专题六 课后续写 第一讲 亲情与友情 课件(共48张)+学案--2026届高考英语(通用版)二轮专题复习

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专题六 读后续写
第一讲 亲情与友情
(2025·全国一卷)My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer.She had prepared lots of snacks,while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play.There was just one thing I hadn't counted on:My brother chose to bring his dog Toby,a 50-pound ball of fire.Though friendly,he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter.So,when my brother showed up,I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine.Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room.Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment.I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house,and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog.Eventually,my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed,and I hadn't heard anything from my brother.I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again.His reply came as a surprise—a shock,actually:“Not a chance.” Clearly,he was unhappy over the way we had parted.After all,I had left him little choice.Well,he'll get over it,I reasoned.
Two months passed.My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother,but I resisted,thinking he should call first.However,my conscience (良心) kept bothering me.I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes.He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier.Toby was his constant companion,the one who kept him going.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault. ______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother's door.
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
一、教你读文
1.通过下表理清信息点
Characters I,my wife,my brother,my brother's dog Toby
When/Where in the early summer; in my home
Conflict/Problem My brother brought his pet to my home,and I didn't want to let the pet go in although it was raining outside.My brother wasn't happy about it and drove home.
Main idea My wife and I hosted a party,and my brother brought his dog to visit.Due to concerns about the dog harming children,I insisted that the dog remain outdoors.After it rained,my brother left in dissatisfaction,and we entered a cold war.
Theme The bond between my brother and I.
2.梳理“两情”线
二、教你构思
1.细读首句,巧妙构思
2.捕捉伏笔,注重照应
原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置
第四段my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog Shame crashed over me in waves → 回忆起雨中离去的场景,强化愧疚感
第六段Toby was his constant companion,the one who kept him going To him,Toby was far more than a pet—he was family→ 直接呼应前文对Toby重要性的铺垫
第六段my conscience kept bothering me My fists clenched,nails digging into my palms → 用身体动作外化内心挣扎
第六段He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away the only solace keeping him afloat after losing his wife→ 补全背景细节
第五段Well,he'll get over it,I reasoned What was pride worth → 推翻之前的固执想法
第六段My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother I begged my wife to prepare some biscuits→利用妻子角色推动行动
三、教你出彩
I realized it was me who was at fault.Stubbornness and selfishness had blinded me (运用熟词生义,使意义表达更准确),making me oblivious to my brother's feelings (运用非谓语动词短语,使句式更丰富).To him,Toby was far more than a pet—he was family,the only solace (运用同位语作进一步的解释)keeping him afloat after losing his wife.I had treated him like an inconvenience,dismissing the deep bond they shared.Shame crashed over me in waves.(使用无灵主语)My fists clenched,nails digging into my palms (使用独立主格结构)until they ached.What was pride worth Compared to my brother's suffering,my ego meant nothing.Taking a deep breath,(使用非谓语动词短语作状语) I signaled my wife to prepare some biscuits.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother's door.My heart pounding,(使用独立主格结构) I knocked,unsure of the reception I would receive (运用形容词短语作状语).When the door opened,my brother's surprised expression quickly softened.Without a word,I handed him the biscuits and apologized sincerely.“I was wrong,” I said.“Toby is welcome in our home anytime.” Tears welled up in his eyes as he hugged me tightly.(运用as引导的时间状语从句) Toby,sensing the moment,wagged his tail excitedly and nudged my hand,as if forgiving me too (运用省略句).From that day on,our bond grew stronger,and I learned the importance of empathy.
(一)
(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟)In my childhood,influenced by my parents and friends,I was encouraged to try various creative activities.Of course,I didn't enjoy all of them equally,whether it was my first attempt or after repeated efforts.However,life has a way of leading us to unexpected passions.You never know when a creative pursuit might change your life.
