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1.动作描写---
2．语言描写---
当Emily收到大学录取通知书时，会发生什么？
动作+语言+动作
请写一段60-70字的描述
1.动作描写---Emily用颤抖的双手撕开信封。当她的目光扫到“恭喜”这两个字时，脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容。
2．语言描写---“我成功了！”她激动地大喊。
3.动作描写---她蹦蹦跳跳，心中涌起喜悦与释然，深知自己所有的努力终于有了回报。
拒绝零散句子！
★句型1：so +情绪adj.+ was/were +sb. +that +陈述句….
汤姆太紧张了，以至于站起来演讲时声音都在发抖。
So nervous was Tom that his voice shook when he stood up to give the speech.
2.他们太高兴了，以至于紧紧相拥，忘记了周围的大雨
3.长途徒步后，学生们太累了，以至于一躺在草地上就睡着了。
★句型1：so +情绪adj.+ was/were +sb. +that +陈述句….
So delighted were they that they hugged each other tightly,
So tired were the students that they fell asleep as soon as they lay down on the grass after the long hike.
forgetting the heavy rain around them.
改写：Emily 太紧张了，以至于当她撕开信封时双手在颤抖 。
So nervous was Emily that her hands trembled when she torn open the envelope.
Emily用颤抖的双手撕开信封。
改写：Emily ，以至于 。
★句型1：so +情绪adj.+ was/were +sb. +that +陈述句….
脸上绽开了灿烂的笑容
绽开：
灿烂的笑容:
大大的笑容--a huge smile/
a broad smile
spread across
A huge smile spread across her face.
她激动地大喊
sb. 因.....而.... ----- sb. do sth. with +情绪名词
--她因激动而大喊
双腿虚弱地颤抖
Her legs trembled with weakness.
She shouted with excitement.
★句型2：动作面--Doing…,主句 / 主句,doing….
当两个或多个动作出现在一句话中，所有动作由主语发出，该句如何表达？
1.听到Simona的话，她被鼓励着继续爬山。
译： .
1.听到Simona的话，她被鼓励着继续爬山。
★句型：动作面-- Doing…,主句 / 主句,doing….
Hearing Simona's words, she was encouraged to keep climbing the mountain.
2.看着这些可爱的，圆圆的饺子，我的内心充满了幸福和温暖
Looking at these lovely, round dumplings, my heart was filled with happiness and warmth
3.动作描写---她蹦蹦跳跳，心中涌起喜悦与释然，深知自己所有的努力终于有了回报。
Jumping up and down, she felt a rush of joy and relief, knowing that all her hard work had finally paid off.
蹦蹦跳跳：jump up and down
涌起:feel a rush of + 情绪名词
努力有回报：hard work pays off
★句型：动作面-- Doing…,主句 , doing….
So nervous was Emily that her hands trembled when she torn open the envelope.
As her eyes scanned the words "Congratulations", a huge smile spread across her face. "I made it!" she shouted with excitement.
Jumping up and down, she felt a rush of joy and relief, knowing that all her hard work had finally paid off.
总结：两个句型+两个表达
★句型1：so +情绪adj.+ was/were +sb. +that +陈述句….
★句型2：动作面--Doing…,主句 / 主句,doing….
sb. 因( )情绪.....而.... ----- sb. do sth. with +情绪名词
A huge smile spread across her face.

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