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(共25张PPT)
读后续写
Continuation Writing
Four Factors
1
2
3
4
故事线 Storyline
突破点 Target
亮点 Outstanding Points
基本点 Pin Down the theme
故事线S
Go through the text and get the storyline
Go through the text & Get the storyline
二年一班
This PPT template for the rice husk designer pencil demo works, focusing on the production of high-end design templates, I hope
三年一班
This PPT template for the rice husk designer pencil demo works, focusing on the production of high-end design templates, I hope
5W:
WHAT
WHO
WHERE
WHEN
WHY +HOW THEME
实战演练：夫妻野外徒步后争吵，妻子独自出行迷路森林，等待救援。
One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom.“I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp’’ and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. She turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise,she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain “Tom!”She cried.“Help!’’
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom.Jane kept moving,but the father she walked, the more confused she become. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him......
On weekend
in July
In a forest
Jane,
Tom
Jane
was
lost
Go through the text& Get the storyline
A quarrel with Tom,her husband
WHO
WHAT
WHERE
WHEN
WHY
Theme
1.Summary
Jane was lost in the forest for three days and survived in the end.
2.Theme
Jane learned how to control emotions and deal with conflicts.
But no more helicopters came and it was dark.___________________
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
________________________________
突破点T
借助段首，构造内容
突破点
para 1
aBut no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
Jane 是如何熬过这个夜晚的？
1.How did Jane feel then
2.How did Jane make it through the night
3.Did she fall asleep and what was she thinking of
para 2
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
Jane 还未获救，今天会发生什么？
1.Was Jane rescued and who rescued her
2.How was she rescued and how did she feel then
亮点--刻画细节
环境、语言、心理、动作描写
丰富句式：非谓语，从句，倒装，独立主格，虚拟语气，强调句，感叹句
修辞丰富：比喻，夸张，拟人
1.环境描写
万能句式：Immediately/ Suddenly/, an absolute/ a complete+n.+ruled the+地点n. + and a wave of +情绪n. +washed/swept over sb.
突然！一种绝对的....控制了（ruled）...,并且一波+情绪+席卷了sb.
Immediately,an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her.
一阵绝对的黑暗控制了森林，并且一波恐惧（terror）席卷了Jane.
2.动作+心理描写
万能句式：One’s heart pounding fiercely and one’s palm sweating, an inner voice told sb. that...(独立主格)
sb. 心脏狂（fiercely）跳，手掌出汗，内心有一个声音告诉自己要.......
Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place.
adj. and adj. as sb. was,sb. did sth, doing sth.(非谓语)
尽管又...又..., sb.依然做sth........
Tired and terrified as she was, Jane struggled to her feet, trying not to have a breakdown both physically and mentally.
尽管又累又怕（terrified）,她依然挣扎（struggled）站起来，努力不让自己身体（physically）和精神（mentally）都崩溃（have a breakdown）。
3.语言描写
万能句式：Luckily/Fortunately, it didn’t take long before sb. did....
Luckily,it didn’t take long before she found a cave.
幸运的是，她不久就找到了一个山洞（cave）。
万能句式：Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of _______and felt as if sth. had been doing and saying,“.......”.
幸运的是，sb. 不久就做了......
如释重负地叹了口气，sb. 感觉到了一丝（a glimmer of）i
sb. 感觉好像sth. 在对Ta 做什么，并且说，“..........”）i
Sighing with relief , she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her and saying,“Come in, you must be exhausted!”
....她感受到了一丝希望，感觉似乎这个山洞在安慰（comfort）她，并对她说，“快进来，你一定很累（exhauted）吧！”
4.丝滑连接二段首
万能句式：With....,sb. did...,+非限制定从
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.
伴随着+一种状态，sb.做了...,非限定从.
随着发生的一切，她进入了梦乡，在她的（in whose）的梦里她丈夫陪伴（keep company）着她。i
新的一天来了
万能句式：Judging from the _____________, it was evident that sb. was still trapped in________(with any help). sb. was at a loss what to do.
从...判断来看，很显然sb. 依旧被困于（be trapped in）......(无助)
从周围安静的环境来判断，Jane 仍然被困于林中，无人救援（come to the rescue）。Jane 不知该怎么办。i
sb. 不知所措.
Judging from the quiet surrounding, it was evident that sb. was still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue.Jane was at a loss what to do.
转机出现
万能句式：It suddenly dawned on sb. that sb. should do...
突然灵光一闪，sb.想到了该做......i
It suddenly dawned on her that sb. should find a big open area first.
她突然灵光一闪，想到了首先该找一片空旷的地（open area）。
万能句式：To one’s great______,令sb.+情绪n./surprise/delight(高兴)......
To her great joy, it didn’t take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer.
另她开心的是，她很快就看到了（spot）一片空地，并且听到了震耳欲聋的（deafening）噪声越来越近（coming closer）。
救援来啦
万能句式：Seeing/ Hearing sth, sb. felt a great sense of +情绪+welling up in sb’s heart and surging through sb.
看到/听到 sth., sb. 感到一种强烈的（a great sense of）+情绪
涌上某人心头（welling up in one’s heart）,并且涌遍（surge through）全身。i
Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.
抬起头并看到了直升机（helicopter），Jane 感觉一股强烈的激动(excitement)涌上心头，并涌遍全身。
万能句式：情绪+and+情绪， sb. spared no effort to do...so as to...
不遗余力地做某事为了.......
迫切（eager）又激动（excited）,她挥舞（flagged）着黄衬衫（yellow blouse）不遗余力地大喊（yell）,为了吸引别人的注意力。i
Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention.
求 救
基本点——回扣升华主题
感叹句
强调句
夹叙夹议
喃喃自语
欢喜大结局
万能句式: Luckily/ Fortunately/Eventually,........幸运的是/最终
Fortunately, she was noticed and brought into the helicopter. Here, she saw her husband, a man starting at her , wearing an expression of relief.
幸运的是，她被注意（notice）到了，并被带上了直升机。在这里，她看到了丈夫，注视着（staring at）自己，满脸安慰（wearing an expression of relief）。
回归主题
万能句式:It was at the moment that sb. did not do.......any more but did....
那一刻，他们才意识到不该再吵架（quarrel）,而是该学会妥协（compromise)。
那一刻，人们才意识到不该做....而是该做....
It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise.
万能句式:What a valuable lesson for sb. to learn!多么宝贵的经验教训啊！
What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn!
对夫妻二人是多么宝贵的（valuable）经验教训啊！
大家品品
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest and a wave of terror swept over her. Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. Tired and terrified as she was, Jane struggled to her feet, trying not to have a break down both physically and mentally. Luckily, it didn’t take long before she found a cave. Sighing with relief, she sensed a glimmer of hope and felt as if the cave had been comforting her and saying ,“Come in, you must be exhauted!” With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company.
It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Judging from the quiet surrounding, it was evident that Jane was still trapped in the forest without anyone coming to the rescue. Jane was at a loss what to do. It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. To her great joy, it didn’t take her long to spot such a place and she heard the deafening noise coming closer. Looking up and seeing a helicopter, Jane felt a great sense of excitement welling up in her heart and surging through her.Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse and spared no effort to yell so as to attract others’ attention.Fortunately, she was noticed and brought into the helicopter.
Here, she saw her husband, a man staring at her, wearing an expression of relief. It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise . What a valuable lesson for the couple to learn!
谢谢同学们的耐心倾听

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