The name of this activity is “painting”.About ten years ago,I didn't really see the appeal of sitting in front of a canvas(画布) for hours,trying to recreate scenes or images in my mind.The idea of mixing colors and repeatedly adjusting brushes felt tiresome to me.In fact,I used to think of painting as some sort of “coloring inside the lines” activity that young kids enjoyed,but it was much more difficult because there was no outline to guide you.
However,all that changed when I visited my grandparents during a winter break.My grandmother,an enthusiastic painter,gently persuaded me to join her in her art studio to try my hand at painting.She encouraged me to simply express myself through colors and brushes.Hesitant but curious,I agreed and sat down with her,ready to paint.Before handing me the brushes,she showed me how to mix the colors and create different shades,making the process seem more approachable.
Learning to paint,especially for a beginner like me,can be a difficult task.The act of holding a brush is simple,but creating something meaningful on the canvas is challenging.That's why it's called painting,not finishing.But with practice and patience,it becomes more enjoyable and less frightening over time.Patience is crucial in painting.It takes time to find the right combination of colors and to let the image in your mind slowly take form on the canvas.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient. ________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school. _________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
(二)
(2025·河北衡水模拟)Emma and Sophia were the kind of friends who seemed to share a single mind most of the time,always there for each other through thick and thin.One sunny day,they decided to take on a project that would benefit their community—creating an environmental-awareness video.
They were both passionate about the environment and believed that a well-made video could inspire their neighbors to take more eco-friendly actions.At first,the project seemed full of promise.They spent days brainstorming ideas,researching environmental issues relevant to their area,and looking for locations for filming.However,as they delved (钻研) deeper into the actual planning of the video,they encountered a major roadblock.
The disagreement started when it came to the style of the video.Emma,who had a gift for drama and storytelling,wanted to create a narratively driven video.She created a story about a family gradually changing their habits to become more environmentally conscious (有环保意识的).She believed that a relatable story would touch people's heartstrings and make them more likely to pay attention.Sophia,on the other hand,was more data-oriented (以数据为导向的).She thought that a documentary-style video,filled with hard facts and statistics about local pollution and waste,would be more effective in getting the message across.She argued that people needed to be shocked into action by the realities.
As the discussion heated up,their once-harmonious relationship became strained.Their voices rose,and the air between them grew tense.They both felt strongly about their ideas and were unwilling to budge (改变观点).Eventually,they parted ways,each frustrated and disappointed in the other.
For the next few days,Emma and Sophia went about their lives feeling a sense of emptiness.Emma found herself constantly thinking about the project and Sophia.She missed their long conversations and the excitement they had at the beginning.She started to question whether her idea was really the only way.Similarly,Sophia was also feeling down.She missed Emma's creativity and the way they used to bounce ideas off each other.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
It was Emma's mother who first noticed the change in her daughter. ________
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Emma took her mother's advice. _____________________________________
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第一讲 亲情与友情
应用模拟练·提能力
(一)
【参考范文】
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient.I often grew frustrated when the colors didn't mix as I had hoped,or when my brush movements felt awkward and unsteady.She encouraged me to take a deep breath and slow down to appreciate the process rather than rush toward the result.With her gentle guidance,I began to understand that patience was not just about waiting for a masterpiece to appear,but about embracing each step of the journey and learning from every movement.As I gradually let go of my impatience,I started to immerse myself more fully in the art,discovering a deeper sense of satisfaction in the act of creating.
