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第14讲 Unit 7 写作
【话题概述】
本单元的主题是“畅想未来”,要求学生能够运用相关词汇，向读者介绍自己对20年后的生活 的畅想，包括未来的职业、居住地点、业余时间的活动以及如何实现梦想等。与此相关的主要写作 维度有；①描绘未来的职业选择；②描述未来居住的地点及其特点；③阐述业余时间的活动安排；④说明实现梦想的具体途径。
在中考书面表达中，与该主题相关的命题形式较为多样，通常以说明文或应用文的形式出现
【写作任务】
本周英语课上，英语老师要求同学们围绕 “Life in the future” 这一话题进行讨论。请你根据以下提示和要求，用英语描述你未来的生活，并在课堂上发言。
提示：
What will you be in the future
What will you do in your free time
How will you feel about your future life
要求：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，可适当发挥； 不少于 80 词。
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【审题指导】
1.体裁:
2.人称:
3.时态:
【谋篇布局】理清文章要素，构建文章结构。（三段）
第一段：开头点题，引出“未来的生活”这一主题；
第二段：详细说明对未来生活的畅想；
第三段：表达感受，总结全文，首尾呼应。
【遣词造句】
第一段：开头点题，引出“未来的生活”这一主题
未来的生活会是什么样子？让我来告诉你。
在20年里，我认为我的生活会越来越好，我一直在努力工作，为了一个光明的未来。
3）我想告诉你关于我的未来生活的事情。
4）你想知道我未来的生活将会是什么样的吗？
以下是我的预测。
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第二段：详细说明对未来生活的畅想
我要成为一名记者。我想我会更加努力工作，接受更多新的挑战。我会尽我最大的努力做好每一项任务。
2）我想成为一名老师。我想我会更加努力帮助学生更好地学习。
3）我想成为一名警察。我想我会更加努力地保护人们的安全。我将承担更艰巨的工作来保护社区。
4）我将成为一名宇航员。我将在空间站工作一年，然后有六个月的假期
5）我会好好照顾我的父母。我会花更多的时间和他们呆在一起。
6）我也会更经常地和我的朋友聚在一起。我们将谈论过去的学校生活，一起旅行。
7）我会把我的空闲时间花在我喜欢的事情上。
8）我会用我的空闲时间做一些更有意义的事情。
9）我会和家人一起去更多的地方旅行。
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10）我的机器人会为我做很多家务。
11）我将住在一个大而漂亮的房子在一个美丽的城市。
第三段：表达感受，总结全文，首尾呼应。
我认为我的生活在未来将是令人兴奋和精彩的。我将更加努力地使它成为现实。
2）我认为未来的生活将是伟大的。我希望这一天快点到来。
3）总而言之，我期待我的未来生活。
4）我觉得我的未来生活将会很精彩。
5）在我看来，我的未来生活将会很棒。___________________________________________________
范文1：
My future life
I am Jenny. I'd like to tell you about my future life.
In the future, I will be an astronaut. I will work on a space station for a year and then have a vacation for six months. I will go to other planets in my free time because it will be popular to go to another planet by rocket. I will have a smart robot. It will help me to clean the house. Cities will be more crowded and polluted so I will live in the countryside. I will also take trips to the moon with my family.
I'm sure my future life will be great fun.
范文2 ：
My future life
I am Jenny. I'd like to share with you what my future life will be like.
In the future, I will be an astronaut. I will work on a space station for a year and then take a six-month vacation. During my free time, I will visit other planets because traveling to another planet by rocket will become popular. I will own a smart robot and it will help me clean the house. Since cities will be more crowded and polluted, I will choose to live in the countryside. What's more, I will take trips to the moon with my family.
I'm sure my future life will be full of fun.
