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2026届广东省普通高中第二次调研（广东二调）
英语读后续写写作指导
【题目】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I’ve recently become interested in mountain climbing. It’s mainly due to my friend Tim, an experienced hiker. Initially, I saw hiking as pointless — exhausting muscles under the burning sun, carrying heavy loads, with no easy way back. Why endure
Last month, Tim convinced me to join him in climbing a small hill. To my surprise, the view from the top was breathtaking. I witnessed an amazing sunset over the sea. That humble peak offered unexpected joy, awakening a desire for more — cloud seas, sunrises, and bird’s-eye views. After a few more mountain climbing attempts, I declared, “I will challenge the Hero’s Route!” It was a demanding 20-kilometer trail across several high peaks, a test of “heroes.”
But Tim tried to cool me down. “It’s not easy,” he warned. “It requires training, not just enthusiasm.” But I believed “Nothing is impossible in front of a willing heart,” so the following weekend I set off alone without telling Tim. I decided to give him a big surprise.
At the foot of the mountain, I saw some groups of climbers with walkie-talkies. I laughed — real heroes journey alone. The first peak was rewarding, with cool winds and glimpses of the sea. But as I pushed onward, the trail turned wild and rugged. Steep rocks forced me to crawl on all fours. The sky darkened, threatening rain. Tiredness set in, and the other climbers had all overtaken me, leaving me completely alone. The trail seemed endless. Rain soon poured and I was wet through. The rocks became slippery, making every step a struggle. To make matters worse, my phone had no signal. Desperation mounted in me.
Around 5:30 PM, there were still two peaks ahead. Exhausted and having barely progressed, I found a weak signal on my phone and hurriedly called Tim. He was shocked, but after checking my location, he calmly gave me instructions.
“Stop going ahead. You’ve just passed a side trail down to a village. It is marked with a blue ribbon. Find it and take the path — I’ll meet you midway.”
Paragraph 1: But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure.
Paragraph 2: Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging.
【考题分析】
勇气的最高形式，不是冲上山顶，而是知道何时该放下执念，回到自己。这次广东省2026届高三第二次调研考试英语读后续写，以“独自挑战Hero’s Route”为主线，讲述了一个少年从逞强到成长的旅程。题目虽以登山为载体，实则考查学生在叙事中展现心理转折、意象描写与主题升华的能力。故事主旨并非“征服山峰”，而是通过“懂得放弃”来揭示“真正的勇气”。
【解题思路】
情节主线：
轻视困难 → 独自挑战 → 山中受困 → 犹豫取舍 → 转折归路 → 成长顿悟。
情感递进：
自信 → 骄傲 → 迷失 → 犹豫 → 释然 → 成熟。
写作策略：
第一段突出“犹豫—抉择”的心理挣扎；
第二段呈现“归路—领悟”的精神升华。
语言技巧：
用环境描写暗示心境变化（风、雨、月光）；
用动作链条推动心理转折；
结尾升华：征服山峰，不如理解山的意义。
十句五定法结构应用
Paragraph 1
But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure.
情感描写：
My heart thumped painfully as pride and reason battled inside me.
心脏剧烈跳动，骄傲与理智在胸中激烈拉扯。
细节描写：
The mountain wind howled past, biting at my soaked clothes like invisible claws.
山风呼啸，仿佛无形的爪子撕扯着湿透的衣衫。
动作链推进：
I clenched my fists, staring at the fading trail ahead, then slowly turned toward the narrow path marked with the blue ribbon.
我紧握双拳，凝视前方渐暗的山路，最终缓缓转身，踏向那条系着蓝丝带的小径。
他人反应：
Tim’s calm voice echoed in my mind, not as a command but as a reminder: “True courage sometimes means turning back.”
Tim平静的声音在脑海回荡，不再像命令，而像提醒——“真正的勇气，有时是懂得回头。”
情节转折：
No sooner had I taken the first step downward than relief flooded through me like the first drop of rain after drought.
脚刚落下的瞬间，一种解脱感如久旱后的甘雨，浸入心底。
Paragraph 2
Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging.
情感转变：
Fear gave way to focus as I adjusted my steps to the rhythm of the night.
恐惧渐退，我在夜色中找回了脚步的节奏。
环境渲染：
The moon rose between drifting clouds, silvering the rocks and lighting my way like a patient guide.
月亮从云间升起，银光洒在岩石上，像一位耐心的引路人。
他人反应：
When I finally saw Tim’s flashlight flicker ahead, he smiled and said, “You made the right choice.”
当我终于看见前方闪烁的手电光时，Tim微笑着说：“你做出了正确的选择。”
结局升华：
Exhausted yet calm, I realized the mountain hadn’t defeated me—it had taught me humility and strength.
筋疲力尽却心平气和，我明白了：山没有打败我，它教会了我谦逊与坚韧。
主题点睛：
That night, under the quiet stars, I learned that conquering a mountain begins with learning to respect it.
那一夜，星光无言，我懂得了：征服一座山，始于尊重它的高度。
【范文欣赏】
But now I hesitated, because taking the side trail meant failure. My heart thumped painfully as pride and reason battled inside me. The mountain wind howled past, biting at my soaked clothes like invisible claws. I clenched my fists, staring at the fading trail ahead, then slowly turned toward the narrow path marked with the blue ribbon. Tim’s calm voice echoed in my mind, not as a command but as a reminder: “True courage sometimes means turning back.” No sooner had I taken the first step downward than relief flooded through me like the first drop of rain after drought.
Climbing down the path to the village at night was still very challenging. Fear gave way to focus as I adjusted my steps to the rhythm of the night. The moon rose between drifting clouds, silvering the rocks and lighting my way like a patient guide. When I finally saw Tim’s flashlight flicker ahead, he smiled and said, “You made the right choice.” Exhausted yet calm, I realized the mountain hadn’t defeated me—it had taught me humility and strength. That night, under the quiet stars, I learned that conquering a mountain begins with learning to respect it.
【写作结语】
高分续写，不在“爬得多高”，而在“写得多真”。
这篇题材中的“Hero’s Route”其实是每个成长者的隐喻——
我们都曾想凭热血登顶，却在雨夜中明白：
真正的强大，是懂得止步，是学会倾听自己。
写作亦然。
情绪的递进、画面的层次、主题的回响，每一处都像登山的脚印，稳扎稳打，方能抵达高分之巅。
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