Word came that a_painting competition would be held in our school.My grandmother encouraged me to participate,but I was hesitant at first,unsure if my skills were good enough.Despite my doubts,I decided to challenge myself and enter the competition.I spent weeks preparing,carefully choosing my subject and practicing every day.As I worked,I remembered my grandmother's lessons on patience,and I allowed myself the time to improve without rushing.To my surprise,not only did I enjoy the process,but my hard work paid off—I ended up winning a prize.This experience boosted my confidence and deepened my love for painting,strengthening the belief that patience truly is a virtue in all aspects of life.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开。文章主要围绕主人公如何通过祖母悉心教导与鼓励,不仅学会了绘画,还在学校比赛中取得了成功的故事。
【写作指导】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我的祖母反复提醒我要有耐心。”可知,第一段可叙述作者在祖母的耐心引导下,逐渐体会到绘画的乐趣,并开始享受绘画的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“有消息说我们学校将要举办一场绘画比赛。”可知,第二段可描绘作者参加比赛并且获奖的经过,以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:沮丧——祖母鼓励——找到满足感——耐心准备——获得回报——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①鼓励:encourage/inspire
②决心:decide to/be determined to
③拥抱:embrace/hug
④决定:decide/determine
情绪类:
①沮丧的:frustrated/depressed
②尴尬的:awkward/embarrassed
4.佳句点睛
①As I gradually let go of my impatience,I started to immerse myself more fully in the art,discovering a deeper sense of satisfaction in the act of creating.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
②To my surprise,not only did I enjoy the process,but my hard work paid off—I ended up winning a prize.(运用了部分倒装句)
(二)
【参考范文】
It was Emma's mother who first noticed the change in her daughter.One evening,Emma sat on the sofa,staring at the floor with her face filled with frustration.Sensing her upset,her mother sat beside her and softly asked what was wrong.With a heavy sigh,Emma poured out the entire story—her argument with Sophia,their disagreement over the project,and how neither of them was willing to give in.Her mother listened patiently,then smiled and said,“Friends don't always agree,but that doesn't mean they can't work together.Try to put yourself in Sophia's shoes—maybe there's a middle way.”
Emma took her mother's advice.The next day,she visited Sophia,awkward at first but soon realizing they shared the same thought—combining facts with storytelling.With their friendship restored,they created a video that opened with striking environmental statistics,followed by a fictional family's changing habits.As they worked,Emma felt excitement and gratitude,while Sophia discovered the strength in their differences.Their teamwork not only strengthened their friendship but also taught them the value of finding a balance,making their project meaningful and impactful.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了艾玛和索菲亚为社区制作环保视频,因风格不同产生矛盾而分开,之后两人都感到失落,开始反思,意识到彼此的想法都有可取之处,最终决定携手合作,融合创意完成视频项目的故事。
【写作指导】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第一个注意到女儿的变化的是艾玛的母亲。”可知,第一段可描写艾玛的母亲询问后得知艾玛和索菲亚的矛盾,并给出让艾玛站在索菲亚的角度思考、寻找折中办法的建议。
②由第二段首句内容“艾玛听从了母亲的建议。”可知,第二段可描写艾玛采纳建议后拜访索菲亚,两人发现想法一致,决定融合双方创意制作视频,最终项目成功且二人友谊更加深厚。
2.续写线索:艾玛的母亲察觉异样——询问矛盾——给出建议——采纳建议——拜访和好——融合创意——项目成功
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①意识到:realize/be aware of
②讲述整个故事:pour out the entire story/tell the whole story
③增强:strengthen/enhance
情绪类:
①沮丧:frustration/disappointment
②尴尬的:awkward/embarrassed
4.佳句点睛
①Sensing her upset,her mother sat beside her and softly asked what was wrong.(运用了动词 ing形式短语作状语以及what引导的宾语从句)
②The next day,she visited Sophia,awkward at first but soon realizing they shared the same thought—combining facts with storytelling.(运用了动词 ing形式短语作状语以及省略引导词that的宾语从句作realizing的宾语)(共48张PPT)
专题六 读后续写
第一讲 亲情与友情
第一部分 题型突破
典例 做真题·悟考法
(2025·全国一卷)My wife and I wanted to share our new home with family and friends by hosting a small gathering in the early summer.She had prepared lots of snacks,while my job was to have the backyard in order.