【写作素材】
种类 素材
职业及理由 Doctor - help sick people get better. （医生 —— 帮助病人康复） Nurse - taking care of those in need. （护士 —— 照顾那些有需要的人） Police officer - protect people's safety. （警察 —— 保护人们的安全） Writer - create interesting stories. （作家 —— 创作有趣的故事） Engineer - build useful things for people. （工程师 —— 为人们建造有用的东西）
机器人功能 - cook meals and they can help to save lots of time.（做饭，它们能帮助节省很多时间） - help farmers with farming work.（帮助农民从事农活） - help us carry heavy things and make our work easier. （帮助我们搬运重物，让我们的工作更轻松） - clean the streets and keep the city tidy.（清扫街道，保持城市整洁） - look after children, tell them stories and play games with them when parents are busy.（ 在父母忙碌时照顾孩子，给他们讲故事、和他们一起玩游戏）
科技发展 build more tall buildings（建造更多高楼大厦） fly rockets to the moon（发射火箭到月球） on the earth（在地球上） world peace（世界和平） live on a space station（住在太空站） fast car（快车） big computer（大型计算机） robot helper（机器人助手） smart home（智能家居） beautiful garden（漂亮的花园）flying bike （会飞的自行车） virtual reality game（虚拟现实游戏）
【随堂写作】
你未来的生活会是什么样的呢 假如你是李华，你校的英语俱乐部即将举办My Life in the Future为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的未来生活。
要求：
1. 词数80词左右；
2. 包括所有提示内容，语言通顺，行文流畅，可适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的人名，校名等信息。
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Unit 7 成绩：
I.用括号内所给词的适当形式填空
1. This book is really __________ (education). Students can learn a lot from it.
2. She __________ (pass) all the tests and became the __________ (win) of the competition.
3. The young professor Gui Haichao got the chance to go into __________ (out) space through hard training.
4. I spent one night’s time making some __________ (video) about the story to take part in the “Tell China’s Stories” competition.
5. Yesterday’s weather was __________ than today’s, but last week’s storm was the __________ of all. (bad)
6.We should get some (predict)before the earthquake(地震).
7.In winter,more (medicine)care seems to be needed in hospitals because of the flu.
8.The (value) skills we develop in language classes can open doors to new cultures.
9. _______ (future) say robots will be a large part of life.
10. Snow will _________ (appear) if the temperature keeps above 0℃ .
11. __________ animals is interesting, and many _________ show animals have amazing abilities. (research)
12. The team ________ (accept) him because his positive ________ (quality) like honesty and teamwork made him a great member.
13. She is a very _______ artist, and her _________ always surprises everyone. (create)
II.补全对话
(Bob is working on a project about FUTURE LIFE IN 20 YEARS.He is interviewing (采访) his classmate, Mike, about the future life.B=Bob M=Mike)
B:Hi,Mike!I’m; working on a school project (项目)about future life in 20 years.Can I ask you some questions
M: 1. .
B:What will the environment be like in 20 years
M:Well,I think there will be more pollution if people don't protect it from now on.
B:2.
M:Yes,I think so.People will plant more trees both in the city and in the countryside.
B: 3.
M:Some jobs may disappear.Robots will do some work for us.
B:Sounds great.Do you think people will relax more in the future
M: 4.
Maybe they will have more free time and more ways to relax.
B:What do you want to be in the future
M:I want to be an engineer.
B: 5.
M:I will work in Zhengzhou.I love the city very much.
B:Thank you for your answers.Hope your dream can come true.
M:Thank you.
III.连词成句
will,they,the,to,go,this,zoo,weekend (.)
will, not, get, late, up, again,I(.)
will,long, how, people, live( )
be, will,there, more, in, the, people, cities(.)
IV.看图写话
1.home; future 2.will; live 3. more; future 4. robots; housework
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V. 短文填空
（一）
No one can be sure 1. the weather is going to be like in the future, but many people think there will be some changes.
Scientists say that in many places it's going to be much 2. (hot), and there is going to be less rain. Some African countries are going to become very dry all year, and it's going to be almost impossible for people to find food and water. In 3. (south) Europe and the US, it's going to be more difficult for 4. (plant) to grow. People there are also going to have difficulties 5. (find) food in the future.
No one knows how much the temperature is going to go up, 6. scientists say that the change is going to be at least 2°C. They say that the ice in the Arctic is going to melt 7. the next hundred years and a lot of animals there 8. (be) going to die.There is also going to be 9. (much) water in the sea, so cities near the sea are going to disappear.
