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Practical Writing
How to write a speech
Learning Objectives
1. Have a clear understanding of the structure of the speech .
2. Learn the useful expressions and sentence patterns.
3. Make use of what you have learnt to write a speech.
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Lead-in
What is a speech
演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上和某些公众场合发表的讲话文稿，是人们在工作和社会生活中经常使用的一种文体。演讲一般用以交流思想感情、表达主张见解等，具有宣传、鼓动、教育等作用，以期使听众信服并在思想感情上产生共鸣。
Analyze the prompt
【2021·全国乙卷】你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以 Be smart online learners 为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 分析优势与不足；
2. 提出学习建议。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone. _____________________________________
Advantages/Disadvantages
Your tips
写作类型
Subject
人称（person）
时态(tense)
Read for structure
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone. It's a great honor for me to stand here to deliver my speech titled Be smart online learners.
With the development of the Internet, more and more of us prefer to take advantage of online resource to improve our study.There is no denying that it will be many advantages including flexibility and convenience. Just as a saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. Online learning presents often cause low efficiency because of a lack of self-discipline.
As far as I am concerned, I would like to be a smart online learner. But you should work out an advanced schedule first. Secondly, selecting excellent resources will promote our productivity. Last but not least, complete devotion is of great importance.I am fully convinced that the tips above will benefit all of you a lot. That's all! Thank you!
Para. 1: 交际寒暄+引入话题；
Para. 2: 分析优势与不足
Para. 3: 总结（我的观点和建议）、感谢、祝愿等
Read for language features
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone. It's a great honor for me to stand here to deliver my speech titled Be smart online learners.
With the development of the Internet, more and more of us prefer to take advantage of online resource to improve our study.There is no denying that it will be many advantages including flexibility and convenience. Just as a saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”. Online learning presents often cause low efficiency because of a lack of self-discipline.
As far as I am concerned, I would like to be a smart online learner. But you should work out an advanced schedule first. Secondly, selecting excellent resources will promote our productivity. Last but not least, complete devotion is of great importance.I am fully convinced that the tips above will benefit all of you a lot. That's all! Thank you!
First of all, Firstly/First；Secondly/Second， And then； Finally, In the end, At last
What’ more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition,
As well as, not only…but (also),
However, On the contrary, In contrast,but, Although+clause (从句), In spite of+n./doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand…, Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
Linking Words
Brainstorm
01
覆盖所有的要点
04
有效地使用了语句建的连接成分
02
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇
03
尽可能选用高级词汇
要点全
多样化
连接词
高级感
如何算是一篇好的文章？
7.在我看来__________________________________
8.总而言之__________________________________
Review Lexical Chunks
1.发表演讲___________________________
2.代表我们学校_______________________
3.有这个机会_________________________
4.和某人分享_________________________
5.在...中扮演重要角色__________________
6.对...有影响_________________________
7.在我看来________________________________
8.总而言之________________________________
9.当提到...________________________________
10.参加(活动) ____________________________
11.养成良好的学习习惯 ____________________
12.努力做某事 ____________________________
13.充分利用______________________________
give/make/deliver a speech
on behalf of our school
have the chance/opportunity
share sth. with sb.
play an important part in
have an effect/impact/ influence on
in my opinion/ as far as I am concerned/
from my point of view
to sum up/ all in all/ in a word
When it comes to...
take part in
form a good habit
make great efforts to do sth
make full use of
Review Sentence Patterns
开头用语
1. Good morning, everyone! I’m honored to have the opportunity to give a speech on…
2. It’s my great honor to be here to deliver a speech titled Good habits help me succeed. I hope my speech will benefit you a lot.
大家上午好。我很荣幸有机会做有关……的演讲。
我很荣幸能在这里发表题为“好习惯助我成功”的演讲。我希望我的演讲能对你们有所帮助。
Review Sentence Patterns
中间用语
3. As we all know, …plays an increasingly important role in our life.
4. No one can deny the fact that.../There’s no denying that.../There’s no doubt that.../Undoubtedly...
5. As every coin has two sides, … has also its advantages and disadvantages.
6. From my point of view, it’s our duty/responsibility to...
7. In a word,… have a profound influence on everyone. Therefore, we must…
众所周知，……在我们生活中起着越来越重要的作用。
没有人能否认这样一个事实/无可否认/毫无疑问....