There was plenty of space for the kids to run and play.There was just one thing I hadn't counted on:My brother chose to bring his dog Toby,a 50-pound ball of fire.Though friendly,he could easily knock over my niece's small boys and my six-month-old granddaughter.So,when my brother showed up,I asked him to watch Toby and keep him outside.
My plan was working out just fine.Toby was using up his energy by running back and forth in the backyard and giving the kids plenty of room.Unexpectedly,after supper,the weather changed.It started to rain and everyone went indoors.
It was an awkward moment.I didn't want Toby to be running around in the house,and my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog.Eventually,my brother decided to leave rather than force the issue.
A few days passed,and I hadn't heard anything from my brother.I texted him and expressed wishes for him to come out again.His reply came as a surprise—a shock,actually:“Not a chance.” Clearly,he was unhappy over the way we had parted.After all,I had left him little choice.Well,he'll get over it,I reasoned.
Two months passed.My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother,but I resisted,thinking he should call first.However,my conscience (良心) kept bothering me.I tried to put myself in my brother's shoes.He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away a few months earlier.Toby was his constant companion,the one who kept him going.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
I realized it was me who was at fault. _________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother's door.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
一、教你读文
1.通过下表理清信息点
Characters I,my wife,my brother,my brother's dog Toby
When/Where in the early summer; in my home
Conflict/Problem My brother brought his pet to my home,and I didn't want to let the pet go in although it was raining outside.My brother wasn't happy about it and drove home.
Main idea My wife and I hosted a party,and my brother brought his dog to visit.Due to concerns about the dog harming children,I insisted that the dog remain outdoors.After it rained,my brother left in dissatisfaction,and we entered a cold war.
Theme The bond between my brother and I.
2.梳理“两情”线
二、教你构思
1.细读首句,巧妙构思
2.捕捉伏笔,注重照应
原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置
第四段my brother wasn't happy with driving home with a wet dog Shame crashed over me in waves → 回忆起雨中离去的场景,强化愧疚感
第六段Toby was his constant companion,the one who kept him going To him,Toby was far more than a pet—he was family→ 直接呼应前文对Toby重要性的铺垫
原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置
第六段my conscience kept bothering me My fists clenched,nails digging into my palms → 用身体动作外化内心挣扎
第六段He was facing health issues and his wife of thirty-five years had passed away the only solace keeping him afloat after losing his wife→ 补全背景细节
原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置
第五段Well,he'll get over it,I reasoned What was pride worth → 推翻之前的固执想法
第六段My wife suggested I get in touch with my brother I begged my wife to prepare some biscuits→利用妻子角色推动行动
三、教你出彩
I realized it was me who was at fault.Stubbornness and selfishness had blinded me (运用熟词生义,使意义表达更准确),making me oblivious to my brother's feelings (运用非谓语动词短语,使句式更丰富).To him,Toby was far more than a pet—he was family,the only solace (运用同位语作进一步的解释)keeping him afloat after losing his wife.I had treated him like an inconvenience,dismissing the
deep bond they shared.Shame crashed over me in waves.(使用无灵主语)My fists clenched,nails digging into my palms (使用独立主格结构)until they ached.What was pride worth Compared to my brother's suffering,my ego meant nothing.Taking a deep breath,(使用非谓语动词短语作状语) I signaled my wife to prepare some biscuits.
With the biscuits my wife had made,I arrived at my brother's door.My heart pounding,(使用独立主格结构) I knocked,unsure of the reception I would receive (运用形容词短语作状语).When the door opened,my brother's surprised expression quickly softened.Without a word,I handed him the biscuits and apologized sincerely.“I was wrong,” I said.“Toby is welcome in our home anytime.” Tears welled up in his eyes as he hugged me tightly.(运
用as引导的时间状语从句) Toby,sensing the moment,wagged his tail excitedly and nudged my hand,as if forgiving me too (运用省略句).From that day on,our bond grew stronger,and I learned the importance of empathy.