Another problem is that there are going to be more hurricanes (飓风) and typhoons.Scientists say they are going to happen all over the world, and many people are going to lose 10. (they) homes.
（二）
We can often see robots in the movies now. Some robots may look like people, some look like huge arms, and others may be in different 1. _______ (shape). They help people do many things,
and they are becoming more and more helpful.
People 2. _______ (start) to use robots about some hundred years ago. At first, robots only worked like clocks or watches and did the same things over and 3. _______ again. They did simple jobs and never got bored.
4. _______ modern robots are smarter. Some can solve problems by 5. _______ (they) because their brains are computers. In London, there is 6. _______ robot helping old people. The robot can cook for old people. It can also do things like cleaning the floor and making the bed. It is very 7. _______ (help).
In the future, robots will be able 8. _______ (do) jobs such as looking after sick people in the hospital. Some scientists believe that this 9. _______ (happen) in twenty years. And there will be much 10. _______ (many) robots everywhere.
VI.完形填空
“What will I be like in ten years ”I asked myself.Everyone has 24 ,and I am no exception (例外). Sometimes,I cannot stop 25 what I will be like.If I practice the 26 every day,I will become a famous pianist.If I study hard,I might become a famous scientist.As I 27 ,I realized that I was just a common girl.It was 28 for me to become famous all over the world.
Now,however,I have a different idea about the 29 .In ten years,I might be a worker in a small company.I may not make a lot of money but I enjoy my life.I am 30 ,but I still have time to work on my blog.I am still practicing the piano and the 31 makes my home warm. Yes,I am not world-famous,but I am happy every day.
It's nice to have big dreams,but 32 are more important than words.If a dream is too far to 33 ,it is meaningless.It is hard to 34 what the future will be like because the world is changing fast and many things are out of our control (控制) . 35 people will become world-famous,but we can still do a lot.From the bottom to the top,we should never stop 36 for a bright future.Although some people have37 in their lives,they work hard to overcome (克服)them and try to become better.They are also the 38 of life.
I don't exactly know what I will be like in ten years.But I am sure I will do my best and be the best.
24. A.hobbies B.stories C.dreams D.interests
25 .A.thinking B.learning C.hearing D.waiting
26. A.violin B.piano C.guitar D.drums
27 .A.got up B.woke up C.looked up D.grew up
28.A.necessary B.important C.impossible D.unhappy
29.A.health B.future C.world D.plan
30.A.serious B.famous C.active D.busy
31.A.work B.music C.blog D.money
32.A.actions B.answers C.experiences D.minds
33.A.believe B.improve C.reach D.expect
34.A.face B.understand C.save D.predict
35.A.All B.Many C.Few D.No
36. A.fighting B.looking C.asking D.caring
37 .A.competitions B.differences C.problems D.resolutions
38.A.performers B.winners C.planners D.servants
VII.五选五
Life in the future will be different from life today. Many changes will take place. 1. ______
The population is growing fast. There will be more people in the world and most of them will live longer than people do now.
2. ______ And there will be at least one in every home. And computer studies will be one of the most important subjects in schools.
There will be changes in our food too. More land will be used for building new towns and houses for all the people. Then there will be less room for cows and sheep, so meat will be more expensive (昂贵的). Maybe no one will eat it every day. 3. ______ Maybe people will be healthier.
Work in the future will be different too. 4. ______ Robots will do dangerous and hard work. People will have more free time for sports, watching TV and travelling. 5.______ And many more people will go to other countries for holidays.
Ⅷ.写作
读了回答问题中有关秦雨晴的故事后，某中学初二年级的学生们在上周五开了一个关于梦想的主题班会，同学们在班会上踊跃发言。假定你是这个年级某个班的成员之一，请你以 “好梦想成就美好未来” 为主题写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 介绍你班两位同学的发言内容；
2. 谈谈你自己的梦想以及为了实现梦想，你现在的付出和还将做出的努
要求：
(1) 文章包括以上所有信息，语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁；
(2) 80词左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(3) 文中不得出现真实人名和校名，除所提供信息外可以适当发挥。
Last Friday, our class had a class meeting on achieving(实现) dreams. Many students shared their dreams with us. Here are some of them.
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