正如任何事物都有两面性，......也有利弊。
依我看来，做……是我们的责任/义务。
总之，…对每个人都有深远的影响。因此，我们必须…
Review Sentence Patterns
结尾用语
8. Only in this way can we…
9. That’s all. Thank you for your attention/listening！
只有用这种方式我们才能……
我的演讲到此结束，谢谢大家聆听！
Writing
在口语课上，外教Alex组织同学们讨论是否使用网络投票（online voting）的方式评选校园十佳歌手。请你代表小组发言，内容包括：
1. 小组观点；
2. 陈述理由。
Writing
Paragraph 1 — 代表发言；陈述观点
代表发言：
陈述观点：
例如：反对
关于十大歌手大赛，我们的小组坚持传统的投票方式，而不是在网上进行投票。
It’s my honor to represent my group to deliver our viewpoint.
Regarding/Concerning the Top Ten Singers Competition,
Our group sticks to the traditional way of voting
instead of putting it online .
Writing
Paragraph 2 — 陈述理由
反对：
安全性风险：黑客攻击。恶意操纵
网络稳定性：网络不稳定/服务器故障
不公平竞争：刷票或作弊行为
大众评审
结果不准确和可信度受到质疑
投票过程中断或延迟
破坏投票的公正性和公平性
缺乏专业性
Writing
Paragraph 2 — 陈述理由
首先，并非所有人都能使用互联网或电子设备，因此投票结果无法反映所有学生的真实偏好。
Firstly, not all of us have access to the Internet or electronic devices,
so the voting result can not reflect the true preferences of all the students.
此外，作弊也是一个重大的担忧，因为参赛者会叫其他人为他投票。用这种方式，投票结果没能体现他们的真实水平。
Besides, cheating is a significant concern for the reason that participants may ask others to vote for themselves. In this way, the voting result fails to show the contestants’true level.
离线投票为学生们提供了一个空间，让他们一起聚集、讨论和参与投票过程, 这样可以提高他们的互动和参与感。
Off-line voting provides a space for students to gather, discuss, and participate in the voting process together， which can help improve their sense of interaction and involvement.
Paragraph 3 — 重申观点，总结理由
Writing
总的来说，我们认为网络投票是选择十大校园歌手的一种方便的方式。
Overall, we think online voting is a convenient means for choosing the top ten campus singers.
总之，在线投票是一种实用而有效的方法，可以增强参与者的整体体验，确保更公平的结果。
In conclusion, online voting is a practical and effective approach that can enhance the overall experience for participants and ensure a fairer outcome.
总之，综合考虑所有因素，我们认为离线投票是一个恰当的选择。
To sum up, with all factors considered, we believe that putting the vote off-line would be a proper choice.
Good morning, everyone.
Writing
连句成篇
Should we use online voting
Good morning, everyone.It’s my honor to represent my group to deliver our viewpoint. Regarding the Top Ten Singers Competition, our group sticks to the traditional way of voting instead of putting it online .
Firstly, not all of us have access to the Internet or electronic devices, so the voting result can not reflect the true preferences of all the students. Besides, cheating is a significant concern for the reason that participants may ask others to vote for themselves. In this way, the voting result fails to show the contestants’true level.In contrast,Off-line voting provide a space for students to gather, discuss, and participate in the voting process together, which can help improve their sense of interaction and involvement.
To sum up, with all factors considered, we believe that putting the vote off-line would be a proper choice.
评分标准
第五档（很好）(13～15分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务。
(1)覆盖所有内容要点，表达清楚、合理；
(2)应用了较多复杂、高级的语法结构和词汇；
(3)语法结构或词汇方面使用准确，表现了较强的语言运用能力；
(4)自然流畅地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
整体而言，完全达到了预期的写作目的。
A good
composition
Content
内容
Structure
结构
Language
语言
1.good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾)
2.linking words （过渡词）
3.advanced words and sentence patterns（高级词汇和句型）
4.no Chinglish (避免中文式英文)
Beauty
卷面（美观）
Summary
Presentation and Homework
Thank You

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