应用 模拟练·提能力
(一)
(2025·辽宁名校联盟模拟)In my childhood,influenced by my parents and friends,I was encouraged to try various creative activities.Of course,I didn't enjoy all of them equally,whether it was my first attempt or after repeated efforts.However,life has a way of leading us to unexpected passions.You never know when a creative pursuit might change your life.
The name of this activity is “painting”.About ten years ago,I didn't really see the appeal of sitting in front of a canvas(画布) for hours,trying to recreate scenes or images in my mind.The idea of mixing colors and repeatedly adjusting brushes felt tiresome to me.In fact,I used to think of painting as some sort of “coloring inside the lines” activity that young kids enjoyed,but it was much more difficult because there was no outline to guide you.
However,all that changed when I visited my grandparents during a winter break.My grandmother,an enthusiastic painter,gently persuaded me to join her in her art studio to try my hand at painting.She encouraged me to simply express myself through colors and brushes.Hesitant but curious,I agreed and sat down with her,ready to paint.Before handing me the brushes,she showed me how to mix the colors and create different shades,making the process seem more approachable.
Learning to paint,especially for a beginner like me,can be a difficult task.The act of holding a brush is simple,but creating something meaningful on the canvas is challenging.That's why it's called painting,not finishing.But with practice and patience,it becomes more enjoyable and less frightening over time.Patience is crucial in painting.It takes time to find the right combination of colors and to let the image in your mind slowly take form on the canvas.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient.
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school.
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My grandmother had to repeatedly remind me to be patient.I often grew frustrated when the colors didn't mix as I had hoped,or when my brush movements felt awkward and unsteady.She encouraged me to take a deep breath and slow down to appreciate the process rather than rush toward the result.With her gentle guidance,I began to understand that patience was not just about waiting for a masterpiece to appear,but
about embracing each step of the journey and learning from every movement.As I gradually let go of my impatience,I started to immerse myself more fully in the art,discovering a deeper sense of satisfaction in the act of creating.
Word came that a painting competition would be held in our school.My grandmother encouraged me to participate,but I was hesitant at first,unsure if my skills were good enough.Despite my doubts,I decided to challenge myself and enter the competition.I spent weeks preparing,carefully choosing my subject and practicing every day.As I worked,I remembered my grandmother's lessons on patience,and I allowed myself the time to improve without rushing.To my surprise,not only did I enjoy the process,but my hard work paid
off—I ended up winning a prize.This experience boosted my confidence and deepened my love for painting,strengthening the belief that patience truly is a virtue in all aspects of life.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开。文章主要围绕主人公如何通过祖母悉心教导与鼓励,不仅学会了绘画,还在学校比赛中取得了成功的故事。
【写作指导】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我的祖母反复提醒我要有耐心。”可知,第一段可叙述作者在祖母的耐心引导下,逐渐体会到绘画的乐趣,并开始享受绘画的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“有消息说我们学校将要举办一场绘画比赛。”可知,第二段可描绘作者参加比赛并且获奖的经过,以及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:沮丧——祖母鼓励——找到满足感——耐心准备——获得回报——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①鼓励:encourage/inspire
②决心:decide to/be determined to
③拥抱:embrace/hug
④决定:decide/determine
情绪类:
①沮丧的:frustrated/depressed
②尴尬的:awkward/embarrassed
4.佳句点睛
①As I gradually let go of my impatience,I started to immerse myself more fully in the art,discovering a deeper sense of satisfaction in the act of creating.(运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
②To my surprise,not only did I enjoy the process,but my hard work paid off—I ended up winning a prize.(运用了部分倒装句)
(二)
(2025·河北衡水模拟)Emma and Sophia were the kind of friends who seemed to share a single mind most of the time,always there for each other through thick and thin.One sunny day,they decided to take on a project that would benefit their community—creating an environmental-awareness video.
