼应课本“收藏承载情感与知识”的核心思想。
写作练习
My Stamp Collection
I love collecting stamps—it’s my favourite hobby. Now I have over 100 stamps from different countries.
I started collecting stamps because of my grandpa. He has a big stamp album, and every Sunday he adds new stamps to it. Two years ago, he gave me a stamp of the Palace Museum. He explained how people built the palace without nails, and I became interested in stamps.
From my collection, I’ve learned about history and culture. For example, a Canadian stamp taught me about maple trees.
Collecting stamps makes me happy and smart. I’ll keep this hobby forever!

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