They were both passionate about the environment and believed that a well-made video could inspire their neighbors to take more eco-friendly actions.At first,the project seemed full of promise.They spent days brainstorming ideas,researching environmental issues relevant to their area,and looking for locations for filming.However,as they delved (钻研) deeper into the actual planning of the video,they encountered a major roadblock.
The disagreement started when it came to the style of the video.Emma,who had a gift for drama and storytelling,wanted to create a narratively driven video.She created a story about a family gradually changing their habits to become more environmentally conscious (有环保意识的).She believed that a relatable story would touch people's heartstrings and make them more likely to pay attention.Sophia,on the other hand,was more data-oriented (以数据
为导向的).She thought that a documentary-style video,filled with hard facts and statistics about local pollution and waste,would be more effective in getting the message across.She argued that people needed to be shocked into action by the realities.
As the discussion heated up,their once-harmonious relationship became strained.Their voices rose,and the air between them grew tense.They both felt strongly about their ideas and were unwilling to budge (改变观点).Eventually,they parted ways,each frustrated and disappointed in the other.
For the next few days,Emma and Sophia went about their lives feeling a sense of emptiness.Emma found herself constantly thinking about the project and Sophia.She missed their long conversations and the excitement they had at the beginning.She started to question whether her idea was really the only way.Similarly,Sophia was also feeling down.She missed Emma's creativity and the way they used to bounce ideas off each other.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
It was Emma's mother who first noticed the change in her daughter.
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Emma took her mother's advice. ________________________________
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【参考范文】
It was Emma's mother who first noticed the change in her daughter.One evening,Emma sat on the sofa,staring at the floor with her face filled with frustration.Sensing her upset,her mother sat beside her and softly asked what was wrong.With a heavy sigh,Emma poured out the entire story—her argument with Sophia,their disagreement over the project,and how neither of them was willing to
give in.Her mother listened patiently,then smiled and said,“Friends don't always agree,but that doesn't mean they can't work together.Try to put yourself in Sophia's shoes—maybe there's a middle way.”
Emma took her mother's advice.The next day,she visited Sophia,awkward at first but soon realizing they shared the same thought—combining facts with storytelling.With their friendship restored,they created a video that opened with striking environmental statistics,followed by a fictional family's changing habits.As they worked,Emma felt excitement and gratitude,while Sophia discovered the strength in their differences.Their teamwork not only strengthened their friendship but also taught them the value of finding a balance,making their project meaningful and impactful.
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,主要讲述了艾玛和索菲亚为社区制作环保视频,因风格不同产生矛盾而分开,之后两人都感到失落,开始反思,意识到彼此的想法都有可取之处,最终决定携手合作,融合创意完成视频项目的故事。
【写作指导】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“第一个注意到女儿的变化的是艾玛的母亲。”可知,第一段可描写艾玛的母亲询问后得知艾玛和索菲亚的矛盾,并给出让艾玛站在索菲亚的角度思考、寻找折中办法的建议。
②由第二段首句内容“艾玛听从了母亲的建议。”可知,第二段可描写艾玛采纳建议后拜访索菲亚,两人发现想法一致,决定融合双方创意制作视频,最终项目成功且二人友谊更加深厚。
2.续写线索:艾玛的母亲察觉异样——询问矛盾——给出建议——采纳建议——拜访和好——融合创意——项目成功
3.词汇激活
行为类:
①意识到:realize/be aware of
②讲述整个故事:pour out the entire story/tell the whole story
③增强:strengthen/enhance
情绪类:
①沮丧:frustration/disappointment
②尴尬的:awkward/embarrassed
4.佳句点睛
①Sensing her upset,her mother sat beside her and softly asked what was wrong.(运用了动词-ing形式短语作状语以及what引导的宾语从句)
②The next day,she visited Sophia,awkward at first but soon realizing they shared the same thought—combining facts with storytelling.(运用了动词-ing形式短语作状语以及省略引导词that的宾语从句作realizing的宾语)
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